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M o c h a wrote:

Elcheer's Insane

Good fun difficulty!

00:40:887 (1,2,1) - somewhat hard to read (no prob for me cuz I'm pro :>) replied to this type of mod before, i don't see any way of changing this without having to alter almost everything after
00:57:266 - aww you didn't map the best part breaks are good (also there's no real reason for me to map it)
01:26:617 (5) - maybe move this a bit to the right so it doesn't overlap with 01:25:806 (2) - or overlap it better fixed
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61320
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 10401,20779,41536,51914,62131,83050
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Jakusha no Sengen
TitleUnicode:弱者の宣言
Artist:HoneyWorks feat. Gero
ArtistUnicode:HoneyWorks feat. Gero
Creator:J a c k
Version:Elcheer's Insane
Source:
Tags:Kyle_Y Elcheer -Space- Faputa Poii
BeatmapID:1383146
BeatmapSetID:643153

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:8.7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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posted

M o c h a wrote:

Hi! Here's your mod!!

Desperation

I didn't notice much when I was playing. Sorry for being too picky

00:05:212 (1) - is this on purpose? (its overlapping a bit with 00:06:185 (5) - ) you can just ignore if it is, sorry. It's unnoticeable while playing, but you could fix it up a bit if you like Fixed
00:41:212 (2,1) - these might be too close It's okay imo
00:50:779 (1) - it looks weird because its louder than 00:50:455 (4) - but its pretty much mapped the same. I know you distanced them equally but I think there should be more emphasis on 00:50:779 (1) - . I kind of notice it when playing, but not really game breaking I think it's emphasized enough since it's placed there alone, the distance seems appropriate to me
00:56:941 (8) - is that supposed to be touching 00:56:131 (3) - ? Fixed
00:56:779 (7) - and maybe this is too close to 00:56:131 (3) - Fixed
01:23:050 (1) - kinda too close to the previous note? maybe make the ds 3.0x for that I don't see the problem here
01:30:347 (4) - maybe blanket this with 01:29:374 (1) - so it can have some purpose :)Not really necessary
01:32:293 (2) - I thought you would half-stack this with 01:31:806 (5) - like you usually do Fixed
01:32:941 (6) - weirdly stacked? (with 01:31:968 (1) - ) Fixed
Insane

Nothing really to point out except that some of the jump patterns seem to be too close to each other

00:15:104 (4) - I think a triple would be better here, but then again you don't use triples for any of them Exactly, no triples in this diff
00:20:455 (6,7) - the whole pattern plays really nice but you could consider changing these up to match the drums because its not the same throughout. It's really up to you Hmm yea but i prefer having a visually consistent pattern, the hitsounds are stronger to emphasize it
00:57:104 (1,1,1) - this goes right to left, but 00:59:698 (1,1,1) - goes down to up nooo :(I know, but this has to be like this because of the jumps that are involved in the pattern
01:23:536 (4) - I think you should just stack it completely with 01:22:725 (5) - Fixed
Easy

Nothing much to say about this, nice job ^ ^)b
00:10:401 (1) - using a slider for this doesn't seem right, too many beats ignored. Same with with 00:12:995 (1) - , 00:15:590 (1) - , 00:18:185 (1) - Yeah but you can't map every sound in a easy diff, there's no other way to map this

End of mod! Maybe I got tired more tired after each difficulty, or they're just that good :> Thanks xd
posted

M o c h a wrote:

Hi! Here's your mod!!


Fapu's Extra

The main thing I noticed when playing this were the bad blankets and some of the notes look too close some of the overlaps look weird too. They look fine in the editor but its really noticeable in game. Change to AR 9.2

00:00:023 (1) - this doesn't play too well, especially since you can hear 2 beats in the vocals Does not mean this is bad. After playing the map for a few seconds players will adapt to the style of this map
00:08:293 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the stream is a bit ugly imo, you don't have to fix it if you don't want to though Changed
00:11:212 (4,5) - I think the spacing is too low for these two, same with 00:14:779 (3,4) - maybe? I think it is fine, the cursor movement isn't weird for this placement :#
00:13:968 (6,1) - too far apart? it's not really consistent compared to you other ones Comparison: 00:13:320 (2,3,4,5,6) - 2.00x spacing VS 00:11:374 (5,1) - 2.00x spacing, I need to make 00:13:968 (6,1) - spaced more, yet fine for playing
00:29:860 (1) - I don't think this is stacked properly fixed
00:42:833 (1,2,3,4) - these patterns look a bit too close, esp when playing it. also this overlap: 00:42:509 (4,3) - fixed both
00:48:671 (3) - I think you should blanket this better fixed
00:59:698 (4) - I think a slider is an odd choice here changed to two notes
01:20:293 (1) - blanket? fixed
01:21:104 (3) - too close to 01:20:779 (1) - fixed
01:24:185 (1) - blanket this better fixed
01:29:374 (1) - you could use this to blanket 01:28:563 (2) - it might look better how ;w;


End of mod! Maybe I got tired more tired after each difficulty, or they're just that good :> I hope so
Thanks a lot for the mod!

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Uh right, @ J a c k: I think the diff difference is okay. An extra diff with a slightly higher star rating custom-diffname diff is also cool
posted
now fixing!!!

CrystilonZ wrote:

I love your song choice <3


[Ky's]
  1. imo ar 7.3 or 7.5 is better. The song is pretty fast and your pattern has a lot of partially overlaps. Higher approach rate will reduce the number of notes on screen and will improve the readability of the diff. considering, wait for further modding.
  2. why is the hitsounding in this diff so messed up lol. Random official soft hitnormal here and there. Snares toms and kicks are all over the place lol. um... hitsound... later!!!
  3. 00:03:914 (1,2) - 00:24:671 (1,2) - Extend the sliders and delete the circles maybe? To differentiate to slower parts from the more lively parts I think beat at circle 2 is suitable to use extented, it is not really a big problem to me.
  4. 00:09:752 (2) - not really sure about this being in a hard diff, but it fits so /shrug rankable for sure.
  5. 00:05:212 (1,2) - 00:06:509 (1,2) - imo (1)s should have that small spacing increase as well. (1)s are even slightly stronger you know ._. Another choice would be using normal DS. Parts after this (except the kiais) have no jumps lol. if I increase the ds, then less emphasis for jumping to 2
  6. 00:46:725 (1,2,3,4) - uhh overlaps. Check this whole slow part for unintended overlapping. fixed.
  7. 00:56:779 (1) - this reverse slider is a bit of a letdown lol. I mean you are clearly following the drums here (the 1/2 spams) and this is the build up for the chorus that comes afterwards. LIVE UP TO THE HYPE but I have no other choice, I cannot use too many circle continously, or otherwise SR will rise. I think it is okay and suitable to end with slider end
  8. 01:07:806 (2,5) - 01:08:131 (3,1) - aesthetic nitpick. Can you make the stacks here look.. stack is much more hard to read.uhm.. similar? becasue I ctrl + c and v for this two.look much better imo


That's all from me
GL~

Frontlines wrote:

when i played the diffs they looked really very great and reflective of the song

hard:
00:09:752 (2) - maybe use a weird shape to signal the sv is changingboth are okay, I will remain here. also NC no need extra nc here.
00:41:293 - http://prntscr.com/hsvngr for a neater organization also the sliders appear to be unsnapped I remember it is okay to map like this.
again could use red anchors on kiai for sliders but overall very good


im surprised how good this map is becasue I mapped a gd for it.and im hoping to see it ranked. gl

realy0_ wrote:

heya, sorry for the late mod


Ky's Hard

00:03:914 (1,2) - make the ds of these 0,8 ? it's kinda hard to see with the overlap, do that for every objects that have the same pattern
00:08:455 (3,4,1,2) - i think this could be improved by increasing the ds to 0,8 and following this pic : https://i.imgur.com/00LmHPC.png
00:20:131 (3,4,1) - ^, if you don't understand the suggestion above, it's to try to align them.0.6 or 0.8 both are okay, I will care on it next time, I will remain for this map.
00:32:455 (1,2,3,4) - why this have the same rhythm pattern as 00:31:158 (1,2,3,4) - becasue I copy and paste for pattern, then why not should have same rhythm pattern?
00:37:644 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:01:968 (6,1) - the ds increase makes players interpret this as a 1/1 gap, keep the ds consistant please remain, I need to increase ds for emphasis 01:02:131 (1) -
01:07:320 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this is a bit hard to read for a low 3* remain :)
some of the suggestions could be applied on the whole diff

EggsGone wrote:

probably useless mod, but still.

  • [Hard]
  1. 00:00:023 (1,2) - Same problem with angles as mentioned in easy.
  2. 00:41:536 (1,2) - 00:43:482 (2,3) - 00:55:158 (3,4) - ^
  3. 00:44:779 (2,3) - imo blanket could be done better.
  4. 00:52:239 (3,4,5) - I noticed there's a 40 degrees difference between 3 and 4, but 60 degrees between 4 and 5, so consider to make consistent transitions in rotation for aesthetical purposes.
  5. 00:53:860 (3,4) - Again you can stick with 40 degree to emphasize difference.
  6. 01:06:022 (1,2,3,4) - Again keep consistent transition in rotation. ( Like you did here 01:13:806 (1,2,3,4) - )
  7. 01:16:401 (1,2,3) - ^
  8. 01:26:131 (2,3,1) - This pattern would look nice if you just blanket these 01:26:617 (3,1) -
  9. 01:30:833 (1,2) - You can try to rotate top slider a bit to get a better parallel.
    ANGLE IS NOT THAT IMPORTANT!!!!
    even if Easy can has these angle changes, so why can't Hard diff?

M o c h a wrote:

Hi! Here's your mod!!


Ky's Hard

Good, good. | :) |There are some questionable pauses though | :( |

00:25:482 (4,5,6) - might be overmap? really has sound.
00:31:644 (3) - you should try stacking 00:31:644 (3) - to 00:31:806 (4) - (same with the other patterns) it might play better I just group to beats.
00:50:455 (1,2) - the gap between them is kinda confusing, same with 00:51:428 (3,1) - doesn't seem to flow that well I tried to break flowing and having gap to show 1/1 spacing.
01:12:022 (3,4) - this feels odd to play wait for further modding.

End of mod! Maybe I got tired more tired after each difficulty, or they're just that good :>
osu file format v14

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Title:Jakusha no Sengen
TitleUnicode:弱者の宣言
Artist:HoneyWorks feat. Gero
ArtistUnicode:HoneyWorks feat. Gero
Creator:J a c k
Version:Ky's Hard
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Tags:Irohas Mugiwarasekai Kyle_Y Elcheer -Space- Faputa Poii
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realy0_ wrote:

Elcheer's Insane

plz use the top left corner and the bottom left no need (also everything dies if i try to move things)
parts with vocals seems too dense compared to the rest, some non-kiais part is denser than the kiai. cause it's a calmer section

00:10:887 (4,1) - nazi but you can make the blanket better fixed
almost forgot about this tbh thx jack for reminding

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posted
Hello! Here I am

[General]
  1. Don't forget to check the tags, are incosistent through diffs
  2. Also Space's Insane is the only diff finishing on 01:33:104 , would be nice if you make them all finish at the same spot


[Muzu]
  1. Don't use SV changes on this diff, save them for Oni
  2. It's pretty strange to see you didn't mapped the vocal on 00:00:995 - 00:02:293 - that sounds louder than 00:03:590 - , I thought you were following background music and it's complemented with vocals so it's unhearable, try this:
    00:01:320 -
  3. 00:05:212 (14,15) - 00:06:509 (18,19) - pitches are clearly different, what about 00:05:860 - making d k dd?
  4. 00:14:941 (52,53) - more than double big note it sounds like a triple kkk in somewhere, it's not even supported with big notes D:
  5. 00:20:131 - also consistency with here, they're not even big notes o.o
  6. 00:27:590 - please set a difference from this with 00:28:887 - vocal pitches aren't the same, ddk on second would fit good
  7. 00:30:833 (116,117,118,119) - this sounds way overmapped, even d ddd fits better
  8. 00:31:158 - 00:41:536 - this section would need a rework, it's so similar than the section before and it's clearly more intense than the other, also some vocals aren't correctly followed a.k.a 00:37:968 -
  9. 01:02:131 - overall the idea on Kiai is good, but some parts like 01:03:752 - break a lot the current flow, it's like a drum and vocal mix and it's way strange to hear it, even to read for players (e.g. 01:02:131 (222,223,224,225,226,227,228) - drums then 01:08:131 (247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256) - excessive vocal follow)


[Oni]
  1. Same problem as muzu, 00:06:509 - drum follow when you're following vocals on 00:07:482 - so you skipped 00:06:833 -
  2. 00:08:131 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - k d kkddk fits better imo
  3. Please reconsider every ddK ddK kkD pattern you used, they don't look that nice tbh and most bignotes aren't that strong, also happens on muzu
  4. 00:14:779 (61,62,63,64,65,66) - ^, ddk ddk it's totally better
  5. 00:20:293 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96) - ddkkkkd totally better imo
  6. 00:33:590 (154) - delete this one, would be nice to set a difference from other triples, they're way repetitive and vocal here isn't strong, just a connection
  7. 00:38:779 (177) - ^
  8. 00:40:887 (189,190,191,192,193,194,195) - kkddkkd better or dkddkkd
  9. 00:40:887 - also you can make a better sv slowdown, it can overlaps
  10. 01:02:131 - Kiai is way easy and somehow boring, you can add some triples and not stucking literally at vocals
  11. 01:22:401 (365,366,367,368,369,370,371) - i don't get the point of this odd pattern tbh D:

Basically comments on both difficulties are similar, some finisher usage isn't neccesary imo, this would need more mods imo, you can call me back after some mods! Good luck with this
posted
here's your mod

Desperation
00:00:671 (4) - why this shape? this doesn't fit.
the whole map uses seemingly random slider shapes that doesn't fit the song very well. unless they depend changing on each word but the lyrics stay generally the same intensity throughout the whole map.
posted

xfraczynho wrote:

Hello! Here I am

[General]
  1. Don't forget to check the tags, are incosistent through diffs Fixed
  2. Also Space's Insane is the only diff finishing on 01:33:104 , would be nice if you make them all finish at the same spot He added a note now

Basically comments on both difficulties are similar, some finisher usage isn't neccesary imo, this would need more mods imo, you can call me back after some mods! Good luck with this Okay thanks

DilPil111 wrote:

here's your mod

Desperation
00:00:671 (4) - why this shape? this doesn't fit.
the whole map uses seemingly random slider shapes that doesn't fit the song very well. unless they depend changing on each word but the lyrics stay generally the same intensity throughout the whole map.
Uhm, i don't see why this shape doesn't fit. I make sliders according to what fits the best visually so I can create certain patterns, they don't have a meaning
posted
Thanks for all the modders, apologies for no feedback I kind of got overwhelmed with how many we got!

You're all appreciated tho!
posted

xfraczynho wrote:

Hello! Here I am

[General]
  1. Don't forget to check the tags, are incosistent through diffs
  2. Also Space's Insane is the only diff finishing on 01:33:104 , would be nice if you make them all finish at the same spot


[Muzu]
  1. Don't use SV changes on this diff, save them for Oni ok del SV
  2. It's pretty strange to see you didn't mapped the vocal on 00:00:995 - 00:02:293 - that sounds louder than 00:03:590 - , I thought you were following background music and it's complemented with vocals so it's unhearable, try this: ok
    00:01:320 -
  3. 00:05:212 (14,15) - 00:06:509 (18,19) - pitches are clearly different, what about 00:05:860 - making d k dd? mirror ok
  4. 00:14:941 (52,53) - more than double big note it sounds like a triple kkk in somewhere, it's not even supported with big notes D:00:15:104 - triplet
  5. 00:20:131 - also consistency with here, they're not even big notes o.o
  6. 00:27:590 - please set a difference from this with 00:28:887 - vocal pitches aren't the same, ddk on second would fit good ok
  7. 00:30:833 (116,117,118,119) - this sounds way overmapped, even d ddd fits better del triplet
  8. 00:31:158 - 00:41:536 - this section would need a rework, it's so similar than the section before and it's clearly more intense than the other, also some vocals aren't correctly followed a.k.a 00:37:968 - it have same flow, yeah the vocal doesnt change that much, i'll keep this section, and change that 00:37:968, i'll try to ask more pipol about this section
  9. 01:02:131 - overall the idea on Kiai is good, but some parts like 01:03:752 - break a lot the current flow, it's like a drum and vocal mix and it's way strange to hear it, even to read for players (e.g. 01:02:131 (222,223,224,225,226,227,228) - drums then 01:08:131 (247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256) - excessive vocal follow) [b]i fill the space with drum, if i mapped only vocal, there will be 2/1 or longer space at kai, like 01:02:455 - has drum but no vocal, yeah, will find more modder and more suggestion ofc[/b]


[Oni]
  1. Same problem as muzu, 00:06:509 - drum follow when you're following vocals on 00:07:482 - so you skipped 00:06:833 - re-arranged
  2. 00:08:131 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - k d kkddk fits better imo ok
  3. Please reconsider every ddK ddK kkD pattern you used, they don't look that nice tbh and most bignotes aren't that strong, also happens on muzu
  4. 00:14:779 (61,62,63,64,65,66) - ^, ddk ddk it's totally better yeah i know,i'll remove some low finsher
  5. 00:20:293 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96) - ddkkkkd totally better imo ok
  6. 00:33:590 (154) - delete this one, would be nice to set a difference from other triples, they're way repetitive and vocal here isn't strong, just a connection
  7. 00:38:779 (177) - ^ ok
  8. 00:40:887 (189,190,191,192,193,194,195) - kkddkkd better or dkddkkd first choice
  9. 00:40:887 - also you can make a better sv slowdown, it can overlaps S for Smooth
  10. 01:02:131 - Kiai is way easy and somehow boring, you can add some triples and not stucking literally at vocals
  11. 01:22:401 (365,366,367,368,369,370,371) - i don't get the point of this odd pattern tbh D: drum maybe, del some notes there

Basically comments on both difficulties are similar, some finisher usage isn't neccesary imo, this would need more mods imo, you can call me back after some mods! Good luck with this
ty frac

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dont forget to fix the tag :3 j a c k
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  • easy
  1. 00:57:104 - from here until 01:00:347 - remove all the notes for a break, like normal and hard diff i don't think it's necessary to map this moment especially on a easy diff lol
  2. 00:12:347 (4,1) - the transition between these notes is mehh because the angle is too big, i can suggest this https://puu.sh/yTHq8/76d0852d56.jpg OR https://puu.sh/yTHAF/8a0e79f3f2.jpg because its looks more attractive and it's easier to follow these notes through to the flow.
  3. 00:20:779 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern is different to 00:00:023 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - but this is the same vocals and same density
  4. 00:25:968 (1,1) - stack, should be better imo
  5. 00:29:860 (4) - new combo for emphasis this long slider?
  6. 00:47:698 (2) - why did you make a long slider? it's sound very off tbh, maybe just add a note at 00:47:698 - and a 1/1 slider here 00:48:022
  7. 00:53:860 (4,5) - 00:55:158 (2,3) - and 00:56:455 (5,6) - there are too much circles at the same time, idk if newbies can be able to click on all these circles. imo i think that you could replace some circles by sliders renverse like you did 00:43:482 (3) - 00:45:752 (2)
  8. 01:09:428 (1) - and 01:15:914 (2) - the tails of these slider are too high, it makes a bad transition for the next note, so for the tail of this slider 01:15:914 (2) - i recommend to place it at x:212 y:354 (like this https://puu.sh/yTIqr/d3e6cf0bf7.png) and for the other 01:09:428 (1) - tail should be at x:227 y:238 (like this https://puu.sh/yTIx4/173980f103.png)
  • insane
  1. 00:10:077 (4,1) - why there isn't a high spacing between these notes?? the density isn't the same at all
  2. 00:20:617 (7,1) - here too ^
  3. 00:29:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - aaa please increase spacing between these notes, it's doesn't looks good because they contact all between them, im sure that you can make something better
  4. 00:36:022 (6,1) - not even a little spacing..
  5. 01:12:185 (4,5) - since this is the kiai part, me i would replace them by circles for more fun its can work good i think
  6. 01:33:104 (6) - for the last note, i will make something like this https://puu.sh/yTJCV/fd319952be.jpg because it's more fun to play


i want to see this map ranked!

and nice choice for the song~

gl!~
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ShogunMoon wrote:

  • easy
  1. 00:57:104 - from here until 01:00:347 - remove all the notes for a break, like normal and hard diff i don't think it's necessary to map this moment especially on a easy diff lol Ok deleted
  2. 00:12:347 (4,1) - the transition between these notes is mehh because the angle is too big, i can suggest this https://puu.sh/yTHq8/76d0852d56.jpg OR https://puu.sh/yTHAF/8a0e79f3f2.jpg because its looks more attractive and it's easier to follow these notes through to the flow. True, I changed the entire section, I hope it's better now
  3. 00:20:779 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern is different to 00:00:023 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - but this is the same vocals and same density Ok made them the same
  4. 00:25:968 (1,1) - stack, should be better imo Fixed
  5. 00:29:860 (4) - new combo for emphasis this long slider? Ok
  6. 00:47:698 (2) - why did you make a long slider? it's sound very off tbh, maybe just add a note at 00:47:698 - and a 1/1 slider here 00:48:022 Yeah seems better
  7. 00:53:860 (4,5) - 00:55:158 (2,3) - and 00:56:455 (5,6) - there are too much circles at the same time, idk if newbies can be able to click on all these circles. imo i think that you could replace some circles by sliders reverse like you did 00:43:482 (3) - 00:45:752 (2) Ok changed, I dare anyone to complain about the 1/1 slider spam
  8. 01:09:428 (1) - and 01:15:914 (2) - the tails of these slider are too high, it makes a bad transition for the next note, so for the tail of this slider 01:15:914 (2) - i recommend to place it at x:212 y:354 (like this https://puu.sh/yTIqr/d3e6cf0bf7.png) and for the other 01:09:428 (1) - tail should be at x:227 y:238 (like this https://puu.sh/yTIx4/173980f103.png) Fixed, your suggestions were all really helpful on this diff
  • insane
  1. 00:10:077 (4,1) - why there isn't a high spacing between these notes?? the density isn't the same at all Increased spacing
  2. 00:20:617 (7,1) - here too ^ Not necessary, the drums are stronger than 1, it's also better visually if I keep it like this
  3. 00:29:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - aaa please increase spacing between these notes, it's doesn't looks good because they contact all between them, im sure that you can make something better No, I'm not changing this anymore until I have a concrete solution to this problem, every modder is just saying that it's a bad pattern but I've honestly tried everything now kms
  4. 00:36:022 (6,1) - not even a little spacing.. Increased
  5. 01:12:185 (4,5) - since this is the kiai part, me i would replace them by circles for more fun its can work good i think No triples and streams in this diff
  6. 01:33:104 (6) - for the last note, i will make something like this https://puu.sh/yTJCV/fd319952be.jpg because it's more fun to play I don't like maps ending with a circle and I don't think it's necessary rhythmically here either


i want to see this map ranked!

and nice choice for the song~

gl!~
Thank you so much for modding my map (once again xd) :3
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J a c k wrote:

Thank you so much for modding my map (once again xd) :3
np xd
posted
Now that all mods have been resolved, I changed the offset again because Mirash recommended it (a long time ago lmao)
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Desperation

00:07:809 (1,2) - while testplaying, I felt like if it was 1/4 instead of 1/2 because of its comfort while playing. Maybe ctrl+g'ing every one of these 00:08:296 (2,3,4,5,6) - could help to understand it better.
00:12:350 (3,4) - don't emphasize that much in these notes. They are not really important and its spacing is just too big!
00:12:998 (1,2,3) - same with this: do not space so much. But be careful: DO space more here 00:13:485 (4) - .
00:14:134 (1) - fix that blanket (the sliderend should be a less-shaped angle)
00:15:593 (1,2,3) - don't emphasize that much in these notes. They are not really important and its spacing is just too big! (I am going to stop pointing out these mistakes because they happen very often. I hope you understood what I meant with these points and manage to remap all of those you find ^^)
00:23:377 (1,2) - and 00:24:025 (4) - are the same vocals structure, but you mapped it differently. They should be the same (I suggest to make 00:24:025 (4) - look like 00:23:377 (1,2) - ).
00:28:566 (1,4) - same vocals structure (lower sound than in, for example, 00:27:917 (3) - ), but different slider representation. Make it look the same. As they are a lower sound, I would make 00:28:566 (1) - look like 00:29:215 (4) - .
00:31:161 (1,2) - ^ (I won't point out these mistakes anymore. I hope you understand them better and can manage to "mod" it by yourself).
00:35:701 (4,5) - I suggest to replace that with a slider.
00:36:350 (1,2) - This should be 4 circles (undermapped) and I suggest, as I said before, to replace 00:36:998 (3,4) - with a slider.
00:37:647 (1,2) - Good job here! 2 different sliders for 2 different sounds. This is how you should deal with all of the slider issues. Even though it is correctly done, maybe you should make 00:37:971 (2) - like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9931864 because is a stronger sound, and strong sounds are commonly represented with this kind of slidershape.
00:41:539 (1) - to make this circle more accurate, do the following: 00:40:890 (1,2) - ctrl+c ctrl+v this. Then, ctrl+h. After you have ctrl+h'ed those sliders, put them like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9931884 . Right where it is the 00:41:620 (1) - slider, you should place that circle. As you can see, it is overlapping with 00:40:890 (1) - , so you should consider to move it horizontally (I hope I have explained myself with this sh*t :P)
00:50:620 here there is sound, but it isn't mapped. You should map it! (I would map it by making 00:50:458 (4) - a slider which could turn into a blanket with 00:49:971 (3) - . Anyways, this is up to you :D)
01:23:053 (1,2,3) - I would ctrl+h this and make it more separated from 01:22:890 (8) - .
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forgot how to do mods on forum

[Desperation]
pretty fun to play, though I'd increase the spacing on all streams as they tend to kill the momentum of the song when too easy.
00:09:107 (1) - circle feels better when it's in line with previous slider heads instead of slider tail
01:00:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the music has buildup here so the jump pattern should start smaller and increase to match the music.

[Space's Insane]
00:11:701 (1,2,3) - wide angle seems out of place in a map where almost every jump is less than 90 degs.

[Elcheer's Insane]
Increase AR to 9, 8.7 feels low for a 187bpm song.
custom combo colors?
00:29:863 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is neato

[Insane]
00:08:296 (2,3,4,5,6) - may be slightly too brain melting to read for low sr insane, it'd be easier as circles (or just angled so that each slider points towards the next perhaps).
00:26:620 - from here to 00:30:836 - it's quite a long section of counterclockwise movement. consider making the star at 00:29:863 - rotate clockwise instead to show the change in music more and also to avoid mouse drift.

[Ky's Hard]
I really liked the triangle circles in the kiai.
00:09:755 (2) - NC and/or different slider shape to make the SV change more obvious.
00:44:782 (2,3,1) - blanketing is a lil off
01:26:620 (3) - random clap hitsound?
01:33:107 (5) - the reverse makes the map feel unfinished, would be better as a 1/1 slider.

[Irohas' Normal]
Not a problem, just curious why there are anchors in the middle of the ""straight"" sliders that don't do anything?

gl with rank!
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Saltssaumure wrote:

[Irohas' Normal]
Not a problem, just curious why there are anchors in the middle of the ""straight"" sliders that don't do anything? slight curved sliders
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Hi from my queue.

Easy
  1. 00:40:239 (4) - This 1/2 slider seems out of place since it's an easy diff. Usually, objects in an easy difficulty have a spacing of 1 or more beat to not overwhelm the players. The slider is also out of place since there are only 2 objects that use 1/2 snapping divisor.
  2. 00:57:104 (1,2,3,1,2) - Personally, I would make this a break as the music here is really calm.
  3. 01:20:617 (2) - I already stated why this feels out of place, so I hope I don't need to do again.


Irohas' Normal
  1. 00:02:293 (5) - I think changing this to two circles overlapping the next slider's head is better since there's no aiming requirement and that it's easier to manage for players. It fits because it doesn't require much work on sounds that are not that strong.
  2. 00:45:104 (2,3,4) - This part seems too much for players in a calm section. Perhaps do this instead: https://i.imgur.com/37LU5nn.png
  3. 00:47:212 - There's a drum sound here, so maybe make 00:46:725 (1) - stop 1/2 beat early and put a circle on the white tick.


Ky's Hard
  1. 00:03:914 (1,2) - Why not just make it a full beat slider lol. There's nothing particular in the second white tick so this isn't really necessary.
  2. 00:11:536 (1,2) - Flow here is uncomfortable. You use comfortable flow for 00:16:725 (1,2) - and 00:19:320 (1,2) - so why not here?
  3. 00:35:698 (3,4) - I already talk about this, so explanation needed I hope. There are parts which are the same but recognizing them won't be hard lol.
  4. 00:44:779 (2,3) - FIX BLANKET REEEEEEE
  5. 00:48:347 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These using drum-hitnormal is really weird. Doesn't seem to emphasize anything.
  6. 01:32:779 (4,5) - There's a sound on the first red tick and none in the second. A 1/2 beat slider following a 1 beat slider separated by 1/2 beat seems more appropriate.


Insane
  1. Don't really agree with how every 1/4 rhythm is simplified with 1/4 sliders. Players are capable of streaming since it's an insane diff, and give off the impression that every 1/4 rhythm is the same thing since they're emphasized with the same object. The next three bullets are examples of this:
  2. The sounds on 00:08:212 - and 00:08:293 (2) - are different than 00:08:455 (3,4,5,6) - . So perhaps make it into a stream from 00:07:806 (1) - leading to the 1/4 sliders to differentiate and emphasize the strong snares better.
  3. 00:15:104 (4) - A triple is better since the sound on the red and blue tick is the same.
  4. 00:20:455 (6,7) - The sounds here are different than the one on the other 1/4 sliders. A stream would be great to emphasize that.
  5. 00:35:050 (1,2,3) - Perhaps make the triangle larger for 00:34:401 (3,2) - to be properly stacked?
  6. 00:50:779 (1) - A 1/2 slider seems to be better here to make 00:51:104 (2) - feel more comfortable. It's more of a feeling so idk your choice.
  7. 01:27:752 (4) - Triples work better here.


Elcheer's Insane
  1. 00:00:350 (3) - Perhaps change to 2 circles instead since you seem to follow the vocals at the beginning of the song?
  2. 00:01:323 (1,3) - Could be made to not overlap one another so that it looks neater.
  3. 00:29:863 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - This is really just stupid aesthetic nitpicking, but objects that are overlapping one another could be made for them to be the same distance. You could copy for example 00:30:025 (2,5) - and use it for 00:30:188 (3,7) - and 00:30:998 (8,9,1) - .
  4. The sound on 00:35:053 (1,2,3,4) - is different than 00:34:404 (3,4,5,6) - . So you could change 00:34:404 (3,4,5,6) - to be 1/2 sliders to emphasize the sound on the next four 1/2 beats.


Space's Insane
  1. 00:00:026 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is overdone with its spacing and flow. The music at the beginning isn't that intense to support this kind of placements, and the rest of the section isn't as intense as them. 00:00:026 (1,2) - flows uncomfortably since the 00:00:026 (1) - is going the opposite of where the next slider is. This isn't really justified in the music or the section. 00:00:674 (3,4,5) - spacing is too big when there's nothing strong in the music. You could make it like this: https://i.imgur.com/hS4PapT.png, or just anything that flows smoothly or makes sense to the rest of the section.
  2. 00:08:458 (3,4) - These sound different than 00:07:809 (1,2) - , they're more stronger. You could make them a stream or 1/4 sliders to emphasize that.
  3. 00:09:107 (1) - How come this isn't spaced? It's as strong as the other white tick :(
  4. 00:09:755 (2) - There's no drum sound on both white tick, so putting claps wouldn't make sense lol.
  5. 00:10:242 (3) - Why is there a clap here lol.
  6. 00:11:053 (4) - Chances are the drum sound here is a bass drum or just guitar. Either way, the clap won't work here since it's a snare sound so it's not appropriate. Snares sound sharp and are usually on the second and third white ticks like 00:10:728 (2) - and the slider's end of 00:11:053 (4) - . Sometimes it does not, so use 25% playback to listen if you're unsure. Fix the rest of the map with the same issue.
  7. 01:17:863 - Why stop hitsounding the drums? Don't think there's anything here to support that.
  8. 01:33:431 - Uhh nothing to emphasize this sound?


Fapu's Extra
  1. 00:01:971 (3) - Since the guitar disrupt this part from being like before, you could make this to be two stacked 1/2 circles. This will emphasize the guitar and relate it to the other same parts.
  2. 00:08:458 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Drums here are the same intensity so you could use one volume instead.
  3. 00:30:350 (4) - Sound here seems to belong to the first stacking instead of the second one.
  4. 00:30:512 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - The stacked 1/2 circles and the stream related to each other since the guitar sound is played on each 1/2 beat. The guitar thing divides itself into two parts: the first (00:29:863 (1,2,3,4) - and last (00:30:512 (5,6,7,9) - ) two beats of the measure. So by doing this adds to your emphasis on that guitar.
  5. 01:17:377 (4,5,6) - You could make this triple have a motion that follows the circular flow of 01:16:404 (1,2,3) - .


Desperation
  1. 00:08:296 (2) - Just a circle would fit here. The 1/4 rhythm actually starts at 00:07:809 - spanning for a whole measure with 00:08:458 (3,4,5,6) - having drums in them while the rest don't. Since you ignore the subtle 1/4 sounds on the first and second beat doing 00:08:296 (2) - won't really make sense.
  2. 01:08:458 (5,4) - Fix overlap :(
  3. The rest of the map is really straightforward with its rhythm and gameplay so I don't have anything wrong with them. Good job!


Good luck with the mapset! o/
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edit: ignore this. send the same thing twice and i can't delete lol
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edit: ignore this. send the same thing twice and i can't delete lol
lol no problem, I will apply all mods as soon as Timperjuncio finishes his mod because he said he would continue another day
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