Guest
home
beatmaps
rankings
community
store
help
forum
  1. Forums
  2. Beatmaps
  3. Ranked Beatmaps (Archived)

AiRI - Kimi to Tsukuru Mou Hitotsu no Mirai

posted
Total Posts
28
show more
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Mei

kunka wrote:

Mei's Normal

  1. 00:42:096 (3) - I think that a flow to 00:42:768 (4) - is improved by ctrl+H.
  2. 01:22:842 (2) - I felt sense of incongruity a little. Because it's pretty vocal follow, I suggest it as follows https://puu.sh/wXRpJ.jpg
  3. 01:26:424 (2) - The 01:26:648 - is the last of a series of lyrics. Therefore, I feel sense of incongruity for a reverse point. try this https://puu.sh/wXRFI.jpg

Pata-Mon wrote:

[General]
  1. EN的spread会比较危险．normal的大ds本身倒还不是问题，但同时加上很多连续1/2的需要移动的clickable物件以及一些过于复杂的节奏就比较难了．


[Normal]
  1. 见General bpm这么低而且1.3也不大
  2. ar5 spread会更好，并且这是比较难的normal，4稍微低了
  3. hitsound过少．这个难度很多地方可以根据跟的音轨来加一些音效，强调所跟的内容，给玩家更强的反馈．比如00:02:917 - 00:03:365 - 00:04:708 - ……这类滑条头没有音效会欠缺一点．
  4. 00:28:439 (1,2,3,4) - 这种地方缺得就更加明显．
  5. 从00:30:454 - 到00:42:992 - 这一段则是finish鼓点过于喧宾夺主，这段音乐比前后两段都轻很多，却用的一样音量，实在有点违和．顺便00:43:663 - 这种地方又是很需要音效但是没有的．
  6. 建议再check下整个难度，多考虑一下hitsound，后面音效问题不再说了基本都是类似的
  7. 00:54:409 (2) - 不是很有必要跟（至少不需要用clickable的东西跟）的音，过于加大了复杂度
  8. 00:58:215 (3) - 换成一个1/1折返或许比较好长滑条好些
  9. 01:17:021 (1,2) - 过于弯曲有点不好看还行
  10. 01:33:812 (3) - 这形状在整个难度里看似乎有点突兀
  11. 01:41:424 (3,4,5) - 这样的就实在过难了，尤其是easy非常非常简单的情况下，这个东西可以说完全是hard的级别了考虑到后面hard的摆法，我觉得这里并不过分
others are fixed, thanks for modding!
sikao
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 73327
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 16126,30454,59111,73439,102096
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Kimi to Tsukuru mou Hitotsu no Mirai
TitleUnicode:君とつくるもうひとつの未来
Artist:AiRI
ArtistUnicode:AiRI
Creator:My Angel Azusa
Version:Mei's Normal
Source:ここから夏のイノセンス！
Tags:sahuang narcissu joker- mei KaedekaShizuru Clochette Kokokara Natsu no Innocence op galgame eroge
BeatmapID:1370431
BeatmapSetID:643715

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.7
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg3.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
1798,447.761194029851,4,2,1,50,1,0
30454,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
59111,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
73439,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
102096,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
116424,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 252,203,5
Combo2 : 66,193,255
Combo3 : 164,0,82
Combo4 : 48,62,109

[HitObjects]
39,52,1798,6,0,P|84:50|124:35,1,60,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,79,2245,2,0,L|150:220,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
140,275,2917,2,0,L|130:343,1,60,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,352,3365,6,0,P|258:344|342:336,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,349,4036,2,0,P|446:346|453:262,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
402,236,4708,2,0,L|406:164,1,60,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,66,5380,6,0,L|218:52,1,60,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,117,5827,2,0,P|150:140|65:104,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
17,170,6499,2,0,L|19:241,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
26,308,6947,6,0,L|149:292,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,357,7618,2,0,P|224:311|212:254,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
196,177,8290,2,0,L|122:189,2,60,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,165,8962,6,0,L|347:177,1,60,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,161,9409,2,0,L|413:288,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
418,359,10081,2,0,L|484:352,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
497,276,10529,6,0,L|493:156,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
491,78,11200,2,0,P|456:53|369:83,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
312,35,11872,2,0,L|299:98,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,215,12544,6,0,L|210:298,1,60,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,320,12992,2,0,P|84:325|35:277,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
17,214,13663,2,0,L|9:149,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
50,87,14111,6,0,P|98:81|171:72,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,139,14783,2,0,L|276:130,1,60,4|2,3:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
345,120,15230,2,0,P|373:59|351:16,2,120,8|8|4,3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,193,16350,5,0,0:0:0:0:
267,253,16574,2,0,L|201:260,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,293,17021,2,0,L|75:286,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,345,17693,6,0,P|242:342|319:332,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,346,18365,2,0,P|459:343|457:280,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,248,19036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,214,19260,2,0,P|328:175|339:143,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,118,19708,6,0,L|458:135,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,78,20380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
253,77,20603,2,0,L|187:85,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,49,21051,1,8,0:0:0:0:
122,49,21275,6,0,P|112:97|160:152,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,204,21947,2,0,L|188:338,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,357,22618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
50,321,22842,2,0,L|36:257,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
21,185,23290,6,0,L|7:121,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
51,61,23738,2,0,P|93:71|120:74,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,58,24186,2,0,P|232:45|252:35,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,132,24857,6,0,P|149:197|141:263,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,277,25529,2,0,P|228:317|306:324,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,347,26200,2,0,L|437:335,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
473,269,26648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
401,237,26872,6,0,L|342:248,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,212,27320,2,0,L|256:155,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,94,27768,1,2,0:0:0:0:
229,79,27992,2,0,P|197:74|157:69,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,68,28439,6,0,P|90:128|91:205,1,120,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
93,266,29111,1,8,2:0:0:0:
101,343,29335,2,0,P|164:331|237:321,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,337,30006,2,0,L|358:348,1,60,8|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
432,347,30454,6,0,P|465:316|435:243,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
379,210,31126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,193,31350,2,0,L|299:62,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
243,17,32021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
169,43,32245,6,0,P|127:61|108:72,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
61,125,32693,1,4,3:0:0:0:
53,202,32917,2,0,P|63:240|85:330,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,372,33589,1,4,3:0:0:0:
288,326,34036,6,0,P|326:316|367:313,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,315,34484,2,0,P|447:273|443:245,1,60,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,217,34932,2,0,P|339:207|261:208,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
187,223,35603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
126,173,35827,6,0,P|85:166|53:166,2,60,2|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
192,132,36499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,117,36723,2,0,P|311:107|389:108,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
495,219,37618,6,0,L|486:279,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,292,38066,2,0,L|400:352,1,60,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,346,38514,2,0,P|277:333|196:346,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
126,342,39186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
49,329,39409,6,0,P|48:294|49:255,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
53,190,39857,1,4,3:0:0:0:
120,228,40081,2,0,P|166:238|229:188,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,122,40753,2,0,P|208:87|209:48,1,60,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,27,41200,6,0,L|405:40,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
461,83,41872,1,0,0:0:0:0:
481,158,42096,2,0,B|459:220|508:221|471:289,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
435,340,42768,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,318,42992,6,0,L|289:318,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,332,43439,1,4,3:0:0:0:
145,314,43663,2,0,P|123:280|217:231,1,180,2|0,0:3|3:0,0:0:0:0:
344,141,44783,6,0,P|341:88|333:58,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,36,45230,1,4,3:0:0:0:
207,74,45454,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,49,45678,2,0,P|85:39|51:31,1,60,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
46,109,46126,2,0,P|75:115|104:121,1,60,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,164,46574,6,0,L|180:224,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,288,47021,2,0,P|130:334|204:359,1,120,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,335,47693,2,0,P|303:340|324:341,1,60,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
461,277,48365,6,0,P|463:216|458:150,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
385,129,49036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
445,80,49260,2,0,P|460:42|386:6,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
328,10,49932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,67,50156,6,0,L|281:129,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,134,50603,2,0,L|218:264,1,120,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,331,51275,2,0,P|176:332|137:323,1,60,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
25,250,51947,6,0,P|20:210|17:183,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,113,52395,1,4,3:0:0:0:
75,133,52618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
150,112,52842,2,0,P|204:102|272:110,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
341,136,53514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,117,53738,6,0,P|427:66|426:40,2,60,2|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
403,194,54409,2,0,P|399:231|404:266,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,366,55081,2,0,P|278:360|238:354,1,60,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,361,55529,6,0,P|134:347|125:262,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
171,229,56200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,203,56424,2,0,P|250:144|244:62,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
184,37,57096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,67,57320,6,0,P|68:75|34:86,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,146,57768,2,0,P|8:192|14:228,1,60,4|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
29,281,58215,2,0,B|119:263|119:263|167:278|167:278|268:254,1,240,4|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,215,59559,6,0,P|419:181|417:147,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
415,77,60006,1,4,3:0:0:0:
348,118,60230,2,0,P|297:108|276:98,1,60,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,50,60678,6,0,P|185:37|100:61,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
49,90,61350,1,10,0:0:0:0:
54,167,61574,2,0,L|61:295,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
65,364,62245,2,0,P|112:355|139:343,1,60,12|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
192,313,62693,6,0,P|242:313|318:341,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,352,63365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
461,345,63589,2,0,L|477:267,1,60,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
427,222,64036,1,2,0:0:0:0:
353,195,64260,2,0,L|337:117,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,57,64708,5,0,0:0:0:0:
272,85,64932,2,0,L|136:65,1,120,10|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
78,89,65603,1,4,3:0:0:0:
74,166,65827,2,0,P|74:207|70:299,1,120,4|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,353,66499,5,8,0:0:0:0:
187,341,66723,2,0,P|232:333|263:328,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,324,67171,2,0,P|364:332|402:337,2,60,4|2|2,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,259,67842,6,0,P|273:218|274:133,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,90,68514,1,10,0:0:0:0:
409,71,68738,2,0,P|452:70|492:79,1,60,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
502,143,69186,2,0,L|505:214,1,60,2|12,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
474,274,69633,1,2,3:2:0:0:
410,319,69857,6,0,L|276:289,1,120,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
215,282,70529,1,2,0:0:0:0:
150,325,70753,2,0,L|16:295,1,120,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
7,225,71424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
18,147,71648,6,0,P|21:105|25:68,2,60,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
82,190,72320,2,0,L|226:163,1,120,4|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
276,152,72992,1,4,3:0:0:0:
426,193,73439,6,0,P|435:254|424:317,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,350,74111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,351,74335,2,0,P|239:342|150:323,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,308,75006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,250,75230,6,0,L|22:105,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,57,75902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
110,109,76126,2,0,P|146:117|223:88,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,149,77021,6,0,P|391:185|458:159,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,87,77693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
427,11,77917,2,0,L|296:25,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,54,78589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,131,78812,6,0,L|254:255,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,310,79484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,300,79708,2,0,P|77:291|45:220,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
49,76,80603,6,0,L|182:60,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,53,81275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,126,81499,2,0,L|405:110,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
469,102,82171,6,0,P|504:147|465:214,1,120
461,276,82842,1,8,0:0:0:0:
390,309,83066,2,0,P|331:295|252:299,1,120
193,287,83738,2,0,P|187:331|185:360,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,343,84186,6,0,P|87:307|110:218,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,201,84857,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,210,85081,2,0,P|312:203|344:148,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,88,85753,6,0,L|170:108,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,82,86424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
46,115,86648,2,0,L|32:186,1,60,0|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
112,179,87096,2,0,L|98:250,1,60,0|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
194,362,87768,6,0,P|254:345|319:345,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,343,88439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,302,88663,2,0,P|463:255|464:172,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
453,105,89335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,149,89559,6,0,P|336:153|257:137,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,92,90230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,137,90454,2,0,P|92:133|13:149,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,300,91350,6,0,P|90:304|169:288,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,264,92021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,306,92245,2,0,P|300:354|296:376,2,60,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,228,92917,6,0,L|318:82,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,30,93589,1,8,0:0:0:0:
399,44,93812,2,0,P|468:52|484:106,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,166,94484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
409,313,94932,6,0,P|352:324|284:318,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,322,95603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,335,95827,2,0,P|77:346|9:340,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
3,264,96499,6,0,P|60:253|128:259,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,232,97171,2,0,L|202:153,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,94,97618,2,0,P|242:80|302:126,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,184,98290,1,0,0:0:0:0:
386,250,98514,6,0,L|374:371,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,382,99186,2,0,L|456:312,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,261,99633,2,0,L|499:191,1,60,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
501,122,100081,6,0,P|429:107|362:102,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,87,100753,2,0,L|292:14,2,60,4|0|4,3:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
323,163,101424,1,0,3:0:0:0:
245,154,101648,1,4,3:0:0:0:
167,148,101872,1,0,3:0:0:0:
162,225,102096,6,0,L|171:307,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,335,102544,2,0,P|55:316|30:239,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
37,185,103215,2,0,L|28:103,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,68,103663,6,0,L|211:74,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,83,104335,2,0,L|400:77,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
478,87,105006,2,0,P|490:46|489:16,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,162,105678,6,0,P|443:203|444:233,1,60,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,298,106126,2,0,P|391:306|314:321,1,120,10|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
255,361,106798,2,0,P|213:348|176:334,1,60,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,341,107245,6,0,P|59:325|38:258,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
46,198,107917,2,0,P|50:149|52:124,1,60,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
54,59,108365,2,0,P|102:53|124:55,1,60,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,126,108812,2,0,P|182:129|264:119,1,120,10|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
321,73,109484,5,0,0:0:0:0:
397,88,109708,2,0,P|447:106|467:175,1,120,10|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
462,243,110380,2,0,P|460:288|463:323,1,60,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,345,110827,6,0,P|335:340|254:334,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,328,111499,2,0,P|154:344|121:360,2,60,10|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
242,263,112171,2,0,P|248:207|245:178,1,60,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,112618,6,0,P|120:129|135:73,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,36,113290,2,0,L|311:30,1,120,10|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
380,36,113962,2,0,L|460:29,2,60,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,114633,12,0,116424,0:0:0:0:
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
KaedekaShizuru
kunka
Kaedeka's Insane

  1. 00:15:230 (4) - Because the 00:15:678 - is strong sound, clickable is desirable. I recommend addition of 3/4slider https://puu.sh/wXPjg.jpg that's really a tempting proposal, but here is a demarcation point of prelude, I want a pause
  2. 00:24:186 (6) - I recommend a copy of the 00:24:633 (7) - for symmetry. sure
  3. 00:26:424 (6) - ^ copy of 00:25:977 (5) - no thank you
  4. 00:28:663 (1,2,3,4) - I feel rhythm to be like hard diff. Because there are many sounds, I recommend the change that is suitable for insane diff. For example https://puu.sh/wXPNi.jpg hmmm, in fact my diff is light insane so you see I can't map too hard, thank you
  5. 01:27:432 (2,3,4,1) - tbh, I can watch almost none of the slider :o Because the recognition of the slider is not easy, I recommend a change of the placement. I need more thought , maybe I'll move out for a bit (I can read here maybe because of I'm the creator? lol
  6. 01:46:350 (4,5) - why stack? stack is not used in remaining notes. the same with beginning

巴达萌
[Insane]
  1. 开头音效太小了几乎听不到，稍微调大到能听到的程度吧 我觉得完全OK啊233
  2. 00:28:439 (8,1,2) - 一个滑条后1/4跳之后是一个3次折返滑条，结尾落在重音上，而00:29:335 - 这里又很轻，这读起来打起来都不太舒服，感觉还是把00:29:111 - 这里拆出来个单点好，毕竟前面你都用了滑条跳 好
  3. 00:41:200 (1,2) - sv很慢，3/4长度本身就不太明显，ds又用跟1/2差不多得，这就比较难读出3/4容易放早，建议近点 改回1/2 本来也很犹豫到底放不放3/4
  4. 00:58:663 (6,1) - 反向感觉这样稍微远了一点（跟后面几个比） 当kick无所谓啦超简单的随便一甩就接上了
  5. 01:42:096 (5) - 感觉还是nc下比较好，毕竟类似地方01:27:768 (1) - 也nc（虽然这里肯定得nc）好

thank you for mod
*add combo colour
怎么只有俩
顺便video呢
Nozhomi
Global Moderator
4,568 posts
Joined May 2013
Nozhomi
Hmmmmmmm oh yes.
Hi

[joker's Easy :]
  1. 00:29:559 (4) - Clap should be on the end.
  2. 00:30:454 - I disagree a lot with the rhythm you choosed to use here. You missing a lot of stong beats like 00:32:245 - / 00:35:827 - / etc... who shouldn't be passive due to vocal and drum on them. Also I don't understand why 00:30:454 (1,2) - should have a different rhythm than 00:34:036 (1,2) - , that's inconsistent on it structure. I personnally prefer smth like https://puu.sh/x4gM3/4370c607f6.png who fit more the song overall.
  3. Also if you don't plan to change it for x reasons, at least swap stuff like 00:39:857 (3,4) - to get the vocal beat on 00:40:753 - clickable.
  4. 01:47:469 (3,3) - Why they're different ? They cover the same type of sound.
[Narcissu's Hard :]
  1. 00:15:678 (6) - Are you sure about that ? I would see more a 1/2 slider here. A 1/4 just cut the song in the middle of that 1/4 rhythm.
  2. 00:21:499 (1,2,3,4) - This should use the same spacing than 00:17:917 (1,2,3,4) - / 00:25:081 (1,2,3,4) - , they map the same musical section and should be consistent.
  3. 01:00:230 (6) - Same here about the 1/4, you end on nothing enough strong else than the end of the drum, and 01:00:454 - vocal is way more important to map than this. Also sounds a bit off when you play it. Same for 01:03:812 (6) - / 01:07:395 (6) - .
  4. Maybe some of your triplet could be changed for reverse slider, imo there's a lot of them, a bit too much.
[Kaedeka's Insane :]
  1. 00:01:126 (1) - That's super disturbing to map this who is really quiet and weak, and then skip all the sounds starting 00:01:350 - from here who are much more important. You don't expect that when you play the diff.
  2. The only major issue on this diff is how you handle spacing for your 1/4 jumps on kiai. They looks too much like some of your 1/2 spacing like 01:15:230 (1,2) - . Imo you should reduce a bit them in order to get a better reading about what is 1/4 and 1/2 (look at Future diff too see an example). Also they're super inconsistent (just look at 01:13:439 (1,2) - / 01:14:335 (4,5) - , there's 1.40x difference between them for no reason).
  3. 01:42:208 (1) - Could you end that spinner at 01:45:454 - to give some room before restart the next section ? 1/4 recover is a bit short here imo.
[Future :]
  1. 00:58:551 (4,1) - Could you avoid the small gap ? Imo that's not necessary, the rhythm don't call for it and it don't really fit that type of song.
  2. 01:03:141 (1) - End it on 01:03:365 - , the vocal beat is way more strong and intuitive to play here, and you did a 1/2 here 01:06:723 (1) - for the same sound.
  3. 01:12:320 (4,5) - Vocal stoped to have increasing intensity, so spacing should be the same than 01:12:096 (3,4) - (also feels a bit forced imo but meh).
  5. 01:55:864 (4,1) - Can I ask for a bit less spaced ? ;w;

The video seems a bit edgy at some points, maybe get confirmation it's fine ?
Mukyu~
Eir_DELETED
Eir_DELETED

Nozhomi wrote:

[joker's Easy :]
  1. 00:29:559 (4) - Clap should be on the end. removed sumpleset:d then added clap
  2. 00:30:454 - I disagree a lot with the rhythm you choosed to use here. You missing a lot of stong beats like 00:32:245 - / 00:35:827 - / etc... who shouldn't be passive due to vocal and drum on them. Also I don't understand why 00:30:454 (1,2) - should have a different rhythm than 00:34:036 (1,2) - , that's inconsistent on it structure. I personnally prefer smth like https://puu.sh/x4gM3/4370c607f6.png who fit more the song overall. Hmm... i preferred current rhythm patterns although as you said, it's more suitable in term of readable by intuition. i changed that you suggested the rhythm on the whole(00:30:454 - 00:44:335 - ). And at the next section(00:44:783 - 00:58:663 - ), i used another rhythm that is placed alternately 1/2 reverse slider and 1/1 slider to avoid monotonousness
  3. Also if you don't plan to change it for x reasons, at least swap stuff like 00:39:857 (3,4) - to get the vocal beat on 00:40:753 - clickable. same as above
  4. 01:47:469 (3,3) - Why they're different ? They cover the same type of sound. since they are consistency with first section (00:07:171 (3,3) - )
thanks for checking Nozhomi~
done
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 73327
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 16126,30454,59111,73439,87768,102096
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.5999997

[Metadata]
Title:Kimi to Tsukuru mou Hitotsu no Mirai
TitleUnicode:君とつくるもうひとつの未来
Artist:AiRI
ArtistUnicode:AiRI
Creator:sahuang
Version:joker's Easy
Source:ここから夏のイノセンス！
Tags:my angel azusa narcissu joker- mei KaedekaShizuru Clochette Kokokara Natsu no Innocence op galgame eroge
BeatmapID:1366198
BeatmapSetID:643715

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.95
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg4.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"optc.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
1798,447.761194029851,4,2,1,50,1,0
16126,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
30454,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
44783,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
59111,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
69857,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
73439,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
86872,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
87768,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
102096,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
105566,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
105678,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
116312,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
116872,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,111
Combo2 : 255,121,188
Combo3 : 66,255,66
Combo4 : 43,255,255

[HitObjects]
126,297,1798,6,0,P|175:282|233:281,1,94.9999999999999,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,315,2693,2,0,P|359:313|403:297,1,94.9999999999999,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,239,3589,2,0,P|497:177|393:131,1,190,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
319,161,4932,1,2,0:0:0:0:
234,116,5380,6,0,P|168:94|123:88,1,94.9999999999999,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,153,6275,2,0,P|81:199|98:243,1,94.9999999999999,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,293,7171,2,0,P|170:339|153:383,2,94.9999999999999,4|2|4,3:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
187,198,8514,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,106,8962,6,0,P|265:70|295:59,1,94.9999999999999,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,91,9857,2,0,P|419:144|430:174,1,94.9999999999999,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
441,267,10753,2,0,B|418:305|370:326|370:326|310:311|244:343,1,190,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
189,370,12096,1,2,0:0:0:0:
103,329,12544,6,0,P|50:297|20:265,1,94.9999999999999,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
81,195,13439,2,0,P|113:160|136:119,1,94.9999999999999,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,37,14335,2,0,P|230:40|284:62,1,95,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
355,110,15230,1,4,3:0:0:0:
349,204,15678,1,4,3:0:0:0:
259,235,16126,6,0,P|336:300|428:259,1,190,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,202,17469,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,113,17917,2,0,P|375:67|342:54,1,94.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,70,18812,2,0,P|201:116|168:129,1,94.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,154,19708,6,0,P|44:136|-10:131,2,94.9999999999999,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,208,21051,1,8,0:0:0:0:
250,152,21499,2,0,P|297:138|352:137,1,94.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,186,22395,2,0,P|436:231|438:278,1,94.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,350,23290,6,0,B|290:309|290:309|186:337,1,190,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,363,24633,1,8,0:0:0:0:
36,299,25081,2,0,P|22:253|21:206,1,94.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,128,25977,2,0,P|121:114|168:113,1,94.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,164,26872,6,0,L|238:273,2,94.9999999999999,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,70,28215,2,0,P|326:64|371:72,1,95,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,100,29111,1,0,3:0:0:0:
461,193,29559,2,0,L|446:296,1,94.9999999999999,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,354,30454,6,0,P|285:374|203:319,1,190,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,254,31798,1,4,3:0:0:0:
160,160,32245,2,0,P|210:136|259:122,1,95,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
321,185,33141,2,0,P|365:207|416:220,1,94.9999999999999,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
479,155,34036,6,0,P|500:251|420:312,1,190,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,340,35380,1,4,3:0:0:0:
254,332,35827,2,0,P|206:326|162:310,1,94.9999999999999,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
159,214,36723,2,0,P|216:195|268:193,1,94.9999999999999,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
245,97,37618,6,0,P|182:55|74:79,1,190,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,152,38962,1,4,3:0:0:0:
16,246,39409,2,0,P|25:292|41:337,1,94.9999999999999,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
132,364,40305,2,0,P|179:359|224:344,1,94.9999999999999,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
311,307,41200,6,0,B|339:252|339:252|307:112,1,190,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,167,42544,1,4,3:0:0:0:
135,202,42992,2,0,P|83:198|42:182,1,95,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
4,95,43887,2,0,P|38:62|79:39,1,94.9999999999999,4|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
169,70,44783,6,0,P|227:109|345:76,1,190,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,33,46126,1,4,3:0:0:0:
465,113,46574,2,0,P|455:172|447:229,1,94.9999999999999,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
371,260,47469,2,0,L|277:245,1,95,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
188,211,48365,6,0,P|134:212|85:231,2,95,2|4|2,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,151,49708,1,4,3:0:0:0:
188,89,50156,2,0,P|142:71|79:66,1,95,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
25,128,51051,2,0,P|7:174|2:237,1,95,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
49,300,51947,6,0,B|87:329|142:306|142:306|198:275|253:324,1,190,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,364,53290,1,4,3:0:0:0:
370,296,53738,2,0,P|399:242|415:183,1,95,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
402,115,54633,2,0,P|386:70|362:29,1,95,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
267,40,55529,6,0,L|173:54,2,95,2|4|2,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,134,56872,1,4,3:0:0:0:
235,221,57320,2,0,P|174:232|125:222,1,95,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
63,174,58215,2,0,P|52:113|62:64,1,95,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
136,28,59111,6,0,P|182:17|229:21,1,95,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,79,60230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,147,60678,2,0,L|407:305,1,142.5,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,351,61798,2,0,P|274:331|228:328,1,94.9999999999999,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
225,234,62693,6,0,P|237:178|236:127,1,94.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,38,63812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
58,86,64260,2,0,B|33:177|33:177|59:250,1,142.5,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,306,65380,2,0,P|154:323|210:327,1,94.9999999999999,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
232,243,66275,6,0,P|301:221|354:218,1,94.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,279,67395,1,2,0:0:0:0:
508,202,67842,2,0,P|532:152|509:66,1,142.5,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,30,68962,2,0,P|384:50|315:56,1,94.9999999999999,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
248,20,69857,6,0,P|290:90|255:189,1,190,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
192,256,71200,1,4,3:0:0:0:
97,242,71648,2,0,P|60:203|35:155,1,94.9999999999999,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
76,79,72544,1,4,3:0:0:0:
165,111,72992,1,4,3:0:0:0:
232,43,73439,6,0,P|298:52|336:74,1,94.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,117,74335,2,0,P|387:186|390:232,1,94.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,301,75230,2,0,P|487:318|522:320,2,94.9999999999999,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,275,76574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
245,333,77021,6,0,P|173:310|122:307,1,94.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,288,77917,2,0,P|43:213|46:183,1,94.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,123,78812,2,0,P|123:48|120:18,2,94.9999999999999,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,209,80156,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,152,80603,6,0,P|282:127|348:128,1,94.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,113,81499,1,2,0:0:0:0:
469,182,81947,2,0,P|470:229|459:275,1,94.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,320,82842,2,0,P|311:314|272:296,1,94.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,258,83738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,197,84186,6,0,L|138:92,1,94.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,54,85081,2,0,P|277:27|368:45,2,142.5,2|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,102,86872,1,4,3:0:0:0:
95,187,87320,1,4,3:0:0:0:
123,277,87768,6,0,P|185:294|221:295,1,94.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,216,88663,2,0,P|316:219|361:234,1,94.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,193,89559,2,0,P|464:131|465:95,2,94.9999999999999,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,287,90902,1,8,0:0:0:0:
358,332,91350,6,0,P|296:313|251:284,1,94.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,242,92245,2,0,P|126:212|48:225,2,142.5,2|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,219,93812,2,0,B|325:194|325:194|393:223,1,142.5,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,175,94932,6,0,P|475:96|470:65,1,94.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,10,95827,1,2,0:0:0:0:
330,58,96275,2,0,L|227:81,1,94.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,106,97171,2,0,P|156:168|148:216,1,94.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,292,98066,1,8,0:0:0:0:
205,351,98514,6,0,P|268:345|305:332,1,94.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,258,99409,2,0,B|398:247|445:276|445:276|495:249,2,142.5,2|4|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
265,223,101200,1,4,3:0:0:0:
234,133,101648,1,4,3:0:0:0:
280,50,102096,6,0,P|338:35|382:38,1,94.9999999999999,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,70,102992,2,0,P|476:128|473:172,1,95,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,253,103887,2,0,B|404:282|349:259|349:259|293:228|238:277,1,190,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
188,320,105230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
119,253,105678,6,0,P|87:196|77:158,1,94.9999999999999,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,77,106574,2,0,L|205:50,1,94.9999999999999,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,122,107469,2,0,L|358:149,2,94.9999999999999,4|2|4,3:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
202,195,108812,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,277,109260,6,0,P|323:296|353:296,1,94.9999999999999,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,242,110156,2,0,P|437:167|437:137,1,94.9999999999999,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,69,111051,2,0,P|331:20|210:48,1,190,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
156,104,112395,1,2,0:0:0:0:
186,193,112842,6,0,P|200:263|190:312,1,94.9999999999999,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,343,113738,2,0,P|53:320|15:286,1,94.9999999999999,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,114409,12,0,116312,0:0:0:0:
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
KaedekaShizuru

Nozhomi wrote:

[Kaedeka's Insane :]
  1. 00:01:126 (1) - That's super disturbing to map this who is really quiet and weak, and then skip all the sounds starting 00:01:350 - from here who are much more important. You don't expect that when you play the diff. so here does anything matter?
  2. The only major issue on this diff is how you handle spacing for your 1/4 jumps on kiai. They looks too much like some of your 1/2 spacing like 01:15:230 (1,2) - . Imo you should reduce a bit them in order to get a better reading about what is 1/4 and 1/2 (look at Future diff too see an example). Also they're super inconsistent (just look at 01:13:439 (1,2) - / 01:14:335 (4,5) - , there's 1.40x difference between them for no reason). check the KIAI part and almost fixed, my bad
  3. 01:42:208 (1) - Could you end that spinner at 01:45:454 - to give some room before restart the next section ? 1/4 recover is a bit short here imo. I don't think here is any problem in insane diff
thank you
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu

Nozhomi wrote:

[Narcissu's Hard :]
  1. 00:15:678 (6) - Are you sure about that ? I would see more a 1/2 slider here. A 1/4 just cut the song in the middle of that 1/4 rhythm. …… no, i follow drum .. . ..
  2. 00:21:499 (1,2,3,4) - This should use the same spacing than 00:17:917 (1,2,3,4) - / 00:25:081 (1,2,3,4) - , they map the same musical section and should be consistent. …… i made them more like each other, i think “same” is unnecessary ...
  3. 01:00:230 (6) - Same here about the 1/4, you end on nothing enough strong else than the end of the drum, and 01:00:454 - vocal is way more important to map than this. Also sounds a bit off when you play it. Same for 01:03:812 (6) - / 01:07:395 (6) - .
  4. Maybe some of your triplet could be changed for reverse slider, imo there's a lot of them, a bit too much. …… i agree .. i replace some, but most triplet is 2note + slider, i want to keep dense rhythm :?
SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 73327
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Kimi to Tsukuru mou Hitotsu no Mirai
TitleUnicode:君とつくるもうひとつの未来
Artist:AiRI
ArtistUnicode:AiRI
Creator:sahuang
Version:Narcissu's Hard
Source:ここから夏のイノセンス！
Tags:my angel azusa narcissu joker- mei KaedekaShizuru Clochette Kokokara Natsu no Innocence op galgame eroge
BeatmapID:1370784
BeatmapSetID:643715

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg5.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
1798,447.761194029851,4,2,1,40,1,0
1798,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,40,0,0
16126,-62.5,4,2,1,60,0,0
30454,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,40,0,0
44783,-62.5,4,2,1,60,0,0
73439,-58.8235294117647,4,2,1,70,0,1
87656,-58.8235294117647,4,2,1,70,0,0
87768,-58.8235294117647,4,2,1,70,0,1
102096,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,40,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,255
Combo2 : 128,255,255
Combo3 : 255,255,128
Combo4 : 128,128,255

[HitObjects]
80,164,1798,6,0,P|124:108|204:104,1,139.999995727539,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,152,2469,1,0,0:0:0:0:
385,88,2693,2,0,L|316:92,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,152,3141,1,2,0:0:0:0:
427,176,3365,6,0,P|474:125|477:57,1,139.999995727539,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,216,4036,2,0,L|332:304,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,308,4484,2,0,L|492:220,2,69.9999978637695,4|0|2,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,348,5156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
333,285,5380,6,0,B|232:280|232:280|180:304,1,139.999995727539,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,352,6051,1,0,0:0:0:0:
55,243,6275,2,0,P|52:278|60:312,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,352,6723,1,2,0:0:0:0:
131,179,6947,6,0,P|70:148|2:158,1,139.999995727539,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,128,7618,2,0,L|206:58,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,164,8066,1,4,3:0:0:0:
276,164,8290,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,100,8514,2,0,L|428:96,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,72,8850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,72,8962,6,0,P|484:136|472:224,1,139.999995727539,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,248,9633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
509,331,9857,2,0,L|440:328,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,248,10305,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,320,10529,6,0,P|252:256|176:220,1,139.999995727539,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,323,11200,2,0,L|172:316,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,136,11648,2,0,L|62:128,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,240,12096,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,232,12320,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,220,12544,6,0,P|232:156|220:72,1,139.999995727539,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,56,13215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,108,13439,2,0,P|319:142|331:175,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,196,13887,1,2,0:0:0:0:
441,268,14111,1,2,0:0:0:0:
441,268,14223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
441,268,14335,6,0,L|357:276,1,69.9999978637695,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,353,14782,2,0,L|288:284,1,69.9999978637695,4|2,3:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
296,200,15230,1,8,3:0:0:0:
296,200,15342,1,8,3:0:0:0:
296,200,15454,1,8,3:0:0:0:
204,292,15678,2,0,L|156:288,1,34.9999989318848,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,132,16126,6,0,P|116:128|168:44,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,83,16798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
339,83,16909,1,0,0:0:0:0:
339,83,17021,2,0,L|260:80,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,84,17469,2,0,L|448:188,1,79.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,288,17917,5,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,18141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,252,18365,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,320,18589,2,0,L|248:324,2,40,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,352,19036,2,0,L|503:358,2,79.9999999999999,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,240,19708,6,0,B|368:132|368:132|352:76,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,121,20380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,121,20492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,121,20604,2,0,P|236:138|275:140,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,82,21051,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,172,21275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,144,21499,6,0,L|524:140,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,172,21947,1,8,0:0:0:0:
353,82,22171,2,0,L|352:36,2,40,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,176,22618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,140,22842,2,0,L|184:132,1,79.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,100,23178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,100,23290,6,0,P|119:157|40:160,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,23962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,24073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,24185,2,0,L|131:335,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,216,24633,2,0,L|228:320,1,79.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,320,25081,5,2,0:0:0:0:
396,268,25305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,312,25529,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,268,25753,2,0,L|400:220,2,40,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,312,26200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
477,172,26424,2,0,P|449:144|412:132,1,79.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,172,26872,6,0,P|240:176|168:128,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,169,27544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
83,169,27656,1,0,0:0:0:0:
83,169,27768,2,0,P|80:130|89:91,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,76,28215,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,138,28439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
89,91,28663,6,0,L|85:35,2,40,4|0|0,0:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
169,297,29111,2,0,L|176:134,1,160,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,76,29782,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,120,30006,1,0,3:0:0:0:
352,120,30118,1,0,3:0:0:0:
352,120,30230,1,0,3:0:0:0:
484,68,30454,6,0,B|500:112|500:112|484:224,1,139.999995727539,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
472,288,31126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,236,31350,2,0,P|339:238|291:286,1,139.999995727539,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
260,364,32021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,320,32245,6,0,P|152:312|104:320,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,232,32693,2,0,P|76:243|39:274,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,148,33141,2,0,P|34:113|38:79,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,116,33589,2,0,P|128:83|149:55,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,76,34036,5,2,0:0:0:0:
232,76,34260,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,44,34484,1,4,3:0:0:0:
312,44,34708,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,72,34932,2,0,L|416:224,1,139.999995727539,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
480,264,35603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
399,292,35827,6,0,P|385:323|382:358,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,244,36275,2,0,P|292:228|256:228,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,280,36723,1,2,0:0:0:0:
129,234,36947,1,0,0:0:0:0:
150,153,37171,1,4,3:0:0:0:
235,149,37395,1,0,0:0:0:0:
265,226,37618,6,0,P|352:224|412:176,1,139.999995727539,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
472,228,38290,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,144,38514,2,0,B|452:48|452:48|422:15,1,139.999995727539,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
376,84,39185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,36,39409,6,0,L|220:28,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,116,39857,2,0,L|148:92,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,112,40305,2,0,L|7:181,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,144,40753,2,0,L|92:214,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,332,41200,5,2,0:0:0:0:
12,332,41424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,300,41648,1,4,3:0:0:0:
92,300,41872,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,336,42096,2,0,P|236:336|304:284,1,139.999995727539,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
448,268,42767,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,312,42991,6,0,L|372:392,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,260,43439,2,0,L|464:172,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,92,43887,2,0,L|388:52,2,34.9999989318848,4|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
352,208,44335,1,0,3:0:0:0:
460,156,44559,1,0,3:0:0:0:
300,136,44783,6,0,P|268:172|256:224,1,79.9999999999999,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,288,45230,1,4,3:0:0:0:
168,240,45454,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,240,45566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,240,45678,2,0,L|164:152,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,140,46126,1,4,3:0:0:0:
40,236,46350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,44,46574,6,0,L|143:37,2,79.9999999999999,2|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
204,112,47245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,112,47357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,112,47469,2,0,L|308:120,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,20,47917,1,4,3:0:0:0:
316,28,48141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,20,48365,6,0,P|436:56|440:104,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,184,48812,1,4,3:0:0:0:
428,244,49036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,244,49148,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,244,49260,2,0,L|507:240,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,332,49708,1,4,3:0:0:0:
352,184,49932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,272,50156,6,0,P|276:271|239:256,2,79.9999999999999,2|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
195,171,50827,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,171,50939,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,171,51051,2,0,P|163:199|143:247,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,324,51499,1,4,3:0:0:0:
52,280,51723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,280,51835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,280,51947,6,0,L|44:180,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,28,52394,1,4,3:0:0:0:
144,80,52618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,80,52730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,80,52842,2,0,L|137:159,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,40,53290,1,4,3:0:0:0:
308,100,53514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,44,53738,6,0,L|463:37,2,79.9999999999999,2|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
440,216,54409,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,216,54521,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,216,54633,2,0,L|432:120,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,232,55081,1,4,3:0:0:0:
324,136,55305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
383,300,55529,6,0,P|351:322|312:327,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,192,55977,1,4,3:0:0:0:
212,288,56200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,288,56312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,288,56424,2,0,L|218:367,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,284,56872,1,4,3:0:0:0:
20,276,57096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,196,57320,6,0,L|64:104,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,24,57768,2,0,L|212:112,1,79.9999999999999,4|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
380,128,58215,2,0,L|419:131,2,40,4|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
299,184,58663,2,0,L|260:188,2,40,4|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
448,204,59111,5,8,0:0:0:0:
448,204,59223,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,204,59335,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,204,59447,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,204,59559,2,0,P|468:124|432:44,1,160,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
272,92,60230,2,0,L|328:88,1,40,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,200,60678,6,0,P|300:200|368:264,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
510,195,61350,2,0,P|470:195|432:184,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,68,61798,2,0,L|340:16,2,40,4|0|4,3:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
248,64,62246,2,0,L|232:24,2,40,4|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
160,104,62694,5,8,0:0:0:0:
160,104,62806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,104,62918,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,104,63030,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,104,63142,2,0,P|88:68|-12:92,1,160,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
32,252,63813,2,0,L|24:320,1,40
136,212,64260,6,0,P|136:304|204:372,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,344,64932,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,308,65156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,212,65380,2,0,L|272:160,2,40,4|0|4,3:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
436,292,65828,2,0,L|444:352,2,40,4|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
368,220,66276,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,220,66388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,220,66500,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,220,66612,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,220,66724,2,0,P|404:148|396:68,1,160,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
480,208,67395,2,0,L|536:200,1,40,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,132,67842,6,0,B|188:120|188:120|144:140,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,296,68514,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,216,68738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,188,68962,2,0,L|8:168,2,40,4|0|2,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,288,69409,2,0,L|36:276,2,40,4|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,316,69857,6,0,P|287:291|308:257,1,79.9999999999999,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,54,70305,2,0,P|213:92|216:131,1,79.9999999999999,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,248,70753,2,0,P|389:210|363:180,1,79.9999999999999,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,228,71200,1,4,3:0:0:0:
308,102,71424,6,0,P|385:90|449:135,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,316,72096,1,4,3:0:0:0:
364,180,72320,1,4,3:0:0:0:
404,316,72544,1,4,3:0:0:0:
307,257,72768,1,0,3:0:0:0:
307,257,72880,1,0,3:0:0:0:
307,257,72992,2,0,L|244:252,2,40,4|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
116,336,73439,6,0,B|80:308|80:308|64:180,1,170.000003242493,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,28,74111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
143,119,74335,2,0,P|181:136|224:135,1,85.0000016212463,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,72,74783,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,172,75006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,75230,6,0,L|272:296,1,170.000003242493,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,332,75902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,240,76126,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,240,76238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,240,76350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,172,76574,2,0,P|396:130|420:95,1,85.0000016212463,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,264,77021,6,0,P|272:300|172:276,1,170.000003242493,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,196,77693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,276,77917,2,0,L|84:280,1,85.0000016212463,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,168,78365,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,308,78589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
25,155,78812,6,0,P|67:84|148:68,1,170.000003242493,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,164,79484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,32,79708,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,76,79932,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,152,80156,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,68,80380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,68,80492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,68,80603,6,0,P|436:128|436:236,1,170.000003242493,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,308,81275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
229,271,81499,2,0,P|269:260|312:264,1,85.0000016212463,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,308,81947,1,8,0:0:0:0:
311,263,82171,6,0,L|300:92,1,170.000003242493,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,132,82842,2,0,L|47:122,1,85.0000016212463,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,56,83290,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,56,83402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,56,83514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,232,83738,2,0,L|72:236,1,85.0000016212463,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,152,84186,6,0,P|312:212|296:312,1,170.000003242493,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,364,84857,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,364,84969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,364,85081,2,0,L|172:268,1,85.0000016212463,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,72,85529,1,8,0:0:0:0:
9,184,85753,6,0,B|53:176|53:176|133:188|133:188|201:172,1,170.000003242493,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,188,86424,2,0,B|324:180|324:180|388:192,1,85.0000016212463,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
392,284,86872,1,4,3:0:0:0:
392,284,86984,1,4,3:0:0:0:
392,284,87096,1,4,3:0:0:0:
420,100,87320,1,4,3:0:0:0:
420,100,87432,1,4,3:0:0:0:
420,100,87544,1,4,3:0:0:0:
467,192,87768,6,0,P|385:196|325:139,1,170.000003242493,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,168,88439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,192,88663,2,0,L|243:276,1,85.0000016212463,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,168,89111,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,236,89334,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,108,89558,6,0,P|144:116|220:48,1,170.000003242493,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,32,90230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,108,90454,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,108,90566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,108,90678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,52,90902,2,0,L|404:44,1,85.0000016212463,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,152,91350,6,0,P|492:252|460:340,1,170.000003242493,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,284,92021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,284,92133,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,284,92245,2,0,L|304:180,2,85.0000016212463,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,348,92917,6,0,B|72:352|72:352|12:304|36:224,1,170.000003242493,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,184,93589,1,8,0:0:0:0:
17,52,93812,2,0,P|93:87|176:72,1,170.000003242493,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,8,94484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,8,94596,1,0,3:0:0:0:
256,8,94708,1,0,3:0:0:0:
175,72,94932,6,0,B|180:200|180:200|216:252,1,170.000003242493,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,240,95603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,160,95827,2,0,P|321:155|281:167,1,85.0000016212463,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,240,96275,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,168,96499,6,0,P|488:80|424:12,1,170.000003242493,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,56,97171,2,0,P|304:48|256:48,1,85.0000016212463,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,168,97618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,168,97730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,168,97842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,15,98066,2,0,P|127:46|107:83,1,85.0000016212463,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,268,98514,6,0,P|64:185|0:133,1,170.000003242493,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,264,99185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,264,99297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,264,99409,2,0,L|252:256,1,85.0000016212463,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,232,99857,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,76,100081,6,0,B|356:120|356:120|344:200|344:200|360:268,1,170.000003242493,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,100753,2,0,B|237:36,1,85.0000016212463,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,176,101200,1,4,3:0:0:0:
172,176,101312,1,0,3:0:0:0:
172,176,101424,1,0,3:0:0:0:
124,88,101648,1,4,3:0:0:0:
124,88,101760,1,0,3:0:0:0:
124,88,101872,1,0,3:0:0:0:
88,224,102096,6,0,P|152:272|228:260,1,139.999995727539,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,212,102768,1,0,0:0:0:0:
409,256,102992,2,0,L|340:260,1,69.9999978637695,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,212,103440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,176,103664,6,0,P|482:221|486:290,1,139.999995727539,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,168,104335,2,0,L|341:98,1,69.9999978637695,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,256,104783,2,0,L|401:344,2,69.9999978637695,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,212,105455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,304,105679,6,0,B|107:309|107:309|55:285,1,139.999995727539,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,107,106350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,159,106574,2,0,P|135:194|128:228,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,107,107022,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,40,107246,6,0,P|184:29|245:60,1,139.999995727539,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,12,107917,2,0,P|328:44|329:79,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,108365,1,4,3:0:0:0:
272,140,108589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,79,108813,2,0,L|405:75,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,72,109149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,72,109261,6,0,P|476:136|464:224,1,139.999995727539,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,248,109932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,328,110156,2,0,L|501:331,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,248,110604,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,304,110828,6,0,P|212:284|176:208,1,139.999995727539,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,134,111499,2,0,L|272:204,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,164,111947,2,0,L|84:94,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,56,112395,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,140,112619,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,224,112843,6,0,P|112:264|28:252,1,139.999995727539,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,140,113514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,196,113738,2,0,P|256:236|236:280,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,140,114186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,200,114410,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,200,114522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,200,114634,6,0,L|420:208,1,69.9999978637695,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
188,140,115081,2,0,L|181:71,1,69.9999978637695,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
246,263,115529,2,0,L|242:315,2,34.9999989318848,8|8|8,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
405,206,115977,1,8,3:0:0:0:
405,206,116089,1,8,3:0:0:0:
405,206,116200,2,0,L|464:212,1,34.9999989318848,8|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
sahuang
2,293 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
sahuang
All fixed and updated. Also deleted video because it's NSFW....................it's so fking sad
Nozhomi
Global Moderator
4,568 posts
Joined May 2013
Nozhomi

sahuang wrote:

All fixed and updated. Also deleted video because it's NSFW....................it's so fking sad
Sad indeed.

After a quick check, seems offset is a bit wrong. Apply -13 to it (was obvious later than some beats are not correctly snaped to the music like here 00:15:665 - ).

@Narcissu
  1. 00:15:665 (6) - That's not called following drums, that's called doing an extended slider on drum hit. There's no drumbeat on 00:15:777 - . The next evident strong beat is on 00:15:889 - that red tic, and this apply for all other (01:00:217 (6) - this is the most obvious one imo since the drum hit is on the red tic).
@Kaedeka
  1. 00:01:126 (1) - Yes it matters because it would be more obvious for the player to click stuff from 00:01:350 - , so it means move 00:01:126 (1) - to 00:01:350 - and adjust it to fit your map.
  2. 01:17:917 (4,5) - I think you miised to fix that 1/4 gap like others.
  3. 01:35:827 (5,1,2,3) - The stack is quite bad, look -> https://puu.sh/x5Ygy/61850215d7.png = bad / https://puu.sh/x5YhJ/0166db8743.png = good.

Oui
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
i use 1/4 slider follow drum…… same as lfj's diff follow cymbals. https://osu.ppy.sh/b/832841 02:27:045 (1,2) - 02:48:028 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8806881

i will use note replace 1/4slider if you think Hard diff shouldn't be used this way, but 1/4slider better than note imo :?

---------------

Edit：emm .. my dear Nozhomi, you need't not took so much effort to explain, it's only a small problem, i will not resistance.

but .. such as “Never use an other maps as examples. Context is always different.”, this statement is right, and mapper will not acceptable. lfj's mod let me sincerely convinced but you can't. try rank a map with high Fav/Rating/Plays before say “What is good”.

SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 73327
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Kimi to Tsukuru mou Hitotsu no Mirai
TitleUnicode:君とつくるもうひとつの未来
Artist:AiRI
ArtistUnicode:AiRI
Creator:sahuang
Version:Narcissu's Hard
Source:ここから夏のイノセンス！
Tags:my angel azusa narcissu joker- mei KaedekaShizuru Clochette Kokokara Natsu no Innocence op galgame eroge
BeatmapID:1370784
BeatmapSetID:643715

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg5.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
1798,447.761194029851,4,2,1,40,1,0
1798,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,40,0,0
16126,-62.5,4,2,1,60,0,0
30454,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,40,0,0
44783,-62.5,4,2,1,60,0,0
73439,-58.8235294117647,4,2,1,70,0,1
87656,-58.8235294117647,4,2,1,70,0,0
87768,-58.8235294117647,4,2,1,70,0,1
102096,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,40,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,255
Combo2 : 128,255,255
Combo3 : 255,255,128
Combo4 : 128,128,255

[HitObjects]
80,164,1798,6,0,P|124:108|204:104,1,139.999995727539,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,152,2469,1,0,0:0:0:0:
385,88,2693,2,0,L|316:92,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,152,3141,1,2,0:0:0:0:
427,176,3365,6,0,P|474:125|477:57,1,139.999995727539,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,216,4036,2,0,L|332:304,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,308,4484,2,0,L|492:220,2,69.9999978637695,4|0|2,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,348,5156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
333,285,5380,6,0,B|232:280|232:280|180:304,1,139.999995727539,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,352,6051,1,0,0:0:0:0:
55,243,6275,2,0,P|52:278|60:312,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,352,6723,1,2,0:0:0:0:
131,179,6947,6,0,P|70:148|2:158,1,139.999995727539,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,128,7618,2,0,L|206:58,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,164,8066,1,4,3:0:0:0:
276,164,8290,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,100,8514,2,0,L|428:96,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,72,8850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,72,8962,6,0,P|484:136|472:224,1,139.999995727539,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,248,9633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
509,331,9857,2,0,L|440:328,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,248,10305,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,320,10529,6,0,P|252:256|176:220,1,139.999995727539,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,323,11200,2,0,L|172:316,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,136,11648,2,0,L|62:128,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,240,12096,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,232,12320,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,220,12544,6,0,P|232:156|220:72,1,139.999995727539,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,56,13215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,108,13439,2,0,P|319:142|331:175,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,196,13887,1,2,0:0:0:0:
441,268,14111,1,2,0:0:0:0:
441,268,14223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
441,268,14335,6,0,L|357:276,1,69.9999978637695,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,353,14782,2,0,L|288:284,1,69.9999978637695,4|2,3:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
296,200,15230,1,8,3:0:0:0:
296,200,15342,1,8,3:0:0:0:
296,200,15454,1,8,3:0:0:0:
172,260,15678,2,0,L|92:256,1,69.9999978637695,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,132,16126,6,0,P|116:128|168:44,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,83,16798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
339,83,16909,1,0,0:0:0:0:
339,83,17021,2,0,L|260:80,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,84,17469,2,0,L|448:188,1,79.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,288,17917,5,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,18141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,252,18365,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,320,18589,2,0,L|248:324,2,40,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,352,19036,2,0,L|503:358,2,79.9999999999999,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,240,19708,6,0,B|368:132|368:132|352:76,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,121,20380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,121,20492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,121,20604,2,0,P|236:138|275:140,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,82,21051,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,172,21275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,144,21499,6,0,L|524:140,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,172,21947,1,8,0:0:0:0:
353,82,22171,2,0,L|352:36,2,40,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,176,22618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,140,22842,2,0,L|184:132,1,79.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,100,23178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,100,23290,6,0,P|119:157|40:160,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,23962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,24073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,24185,2,0,L|131:335,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,216,24633,2,0,L|228:320,1,79.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,320,25081,5,2,0:0:0:0:
396,268,25305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,312,25529,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,268,25753,2,0,L|400:220,2,40,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,312,26200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
477,172,26424,2,0,P|449:144|412:132,1,79.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,172,26872,6,0,P|240:176|168:128,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,169,27544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
83,169,27656,1,0,0:0:0:0:
83,169,27768,2,0,P|80:130|89:91,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,76,28215,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,138,28439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
89,91,28663,6,0,L|85:35,2,40,4|0|0,0:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
169,297,29111,2,0,L|176:134,1,160,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,76,29782,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,120,30006,1,0,3:0:0:0:
352,120,30118,1,0,3:0:0:0:
352,120,30230,1,0,3:0:0:0:
484,68,30454,6,0,B|500:112|500:112|484:224,1,139.999995727539,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
472,288,31126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,236,31350,2,0,P|339:238|291:286,1,139.999995727539,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
260,364,32021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,320,32245,6,0,P|152:312|104:320,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,232,32693,2,0,P|76:243|39:274,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,148,33141,2,0,P|34:113|38:79,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,116,33589,2,0,P|128:83|149:55,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,76,34036,5,2,0:0:0:0:
232,76,34260,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,44,34484,1,4,3:0:0:0:
312,44,34708,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,72,34932,2,0,L|416:224,1,139.999995727539,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
480,264,35603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
399,292,35827,6,0,P|385:323|382:358,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,244,36275,2,0,P|292:228|256:228,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,280,36723,1,2,0:0:0:0:
129,234,36947,1,0,0:0:0:0:
150,153,37171,1,4,3:0:0:0:
235,149,37395,1,0,0:0:0:0:
265,226,37618,6,0,P|352:224|412:176,1,139.999995727539,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
472,228,38290,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,144,38514,2,0,B|452:48|452:48|422:15,1,139.999995727539,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
376,84,39185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,36,39409,6,0,L|220:28,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,116,39857,2,0,L|148:92,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,112,40305,2,0,L|7:181,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,144,40753,2,0,L|92:214,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,332,41200,5,2,0:0:0:0:
12,332,41424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,300,41648,1,4,3:0:0:0:
92,300,41872,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,336,42096,2,0,P|236:336|304:284,1,139.999995727539,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
448,268,42767,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,312,42991,6,0,L|372:392,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,260,43439,2,0,L|464:172,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,92,43887,2,0,L|388:52,2,34.9999989318848,4|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
352,208,44335,1,0,3:0:0:0:
460,156,44559,1,0,3:0:0:0:
300,136,44783,6,0,P|268:172|256:224,1,79.9999999999999,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,288,45230,1,4,3:0:0:0:
168,240,45454,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,240,45566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,240,45678,2,0,L|164:152,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,140,46126,1,4,3:0:0:0:
40,236,46350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,44,46574,6,0,L|143:37,2,79.9999999999999,2|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
204,112,47245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,112,47357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,112,47469,2,0,L|308:120,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,20,47917,1,4,3:0:0:0:
316,28,48141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,20,48365,6,0,P|436:56|440:104,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,184,48812,1,4,3:0:0:0:
428,244,49036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,244,49148,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,244,49260,2,0,L|507:240,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,332,49708,1,4,3:0:0:0:
352,184,49932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,272,50156,6,0,P|276:271|239:256,2,79.9999999999999,2|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
195,171,50827,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,171,50939,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,171,51051,2,0,P|163:199|143:247,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,324,51499,1,4,3:0:0:0:
52,280,51723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,280,51835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,280,51947,6,0,L|44:180,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,28,52394,1,4,3:0:0:0:
144,80,52618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,80,52730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,80,52842,2,0,L|137:159,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,40,53290,1,4,3:0:0:0:
308,100,53514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,44,53738,6,0,L|463:37,2,79.9999999999999,2|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
440,216,54409,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,216,54521,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,216,54633,2,0,L|432:120,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,232,55081,1,4,3:0:0:0:
324,136,55305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
383,300,55529,6,0,P|351:322|312:327,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,192,55977,1,4,3:0:0:0:
212,288,56200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,288,56312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,288,56424,2,0,L|218:367,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,284,56872,1,4,3:0:0:0:
20,276,57096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,196,57320,6,0,L|64:104,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,24,57768,2,0,L|212:112,1,79.9999999999999,4|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
380,128,58215,2,0,L|419:131,2,40,4|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
299,184,58663,2,0,L|260:188,2,40,4|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
448,204,59111,5,8,0:0:0:0:
448,204,59223,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,204,59335,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,204,59447,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,204,59559,2,0,P|468:124|432:44,1,160,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
272,92,60230,2,0,L|360:88,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,200,60678,6,0,P|300:200|368:264,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
510,195,61350,2,0,P|470:195|432:184,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,68,61798,2,0,L|340:16,2,40,4|0|4,3:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
248,64,62246,2,0,L|232:24,2,40,4|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
160,104,62694,5,8,0:0:0:0:
160,104,62806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,104,62918,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,104,63030,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,104,63142,2,0,P|88:68|-12:92,1,160,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
32,252,63813,2,0,L|28:344,1,79.9999999999999
136,212,64260,6,0,P|136:304|204:372,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,344,64932,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,308,65156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,212,65380,2,0,L|272:160,2,40,4|0|4,3:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
436,292,65828,2,0,L|444:352,2,40,4|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
368,220,66276,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,220,66388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,220,66500,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,220,66612,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,220,66724,2,0,P|404:148|396:68,1,160,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
432,160,67395,2,0,P|472:164|516:152,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,132,67842,6,0,B|188:120|188:120|144:140,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,296,68514,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,216,68738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,188,68962,2,0,L|8:168,2,40,4|0|2,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,288,69409,2,0,L|36:276,2,40,4|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,316,69857,6,0,P|287:291|308:257,1,79.9999999999999,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,54,70305,2,0,P|213:92|216:131,1,79.9999999999999,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,248,70753,2,0,P|389:210|363:180,1,79.9999999999999,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,228,71200,1,4,3:0:0:0:
308,102,71424,6,0,P|385:90|449:135,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,316,72096,1,4,3:0:0:0:
364,180,72320,1,4,3:0:0:0:
404,316,72544,1,4,3:0:0:0:
307,257,72768,1,0,3:0:0:0:
307,257,72880,1,0,3:0:0:0:
307,257,72992,2,0,L|244:252,2,40,4|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
116,336,73439,6,0,B|80:308|80:308|64:180,1,170.000003242493,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,28,74111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
143,119,74335,2,0,P|181:136|224:135,1,85.0000016212463,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,72,74783,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,172,75006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,75230,6,0,L|272:296,1,170.000003242493,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,332,75902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,240,76126,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,240,76238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,240,76350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,172,76574,2,0,P|396:130|420:95,1,85.0000016212463,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,264,77021,6,0,P|272:300|172:276,1,170.000003242493,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,196,77693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,276,77917,2,0,L|84:280,1,85.0000016212463,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,168,78365,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,308,78589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
25,155,78812,6,0,P|67:84|148:68,1,170.000003242493,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,164,79484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,32,79708,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,76,79932,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,152,80156,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,68,80380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,68,80492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,68,80603,6,0,P|436:128|436:236,1,170.000003242493,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,308,81275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
229,271,81499,2,0,P|269:260|312:264,1,85.0000016212463,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,308,81947,1,8,0:0:0:0:
311,263,82171,6,0,L|300:92,1,170.000003242493,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,132,82842,2,0,L|47:122,1,85.0000016212463,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,56,83290,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,56,83402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,56,83514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,232,83738,2,0,L|72:236,1,85.0000016212463,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,152,84186,6,0,P|312:212|296:312,1,170.000003242493,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,364,84857,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,364,84969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,364,85081,2,0,L|172:268,1,85.0000016212463,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,72,85529,1,8,0:0:0:0:
9,184,85753,6,0,B|53:176|53:176|133:188|133:188|201:172,1,170.000003242493,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,188,86424,2,0,B|324:180|324:180|388:192,1,85.0000016212463,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
392,284,86872,1,4,3:0:0:0:
392,284,86984,1,4,3:0:0:0:
392,284,87096,1,4,3:0:0:0:
420,100,87320,1,4,3:0:0:0:
420,100,87432,1,4,3:0:0:0:
420,100,87544,1,4,3:0:0:0:
467,192,87768,6,0,P|385:196|325:139,1,170.000003242493,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,168,88439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,192,88663,2,0,L|243:276,1,85.0000016212463,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,168,89111,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,236,89334,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,108,89558,6,0,P|144:116|220:48,1,170.000003242493,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,32,90230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,108,90454,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,108,90566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,108,90678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,52,90902,2,0,L|404:44,1,85.0000016212463,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,152,91350,6,0,P|492:252|460:340,1,170.000003242493,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,284,92021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,284,92133,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,284,92245,2,0,L|304:180,2,85.0000016212463,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,348,92917,6,0,B|72:352|72:352|12:304|36:224,1,170.000003242493,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,184,93589,1,8,0:0:0:0:
17,52,93812,2,0,P|93:87|176:72,1,170.000003242493,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,8,94484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,8,94596,1,0,3:0:0:0:
256,8,94708,1,0,3:0:0:0:
175,72,94932,6,0,B|180:200|180:200|216:252,1,170.000003242493,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,240,95603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,160,95827,2,0,P|321:155|281:167,1,85.0000016212463,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,240,96275,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,168,96499,6,0,P|488:80|424:12,1,170.000003242493,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,56,97171,2,0,P|304:48|256:48,1,85.0000016212463,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,168,97618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,168,97730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,168,97842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,15,98066,2,0,P|127:46|107:83,1,85.0000016212463,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,268,98514,6,0,P|64:185|0:133,1,170.000003242493,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,264,99185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,264,99297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,264,99409,2,0,L|252:256,1,85.0000016212463,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,232,99857,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,76,100081,6,0,B|356:120|356:120|344:200|344:200|360:268,1,170.000003242493,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,100753,2,0,B|237:36,1,85.0000016212463,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,176,101200,1,4,3:0:0:0:
172,176,101312,1,0,3:0:0:0:
172,176,101424,1,0,3:0:0:0:
124,88,101648,1,4,3:0:0:0:
124,88,101760,1,0,3:0:0:0:
124,88,101872,1,0,3:0:0:0:
88,224,102096,6,0,P|152:272|228:260,1,139.999995727539,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,212,102768,1,0,0:0:0:0:
409,256,102992,2,0,L|340:260,1,69.9999978637695,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,212,103440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,176,103664,6,0,P|482:221|486:290,1,139.999995727539,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,168,104335,2,0,L|341:98,1,69.9999978637695,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,256,104783,2,0,L|401:344,2,69.9999978637695,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,212,105455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,304,105679,6,0,B|107:309|107:309|55:285,1,139.999995727539,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,107,106350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,159,106574,2,0,P|135:194|128:228,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,107,107022,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,40,107246,6,0,P|184:29|245:60,1,139.999995727539,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,12,107917,2,0,P|328:44|329:79,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,108365,1,4,3:0:0:0:
272,140,108589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,79,108813,2,0,L|405:75,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,72,109149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,72,109261,6,0,P|476:136|464:224,1,139.999995727539,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,248,109932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,328,110156,2,0,L|501:331,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,248,110604,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,304,110828,6,0,P|212:284|176:208,1,139.999995727539,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,134,111499,2,0,L|272:204,1,69.9999978637695,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,164,111947,2,0,L|84:94,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,56,112395,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,140,112619,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,224,112843,6,0,P|112:264|28:252,1,139.999995727539,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,140,113514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,196,113738,2,0,P|256:236|236:280,1,69.9999978637695,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,140,114186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,200,114410,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,200,114522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,200,114634,6,0,L|420:208,1,69.9999978637695,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
188,140,115081,2,0,L|181:71,1,69.9999978637695,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
246,263,115529,2,0,L|242:315,2,34.9999989318848,8|8|8,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
405,206,115977,1,8,3:0:0:0:
405,206,116089,1,8,3:0:0:0:
405,206,116200,2,0,L|464:212,1,34.9999989318848,8|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
Last edited by Narcissu , edited 1 time in total.
Nozhomi
Global Moderator
4,568 posts
Joined May 2013
Nozhomi
1. Never use an other maps as examples. Context is always different.
2. There's nothing to emphasis with a small extended slider on drum hit at this point. You skipping a stronger beat than a drum reverb and that's not good! Avoid extended sliders which pass through important sounds. is a guideline close to your case than you shouldn't break here, especially for the hard diff. There's no purpose of doing that.
3. I don't ask to change it for a circle but a 1/2 slider to end on the red tic who is the strong beat.

And ofc for all of them like I said on my 1st mod.
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
KaedekaShizuru

Nozhomi wrote:

@Kaedeka
  1. 00:01:126 (1) - Yes it matters because it would be more obvious for the player to click stuff from 00:01:350 - , so it means move 00:01:126 (1) - to 00:01:350 - and adjust it to fit your map. pls listen carefully. There are 4 tones 1/6 here. NOT ONLY AT 00:01:350 . I don't want to do more explanation
  2. 01:17:917 (4,5) - I think you miised to fix that 1/4 gap like others. ohh yes, sorry
  3. 01:35:827 (5,1,2,3) - The stack is quite bad, look -> https://puu.sh/x5Ygy/61850215d7.png = bad / https://puu.sh/x5YhJ/0166db8743.png = good. but why my here looks all fine ? just in case I move them out one by one and then move back

    OK I know your mean. Fxxking the stacking effect. fixed
thank you
Nozhomi
Global Moderator
4,568 posts
Joined May 2013
Nozhomi
Oki seems fine now :3
Bub~
Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
2,307 posts
Joined November 2013
Chaoslitz
好大的banner
好小的bg

[General]
  1. 求meta proof
[joker's Easy]
  1. 01:03:802 (2) - missing whistle
[Mei's Normal]
  1. 非kiai段的節奏有點過密 (00:16:116, 00:59:549, 01:42:086), 因為現在的1/2節奏中間沒有停頓, 對新手來說是挺難打的==, 可以試試簡化一下節奏留空幾個1/1的break
[Kaedaka's Insane]
  1. 靜流這個藍色的combo colour好像太深了, 弄淺一下
  2. 00:58:653 (6,1) - 對比01:02:235 (6,1) - 和 01:05:817 (6,1) - 似乎太遠了
[Future]
  1. 00:51:489 (8) - 放低點? 00:51:489 (8,9) - 太遠不好打
  2. 01:56:302 (4) - ??這個感覺完在藍線比較合適

好懶啊不想摸圖
畢竟撒謊.gif
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
KaedekaShizuru

Chaoslitz wrote:

[Kaedaka's Insane]
  1. 靜流這個藍色的combo colour好像太深了, 弄淺一下 稍微调淡一点 不过太淡就没意义了你懂的
  2. 00:58:653 (6,1) - 對比01:02:235 (6,1) - 和 01:05:817 (6,1) - 似乎太遠了 拉近一些 不过作为曲子的一个分段点 我觉得比后二者更大一些也没什么问题 毕竟后二者并不是
畢竟撒謊.gif
毕竟超市.gif
https://puu.sh/x9IwD/2157039fcd.rar
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Mei
改了
en?
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 73327
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 16126,30454,59111,73439,102096
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Kimi to Tsukuru mou Hitotsu no Mirai
TitleUnicode:君とつくるもうひとつの未来
Artist:AiRI
ArtistUnicode:AiRI
Creator:sahuang
Version:Mei's Normal
Source:ここから夏のイノセンス！
Tags:my angel azusa narcissu joker- mei KaedekaShizuru Clochette Kokokara Natsu no Innocence op galgame eroge
BeatmapID:1370431
BeatmapSetID:643715

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.7
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg3.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
1788,447.761194029851,4,2,1,50,1,0
30444,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
59101,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
73429,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
102086,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
116414,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 252,203,5
Combo2 : 66,193,255
Combo3 : 164,0,82
Combo4 : 48,62,109

[HitObjects]
39,52,1788,6,0,P|84:50|124:35,1,60,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,79,2235,2,0,L|150:220,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
140,275,2907,2,0,L|130:343,1,60,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,352,3355,6,0,P|258:344|342:336,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,349,4026,2,0,P|446:346|453:262,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
402,236,4698,2,0,L|406:164,1,60,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,66,5370,6,0,L|218:52,1,60,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,117,5817,2,0,P|150:140|65:104,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
17,170,6489,2,0,L|19:241,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
26,308,6937,6,0,L|149:292,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,357,7608,2,0,P|224:311|212:254,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
196,177,8280,2,0,L|122:189,2,60,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,165,8952,6,0,L|347:177,1,60,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,161,9399,2,0,L|413:288,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
418,359,10071,2,0,L|484:352,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
497,276,10519,6,0,L|493:156,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
491,78,11190,2,0,P|456:53|369:83,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
312,35,11862,2,0,L|299:98,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,215,12534,6,0,L|210:298,1,60,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,320,12982,2,0,P|84:325|35:277,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
17,214,13653,2,0,L|9:149,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
50,87,14101,6,0,P|98:81|171:72,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,139,14773,2,0,L|276:130,1,60,4|2,3:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
345,120,15220,2,0,P|373:59|351:16,2,120,8|8|4,3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,253,16564,6,0,L|201:260,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,293,17011,2,0,L|75:286,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,345,17683,6,0,P|242:342|319:332,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,346,18355,2,0,P|459:343|457:280,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,248,19026,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,214,19250,2,0,P|328:175|339:143,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,118,19698,6,0,L|458:135,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,76,20593,2,0,L|182:84,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,49,21041,1,8,0:0:0:0:
122,49,21265,6,0,P|112:97|160:152,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,204,21937,2,0,L|188:338,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,357,22608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
50,321,22832,2,0,L|36:257,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
21,185,23280,6,0,L|7:121,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,52,23728,1,8,0:0:0:0:
186,58,24176,2,0,P|228:40|252:35,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,132,24847,6,0,P|149:197|141:263,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,277,25519,2,0,P|228:317|306:324,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,347,26190,2,0,L|437:335,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
473,269,26638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
401,237,26862,6,0,L|342:248,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,212,27310,2,0,L|300:88,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,64,27982,2,0,P|196:59|156:54,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,68,28429,6,0,P|90:128|91:205,1,120,8|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
93,266,29101,1,8,2:0:0:0:
101,343,29325,2,0,P|164:331|237:321,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,337,29996,2,0,L|358:348,1,60,8|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
432,347,30444,6,0,P|465:316|435:243,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
302,193,31340,2,0,L|299:62,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
169,43,32235,6,0,P|127:61|108:72,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
61,125,32683,1,4,3:0:0:0:
53,202,32907,2,0,P|63:240|85:330,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,372,33579,1,4,3:0:0:0:
288,326,34026,6,0,P|326:316|432:320,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
368,164,34922,2,0,P|308:162|249:175,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
187,223,35593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
126,173,35817,6,0,P|85:166|53:166,2,60,2|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
260,92,36713,2,0,P|303:82|381:83,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
476,204,37608,6,0,L|467:264,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,244,38056,2,0,L|383:304,1,60,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,346,38504,2,0,P|277:333|196:346,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
126,342,39176,1,0,0:0:0:0:
49,329,39399,6,0,P|48:294|49:255,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
53,190,39847,1,4,3:0:0:0:
120,228,40071,2,0,P|166:238|229:188,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,122,40743,2,0,P|208:87|209:48,1,60,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,27,41190,6,0,L|405:40,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
461,83,41862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
481,158,42086,2,0,B|459:220|508:221|471:289,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
359,318,42982,6,0,L|289:318,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,332,43429,1,4,3:0:0:0:
145,314,43653,2,0,P|123:280|217:231,1,180,2|0,0:3|3:0,0:0:0:0:
344,141,44773,6,0,P|341:88|333:58,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,36,45220,1,4,3:0:0:0:
207,74,45444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,49,45668,2,0,P|85:39|51:31,1,60,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
46,109,46116,2,0,P|75:115|104:121,1,60,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,164,46564,6,0,L|180:224,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,288,47011,2,0,P|130:334|204:359,1,120,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,335,47683,2,0,P|303:340|324:341,1,60,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
461,277,48355,6,0,P|463:216|458:150,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
385,129,49026,1,0,0:0:0:0:
445,80,49250,2,0,P|460:42|386:6,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
328,10,49922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,67,50146,6,0,L|281:129,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,134,50593,2,0,L|218:264,1,120,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,331,51265,2,0,P|176:332|137:323,1,60,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
25,250,51937,6,0,P|20:210|17:183,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,113,52385,1,4,3:0:0:0:
75,133,52608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
150,112,52832,2,0,P|204:102|272:110,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
341,136,53504,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,117,53728,6,0,P|427:66|426:40,2,60,2|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
403,194,54399,2,0,P|399:231|404:266,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,366,55071,2,0,P|278:360|238:354,1,60,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,361,55519,6,0,P|134:347|125:262,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
171,229,56190,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,203,56414,2,0,P|250:144|244:62,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
184,37,57086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,67,57310,6,0,P|68:75|34:86,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,146,57758,2,0,P|8:192|14:228,1,60,4|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
29,281,58205,2,0,B|119:263|119:263|167:278|167:278|268:254,1,240,4|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,215,59549,6,0,P|419:181|417:147,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
415,77,59996,1,4,3:0:0:0:
348,118,60220,2,0,P|297:108|276:98,1,60,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,50,60668,6,0,P|185:37|100:61,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
49,90,61340,1,10,0:0:0:0:
54,167,61564,2,0,L|61:295,1,120,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
65,364,62235,2,0,P|112:355|139:343,1,60,12|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
192,313,62683,6,0,P|242:313|318:341,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,352,63355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
461,345,63579,2,0,L|477:267,1,60,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
427,222,64026,1,2,0:0:0:0:
353,195,64250,2,0,L|337:117,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,57,64698,5,0,0:0:0:0:
272,85,64922,2,0,L|136:65,1,120,10|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
78,89,65593,1,4,3:0:0:0:
74,166,65817,2,0,P|74:207|70:299,1,120,4|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,353,66489,5,8,0:0:0:0:
187,341,66713,2,0,P|232:333|263:328,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,324,67161,2,0,P|364:332|402:337,2,60,4|2|2,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,259,67832,6,0,P|273:218|274:133,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,90,68504,1,10,0:0:0:0:
409,71,68728,2,0,P|452:70|492:79,1,60,2|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
502,143,69176,2,0,L|505:214,1,60,2|12,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
474,274,69623,1,2,3:2:0:0:
410,319,69847,6,0,L|276:289,1,120,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
215,282,70519,1,2,0:0:0:0:
150,325,70743,2,0,L|16:295,1,120,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
7,225,71414,1,2,0:0:0:0:
18,147,71638,6,0,P|21:105|25:68,2,60,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
82,190,72310,2,0,L|226:163,1,120,4|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
276,152,72982,1,4,3:0:0:0:
426,193,73429,6,0,P|435:254|424:317,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,350,74101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,351,74325,2,0,P|239:342|150:323,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,308,74996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,250,75220,6,0,L|22:105,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,57,75892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
110,109,76116,2,0,P|146:117|223:88,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,149,77011,6,0,P|391:185|458:159,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,87,77683,1,0,0:0:0:0:
427,11,77907,2,0,L|296:25,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,54,78579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,131,78802,6,0,L|254:255,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,310,79474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,300,79698,2,0,P|77:291|45:220,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
49,76,80593,6,0,L|182:60,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,53,81265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,126,81489,2,0,L|405:110,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
469,102,82161,6,0,P|504:147|465:214,1,120
461,276,82832,1,8,0:0:0:0:
390,309,83056,2,0,P|331:295|252:299,1,120
193,287,83728,2,0,P|187:331|185:360,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,343,84176,6,0,P|87:307|110:218,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,201,84847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,210,85071,2,0,P|312:203|344:148,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,88,85743,6,0,L|170:108,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,82,86414,1,8,0:0:0:0:
46,115,86638,2,0,L|32:186,1,60,0|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
112,179,87086,2,0,L|98:250,1,60,0|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
194,362,87758,6,0,P|254:345|319:345,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,343,88429,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,302,88653,2,0,P|463:255|464:172,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
453,105,89325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,149,89549,6,0,P|336:153|257:137,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,92,90220,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,137,90444,2,0,P|92:133|13:149,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,300,91340,6,0,P|90:304|169:288,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,264,92011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,306,92235,2,0,P|300:354|296:376,2,60,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,228,92907,6,0,L|318:82,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,30,93579,1,8,0:0:0:0:
399,44,93802,2,0,P|468:52|484:106,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,166,94474,1,8,0:0:0:0:
409,313,94922,6,0,P|352:324|284:318,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,322,95593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,335,95817,2,0,P|77:346|9:340,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
3,264,96489,6,0,P|60:253|128:259,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,232,97161,2,0,L|202:153,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,94,97608,2,0,P|242:80|302:126,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,184,98280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
386,250,98504,6,0,L|374:371,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,382,99176,2,0,L|456:312,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,261,99623,2,0,L|499:191,1,60,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
501,122,100071,6,0,P|429:107|362:102,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,87,100743,2,0,L|292:14,2,60,4|0|4,3:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
323,163,101414,1,0,3:0:0:0:
245,154,101638,1,4,3:0:0:0:
167,148,101862,1,0,3:0:0:0:
162,225,102086,6,0,L|171:307,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,335,102534,2,0,P|55:316|30:239,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
37,185,103205,2,0,L|28:103,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,68,103653,6,0,L|211:74,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,83,104325,2,0,L|400:77,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
478,87,104996,2,0,P|490:46|489:16,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,162,105668,6,0,P|443:203|444:233,1,60,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,298,106116,2,0,P|391:306|314:321,1,120,10|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
255,361,106788,2,0,P|213:348|176:334,1,60,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,341,107235,6,0,P|59:325|38:258,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
46,198,107907,2,0,P|50:149|52:124,1,60,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
54,59,108355,2,0,P|102:53|124:55,1,60,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,126,108802,2,0,P|182:129|264:119,1,120,10|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
321,73,109474,5,0,0:0:0:0:
397,88,109698,2,0,P|447:106|467:175,1,120,10|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
462,243,110370,2,0,P|460:288|463:323,1,60,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,345,110817,6,0,P|335:340|254:334,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,328,111489,2,0,P|154:344|121:360,2,60,10|0|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
242,263,112161,2,0,P|248:207|245:178,1,60,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,112608,6,0,P|120:129|135:73,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,36,113280,2,0,L|311:30,1,120,10|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
380,36,113952,2,0,L|460:29,2,60,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,114623,12,0,116414,0:0:0:0:
sahuang
2,293 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
sahuang
All fixed and updated
Nozhomi
Global Moderator
4,568 posts
Joined May 2013
Nozhomi
Meta change so ok rebub since sahuang asked me ~
Eir_DELETED
Eir_DELETED
My bad, I didn't notice Chaoz mod there...
Thanks for checking my diff and also appreciate sahu applied mod instead of me!
Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
2,307 posts
Joined November 2013
Chaoslitz
sahuang
2,293 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
sahuang

Chaoslitz wrote:

Please sign in to reply.

New reply

0
9 / 28