Mars Argo - Using You · forum

schoolboy

Joined July 2016

Topic Starter

schoolboy 2017-07-22T15:51:30+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, September 16, 2017 at 11:13:25 PM

Artist: Mars Argo
Title: Using You
Tags: Corey Mixter Brittany Sheets Linden Place EP alternative rock dream pop grocerybag indie titanic sinclair trynna wajinshu ascendance
BPM: 107
Filesize: 26465kb
Play Time: 03:33
Difficulties Available:

Ascendance's Simple (1.34 stars, 154 notes)
Collab Average (1.92 stars, 228 notes)
Deception (3.44 stars, 441 notes)
Trynna's Challenging (2.51 stars, 323 notes)

Download: Mars Argo - Using You
Download: Mars Argo - Using You (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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you're the only one who's making me c*m
to my sinful senses

Last edited by schoolboy 2022-08-29T10:45:09+00:00, edited 32 times in total.

Trynna

714 posts

Joined May 2013

Trynna 2017-07-23T02:10:30+00:00

song is godlike i need to agree with u

schoolboy

571 posts

Joined July 2016

Topic Starter

schoolboy 2017-07-23T14:47:39+00:00

wanna gd

Namki

1,281 posts

Joined November 2014

Namki 2017-08-04T19:59:20+00:00

hästi!

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-08-20T10:21:14+00:00

ffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff

schoolboy

571 posts

Joined July 2016

Topic Starter

schoolboy 2017-08-20T12:50:28+00:00

hello

Mirash

Nomination Assessment Team

706 posts

Joined June 2013

Mirash 2017-09-01T20:46:14+00:00

your bg size xd
add trynna to tags
also fix video name in trynnas diff

Obsession
hp seems low to me lol, i'd really make it somewhere near 7, considering jumps it has
00:35:823 (1,2) - don't know why aren't you ncing for vocals
00:41:431 (2,3) - hey hey drum and normal hitclaps and 00:42:272 (4) - prob whistle at the head, same goes 00:43:674 (2,3,4,5) -
00:55:730 (4) - since it has strong beat it might be cool and nice to move it closer to the next pattern to create a jump, try something like https://i.imgur.com/8Uokudo.png
01:02:459 (4) - normal clap
01:02:739 (5) - soft whistle
01:25:730 (1) - normal claps on reverse arrow and tail
01:28:253 (2) - it needs more spacing, it'd be more fun that way https://i.imgur.com/AyF8fF1.png
01:40:589 (4,5) - normal clap
01:41:150 (1) - tail needs to be claped normally
01:43:393 (1) - snap your slider
02:03:580 (1,2,3,4,5) - you can form a star pattern
02:24:468 (2) - is it for perhaps emphasizing things? to me its just an unnecessary movement that doesn't provide any feedback that it intends to be giving
02:32:739 (1,2,3,4,5) - same with the star pattern, or at least somewhat similar to a star would be nice
02:36:664 (4) - place it closer to the previous slider, now it looks like it doesn't belong to its pattern https://i.imgur.com/IKnldAX.png

Trynna
00:37:786 (4) - you really should hit normal on tails of this, head of 00:32:739 (3) - and this 00:33:580 (4) - and others like that
00:39:468 (3) - and such thing could be drum whistled
00:52:645 (2) - ok sliders here are slow and players probably will move them till the end, so flow on this circle seem not very comfortable to me, placing it like this https://i.imgur.com/x1NK0ux.png will help, but yeah.. xd
01:00:776 (1) - drum finish on head
01:05:262 (1) - change reverse arrow hitsound additions to drum? sounds better i guess
01:14:234 (1) - something needs to be placed on its head, like soft finish would fit
01:15:075 (2,3,4) - yo hs it like 01:15:916 (6,7) - wtf O.oOO O_O ok you prob have some idea i don't get

Collab normal
00:43:393 (4) - try placing it like this https://i.imgur.com/Lj5PKlx.jpg movements seem nicer that way
01:10:870 (6) - pretty sure its offscreen, yeah

vanucik

484 posts

Joined December 2014

vanucik 2017-09-02T11:47:41+00:00

general

aimoddddxdxdxd
where's kiai in normal and obbbsesesesion
unused files : soft-sliderslide2

normal

widescreen support

00:34:982 - please map this strong beat, u are follow them in all song
01:10:870 (6) - offscreen
01:29:935 (1,2,3) - rly random notes unlike 01:34:982 (2) - (here u following vocals), i think slider will work better 01:30:776 -
01:45:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - i understand what did u follow here, 01:45:916 - and 01:46:197 - is ingored, think rhytmdfsmf like this is much better http://puu.sh/xpENS/8e3b83bce3.jpg , 02:41:711 (1,2,3,4) - same
01:59:935 (5) - i want to see here (02:00:216 - ) a slider to emphasize vocal like note + slider (Never Feel"
02:47:318 (6,7) - u can come up with rhythmmfdasd , this sliders is very passive like marvollo, can u add some notes for this powerful claps?

Hard

01:10:870 (3,1) - , 01:19:842 (3,1) - , and other stacks in ur diff not stacked well, please make the spacing identical with other (x0.35 or x0.4)
01:24:047 (3,4) - it isn't hitsounded for any reasons? 01:24:047 (3) - whistle , 01:24:047 (3) - , and 01:24:328 (4) - would be good
03:00:496 (4,5,1,2,3) - ^ think this hsounding will be better

Insane

01:02:459 (4) - normal clap?
01:25:449 (7,1) - , 02:26:010 (3) - and 02:25:730 (1) - maybe swap nc
02:10:589 (1) - random nc?

schoolboy

571 posts

Joined July 2016

Topic Starter

schoolboy 2017-09-02T13:16:08+00:00

Mirash wrote:
Obsession
hp seems low to me lol, i'd really make it somewhere near 7, considering jumps it has i think its fine
00:35:823 (1,2) - don't know why aren't you ncing for vocals done
00:41:431 (2,3) - hey hey drum and normal hitclaps and 00:42:272 (4) - prob whistle at the head, same goes 00:43:674 (2,3,4,5) - yes
00:55:730 (4) - since it has strong beat it might be cool and nice to move it closer to the next pattern to create a jump, try something like https://i.imgur.com/8Uokudo.png did smth
01:02:459 (4) - normal clap o
01:02:739 (5) - soft whistle doesnt fit tbh..
01:25:730 (1) - normal claps on reverse arrow and tail on tail yes
01:28:253 (2) - it needs more spacing, it'd be more fun that way https://i.imgur.com/AyF8fF1.png tried smth
01:40:589 (4,5) - normal clap drum instead
01:41:150 (1) - tail needs to be claped normally i guess
01:43:393 (1) - snap your slider 1/6
02:03:580 (1,2,3,4,5) - you can form a star pattern did a triangle instead
02:24:468 (2) - is it for perhaps emphasizing things? to me its just an unnecessary movement that doesn't provide any feedback that it intends to be giving i think its fine
02:32:739 (1,2,3,4,5) - same with the star pattern, or at least somewhat similar to a star would be nice i like the current one
02:36:664 (4) - place it closer to the previous slider, now it looks like it doesn't belong to its pattern https://i.imgur.com/IKnldAX.png yeah

Collab normal
00:43:393 (4) - try placing it like this https://i.imgur.com/Lj5PKlx.jpg movements seem nicer that way sure
01:10:870 (6) - pretty sure its offscreen, yeah yeah

vanucik wrote:
general

normal

widescreen support

00:34:982 - please map this strong beat, u are follow them in all song vocals zz
01:10:870 (6) - offscreen ye
01:29:935 (1,2,3) - rly random notes unlike 01:34:982 (2) - (here u following vocals), i think slider will work better 01:30:776 - ok
01:45:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - i understand what did u follow here, 01:45:916 - and 01:46:197 - is ingored, think rhytmdfsmf like this is much better http://puu.sh/xpENS/8e3b83bce3.jpg , 02:41:711 (1,2,3,4) - same i think the current one is better since i need to do smth "hard" for this moment and your thing will be too easy
01:59:935 (5) - i want to see here (02:00:216 - ) a slider to emphasize vocal like note + slider (Never Feel" idk
02:47:318 (6,7) - u can come up with rhythmmfdasd , this sliders is very passive like marvollo, can u add some notes for this powerful claps? maybe

Insane

01:02:459 (4) - normal clap? yes
01:25:449 (7,1) - , 02:26:010 (3) - and 02:25:730 (1) - maybe swap nc prefer mine
02:10:589 (1) - random nc? yeah

thanks for mods

Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

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Joined January 2015

Shmiklak 2017-09-02T15:21:52+00:00

~~I steal Wafu's modding style~~

Red = Not allowed/potentionaly causing DQ
Bold = Mostly important, partially subjective, address this properly
Regular = Subjective opinion, try it out but don't obey my opinion if yours is essentially different

[General]

Tags are conflicting between diffs, must be fixed due RC.

[Obsession]

00:55:169 (3) - this one seems to be too spaced, not as you really wanted. Watch here 00:59:655 (3) - (3) is spaced on the same level as (4) and this spacing isn't very high, then this sound 01:04:141 (3) - it's spaced even smaller. I noticed from the start of the map that the drums on 1/2 have more spacing than these downbeats and I would agree with it, it's fine because they are stronger, but the fact that this one 00:55:169 (3) - is spaced for a very big distance confuses me.
00:45:075 (1) - 01:13:954 (1) - 02:03:300 (5) - 02:09:188 (5) - 02:12:552 (8) - etc, there is actually a lot of such shit - Avoid these from touching the UI on 4:3. Actually, there cannot be any reason why UI would overlap gameplay objects.
Why don't you want to emphasis this sound 00:48:860 - ? It actually sounds the same as 00:53:907 (6) - 01:02:879 (6) - and other 1/4 sounds you emphasised.
01:20:963 (1,2) - this blanket needs a lot of polishing: https://puu.sh/xpJvC/eff09d0d6a.jpg
01:12:832 (2) - shouldn't this be spaced a bit more? As I told before, in the whole map 1/2 drums have more emphasising than downbeats do, but here the downbeat is more emphasised and I feel it wrong. Though, I would suggest to space them at the same level because the sounds are very similar
01:37:505 (2) - actually the same thing as above
01:45:636 (1) - I don't feel the reason why these beats should be emphasized by slider, 01:45:916 - is strong enough to be emphasized by a circle and even more, the similar sounds here are emphasized by circles: 01:46:477 (3) - 01:47:038 (1) - 01:47:599 (3) - Consider replacing it by two circles.
02:05:823 (1) - this is the only 1/1 slider which ignores drums on 1/2, since all such sliders don't ignore them I don't think that this one can do so, for example this one 02:19:281 (1) - it fits the music and it doesn't ignore anything. Consider replacing 02:05:823 (1) - by a slider+circle or anything else, ups to you.
02:24:188 (3,1,2) - uncomfortable for playing tbh :V
03:22:926 (2) - all such places (for example these 01:15:075 (3,4,5) - and - 01:15:916 (7) - were like triplet+smth+repeat 1/4 slider, so consider doing the same thing here

[Hard]

Consider using the same hitsounding as Komore's diffs do because it feels much better, though it's just my opinion.
00:45:075 (1,1) - these two sliders have different spacing from the other same ones: 00:33:860 (1) - 00:36:103 (1) - 00:40:589 (1) - 00:42:832 (1) - The ones I pointed at the start of the issue are spaced to ~1.7 while the all others are spaced to ~1.75 what is actually huge difference. Also, consider moving this one 00:38:346 (1) - because it breaking the whole system
00:50:683 (3) - This one breaks the system as well, the other things have ~1.5 while this one is smth around ~1.6. Consider moving it a bit.
01:00:776 (1,2,3,4) - did you actually want to make DS lower here? I don't really see any valid reason to do so, but if you can address it, might become more understandable. It feels wrong right now because I didn't find any such lowering in the whole diff.
01:07:505 (1) - consider moving to 395;184 for better blanketing with 01:06:945 (3) -
The whole kiai part has DS 1.4 with changes sometimes when it's necessary, except the part from 01:07:505 - till 01:10:870 - This part has DS 1.3 what doesn't make any sense. Consider replacing objects in this part to the right DS.
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Well, actually the whole diff has got a lot of unnecessary DS changes and I don't see any reasons to point them all out, consider check your diff and try to find all such thing, though maybe you can address them properly, idk.

Actually better than ranked version tbh. Best of luck~

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,061 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2017-09-03T06:21:42+00:00

That's my girl, Mars Argo! Mapped in a pretty good way and with the video!

It's a pleasure to see a different take on this song, take a bunch of stars because why not!

schoolboy

571 posts

Joined July 2016

Topic Starter

schoolboy 2017-09-03T10:28:09+00:00

wooo thanks

Trynna

714 posts

Joined May 2013

Trynna 2017-09-03T17:52:38+00:00

ok now i'm using namki's hs
rip most of my mods we cry open

@Mirash changed that weird flow on 00:51:804 (1,2,3) - ty for pointing out i love you
@vanucik now every of those "stacks" such as 01:10:870 (3,1) - are equal although some are 0.35x or 0.38x the majority ends up being 0.37 and that difference is meh tbh thank you
@marvollo ok changed hs, fixed some of the spacing issues and now 00:49:561 - and 01:25:449 - have the same spacing (as i'm retard and did it 0.10x smaller on the second one loool), as the kiai was using the same spacing as the common parts i buffed it's spacing a bit too and fixed some follow point stuff on calm parts tytyty

fixed the volume settings that were all the same and lower compared to the other diffs
also we lost the log but Kalindraz helped me with that pattern 00:33:860 (1,2,3,4) - cuz the previous one was like retardly nonsense and covers nothing. Also he told me to stack 01:06:664 (2,3) - cuz intensity stuff and zzz stacks are so boring (we also anime fight cuz he hates overlapping that was fun)

haha i buffed my diff am i pp mapper yet

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 107739
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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Title:Using You
TitleUnicode:Using You
Artist:Mars Argo
ArtistUnicode:Mars Argo
Creator:Komore
Version:Trynna's Hard
Source:
Tags:Corey Mixter Brittany Sheets Linden Place EP alternative rock dream pop grocerybag indie titanic sinclair  trynna wajinshu
BeatmapID:1370940
BeatmapSetID:643518

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4.1
OverallDifficulty:5.5
ApproachRate:6.5
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SliderTickRate:1

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alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

alacat 2017-09-03T18:51:38+00:00

hi M4M~

[General]

Please check Tags in Obsession diff.

[Collab Normal]

00:46:758 (4) - add a whistle to here ? It would be better to take a rhythm for players
01:33:860 (4) - You didn't take 1/2 sound at here 01:27:412 - and 01:33:019 (2,3,4,1) - this part is a bit hard for beginners so try to use a circle on 01:33:860 - instead of 1/2 slider ?
01:25:449 - ~ 01:43:393 - How about adding more whistle sound around here? like this pattern 01:25:449 (1,2,3) -
03:29:094 - Please add a spinner same other diff.

[Trynna's Hard]

01:24:047 (3,4,1) - It's good part! Well, I feel the spacing is a bit hard for reading on 1/2 rhythm 01:24:328 (4,1) - . Please make normal spacing or remove 1/4 jump on 01:24:047 (3,4) -
01:27:131 (4) - ,01:29:374 - hmm, better to add hitsounds to here. clap or whistle ? If you agree with this, you should be able to apply this suggestion for the rest of the other part.
02:23:767 (1,2) - These part seems similar spacing as here 02:20:122 (2,3) - . I guess it would confuse players for reading. try to use around x1.4 or 1.5 ?
03:00:496 (4,5,1) - Same as 01:24:047 (3,4,1) -

[Obsession]

01:05:262 - Please turn down the volume around 60% since it's calm part.
01:25:449 (7) - prefer to use more spacing for making a jump to here. It would be better for follow the background sound.
01:43:393 - Same as 01:05:262 -
01:46:477 (3,4) - This part looks crowded when playing jump part. You should consider using more spacing.
02:07:786 (4) - I feel the spacing is not fit the music. Because the next note has strong sound 02:08:066 (1) - . so try to decrease spacing and make more jump on here 02:08:066 (1) -

cool mapset, good luck

schoolboy

571 posts

Joined July 2016

Topic Starter

schoolboy 2017-09-03T19:09:35+00:00

alacat wrote:
hi M4M~

[Obsession]
01:25:449 (7) - prefer to use more spacing for making a jump to here. It would be better for follow the background sound. i map vocals,
so should be fine
01:46:477 (3,4) - This part looks crowded when playing jump part. You should consider using more spacing. increased a bit, no need in more spacing since its another pitch
cool mapset, good luck

thanks alacat!

M a r v o l l o wrote:
~~I steal Wafu's modding style~~

Red = Not allowed/potentionaly causing DQ
Bold = Mostly important, partially subjective, address this properly
Regular = Subjective opinion, try it out but don't obey my opinion if yours is essentially different

[General]
Tags are conflicting between diffs, must be fixed due RC.
[Obsession]
00:55:169 (3) - this one seems to be too spaced, not as you really wanted. Watch here 00:59:655 (3) - (3) is spaced on the same level as (4) and this spacing isn't very high, then this sound 01:04:141 (3) - it's spaced even smaller. I noticed from the start of the map that the drums on 1/2 have more spacing than these downbeats and I would agree with it, it's fine because they are stronger, but the fact that this one 00:55:169 (3) - is spaced for a very big distance confuses me. decreased a bit, though its fine
00:45:075 (1) - 01:13:954 (1) - 02:03:300 (5) - 02:09:188 (5) - 02:12:552 (8) - etc, there is actually a lot of such shit - Avoid these from touching the UI on 4:3. Actually, there cannot be any reason why UI would overlap gameplay objects. they're fine
Why don't you want to emphasis this sound 00:48:860 - ? It actually sounds the same as 00:53:907 (6) - 01:02:879 (6) - and other 1/4 sounds you emphasised. i only map 1/4s in the next part if they are in the end of the tact. here i prefer to ignore them
01:20:963 (1,2) - this blanket needs a lot of polishing: https://puu.sh/xpJvC/eff09d0d6a.jpg true
01:12:832 (2) - shouldn't this be spaced a bit more? As I told before, in the whole map 1/2 drums have more emphasising than downbeats do, but here the downbeat is more emphasised and I feel it wrong. Though, I would suggest to space them at the same level because the sounds are very similar increased a bit
01:37:505 (2) - actually the same thing as above ok stacked with 01:38:346 (4) -
01:45:636 (1) - I don't feel the reason why these beats should be emphasized by slider, 01:45:916 - is strong enough to be emphasized by a circle and even more, the similar sounds here are emphasized by circles: 01:46:477 (3) - 01:47:038 (1) - 01:47:599 (3) - Consider replacing it by two circles. no
02:05:823 (1) - this is the only 1/1 slider which ignores drums on 1/2, since all such sliders don't ignore them I don't think that this one can do so, for example this one 02:19:281 (1) - it fits the music and it doesn't ignore anything. Consider replacing 02:05:823 (1) - by a slider+circle or anything else, ups to you. 02:59:655 (1) -
02:24:188 (3,1,2) - uncomfortable for playing tbh :V sorry
03:22:926 (2) - all such places (for example these 01:15:075 (3,4,5) - and - 01:15:916 (7) - were like triplet+smth+repeat 1/4 slider, so consider doing the same thing here ok

ty mar volo

updated trynnas

Lasse

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3,644 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2017-09-04T20:27:56+00:00

my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/660512

normal-hitwhistle isn't really audible in gameplay so idk, use a louder one or different cause current doesn't do anything

top diff
01:17:038 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why is this suddenly so anime, I have no idea what it follows cause it mixed so many things. would do something like https://i.imgur.com/UKkVL2R.jpg
01:24:047 (2,3,4) - this just looks so unfitting with your other things, why is there a slight curve in your manual stack
01:43:393 (1) - what is this snapping
01:57:412 (2,3,4,5,6) - would do whatever rhythm you do for first one here too

trynna
00:48:720 (2) - would just use circle cause that fits drum better
01:15:916 (6,7) - spaced kickslider stuff is kinda lol for hards. even if it's low bpm, doesn't quite fit into the set
01:24:047 (3) - ^
same for other ones like that in each chorus
02:23:767 (1,2) - things like these work fine cause there is a 1/2 gap and not 1/4
cute antijump concept

normal
01:57:412 - 02:04:141 - bit too long of a 1/2 gap chain, tone it down somehow, just a single 1/1 gap would be great already. maybe delete 02:02:178 -
01:22:085 - 01:27:131 - ^
02:58:533 - probably similar

yea

schoolboy

571 posts

Joined July 2016

Topic Starter

schoolboy 2017-09-05T17:40:25+00:00

01:43:393 (1) - this snapping is 1/6 for vocals, i took it from bakari's ranked map!
else was fixed
hs too

i havent fixed that things for normal because easy is soontm and if u mentioned them because of spread, i guess its better to keep them since there will be an easier diff, but if not ill fix them

thanks!

Trynna

714 posts

Joined May 2013

Trynna 2017-09-05T19:45:55+00:00

@alacat fixed ds on 02:23:767 - and removed kicks so people won't misread those parts. Honestly i don't get your last point as 02:07:785 (6,1) - is quite big already

@lasse rip my little kicks i will miss them, on 02:23:767 - i applied alacat's tip and increased ds so it's a lot more readable (and as people weren't introduced to kicks, they will not expect that i guess). Also, 00:48:860 - is quite audible and i don't feel like i am removing the drum's focus so if possible i'd like to keep

ty both for checking!

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schoolboy

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schoolboy 2017-09-05T20:32:53+00:00

updatd, waiting for ascendance and bakari now

riffy

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riffy 2017-09-09T13:44:33+00:00

soon

schoolboy

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schoolboy 2017-09-09T15:05:37+00:00

maybe lets wait for ascendance easy first?

Trynna

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Trynna 2017-09-09T17:02:44+00:00

ctb

riffy

osu! Alumni

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riffy 2017-09-09T17:47:09+00:00

the speedrank and circlejerk trains have no brakes, too late for that

choo choo

actually, yes, let's wait

schoolboy

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schoolboy 2017-09-09T19:37:25+00:00

bakari's insane

Ascendance

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Ascendance 2017-09-11T20:33:09+00:00

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elite mapper

schoolboy

571 posts

Joined July 2016

Topic Starter

schoolboy 2017-09-11T20:42:03+00:00

ok we're finally ready

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,061 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2017-09-12T18:28:15+00:00

delete your facebook

General

Ascendance needs the video to be added to their difficulty. Also, you can probably remove the countdown for it because it's not needed/inconsistent.

Ascendance's Easy

00:51:804 (4) - instead of the 3/2 slider i'd try a couple of 1/2 sliders that'd work better with the vocals and keep the rhythm density consistent.
01:22:085 (2,3) - the spacing here is inconsistent with visually similar pattern on03:16:478 (2,3) - it's a tiny thing but it can be fixed easily.
01:46:197 (2) - doesn't seem to represent the leading instruments well. If anything, I'd try to add a couple of 1/2 gaps as they'd be playable enough at this BPM and represent the drums better. example
02:24:748 (2) - this is where the slider should begin (1/4 earlier) as that's where the drums start. I know you don't want to use 3/4 gaps, so replacimng this whole drum part with a spinner might be a good alternative.
02:41:711 (3,4) - if I were you, I'd focus on the drum line here as it does the 1/2 thingy it did on 01:45:636 (1,2,3) - and it clearly sounds stronger than the vocals.

Could use a couple of mods before being pushed further, but it's quite a decent difficulty.

Collab Normal

00:51:244 - the beat here is a strong vocal sound with some drum support, whereas 00:51:524 - is considerably weaker. Yet, 00:51:524 - has a clickable beat and 00:51:244 - doesn't. Maybe we could try two 1/2 sliders?
01:03:019 (1,3) - would be amazing to have both of these sliders use identica shapes. it sort of needed as the vocals repeata very similar sound twice.
01:39:468 (2,3) - similar vocals, same pattern, so the sliders could be visually identical to each other. This would give your style an extra bit of consistency, which is quite important, especially in a collab.
01:46:758 (3) - the actual beat peaks on 01:47:038 - therefore, leaving the beat unclickable makes little sense, I believe. try replacing (3) with a single circle on 01:47:038 ?
03:18:440 (5) - I would remove it as there is some 1/4 beats going on and this circle sort of blends with them making the rhythm feel a bit crumpled

Pretty nice, also notice how Mars is wearing her dress back to front.

Trynna's Hard

00:34:702 (3,4) - try to ctrl+g these two to highligh the way vocals go there. It might not be the most concentional way to use rhthm, but it certainly works with the vocals there.
01:29:655 (4,1) - 01:31:617 (4,1) - notice how the first one has a more intense beat yet less spacing emphasis. Shouldn't it be the other way round?
02:06:945 (3,4,5,6) - I'm in love with the square here, my only wish is that 02:10:309 (1,2,3,4) - could use a similar pattern
02:20:122 (2,3) - in the context of consistent spacing I would space 1/4 properly as to prevent possible misreadings and avoid a sudden jump.
02:22:365 (3) - try a 1/4 slider with a reverse here and then a 1/2 circle? The quick drumroll here could be mapped, so that the rhythm is consistent and accurate.
02:24:748 (3) - try two circles to highlight the way drums are interrupted? There are two clear individual drum beats, mapping them with one slider makes the second one feel weaker.
02:46:197 (1) - introducing this kind of sliders halfway through the map changes the concept of your style entirely.I would just stick to more regular circular/arc/linear slidershapes.
Note: or add some of these juicy curves in the first part of the difficulty!

I'd pay a bit more attention to the way jumps work as at times it felt a little inconsistent. Maybe it's just me missing out on stuff, though.

Obsession
It's a bit weird how I was initially using the same difficulty name as you do. Not sure how this matches with the lyrics, though.

Can we take a moment to talk about the way you do jumps? You start with a jump for the drum beat on 00:32:459 (2,4,1) - then a similar drum beat is not highlighted at all 00:36:103 - and then there's a stack instead of any kind of jumps 00:40:309 (7,1) - at this point, I thought you might be following the vocals, but if that's the case, then 00:43:674 (2,3) - the word 'love'should've definitely been highlighted with a jump of some kind, and the word 00:41:150 - they is not clickable at all, so the jumps there got me all confused.
01:06:664 - this beat is identical to 01:06:945 - but they are mapped in a completely different way.

I need some kind of a push to get a better way of handling the jumps, though I have enjoyed the visuals and patterning in terms of visuals.

schoolboy

571 posts

Joined July 2016

Topic Starter

schoolboy 2017-09-12T19:11:59+00:00

fixed all for normal
in the last diff i was only following vocals (00:40:309 (7,1) - this is kinda the same as 02:14:515 (6,7) -, i did it because i wanted to highlight vocals and tried not to skip those really strong sounds on downbeats)
00:43:674 (2,3) - increased this a bit cuz i dont really want to ruin the blanket pattern
00:41:150 - making all of these clickable would be a really bad idea since ill have to remap the whole map to get rid of those 1/1s
01:06:664 - fixed

Namki

1,281 posts

Joined November 2014

Namki 2017-09-12T19:45:46+00:00

komrade asked for a little feedback for the easy

01:46:197 (2,3) - I believe it's fine as it's now but 01:47:038 - definitely should be emphasized, I would do something like this
it's not the "standard" rhythm but it looks more fitting here and this polarity thing kinda works here so rhythm doesn't feel that complex
00:33:860 (3) - sudden 4/1 slider, haven't seen any except this one, maybe try to make two instead of one
01:51:244 (4,5) - you're entire diff uses circular or comfortable movement except this, try to make it smoother? //

okay, my main concer ain't about some specific pattern but about the entire idea of the diff
firstly, patterns in which you go back n forth on a circle or overlapping stuff like 01:59:094 (3,4,5,1) - or 02:57:412 (1,2,3,4) - because of this diff feels kinda compressed (idk if used this word incorrectly) and plays pretty in a weird way tbh, it's not something I would call an unrankable issue but from my point of view changing stuff here is totally worth

decent one, even these things I've written here aren't that solid this diff is totally fine to be ranked as far as I can see
glglglglglglglglgllglglglglglgllglglglglglgllglglg my love komore and guys

schoolboy

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Topic Starter

schoolboy 2017-09-14T19:07:51+00:00

replying for trynna since his computer 🅱roke

Bakari wrote:
delete your facebook

General

Trynna's Hard
00:34:702 (3,4) - try to ctrl+g these two to highligh the way vocals go there. It might not be the most concentional way to use rhthm, but it certainly works with the vocals there. ok
01:29:655 (4,1) - 01:31:617 (4,1) - notice how the first one has a more intense beat yet less spacing emphasis. Shouldn't it be the other way round? increased the first, second is not that big due to 01:31:617 (4,1) - those are sliders, so its easier to click
02:06:945 (3,4,5,6) - I'm in love with the square here, my only wish is that 02:10:309 (1,2,3,4) - could use a similar pattern ok
02:20:122 (2,3) - in the context of consistent spacing I would space 1/4 properly as to prevent possible misreadings and avoid a sudden jump. hmm, the current one is the best imo, lower would be harder to click and higher would create a jump which is kinda lame for a hard difficulty
02:22:365 (3) - try a 1/4 slider with a reverse here and then a 1/2 circle? The quick drumroll here could be mapped, so that the rhythm is consistent and accurate. ok
02:24:748 (3) - try two circles to highlight the way drums are interrupted? There are two clear individual drum beats, mapping them with one slider makes the second one feel weaker. somewhy i think that a slider works way better.. but maybe thats just me, can change if you want
02:46:197 (1) - introducing this kind of sliders halfway through the map changes the concept of your style entirely.I would just stick to more regular circular/arc/linear slidershapes. 02:03:580 (1) - there are already some owo, also i think its cute!

here's the old code if trynna will fix his ~~facebook~~ computer before quali and will disagree with my fixes

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riffy

osu! Alumni

8,061 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2017-09-14T19:07:51+00:00

Let's see if I got the idea right, then!

Obsession

00:43:674 (2,3) - a slight increase did not seem to change much, if you ask me. The word doesn't feel highlighed enough, at least to me. It might work as a inverted flow pattern
Note: same?
00:49:001 (4,5) - aren't they rum based? I'd use a new combo to warn players that these stand out of the regular vocal context.
Note: 01:22:645 (4,5,1) - same?
01:09:748 (1,2) - hey, let's try a stack or a bigger jump. Stack would highlight the pause it takes to breath, and a jump would bring out the vocals.
01:20:122 (4,5,1) - assuming (4) is likely to be dropped earlier, (1) has no spacing emphasis at all. When compared with (4,5) it makes (1) feel unstressed. Increase the jump here or decrease (4,5)?
00:54:608 - this is where a diffrent line starts. Wat the slider does, is basically merging two lines and mixing them, which, is probably something that shouldn't be happening. Give 00:54:608 - a clickable beat?
Note: though it does happen multiple times, I wouldn't really agree with it, even if it consistent. See 00:58:533 (1) - 01:03:019 (1) - for reference.
01:38:346 (4,5) - that felt off-putting due to the way you generally space 1/4s. Are you sure that the difficulty spike this jump creates is worth it?
Note: 03:23:767 (6,7) - same.
01:59:935 (2,3) - seem to lack spacing emphasis as in vocal-based mapping the word "never" is strong both in terms of the meaning and the amount of noise.
02:08:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 02:10:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'd use smaller spacing for the first one, it does not feel quite as strong as the oher parts that follow later.
Note: 02:10:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - that's an interesting take on this part, I've never even considered mapping it this way, and yet it makes so much sense. Love the idea!
02:26:010 (3) - I would new combo it and unstack similar to the way 02:24:188 (3,1,2) - work. It'd stress the change in the song really well.
02:27:131 (5,6,7,8) - probably the volume can be toned down a little. The hitsound feel a little too loud. Could be just me, though, if your intention is to stress how the vocals are still intense here.
Note: same.
02:30:496 (1) - this slider follows the instruments, yet the 1/8 part before this slider is ignored, therefore, the rhythm feel unnatural. Maybe a rhythm more like this?
02:42:552 (4,5,1) - is (5) really ment to be highlighted more than (1)? It feels like (1) is way more powerful and should be spaced more, at least I believe so.

Please, do consider these things with a bit of precaution, as I might impse a bit of my personal perception of the song.

Here's what we gonna do, I'll come back one more time and see how it does. If I end up agreeing with reasoning or the changes, I might bubble it. Hence, the star icon from me. Yes, I am well aware that it's a second one, I just really wanna put it, anyway.

schoolboy

571 posts

Joined July 2016

Topic Starter

schoolboy 2017-09-14T20:00:58+00:00

Bakari wrote:
Let's see if I got the idea right, then!

Obsession
00:43:674 (2,3) - a slight increase did not seem to change much, if you ask me. The word doesn't feel highlighed enough, at least to me. It might work as a inverted flow pattern increased
00:49:001 (4,5) - aren't they rum based? I'd use a new combo to warn players that these stand out of the regular vocal context.
Note: 01:22:645 (4,5,1) - same? this is my favourite pattern, cumon i cant explain, but it fits prefectly, i swear
01:09:748 (1,2) - hey, let's try a stack or a bigger jump. Stack would highlight the pause it takes to breath, and a jump would bring out the vocals. custom stackd
01:20:122 (4,5,1) - assuming (4) is likely to be dropped earlier, (1) has no spacing emphasis at all. When compared with (4,5) it makes (1) feel unstressed. Increase the jump here or decrease (4,5)? yeah
00:54:608 - this is where a diffrent line starts. Wat the slider does, is basically merging two lines and mixing them, which, is probably something that shouldn't be happening. Give 00:54:608 - a clickable beat?
Note: though it does happen multiple times, I wouldn't really agree with it, even if it consistent. See 00:58:533 (1) - 01:03:019 (1) - for reference. done all
01:38:346 (4,5) - that felt off-putting due to the way you generally space 1/4s. Are you sure that the difficulty spike this jump creates is worth it?
Note: 03:23:767 (6,7) - same. very easy to play, it doesnt create a diff spike at all. just some new interesting patterns
01:59:935 (2,3) - seem to lack spacing emphasis as in vocal-based mapping the word "never" is strong both in terms of the meaning and the amount of noise. rearranged
02:08:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 02:10:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'd use smaller spacing for the first one, it does not feel quite as strong as the oher parts that follow later. hmm, its already smaller, but i increased the second one instead
Note: 02:10:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - that's an interesting take on this part, I've never even considered mapping it this way, and yet it makes so much sense. Love the idea! <
02:26:010 (3) - I would new combo it and unstack similar to the way 02:24:188 (3,1,2) - work. It'd stress the change in the song really well. i dont think so, 02:24:468 (2) - 02:23:907 (2) - these are way stronger than (3), i dont think its gonna work
02:27:131 (5,6,7,8) - probably the volume can be toned down a little. The hitsound feel a little too loud. Could be just me, though, if your intention is to stress how the vocals are still intense here.
Note: same. toned down a bit, those whistles weere kinda noisy lol
02:30:496 (1) - this slider follows the instruments, yet the 1/8 part before this slider is ignored, therefore, the rhythm feel unnatural. Maybe a rhythm more like this? no, skipping pretty strong 1/4s is kinda lame
02:42:552 (4,5,1) - is (5) really ment to be highlighted more than (1)? It feels like (1) is way more powerful and should be spaced more, at least I believe so. ok am i a pp mapper now

Please, do consider these things with a bit of precaution, as I might impse a bit of my personal perception of the song.
Here's what we gonna do, I'll come back one more time and see how it does. If I end up agreeing with reasoning or the changes, I might bubble it. Hence, the star icon from me. Yes, I am well aware that it's a second one, I just really wanna put it, anyway.

ok i want to be special so new diffnames lol
also changed a bunch of a sliders, maybe will polish map a bit soon

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-09-14T20:19:22+00:00

Bakari wrote:
delete your facebook

Ascendance's Easy
00:51:804 (4) - instead of the 3/2 slider i'd try a couple of 1/2 sliders that'd work better with the vocals and keep the rhythm density consistent. It's consistent with things like 00:33:860 (3) - which use similar vocal patterns. I'd prefer to keep.
01:22:085 (2,3) - the spacing here is inconsistent with visually similar pattern on03:16:478 (2,3) - it's a tiny thing but it can be fixed easily. I tried
01:46:197 (2) - doesn't seem to represent the leading instruments well. If anything, I'd try to add a couple of 1/2 gaps as they'd be playable enough at this BPM and represent the drums better. I actually don't like the 4 note chain that you have there but I did change it to something hopefully better example
02:24:748 (2) - this is where the slider should begin (1/4 earlier) as that's where the drums start. I know you don't want to use 3/4 gaps, so replacimng this whole drum part with a spinner might be a good alternative. Changed. I don't know how spinner leadin gaps work in Standard though,
so feel free to tell me if where I placed it was wrong.
02:41:711 (3,4) - if I were you, I'd focus on the drum line here as it does the 1/2 thingy it did on 01:45:636 (1,2,3) - and it clearly sounds stronger than the vocals. It is a bit stronger yeah but for the sake of rhythm variation in an easy, I'd rather remain consistent by keeping with the vocals so I don't confuse newer players.

Could use a couple of mods before being pushed further, but it's quite a decent difficulty.

Namki wrote:
komrade asked for a little feedback for the easy

01:46:197 (2,3) - I believe it's fine as it's now but 01:47:038 - definitely should be emphasized, I would do something like this
it's not the "standard" rhythm but it looks more fitting here and this polarity thing kinda works here so rhythm doesn't feel that complex Fixed with Bakari's mod.
00:33:860 (3) - sudden 4/1 slider, haven't seen any except this one, maybe try to make two instead of one replied to this concern in bakari's mod as well
01:51:244 (4,5) - you're entire diff uses circular or comfortable movement except this, try to make it smoother? // I tried

okay, my main concer ain't about some specific pattern but about the entire idea of the diff
firstly, patterns in which you go back n forth on a circle or overlapping stuff like 01:59:094 (3,4,5,1) - or 02:57:412 (1,2,3,4) - because of this diff feels kinda compressed (idk if used this word incorrectly) and plays pretty in a weird way tbh, it's not something I would call an unrankable issue but from my point of view changing stuff here is totally worth

decent one, even these things I've written here aren't that solid this diff is totally fine to be ranked as far as I can see
glglglglglglglglgllglglglglglgllglglglglglgllglglg my love komore and guys

I tried to change a few things regarding Namki's concern, but unfortunately it's "just my style" or something like that. I'm not exactly an expert standard mapper but I don't think it plays bad so let's try it

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schoolboy

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schoolboy 2017-09-14T22:25:30+00:00

polished stuff, guess we're ready again

riffy

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riffy 2017-09-15T03:08:55+00:00

Standard is closer to a Normal m terms of the word meaning, and Average also kind of close to that. Are you sure you want to have two difficulties that are named in a similar way?

You might wanna go with Simple for the easiest difficulty. That's closer to the name we had initially. Anything else with a similar concept should work as well

Will recheck soon, yeah.

schoolboy

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schoolboy 2017-09-15T04:18:19+00:00

ascendance's simple

riffy

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riffy 2017-09-15T15:12:20+00:00

General

Ascendance's difficulty, countdown.

Deception

00:42:832 (1) - usually the intention is to make 1st and 3rd parts parallel. it's not the case here
Note: they are quite untidy in general, I'd recommend making one slider using the grid snap to make sure it's perfect and then just rotate it around as you please
01:43:393 (1) - you probably need to reduce the volume for the slidertick. It is really loud whereas there's no support for it in the song.
03:15:356 (1,2,3) - the jump should probably be to (3)? Kind of like 03:20:683 (2,3) -
The end spinner can be muted as well, or just be quiter. Either way would sound okay with me.

Not sure what/why you did with the shapes, but I like how it makes the whole thing feel like a different map.

Trynna's Challenging

02:20:122 (2,3) - but that literally is a jump already. And I don't see many 1/4 patterns around, let alone jumps. I'd insist on reducing the DS or maybe space it less, so it's still overlaps and looks less confusing, like 00:58:253 (4,1) - for example.
01:16:477 (1) - I absolutely love that.
02:46:197 (1) - can you link some other instances where this particular concept is used? I fail to see any, but you seem to be quite enthusiastic about keeping it.

Collab Average

02:21:524 (1) - gets overllapped with the score metre, which can be fixed quite easily.

Ascendance's Simple

02:43:393 (4) - overlaps with the score-metre, move it a little higher to prevent that?

Yeah, you know

schoolboy

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schoolboy 2017-09-15T15:32:08+00:00

Bakari wrote:
Deception
00:42:832 (1) - usually the intention is to make 1st and 3rd parts parallel. it's not the case here
Note: they are quite untidy in general, I'd recommend making one slider using the grid snap to make sure it's perfect and then just rotate it around as you please polished them
01:43:393 (1) - you probably need to reduce the volume for the slidertick. It is really loud whereas there's no support for it in the song. ok
03:15:356 (1,2,3) - the jump should probably be to (3)? Kind of like 03:20:683 (2,3) - idea is more like this 01:48:720 (2,3) -
The end spinner can be muted as well, or just be quiter. Either way would sound okay with me. did 50%

Not sure what/why you did with the shapes, but I like how it makes the whole thing feel like a different map.

fixed the other stuff

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riffy 2017-09-15T15:49:27+00:00

Changed that one slider that's been bothering me on Hard, we're good to go

Bubbled!

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Namki 2017-09-15T15:52:22+00:00

great!

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Lasse 2017-09-15T16:18:03+00:00

k then

asc
00:44:515 (4,1,2) - could easily throw of beginners cause misleading visual spacing (2 being so close to 4). something like https://i.imgur.com/Wdwui6M.jpg would be an easy fix
01:37:786 (4,1,2) - similar here => https://i.imgur.com/vMwb2pb.jpg could work
01:51:244 (4,5,1) - looks unnecessarily complex for such a difficulty, but might require rearranging the pattern here
02:41:711 - how about using ~0.9x sv here to make it a bit more gradual and reflect the second increase in intensity at 02:43:954 - ?
a sudden 0.25x increase seems a bit much here

trynna
02:19:001 (6) - might be cute to add a little jump here since vocal stands out so much, something similar to https://i.imgur.com/gVMvgZ0.jpg maybe
02:56:571 - missing hitsound?
03:27:973 (1,2,3,1) - could go with decreasing spacing pattern here cause song calms down

should be all

schoolboy

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schoolboy 2017-09-15T19:43:21+00:00

did all for trynna

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Ascendance 2017-09-16T18:15:31+00:00

did everything except last point went to .85x instead of .90

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