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HoneyWorks feat. Gero - Jakusha no Sengen [Osu|Taiko]

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Kyle Y

Saltssaumure wrote:

[Ky's Hard]
I really liked the triangle circles in the kiai. thanks
00:09:755 (2) - NC and/or different slider shape to make the SV change more obvious. okay
00:44:782 (2,3,1) - blanketing is a lil off fixed, hope it will be okay.
01:26:620 (3) - random clap hitsound? I will fix hit sound later.
01:33:107 (5) - the reverse makes the map feel unfinished, would be better as a 1/1 slider. fixed.

gl with rank!

FiddleBlue wrote:

Hi from my queue.

Ky's Hard
  1. 00:03:914 (1,2) - Why not just make it a full beat slider lol. There's nothing particular in the second white tick so this isn't really necessary. for rhythm constant
  2. 00:11:536 (1,2) - Flow here is uncomfortable. You use comfortable flow for 00:16:725 (1,2) - and 00:19:320 (1,2) - so why not here? not really big problem here.
  3. 00:35:698 (3,4) - I already talk about this, so explanation needed I hope. There are parts which are the same but recognizing them won't be hard lol.
  4. 00:44:779 (2,3) - FIX BLANKET REEEEEEE fixed
  5. 00:48:347 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These using drum-hitnormal is really weird. Doesn't seem to emphasize anything. I will deal with hit sound later.
  6. 01:32:779 (4,5) - There's a sound on the first red tick and none in the second. A 1/2 beat slider following a 1 beat slider separated by 1/2 beat seems more appropriate.fixed.
Good luck with the mapset! o/
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Tags:Irohas MugiwaraSekai Kyle_Y Elcheer -Space- Faputa Poii
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Spayyce
I like the way they sound.

I don't necessarily believe they're hindering the song as they, to me, sound like a universal beat that can incorporate the song very well.
Faputa

FiddleBlue wrote:

Hi from my queue.

Fapu's Extra
  1. 00:01:971 (3) - Since the guitar disrupt this part from being like before, you could make this to be two stacked 1/2 circles. This will emphasize the guitar and relate it to the other same parts. Optional while not important. I'll keep my own pattern
  2. 00:08:458 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Drums here are the same intensity so you could use one volume instead. Drums did have volume rise from what I heard
  3. 00:30:350 (4) - Sound here seems to belong to the first stacking instead of the second one. having this as the second stacking emphasizes the new drum sound enters, and it plays well.
  4. 00:30:512 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - The stacked 1/2 circles and the stream related to each other since the guitar sound is played on each 1/2 beat. The guitar thing divides itself into two parts: the first (00:29:863 (1,2,3,4) - and last (00:30:512 (5,6,7,9) - ) two beats of the measure. So by doing this adds to your emphasis on that guitar. I mapped more circles in this section to indicate just that and while clicking more, players know it is more intense. So no need to do anything else here.
  5. 01:17:377 (4,5,6) - You could make this triple have a motion that follows the circular flow of 01:16:404 (1,2,3) - . fixed

Good luck with the mapset! o/
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-Atri-
From my queue

[General]
  1. Volume setting on your diffs and Normal could work harder, you used same volume setting on calmer parts (00:00:000 - , 00:20:782 - ) and stronger parts (00:10:404) and it's really plain

[Irohas' Normal]
  1. 01:31:971 (3) - offscreen

[Ky's Hard]
  1. 同fapu嘅一樣,成個diff都無咩finish,況且開頭果度點解會咁多種hitsound嘅方法,00:10:404 - 果度用drum已經唔係幾合理,00:12:998 - 轉咗去soft,00:12:998 (1) - 先有claps
  2. 整體上除咗hitsound無咩問題

[Insane]
  1. 00:10:890 (4,1) - symmetry
  2. 00:13:971 (5,1) - 00:19:161 (5,1) - 01:24:025 (5,1) - 01:26:620 (5,1) - etc. Unstack these? Stacking them makes the emphasis on finishes weaker
  3. 00:40:890 (1) - Offscreen.
  4. Same problem as Desperation on volume settings

[elcheer's Insane]
  1. 00:19:809 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - nazi, but blanket 00:19:323 (1) - slider end
  2. 00:38:620 (6) - ctrl+g? and the spacing is too large imo judging the spacing in this part
  3. 00:48:998 (8) - make it a curve slider like 00:48:025 (5,6,7) - ? For visual consistency
  4. 01:00:998 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - the emphasis is quite strange though, the stronger note was on 01:00:998 - 01:01:485 - 01:01:971 - but the current pattern emphasizes 01:01:323 - 01:01:647 - instead
  5. 01:02:134 (1,4) - the overlap can be avoided imo, yet the visual contrast isn't go well with 01:02:134 (1) -

[Space's Insane]
  1. 01:03:269 (4,1) - 01:05:863 (5,1) - 01:08:620 (5,1) - 01:29:377 (5,1) - etc. the rhythm is quite off though, there's a new section of vocal/guitar on the red tick, instead of the downbeat, the finish makes this problem worse, but you did them well on 01:13:809 (1) -
  2. 01:18:188 (3,5,6) - 01:19:161 (1,3,5,7) - ... Why the random normal finish though lol, not really necessary
  3. 01:33:431 - Add note? There's an important sound

[Fapu's Extra]
  1. 00:02:296 (4,1) - 建議blanket包近啲,而家咁樣唔單止令到 00:01:647 (2,4,1) - 個visual spacing好唔整齊,00:02:620 (1,2) - 嘅1/4 flow感覺唔好打
  2. 00:04:242 (2,3,4,5,6) - 如果個連打係跟結他聲嘅話都係stack或者係減細spacing,而家嘅spacing感覺好似突顯咗比較靜嘅聲
  3. 00:07:809 (1,2) - nazi,就算開咗stack都無blanket好
  4. 00:08:296 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - nazi,個曲線唔齊,如果係漸進連打嘅話建議用slider嚟對齊佢哋
  5. 00:35:539 - 呢都冇跟結他triple點解 00:36:836 (3) - 跟咗,好inconsistent
  6. 00:37:647 (1,2,3,4) - 呢度跟咩,唔係幾似跟人聲
  7. 發現成個diff都無咩finish,建議嚮 00:10:404 (1) - 00:11:539 (1) - 等等有cymbal嘅地方落finish

[Desperation]
  1. 01:12:188 (4,5,6,7,1) - Make the spacing in this stream larger? to give better flow with the jump
  2. 01:22:404 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^, yet it give more gradual slow down with 01:22:728 (7,8,1) -
  3. Solid

Good luck~
Rougoku
no kd, not too much to report which hasn't really been said I guess

[General]
Background size is too

[Easy]
00:36:350 (1) - I don't like it so much, most of your repeats on vocals are more curvy, and I find that this slider sticks really out compared to all others.
01:20:620 (2) - 1/2 slider which is a little out of place, especially on an Easy. Moreover, the sound at 01:20:944 is pretty much the same, so that would mean that if you want to keep it, you need to put another 1/2 slider instead of the circle.

[Normal]

01:31:971 (3) - offscreen
Elcheer

Firis Mistlud wrote:

[elcheer's Insane]
  1. 00:19:809 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - nazi, but blanket 00:19:323 (1) - slider end somewhat fixed
  2. 00:38:620 (6) - ctrl+g? and the spacing is too large imo judging the spacing in this part somewhat fixed
  3. 00:48:998 (8) - make it a curve slider like 00:48:025 (5,6,7) - ? For visual consistency fixed
  4. 01:00:998 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - the emphasis is quite strange though, the stronger note was on 01:00:998 - 01:01:485 - 01:01:971 - but the current pattern emphasizes 01:01:323 - 01:01:647 - instead somewhat fixed
  5. 01:02:134 (1,4) - the overlap can be avoided imo, yet the visual contrast isn't go well with 01:02:134 (1) - fixed

bleh
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Timperjuncio
Fapu's Extra

00:01:323 (1,2,3) - I would rotate it 45º and place it like this so it flow better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9952692
00:04:242 (2,3,4,5) - I don't hear any 1/4 sound
00:06:350 (7,8,1) - space it more. While I was playing it, I got confused with a 1/4, instead of 1/2 (you can see a similar spacing between 00:06:025 (6,7) - and 00:07:161 (4,5) - , even though they are 1/2 and 1/4 respectively)
00:08:296 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - really anaesthetic. It seems to have been made manually. Make a slider as a point of reference and place the cirlces over it to make propper shapes.
00:16:242 (3,4,5) - I would make it flow as it was flowing before and make the flow-change in 00:16:728 (1) - . I think it makes much more sense and it's really comfortable to the player. If not, there would be too many flow-changes in such short time.
00:20:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the flow in this part is really weird on its own. If you want to make it look like a common structure, make 00:22:080 (1) - be placed in a lower position than where it is. You will realise if you focus on the cursor's movement.
01:04:080 (3,4,5,6) - I personally disagree with the idea of making jumps with such sharp angle. I would make it more "star-like" so that it is more comfortable for the player.
01:15:593 (2,3) - there are no vocals on this part. Even though, you mapped it just the same as in 01:15:917 (4,5,6) - . Consider to make any change to distinguish both parts.
01:23:053 from this part until the end I miss many clap sounds.

Space's Insane

What's the reason to make soooo many unnecessary clap sounds through all the song? Make it according to the drums, not to the interpretation you give to the song.

00:00:836 (4) - I would actually make it stack with 00:00:350 (2) - . I don't feel like it is a nice overlap tbh.
00:00:998 (5,1) - separate more 00:00:998 (5) - from 00:01:323 (1) - (or 00:01:323 (1) - from 00:00:998 (5) - )
00:20:944 (2,3) - too spaced for a slow part
00:37:485 (5,1,2) - this pattern's flow is really meh. I would place them like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9952991
00:56:134 (2,3,4) - I don't hear any 1/4 sound
01:03:593 (1,1,1,1,1) - I would start those sliders the red tick before
01:05:215 (2,3,4) - very uncomfortable to play (too sharp)
01:10:404 (2,3) - the music is not really loud here, but its spacing is very big. Make it smaller in order to fit the song propperly
01:30:836 (1) - this is just too random. As it is not a repeated slider, I would replace it with a more common one.
Faputa

Firis Mistlud wrote:

[Fapu's Extra]
  1. 00:02:296 (4,1) - 建議blanket包近啲,而家咁樣唔單止令到 00:01:647 (2,4,1) - 個visual spacing好唔整齊,00:02:620 (1,2) - 嘅1/4 flow感覺唔好打 okay
  2. 00:04:242 (2,3,4,5,6) - 如果個連打係跟結他聲嘅話都係stack或者係減細spacing,而家嘅spacing感覺好似突顯咗比較靜嘅聲 小改了
  3. 00:07:809 (1,2) - nazi,就算開咗stack都無blanket好 夠好了吧?
  4. 00:08:296 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - nazi,個曲線唔齊,如果係漸進連打嘅話建議用slider嚟對齊佢哋 fixed
  5. 00:35:539 - 呢都冇跟結他triple點解 00:36:836 (3) - 跟咗,好inconsistent fixed
  6. 00:37:647 (1,2,3,4) - 呢度跟咩,唔係幾似跟人聲 我覺得ok
  7. 發現成個diff都無咩finish,建議嚮 00:10:404 (1) - 00:11:539 (1) - 等等有cymbal嘅地方落finish

Good luck~

Timperjuncio wrote:

Fapu's Extra

00:01:323 (1,2,3) - I would rotate it 45º and place it like this so it flow better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9952692 I think currently is fine
00:04:242 (2,3,4,5) - I don't hear any 1/4 sound There is
00:06:350 (7,8,1) - space it more. While I was playing it, I got confused with a 1/4, instead of 1/2 (you can see a similar spacing between 00:06:025 (6,7) - and 00:07:161 (4,5) - , even though they are 1/2 and 1/4 respectively) fixed
00:08:296 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - really anaesthetic. It seems to have been made manually. Make a slider as a point of reference and place the cirlces over it to make propper shapes. fixed in previous mod
00:16:242 (3,4,5) - I would make it flow as it was flowing before and make the flow-change in 00:16:728 (1) - . I think it makes much more sense and it's really comfortable to the player. If not, there would be too many flow-changes in such short time. fixed?
00:20:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the flow in this part is really weird on its own. If you want to make it look like a common structure, make 00:22:080 (1) - be placed in a lower position than where it is. You will realise if you focus on the cursor's movement. I think its fine. There's like a "ku" sound that I can use as flow break
01:04:080 (3,4,5,6) - I personally disagree with the idea of making jumps with such sharp angle. I would make it more "star-like" so that it is more comfortable for the player. angles here whether it is star-shaped or not I have designated, so its fine
01:15:593 (2,3) - there are no vocals on this part. Even though, you mapped it just the same as in 01:15:917 (4,5,6) - . Consider to make any change to distinguish both parts. fixed
01:23:053 from this part until the end I miss many clap sounds. fixed as well

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Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki

Timperjuncio wrote:

Desperation

00:07:809 (1,2) - while testplaying, I felt like if it was 1/4 instead of 1/2 because of its comfort while playing. Maybe ctrl+g'ing every one of these 00:08:296 (2,3,4,5,6) - could help to understand it better. Yeah they are supposed to be comfortable
00:12:350 (3,4) - don't emphasize that much in these notes. They are not really important and its spacing is just too big! No, 3 is like my default spacing, I'm not really emphasizing them more than others. The spacing is not too big, this is not a 3* map lmao
00:12:998 (1,2,3) - same with this: do not space so much. But be careful: DO space more here 00:13:485 (4) - . I don't really agree with this,
the only difference between them is that 4 is a longer sound and that is expressed by a slider, I think it's fine

00:14:134 (1) - fix that blanket (the sliderend should be a less-shaped angle) I'm not sure whether I'm supposed to blanket the first or the last circle of the triple in such a case...I blanketed the first one since it's the first to appear but idk this is just weird
00:15:593 (1,2,3) - don't emphasize that much in these notes. They are not really important and its spacing is just too big! (I am going to stop pointing out these mistakes because they happen very often. I hope you understood what I meant with these points and manage to remap all of those you find ^^) Thanks for the suggestion but nah, it's fine the way it is
00:23:377 (1,2) - and 00:24:025 (4) - are the same vocals structure, but you mapped it differently. They should be the same (I suggest to make 00:24:025 (4) - look like 00:23:377 (1,2) - ). Remapped the whole section
00:28:566 (1,4) - same vocals structure (lower sound than in, for example, 00:27:917 (3) - ), but different slider representation. Make it look the same. As they are a lower sound, I would make 00:28:566 (1) - look like 00:29:215 (4) - . I don't use slidershapes to represent certain sounds
00:31:161 (1,2) - ^ (I won't point out these mistakes anymore. I hope you understand them better and can manage to "mod" it by yourself). Same as above
00:35:701 (4,5) - I suggest to replace that with a slider. I mapped the drums in this section, not the vocals
00:36:350 (1,2) - This should be 4 circles (undermapped) and I suggest, as I said before, to replace 00:36:998 (3,4) - with a slider. This is also because of the drums
00:37:647 (1,2) - Good job here! 2 different sliders for 2 different sounds. This is how you should deal with all of the slider issues. Even though it is correctly done, maybe you should make 00:37:971 (2) - like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9931864 because is a stronger sound, and strong sounds are commonly represented with this kind of slidershape. Idc about slidershapes
00:41:539 (1) - to make this circle more accurate, do the following: 00:40:890 (1,2) - ctrl+c ctrl+v this. Then, ctrl+h. After you have ctrl+h'ed those sliders, put them like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9931884 . Right where it is the 00:41:620 (1) - slider, you should place that circle. As you can see, it is overlapping with 00:40:890 (1) - , so you should consider to move it horizontally (I hope I have explained myself with this sh*t :P) That's just not how you do perfect geometric shapes, I want to have a perfect triangle, that does not mean that 00:40:890 (1) - and 00:41:539 (1) - are horizontally aligned
00:50:620 here there is sound, but it isn't mapped. You should map it! (I would map it by making 00:50:458 (4) - a slider which could turn into a blanket with 00:49:971 (3) - . Anyways, this is up to you :D) I didn't map it because I am already focusing on drums + vocals in this section and i want to emphasize 00:50:782 (1) -
01:23:053 (1,2,3) - I would ctrl+h this and make it more separated from 01:22:890 (8) - . The flow is really good here so I'm not changing anything
Thanks for the mod!

Saltssaumure wrote:

forgot how to do mods on forum

[Desperation]
pretty fun to play, though I'd increase the spacing on all streams as they tend to kill the momentum of the song when too easy.
00:09:107 (1) - circle feels better when it's in line with previous slider heads instead of slider tail Ok
01:00:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the music has buildup here so the jump pattern should start smaller and increase to match the music. It's already increasing

[Insane]
00:08:296 (2,3,4,5,6) - may be slightly too brain melting to read for low sr insane, it'd be easier as circles (or just angled so that each slider points towards the next perhaps). It's fine imo
00:26:620 - from here to 00:30:836 - it's quite a long section of counterclockwise movement. consider making the star at 00:29:863 - rotate clockwise instead to show the change in music more and also to avoid mouse drift. You may be right about that but I don't wanna break flow here

gl with rank!
Thanks :3

FiddleBlue wrote:

Hi from my queue.

Easy
  1. 00:40:239 (4) - This 1/2 slider seems out of place since it's an easy diff. Usually, objects in an easy difficulty have a spacing of 1 or more beat to not overwhelm the players. The slider is also out of place since there are only 2 objects that use 1/2 snapping divisor. It's not forbidden to use 1/2 rhythm in easy. This sound is really strong so I'm keeping it
  2. 00:57:104 (1,2,3,1,2) - Personally, I would make this a break as the music here is really calm. Already fixed in another mod
  3. 01:20:617 (2) - I already stated why this feels out of place, so I hope I don't need to do again. No changes here
Insane
  1. Don't really agree with how every 1/4 rhythm is simplified with 1/4 sliders. Players are capable of streaming since it's an insane diff, and give off the impression that every 1/4 rhythm is the same thing since they're emphasized with the same object. The next three bullets are examples of this:
  2. The sounds on 00:08:212 - and 00:08:293 (2) - are different than 00:08:455 (3,4,5,6) - . So perhaps make it into a stream from 00:07:806 (1) - leading to the 1/4 sliders to differentiate and emphasize the strong snares better. Ok so first of all, there is no sound on 00:08:215 - . And I could replace 00:08:296 (2) - by two circles but it feels really weird. I think it's okay to keep it as a 1/4 slider because actually the only difference is the volume of the drums, which I made clear by using different hitsounds. Also, circles give more emphasis than sliders imo therefore it would not make sense
  3. 00:15:104 (4) - A triple is better since the sound on the red and blue tick is the same. So what? The sound is also the same as the previous short reverse slider
  4. 00:20:455 (6,7) - The sounds here are different than the one on the other 1/4 sliders. A stream would be great to emphasize that. Hmm okay
  5. 00:35:050 (1,2,3) - Perhaps make the triangle larger for 00:34:401 (3,2) - to be properly stacked? I prefer keeping equal distances
  6. 00:50:779 (1) - A 1/2 slider seems to be better here to make 00:51:104 (2) - feel more comfortable. It's more of a feeling so idk your choice. Not necessary imo
  7. 01:27:752 (4) - Triples work better here. There's no reason for that
Desperation
  1. 00:08:296 (2) - Just a circle would fit here. The 1/4 rhythm actually starts at 00:07:809 - spanning for a whole measure with 00:08:458 (3,4,5,6) - having drums in them while the rest don't. Since you ignore the subtle 1/4 sounds on the first and second beat doing 00:08:296 (2) - won't really make sense. That's not true at all. There is a sound at 00:08:377 - although it's not that strong
  2. 01:08:458 (5,4) - Fix overlap :( Fixed
  3. The rest of the map is really straightforward with its rhythm and gameplay so I don't have anything wrong with them. Good job! Thanks!
Good luck with the mapset! o/
Ty :3

Firis Mistlud wrote:

From my queue

[General]
  1. Volume setting on your diffs and Normal could work harder, you used same volume setting on calmer parts (00:00:000 - , 00:20:782 - ) and stronger parts (00:10:404) and it's really plain Fixed in my diffs

[Insane]
  1. 00:10:890 (4,1) - symmetry Fixed
  2. 00:13:971 (5,1) - 00:19:161 (5,1) - 01:24:025 (5,1) - 01:26:620 (5,1) - etc. Unstack these? Stacking them makes the emphasis on finishes weaker It's fine imo
  3. 00:40:890 (1) - Offscreen. I'm not sure if this counts as offscreen
  4. Same problem as Desperation on volume settings Already fixed

[Desperation]
  1. 01:12:188 (4,5,6,7,1) - Make the spacing in this stream larger? to give better flow with the jump I like the streams this way
  2. 01:22:404 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^, yet it give more gradual slow down with 01:22:728 (7,8,1) - Same as above
  3. Solid Thanks!
Good luck~
Ty for the mod

Rougoku wrote:

no kd, not too much to report which hasn't really been said I guess I'm still giving you kudosu xd

[General]
Background size is too No.

[Easy]
00:36:350 (1) - I don't like it so much, most of your repeats on vocals are more curvy, and I find that this slider sticks really out compared to all others. Ok changing back to straight slider
01:20:620 (2) - 1/2 slider which is a little out of place, especially on an Easy. Moreover, the sound at 01:20:944 is pretty much the same, so that would mean that if you want to keep it, you need to put another 1/2 slider instead of the circle. Replaced by circle
Thanks for the mod
Kyle Y

Firis Mistlud wrote:

From my queue 嘩嘩原來你個queue 仲係到

[Ky's Hard]
  1. 同fapu嘅一樣,成個diff都無咩finish,況且開頭果度點解會咁多種hitsound嘅方法,00:10:404 - 果度用drum已經唔係幾合理,00:12:998 - 轉咗去soft,00:12:998 (1) - 先有claps
  2. 整體上除咗hitsound無咩問題
    我對我既Hard 有自信,只係對hit sound 冇自信
    話說我好似冇幫依張圖hit sound 過 :P
    睇黎係時候加hit sound 啦

Good luck~
Kyle Y
update: hit sound fix.

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-Atri-
Ya it touched the boundary of the screen, still count as offscreen

Faputa

Firis Mistlud wrote:

Ya it touched the boundary of the screen, still count as offscreen

🤔
Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki

Firis Mistlud wrote:

Ya it touched the boundary of the screen, still count as offscreen

Okay I will fix this, thanks for letting me know :)
Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki
Btw about the end of the song:
  1. Kyle Y, I think you made 01:33:107 (5) - too short by mistake, it should last until 01:33:431 -
  2. -Space-, I think you forgot to add a note at 01:33:431 - (and did you overlook Saltssaumure's mod or did you not reply bc it was so short xd)
Lafayla
from queue
really late D:
general suggestion -> i would suggest doing a harsher fade at the end of the mp3, optional though
Easy

00:29:863 (1,2) - this overlap is a bit painful to look at especially when rest of placement is clean
00:48:674 (4,2) - visual spacing bettween is much lower here, can be prettied up for better aesthetic try to match ->00:54:512 (1,2) - since this one was done p good
00:26:944 (2,3) - same thing ^
00:51:917 (1,2) - same thing ^
irohas

01:02:134 (1) - this hitsound is pretty scary D:
01:31:971 (3) - offscreen
cool diff tho
ky

00:43:809 (3,1) - visual spacing would look better if similar to 00:44:782 (2,3) -
00:55:809 (1,1) - this diff was pretty clean until this, i see the square pattern happening but im sure there is something cleaner that can be put here instead
00:57:107 - a circle for that cymbal crash hitsound would be cool and making the repeat just a 1/2 slider
elcheer

00:00:512 (4) - painful angle despite not being what you are emphasizing
00:04:566 (3,1) - ugly overlap
00:12:674 (5,1,2,3,4) - this can definitely be cleaned up
00:52:728 (4) - big spacing why?
00:53:863 (4) - emphasis spot in the middle of a tri pattern ... making something distinct for 00:53:863 (4,5) - would be better
01:24:188 (1) - would be better if visually similar to 00:10:890 (4,1) - and 00:13:485 (4,1) -
00:56:620 (6) - why the lower spacing? i don't hear anything significant changing inside this jump spam, also you can definitely make this star prettier
00:55:809 (1) - this object is offscreen by only 1 pixel
00:55:809 (1,2) - these would be better as claps rather than whistles because start of jump spam also drum is litterally the same
space

00:06:674 (2) - this wide angle and extra spacing seems a bit too harsh for this object especially when i expected emphasis on 00:06:512 (1) -
00:11:053 (4) - i don't understand the emphasis here, is this alt emphasis pattern intentional
00:15:593 - ignoring the melody for only mapping percussion sounds weird here, you can help this out by 00:16:242 (4) - switching this for 2 circles so that you still follow percussion but melody doesn't get left for dirt
00:18:836 (4) - same^
01:06:188 (1) - emphasis on this sounds weird because you left 01:06:025 - for a slider end

best of wishes with the mapset jack
Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki

Lafayla wrote:

from queue
really late D: no problem xd
general suggestion -> i would suggest doing a harsher fade at the end of the mp3, optional though I don't think it's necessary, I've already changed the mp3 and I don't wanna do it again lmao
Easy

00:29:863 (1,2) - this overlap is a bit painful to look at especially when rest of placement is clean Fixed
00:48:674 (4,2) - visual spacing bettween is much lower here, can be prettied up for better aesthetic try to match ->00:54:512 (1,2) - since this one was done p good Fixed
00:26:944 (2,3) - same thing ^ I think it's not that bad here and I didn't find a way to fix it properly anyways
00:51:917 (1,2) - same thing ^ Same as above
best of wishes with the mapset jack
Thank you :3
Aeo
Space's Insane
01:03:593 (1) - The vocals start on the red tick so I'd put this slider at 01:03:431 considering you did the same at01:04:728 (1)
01:06:188 (1) - Same for this, there's not any significant sound on the white tick
01:08:782 (1) - ^
01:11:377 (1) - ^
01:20:296 (1) - ^
01:25:647 (1) - There's a sound on a red tick so I'd say it would be better for the slider to be all notes
01:26:782 (1) - Stronger sound at the end of the slider so I'd suggest a rhythm like this? - https://puu.sh/yY5H4/927544690c.png
01:29:377 (1) - Same as 01:03:593 (1)
01:30:836 (1) - There's still a pretty noticeable sound on the red tick here as well
01:33:431 - Note here?
Tiff
hai NM here
erm I cant see that much problems but here are some advices
Easy
01:12:512 (1) - I'm not sure if stacking circles at the end of slider in easy is rankable, I recommend not tho. Easy usually keep their slider tails clear
01:21:431 - I could hear a heavy beat here, extend 01:21:593 (4) - to 01:21:593 (4) -
Hard
just a question, but why would u put a circle here 00:04:242 (2) - why don't you extend the slider instead?
01:08:134 (3,4,5) - stack? looks better
01:09:431 (3,4,5) - ^
ok that's it I am only good modding low levels
btw I like your map so a star and I like honeyworks and their songs too :P
good luck PLS RANK
Josh123uaJ
Ayy from q. Sry for being late.

I don't have much to say since this map is already solid.

Insane:
01:11:215 (1) - The slider head looks too close to the two circles nearby. Move it a way just a bit.
01:18:674 (4,5) - Move it down a bit so that they are equally spaced from the slidertail of (2). Makes it look a little better imo.
01:20:782 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Probably picky but the spacing increase from each note is uneven. Make the spacing increase consistent.

Fapu's Extra:
00:20:458 (4,5,6,7) - Claps are missing.
00:30:998 (7,9,10) - ^
01:32:782 (3,4) - I think this can be replaced by circles since you used them in areas like 00:20:458 (4,5,6,7).

Desperation:
01:20:944 (3,4,5,6) - Imo, these jumps are too large even if there's strong drum sounds. Maybe reduce spacing to 4.7x or 4.8x

Nice mapset and GL reaching rank! :)
Elcheer

Lafayla wrote:

elcheer

00:00:512 (4) - painful angle despite not being what you are emphasizing i honestly think this is fine
00:04:566 (3,1) - ugly overlap somewhat fixed
00:12:674 (5,1,2,3,4) - this can definitely be cleaned up somewhat fixed
00:52:728 (4) - big spacing why? somewhat fixed
00:53:863 (4) - emphasis spot in the middle of a tri pattern ... making something distinct for 00:53:863 (4,5) - would be better did...something with it
01:24:188 (1) - would be better if visually similar to 00:10:890 (4,1) - and 00:13:485 (4,1) - eh...would rather not
00:56:620 (6) - why the lower spacing? i don't hear anything significant changing inside this jump spam, also you can definitely make this star prettier did something with this, somewhat fixed
00:55:809 (1) - this object is offscreen by only 1 pixel fixed
00:55:809 (1,2) - these would be better as claps rather than whistles because start of jump spam also drum is litterally the same fixed
wew lad
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gonna put a little thing in here too
Desperation


hitsounding

01:00:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - clap whistle whistle clap whistle whistle clap
Irohas
did something thx!!
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Title:Jakusha no Sengen
TitleUnicode:弱者の宣言
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243,50,12025,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,103,12350,2,0,P|339:106|366:112,2,55,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,139,12998,6,0,P|211:186|240:244,1,110,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,286,13647,2,0,P|301:317|294:356,2,55,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,261,14134,2,0,P|395:253|450:246,1,110,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
487,223,14620,1,8,0:0:0:0:
433,153,14944,5,6,0:0:0:0:
492,87,15269,1,12,0:0:0:0:
425,29,15593,6,0,P|373:13|322:35,1,110,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,88,16242,2,0,P|263:127|273:166,2,55,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,57,16728,2,0,P|167:63|113:71,1,110,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,64,17215,1,8,0:0:0:0:
0,118,17539,2,0,P|7:151|17:189,1,55,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,212,17863,1,8,0:0:0:0:
114,194,18188,6,0,P|105:249|97:303,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,336,18836,2,0,P|184:303|193:257,2,55,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,366,19323,2,0,P|262:382|313:360,1,110,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,322,19809,1,8,0:0:0:0:
411,357,20134,1,8,0:0:0:0:
487,314,20458,2,8,P|481:276|477:249,1,55
449,226,20782,6,0,P|457:171|466:117,1,110,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,55,21431,1,2,0:0:0:0:
325,96,21755,1,2,0:0:0:0:
250,48,22080,2,0,P|213:52|127:64,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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11,84,23053,2,0,P|18:117|28:155,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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59,356,24025,2,0,P|110:375|168:349,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,317,24512,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,317,24674,2,0,P|231:298|289:324,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,380,25323,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,333,25647,1,2,0:0:0:0:
489,384,25971,6,0,P|500:330|511:276,1,110,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,214,26620,1,2,0:0:0:0:
493,139,26944,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,68,27269,2,0,P|395:53|338:78,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,137,27917,2,0,P|270:191|264:246,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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121,339,29539,1,2,0:0:0:0:
199,378,29863,2,0,P|235:372|275:367,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,348,30188,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,348,30350,2,0,P|326:350|414:358,1,110,8|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
445,350,30836,2,8,L|431:284,1,55
408,259,31161,6,8,P|416:207|426:137,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,82,31809,2,0,P|472:46|465:15,2,55,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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245,103,33107,2,0,P|253:67|260:36,1,55,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,9,33431,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,53,33755,6,0,P|122:49|46:41,1,110,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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430,147,38296,2,0,P|396:151|359:157,1,55,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,181,38620,1,8,0:0:0:0:
266,132,38944,6,0,P|228:128|152:120,1,110,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
86,67,39593,2,0,P|56:63|21:72,2,55,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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211,370,41215,1,8,0:3:0:0:
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483,172,42836,2,0,P|433:154|380:176,1,110,2|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,239,43485,2,0,P|272:257|219:235,1,110,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
152,181,44134,6,0,B|128:243|128:243|162:318|162:318|137:385,1,220,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,378,45107,2,0,P|270:368|303:361,1,55,2|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,352,45431,2,0,P|346:357|373:363,1,55,2|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,352,45755,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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499,101,46728,6,0,P|449:145|344:61,1,220,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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261,111,48025,2,0,P|218:106|136:96,1,110,2|6,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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109,220,48998,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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344,262,50458,2,0,P|334:316|325:379,1,110,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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420,212,54512,5,2,0:0:0:0:
376,288,54836,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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83,336,56458,2,8,P|78:299|75:271,1,55
45,249,56782,2,8,P|50:212|53:184,1,55
68,152,57107,5,6,0:0:0:0:
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427,210,61647,2,0,P|421:251|410:329,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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265,297,62620,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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202,229,64404,2,0,P|194:198|185:156,1,55,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,135,64728,6,0,P|258:116|316:142,1,110,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,168,65215,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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430,148,66025,2,0,P|424:189|413:267,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,319,66674,2,0,P|299:313|221:307,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,289,67161,1,8,0:0:0:0:
202,289,67323,6,0,P|147:293|92:299,1,110,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
51,283,67809,1,8,0:0:0:0:
77,198,68134,2,0,P|69:167|60:125,1,55,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,105,68458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,105,68620,2,0,P|139:109|194:115,1,110,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,137,69107,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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259,322,71701,1,12,0:0:0:0:
181,363,72025,2,0,P|153:359|126:356,1,55,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
82,356,72350,1,8,0:0:0:0:
82,356,72512,6,0,B|60:309|60:309|83:251,1,110,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,226,72998,1,12,0:0:0:0:
191,181,73323,2,0,P|184:140|179:111,2,55,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,211,73809,2,0,P|216:252|205:330,2,110,2|2|2,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,155,74782,2,0,P|329:164|360:173,1,55,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,193,75107,6,0,P|373:138|364:84,1,110,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
377,42,75593,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,18,75917,2,0,P|264:22|237:25,1,55,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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199,47,76404,2,0,P|144:41|89:37,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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72,211,77539,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,211,77701,6,0,P|62:265|54:319,1,110,6|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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330,343,79485,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki

tiffany yu tyu wrote:

hai NM here
erm I cant see that much problems but here are some advices
Easy
01:12:512 (1) - I'm not sure if stacking circles at the end of slider in easy is rankable, I recommend not tho. Easy usually keep their slider tails clear It's rankable and I need to this because I can't omit this sound
01:21:431 - I could hear a heavy beat here, extend 01:21:593 (4) - to 01:21:593 (4) - Yeah there is a drum but I can't map it because it's too close to the guitar sound that follows and it would be too hard for an Easy
ok that's it I am only good modding low levels
btw I like your map so a star and I like honeyworks and their songs too :P
good luck PLS RANK
Thank you! :3

Josh123uaJ wrote:

Ayy from q. Sry for being late.

I don't have much to say since this map is already solid. Thx

Insane:
01:11:215 (1) - The slider head looks too close to the two circles nearby. Move it a way just a bit. I did this in order to make perfect star patterns here
01:18:674 (4,5) - Move it down a bit so that they are equally spaced from the slidertail of (2). Makes it look a little better imo. Fixed
01:20:782 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Probably picky but the spacing increase from each note is uneven. Make the spacing increase consistent. Fixed

Desperation:
01:20:944 (3,4,5,6) - Imo, these jumps are too large even if there's strong drum sounds. Maybe reduce spacing to 4.7x or 4.8x I agree but I can't do it because the star rating will become lower than Fapu's Extra

Nice mapset and GL reaching rank! :)
Thank you!

Elcheer wrote:

gonna put a little thing in here too
Desperation


hitsounding

01:00:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - clap whistle whistle clap whistle whistle clap I know that the drums are a bit different but a whistle is too weak here imo, the difference can still be heard because of the song itself but thanks for the suggestion
salchow
From my modding queue

Poii's Muzukashii

00:07:161 (19) - change this note to k right here because it fits with d k d/k d k patterns: 00:04:566 (11,12,13) - 00:05:863 (15,16,17)

K d would reflect pitch way better. :

00:10:404 (32,33)

00:12:998 (43,44)

00:15:593 (55,56)

00:18:188 (66,67)

And then at kai:

01:23:053 (313,314)

01:25:647 (324,325)

01:28:242 (336,337)

01:30:836 (347,348)

01:33:107 (5,6)


00:49:647 (182,183) - Ctrl +g these two notes, because the 00:49:647 (182) note is stronger than 00:49:971 (183) note.


Poii's Oni

00:06:998 (26) - I think you should move this note to: 00:06:674 and chnage this note to d: 00:06:512 (24) because I feel that this sound should be mapped: 00:06:674

If you have changed these parts on muzukashii: 00:10:404 (41,42) Then you should do it on oni.

00:40:890 (187,188,189,190,191,192,193) - Unrankable issue: Patterns on snaps faster than 1/8 are disallowed. These patterns are too complex for the target audience of this difficulty level. (Ranking criteria) change the stream to 1/6th beats and change it to dkkdkkd to make it more simple.


Gl ranking it :)
Spayyce
@J a c k , I sent you one of my updated diffs but you didn't apply it ~.~

Aeo wrote:

Space's Insane
01:03:593 (1) - The vocals start on the red tick so I'd put this slider at 01:03:431 considering you did the same at01:04:728 (1)
01:06:188 (1) - Same for this, there's not any significant sound on the white tick
01:08:782 (1) - ^
01:11:377 (1) - ^
01:20:296 (1) - ^
01:25:647 (1) - There's a sound on a red tick so I'd say it would be better for the slider to be all notes
01:26:782 (1) - Stronger sound at the end of the slider so I'd suggest a rhythm like this? - https://puu.sh/yY5H4/927544690c.png
01:29:377 (1) - Same as 01:03:593 (1)
01:30:836 (1) - There's still a pretty noticeable sound on the red tick here as well
01:33:431 - Note here?
I can hear quite strong emphasis on the some of the downbeats throughout the song, but I have changed quite a significant number of these in a profound way, thank you very much for the mod.

Lafayla wrote:

from queue
space

00:06:674 (2) - this wide angle and extra spacing seems a bit too harsh for this object especially when i expected emphasis on 00:06:512 (1) - They are both emphasising the emphasis, especially the different angle the player approaches.
00:11:053 (4) - i don't understand the emphasis here, is this alt emphasis pattern intentional It's a blanket for the notes
00:15:593 - ignoring the melody for only mapping percussion sounds weird here, you can help this out by 00:16:242 (4) - switching this for 2 circles so that you still follow percussion but melody doesn't get left for dirt It's the same noteset as before, and after
00:18:836 (4) - same^ It's following everything that the song gives?
01:06:188 (1) - emphasis on this sounds weird because you left 01:06:025 - for a slider end I have changed this, thanks c:

best of wishes with the mapset jack
Thank for for the mod!

aa
osu file format v14

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Title:Jakusha no Sengen
TitleUnicode:弱者の宣言
Artist:HoneyWorks feat. Gero
ArtistUnicode:HoneyWorks feat. Gero
Creator:J a c k
Version:Space's Insane
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Tags:Irohas MugiwaraSekai Kyle_Y Elcheer -Space- Faputa Poii
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Poii

salchow wrote:

From my modding queue

Poii's Muzukashii

00:07:161 (19) - change this note to k right here because it fits with d k d/k d k patterns: 00:04:566 (11,12,13) - 00:05:863 (15,16,17) ok

K d would reflect pitch way better. :

00:10:404 (32,33)

00:12:998 (43,44)

00:15:593 (55,56)

00:18:188 (66,67)

And then at kai:

01:23:053 (313,314)

01:25:647 (324,325)

01:28:242 (336,337)

01:30:836 (347,348)

01:33:107 (5,6) the 2nd note have snare sound


00:49:647 (182,183) - Ctrl +g these two notes, because the 00:49:647 (182) note is stronger than 00:49:971 (183) note. 183 have both snare and vocal, so i'll keep ti since it have strong sound


Poii's Oni

00:06:998 (26) - I think you should move this note to: 00:06:674 and chnage this note to d: 00:06:512 (24) because I feel that this sound should be mapped: 00:06:674 00:06:350 - better for me

If you have changed these parts on muzukashii: 00:10:404 (41,42) Then you should do it on oni.

00:40:890 (187,188,189,190,191,192,193) - Unrankable issue: Patterns on snaps faster than 1/8 are disallowed. These patterns are too complex for the target audience of this difficulty level. (Ranking criteria) change the stream to 1/6th beats and change it to dkkdkkd to make it more simple. i dunno why that note snapped in 1/8 but i make it 1/6 before, yeah turn it back


Gl ranking it :)
Muzu

Oni
tutuhaha
M4M

[Easy]
00:55:161 (2) - already touch HP bar so move down litter bit
01:01:647 (2,1) - hmmmm.....personally I dont think you can use some rhythm like this on Easy diff....maybe try something like this?

01:12:025 (2,1) - same
01:22:404 (5,1) - make them parallel

[Normal]
00:20:458 (6) - I suggest just use one circle on here instand of a 1/4 slider
00:35:053 (3,4,5) - rhythm like this?


[Hard]
00:25:323 (3) - rhythm like this?

01:01:161 (2,3,4) - hmmm............I dont suggest doing overlap on 2,3.......it just...give really bad feeling when u playing
01:16:728 (2) - move down litter bit, already touch HP bar
01:20:296 (1,2) - just, merge them together, it will be much better /-\
01:33:431 (x) - I will add circle on here and add finish

[Insane]
00:08:296 (2) - delete slider and add circle?the rhythm:

01:27:431 (3,4,5,6) - rhythm

01:33:107 (1) - NC maybe?

[Space's Insane]
00:09:431 (x) - rhythm

00:59:053 (4) - ctrl+g
00:59:701 (1) - and then ctrl+g this too
01:17:863 (1) - ........The hitsound begin right here become the really werid feeling..........

GOOD xD! Love this song, fighting!!!
Rossi
Hi~
From My Queue

Taiko Modding :

[Poii's Muzukashii]
00:13:647 (45) - Mungkin pindah ke 00:13:485 - ? sedikit variasi mungkin gk apa. Cocok juga sih nadanya
00:18:836 (68) - kalau setuju dengan yg diatas, ini juga sama

00:31:161 (119) - Finisher? ada cymbal sound here
00:45:917 (167) - d? emphasize dengan 00:46:242 (168,169) -

01:26:296 (326) - kalau yg tadi setuju dengan yg diatas, ini disamain. Ntar note yg selanjut nya juga


[Poii's Oni]
00:26:458 (119) - d? ngikutin vocal sih. Untuk Muzu gk usah dirubah karna cocok dengan k
Oni udh sip, tinggal menyamai dengan perubahan Muzu^ (kalau setuju dengan mod nya xD)


The map looking good.
Go ranked :)
Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki

tutuhaha wrote:

M4M

[Easy]
00:55:161 (2) - already touch HP bar so move down litter bit Fixed
01:01:647 (2,1) - hmmmm.....personally I dont think you can use some rhythm like this on Easy diff....maybe try something like this?
It's not prohibited to use this rhythm in Easy, especially if it's only used twice. Your suggestion is not really accurate rhythm-wise imo
01:12:025 (2,1) - same ^
01:22:404 (5,1) - make them parallel Fixed

[Insane]
00:08:296 (2) - delete slider and add circle?the rhythm:
There's a sound on the sliderend
01:27:431 (3,4,5,6) - rhythm
Not very accurate and i also don't like placing circles after a slider if there's a 1/4 gap
01:33:107 (1) - NC maybe? I think it's fine like this

GOOD xD! Love this song, fighting!!!
Thank you! I'm gonna mod your map soon
Seolv
from queue

[- - Insane - -]
  1. 00:05:377 (2) - Make the spacing smaller because compared to 00:04:566 (3,1) - (which is a 1/1 gap) the spacing is equal which can be confusing
  2. 00:11:377 (5,1) - Why did you stack these? There's a cymbal on (1) that deserves more spacing (same for all other stacks in this section in the same part)
  3. 00:33:431 (5,3) - Avoiding this overlap would be a good idea
  4. 00:48:836 (3) - Make the sliderend clickable because the vocals on 00:48:836 - seem to be quieter than the ones on 00:48:998 -
  5. 00:55:161 (3,4) - Make these curved to differentiate them from the previous sliders that were following the instrumental.
  6. 00:56:458 (5,6,7,8,1) - This shape isn't perfectly made which can look pretty messy, also major overlapping there that you might want to avoid just to make your map look cleaner.
  7. 01:00:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - First off, you should put NC on 01:01:485 (4) - because of the repeated part in the song. Second, you should make a spacing difference between 01:01:161 (2,3,5,6) - and 01:00:998 (1,4,7) - because ones have drums and others don't
  8. 01:02:134 (1) - Can give more emphasis to this slider because of the strong vocal + drum
  9. 01:33:107 (6) - There's a pretty strong cymbal and vocal on this beat, should be clickable.
  10. What I noticed in this diff is that most of your patterns seem really clustered which is also shown when you Ctrl+A, also most of your jumps are the same regardless of the intensity of the song so you should work on that as well

[- - Elcheer's Insane - -]
  1. 00:01:323 (1,2,3) - Why didn't you make these equally spaced?
  2. 00:02:296 (5,6) - This is a very calm section and you already have very spaced jumps like these, I recommend that you scale them down and make them smaller so that they fit the intensity, it also gives more contrast from the kiai (which is the most intense part)
  3. 00:15:107 (6,8) - There are no sounds on these beats, delete these circles
  4. 00:17:215 (2,3) - Stack to represent the same guitar pitch
  5. 00:20:133 (6) - Try to give this more emphasis by making 00:19:971 (4) - into a kickslider
  6. 00:20:782 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing
  7. 00:23:377 (1,2,3,4) - A lot of overmapping here, maybe try putting more sliders instead to represent vocals?
  8. 00:41:215 (2) - Space more to avoid the pattern looking clustered
  9. 00:41:539 (1) - Put more spacing emphasis on this slider
  10. 01:10:728 (4) - Move upwards more to make it look better
  11. 01:12:107 (2) - There's not a sound on this circle
  12. 01:12:998 (2) - More spacing to make emphasis
  13. 01:15:107 (1) - Same here
  14. What I noticed is that your rhythm doesn't make sense and so doesn't your spacing, you should rethink of a way to emphasize a certain instrument like vocals or guitar in one section and not mix it up because it's a lot cleaner, also put more spacing emphasis on strong sounds

[- - Desperation - -]
  1. 00:00:674 (4) - Flows badly because this slider is tilted, fix
  2. 00:08:296 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make this gradually increase in spacing because of the increase in intensity in the song
  3. 00:22:566 (2,3) - Ctrl+J to improve the flow and move it, something like this should work
  4. 00:29:863 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This jumps are way overdone because the drums aren't even loud and you're putting high spacing, unless on 00:30:836 (7) - where the drum is strong
  5. 00:31:161 - This section deserves overall bigger spacing to differentiate it from 00:20:782 - since now the intensity is bigger
  6. 00:37:323 (5) - Deserves bigger spacing because drum
  7. 00:52:080 (2) - There isn't a strong sound on this beat which means you should make the spacing here smaller
  8. 00:55:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Make the spacing gradually increase because of the increasing intensity of the drums
  9. 01:00:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as on the Insane
  10. 01:12:188 (4,5,6,7) - Make the spacing bigger because of the intensity
  11. 01:33:107 (7) - Same as on the Insane
Kyle Y

J a c k wrote:

Btw about the end of the song:
  1. Kyle Y, I think you made 01:33:107 (5) - too short by mistake, it should last until 01:33:431 - fixed

Lafayla wrote:

ky

00:43:809 (3,1) - visual spacing would look better if similar to 00:44:782 (2,3) - fixed
00:55:809 (1,1) - this diff was pretty clean until this, i see the square pattern happening but im sure there is something cleaner that can be put here instead remain, to warn similar pattern will be used afterward
00:57:107 - a circle for that cymbal crash hitsound would be cool and making the repeat just a 1/2 slider remain, using circle without jump cannot have that effect.

best of wishes with the mapset jack

tiffany yu tyu wrote:

hai NM here
[Hard]just a question, but why would u put a circle here 00:04:242 (2) - why don't you extend the slider instead? beat is strong to use extented. and this song consis of a number of extented, so extented can be used in this way.
01:08:134 (3,4,5) - stack? looks better intend to do so.
01:09:431 (3,4,5) - ^[/box]
ok that's it I am only good modding low levels
btw I like your map so a star and I like honeyworks and their songs too :P
good luck PLS RANK

tutuhaha wrote:

[Hard]
00:25:323 (3) - rhythm like this?

01:01:161 (2,3,4) - hmmm............I dont suggest doing overlap on 2,3.......it just...give really bad feeling when u playingI think there is no problem, wait for further modding.
01:16:728 (2) - move down litter bit, already touch HP bar fixed, finally someone mentioned it. I know this problem before and lazy to fix.
01:20:296 (1,2) - just, merge them together, it will be much better /-\ both are okay, then I remain.
01:33:431 (x) - I will add circle on here and add finish fixed.
ky's update
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333,65,71053,1,8,0:0:0:0:
305,150,71215,6,0,P|250:100|271:1,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,35,71701,2,0,L|67:48,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
27,113,72025,1,8,0:0:0:0:
95,171,72188,2,0,L|64:200,3,37.5,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
50,210,72512,6,0,P|134:229|150:308,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,364,72998,2,0,P|158:372|220:349,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,323,73323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,253,73485,2,0,L|421:229,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,194,73809,6,0,P|461:164|428:146,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
433,56,74134,2,0,P|396:60|364:80,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,32,74458,2,0,P|274:66|275:103,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,140,74782,2,0,P|216:169|249:187,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,253,75107,6,0,P|257:231|177:269,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,335,75593,2,0,P|107:352|47:342,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,263,75917,2,0,P|86:225|59:169,1,75
7,130,76242,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,113,76404,6,0,L|176:123,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,33,76728,2,0,L|253:82,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,33,77053,2,0,L|332:115,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,154,77377,2,0,L|384:181,2,37.5,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
445,72,77701,6,0,P|449:153|495:216,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,335,78188,2,0,P|431:298|407:270,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,262,78512,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,338,78674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
394,262,78836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
289,272,78998,6,0,P|220:307|142:262,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,218,79485,2,0,P|226:183|214:134,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,181,79809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,122,79971,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,90,80134,1,8,0:0:0:0:
219,123,80296,6,0,P|273:126|329:82,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,77,80620,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,122,80782,2,0,P|419:163|415:210,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,291,81107,2,0,P|323:253|330:217,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,335,81431,1,8,0:0:0:0:
302,296,81593,6,0,P|221:279|137:309,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,357,82080,2,0,P|73:323|69:286,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,204,82404,2,0,L|96:164,3,37.5,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,144,82728,2,0,L|110:96,3,37.5,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,85,83053,6,0,P|76:77|25:40,2,75,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,61,83539,2,0,P|254:31|338:67,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,146,84025,1,8,0:0:0:0:
266,120,84188,6,0,P|273:192|332:233,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,209,84674,2,0,P|438:174|441:131,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
510,219,84998,2,0,P|516:272|508:348,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
491,344,85323,1,8,0:0:0:0:
311,348,85647,6,0,P|268:366|219:363,2,75,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,293,86134,2,0,P|311:309|251:268,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,178,86620,1,8,0:0:0:0:
283,94,86782,6,0,B|313:102|331:136|331:136|327:221,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,195,87269,1,8,0:0:0:0:
495,157,87431,1,2,0:0:0:0:
495,157,87512,1,0,0:0:0:0:
495,157,87593,2,0,P|507:97|503:33,1,112.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
501,22,87917,1,8,0:0:0:0:
321,11,88242,6,0,P|285:2|249:8,2,75,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,94,88728,2,0,P|214:95|157:26,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
73,18,89215,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,93,89377,6,0,P|17:152|24:254,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,327,89863,2,0,P|84:334|121:327,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,336,90188,2,0,P|184:268|128:240,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,240,90512,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,140,90836,6,0,P|317:144|351:168,2,75,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,51,91323,2,0,P|364:67|423:112,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,202,91809,1,8,0:0:0:0:
499,257,91971,6,0,P|424:252|349:260,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,321,92458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,321,92620,1,2,0:0:0:0:
209,236,92782,2,0,P|203:188|212:121,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
223,105,93107,2,0,P|232:179|224:253,1,150,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki

[ L u k a s ] wrote:

from queue

[- - Insane - -]
  1. 00:05:377 (2) - Make the spacing smaller because compared to 00:04:566 (3,1) - (which is a 1/1 gap) the spacing is equal which can be confusing Fixed
  2. 00:11:377 (5,1) - Why did you stack these? There's a cymbal on (1) that deserves more spacing (same for all other stacks in this section in the same part) I know but at the same time there's a stronger drum on (5) and I can't really emphasize both because then it would not be different, I feel like this part is really hard to give the right emphasis because almost all sounds are important. I am not really bothered by the stacks tbh and I would have to remap the entire part which is just annoying but I will keep it in mind
  3. 00:33:431 (5,3) - Avoiding this overlap would be a good idea Fixed
  4. 00:48:836 (3) - Make the sliderend clickable because the vocals on 00:48:836 - seem to be quieter than the ones on 00:48:998 - Yeah but using 2 circles would mean that they are also equally important so it wouldn't really change the emphasis here, I think it's fine like this because the whole section is calm
  5. 00:55:161 (3,4) - Make these curved to differentiate them from the previous sliders that were following the instrumental. Fixed
  6. 00:56:458 (5,6,7,8,1) - This shape isn't perfectly made which can look pretty messy, also major overlapping there that you might want to avoid just to make your map look cleaner. Remapped and fixed
  7. 01:00:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - First off, you should put NC on 01:01:485 (4) - because of the repeated part in the song. Second, you should make a spacing difference between 01:01:161 (2,3,5,6) - and 01:00:998 (1,4,7) - because ones have drums and others don't Nope, I consider them all as one group so no NC here imo. Also, they all have drums but they are just not the same type of drums, I will keep this pattern
  8. 01:02:134 (1) - Can give more emphasis to this slider because of the strong vocal + drum It already has the most emphasis, no need to exaggerate
  9. 01:33:107 (6) - There's a pretty strong cymbal and vocal on this beat, should be clickable. Fixed
  10. What I noticed in this diff is that most of your patterns seem really clustered which is also shown when you Ctrl+A, also most of your jumps are the same regardless of the intensity of the song so you should work on that as well I improved some patterns

[- - Desperation - -]
  1. 00:00:674 (4) - Flows badly because this slider is tilted, fix Yup
  2. 00:08:296 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make this gradually increase in spacing because of the increase in intensity in the song It's already increasing
  3. 00:22:566 (2,3) - Ctrl+J to improve the flow and move it, something like this should work Ok changed this pattern
  4. 00:29:863 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This jumps are way overdone because the drums aren't even loud and you're putting high spacing, unless on 00:30:836 (7) - where the drum is strong Nope, the drums are strong and the jumps are not even big lmao
  5. 00:31:161 - This section deserves overall bigger spacing to differentiate it from 00:20:782 - since now the intensity is bigger Could be,
    but I think the fact that I mapped the drums and not the vocals here is already differentiating it enough
  6. 00:37:323 (5) - Deserves bigger spacing because drum It's not different than other drums so why would I do that
  7. 00:52:080 (2) - There isn't a strong sound on this beat which means you should make the spacing here smaller Yeah but this is to indicate that it's part of the vocals because I separated vocals and instrumental parts in this section
  8. 00:55:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Make the spacing gradually increase because of the increasing intensity of the drums The spacing is already increasing
  9. 01:00:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as on the Insane This is perfectly fine
  10. 01:12:188 (4,5,6,7) - Make the spacing bigger because of the intensity No, I prefer keeping consistency for aesthetics
  11. 01:33:107 (7) - Same as on the Insane Fixed
Thanks for the mod! :3
igorsprite
i love honeyworks without chico *-*

Poii's Oni
  • ● this bug xd, open the .osu and change manually the SV to 1.40 again
    ● 00:06:512 - change to d and move 00:06:350 - to 00:06:674 - since you did the same thing here 00:05:215 (19,20,21) -
    ● 01:22:404 (370,371,372,373,374,375) - change to this? (kkddk d D)
    ● 00:15:107 (64,65,66) - change to kkd? have a different sound from 00:14:782 (61,62,63) - but it's mapped with ddk too
    ● 01:27:755 (399,400,401) - ^
    ● 00:20:296 (90,91,92) - ^ (but make kkddddk)
    i will play a lot this diff when you fix :3

Poii's Muzukashii
● 00:15:107 (52,53) - move to 00:14:701 - , follow better the sound
● 01:27:755 (333,334) - ^
● 00:41:863 - green line here with 0.75x?
● ^ if yes put a green line here 00:51:917 - with 1.00x
● 00:57:755 - green line here with 0.75x?
● ^ if yes put a green line here 01:00:998 - with 1.00x
● 01:04:080 - d? follow better the vocal
● 01:10:242 - d? you did the same thing here 01:08:620 (248,249) -
D o t
requested by J a c k.

[Poii's Oni]
pls fixed the SV to 1.40. it's 1.96 now.
01:20:296 (360,367) - why finish here? i felt inconsistence.
01:22:647 - how about add a d?

[Poii's Muzukashii]
00:31:161 (119) - can add a finish here.
00:56:620 (206) - change to k? the same sound as 205, 207, 208.
01:20:296 (300,306) - same as Oni.

that's all. good luck
Poii
im very tired rn, will check the mod tmr, yeah RIP irl work
im sorry for the delay
Saoji
[Easy]
  1. 00:21:755 (2,2,1) - All those overlaps look a bit messy. And also because of that, the space used from 00:18:188 (1) - to 00:31:161 (1) - is really restricted.
  2. 01:05:539 (2,1) - ^ try to make 01:07:323 (1) - go on the bottom of the screen. https://puu.sh/z3Qjt/32e1331d76.png
  3. 01:21:431 - You should add a note here to avoid the polarity issue and beat is quite audible too.
[Irohas' Normal]
  1. 01:27:269 (4) - Would be more accurate to put the NC here and remove it from 01:27:593 (1) - (or simply remove the NC)
  2. 01:32:458 (4) - Then you could add one here to stay constant.
[Ky's Hard]
  1. 00:09:107 (5) - Placing this note around x336y232 would give a better flow.
  2. 00:24:674 (1) - There's nothing that really supports a 1/4 in the music here, 1/2 would follow the melody as well and be more natural especially for a hard diff
  3. 00:35:701 (3) - Same here, if you want to emphasize vocal you can put a 1/1 instead.
  4. 01:33:107 (5) - Pattern looks cool, but shouldn't this slider be 1/4 (same as you did for 01:32:782 (4) - )
[Insane]
  1. 00:39:269 (2) - stacking with 00:38:458 (4) - would give a neater feel.
  2. 01:20:944 (3,5) - Try lower them by 1 grid so it won't touch the hp bar. It's not really neat right now.
[Space's Insane]
  1. 00:05:215 (1,2) - I feel the emphasize you want to give is a bit waster because the flow is a bit poor. 00:04:890 (4,1) - is less spaced than 00:04:566 (3,4) - Also I'd suggest to move 00:05:215 (1) - around x488y192
  2. 00:06:350 (3,1,2) - Same here 3 notes has the same distance while making a jump only for those 2 00:06:512 (1,2) - would give way more impact.
  3. 01:19:161 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't think the progressive spacing change is fitting here. Actually you could even put a 1/2 slider here 01:19:809 (5) - But well... If you want to keep this rhythm, you could put 01:19:647 (4,6) - on the same line that 01:19:323 (2) - just as you did for 01:19:161 (1,3,5) - It would look better too.
[Fapu's Extra]
  1. 00:07:161 (4,5) - Rhythm is inconsistent with 00:07:809 (1) - and 00:07:809 (1,2) - is hard to read because besides expecting the same rhythm, it's viusally the same DS than 000:07:161 (4,5) -
[Desperation]
  1. You should reduce hitsounds of this part to 25% or smthing. It's really loud as it is right now.
Kyle Y

Yales wrote:

[Ky's Hard]
  1. 00:09:107 (5) - Placing this note around x336y232 would give a better flow. remain, minor. flowing here do not affect too much.
  2. 00:24:674 (1) - There's nothing that really supports a 1/4 in the music here, 1/2 would follow the melody as well and be more natural especially for a hard diff but it is quite boring for the repeated rhythm.
  3. 00:35:701 (3) - Same here, if you want to emphasize vocal you can put a 1/1 instead. slider end cannot emphasis anything,
    also it is boring to have only 1/2 and 1/1
  4. 01:33:107 (5) - Pattern looks cool, but shouldn't this slider be 1/4 (same as you did for 01:32:782 (4) - )it is the same as
    01:30:188 (3) - 01:27:593 (5) - 01:24:998 (3) - . If you talk about 01:33:107 (5) - should be a circle, then my response is that this slider is to show the end of the song.
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No change.
Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki

Yales wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:21:755 (2,2,1) - All those overlaps look a bit messy. And also because of that, the space used from 00:18:188 (1) - to 00:31:161 (1) - is really restricted. I don't really agree because the overlaps are distant in time and they are necessary to create good patterns. The space used is completely irrelevant tbh
  2. 01:05:539 (2,1) - ^ try to make 01:07:323 (1) - go on the bottom of the screen. https://puu.sh/z3Qjt/32e1331d76.png Why tho, it would only break flow
  3. 01:21:431 - You should add a note here to avoid the polarity issue and beat is quite audible too. Nah that would be too hard for an Easy
[Insane]
  1. 00:39:269 (2) - stacking with 00:38:458 (4) - would give a neater feel. Fixed
  2. 01:20:944 (3,5) - Try lower them by 1 grid so it won't touch the hp bar. It's not really neat right now. Fixed
[Desperation]
  1. You should reduce hitsounds of this part to 25% or smthing. It's really loud as it is right now. Which part? Hitsound volume seems fine imo
Thanks for the mod :D
- Pika
Azzy here!

Desperation
To start, the jumps are very uncomfortable, maybe try to make them not so overlapped please?
Unless that's what you want, ignore this! :D

These are my personal opinions, you don't have to do any of these.

00:00:026 - Maybe this at x124 y188?
00:00:350 - x357 y 200?
00:00:512 - x252 y104?
00:00:674 - x288 y260?
These bother me because they were a bit to close.

00:05:215 - I think this should be at coordinates = x320 y232?
00:10:566 - Put at the end of the 2nd slider before?
00:10:890 - x368 y96?
00:21:384 - x280 y200?
00:40:890 - 00:41:431 - 3 note mini jump? Your choice. :D
01:08:458 - x156 y164?
01:09:712 - x420 y200?

Weird cut off at the end, wot.
You didn't specify which diff you wanted modded so... I only modded this!
Want more? PM me!
Azzy~
Saoji

J a c k wrote:

[Desperation]
  1. You should reduce hitsounds of this part to 25% or smthing. It's really loud as it is right now. Which part? Hitsound volume seems fine imo
Oops, I was talking about this part 00:57:755 (1) - (it's -really- loud)

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And, I don't really care, but while I'm at it: I'll develop my opinion.

when you say for easy:

00:21:755 (2,2,1) - All those overlaps look a bit messy. And also because of that, the space used from 00:18:188 (1) - to 00:31:161 (1) - is really restricted. I don't really agree because the overlaps are distant in time and they are necessary to create good patterns. The space used is completely irrelevant tbh
-> https://puu.sh/z4Fov/4d54945dbd.jpg this is the area you used for 20 seconds straight in a song of 1 min 33. If it's not relevant gameplay wise, it might be seen as a (rankable) quality issue to your map. (And no, random overlaps aren't "necessary" but it's not an obligation to avoid them! It would just improve visual quality. That was my point. I guess nobody cares about that anymore though xd

01:05:539 (2,1) - ^ try to make 01:07:323 (1) - go on the bottom of the screen. https://puu.sh/z3Qjt/32e1331d76.png Why tho, it would only break flow
-> Because the random overlap : 01:05:539 (2,1) - doesn't look good at all (tail not centered). but ye subjectivityyyyy

For hard diff

00:09:107 (5) - Placing this note around x336y232 would give a better flow. remain, minor. flowing here do not affect too much.
-> Might be minor but this is a suggestion to improve (visual) quality (this is what mod are for), up to you though.

00:35:701 (3) - Same here, if you want to emphasize vocal you can put a 1/1 instead. slider end cannot emphasis anything,
-> 1/1 slider do not emphasis anything?? well... when I see the actual meta I can't blame you :c

But:
00:24:674 (1) - There's nothing that really supports a 1/4 in the music here, 1/2 would follow the melody as well and be more natural especially for a hard diff but it is quite boring for the repeated rhythm.
->Saying it's ok to overmap a hard diff because otherwise "it's boring" is a bit meh.

01:33:107 (5) - Pattern looks cool, but shouldn't this slider be 1/4 (same as you did for 01:32:782 (4) - )it is the same as
01:30:188 (3) - 01:27:593 (5) - 01:24:998 (3) - . If you talk about 01:33:107 (5) - should be a circle, then my response is that this slider is to show the end of the song.
->I was telling you to do this https://puu.sh/z4FJE/c4449268f5.png to emphasis the last note ... as you tend to do lol. It's clickable here 00:20:782 (1) - for example so ye, might be better to stay constant but w/e xd

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But ye w/e. Obviously, I don't need kd for this, I just found some of your answer quite debatable, sooo yep!
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