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J a c k wrote:

Thank you so much for modding my map (once again xd) :3
np xd
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Now that all mods have been resolved, I changed the offset again because Mirash recommended it (a long time ago lmao)
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Desperation

00:07:809 (1,2) - while testplaying, I felt like if it was 1/4 instead of 1/2 because of its comfort while playing. Maybe ctrl+g'ing every one of these 00:08:296 (2,3,4,5,6) - could help to understand it better.
00:12:350 (3,4) - don't emphasize that much in these notes. They are not really important and its spacing is just too big!
00:12:998 (1,2,3) - same with this: do not space so much. But be careful: DO space more here 00:13:485 (4) - .
00:14:134 (1) - fix that blanket (the sliderend should be a less-shaped angle)
00:15:593 (1,2,3) - don't emphasize that much in these notes. They are not really important and its spacing is just too big! (I am going to stop pointing out these mistakes because they happen very often. I hope you understood what I meant with these points and manage to remap all of those you find ^^)
00:23:377 (1,2) - and 00:24:025 (4) - are the same vocals structure, but you mapped it differently. They should be the same (I suggest to make 00:24:025 (4) - look like 00:23:377 (1,2) - ).
00:28:566 (1,4) - same vocals structure (lower sound than in, for example, 00:27:917 (3) - ), but different slider representation. Make it look the same. As they are a lower sound, I would make 00:28:566 (1) - look like 00:29:215 (4) - .
00:31:161 (1,2) - ^ (I won't point out these mistakes anymore. I hope you understand them better and can manage to "mod" it by yourself).
00:35:701 (4,5) - I suggest to replace that with a slider.
00:36:350 (1,2) - This should be 4 circles (undermapped) and I suggest, as I said before, to replace 00:36:998 (3,4) - with a slider.
00:37:647 (1,2) - Good job here! 2 different sliders for 2 different sounds. This is how you should deal with all of the slider issues. Even though it is correctly done, maybe you should make 00:37:971 (2) - like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9931864 because is a stronger sound, and strong sounds are commonly represented with this kind of slidershape.
00:41:539 (1) - to make this circle more accurate, do the following: 00:40:890 (1,2) - ctrl+c ctrl+v this. Then, ctrl+h. After you have ctrl+h'ed those sliders, put them like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9931884 . Right where it is the 00:41:620 (1) - slider, you should place that circle. As you can see, it is overlapping with 00:40:890 (1) - , so you should consider to move it horizontally (I hope I have explained myself with this sh*t :P)
00:50:620 here there is sound, but it isn't mapped. You should map it! (I would map it by making 00:50:458 (4) - a slider which could turn into a blanket with 00:49:971 (3) - . Anyways, this is up to you :D)
01:23:053 (1,2,3) - I would ctrl+h this and make it more separated from 01:22:890 (8) - .
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forgot how to do mods on forum

[Desperation]
pretty fun to play, though I'd increase the spacing on all streams as they tend to kill the momentum of the song when too easy.
00:09:107 (1) - circle feels better when it's in line with previous slider heads instead of slider tail
01:00:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the music has buildup here so the jump pattern should start smaller and increase to match the music.

[Space's Insane]
00:11:701 (1,2,3) - wide angle seems out of place in a map where almost every jump is less than 90 degs.

[Elcheer's Insane]
Increase AR to 9, 8.7 feels low for a 187bpm song.
custom combo colors?
00:29:863 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is neato

[Insane]
00:08:296 (2,3,4,5,6) - may be slightly too brain melting to read for low sr insane, it'd be easier as circles (or just angled so that each slider points towards the next perhaps).
00:26:620 - from here to 00:30:836 - it's quite a long section of counterclockwise movement. consider making the star at 00:29:863 - rotate clockwise instead to show the change in music more and also to avoid mouse drift.

[Ky's Hard]
I really liked the triangle circles in the kiai.
00:09:755 (2) - NC and/or different slider shape to make the SV change more obvious.
00:44:782 (2,3,1) - blanketing is a lil off
01:26:620 (3) - random clap hitsound?
01:33:107 (5) - the reverse makes the map feel unfinished, would be better as a 1/1 slider.

[Irohas' Normal]
Not a problem, just curious why there are anchors in the middle of the ""straight"" sliders that don't do anything?

gl with rank!
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Saltssaumure wrote:

[Irohas' Normal]
Not a problem, just curious why there are anchors in the middle of the ""straight"" sliders that don't do anything? slight curved sliders
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Hi from my queue.

Easy
  1. 00:40:239 (4) - This 1/2 slider seems out of place since it's an easy diff. Usually, objects in an easy difficulty have a spacing of 1 or more beat to not overwhelm the players. The slider is also out of place since there are only 2 objects that use 1/2 snapping divisor.
  2. 00:57:104 (1,2,3,1,2) - Personally, I would make this a break as the music here is really calm.
  3. 01:20:617 (2) - I already stated why this feels out of place, so I hope I don't need to do again.


Irohas' Normal
  1. 00:02:293 (5) - I think changing this to two circles overlapping the next slider's head is better since there's no aiming requirement and that it's easier to manage for players. It fits because it doesn't require much work on sounds that are not that strong.
  2. 00:45:104 (2,3,4) - This part seems too much for players in a calm section. Perhaps do this instead: https://i.imgur.com/37LU5nn.png
  3. 00:47:212 - There's a drum sound here, so maybe make 00:46:725 (1) - stop 1/2 beat early and put a circle on the white tick.


Ky's Hard
  1. 00:03:914 (1,2) - Why not just make it a full beat slider lol. There's nothing particular in the second white tick so this isn't really necessary.
  2. 00:11:536 (1,2) - Flow here is uncomfortable. You use comfortable flow for 00:16:725 (1,2) - and 00:19:320 (1,2) - so why not here?
  3. 00:35:698 (3,4) - I already talk about this, so explanation needed I hope. There are parts which are the same but recognizing them won't be hard lol.
  4. 00:44:779 (2,3) - FIX BLANKET REEEEEEE
  5. 00:48:347 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These using drum-hitnormal is really weird. Doesn't seem to emphasize anything.
  6. 01:32:779 (4,5) - There's a sound on the first red tick and none in the second. A 1/2 beat slider following a 1 beat slider separated by 1/2 beat seems more appropriate.


Insane
  1. Don't really agree with how every 1/4 rhythm is simplified with 1/4 sliders. Players are capable of streaming since it's an insane diff, and give off the impression that every 1/4 rhythm is the same thing since they're emphasized with the same object. The next three bullets are examples of this:
  2. The sounds on 00:08:212 - and 00:08:293 (2) - are different than 00:08:455 (3,4,5,6) - . So perhaps make it into a stream from 00:07:806 (1) - leading to the 1/4 sliders to differentiate and emphasize the strong snares better.
  3. 00:15:104 (4) - A triple is better since the sound on the red and blue tick is the same.
  4. 00:20:455 (6,7) - The sounds here are different than the one on the other 1/4 sliders. A stream would be great to emphasize that.
  5. 00:35:050 (1,2,3) - Perhaps make the triangle larger for 00:34:401 (3,2) - to be properly stacked?
  6. 00:50:779 (1) - A 1/2 slider seems to be better here to make 00:51:104 (2) - feel more comfortable. It's more of a feeling so idk your choice.
  7. 01:27:752 (4) - Triples work better here.


Elcheer's Insane
  1. 00:00:350 (3) - Perhaps change to 2 circles instead since you seem to follow the vocals at the beginning of the song?
  2. 00:01:323 (1,3) - Could be made to not overlap one another so that it looks neater.
  3. 00:29:863 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - This is really just stupid aesthetic nitpicking, but objects that are overlapping one another could be made for them to be the same distance. You could copy for example 00:30:025 (2,5) - and use it for 00:30:188 (3,7) - and 00:30:998 (8,9,1) - .
  4. The sound on 00:35:053 (1,2,3,4) - is different than 00:34:404 (3,4,5,6) - . So you could change 00:34:404 (3,4,5,6) - to be 1/2 sliders to emphasize the sound on the next four 1/2 beats.


Space's Insane
  1. 00:00:026 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is overdone with its spacing and flow. The music at the beginning isn't that intense to support this kind of placements, and the rest of the section isn't as intense as them. 00:00:026 (1,2) - flows uncomfortably since the 00:00:026 (1) - is going the opposite of where the next slider is. This isn't really justified in the music or the section. 00:00:674 (3,4,5) - spacing is too big when there's nothing strong in the music. You could make it like this: https://i.imgur.com/hS4PapT.png, or just anything that flows smoothly or makes sense to the rest of the section.
  2. 00:08:458 (3,4) - These sound different than 00:07:809 (1,2) - , they're more stronger. You could make them a stream or 1/4 sliders to emphasize that.
  3. 00:09:107 (1) - How come this isn't spaced? It's as strong as the other white tick :(
  4. 00:09:755 (2) - There's no drum sound on both white tick, so putting claps wouldn't make sense lol.
  5. 00:10:242 (3) - Why is there a clap here lol.
  6. 00:11:053 (4) - Chances are the drum sound here is a bass drum or just guitar. Either way, the clap won't work here since it's a snare sound so it's not appropriate. Snares sound sharp and are usually on the second and third white ticks like 00:10:728 (2) - and the slider's end of 00:11:053 (4) - . Sometimes it does not, so use 25% playback to listen if you're unsure. Fix the rest of the map with the same issue.
  7. 01:17:863 - Why stop hitsounding the drums? Don't think there's anything here to support that.
  8. 01:33:431 - Uhh nothing to emphasize this sound?


Fapu's Extra
  1. 00:01:971 (3) - Since the guitar disrupt this part from being like before, you could make this to be two stacked 1/2 circles. This will emphasize the guitar and relate it to the other same parts.
  2. 00:08:458 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Drums here are the same intensity so you could use one volume instead.
  3. 00:30:350 (4) - Sound here seems to belong to the first stacking instead of the second one.
  4. 00:30:512 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - The stacked 1/2 circles and the stream related to each other since the guitar sound is played on each 1/2 beat. The guitar thing divides itself into two parts: the first (00:29:863 (1,2,3,4) - and last (00:30:512 (5,6,7,9) - ) two beats of the measure. So by doing this adds to your emphasis on that guitar.
  5. 01:17:377 (4,5,6) - You could make this triple have a motion that follows the circular flow of 01:16:404 (1,2,3) - .


Desperation
  1. 00:08:296 (2) - Just a circle would fit here. The 1/4 rhythm actually starts at 00:07:809 - spanning for a whole measure with 00:08:458 (3,4,5,6) - having drums in them while the rest don't. Since you ignore the subtle 1/4 sounds on the first and second beat doing 00:08:296 (2) - won't really make sense.
  2. 01:08:458 (5,4) - Fix overlap :(
  3. The rest of the map is really straightforward with its rhythm and gameplay so I don't have anything wrong with them. Good job!


Good luck with the mapset! o/
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edit: ignore this. send the same thing twice and i can't delete lol
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FiddleBlue wrote:

edit: ignore this. send the same thing twice and i can't delete lol
lol no problem, I will apply all mods as soon as Timperjuncio finishes his mod because he said he would continue another day
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FiddleBlue wrote:

00:00:026 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is overdone with its spacing and flow. The music at the beginning isn't that intense to support this kind of placements, and the rest of the section isn't as intense as them. 00:00:026 (1,2) - flows uncomfortably since the 00:00:026 (1) - is going the opposite of where the next slider is. This isn't really justified in the music or the section. 00:00:674 (3,4,5) - spacing is too big when there's nothing strong in the music. You could make it like this: https://i.imgur.com/hS4PapT.png, or just anything that flows smoothly or makes sense to the rest of the section.
Fixed part of the mod by reducing space on 3,4,5. Kept the same pattern because "It's my style(TM)"

FiddleBlue wrote:

01:33:431 - Uhh nothing to emphasize this sound?
The last suggestion is also changed.
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FiddleBlue wrote:

Hi from my queue.

Irohas' Normal
  1. 00:02:293 (5) - I think changing this to two circles overlapping the next slider's head is better since there's no aiming requirement and that it's easier to manage for players. It fits because it doesn't require much work on sounds that are not that strong. i think sliders are more easier than circles in lower diffs, so i keep
  2. 00:45:104 (2,3,4) - This part seems too much for players in a calm section. Perhaps do this instead: https://i.imgur.com/37LU5nn.png the bell sound on the downbeat is too heavy being ignored, but both suits
  3. 00:47:212 - There's a drum sound here, so maybe make 00:46:725 (1) - stop 1/2 beat early and put a circle on the white tick. its more like a consistency with 00:41:539 (1,1) - actually xd and i voluntary skipped that sound cause that part is too calm and i dont want to make a complicated rhythm in that kind of part
no change but thx!!
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-Space- wrote:

FiddleBlue wrote:

00:00:026 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is overdone with its spacing and flow. The music at the beginning isn't that intense to support this kind of placements, and the rest of the section isn't as intense as them. 00:00:026 (1,2) - flows uncomfortably since the 00:00:026 (1) - is going the opposite of where the next slider is. This isn't really justified in the music or the section. 00:00:674 (3,4,5) - spacing is too big when there's nothing strong in the music. You could make it like this: https://i.imgur.com/hS4PapT.png, or just anything that flows smoothly or makes sense to the rest of the section.
Fixed part of the mod by reducing space on 3,4,5. Kept the same pattern because "It's my style(TM)"

FiddleBlue wrote:

01:33:431 - Uhh nothing to emphasize this sound?
The last suggestion is also changed.
So I guess you rejected the rest? I would like an explanation why so I can understand your map and this unusual (for me) way of hitsounding.
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Saltssaumure wrote:

[Elcheer's Insane]
Increase AR to 9, 8.7 feels low for a 187bpm song. with the diff below me at ar8.5 and the diff above me at 9, i'd rather stay in between the two
custom combo colors? oops, fixed
00:29:863 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is neato fixed lmao

FiddleBlue wrote:

Elcheer's Insane
  1. 00:00:350 (3) - Perhaps change to 2 circles instead since you seem to follow the vocals at the beginning of the song? fixed
  2. 00:01:323 (1,3) - Could be made to not overlap one another so that it looks neater. fixed
  3. 00:29:863 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - This is really just stupid aesthetic nitpicking, but objects that are overlapping one another could be made for them to be the same distance. You could copy for example 00:30:025 (2,5) - and use it for 00:30:188 (3,7) - and 00:30:998 (8,9,1) - . fixed, it does make it neater
  4. The sound on 00:35:053 (1,2,3,4) - is different than 00:34:404 (3,4,5,6) - . So you could change 00:34:404 (3,4,5,6) - to be 1/2 sliders to emphasize the sound on the next four 1/2 beats. fixed
also added a few adjustments on my end

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posted

Saltssaumure wrote:

[Ky's Hard]
I really liked the triangle circles in the kiai. thanks
00:09:755 (2) - NC and/or different slider shape to make the SV change more obvious. okay
00:44:782 (2,3,1) - blanketing is a lil off fixed, hope it will be okay.
01:26:620 (3) - random clap hitsound? I will fix hit sound later.
01:33:107 (5) - the reverse makes the map feel unfinished, would be better as a 1/1 slider. fixed.

gl with rank!

FiddleBlue wrote:

Hi from my queue.

Ky's Hard
  1. 00:03:914 (1,2) - Why not just make it a full beat slider lol. There's nothing particular in the second white tick so this isn't really necessary. for rhythm constant
  2. 00:11:536 (1,2) - Flow here is uncomfortable. You use comfortable flow for 00:16:725 (1,2) - and 00:19:320 (1,2) - so why not here? not really big problem here.
  3. 00:35:698 (3,4) - I already talk about this, so explanation needed I hope. There are parts which are the same but recognizing them won't be hard lol.
  4. 00:44:779 (2,3) - FIX BLANKET REEEEEEE fixed
  5. 00:48:347 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These using drum-hitnormal is really weird. Doesn't seem to emphasize anything. I will deal with hit sound later.
  6. 01:32:779 (4,5) - There's a sound on the first red tick and none in the second. A 1/2 beat slider following a 1 beat slider separated by 1/2 beat seems more appropriate.fixed.


Good luck with the mapset! o/
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posted
I like the way they sound.

I don't necessarily believe they're hindering the song as they, to me, sound like a universal beat that can incorporate the song very well.
posted

FiddleBlue wrote:

Hi from my queue.

Fapu's Extra
  1. 00:01:971 (3) - Since the guitar disrupt this part from being like before, you could make this to be two stacked 1/2 circles. This will emphasize the guitar and relate it to the other same parts. Optional while not important. I'll keep my own pattern
  2. 00:08:458 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Drums here are the same intensity so you could use one volume instead. Drums did have volume rise from what I heard
  3. 00:30:350 (4) - Sound here seems to belong to the first stacking instead of the second one. having this as the second stacking emphasizes the new drum sound enters, and it plays well.
  4. 00:30:512 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - The stacked 1/2 circles and the stream related to each other since the guitar sound is played on each 1/2 beat. The guitar thing divides itself into two parts: the first (00:29:863 (1,2,3,4) - and last (00:30:512 (5,6,7,9) - ) two beats of the measure. So by doing this adds to your emphasis on that guitar. I mapped more circles in this section to indicate just that and while clicking more, players know it is more intense. So no need to do anything else here.
  5. 01:17:377 (4,5,6) - You could make this triple have a motion that follows the circular flow of 01:16:404 (1,2,3) - . fixed



Good luck with the mapset! o/
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From my queue

[General]
  1. Volume setting on your diffs and Normal could work harder, you used same volume setting on calmer parts (00:00:000 - , 00:20:782 - ) and stronger parts (00:10:404) and it's really plain
[Irohas' Normal]
  1. 01:31:971 (3) - offscreen
[Ky's Hard]
  1. 同fapu嘅一樣,成個diff都無咩finish,況且開頭果度點解會咁多種hitsound嘅方法,00:10:404 - 果度用drum已經唔係幾合理,00:12:998 - 轉咗去soft,00:12:998 (1) - 先有claps
  2. 整體上除咗hitsound無咩問題
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:890 (4,1) - symmetry
  2. 00:13:971 (5,1) - 00:19:161 (5,1) - 01:24:025 (5,1) - 01:26:620 (5,1) - etc. Unstack these? Stacking them makes the emphasis on finishes weaker
  3. 00:40:890 (1) - Offscreen.
  4. Same problem as Desperation on volume settings
[elcheer's Insane]
  1. 00:19:809 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - nazi, but blanket 00:19:323 (1) - slider end
  2. 00:38:620 (6) - ctrl+g? and the spacing is too large imo judging the spacing in this part
  3. 00:48:998 (8) - make it a curve slider like 00:48:025 (5,6,7) - ? For visual consistency
  4. 01:00:998 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - the emphasis is quite strange though, the stronger note was on 01:00:998 - 01:01:485 - 01:01:971 - but the current pattern emphasizes 01:01:323 - 01:01:647 - instead
  5. 01:02:134 (1,4) - the overlap can be avoided imo, yet the visual contrast isn't go well with 01:02:134 (1) -
[Space's Insane]
  1. 01:03:269 (4,1) - 01:05:863 (5,1) - 01:08:620 (5,1) - 01:29:377 (5,1) - etc. the rhythm is quite off though, there's a new section of vocal/guitar on the red tick, instead of the downbeat, the finish makes this problem worse, but you did them well on 01:13:809 (1) -
  2. 01:18:188 (3,5,6) - 01:19:161 (1,3,5,7) - ... Why the random normal finish though lol, not really necessary
  3. 01:33:431 - Add note? There's an important sound
[Fapu's Extra]
  1. 00:02:296 (4,1) - 建議blanket包近啲,而家咁樣唔單止令到 00:01:647 (2,4,1) - 個visual spacing好唔整齊,00:02:620 (1,2) - 嘅1/4 flow感覺唔好打
  2. 00:04:242 (2,3,4,5,6) - 如果個連打係跟結他聲嘅話都係stack或者係減細spacing,而家嘅spacing感覺好似突顯咗比較靜嘅聲
  3. 00:07:809 (1,2) - nazi,就算開咗stack都無blanket好
  4. 00:08:296 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - nazi,個曲線唔齊,如果係漸進連打嘅話建議用slider嚟對齊佢哋
  5. 00:35:539 - 呢都冇跟結他triple點解 00:36:836 (3) - 跟咗,好inconsistent
  6. 00:37:647 (1,2,3,4) - 呢度跟咩,唔係幾似跟人聲
  7. 發現成個diff都無咩finish,建議嚮 00:10:404 (1) - 00:11:539 (1) - 等等有cymbal嘅地方落finish
[Desperation]
  1. 01:12:188 (4,5,6,7,1) - Make the spacing in this stream larger? to give better flow with the jump
  2. 01:22:404 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^, yet it give more gradual slow down with 01:22:728 (7,8,1) -
  3. Solid

Good luck~
posted
no kd, not too much to report which hasn't really been said I guess

[General]
Background size is too

[Easy]
00:36:350 (1) - I don't like it so much, most of your repeats on vocals are more curvy, and I find that this slider sticks really out compared to all others.
01:20:620 (2) - 1/2 slider which is a little out of place, especially on an Easy. Moreover, the sound at 01:20:944 is pretty much the same, so that would mean that if you want to keep it, you need to put another 1/2 slider instead of the circle.

[Normal]

01:31:971 (3) - offscreen
posted

Firis Mistlud wrote:

[elcheer's Insane]
  1. 00:19:809 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - nazi, but blanket 00:19:323 (1) - slider end somewhat fixed
  2. 00:38:620 (6) - ctrl+g? and the spacing is too large imo judging the spacing in this part somewhat fixed
  3. 00:48:998 (8) - make it a curve slider like 00:48:025 (5,6,7) - ? For visual consistency fixed
  4. 01:00:998 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - the emphasis is quite strange though, the stronger note was on 01:00:998 - 01:01:485 - 01:01:971 - but the current pattern emphasizes 01:01:323 - 01:01:647 - instead somewhat fixed
  5. 01:02:134 (1,4) - the overlap can be avoided imo, yet the visual contrast isn't go well with 01:02:134 (1) - fixed
osu file format v14

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00:01:323 (1,2,3) - I would rotate it 45º and place it like this so it flow better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9952692
00:04:242 (2,3,4,5) - I don't hear any 1/4 sound
00:06:350 (7,8,1) - space it more. While I was playing it, I got confused with a 1/4, instead of 1/2 (you can see a similar spacing between 00:06:025 (6,7) - and 00:07:161 (4,5) - , even though they are 1/2 and 1/4 respectively)
00:08:296 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - really anaesthetic. It seems to have been made manually. Make a slider as a point of reference and place the cirlces over it to make propper shapes.
00:16:242 (3,4,5) - I would make it flow as it was flowing before and make the flow-change in 00:16:728 (1) - . I think it makes much more sense and it's really comfortable to the player. If not, there would be too many flow-changes in such short time.
00:20:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the flow in this part is really weird on its own. If you want to make it look like a common structure, make 00:22:080 (1) - be placed in a lower position than where it is. You will realise if you focus on the cursor's movement.
01:04:080 (3,4,5,6) - I personally disagree with the idea of making jumps with such sharp angle. I would make it more "star-like" so that it is more comfortable for the player.
01:15:593 (2,3) - there are no vocals on this part. Even though, you mapped it just the same as in 01:15:917 (4,5,6) - . Consider to make any change to distinguish both parts.
01:23:053 from this part until the end I miss many clap sounds.

Space's Insane

What's the reason to make soooo many unnecessary clap sounds through all the song? Make it according to the drums, not to the interpretation you give to the song.

00:00:836 (4) - I would actually make it stack with 00:00:350 (2) - . I don't feel like it is a nice overlap tbh.
00:00:998 (5,1) - separate more 00:00:998 (5) - from 00:01:323 (1) - (or 00:01:323 (1) - from 00:00:998 (5) - )
00:20:944 (2,3) - too spaced for a slow part
00:37:485 (5,1,2) - this pattern's flow is really meh. I would place them like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9952991
00:56:134 (2,3,4) - I don't hear any 1/4 sound
01:03:593 (1,1,1,1,1) - I would start those sliders the red tick before
01:05:215 (2,3,4) - very uncomfortable to play (too sharp)
01:10:404 (2,3) - the music is not really loud here, but its spacing is very big. Make it smaller in order to fit the song propperly
01:30:836 (1) - this is just too random. As it is not a repeated slider, I would replace it with a more common one.
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Firis Mistlud wrote:

[Fapu's Extra]
  1. 00:02:296 (4,1) - 建議blanket包近啲,而家咁樣唔單止令到 00:01:647 (2,4,1) - 個visual spacing好唔整齊,00:02:620 (1,2) - 嘅1/4 flow感覺唔好打 okay
  2. 00:04:242 (2,3,4,5,6) - 如果個連打係跟結他聲嘅話都係stack或者係減細spacing,而家嘅spacing感覺好似突顯咗比較靜嘅聲 小改了
  3. 00:07:809 (1,2) - nazi,就算開咗stack都無blanket好 夠好了吧?
  4. 00:08:296 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - nazi,個曲線唔齊,如果係漸進連打嘅話建議用slider嚟對齊佢哋 fixed
  5. 00:35:539 - 呢都冇跟結他triple點解 00:36:836 (3) - 跟咗,好inconsistent fixed
  6. 00:37:647 (1,2,3,4) - 呢度跟咩,唔係幾似跟人聲 我覺得ok
  7. 發現成個diff都無咩finish,建議嚮 00:10:404 (1) - 00:11:539 (1) - 等等有cymbal嘅地方落finish

Good luck~

Timperjuncio wrote:

Fapu's Extra

00:01:323 (1,2,3) - I would rotate it 45º and place it like this so it flow better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9952692 I think currently is fine
00:04:242 (2,3,4,5) - I don't hear any 1/4 sound There is
00:06:350 (7,8,1) - space it more. While I was playing it, I got confused with a 1/4, instead of 1/2 (you can see a similar spacing between 00:06:025 (6,7) - and 00:07:161 (4,5) - , even though they are 1/2 and 1/4 respectively) fixed
00:08:296 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - really anaesthetic. It seems to have been made manually. Make a slider as a point of reference and place the cirlces over it to make propper shapes. fixed in previous mod
00:16:242 (3,4,5) - I would make it flow as it was flowing before and make the flow-change in 00:16:728 (1) - . I think it makes much more sense and it's really comfortable to the player. If not, there would be too many flow-changes in such short time. fixed?
00:20:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the flow in this part is really weird on its own. If you want to make it look like a common structure, make 00:22:080 (1) - be placed in a lower position than where it is. You will realise if you focus on the cursor's movement. I think its fine. There's like a "ku" sound that I can use as flow break
01:04:080 (3,4,5,6) - I personally disagree with the idea of making jumps with such sharp angle. I would make it more "star-like" so that it is more comfortable for the player. angles here whether it is star-shaped or not I have designated, so its fine
01:15:593 (2,3) - there are no vocals on this part. Even though, you mapped it just the same as in 01:15:917 (4,5,6) - . Consider to make any change to distinguish both parts. fixed
01:23:053 from this part until the end I miss many clap sounds. fixed as well
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