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@Axon seems riko fixd for me, thanks!

FruityEnLoops wrote:

[Akitoshi's Insane]

03:27:767 (1) - You could map the vocal at the end. following background music, sorry bro

RikiH_ wrote:

Akitoshi's Insane

  1. 02:00:853 (6,1) - This stack is broken, is it intentional? If not, just fix it :)moved 1 to somewhere else w
  2. 02:23:310 - Choose one of the following: 1) Add a note here 2) Make the slider finish here (see Extra diff) 3) Let the break start here i'll take the 2 since i can't put break there manually w
  3. 02:35:482 - Such a strong drum here, maybe add a note? okay
  4. 03:04:282 (1,2) - Not sure about these sliders that start on the red ticks honestly. They just sound weird because they are the only ones in the entire map... If I were you I'd just use note+1/2 slider+note here ye

MrSergio wrote:

General:
- the most fitting BG here is the one on the Easy. The others feel too innocent considered the lyrics. I'm not saying to use nsfw material, but something a bit less innocent would do the song justice (or just use the Easy's BG) i love lolis

Aki:
  1. 00:16:453 (3) - this note would feel way better if emphasized differently, for how strange that sound stands out in the song. x336 y0 ? not that far, but fixed
  2. 00:23:996 (1) - with default hitsounds the tail is not audible, but I can ensure you it gives me goose bumps when trying to play this stuff with ping pong sounds. If they are not used as a beat, why not silencing them? oka
  3. 00:46:282 (2,3) - 00:46:967 (5,6) - these stacks kinda break the movement created through 00:44:567 (1,2,3,4) - . Since the song doesn't seem to warrant them in any specific way, it would probably fit better if they were unstacked ok
  4. 00:48:339 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - kinda similar here, but I might be taking it too specific and you might not care that much (and I don't either, but heh... for the sake of song expression) fixed the 56, but not 00:48:682 (1,2,3,4) - as ye background sound is going to intense
  5. 00:49:710 (6) - personal, but higher SV and extended to 3/4 to catch better that unusual sound would feel nice increased the sv but i hate extended sliders if there's a stream on next part so uwu
  6. 01:01:024 (1,2) - Unlike 01:00:339 (6,7) - 00:58:967 (3,4) - , these guys don't have a strong vocal on them both. Stacking 2 under 1 might be good, but you might have other options too, just don't make them similar. Contrast helps define what you follow, so make sure to use different patterns for different rhythms ye
  7. 01:06:510 (1) - again, the spacing on this note feels so similar to everything else even tho it stands out... what about increasing spacing on it? 01:06:339 (8,1) - has same strength i believe
  8. is it just me or the kiai feels kinda bland in comparison to the rest?
    I mean, take 01:28:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and compare it with 01:03:767 (1,2,3,4,5) - which feels kinda similar (probably because of the patterns being similar, idk), or like 01:29:824 (1,2,3,4,5) - compared with 01:13:367 (1,2,3,4,5) - (this one is clearer I guess, since spacing is identical. And it shouldn't, since the kiai is more intense)
    Ok, the first comparison might just be my impression, since spacing is definitely larger. Streams are similar tho, so maybe try spacing them a tad bit more ye i boosted the streams on kiai
  9. 01:38:053 (1,2,3,4,5) - an even slower SV would fit greatly here. The current pattern is again too similar to the rest in regards of how fast the cursor moves on the field. 0.8
  10. 02:12:339 (1,2,3,4) - kinda same here, less rhythm or less SV would fit better with the total lack of accompanying instruments on vocals 0.5 is enough for me though owo
  11. 02:37:024 (1,2) - needless to mention consistency with the other pattern I pointed out above // 02:39:767 (1,2,3,4) - same yes and same for 1234
  12. 02:54:853 - ending kiai here seems a better idea, since the song changes already from here. On same note, 02:54:853 - 02:57:596 - less spacing/rhythm/SV would work better yup
  13. 03:03:767 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - I honestly lost track of what you did here. Seeing 03:03:082 (1,2) - you can guess what the player would expect, I think, so you should stick to that instrument imo fixed from rikih's mod
  14. 03:19:196 (6,7) - seeing the song is calming a bit, smaller spacing would work. This is more for the effect on 03:19:539 (1) - , since it is really slow, yet the jump right before it feels kinda lul ok then lul


thanks a lot guys :D

osu file format v14

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posted
Hello Sakurauchi Riko! Your map has been chosen from my Queue.

General

  1. I guess there is something wrong with your folder because everytime I try to open it with Aibat I get 2398472389472893478923 error pages: https://puu.sh/xolDn.png Try to make a full submit again :\ Maybe something went wrong with the last one. It works on all folders except yours xD


IceKalt's Easy

  1. 00:44:396 (1) - If I was you I would start this spinner 1/2 later because the highest pitch is actually on that downbeat and it would even be consistent with next one: 00:50:053 (1) - and 01:22:967 (1) - that doesn't start on the red tick (because the red tick has the same intensity of the first one). This applies to the next 02:35:482 (1) for the same reason
  2. 01:20:224 (1) - This NC should be removed for consistency
  3. 03:12:682 (6) - (very nazi) Try to improve this blanket
  4. 03:29:139 - What about adding a repeating 1/1 slider here? It would close the map better


Normal

  1. 00:22:453 (1) - What about removing this circle for consistency? You didn't use it on next parts, like at 00:25:196
  2. 00:48:682 (4) - (Just a personal taste) This slider is cool but it touches accuracy bar actually (you can check it while testing). Try to fix this?
  3. 01:22:796 (1) - Start this spinner 1/2 later like Easy diff and for the same reason I said above about 00:44:396 (1)
  4. 03:14:053 (1) - Same of 00:48:682 (4) - :'C
  5. 03:20:053 (1) - Same of 00:22:453 (1) -


Hard

  1. 00:14:396 (1) - (nazi) Try to stack this better
  2. 00:59:653 (6) - I would set NC here to avoid this long combo. If you accept don't forget to apply this to 01:05:139 (6) - as well and on next ones
  3. 01:13:025 (4,6) - Accuracy bar :''(


Akitoshi's Insane

  1. This BG is cute but doesn't totally fit with others xD
  2. 01:17:482 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Is it my impression or these squares are not perfect? xD Can you make them with "Create polygon circle" option maybe? They don't look perfect to me idk
  3. 03:03:767 (3,4,5) - Why this sudden rhythm change? I do not understand why you decided to not use the 1/4 sliders here anymore like you did for the previous part: 02:58:282 (3,4,5) - and so on. Expecially here: 03:05:139 (4,5) - the rhythm looks so random imo, those sliders were cool


Extra

  1. 00:17:824 (4,5) - Why this sudden and unnecessary spacing? I would fix it tbh I see no reason to make it like that. Also, I would reduce the (4) by 1/4 instead to keep this snap
  2. 00:54:167 (5) - What about adding NC on this? It looks cool xD Same for 02:45:253 (5)
  3. 01:13:367 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this linear, the (5) is placed a bit below for mistake i guess
  4. 01:39:596 (3) - Move this a little further below because it's covered with hp bar
  5. 02:13:710 (1,1) - Everyslider with this SV are linear why are these curved like that? I would make it linear for consistency D;
  6. 03:01:539 (5) - Shouldn't a NC be set here for consistency?
  7. 03:25:024 (5) - NC? Check more carefully this last kiai part because NCs are kinda fked :\


Welp interesting mapset. Mine are just small suggestions, I hope they will help you.
Good luck!
posted
hey ~

Chewin wrote:

IceKalt's Easy

00:44:396 (1) - If I was you I would start this spinner 1/2 later because the highest pitch is actually on that downbeat and it would even be consistent with next one: 00:50:053 (1) - and 01:22:967 (1) - that doesn't start on the red tick (because the red tick has the same intensity of the first one). This applies to the next 02:35:482 (1) for the same reason at 00:44:396 (1) - there is a kick where i started that spinner but that isnt the case for the other 2 spinners so i wouldnt speak here for consistency problems ~
01:20:224 (1) - This NC should be removed for consistency oups
03:12:682 (6) - (very nazi) Try to improve this blanket did see more nazi things than that ~
03:29:139 - What about adding a repeating 1/1 slider here? It would close the map better nah i want to have consistency with the noraml diff^^
Thanks for the mod ~ :)

osu file format v14

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176,179,189596,1,0,1:0:0:0:
261,158,189939,2,0,B|293:138|293:138|296:47|269:8,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
104,60,191310,2,0,B|86:100|86:100|144:137|177:180,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
231,246,192339,1,0,1:0:0:0:
312,280,192682,2,0,P|258:329|166:305,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
144,142,194053,6,0,P|72:174|-4:134,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
74,88,195082,1,0,1:0:0:0:
157,56,195424,2,0,P|215:94|218:187,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
108,312,196796,2,0,L|287:261,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
304,191,197824,1,0,1:0:0:0:
345,113,198167,2,0,L|498:156,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
175,23,200224,6,0,L|254:12,1,80,6|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
336,36,200910,2,0,P|318:87|326:122,2,80,2|0|2,1:2|1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
481,134,202282,2,0,P|454:207|380:246,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
309,199,203310,1,0,1:0:0:0:
249,133,203653,2,0,P|287:112|326:113,2,80,2|0|2,1:2|1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
177,290,205024,6,0,P|259:316|339:280,1,160,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
393,235,206053,1,0,1:0:0:0:
472,199,206396,2,0,P|475:264|463:291,2,80,2|0|2,1:2|1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
340,82,207767,6,0,B|288:68|288:68|265:94|265:94|184:64|103:113,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
posted

Chewin wrote:

Hello Sakurauchi Riko! Your map has been chosen from my Queue.

General

  1. I guess there is something wrong with your folder because everytime I try to open it with Aibat I get 2398472389472893478923 error pages: https://puu.sh/xolDn.png Try to make a full submit again :\ Maybe something went wrong with the last one. It works on all folders except yours xD uhm.. i dont even know this program you tried to use >< i guess i make full submit again when more issues happen. thats really weird, never had issues before with this


Normal

  1. 00:22:453 (1) - What about removing this circle for consistency? You didn't use it on next parts, like at 00:25:196 but the sound here is much stronger than on the 2nd link of yours
  2. 00:48:682 (4) - (Just a personal taste) This slider is cool but it touches accuracy bar actually (you can check it while testing). Try to fix this? yes this sucks, fixed it
  3. 01:22:796 (1) - Start this spinner 1/2 later like Easy diff and for the same reason I said above about 00:44:396 (1) i represent the weird bass noise in the background with this spinner, and this noise actually starts on the red tick so idk... will keep for now and see what others say
  4. 03:14:053 (1) - Same of 00:48:682 (4) - :'C
  5. 03:20:053 (1) - Same of 00:22:453 (1) - this is also stornger sound than the one i didnt map


Hard

  1. 00:14:396 (1) - (nazi) Try to stack this better did
  2. 00:59:653 (6) - I would set NC here to avoid this long combo. If you accept don't forget to apply this to 01:05:139 (6) - as well and on next ones yes sure
  3. 01:13:025 (4,6) - Accuracy bar :''( fix



Extra

  1. 00:17:824 (4,5) - Why this sudden and unnecessary spacing? I would fix it tbh I see no reason to make it like that. Also, I would reduce the (4) by 1/4 instead to keep this snap alright removed the 1/4 snap
  2. 00:54:167 (5) - What about adding NC on this? It looks cool xD Same for 02:45:253 (5) i dont think it sounds that different to deserve a NC, imo
  3. 01:13:367 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this linear, the (5) is placed a bit below for mistake i guess oh yes, fix
  4. 01:39:596 (3) - Move this a little further below because it's covered with hp bar yes
  5. 02:13:710 (1,1) - Everyslider with this SV are linear why are these curved like that? I would make it linear for consistency D; this is only time where 2 very slow sv slider are very close to each other in timeline, so i make it special with different shape and symmetry
  6. 03:01:539 (5) - Shouldn't a NC be set here for consistency? i dont think so D: looks all consistent here to me
  7. 03:25:024 (5) - NC? Check more carefully this last kiai part because NCs are kinda fked :\ oh yes, its consistent now xD


Welp interesting mapset. Mine are just small suggestions, I hope they will help you.
Good luck!
Thank you for the mod! :) much appreciated!!
posted
For the freaking love of S3RL ~

Normal

00:14:396 (1,2,3) - would make this a 1/1 reverse slider instead and add a circle here 00:15:424 (8) - for whatever reason this suits so much better imo :?
00:17:139 (1,2,3) - same on this one
01:04:795 (2) - i think a circle is alot better, slider isnt really needed^, circle is totally enough !
01:10:282 (2) - ^^^^
01:15:767 (2) - ^^^^^^

man this song is giving me a hard time modding or probably because i havent modded something since quite awhile

Hard

00:16:796 (4,1) - you know ~ on the patterns earlier that overlaps you did arent really a problem but on this one it felt so freaking weird
but i think it is because of this very very very very very very little jump you gotta do onto the next note 00:16:453 (3,4) -
i think unstacking them 00:16:796 (4,1) - would fix it but then it wouldnt really suit to the patterns earlier....so idk man~ maybe you know something ;w;

00:21:253 (5,1) - also really really wonder what your explanation is why this one is so far away because i think that totally isnt necessary ~
00:22:110 (1,2) - here ~ how about stacking these ? imo it kinda plays better than having that spacing maybe create something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9001411 i think having that would actually be pretty cool :3

01:31:538 (2,3,4) - would you mind explaining why these are so spaced and on the following stuff too ? i really tried understanding whai that is so but seriously couldnt understand ;w;

Since you said only normal and hard i guess thats it ~
The lack of custom hitsounds kinda hurt me as a person who puts alot effort into custom hitsounds, it could be so beautiful ;w; !!!
But yeah ~ Sry for small mod but this thing really gave me a hard time ;;;;;; still wanted to try helping somehow
Good luck with this thingy ! hope mod was atleast somewhat helpful :3
02:54:853 - seriously...last diff name should be its gonna get messy

Edit: I didnt even notice, 444th post \:3/
posted

Kotori-Chan wrote:

For the freaking love of S3RL ~

Normal

00:14:396 (1,2,3) - would make this a 1/1 reverse slider instead and add a circle here 00:15:424 (8) - for whatever reason this suits so much better imo :?
00:17:139 (1,2,3) - same on this one
01:04:795 (2) - i think a circle is alot better, slider isnt really needed^, circle is totally enough !
01:10:282 (2) - ^^^^
01:15:767 (2) - ^^^^^^ changed all of those, nice idea

man this song is giving me a hard time modding or probably because i havent modded something since quite awhile

Hard

00:16:796 (4,1) - you know ~ on the patterns earlier that overlaps you did arent really a problem but on this one it felt so freaking weird
but i think it is because of this very very very very very very little jump you gotta do onto the next note 00:16:453 (3,4) -
i think unstacking them 00:16:796 (4,1) - would fix it but then it wouldnt really suit to the patterns earlier....so idk man~ maybe you know something ;w; i stack everything in this section that has 1/1 gap, so i think this is no problem

00:21:253 (5,1) - also really really wonder what your explanation is why this one is so far away because i think that totally isnt necessary ~ but this is spaced with my default ds? >< idk what problem that is D:
00:22:110 (1,2) - here ~ how about stacking these ? imo it kinda plays better than having that spacing maybe create something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9001411 i think having that would actually be pretty cool :3 stzacked it

01:31:538 (2,3,4) - would you mind explaining why these are so spaced and on the following stuff too ? i really tried understanding whai that is so but seriously couldnt understand ;w; since this is the kiai and the music is a lot intenser i'd like to have some difficult spike here, just for the sake of shopwing progression in the map

Since you said only normal and hard i guess thats it ~
The lack of custom hitsounds kinda hurt me as a person who puts alot effort into custom hitsounds, it could be so beautiful ;w; !!!
But yeah ~ Sry for small mod but this thing really gave me a hard time ;;;;;; still wanted to try helping somehow
Good luck with this thingy ! hope mod was atleast somewhat helpful :3
02:54:853 - seriously...last diff name should be its gonna get messy
still thinking about a nice diff name >< maybe idk XD

thanks for the mod!! really appreciated
posted
nm here

normal and hard as you wish

[Normal]

00:22:453 (1) - i don't think this is strong enough to put a note here
00:33:082 (4) - this slider is not proper imo since i can barely here no sound at 00:33:082 - ... maybe just put a spinner here
the rhythm you put at 00:55:539 - 01:06:510 and 01:06:510 - 01:17:482 - is almost the same (or actually they are the same?), but you can feel the latter part is more intense right? so maybe you can just ignore all the drums at 00:55:539 - 01:06:510 imo

[Hard]
I'm ok with how you put all the objects, but same as normal, some part are mapped mostly the same :?


[Extra]
Diff name? i 'll say try something like candy rush xd

short mod ends here (run
posted

Ametrin wrote:

nm here

normal and hard as you wish

[Normal]

00:22:453 (1) - i don't think this is strong enough to put a note here alright
00:33:082 (4) - this slider is not proper imo since i can barely here no sound at 00:33:082 - ... maybe just put a spinner here spinner is too short, and removing would feel weird since so much time until break begins, soo. the slider represents the background soudn there so it is ok i guess
the rhythm you put at 00:55:539 - 01:06:510 and 01:06:510 - 01:17:482 - is almost the same (or actually they are the same?), but you can feel the latter part is more intense right? so maybe you can just ignore all the drums at 00:55:539 - 01:06:510 imo neat suggestion, changed

[Hard]
I'm ok with how you put all the objects, but same as normal, some part are mapped mostly the same :?cuz the music is all the same xD


[Extra]
Diff name? i 'll say try something like candy rush xd idk.. i have so much trouble finding good name

short mod ends here (run
thanks for short mod! improcved the normal quite well :3
posted
Quick feedback. I won't be properly modding that since i'm really picky with aesthetics, and I'll have to get a lot picky, and I don't like expending my time on that. I just have some high standards for that idk, literally wrote a rant about aesthetics on my userpage. Not that I feel like they're terrible here, they're decent at least.

Other than aesthetics, stuff that I've noticed is that the Kiai sections are not special at all compared to the rest of the map. Just some jumps and simple rhythm. That is excluding 02:46:624 - and 02:57:596 - of course. Especially the last two having very low rhythm density and just too easy to play. And I already did a mod on some of your maps not too long ago (think it was hero yea), with you disagreeing with my emphasis suggestions, so I'm not sure if you'd agree with them here.

Basically I feel like the map in some sections is lacking contrast, since its not utilizing spacing emphasis.
  1. 00:56:224 (4,5,6) - (5) is given the biggest spacing even though it is the weakest, the other two notes have prominent vocals and also a drum hit on them.
  2. 01:29:139 (4,5,6) - Simple example is this, where (6) is much noticeable and stronger than the previous two notes, yet it is a triangular pattern meaning same spacing on all.
  3. 01:31:882 (3,4,5) - Same for (5) here, the pitch just seems louder and more prominent than others, it forms a nice melody with that pitch change in the song, while in the map it rarely represents that.
  4. 01:43:024 (4,5) - I mean you sometimes give it, but not too often.


There are countless example mostly on kiais and sections that sound similar to kiais like 00:55:539 - . But I like your technical mapping and gimmicks though.

name the diff diabetes xdd
posted

MaridiuS wrote:

Quick feedback. I won't be properly modding that since i'm really picky with aesthetics, and I'll have to get a lot picky, and I don't like expending my time on that. I just have some high standards for that idk, literally wrote a rant about aesthetics on my userpage. Not that I feel like they're terrible here, they're decent at least. you know that aesthetic is like 90% subjective, and 10% objective - there is no correct and false, only a basic understanding what aesthetic is about

Other than aesthetics, stuff that I've noticed is that the Kiai sections are not special at all compared to the rest of the map. Just some jumps and simple rhythm. That is excluding 02:46:624 - and 02:57:596 - of course. Especially the last two having very low rhythm density and just too easy to play. but dont you think that the first and last 2 kiai's are really simple in rhythm and emphasis? I really cant find any spots in the music where i could diverse the rhythm or make some crazy DS emphasis structures and I already tried to increase the overall spacing for easy repeated section which fits very well imo. And the last kiai is basically dedicated to the vocal (only vocal in intense parts) so i tried to do heavy DS empahsis for example 03:09:253 (4,5,6) - this where (5) is really weak without vocal and (6) heavily emphasized because of the stack of (5) under the slidertail... if thats not spacing empahsis then i dont know :(And I already did a mod on some of your maps not too long ago (think it was hero yea), with you disagreeing with my emphasis suggestions, so I'm not sure if you'd agree with them here. i dont disagree with them, i just dont think it improves the map in its current state, I 100% get your point and agree with your point of view as i also mentioned below

Basically I feel like the map in some sections is lacking contrast, since its not utilizing spacing emphasis.
  1. 00:56:224 (4,5,6) - (5) is given the biggest spacing even though it is the weakest, the other two notes have prominent vocals and also a drum hit on them.
  2. 01:29:139 (4,5,6) - Simple example is this, where (6) is much noticeable and stronger than the previous two notes, yet it is a triangular pattern meaning same spacing on all.
  3. 01:31:882 (3,4,5) - Same for (5) here, the pitch just seems louder and more prominent than others, it forms a nice melody with that pitch change in the song, while in the map it rarely represents that.
  4. 01:43:024 (4,5) - I mean you sometimes give it, but not too often. i mean for all of them... : I feel like you pick individual spots which DS emphasis is sacrificed for a neat and organized pattern, but along with these there are so many things DS emphasized. I see a lot of maps where the DS for each indivusal sound through the WHOLE song isnt 100% correctly DS emphasized, its basically impossible. But I get your point, for me its just less important to have everything 100% accurately DS snapped although I have to say that I care much more about DS than some other maps. So yeah, i understand that this is really important for you and my mapping doesnt offer it as much as you would want to


There are countless example mostly on kiais and sections that sound similar to kiais like 00:55:539 - . But I like your technical mapping and gimmicks though.

name the diff diabetes xdd
Still, thank you for taking a look, I really appreciated it!
posted
hi! yeah, right, m4m thing

add some tags i guess

Switch me!
  1. 00:15:767 (5) - considering two previous combos, you forgot one here
  2. 00:16:796 - sounds like you missed a sound here
  3. 00:20:910 (1,2) - combo says - Switch me! 8-)
  4. 00:22:282 - you can actually map this sound too
  5. 00:39:082 (5,1) - switching combos here will help reading and makes more sense to me
  6. 00:52:453 (1) - why combo here? nothing really changed that much, there is no need
  7. 01:13:024 (6) - ctrl+g flow feels better
  8. 01:32:224 (5) - same as above
  9. 02:43:540 (1) - no need to combo again
  10. 03:15:424 (1) - considering two previous combos, you don't need one here

Akitoshi's Insane
  1. 00:16:624 (4) - so here, you can basically make this slider extended and put a stacked circle on it (somehow like this :arrow:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9448808) don't forget to mute it tho :D
  2. 01:13:367 (1,2,3,4,5) - polish this stream please
  3. 01:30:853 (8) - 01:33:596 (8) - 01:33:596 (8) - 01:36:339 (8) - mute ends?
  4. 01:37:024 (2,3) - ctrl+g 2 then 3 to make flow better
  5. 01:37:710 (4,4) - just a nazi stack, nevermind
  6. 01:44:396 (7,3) - yes, i am very nazi
  7. 01:41:824 (8) - 01:44:567 (8) - 01:47:310 (8) - 01:50:053 (8) - mute pls
  8. 01:52:110 (2) - add combo here
  9. 01:55:196 (3) - 01:55:539 (4) - and here too
  10. 01:58:282 (7) - this is very confusing, you can't clearly see the "back-arrow", unstack it or move it down so it becomes more visible
  11. 03:15:424 (1) - 03:16:796 (1) - and so on, pls)
  12. 03:29:139 - i just feel like placing a last circle here somewhere in the center would be epic
posted

CircleChu wrote:

hi! yeah, right, m4m thing

add some tags i guess idk what to put there except my old name and gd'ers

Switch me!
  1. 00:15:767 (5) - considering two previous combos, you forgot one here
  2. 00:16:796 - sounds like you missed a sound here its not a sound I follow and its very quiet. i want to focus on the most important sounds
  3. 00:20:910 (1,2) - combo says - Switch me! 8-)
  4. 00:22:282 - you can actually map this sound too but then the red tick sounds would lose so much emphasis
  5. 00:39:082 (5,1) - switching combos here will help reading and makes more sense to me
  6. 00:52:453 (1) - why combo here? nothing really changed that much, there is no need
  7. 01:13:024 (6) - ctrl+g flow feels better i dont like wider angled jumps
  8. 01:32:224 (5) - same as above
  9. 02:43:540 (1) - no need to combo again
  10. 03:15:424 (1) - considering two previous combos, you don't need one here
unmentioned changed, thank you :)
posted
Hey there, I've really enjoyed your map so far, however, i think the quality of the Extra diff would be perfect if the AR was changed from:
9.2 --> 9.3/9.4

Personally IMO, this map plays a lot smother with a slightly higher AR.

Other than that, fantastic map Riko, Keep up the good work!
posted

Reddit wrote:

Hey there, I've really enjoyed your map so far, however, i think the quality of the Extra diff would be perfect if the AR was changed from:
9.2 --> 9.3/9.4

Personally IMO, this map plays a lot smother with a slightly higher AR.

Other than that, fantastic map Riko, Keep up the good work!
I agree with the higher AR, 9.3 looks appropriate to me.
And thank you for your kind words!:)
posted
Add 'happy hardcore emfa music' to tags also add 'serl' because most people don't search with proper artist name with a '3' in it
Edit also add corinn (maybe) because thats aki's other name he used in osu. you can ask him if he wants it tho
[Easy]
  1. 00:21:253 (6) - Dont really need to put a 2/1 slider here like others because the emphasis is really weak here in the song. The bassline totally faints here so ya only a circle at 00:21:253 - would be better for emphasis
  2. 02:12:339 - A circle here would be cool because the vocal is pretty strong and having 6 full beats without any note feels kinda empty because the song starts building up again on 02:12:853 -
    Kinda ok but rhythm is extremely repetitive lol its basically 1/1 and 2/1 throughout the difficulty. Spots like 01:01:024 - could have a slider starting from 01:01:196 - instead to emphasize the melody at its best and stuff like that but yea thats just my opinion

[Normal]
  1. 00:19:196 (5,1,2) - DS
  2. 00:21:939 (6,7) - Don't think its ok to use custom DS here because the gap isn't really that big between them. 00:22:624 (7) - appears fully before 00:21:939 (6) - ends so yea consistent DS is more preferred
  3. 00:22:624 (7) - NC
  4. 00:55:539 - Circle. Its the start of the chorus (Kind of a chorus). Even though the melody doesn't start here, The kick at this beat is really really strong and skipping it is just unfair since you had a circle at 01:01:024 - same thing for 01:06:510 -
  5. 00:59:310 (2) - Kind of misleading rhythm here. The slider emphasizes sound at 00:59:482 - while the song emphasizes sound 00:59:139 -
  6. 01:05:139 (3,4,5) - Let's use a simpler rhythm here than 00:59:653 (3,4,5) - ? song's intensity is much faint at 01:05:139 - this point
  7. 01:38:739 (5) - How about ending this on 01:39:253 - instead, That makes rhythm a bit more dense but you shouldn't ignore the sound at 01:39:253 - because ,well, its atleast much strong than the sound at 01:39:082 - so lets emphasize stronger sounds

[Hard]
  1. 00:53:567 (2) - The repeat lands on a wrong beat actually. The drums you are following is at 00:53:996 - not on the blue tick. You can simply remove the repeat from 00:53:567 (2) - and put a circle at red tick and it will play like average 1/2 rhythm on the difficulty
  2. 01:34:624 (3,4) - Try changing 3 into two circle, You mostly emphasized the melody sounds in the chorus (in a proper way) but yeah in this case 3 has sounds on both head and tail while 4 has sound on head only. stuff like 01:31:881 (3,4,5) - goes perfect in this case too
  3. 01:45:596 (3,4) - Same thing
  4. 02:44:653 (2,3) - same thing as 00:53:567 (2) -
  5. 03:20:224 (1,2,3) - Thats a pretty huge buff in spacing out the blue ,you don't really need such high spacing though since song isn't trying to emphasize anything. Prolly nerf spacing a bit, u can still keep it a bigger than rest if u want
  6. 03:23:653 (6,8) - The visuals kinda look random here. How about copying 03:23:653 (6) - and pasting at 03:23:653 (6) - and making them symmetry. will looks a lot cuter
  7. 03:29:139 (1,2,3) - How about decreasing DS here. The song goes totally faint here. Having DS and SV similar to the rest of the stuff won't make everything else in difficulty feel drastic and will emphasize the 3 notes here the most. You get the point
    Also try reducing volume here because those whistles sound pretty loud

[Insane]
  1. 00:26:396 (4) - Dont make this a circle while you made 00:23:653 (3) - a slider. They are same things. emphasize them equally. You have 1/2 slider on other spots as well such as 00:29:139 (3) -
  2. 00:23:996 (1,2) - The only case out of all others in this section where you had a 3/4 slider. Why not make it 1/1 like all others ,for consistency and emphasis stuff
  3. 00:55:539 (1) - Highly recommend placing two circles instead of circles instead because both sounds are emphasized equally but differently. Both are prominent. Other patterns like 01:01:024 (1,2) - 01:06:510 (1,2) - etc got two circles as well and they fit really well
  4. 01:17:482 - Stop being lazy lol (you don't simply map a buildup with 1/1 circle spam. come on)
  5. 03:03:767 (3,4,5) - 03:05:139 (4,5) - What happened to your rhythm suddenly. its like a different person came up and mapped these. Do use 1/2 sliders with 1/4 gaps , They FIT
  6. 03:26:396 (1,2,3,4,5) - Gradually decreasing DS is gonna be great here because song is fainting but it actually seems like you increased DS a bit here instead lol

[Extra]
  1. 00:40:110 (5) - kinda weird how in previous parts like 00:38:739 (4) - this you went for a 1/2 slider instead to represent the sound at 00:38:910 - but you ignored it at 00:40:282 - even though the song intensity is greater
  2. 00:41:824 (1) - To be honest the way you executed these sounds at 00:36:339 (1,2) - is better and since the song is stronger at 00:41:824 - i really suggest you change 00:41:824 (1,2) - this rhythm into two 1/2 sliders because both sounds (sound on slider head and end) the slider at 00:41:824 (1) - supports are equally emphasized in the song. They both stand out equally. And since the song is building up at this moment the beat at 00:42:167 - feels a tiny bit more drastic so yea. In summary just try making 00:42:167 - clickable for emphasis
  3. 00:49:710 (1) - The similar kick sounds that the stream afterwards supports ,such as circles like 00:50:053 (1,2,3,4,5) - etc etc also exist on 00:49:882 - 00:49:967 - these two beats so having a contrast between the 1/8 sounds at 00:49:710 - and 1/4 sounds at 00:49:882 - would be nice.

lost my wip gd or else i would still have finished it at some point in the past but well
Best of luck!
posted

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Add 'happy hardcore emfa music' to tags also add 'serl' because most people don't search with proper artist name with a '3' in it
Edit also add corinn (maybe) because thats aki's other name he used in osu. you can ask him if he wants it tho

[Normal]
  1. 00:19:196 (5,1,2) - DS
  2. 00:21:939 (6,7) - Don't think its ok to use custom DS here because the gap isn't really that big between them. 00:22:624 (7) - appears fully before 00:21:939 (6) - ends so yea consistent DS is more preferred
  3. 00:22:624 (7) - NC
  4. 00:55:539 - Circle. Its the start of the chorus (Kind of a chorus). Even though the melody doesn't start here, The kick at this beat is really really strong and skipping it is just unfair since you had a circle at 01:01:024 - same thing for 01:06:510 -
  5. 00:59:310 (2) - Kind of misleading rhythm here. The slider emphasizes sound at 00:59:482 - while the song emphasizes sound 00:59:139 - i think 00:59:310 - is more emphasized since the vocal has a higher pitch. 00:59:139 - this sound just feels like a slight repeated one of 00:58:967 - this one so i dont think it is that important
  6. 01:05:139 (3,4,5) - Let's use a simpler rhythm here than 00:59:653 (3,4,5) - ? song's intensity is much faint at 01:05:139 - this point
  7. 01:38:739 (5) - How about ending this on 01:39:253 - instead, That makes rhythm a bit more dense but you shouldn't ignore the sound at 01:39:253 - because ,well, its atleast much strong than the sound at 01:39:082 - so lets emphasize stronger sounds

[Hard]
  1. 00:53:567 (2) - The repeat lands on a wrong beat actually. The drums you are following is at 00:53:996 - not on the blue tick. You can simply remove the repeat from 00:53:567 (2) - and put a circle at red tick and it will play like average 1/2 rhythm on the difficulty
  2. 01:34:624 (3,4) - Try changing 3 into two circle, You mostly emphasized the melody sounds in the chorus (in a proper way) but yeah in this case 3 has sounds on both head and tail while 4 has sound on head only. stuff like 01:31:881 (3,4,5) - goes perfect in this case too
  3. 01:45:596 (3,4) - Same thing
  4. 02:44:653 (2,3) - same thing as 00:53:567 (2) -
  5. 03:20:224 (1,2,3) - Thats a pretty huge buff in spacing out the blue ,you don't really need such high spacing though since song isn't trying to emphasize anything. Prolly nerf spacing a bit, u can still keep it a bigger than rest if u want
  6. 03:23:653 (6,8) - The visuals kinda look random here. How about copying 03:23:653 (6) - and pasting at 03:23:653 (6) - and making them symmetry. will looks a lot cuter
  7. 03:29:139 (1,2,3) - How about decreasing DS here. The song goes totally faint here. Having DS and SV similar to the rest of the stuff won't make everything else in difficulty feel drastic and will emphasize the 3 notes here the most. You get the point
    Also try reducing volume here because those whistles sound pretty loud


[Extra]
  1. 00:40:110 (5) - kinda weird how in previous parts like 00:38:739 (4) - this you went for a 1/2 slider instead to represent the sound at 00:38:910 - but you ignored it at 00:40:282 - even though the song intensity is greater
  2. 00:41:824 (1) - To be honest the way you executed these sounds at 00:36:339 (1,2) - is better and since the song is stronger at 00:41:824 - i really suggest you change 00:41:824 (1,2) - this rhythm into two 1/2 sliders because both sounds (sound on slider head and end) the slider at 00:41:824 (1) - supports are equally emphasized in the song. They both stand out equally. And since the song is building up at this moment the beat at 00:42:167 - feels a tiny bit more drastic so yea. In summary just try making 00:42:167 - clickable for emphasis
  3. 00:49:710 (1) - The similar kick sounds that the stream afterwards supports ,such as circles like 00:50:053 (1,2,3,4,5) - etc etc also exist on 00:49:882 - 00:49:967 - these two beats so having a contrast between the 1/8 sounds at 00:49:710 - and 1/4 sounds at 00:49:882 - would be nice. i get what you mean by that, but I dont see a solution to keep the 1/8's including representing the 1/4 sounds.

lost my wip gd or else i would still have finished it at some point in the past but well
Best of luck!
unmentioned is fixed, Thank you very much!:)
posted
o/

[Easy]
  1. 00:21:253 (6) - Dont really need to put a 2/1 slider here like others because the emphasis is really weak here in the song. The bassline totally faints here so ya only a circle at 00:21:253 - would be better for emphasis agreed
  2. 02:12:339 - A circle here would be cool because the vocal is pretty strong and having 6 full beats without any note feels kinda empty because the song starts building up again on 02:12:853 - i do this then but im not 100% satisfied
    Kinda ok but rhythm is extremely repetitive lol its basically 1/1 and 2/1 throughout the difficulty. Spots like 01:01:024 - could have a slider starting from 01:01:196 - instead to emphasize the melody at its best and stuff like that but yea thats just my opinion i mean in an easy i wanna have it the most simple mapping possible (exspecially when you have normal+easy)


Thanks for mod ^^

osu file format v14

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posted

Chewin wrote:

Akitoshi's Insane

  1. This BG is cute but doesn't totally fit with others xD
  2. 01:17:482 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Is it my impression or these squares are not perfect? xD Can you make them with "Create polygon circle" option maybe? They don't look perfect to me idk it was from create polygon circle method though w i rotated like some degree i forgot
  3. 03:03:767 (3,4,5) - Why this sudden rhythm change? I do not understand why you decided to not use the 1/4 sliders here anymore like you did for the previous part: 02:58:282 (3,4,5) - and so on. Expecially here: 03:05:139 (4,5) - the rhythm looks so random imo, those sliders were cool it's variation from previous part : from the music, vocals joining at 03:03:424 - and mapping here as blue ticks feels really weird D:

CircleChu wrote:

Akitoshi's Insane
  1. 00:16:624 (4) - so here, you can basically make this slider extended and put a stacked circle on it (somehow like this :arrow:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9448808&#41; don't forget to mute it tho :Di dont want to use extended slider on calm intro ;3
  2. 01:13:367 (1,2,3,4,5) - polish this stream please ye
  3. 01:30:853 (8) - 01:33:596 (8) - 01:33:596 (8) - 01:36:339 (8) - mute ends? ok
  4. 01:37:024 (2,3) - ctrl+g 2 then 3 to make flow better fxd
  5. 01:37:710 (4,4) - just a nazi stack, nevermind w
  6. 01:44:396 (7,3) - yes, i am very nazi actually they're kinda intentional
  7. 01:41:824 (8) - 01:44:567 (8) - 01:47:310 (8) - 01:50:053 (8) - mute pls ye
  8. 01:52:110 (2) - add combo here ok
  9. 01:55:196 (3) - 01:55:539 (4) - and here too ok
  10. 01:58:282 (7) - this is very confusing, you can't clearly see the "back-arrow", unstack it or move it down so it becomes more visible looks fine tho ;d
  11. 03:15:424 (1) - 03:16:796 (1) - and so on, pls) ya
  12. 03:29:139 - i just feel like placing a last circle here somewhere in the center would be epic not my fetish ewe

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:26:396 (4) - Dont make this a circle while you made 00:23:653 (3) - a slider. They are same things. emphasize them equally. You have 1/2 slider on other spots as well such as 00:29:139 (3) - fxd
  2. 00:23:996 (1,2) - The only case out of all others in this section where you had a 3/4 slider. Why not make it 1/1 like all others ,for consistency and emphasis stuff ok then
  3. 00:55:539 (1) - Highly recommend placing two circles instead of circles instead because both sounds are emphasized equally but differently. Both are prominent. Other patterns like 01:01:024 (1,2) - 01:06:510 (1,2) - etc got two circles as well and they fit really well fxd
  4. 01:17:482 - Stop being lazy lol (you don't simply map a buildup with 1/1 circle spam. come on) i don't finish this map at all if im lazy tho LUL anyway it still fits as this part is p calm
  5. 03:03:767 (3,4,5) - 03:05:139 (4,5) - What happened to your rhythm suddenly. its like a different person came up and mapped these. Do use 1/2 sliders with 1/4 gaps , They FIT i changed rhythm cuz vocals ruined instruments
  6. 03:26:396 (1,2,3,4,5) - Gradually decreasing DS is gonna be great here because song is fainting but it actually seems like you increased DS a bit here instead lol ez


thanks!

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Subjectivity Incoming

top
00:10:453 (1) - would end on the breath instead of nothing. sounds less out of place that way
00:11:653 - would chill on spacing for this entire section tbh. like not everything needs to be a jump in a section that's supposed to be this calm. would experiment with more linear low spacing patterns so there's some difference between calm bits and mlg bits of the map
00:22:624 - this section is Cool. would
00:34:967 (1) - what i said about 11seconds but about rhythm density too lol. would undermap instead of trying to cover all beats cuz song is super quiet at first
00:45:939 (1) - starting smaller with your jump spam shows buildup so much better than consistent similarly spaced jumps:((( also applies to 02:37:024 (1) - i guess
01:38:053 (1,2,3) - silenced 2and 3 but not 1 uhhhhwhy tho
01:57:939 (4,5) - should really have clicking for 5 start on the white tick. current layout makes it seem like you're emphasizing blue tick but blue tick has nothing important so a a aa
01:58:367 (5) - also it hsould be 1/4 not 1/8 like
01:59:824 (5) - 1/4 starts from the big white tick, not before it :( could just do a triple fromslider http://puu.sh/A7xkP/f561c128e4.jpg
02:01:367 (1) - the cool section returns...but the song's most intense instrument was dropped so it feels way more calm... but also the map is the exact same
you see where im going with this. should account for the variation. 02:13:710 (1) - this section can return to the Cool
02:15:082 (1) - not sure why this is a yellow boy when it's a copy of 00:26:396 (2,3) -
02:32:224 (3,4) - ssame as 1:59
02:47:567 (4) - replacing hitnormal bass with softwhistle is so much more appealing. current hitsounding makes it sound like you're mapping the bass sound, but also skipping over the bass sound on the white tick, which is super awk

overall i think u should consider more babyish mapping for calm sections to show more clear musical changeeeee 01:16:110 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:26:053 (3,4,5,6,7) - like these sections could easily use nonjump mapping and be sick
aki's diff at 1:16 or the intro show what i mean

ak
00:32:224 (1,2) - wouldnt use symmetry for sounds that aren't reflective of each other. 2 being circles instead o fslider works
00:50:396 (5) - 00:51:082 (5) - get this slidey in line with the stream
01:01:196 (2) - would stack on 3 cuz 23 same sound. weird to put different things on same position
03:05:482 (5) - silence

hard
u need some spacing/sv variation like badly. feels pretty gross when map is same sv throughout and song is as variable in intensity as it is. spacing increase for kiais is ok, but like movement being so much faster between objects than slider movement is prettygross. would boost sv in those spacing increase sections to make it notgross
00:55:539 - would also have svspacing stuff apply here
in sections iwth 3/4 jumps like 02:46:967 (4,5,1,2) - gotta make difference between 1/2 and 3/4 clear through spacing. right now they're visually thes ame
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pishifat wrote:

Subjectivity Incoming

top
00:10:453 (1) - would end on the breath instead of nothing. sounds less out of place that way true
00:11:653 - would chill on spacing for this entire section tbh. like not everything needs to be a jump in a section that's supposed to be this calm. would experiment with more linear low spacing patterns so there's some difference between calm bits and mlg bits of the map i 100% agree here, i used linear flow and slight spacing emphasis for stronger sounds but very very minor
00:22:624 - this section is Cool. would
00:34:967 (1) - what i said about 11seconds but about rhythm density too lol. would undermap instead of trying to cover all beats cuz song is super quiet at first i think the seperation of clickable and unclickable 1/4 sounds (which is the case here for low intensity part) is already a huge undermap, isnt it? i definetely keep the passive 1/4 rhythms but probably gonna apply some of the linear patterns and less spacing idea like in the intro.
00:45:939 (1) - starting smaller with your jump spam shows buildup so much better than consistent similarly spaced jumps:((( also applies to 02:37:024 (1) - i guess i was thinking too, but honestly... the actual sounds which get represented by the jumps and circles keep being the same the whole time, there isnt really a build-up part in the music except the slight volume change of the background music (which is heavily covered by the sounds so not emphasized at all in the map). So yeah i think keeping relatively equal spacing fits better to the sounds the circles are actually representing
01:38:053 (1,2,3) - silenced 2and 3 but not 1 uhhhhwhy tho both on the red and blue tick covered by unsilenced slider are sounds if i listen closely.. so i thought i keep it audible for at least the blue tick. maybe its better to simplify so it fits better to the pattern idk yet
01:57:939 (4,5) - should really have clicking for 5 start on the white tick. current layout makes it seem like you're emphasizing blue tick but blue tick has nothing important so a a aa woops, yes
01:58:367 (5) - also it hsould be 1/4 not 1/8 like i assume you mean the reverse slider not the one you linked, yes chnaged
01:59:824 (5) - 1/4 starts from the big white tick, not before it :( could just do a triple fromslider http://puu.sh/A7xkP/f561c128e4.jpg oki did
02:01:367 (1) - the cool section returns...but the song's most intense instrument was dropped so it feels way more calm... but also the map is the exact same
you see where im going with this. should account for the variation. 02:13:710 (1) - this section can return to the Cool the only thing changed in the music is the background sound which takes a lot of intensity indeed... but the actual sounds the slow slider representing stay the same imo. so i just reduce spacing for non bg sound drastically so the seperation gets present
02:15:082 (1) - not sure why this is a yellow boy when it's a copy of 00:26:396 (2,3) - are you sure? Because 02:15:082 (1) - this one is a longer sound than 00:26:396 (2) - . So both of the circle sliders have the same sound, i think its different here than in the first section
02:32:224 (3,4) - ssame as 1:59
02:47:567 (4) - replacing hitnormal bass with softwhistle is so much more appealing. current hitsounding makes it sound like you're mapping the bass sound, but also skipping over the bass sound on the white tick, which is super awk yes

overall i think u should consider more babyish mapping for calm sections to show more clear musical changeeeee 01:16:110 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:26:053 (3,4,5,6,7) - like these sections could easily use nonjump mapping and be sick yeah i really agree, i redid these sections so it gets from liined up patterns into bit more spaced lined up and few angles, fits a lot better now!!
aki's diff at 1:16 or the intro show what i mean

ak
00:32:224 (1,2) - wouldnt use symmetry for sounds that aren't reflective of each other. 2 being circles instead o fslider works
00:50:396 (5) - 00:51:082 (5) - get this slidey in line with the stream
01:01:196 (2) - would stack on 3 cuz 23 same sound. weird to put different things on same position
03:05:482 (5) - silence

hard
u need some spacing/sv variation like badly. feels pretty gross when map is same sv throughout and song is as variable in intensity as it is. spacing increase for kiais is ok, but like movement being so much faster between objects than slider movement is prettygross. would boost sv in those spacing increase sections to make it notgross yes i didnt even take care of that back then when i made that diff. basically its only the kiai and section before where you want me to do spacing thing I have to put higher sv, right? for the neutral sections 1.00x and spacing feels fine. apart from these first 2 kiais idk how to put higher sv's appropriately. so yes, changed that surely
00:55:539 - would also have svspacing stuff apply here okay
in sections iwth 3/4 jumps like 02:46:967 (4,5,1,2) - gotta make difference between 1/2 and 3/4 clear through spacing. right now they're visually thes ame i think this is the only spot where it was wrong, wasnt it? spacing between sliders... i think the player can expect the sliders being 1/2 because the spacing increase for these sliders were introduced earlier, so only 3/4 rhythms with circles have that kind of spacing now
basically changed everything but the jump "build-up" part, updated but i probably try to improve the low intensity sections to make transition clearer
that was an awesome mod, i feel like map (especially top diff) improved by a ton. thank you! :)
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