- 00:57:104 - from here until 01:00:347 - remove all the notes for a break, like normal and hard diff i don't think it's necessary to map this moment especially on a easy diff lol
- 00:12:347 (4,1) - the transition between these notes is mehh because the angle is too big, i can suggest this https://puu.sh/yTHq8/76d0852d56.jpg OR https://puu.sh/yTHAF/8a0e79f3f2.jpg because its looks more attractive and it's easier to follow these notes through to the flow.
- 00:20:779 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern is different to 00:00:023 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - but this is the same vocals and same density
- 00:25:968 (1,1) - stack, should be better imo
- 00:29:860 (4) - new combo for emphasis this long slider?
- 00:47:698 (2) - why did you make a long slider? it's sound very off tbh, maybe just add a note at 00:47:698 - and a 1/1 slider here 00:48:022
- 00:53:860 (4,5) - 00:55:158 (2,3) - and 00:56:455 (5,6) - there are too much circles at the same time, idk if newbies can be able to click on all these circles. imo i think that you could replace some circles by sliders renverse like you did 00:43:482 (3) - 00:45:752 (2)
- 01:09:428 (1) - and 01:15:914 (2) - the tails of these slider are too high, it makes a bad transition for the next note, so for the tail of this slider 01:15:914 (2) - i recommend to place it at x:212 y:354 (like this https://puu.sh/yTIqr/d3e6cf0bf7.png) and for the other 01:09:428 (1) - tail should be at x:227 y:238 (like this https://puu.sh/yTIx4/173980f103.png)
- 00:10:077 (4,1) - why there isn't a high spacing between these notes?? the density isn't the same at all
- 00:20:617 (7,1) - here too ^
- 00:29:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - aaa please increase spacing between these notes, it's doesn't looks good because they contact all between them, im sure that you can make something better
- 00:36:022 (6,1) - not even a little spacing..
- 01:12:185 (4,5) - since this is the kiai part, me i would replace them by circles for more fun its can work good i think
- 01:33:104 (6) - for the last note, i will make something like this https://puu.sh/yTJCV/fd319952be.jpg because it's more fun to play
i want to see this map ranked!
and nice choice for the song~