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Shoujo - Reminiscing [Osu|Taiko]

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toybot

Monstrata wrote:

zzz

00:25:915 (4,5,6,7,1) - Flow felt a bit weird here xP. 4>5>6 are fine but 6>7>1 is a weird flow, idk, eh see if you agree.
00:32:686 (2) - Map the white tick? Kinda odd to skip it considering you map the 1/4's right after. // i considered the sliders and the 1/4 stack separate here, and i just like the 3/4 pattern here aynway
01:33:458 (1,2) - Quite hard to see those repeats. especially 2.
02:22:744 - Could add a circle here if you want.
03:40:486 (1) - Ctrl+G is kinda cool here. // like it as is
04:22:486 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think you messed up the rotation copy/paste or something cuz they don't look consistent xP. // actually just eyeballed them lol,
i think they're fine tho

05:08:086 (1) - Not going to make this two circles or two kicksliders?
05:14:607 (2) - Sounds more like 5 notes and snapped to 1/6. Or something like this:

Oni

05:10:822 - Red/green line have consistent volumes. You could just fix for tasuke tbh.

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Call me back when this has 12 SP. Also metadata is good yes? Link me if you have~ // p hard to find a good source, this is the most official thing i can find. but every site is consistent w/ artist + title so should be alright
thanks!
Charlotte
via game-in chat.

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is big don note
  4. K is big kat note
[ General]


  • 良さそうです。
[ tasuke's Oni]


  • 00:11:344 - dddでも合いますが、この音だけ少し高いように感じたのでkに変えてみてはいかがですか?

    01:00:801 - kに変更。きゅるきゅる鳴ってる音に合う気がします。

    02:28:401 - dに変更。02:28:315 - ここと同じ音のように感じます。 + 叩きやすいと思います。

    04:19:486 - ^

    いろいろなパターン、リズムが使われておりとても素晴らしいです。
    また、緩急がしっかりついてて良いと思いました。提案少なめで申し訳ないです。
Good luck :)
tasuke912

Charlotte wrote:

SPOILER
via game-in chat.

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is big don note
  4. K is big kat note
[ General]


  • 良さそうです。
[ tasuke's Oni]


  • 00:11:344 - dddでも合いますが、この音だけ少し高いように感じたのでkに変えてみてはいかがですか? とりあえずキープで

    01:00:801 - kに変更。きゅるきゅる鳴ってる音に合う気がします。Fixed.

    02:28:401 - dに変更。02:28:315 - ここと同じ音のように感じます。 + 叩きやすいと思います。キックを強調する目的があるのでkを置きたいです

    04:19:486 - ^

    いろいろなパターン、リズムが使われておりとても素晴らしいです。
    また、緩急がしっかりついてて良いと思いました。提案少なめで申し訳ないです。
Good luck :)
Thanks!


http://puu.sh/xaA6k/3d82cb3250.osu
tasuke912
Thanks to Arrival for the check!

http://puu.sh/xctfp/deb3a4ff6e.osu
Arrival
IRCd a bit with tasuke no concerns anymore great map :D

irc with tasuke 17 august 18:01
2017-08-17 17:39 tasuke912: hi, I got 2 mods for Reminiscing xD
2017-08-17 17:39 Arrival: ooooo toybot told me to come check
2017-08-17 17:39 Arrival: im going to do it now haha
2017-08-17 17:40 tasuke912: :D
2017-08-17 17:49 Arrival: 01:32:772 (34,35,36,37,38,39) - maybe kddkdk would play better with the following 1/6+1/4 ?
2017-08-17 17:52 tasuke912: tbh i don't feel much difference
2017-08-17 17:53 Arrival: yeah small suggestion
2017-08-17 17:53 Arrival: 02:13:058 (4,5) - erm dont you want to have k d instead of d k here ?
2017-08-17 17:53 Arrival: considering the structure after
2017-08-17 17:54 tasuke912: umm
2017-08-17 17:56 tasuke912: dk seems better for consistency but i feel kd-k-d is kind awkward
2017-08-17 17:56 Arrival: ok i see
2017-08-17 17:56 Arrival: in that case i'm fine with taiko iconing w
2017-08-17 17:57 tasuke912: <3
2017-08-17 17:58 Arrival: oh one last thing
2017-08-17 17:59 Arrival: 00:32:258 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90) - / 04:35:001 (76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,1) -
2017-08-17 17:59 Arrival: why are they different
2017-08-17 18:00 tasuke912: OOps
2017-08-17 18:00 tasuke912: fixed!
2017-08-17 18:00 Arrival: ok :D
2017-08-17 18:00 Arrival: i will icon when the update is done
2017-08-17 18:01 tasuke912: Thanks!

highlight me when update is done
Arrival
@monstrata thank you for destroying the art of beatmapping so great pieces like these are highlighted
Rieri

Arrival wrote:

@monstrata thank you for destroying the art of beatmapping so great pieces like these are highlighted
savage as fuck man
Shinsekai-
then.... Go? :3
Monstrata
Oh, is that the actual diff name. looked a bit meme but if you have a reason for it lemme know, i'll bubble after
Mikii
Finally a good map for this song : )
Monstrata
Finally a good song for this map : )
pishifat
!!!!aimod

the map is good besides that tho

if you need someone to qualify, i can do that
if you want to move to the top of my backlog, mod any map within the next 24 hours. i don't care which one
Topic Starter
toybot
oops
i've already got someone for qualify, thank you tho!
7ambda
this map and song 🔥
Monstrata
this 🔥 and map is song
Pentori
00:32:258 (2) - might be nicer to work around the blue tick vocal here 00:32:344
00:57:544 (5) - map the kick on 00:57:629 - ? would help differentiate it from 00:56:001 (5)
01:38:601 (1,2,3,4,5) - instruments temporarily halt for the wub here, might be cooler if you used a 1/4 repeat or lower spacing to stop movement
02:12:544 (2) - deserves a nc
02:30:944 (4) - pretty sure this is 1/8 from 02:30:972

call bak
Topic Starter
toybot

Pentori wrote:

00:32:258 (2) - might be nicer to work around the blue tick vocal here 00:32:344
00:57:544 (5) - map the kick on 00:57:629 - ? would help differentiate it from 00:56:001 (5)
01:38:601 (1,2,3,4,5) - instruments temporarily halt for the wub here, might be cooler if you used a 1/4 repeat or lower spacing to stop movement // i like how the stream plays into the next few sliders so keeping it, but i'll lower spacing a bit
02:12:544 (2) - deserves a nc
02:30:944 (4) - pretty sure this is 1/8 from 02:30:972 // yea, i'll jut simplify to 1/4 stack then

call bak
thx!
Pentori
g
Lama Poluna
10/10 gratz
Kyouren

Lama Poluna wrote:

10/10 gratz
Skystar
toybot my boy
Arrival
toyboy my bot
Topic Starter
toybot
thanks guys for help =w=
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