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HoneyWorks feat. Gero - Jakusha no Sengen [Osu|Taiko]

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kristrace
This is my first time modding, so I'll try to point out whatever I think should be fixed

Easy: I think this is really well done so I have barely much to say. Maybe make the slider curved at 01:10:725 for better flow. And at 00:05:212 I think you should fill that part in, what you did fitted pretty nicely but I think filling that part in would make it better since I don't see a reason for there to be a huge gap between 4 notes since there's still instruments playing between them.

I didn't really have much to say, I'm not exactly experienced enough to notice more issues lol
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Serizawa Haruki

kristrace wrote:

This is my first time modding, so I'll try to point out whatever I think should be fixed

Easy: I think this is really well done so I have barely much to say. Maybe make the slider curved at 01:10:725 for better flow. And at 00:05:212 I think you should fill that part in, what you did fitted pretty nicely but I think filling that part in would make it better since I don't see a reason for there to be a huge gap between 4 notes since there's still instruments playing between them.

I didn't really have much to say, I'm not exactly experienced enough to notice more issues lol
Thanks for the mod, I'll fix both things
m3gB3g
hi !~ m4m (PM)

General:
I dont sure abour BG resolution. Ask peoples
Fill "Source" and add more "Tags"
01:33:104 (5) - i dont understand why all you guys putted circle when sound is long guitar with pronounced end. I mean slider with start 01:33:104 (5) - here and end 01:33:428 - here gonna be better.

Easy:
Actually is ok
but here is some subjective issues ( you can ignore them all)
ctrl+A and you will notice: bottom right and left playzones is empty. I think diff should fill all playzone
Mapping structure is too hard for newbies for example 00:53:212 (3,4) - slider's end dont look at circle.

Ky Hard
ar7 is too low for 3.29* and 185 BPM. Feels weird in nomod gameplay. Pls put ar8
00:14:941 (5,6) - i dont sure about use Blue ticks in Hard diff. You can make slider more longer and end them in white tick.
00:24:671 (1,2) - ^
00:35:698 (3,4) - ^
01:20:293 (1,2) - ^
01:33:104 (5) - end slider here 01:33:428 - ?

Insane

00:29:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - looks weird and plays not good. Special focus 00:30:671 (6,7,8) - . I think Long jump pattern with many overlaps and with stacks jump pattern at the end is too unreadible . Please try to make better pattern here.

Elcheer Insane

00:10:401 (1,2,3,4) - i like to add some space emphasizing in this monospaced pattern.

Also in subjective i think you have some mistakes with space emphasizing in your jump patterns. For example i think 00:32:131 (5) - this should be more away from prev circle.

00:50:617 (7) - nc?

Space Insane
Well hello handsome ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
01:33:428 - add circle here lol
Good diff my boi nothing to say :roll:

Fapu Extra

00:08:131 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - cool stream m8! Space make sense here and mapped well
01:12:022 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - but this one looks very random. Bcs music dont have intense character to force make rising space stream. Also it plays bad. Make regular stream here pls.
01:22:401 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ 01:22:401 (1,2,3) - this..yayks
00:59:698 (1) - absolutely random spinner. I dont understand his purpose. It tells nothing. And after this spinner you didnt map drums(another diffs did). Remove spinner and map drums pls. Also it would make more sense if you continued to map piano , you start it here 00:57:104 (1,2,3) - but in next piano note you add spinner 00:57:104 (1,2,3) - and missed one piano sound here 01:00:347 - .

Desperation

01:22:887 (8,1,2,3) - plays bad bcs 01:22:887 (8,1,2) - have too obtuse angle, it hard to flow. Also use DS after 1/4 slider 01:22:887 (8) - is bad idea for me bcs in game it not work well.
That all. All diffs is actually good. GL with rank boys! :)
Elcheer

m3gB3g wrote:

hi !~ m4m (PM)

General:
I dont sure abour BG resolution. Ask peoples
Fill "Source" and add more "Tags"
01:33:104 (5) - i dont understand why all you guys putted circle when sound is long guitar with pronounced end. I mean slider with start 01:33:104 (5) - here and end 01:33:428 - here gonna be better.



Elcheer Insane

00:10:401 (1,2,3,4) - i like to add some space emphasizing in this monospaced pattern. fixed

Also in subjective i think you have some mistakes with space emphasizing in your jump patterns. For example i think 00:32:131 (5) - this should be more away from prev circle.looks cleaner if i leave it that way, moved 4 instead

00:50:617 (7) - nc? fixed

yes
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Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki

m3gB3g wrote:

hi !~ m4m (PM)

General:
I dont sure abour BG resolution. Ask peoples 1920x1080 is fine, there are ranked maps which have this resolution
Fill "Source" and add more "Tags" There's no source and idk which tags to add, it's just a song
01:33:104 (5) - i dont understand why all you guys putted circle when sound is long guitar with pronounced end. I mean slider with start 01:33:104 (5) - here and end 01:33:428 - here gonna be better. True, this is because I changed the audio file so now it's longer. Fixed in my diffs (GD mappers will have to change it themselves)

Easy:
Actually is ok
but here is some subjective issues ( you can ignore them all)
ctrl+A and you will notice: bottom right and left playzones is empty. I think diff should fill all playzone Not relevant in my opinion
Mapping structure is too hard for newbies for example 00:53:212 (3,4) - slider's end dont look at circle. I think it's fine

Insane

00:29:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - looks weird and plays not good. Special focus 00:30:671 (6,7,8) - . I think Long jump pattern with many overlaps and with stacks jump pattern at the end is too unreadible . Please try to make better pattern here. Yeah, I changed it and it's a little bit better now

Desperation

01:22:887 (8,1,2,3) - plays bad bcs 01:22:887 (8,1,2) - have too obtuse angle, it hard to flow. Also use DS after 1/4 slider 01:22:887 (8) - is bad idea for me bcs in game it not work well. Ok fixed
That all. All diffs is actually good. GL with rank boys! :)
Thank you very much! I will return the M4M as soon as possible
Poii

Gemu- wrote:

Hi! ^w^


d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)



  1. 00:30:022 (112,113) - The guitar increases in one of those notes, so it would be better to change to k one of those. drum, not guitar
  2. 01:33:428 - It would be better to add a finish K to end the song, also I can hear a big sound how finish. i miss this one, since i dunno if jack changed the mp3



  • HP: 5
  1. 00:19:320 (84) - Add a finish D, can hear a sound similar to a big blow. Also you have it in Muzukashii.shame on me
  2. 00:20:779 (96) - This finished does not convince me much, because when playing it would be very uncomfortable for the stream. If you remove the finish it would be much more comfortable to play and it would be much better.why everyone hate this, ok removed
  3. 01:12:509 (318) - Similar to the previous suggestion. i keep this since it just 5plet, not that hard
  4. 01:31:968 (1) - Add a finish D for consistency with the first suggestion and with Muzukashii.
  5. 01:33:428 - Add a finish K? for the reason in Muzukashii (Apply only if you did it in Muzukashii) ok^^



Amazing and Great Mapset! I hope my mod has been helpful :33, Good Luck!
ty gemu-chan

oni
osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:弱者の宣言
Artist:HoneyWorks feat. Gero
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Version:Poii's Oni
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Essey6
Muzu
00:22:401 (84,85) - ctrl-G? to match the vocals
00:23:212 (87) - Kat? to match the vocals
00:28:563 (106,107) - ctrl-G? to match the vocals
00:29:536 (110) - Kat? the vocals are higher here than on 111 but 111 is where you start mapping drums soo
00:31:158 (119) - don? for vocals
00:32:131 (123) - kat? for vocals
00:33:428 (128,129) - ctrl-G
00:34:077 (130,131,132) - dkd?
00:35:698 (135,136) - ctrl-G
00:36:995 (141) - kat?
00:37:482 (143) - kat?
00:37:968 (145) - this and 146 are high points in the vocals so i think this should be kat
00:39:266 (150,151) - i think these should be kat (or at least 150)
00:40:077 (153,154) - ctrl-G? 154 is lower than 153
00:42:185 (161,162) - ctrl-G? to match the vocals
00:46:887 (172,173) - ctrl-G? to match the vocals
00:47:698 (175) - don because it's lower than 176
00:48:833 (180,181) - delete 180 because the second sylabel it's representing is hard to hear and 181 should be don to represent vocals
00:49:644 (183,184) - ctrl-G to match vocals
00:55:158 (199) - kat? because it's a high point in the vocals as well as 200 and it'll sorta match the previous part like this (and what you did with the high/low vocals there)
01:01:968 (218) - kat because it's the same sound as 212 and 215
01:03:266 (224,225) - ctrl-G? 224 is a snare sound

in the chorus, are you mapping the vocals or the drums? i think that you should pick one instead of mapping both to avoid confusion (i was kinda confused)
the drums and the vocals have a lot of overlapping parts so it'll still be pretty dense no matter what one you choose

that's all i have to say about the muzu, is good :D

Oni
00:04:563 (17,18) - ctrl-G? to match vocals and drums
00:05:212 (19) - kat? to match vocals and drums
00:06:185 (23) - kat because it's higher than 22 and 24
00:07:158 (27) - kat?
00:08:293 (32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39) - maybe map the entire drum roll?
00:22:401 (102,103,104) - kkd?
00:23:212 (106) - kat?
00:24:022 (110) - don because same pitch as 107
00:24:347 (111,112,113) - dkd or kkd? 112 is a higher pitch
00:25:320 (114,115) - ctrl-G to match vocals
00:26:455 (119) - don to match vocals?
00:28:401 (128) - delete because syllabel is hard to hear
00:28:887 (130,131) - ctrl-G?
00:29:536 (133) - kat?
00:32:131 (147) - kat? to match vocals
00:33:428 (153,154,155) - kkd? dkd?
00:35:698 (163,164) - this is fine if you're mapping drums here but for vocals i would ctrl-G
00:36:995 (169) - kat? high pitch
00:38:617 (176,177,178) - kdd? kkd?
00:40:806 - there's a snare here
00:47:860 (219) - if you're mapping drums this should be a don
00:49:644 (226,227) - 226 is higher than 227
01:01:806 (267,268) - ctrl-G? the triples are all low sounds and the 268 is a snare

same for chorus as for muzu, are you mapping drums or vocals? because some parts (i.e. 01:04:239 - ) are missing notes if you're mapping drums but some parts (i.e. 01:02:455 (270,271) - and notes like it) are mapped when there are no vocals
if you're mapping both you should map them all imo, unless this is an emphasice thing then ??

good map overall, very fun to mod and play lol

i'm just getting back into mapping/modding after an almost-year-long hiatus so please excuse any bad suggestions :')
and if i've suggested things already suggested before but were rejected, sorry !

GL with rank!
Poii

Essey6 wrote:

Muzu
00:22:401 (84,85) - ctrl-G? to match the vocals just want to make a constrast with previous triplet
00:23:212 (87) - Kat? to match the vocals its "musubu" ddd is fine for me
00:28:563 (106,107) - ctrl-G? to match the vocals keep 106
00:29:536 (110) - Kat? the vocals are higher here than on 111 but 111 is where you start mapping drums soo keep it don, 110 not so strong, and 111 have strong vocal+snare, so kat fit better there
00:31:158 (119) - don? for vocals mono triplet is fine, to make it differ with oni
00:32:131 (123) - kat? for vocals since you suggest to ctrl+g 00:33:428 (128,129) - i'll keep this for variation
00:33:428 (128,129) - ctrl-G
00:34:077 (130,131,132) - dkd? double dkd like the previous triplet ? nah
00:35:698 (135,136) - ctrl-G to make a constrast with 00:34:725 (133,134) -
00:36:995 (141) - kat?
00:37:482 (143) - kat? ^nah, it fit with the vocal so, keep it
00:37:968 (145) - this and 146 are high points in the vocals so i think this should be kat the flow is goin from low to high, so d k is better
00:39:266 (150,151) - i think these should be kat (or at least 150) yes 150 kat
00:40:077 (153,154) - ctrl-G? 154 is lower than 153 its fine, keep it
00:42:185 (161,162) - ctrl-G? to match the vocals i duno why but i'll keep this, d k d is also fine, but...
00:46:887 (172,173) - ctrl-G? to match the vocals its goin from low to high, so ddk is good
00:47:698 (175) - don because it's lower than 176 "aah aah"
00:48:833 (180,181) - delete 180 because the second sylabel it's representing is hard to hear and 181 should be don to represent vocals 00:48:833 (180) - this, have a vocal, so why ?
00:49:644 (183,184) - ctrl-G to match vocals naah the vocal not change at 00:49:644 - but 00:49:968 -
00:55:158 (199) - kat? because it's a high point in the vocals as well as 200 and it'll sorta match the previous part like this (and what you did with the high/low vocals there) and ctrl+g the previous k d
01:01:968 (218) - kat because it's the same sound as 212 and 215 dont fit better for me, its also fill the drum and vocal
01:03:266 (224,225) - ctrl-G? 224 is a snare sound i'll consider this, since its follow the vocal

in the chorus, are you mapping the vocals or the drums? i think that you should pick one instead of mapping both to avoid confusion (i was kinda confused)
the drums and the vocals have a lot of overlapping parts so it'll still be pretty dense no matter what one you choose i mix both drum and vocal to make it harder bcus this kai is the last intense part of the song, if i pick only the vocal there would be a lot of space,so thats why i mixed it, to fill the space and make it fun

that's all i have to say about the muzu, is good :D

Oni
00:04:563 (17,18) - ctrl-G? to match vocals and drums consistency with muzu
00:05:212 (19) - kat? to match vocals and drums i also worried about the guitar, that come together with the drum, thats a strong sound, will consider this
00:06:185 (23) - kat because it's higher than 22 and 24 ok
00:07:158 (27) - kat? kat
00:08:293 (32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39) - maybe map the entire drum roll? 7plet ? hmmm not ok, since muzu only use triplet there
00:22:401 (102,103,104) - kkd? variation, the previous triplet is kkd
00:23:212 (106) - kat? aah forgot about this one, its should be ddd, same like muzu
00:24:022 (110) - don because same pitch as 107 kdd
00:24:347 (111,112,113) - dkd or kkd? 112 is a higher pitch kdk
00:25:320 (114,115) - ctrl-G to match vocals its already fit with the vocal, the kat is fill the high tone
00:26:455 (119) - don to match vocals? 00:26:455 (119,120) - "tama"
00:28:401 (128) - delete because syllabel is hard to hear its fine, i can hear it
00:28:887 (130,131) - ctrl-G? constrast with previous triplet
00:29:536 (133) - kat? same like in muzu
00:32:131 (147) - kat? to match vocals consistency with muzu
00:33:428 (153,154,155) - kkd? dkd?
00:35:698 (163,164) - this is fine if you're mapping drums here but for vocals i would ctrl-G
00:36:995 (169) - kat? high pitch
00:38:617 (176,177,178) - kdd? kkd? ddk
00:40:806 - there's a snare here its too hard, hitting 1/4 doblet and then 1/3 7plet
00:47:860 (219) - if you're mapping drums this should be a don "ah ah"
00:49:644 (226,227) - 226 is higher than 227 like in muzu
01:01:806 (267,268) - ctrl-G? the triples are all low sounds and the 268 is a snare 01:01:806 (267) - to don, but keep 268

same for chorus as for muzu, are you mapping drums or vocals? because some parts (i.e. 01:04:239 - ) are missing notes if you're mapping drums but some parts (i.e. 01:02:455 (270,271) - and notes like it) are mapped when there are no vocals
if you're mapping both you should map them all imo, unless this is an emphasice thing then ?? already explained in muzu part

good map overall, very fun to mod and play lol

i'm just getting back into mapping/modding after an almost-year-long hiatus so please excuse any bad suggestions :')
and if i've suggested things already suggested before but were rejected, sorry !TY

GL with rank!

oni
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Mithia
I'm fast.
hi hi hi!!, Here from my modding queue owo
"Easy"
I consider an easy difficulty with a SV at 0.80 better
Insane
00:17:536 (3,2) - stack it well
01:01:320 (3) - NC for better look
01:09:752 (5,3) - stack it well x)
01:21:104 (4,6) - NC and and removethe one here 01:21:590 (1) - Jumps look much better
Desperation
00:30:185 (3) - NC owo
I regret my little mod, but your map does not have many things that I observe strange or simply errors, I see everything very well, I only contribute suggestions because I know that anything is useful, I hope I have helped :? :?
Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki

OsuDans wrote:

I'm fast.
hi hi hi!!, Here from my modding queue owo
Easy
I consider an easy difficulty with a SV at 0.80 better You may be right about that but now I mapped it this way and won't change it anymore
Insane
00:17:536 (3,2) - stack it well
01:01:320 (3) - NC for better look
01:09:752 (5,3) - stack it well x)
01:21:104 (4,6) - NC and and removethe one here 01:21:590 (1) - Jumps look much better
Fixed all
Desperation
00:30:185 (3) - NC owo Fixed
I regret my little mod, but your map does not have many things that I observe strange or simply errors, I see everything very well, I only contribute suggestions because I know that anything is useful, I hope I have helped :? :?
Thanks for the mod, don't worry your suggestions were helpful ;)
Mirash
general
you don't really need your hitsounds to be 100% all the time, use something below 70(exact 70 is good) for kiai and 60 for the rest, now your circles just too loud for a normie player

offset seem like +3 ( https://i.imgur.com/HZD8hXP.png press move and ok, dont forget to +3 x))

ask https://osu.ppy.sh/u/4581039 for tags and metadata

also you need a normal diff for a good spread, 1,6 into 3 star isn't good

Desperation
00:06:671 (2,3) - current flow you have here isn't that good, after you move cursor pretty fast to aim slider (3) you need to slow down and follow its path and without changing direction it plays bad, better to avoid this as it seem to not be your intention. placing circle (2) https://i.imgur.com/xUwlLT5.png like this will work just fine!
00:11:374 (5) - distance before and after this circle are same and things loosing their highlighting, either increase spacing here or decrease same goes for 00:13:968 (5) - and alike
00:22:401 (2,3) - these objects placed too closely with 00:22:077 (1) - imo, just a bit upper will look better https://i.imgur.com/WMQTq6V.png
00:26:131 (2) - it slightly overlaps with 00:25:320 (3) - and is not a very clean now, try placing it here as it seem like your theme of the map https://i.imgur.com/OMQbamJ.png
00:35:050 (1,2,3) - uhh, too linear for not linear map, use something sharper like your entire map https://i.imgur.com/Pnn8txK.jpg
00:40:563 (3,1,2,1) - don't like how they barely overlap each other, increase distance between them a bit https://i.imgur.com/Dzrocd2.png looks better
00:46:725 (1,2,3,4,5) - oh, nice
00:55:806 (1,2,3,4,5) - why not make here a nice and neat star?
01:11:050 (5) - it takes too much pressure aiming it and music going down here, placing it like this https://i.imgur.com/IvNBgNU.png will be more easy to aim
and will create nice anti-jump on next downbeat object.
01:27:428 (3,4,5) - try placing it closer to everything else to highlight this part out of other highly spaced kiai, low spacing will work here just well https://i.imgur.com/v2GgXQu.png

Fapu's Extra
00:01:644 (2,4) - uh, don't make such overlaps, looks not that clean, you can blanket here 00:02:293 (4,1) -
00:08:212 - there is not sound on blue tick, and making it clickable isn't intuitive to play at all, also starting stream from white tick feels uncomfortable, and also clicking two times on weak beats doesn't feel good, long slider will work here https://i.imgur.com/Zfh5BHb.jpg
00:08:293 (1,2) - oh btw you can manipulate volume(lower it) on these two for nice feedback for a players :3
00:40:887 (6,7,1) - get rid of slightly overlapping, it'll look much better that way!
00:53:860 (3,4) - and all of these slightly overlapping too, make them like 4 px more from each other

Space's Insane
00:28:887 (2,3,4) - you lost hitsoudning here
00:50:617 (1) - oh missing that red tick is bad, just end your slider there.

Elcheer's Insane
00:17:374 (3,5) - avoid such overlaps, they make your map look messy https://i.imgur.com/IOhKX7Z.png
00:28:725 (2,3,4,5,6) - hitsounds are missing
your diff is too much focused on overlapping with previous object and it took that degree when it sometimes almost feels like you aren't moving on the playfield at all(from 00:35:050 (1) - to 00:38:941 (1) - is too much imo lol), it'd be much better if your objects move around more, not saying you need to remap everything as it is not what mod should look like, just consider using less of overlapping next time you map!

Insane
00:17:212 (2,4) - their overlapping look not best https://i.imgur.com/Ym9MOBd.png
Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki

Mirash wrote:

general
you don't really need your hitsounds to be 100% all the time, use something below 70(exact 70 is good) for kiai and 60 for the rest, now your circles just too loud for a normie player Ok fixed

offset seem like +3 ( https://i.imgur.com/HZD8hXP.png press move and ok, dont forget to +3 x)) I will change the offset as soon as everyone has applied their mods

ask https://osu.ppy.sh/u/4581039 for tags and metadata Yup

also you need a normal diff for a good spread, 1,6 into 3 star isn't good Normal GD is still being mapped

Desperation
00:06:671 (2,3) - current flow you have here isn't that good, after you move cursor pretty fast to aim slider (3) you need to slow down and follow its path and without changing direction it plays bad, better to avoid this as it seem to not be your intention. placing circle (2) https://i.imgur.com/xUwlLT5.png like this will work just fine! Changed
00:11:374 (5) - distance before and after this circle are same and things loosing their highlighting, either increase spacing here or decrease same goes for 00:13:968 (5) - and alike You're right, it's better now
00:22:401 (2,3) - these objects placed too closely with 00:22:077 (1) - imo, just a bit upper will look better https://i.imgur.com/WMQTq6V.png Fixed
00:26:131 (2) - it slightly overlaps with 00:25:320 (3) - and is not a very clean now, try placing it here as it seem like your theme of the map https://i.imgur.com/OMQbamJ.png True, I moved it now
00:35:050 (1,2,3) - uhh, too linear for not linear map, use something sharper like your entire map https://i.imgur.com/Pnn8txK.jpg Alright
00:40:563 (3,1,2,1) - don't like how they barely overlap each other, increase distance between them a bit https://i.imgur.com/Dzrocd2.png looks better Fixed
00:46:725 (1,2,3,4,5) - oh, nice thx xd
00:55:806 (1,2,3,4,5) - why not make here a nice and neat star? Ok
01:11:050 (5) - it takes too much pressure aiming it and music going down here, placing it like this https://i.imgur.com/IvNBgNU.png will be more easy to aim
and will create nice anti-jump on next downbeat object. Yeah seems good
01:27:428 (3,4,5) - try placing it closer to everything else to highlight this part out of other highly spaced kiai, low spacing will work here just well https://i.imgur.com/v2GgXQu.png I would rather keep it the way it is because it's a strong sound and low spacing doesn't fit for that imo

Fapu's Extra
00:01:644 (2,4) - uh, don't make such overlaps, looks not that clean, you can blanket here 00:02:293 (4,1) -
00:08:212 - there is not sound on blue tick, and making it clickable isn't intuitive to play at all, also starting stream from white tick feels uncomfortable, and also clicking two times on weak beats doesn't feel good, long slider will work here https://i.imgur.com/Zfh5BHb.jpg
00:08:293 (1,2) - oh btw you can manipulate volume(lower it) on these two for nice feedback for a players :3
00:40:887 (6,7,1) - get rid of slightly overlapping, it'll look much better that way!
00:53:860 (3,4) - and all of these slightly overlapping too, make them like 4 px more from each other

Space's Insane
00:28:887 (2,3,4) - you lost hitsoudning here
00:50:617 (1) - oh missing that red tick is bad, just end your slider there.

Elcheer's Insane
00:17:374 (3,5) - avoid such overlaps, they make your map look messy https://i.imgur.com/IOhKX7Z.png
00:28:725 (2,3,4,5,6) - hitsounds are missing
your diff is too much focused on overlapping with previous object and it took that degree when it sometimes almost feels like you aren't moving on the playfield at all(from 00:35:050 (1) - to 00:38:941 (1) - is too much imo lol), it'd be much better if your objects move around more, not saying you need to remap everything as it is not what mod should look like, just consider using less of overlapping next time you map!

Insane
00:17:212 (2,4) - their overlapping look not best https://i.imgur.com/Ym9MOBd.png Fixed
Thanks for the mod, it was really helpful :)
Faputa

J a c k wrote:

Modding my own map lmao (also changed audio file now so make sure to update)

Fapu's Extra
  1. 00:01:158 - Why did you omit the vocals here if you mapped them in the other parts? Also at 00:03:752 - fixed
  2. 00:04:320 (3,4,5) - There's no sound here so it would be better if you removed the stream There's guitar sounds :3
  3. 00:05:941 (5,8) - You can barely hear these sounds, I don't think triples are necessary but you can leave them if you want These are to stand out with the first few seconds
  4. 00:08:212 (3) - No sound here
  5. 00:08:131 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Make the distances between the circles equal (except for the last 4 circles maybe) and the shape of the stream could be better too. Make a slider and use the Ctrl + Shift + F function to make it prettier fixed in my own way
  6. 00:09:104 (5) - I think you should replace the slider by a circle and map the sounds the way I did in the top diff
  7. 00:14:941 (4) - Move to 00:14:779 - and move 00:14:779 (3) - to 00:14:941 - (also change their position so it fits) I would keep this as I think a slow slider after a stream sounds nice for this song
  8. 00:19:806 (2,3) - Would look better if they were vertical For flow :#
  9. 00:20:455 (4,5,6,7,1) - Again, use the "covert slider to stream" function to make it visually more appealing done
  10. 00:21:428 (4,5,4,5) - They should not overlap Actually this is a concept from the very first part of the song. I'll keep until I have solutions
  11. 00:25:401 - No sound here and the sounds at 00:25:482 - and 00:25:563 - are minimal again so it's up to you whether you map it or not
  12. 00:27:995 - The sound is not here, but instead at 00:28:158 - (also barely audible) changed sth
  13. 00:30:914 (8) - No sound here to balance with the previous bursts
  14. 00:36:914 - ^
  15. 00:40:725 (4) - ^ These two places have sounds :3..
  16. 00:40:887 (6,7,1) - Doesn't look good because they have different lengths and the angles are kinda off, I would copy 00:40:887 (6) - , paste it at 00:41:212 - , press Ctrl + G and move it, then rotate and move 00:41:536 (1) - somewhere else fixed sth
  17. 00:46:725 (1,2) - You could blanket them Doesn't feel like it is necessary
  18. 00:47:860 (1,2) - Blanket is off and the overlap between 00:47:860 (1,3) - doesn't look so good fixed
  19. 00:51:185 - Why did you omit this drum? The whole section is calm so I went for easier rhythm choices :3
  20. 00:51:914 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The distances between these is not always the same I think that doesn't matter since slider leniency is a thing
  21. 00:59:698 (1) - I think this spinner doesn't fit here, you should remove it and map the drums that start at 01:00:995 - fixed in my own way.
  22. 01:12:022 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Use convert slider to stream, also here: 01:22:401 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - fixed
  23. 01:27:428 (3,4) - Same thing like 00:14:779 (3,4) - No change
  24. 01:32:455 (2,3) - There's only 1/2 rhythm here I thought these thing of mapping is allowed. I'll see if I have anyways to fix it
  25. Could you nerf it just a little bit more maybe? About 5.25-5-3* because 5.36* and 5.45* are so close >-< Sure, but later. I am very busy actually irl. sorry ><
  26. Nice diff otherwise
I'll just post a update here for this mod for now. I'll keep updating

15/12/17

Mirash wrote:

Fapu's Extra
00:01:644 (2,4) - uh, don't make such overlaps, looks not that clean, you can blanket here 00:02:293 (4,1) - fixed in my own way
00:08:212 - there is not sound on blue tick, and making it clickable isn't intuitive to play at all, also starting stream from white tick feels uncomfortable, and also clicking two times on weak beats doesn't feel good, long slider will work here https://i.imgur.com/Zfh5BHb.jpg Nice idea :D
00:08:293 (1,2) - oh btw you can manipulate volume(lower it) on these two for nice feedback for a players :3 Fixed
00:40:887 (6,7,1) - get rid of slightly overlapping, it'll look much better that way! fixed
00:53:860 (3,4) - and all of these slightly overlapping too, make them like 4 px more from each other fixed
update:
osu file format v14

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Behon
From my mod queue. Thanks for your patience and M4M.

Easy:
00:04:239 (3)- This circle feels unnecessary.
00:49:968 (2,3)- The timing on the slider end and following circle feel a little off beat compared to the overall groove of the objects before it. For an Easy diff it might throw people off.

Ky's Hard:
00:04:239 (2)- This looks kind of ugly with the slight overlap. It would look better if it was directly underneath the preceding slider's end. This happens at many other points, including 00:15:266, 00:24:995, & 00:36:022.
01:09:104 (2,3,4,5)- The placement here is super confusing and awkward. Maybe it's meant to be disorienting, but that kind of stuff suits top-tier difficulties rather than a Hard.
There's also too many overlapping sliders that would look better properly blanketed to count. This is just a very messy-looking map TBH.

I didn't find much to take issue with in the Insane diff. It does a lot of unorthodox stuff spacing and placement wise but it does them consistently and aesthetically well, which are the most important aspects for me. Only recommendation I'd make is not making 01:01:320 a new combo, since no other section pulls something like it and there's no change in the music to make it less out of place.
YukiZura-
from q

[Desperation]
00:30:185 (1) - no need nc here cuz it doesnt express anything lol
00:44:131 (1,4) - blanket
01:28:725 (4) - make the red dot at the middle
00:57:104 - ~ 01:00:995 - hurm you know since this in just 1 minute map , no need to put a break ... fill the "ting" sound with single note is enough
01:23:050 (1) - hurm you should bigger the ds for good emphasis but that is just a suggestion

[ky's hard]
00:06:509 (1,2,3) - weird ... you should stack this note 00:06:671 (2) - with 00:06:509 (1) - this one cuz the strong sound of both are same
00:08:374 - got sound here .. fill with note make a stream to reverse slider
00:30:347 (3,4) - this two shound swap places beacuse 00:30:347 - here it got the 'deng' sound and 00:30:509 - 'tet' sound perfect for slider and it feel more comfortable to play
00:40:482 (2) - nah .. replace it with a note for better gameplay


that all .. hehe gudluck <3
Elcheer

Mirash wrote:

Elcheer's Insane
00:17:374 (3,5) - avoid such overlaps, they make your map look messy https://i.imgur.com/IOhKX7Z.png fixed
00:28:725 (2,3,4,5,6) - hitsounds are missing fixed
your diff is too much focused on overlapping with previous object and it took that degree when it sometimes almost feels like you aren't moving on the playfield at all(from 00:35:050 (1) - to 00:38:941 (1) - is too much imo lol), it'd be much better if your objects move around more, not saying you need to remap everything as it is not what mod should look like, just consider using less of overlapping next time you map! it'd be kinda hard to change that up for this,
but i'll definitely mind that next time i map. thanks!
yeeeee
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Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki

Behonkiss wrote:

From my mod queue. Thanks for your patience and M4M.

Easy:
00:04:239 (3)- This circle feels unnecessary. I placed a circle here because I'm not mapping only the vocals
00:49:968 (2,3)- The timing on the slider end and following circle feel a little off beat compared to the overall groove of the objects before it. For an Easy diff it might throw people off. Okay fixed because someone else has also pointed it out

Ky's Hard:
00:04:239 (2)- This looks kind of ugly with the slight overlap. It would look better if it was directly underneath the preceding slider's end. This happens at many other points, including 00:15:266, 00:24:995, & 00:36:022.
01:09:104 (2,3,4,5)- The placement here is super confusing and awkward. Maybe it's meant to be disorienting, but that kind of stuff suits top-tier difficulties rather than a Hard.
There's also too many overlapping sliders that would look better properly blanketed to count. This is just a very messy-looking map TBH.

I didn't find much to take issue with in the Insane diff. It does a lot of unorthodox stuff spacing and placement wise but it does them consistently and aesthetically well, which are the most important aspects for me. Only recommendation I'd make is not making 01:01:320 a new combo, since no other section pulls something like it and there's no change in the music to make it less out of place. Fixed
Thanks for the mod ;)

YukiZura- wrote:

from q

[Desperation]
00:30:185 (1) - no need nc here cuz it doesnt express anything lol Fixed
00:44:131 (1,4) - blanket Not necessary because they are far away in time
01:28:725 (4) - make the red dot at the middle Looks fine to me
00:57:104 - ~ 01:00:995 - hurm you know since this in just 1 minute map , no need to put a break ... fill the "ting" sound with single note is enough Ok
01:23:050 (1) - hurm you should bigger the ds for good emphasis but that is just a suggestion I think it's fine

[ky's hard]
00:06:509 (1,2,3) - weird ... you should stack this note 00:06:671 (2) - with 00:06:509 (1) - this one cuz the strong sound of both are same
00:08:374 - got sound here .. fill with note make a stream to reverse slider
00:30:347 (3,4) - this two shound swap places beacuse 00:30:347 - here it got the 'deng' sound and 00:30:509 - 'tet' sound perfect for slider and it feel more comfortable to play
00:40:482 (2) - nah .. replace it with a note for better gameplay


that all .. hehe gudluck <3
Thank you :3
Affirmation
Q

[Desperation]
  1. 00:08:293 (2) - For seeing this note, this note expressed like 00:08:455 (3,4,5,6) - the others, but music is differnent, 00:08:374 - tbh this part's song is not so loud, then you don't give same intense with others in this note. you should make just triplet or delete 00:08:374 - this rhythm.
  2. 00:14:131 (1,3,4,5) - I think you intend blanket here. but blanket is not perfect, you should check and fix it for better visual.
  3. 00:25:563 - this part has quiet symbol sound, if you add a note here, rhythm could be better for expressing.
  4. 00:25:968 (1,2) - You should make it into one slider, for seeing 00:20:779 (1) - and 00:00:023 (1) - , you made it as slider, but in here, you made two circlesm it makes bad consistent of pattern and intense, you should make it consistent.
  5. 00:46:725 (1,2,3,4,5) - you didn't use this circle patterns well, then this pattern looks it has more intense than others, without any reason. you should make it into 2 sliders and 1 circle. I know you intend pentagon, but yea,,,,,, you use weird way.
GL
-Luminate
Hi! From my queue (new standard modder here so sorry If I say nonsense)
Ky's Hard
  1. 00:03:914 (1,2) - 1/4 patterns like this is not very well fit in Hard? Hard should be more easier to read imo
    (The same goes for 00:14:941 (5,6) - 00:24:671 (1,2) - 00:35:698 (3,4) - 00:40:239 (1,2) - 01:20:293 (1,2) - and the rest that is similar too)
    maybe try making them all 1/2 ?
  2. 00:20:131 (3,4) - slider formation here looks a bit weird imo, I suggest slider (3) straight like (4) and move around 436|172
  3. 00:25:482 (4,5,6) - remove (5)?
  4. 00:33:752 (1) - I don't know if your hitsounding is WIP or not but hitfinish here sounds strange
  5. 00:45:266 (3) - move a little bit out from (2)? the blanket here is too close
  6. 00:48:347 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - the note density here suddenly drops, add some 1/2 notes
  7. 01:19:482 (2,3,4,5) - I think this pattern here doesn't flow
    try something like this? and make changes the other following pattern
  8. 01:25:644 (1,2) - same here, doesn't flow much imo , maybe make it like 01:30:833 (1,2) - would do?
  9. 01:33:428 - Last one, I think the song should end here
Insane
  1. 00:08:293 (2,3,4,5,6) - make these sliders around 2.37x would be better? same goes for other similar pattern
  2. 00:40:887 (1,2) - rotating 90 clockwise and put the sliders on the same spot, then make change to 00:41:536 (1) -
Elcheer's Insane
  1. 00:26:941 (5,6) - I think a little jump suits here
  2. 00:27:590 (2) - this slider can be two circles following the vocal
  3. 00:27:914 (3,4) - On the other hand, this two circles can be merged into a slider which plays better imo
  4. 00:30:995 (8,9,1) - increase the triplets distance a little to reflect the beat more
  5. 00:38:941 (1) - hitfinish
  6. 00:41:212 (1) - remove NC
  7. 00:49:320 (1,2) - I don't think this should be a jump, otherwise it should a slider instead
  8. 01:12:022 (9) - NC, the combo here is too outstanding
  9. 01:22:401 (10) - ^
Space's Insane
  1. 00:00:671 (3,4,5) - this part shouldn't be a jump imo or else equally space them as they have the same pace
  2. 00:10:401 - 00:11:698 - the 1/2 slider should start on red tick then follow up with a circle if you want to follow the melody
    the example is on 00:15:590 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - as you follow them very well
  3. 00:23:374 (1,2,3,4) - this here too can be equally spaced following the pace of the song
  4. 00:31:077 (7,1) - this two can be a short slider diving down to follow up with 00:31:320 (2) - which flows more
  5. 00:56:131 (2,3,4) - this can be jumping circles to reflect the beat more.. but your choice here is okay, no need to change if you want
  6. 01:06:185 (1) - again, same case as 00:10:401 but now you're following the vocal which this slider isn't (01:07:320 (1) - this one follows the vocal tho so I think the other 1/2 slider should be placed like that too)
  7. 01:08:779 (1) - ^
  8. 01:11:374 (1) - ^
  9. 01:17:860 - questionable green line > the hitsounds too loud (I mean.. way too loud that it's overstanding)
  10. 01:33:428 - add a note here and fix the green line
That's all, the other diffs are just too hard for me :o I guess I can only help you with this
GL! :)
Elcheer

-Luminate wrote:

Elcheer's Insane
  1. 00:26:941 (5,6) - I think a little jump suits here fixed
  2. 00:27:590 (2) - this slider can be two circles following the vocal fixed
  3. 00:27:914 (3,4) - On the other hand, this two circles can be merged into a slider which plays better imo fixed
  4. 00:30:995 (8,9,1) - increase the triplets distance a little to reflect the beat more fixed
  5. 00:38:941 (1) - hitfinish fixed
  6. 00:41:212 (1) - remove NC fixed
  7. 00:49:320 (1,2) - I don't think this should be a jump, otherwise it should a slider instead i don't see a good enough way to fix this, nerfed the jump instead
  8. 01:12:022 (9) - NC, the combo here is too outstanding fixed
  9. 01:22:401 (10) - ^ fixed
thanks!

monkaS
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William K
Hello, I saw this from someone's queue.

[Easy]
  1. 00:03:590 (2,3) - Could probably CTRL+G the rhythm here and rearrange the spacings to differenciate it being rhythmically the same as 00:00:995 (3,4,5,1) - , which is repeating themselves.
  2. 00:02:293 (5,1) - It'd be better to swap NCs here to remain consistent in NC-ing every 2 stanzas.
  3. 00:00:995 (3,4,5,1) - Just a suggestion, how about making 00:00:995 (3,4,5,1) - an obvious repeating pattern to reflect the vocals better? This, for example.
  4. 00:12:347 (4,5) - 00:17:536 (4,5) - Differenciating these from 00:14:941 (4,5) - and 00:20:131 (4,5) - would be pretty nice imo. At 00:12:347 (4,5) - the guitars are lower in pitch and one more later is higher (00:14:941 (4,5) - ). How about making 00:14:941 (4,5) - and 00:17:536 (4,5) - a 1/2 slider for that?
  5. 00:55:158 (2) - This slider should have the same rhythm as 00:53:860 (4,5) - considering they're similar in pitch.
  6. 00:57:752 (1,1) - Unnecesary NC, it results in an inconsistency and could probably confuse new players since there's no guiding line during gameplay. Same applies to 01:00:347 (1) - .
  7. 01:09:428 (4) - You can put NC here to mark that 01:09:428 (4,5,6) - and 01:07:320 (1,2,3) - is one set.
  8. 01:19:806 (4,1) - Swapping NCs here would be nice, same reasoning as above.
  9. 01:24:995 (4,5) - and 01:30:185 (4,5) - Should change these as well if you applied my suggestion before.

[Desperation]
  1. 00:00:023 (1,2,3,4) - The visual spacings don't look too appealing imo, where 00:00:023 (1,3,4) - is too crowded and 00:00:347 (2) - is left out from the group. Could probably improve the visual spacings.
  2. While this isn't really visible in gameplay, I should point this out in case it's unintentional. 00:00:347 (2,3,4) - The distance spacing here is 2.00x while 00:00:671 (4,5,1,2,3) - 's around 1.85x, and at 00:02:617 (1,2,3) - it's back to 2,00x when there isn't much change on music. This should be reconsidered.
  3. 00:01:320 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Just my personal opinion, would be cool if this's to be a repeating pattern, as I said in Easy.
  4. 00:02:455 (4,1) - The impact of emphasis here can't really be felt in gameplay since it's just a 0.10x spacing difference, might space this out. Though, to be consistent in emphasizing things, 00:01:320 (1) - and 00:03:914 (1) - should be emphasized as well.
  5. 00:05:212 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Just before, you focused mainly on vocals but here it's on guitars, assuming from 00:05:860 (4,5,4,5) - . The holding vocal at 00:05:860 - is treated the same as 00:05:536 (3,5) - which has 2 vocals in 1/2. How about changing 00:05:860 (4,4) - into 1/1 sliders to give some effect to the vocal?
  6. Emphasis should be done consistently throughout the map. For instance, you emphasized 00:14:131 (1) - by spacing it out to 3.00x while 00:13:482 (4,5) - being 2.00x. But at 00:10:077 (4,1) - there isn't any emphasis. Same applies to the others like 00:15:266 (8,1) - , 00:12:671 (5,1) - , etc. You could probably set a default spacing for normal beats, and one more for emphasis. In this case, you can nerf 00:10:401 (1,2,3) - and the others into 2.00x while leaving the beats you want to emphasize in 3.00x spacing.
  7. 00:46:725 (1,2,3,4,5) - The pattern is far more intense than the others in the section. You should nerf the spacings out, or make some of them into sliders.
  8. The slider velocity of the map is actually too slow for an Extra imo. But changing the SV would cost a remap. The non-kiai part seems fine, but you should probably buff the kiai out with 1.10x~1.20x green lines to make it appear more intense and differenciate the part from the others.
  9. You stick to the DS too much and it doesn't get you a chance to emphasize things or even variate things. For example, 00:41:536 - this part you stick to 2.00x everywhere, or 00:51:914 - you stick to 2.50x DS. You should emphasize things more.

That should be everything, I hope this helps. Good luck~
Kyle Y

Ikira wrote:

[Ky's Hard] edit english

00:04:428 (2) - stack under this 00:04:103 (1) - overlap for showing 1/4 snapped.
00:19:509 (1) - Hitsound W + E fixed
00:20:968 (1) - the same hitsounds
01:20:806 (2) - delete why should I delete
01:20:482 (1) - stretch to 01:20:806 -
01:30:374 (3) - stretch only to 01:30:536 -
01:32:968 (4) - the same stretch only to 01:33:130 - I think it is better to provide reason why you think I need to fix, otherwise, I don't know what you are thinking of.

m3gB3g wrote:

hi !~ m4m (PM)


Ky Hard
ar7 is too low for 3.29* and 185 BPM. Feels weird in nomod gameplay. Pls put ar8 ar 8 is too high for hard diff tbh, so I just remain.
00:14:941 (5,6) - i dont sure about use Blue ticks in Hard diff. You can make slider more longer and end them in white tick. it is acceptable for blue ticks, if it is suitable. I use blue tick to make the rhythm different, and players could have more fun on it.
00:24:671 (1,2) - ^
00:35:698 (3,4) - ^
01:20:293 (1,2) - ^
01:33:104 (5) - end slider here 01:33:428 - ? okay...

Behonkiss wrote:

From my mod queue. Thanks for your patience and M4M.



Ky's Hard:
00:04:239 (2)- This looks kind of ugly with the slight overlap. It would look better if it was directly underneath the preceding slider's end. This happens at many other points, including 00:15:266 - , 00:24:995 - , & 00:36:022 - . slight overlap is for showing blue ticks circle.
01:09:104 (2,3,4,5)- The placement here is super confusing and awkward. Maybe it's meant to be disorienting, but that kind of stuff suits top-tier difficulties rather than a Hard. I think it is okay, because this pattern have better appear before and still using afterward.
There's also too many overlapping sliders that would look better properly blanketed to count. This is just a very messy-looking map TBH.

YukiZura- wrote:

from q


[ky's hard]
00:06:509 (1,2,3) - weird ... you should stack this note 00:06:671 (2) - with 00:06:509 (1) - this one cuz the strong sound of both are same both are okay, stacking 2,3 is make more sense to me because the vocal makes me feel like this.
00:08:374 - got sound here .. fill with note make a stream to reverse slider I don't want to complicate the rhythm here
00:30:347 (3,4) - this two shound swap places beacuse 00:30:347 - here it got the 'deng' sound and 00:30:509 - 'tet' sound perfect for slider and it feel more comfortable to playI avoid using slider end on white, even I do not change, the rhythm still okay.
00:40:482 (2) - nah .. replace it with a note for better gameplay fixed to another pattern.


that all .. hehe gudluck <3

-Luminate wrote:

Hi! From my queue (new standard modder here so sorry If I say nonsense)
Ky's Hard
  1. 00:03:914 (1,2) - 1/4 patterns like this is not very well fit in Hard? Hard should be more easier to read imo
    (The same goes for 00:14:941 (5,6) - 00:24:671 (1,2) - 00:35:698 (3,4) - 00:40:239 (1,2) - 01:20:293 (1,2) - and the rest that is similar too)
    maybe try making them all 1/2 ? it is acceptable to use blue tick in hard.
  2. 00:20:131 (3,4) - slider formation here looks a bit weird imo, I suggest slider (3) straight like (4) and move around 436|172 fixed.
  3. 00:25:482 (4,5,6) - remove (5)? remain, there is a sound, and I think it can emphasize 00:25:644 (6) - beat.
  4. 00:33:752 (1) - I don't know if your hitsounding is WIP or not but hitfinish here sounds strange I guess still wip.
  5. 00:45:266 (3) - move a little bit out from (2)? the blanket here is too closeum... restricted by the ds.
  6. 00:48:347 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - the note density here suddenly drops, add some 1/2 notes a little break for players, and it is the end of the clam part, so i think it is acceptable.
  7. 01:19:482 (2,3,4,5) - I think this pattern here doesn't flow I think circular flow still exist, wait for further modding.
    try something like this? and make changes the other following pattern
  8. 01:25:644 (1,2) - same here, doesn't flow much imo , maybe make it like 01:30:833 (1,2) - would do? fixed
  9. 01:33:428 - Last one, I think the song should end herefixed
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PeterEU wrote:

Short NM

Hard
00:08:968 (4,1) - these are too close to each other making next object less visible fixed
00:10:590 (1) - why samples are other here? its the same as otheryou mean hit sound?
NOW CHECKING!!!

update
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Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[Desperation]
  1. 00:08:293 (2) - For seeing this note, this note expressed like 00:08:455 (3,4,5,6) - the others, but music is differnent, 00:08:374 - tbh this part's song is not so loud, then you don't give same intense with others in this note. you should make just triplet or delete 00:08:374 - this rhythm. I'm aware of the fact that this note is not as strong as the others but I showed that by increasing the distance between the sliders more and more, I also put a weaker hitsound on this note so I think it's okay
  2. 00:14:131 (1,3,4,5) - I think you intend blanket here. but blanket is not perfect, you should check and fix it for better visual. The first circle of the triplet is blanketed perfectly but the other circles are not because of stacking, I'm not sure if this is the right way to blanket triples but I don't know any better option
  3. 00:25:563 - this part has quiet symbol sound, if you add a note here, rhythm could be better for expressing. This sound is not really important so I'm not mapping it, it doesn't appear anywhere else in the map so it would feel out of place
  4. 00:25:968 (1,2) - You should make it into one slider, for seeing 00:20:779 (1) - and 00:00:023 (1) - , you made it as slider, but in here, you made two circlesm it makes bad consistent of pattern and intense, you should make it consistent. Ok fixed
  5. 00:46:725 (1,2,3,4,5) - you didn't use this circle patterns well, then this pattern looks it has more intense than others, without any reason. you should make it into 2 sliders and 1 circle. I know you intend pentagon, but yea,,,,,, you use weird way. Fixed
GL
Thanks!

-Luminate wrote:

Hi! From my queue (new standard modder here so sorry If I say nonsense)
Insane
  1. 00:08:293 (2,3,4,5,6) - make these sliders around 2.37x would be better? same goes for other similar pattern
  2. 00:40:887 (1,2) - rotating 90 clockwise and put the sliders on the same spot, then make change to 00:41:536 (1) -
That's all, the other diffs are just too hard for me :o I guess I can only help you with this
GL! :)
Thank you for your suggestions but I prefer keeping it this way

William K wrote:

Hello, I saw this from someone's queue.

[Easy]
  1. 00:03:590 (2,3) - Could probably CTRL+G the rhythm here and rearrange the spacings to differenciate it being rhythmically the same as 00:00:995 (3,4,5,1) - , which is repeating themselves. I don't think it's necessary
  2. 00:02:293 (5,1) - It'd be better to swap NCs here to remain consistent in NC-ing every 2 stanzas. Ok
  3. 00:00:995 (3,4,5,1) - Just a suggestion, how about making 00:00:995 (3,4,5,1) - an obvious repeating pattern to reflect the vocals better? This, for example. Doesn't convince me too much tbh
  4. 00:12:347 (4,5) - 00:17:536 (4,5) - Differenciating these from 00:14:941 (4,5) - and 00:20:131 (4,5) - would be pretty nice imo. At 00:12:347 (4,5) - the guitars are lower in pitch and one more later is higher (00:14:941 (4,5) - ). How about making 00:14:941 (4,5) - and 00:17:536 (4,5) - a 1/2 slider for that? I'm focusing on the drums here
  5. 00:55:158 (2) - This slider should have the same rhythm as 00:53:860 (4,5) - considering they're similar in pitch. Fixed
  6. 00:57:752 (1,1) - Unnecesary NC, it results in an inconsistency and could probably confuse new players since there's no guiding line during gameplay. Same applies to 01:00:347 (1) - . Fixed
  7. 01:09:428 (4) - You can put NC here to mark that 01:09:428 (4,5,6) - and 01:07:320 (1,2,3) - is one set. Alright
  8. 01:19:806 (4,1) - Swapping NCs here would be nice, same reasoning as above. ^
  9. 01:24:995 (4,5) - and 01:30:185 (4,5) - Should change these as well if you applied my suggestion before. Same as above

[Desperation]
  1. 00:00:023 (1,2,3,4) - The visual spacings don't look too appealing imo, where 00:00:023 (1,3,4) - is too crowded and 00:00:347 (2) - is left out from the group. Could probably improve the visual spacings. Fixed
  2. While this isn't really visible in gameplay, I should point this out in case it's unintentional. 00:00:347 (2,3,4) - The distance spacing here is 2.00x while 00:00:671 (4,5,1,2,3) - 's around 1.85x, and at 00:02:617 (1,2,3) - it's back to 2,00x when there isn't much change on music. This should be reconsidered. It's now equal everywhere
  3. 00:01:320 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Just my personal opinion, would be cool if this's to be a repeating pattern, as I said in Easy. I think this repeating rhythm is emphasized enough by the sliders
  4. 00:02:455 (4,1) - The impact of emphasis here can't really be felt in gameplay since it's just a 0.10x spacing difference, might space this out. Though, to be consistent in emphasizing things, 00:01:320 (1) - and 00:03:914 (1) - should be emphasized as well. I didn't intend to emphasize anything here
  5. 00:05:212 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Just before, you focused mainly on vocals but here it's on guitars, assuming from 00:05:860 (4,5,4,5) - . The holding vocal at 00:05:860 - is treated the same as 00:05:536 (3,5) - which has 2 vocals in 1/2. How about changing 00:05:860 (4,4) - into 1/1 sliders to give some effect to the vocal? Not a bad idea but I think the current pattern fits well since this part is stronger than the beginning of the song, that's why I'm not focusing too much on the vocals here
  6. Emphasis should be done consistently throughout the map. For instance, you emphasized 00:14:131 (1) - by spacing it out to 3.00x while 00:13:482 (4,5) - being 2.00x. But at 00:10:077 (4,1) - there isn't any emphasis. Same applies to the others like 00:15:266 (8,1) - , 00:12:671 (5,1) - , etc. You could probably set a default spacing for normal beats, and one more for emphasis. In this case, you can nerf 00:10:401 (1,2,3) - and the others into 2.00x while leaving the beats you want to emphasize in 3.00x spacing. I only did this to show that 00:11:374 (5) - is less important and for aesthetic reasons, not to emphasize 00:11:536 (1) -
  7. 00:46:725 (1,2,3,4,5) - The pattern is far more intense than the others in the section. You should nerf the spacings out, or make some of them into sliders. Fixed
  8. The slider velocity of the map is actually too slow for an Extra imo. But changing the SV would cost a remap. The non-kiai part seems fine, but you should probably buff the kiai out with 1.10x~1.20x green lines to make it appear more intense and differenciate the part from the others. You're probably right about that but I like the low SV in this map
  9. You stick to the DS too much and it doesn't get you a chance to emphasize things or even variate things. For example, 00:41:536 - this part you stick to 2.00x everywhere, or 00:51:914 - you stick to 2.50x DS. You should emphasize things more. There is not really anything to emphasize in these parts imo
That should be everything, I hope this helps. Good luck~
Yes, thank you :3
Elcheer
any map that used copied hitsounds from top diff
01:08:455 (5) - hitclap

don't give kds thx
Murmur twins
Hi, from my queue~

If I didn't mention some diff(s), then this means everything is fine for me.

General
  1. "Normal" diff missing in the spread? Or there is a gd WIP or something?

Insane
  1. 01:25:644 (1,2,3,4) - This part is almost the same with 01:08:131 (3,4,5,1), maybe change a different style would be more interesting. No other problems found

Elcheer's Insane
  1. 00:09:752 (1) - Same shape with 00:13:482 (4) and 00:19:320 (1) in a short period, using different shape could be better;
  2. 00:19:806 (2,3,4) - Check ds here;
  3. 00:41:212 (2) - Seems a bit crowded..
Taeyang's style I guess? :)

Space's Insane
  1. 01:33:428 - Add an ending note here?

Fapu's Extra
  1. 00:24:022 (4,5) - This overlap looks a bit confusing;
  2. 00:29:860 (1,2,3) - Makes them spaced looks better;
  3. 00:30:347 (4,5,6) - ^

GL~
Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki

siwu320 wrote:

Hi, from my queue~

If I didn't mention some diff(s), then this means everything is fine for me.

General
  1. "Normal" diff missing in the spread? Or there is a gd WIP or something? Yeah Normal GD is still WIP, hopefully not for long anymore

Insane
  1. 01:25:644 (1,2,3,4) - This part is almost the same with 01:08:131 (3,4,5,1), maybe change a different style would be more interesting. No other problems found In my opinion this pattern is good for consistency
GL~
Thanks for the mod :)
Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki

Elcheer wrote:

any map that used copied hitsounds from top diff
01:08:455 (5) - hitclap

don't give kds thx
Thanks for pointing it out, I actually found even more hitsound inconsistencies in my diffs and I fixed them. I don't know about the other diffs though because they have different rhythm and hitsounding so everyone should check their own diff please
Faputa

siwu320 wrote:

Hi, from my queue~

Fapu's Extra
  1. 00:24:022 (4,5) - This overlap looks a bit confusing;
  2. 00:29:860 (1,2,3) - Makes them spaced looks better;
  3. 00:30:347 (4,5,6) - ^
All fixed. I mean, I tried?
GL~
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Elcheer

siwu320 wrote:

Elcheer's Insane
  1. 00:09:752 (1) - Same shape with 00:13:482 (4) and 00:19:320 (1) in a short period, using different shape could be better; fixed
  2. 00:19:806 (2,3,4) - Check ds here; unsure what you mean by this
  3. 00:41:212 (2) - Seems a bit crowded.. i can't really do anything without making it look worse or changing entire patterns
Taeyang's style I guess? :)
thanks!


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CrystilonZ
I love your song choice <3

[Gen]
  1. That hitnormal is ewww orz. Hitsound is pretty sub-par overall unfortunately
  2. Easy -- Hard gap is really huge relatively
[Easy]
  1. I like this diff
  2. AR 4? imo with ar3 there are too many stuff on the screen at once
  3. 00:41:212 (6,1,2) - aesthetic nitpick. Make the head, the tail and the circle form a triangle.
  4. 00:12:347 (4,5) - 00:17:536 (4,5) - replace these two with sliders to differentiate them from 00:14:941 (4,5) - 00:20:131 (4,5) - which are stronger cuz of the drums
  5. 01:10:725 (3) - aesthetic nitpick. Can you make 01:10:239 (2,3,1) - symmetrical
    154,22,70725,2,0,P|226:14|296:42,1,150
[Ky's]
  1. imo ar 7.3 or 7.5 is better. The song is pretty fast and your pattern has a lot of partially overlaps. Higher approach rate will reduce the number of notes on screen and will improve the readability of the diff.
  2. why is the hitsounding in this diff so messed up lol. Random official soft hitnormal here and there. Snares toms and kicks are all over the place lol.
  3. 00:03:914 (1,2) - 00:24:671 (1,2) - Extend the sliders and delete the circles maybe? To differentiate to slower parts from the more lively parts
  4. 00:09:752 (2) - not really sure about this being in a hard diff, but it fits so /shrug
  5. 00:05:212 (1,2) - 00:06:509 (1,2) - imo (1)s should have that small spacing increase as well. (1)s are even slightly stronger you know ._. Another choice would be using normal DS. Parts after this (except the kiais) have no jumps lol.
  6. 00:46:725 (1,2,3,4) - uhh overlaps. Check this whole slow part for unintended overlapping.
  7. 00:56:779 (1) - this reverse slider is a bit of a letdown lol. I mean you are clearly following the drums here (the 1/2 spams) and this is the build up for the chorus that comes afterwards. LIVE UP TO THE HYPE
  8. 01:07:806 (2,5) - 01:08:131 (3,1) - aesthetic nitpick. Can you make the stacks here look.. uhm.. similar? look much better imo
[Insane]
  1. 00:05:212 (1,2) - 00:06:509 (1,2) - these jumps feel nice but they don't rly make sense comparing to other places in the diff. They're the biggest jumps i think. They shouldn't be in this slow intro orz nerf them a bit
  2. fyi your 1/4 kickslider jumps are a huuuuuuuge spike if you consider the movement speed required. Idk if you want that.
  3. 00:08:779 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - maybe it's just me but imo the spacing is really confusing here. 00:08:779 (5,6) - really fast moving here and after that 00:09:104 (1,2) - this is a sharp drop which kinda makes sense. The problem is it accelerates back at 00:10:077 (4) - and then decelerate at 00:10:401 (1) - . Because the acceleration/deceleration here are not justified by the music the movement is pretty weird. just move 00:10:077 (4) - closer to 00:09:752 (3) - . That should help
  4. 00:25:968 (1) - use 1.8 or 2.0 DS on this one. Fits better with the music. acceleration at 00:26:293 (2) - comes a bit too late imo
  5. 00:29:536 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - yea this part is suitable for jumps but imo because you stack them so much and there is no clear pattern for players to stick to this might be bad. don't stack them or come up with a good pattern o/
  6. 00:31:158 (1,2,3,4,5) - this rhythm is repeated over and over in this part. This might be because you stick to percussions alone. Imo if you also consider other stuff (vocals, guitars, etc.) the rhythm won't be so mundane here.
  7. 01:00:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This looks like fireworks lmfao. Some geometry stuff might look more appealing~
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  8. 01:17:698 (1,4) - eh is this overlap intended
[Elcheer's]
  1. 00:04:563 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - spacing doesn't make sense. (1,2) should be bigger than the rest but you mapped it otherwise lol. the last two are much more stronger
  2. 00:09:752 (1,1) - aesthetic nitpick: can you make the circle not overlapping with the main body of the slider?
  3. Try to keep the variation stuff in check and do it moderately. Little variation here and there makes the map feel more fresh but too much variation and it turns into a jumping practice. It does feel weird playing highly spaced 00:32:779 (3,4,5) - and playing 00:33:752 (1,2,3,4) - afterwards. I understand that circle jumps are much easier to map comparing to jumps with sliders xd. But still it's a beatmap it needs to correlate with the music
  4. 00:10:887 (4,5) - this was the first pattern that's introduced so I expected 00:13:482 (4,5) - to have normal spacing lol, but turns out rest of them have these antijumps XD. add that to 00:10:887 (4,5) -
  5. 00:15:590 (1,2,3,4) - 00:16:725 (1) - yea the 00:16:725 (1) - should be bigger cuz the guitar is much more intense (it even has a crash on it wtf)
  6. 00:55:482 (6,1) - Don't decelerate during the build up QAQ
  7. It's weird that the verse has higher spacing compared with the chorus lol. Like 01:17:698 (1,2,3) - 01:13:806 (5) - etc I totally didn't expect these to be in the kiai.
  8. Keep your difficulty curve in check! Make the map harder when the song gets more intense. Just compare these three and you'll see why the difficulty curve is important 00:02:293 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - 01:02:779 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:33:752 (1,2,3,4,1) -
That's all from me
GL~
Cloudchaser
Gonna mod this as soon as you apply Crystilonz' mod. Please PM!
Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki

CrystilonZ wrote:

I love your song choice <3 thanks xd

[Gen]
  1. That hitnormal is ewww orz. Hitsound is pretty sub-par overall unfortunately Sounds fine imo
  2. Easy -- Hard gap is really huge relatively Normal is still in progress


[Easy]
  1. I like this diff
  2. AR 4? imo with ar3 there are too many stuff on the screen at once Almost all easy diffs use ar3, it doesn't matter if there are many objects on the screen at once since new players are not used to high ar
  3. 00:41:212 (6,1,2) - aesthetic nitpick. Make the head, the tail and the circle form a triangle. Fixed
  4. 00:12:347 (4,5) - 00:17:536 (4,5) - replace these two with sliders to differentiate them from 00:14:941 (4,5) - 00:20:131 (4,5) - which are stronger cuz of the drums Ok
  5. 01:10:725 (3) - aesthetic nitpick. Can you make 01:10:239 (2,3,1) - symmetrical Fixed
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[Insane]
  1. 00:05:212 (1,2) - 00:06:509 (1,2) - these jumps feel nice but they don't rly make sense comparing to other places in the diff. They're the biggest jumps i think. They shouldn't be in this slow intro orz nerf them a bit Ok nerfed
  2. fyi your 1/4 kickslider jumps are a huuuuuuuge spike if you consider the movement speed required. Idk if you want that. I like them lmao
  3. 00:08:779 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - maybe it's just me but imo the spacing is really confusing here. 00:08:779 (5,6) - really fast moving here and after that 00:09:104 (1,2) - this is a sharp drop which kinda makes sense. The problem is it accelerates back at 00:10:077 (4) - and then decelerate at 00:10:401 (1) - . Because the acceleration/deceleration here are not justified by the music the movement is pretty weird. just move 00:10:077 (4) - closer to 00:09:752 (3) - . That should help Fixed
  4. 00:25:968 (1) - use 1.8 or 2.0 DS on this one. Fits better with the music. acceleration at 00:26:293 (2) - comes a bit too late imo Fixed
  5. 00:29:536 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - yea this part is suitable for jumps but imo because you stack them so much and there is no clear pattern for players to stick to this might be bad. don't stack them or come up with a good pattern o/ It's literally impossible for me to find a good pattern here,
    I've changed it like 20 times and this is the best solution so far because otherwise there are a lot of ugly overlaps that are even more confusing
  6. 00:31:158 (1,2,3,4,5) - this rhythm is repeated over and over in this part. This might be because you stick to percussions alone. Imo if you also consider other stuff (vocals, guitars, etc.) the rhythm won't be so mundane here. If I map the vocals, it will be just like the part at 00:20:779 - and that would be repetitive too, so I think this is the best option since the drums are more important in this section
  7. 01:00:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This looks like fireworks lmfao. Some geometry stuff might look more appealing~ Fixed in my own way
    164,120,60995,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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  8. 01:17:698 (1,4) - eh is this overlap intended Fixed
That's all from me
GL~
Thanks for the mod :3
Elcheer

CrystilonZ wrote:

[Elcheer's]
  1. 00:04:563 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - spacing doesn't make sense. (1,2) should be bigger than the rest but you mapped it otherwise lol. the last two are much more stronger
  2. 00:09:752 (1,1) - aesthetic nitpick: can you make the circle not overlapping with the main body of the slider?
  3. Try to keep the variation stuff in check and do it moderately. Little variation here and there makes the map feel more fresh but too much variation and it turns into a jumping practice. It does feel weird playing highly spaced 00:32:779 (3,4,5) - and playing 00:33:752 (1,2,3,4) - afterwards. I understand that circle jumps are much easier to map comparing to jumps with sliders xd. But still it's a beatmap it needs to correlate with the music
  4. 00:10:887 (4,5) - this was the first pattern that's introduced so I expected 00:13:482 (4,5) - to have normal spacing lol, but turns out rest of them have these antijumps XD. add that to 00:10:887 (4,5) -
  5. 00:15:590 (1,2,3,4) - 00:16:725 (1) - yea the 00:16:725 (1) - should be bigger cuz the guitar is much more intense (it even has a crash on it wtf)
  6. 00:55:482 (6,1) - Don't decelerate during the build up QAQ
  7. It's weird that the verse has higher spacing compared with the chorus lol. Like 01:17:698 (1,2,3) - 01:13:806 (5) - etc I totally didn't expect these to be in the kiai.
  8. Keep your difficulty curve in check! Make the map harder when the song gets more intense. Just compare these three and you'll see why the difficulty curve is important 00:02:293 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - 01:02:779 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:33:752 (1,2,3,4,1) -
That's all from me
GL~
applied all to the best of my ability, thanks!

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512,369,62779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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322,127,78347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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217,170,85806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,269,85968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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277,148,86617,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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234,178,88239,5,6,0:0:0:0:
270,104,88401,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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316,172,88725,2,0,P|345:134|312:34,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
270,104,89212,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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270,104,91158,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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415,141,91806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
325,12,91968,6,0,P|278:5|270:99,1,150,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,142,92455,1,8,0:0:0:0:
407,47,92617,1,8,0:0:0:0:
357,251,92779,1,8,0:0:0:0:
313,106,92941,1,8,0:0:0:0:
459,225,93104,1,8,0:0:0:0:
488,79,93266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,156,93428,5,6,0:0:0:0:
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nm from my queue

General

no problems here :)



Desperation

00:00:671 (4,5,1) - You could place more emphasis on 00:01:320 (1) - here as there is an additional piano sound also on the sliderhead, moving 00:01:158 (5) - down would be enough
Would also do the same for similar spots like 00:01:968 (3) - 00:02:617 (1) - 00:03:914 (1) - as these also all have piano sounds on them

00:08:293 (2,3,4,5,6) - These look really cramped together atm, would really space them out so they don't look that way (same for some of the blankets like 00:10:563 (2,4) - , you make all these really cramped blankets which makes the maps object placement feel more limited)

00:21:428 (4) - Could also use some more emphasis

00:52:239 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This all feels really cluttered in the centre without really any points of emphasis or anything, making them more distinct groups of sliders would fit better

00:55:806 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - these jumps could be represented better imo,
they barely change in spacing but the song only really ramps up the intensity when the drums get super loud at 00:56:455 (5) - , like 2 groups of 4 somehow would fit way better

Your sv for the entire kiai feels really low, which makes it that every slider feels like a slowdown compared to the jumps which is pretty annoying
It could have easily been something like 1.2 probably

Also in the kiai there arent really any points of emphasis everything is spaced with ds around 3-3.3 and it never really goes far above or below that
Which makes the downbeats kinda non-impactful, like multiple smaller jumps for 01:09:104 (2,3,4,5,6) - and then a big one for 01:09:914 (1) - would feel much more appropriate

01:09:104 (2,3) - Why did the rhythm change and are these 2 circles now, previously the player didn't need to jump for the sound on 01:09:266 (3) - but now he has to

01:11:212 (1) - This pattern feels pretty out of place, normally you make the spacing about equal but here you make the downbeat spacing way smaller and give it some weird flow not used previously

01:19:482 (2,3) - same here as the previous rhythm thingy, you suddenly change it which makes it feel more intense while nothing really changed

01:31:968 (1) - There is a huge finish on the tail here that is not even cliacked but you still make the other finish at 01:32:455 (2) - a huge jump, 01:31:968 (1) - would feel better as 1/2 slide rand a circle where its tail currently is

The spacing emphasis is imo the biggest thing that could be currently improved cause there isn't really anything of that atm
Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki

Gottagof4st wrote:

nm from my queue

General

no problems here :)



Desperation

00:00:671 (4,5,1) - You could place more emphasis on 00:01:320 (1) - here as there is an additional piano sound also on the sliderhead, moving 00:01:158 (5) - down would be enough
Would also do the same for similar spots like 00:01:968 (3) - 00:02:617 (1) - 00:03:914 (1) - as these also all have piano sounds on them Changed a little

00:08:293 (2,3,4,5,6) - These look really cramped together atm, would really space them out so they don't look that way (same for some of the blankets like 00:10:563 (2,4) - , you make all these really cramped blankets which makes the maps object placement feel more limited) Spaced the 1/4 sliders out but the blankets are good imo

00:21:428 (4) - Could also use some more emphasis Not important imo

00:52:239 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This all feels really cluttered in the centre without really any points of emphasis or anything, making them more distinct groups of sliders would fit better This section is really monotonous, there's not really anything worth emphasizing

00:55:806 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - these jumps could be represented better imo,
they barely change in spacing but the song only really ramps up the intensity when the drums get super loud at 00:56:455 (5) - , like 2 groups of 4 somehow would fit way better Yup changed

Your sv for the entire kiai feels really low, which makes it that every slider feels like a slowdown compared to the jumps which is pretty annoying
It could have easily been something like 1.2 probably SV is something subjective and I don't think it's necessary too have high SV just because it's an Extra, it fits the song well imo and is not uncomfortable to play

Also in the kiai there arent really any points of emphasis everything is spaced with ds around 3-3.3 and it never really goes far above or below that
Which makes the downbeats kinda non-impactful, like multiple smaller jumps for 01:09:104 (2,3,4,5,6) - and then a big one for 01:09:914 (1) - would feel much more appropriate Fixed but now it looks ugly and the star rating dropped to 5.32* which is not possible since this is the top diff and there's another extra, that's why I'm gonna increase the jumps lmao

01:09:104 (2,3) - Why did the rhythm change and are these 2 circles now, previously the player didn't need to jump for the sound on 01:09:266 (3) - but now he has to Fixed, this was mainly to increase the star rating

01:11:212 (1) - This pattern feels pretty out of place, normally you make the spacing about equal but here you make the downbeat spacing way smaller and give it some weird flow not used previously This wasn't my idea but now I made it "normal" again

01:19:482 (2,3) - same here as the previous rhythm thingy, you suddenly change it which makes it feel more intense while nothing really changed Fixed

01:31:968 (1) - There is a huge finish on the tail here that is not even cliacked but you still make the other finish at 01:32:455 (2) - a huge jump, 01:31:968 (1) - would feel better as 1/2 slide rand a circle where its tail currently is Ok

The spacing emphasis is imo the biggest thing that could be currently improved cause there isn't really anything of that atm
Nusakan
when i played the diffs they looked really very great and reflective of the song

easy:
00:01:644 - 00:02:941 those sliders should be the same if you follow the vocals here
on a lot of places the sliders are a different shape for the same sound and
slider shapes are one of the very small amount of ways to make easies reflect
the song
00:40:239 - make it a normal 1/1 slider
00:37:968 (3) - could use a red anchor cause that seems important
u can use red anchors in kiai aswell

eh no normal?

hard:
00:09:752 (2) - maybe use a weird shape to signal the sv is changing also NC
00:41:293 - http://prntscr.com/hsvngr for a neater organization also the sliders appear to be unsnapped
again could use red anchors on kiai for sliders but overall very good

insane:
00:08:374 - http://prntscr.com/hsvoq5 again just visual organization
00:55:806 - if those jumps were more spaced it would make more sense in the context of the map/song
again, really good

elcheers insane:
00:05:212 - if you want to emphasize to using spacing emphasis should work quite well
lol thats the only thing in this diff for me

spaces insane:
00:06:347 - i had to point this one out cause i love jow he uses uncomfortable flow to emphasze the sound
jumped to. BUT it doesnt make sense in the context of the map really
00:20:455 - change the spacing of the stream because before that 1/1 was signaled through the same spacing
and even tho i know you made it to make the entry of the stream more readable it would make more sense imo
01:26:010 - http://prntscr.com/htbmk1 would make more sense as it isnt jumping to an important sound yet its hard to play

fapu's extra: (great name btw and great diff aswell)
00:00:023 - ctrl+g
00:20:779 - could reduce rhythm density as this section is quite calm
its actually the only diff without reduced rhythm density at those calm sections tho

desperation:
00:27:914 - could be emphasized better same with 00:38:455

im surprised how good this map is and im hoping to see it ranked. gl
Stack

J a c k wrote:

Gottagof4st wrote:

Desperation

00:52:239 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This all feels really cluttered in the centre without really any points of emphasis or anything, making them more distinct groups of sliders would fit better This section is really monotonous, there's not really anything worth emphasizing
You could emphasize the sliders with vocals on them 00:52:563 (4,5) - /00:53:860 (3,4) - /00:55:158 (3,4) -
Faputa

Frontlines wrote:

when i played the diffs they looked really very great and reflective of the song

fapu's extra: (great name btw and great diff aswell) Glad you like the diff :D
00:00:023 - ctrl+g This is intentional to have a large spacing to (2) VS (2) to (3) and (4). And I have one also at 00:20:779 (1) - , but less obvious.
00:20:779 - could reduce rhythm density as this section is quite calm For me, I would rate this as 2nd most calm, but the most calmest one is the section starting from 00:41:536 (1) - . I wanna emphasize it so I mapped like so in 00:20:779 -
its actually the only diff without reduced rhythm density at those calm sections tho

im surprised how good this map is and im hoping to see it ranked. gl
Thank you for the mod. Although I didn't take any suggestions, but you've spent your time on modding this map. Thank you :D
Topic Starter
Serizawa Haruki

Frontlines wrote:

when i played the diffs they looked really very great and reflective of the song Thank you :3

easy:
00:01:644 - 00:02:941 those sliders should be the same if you follow the vocals here
on a lot of places the sliders are a different shape for the same sound and
slider shapes are one of the very small amount of ways to make easies reflect
the song Hmm I think aesthetics are more important than all the slider shapes being the same
00:40:239 - make it a normal 1/1 slider These drums are important imo and add a little variation so I'm keeping them
00:37:968 (3) - could use a red anchor cause that seems important
u can use red anchors in kiai aswell I want to keep the rhythm as simple as possible overall because if I make it harder, the name Easy doesn't really fit anymore, it's 1.67* already but thanks for your suggestions

eh no normal? GD is still being mapped

insane:
00:08:374 - http://prntscr.com/hsvoq5 again just visual organization Yeah they could be more spaced out but this is the pattern I use in multiple sections of the map so I think consistency is more important
00:55:806 - if those jumps were more spaced it would make more sense in the context of the map/song
again, really good The distance between the circles is increasing because the song gets more intense and spacing them out would just unnecessarily increase the star rating imo

desperation:
00:27:914 - could be emphasized better same with 00:38:455 I'm not following the vocals at all so I'll keep it this way so the distance is equal, looks better imo

im surprised how good this map is and im hoping to see it ranked. gl
Thanks again ;)

Gottagof4st wrote:

Desperation

00:52:239 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This all feels really cluttered in the centre without really any points of emphasis or anything, making them more distinct groups of sliders would fit better This section is really monotonous, there's not really anything worth emphasizing
You could emphasize the sliders with vocals on them 00:52:563 (4,5) - /00:53:860 (3,4) - /00:55:158 (3,4) -
Ok I changed the patterns and increased the distance for the sliders with vocals on them
Faputa

m3gB3g wrote:

hi !~ m4m (PM)

Fapu Extra

00:08:131 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - cool stream m8! Space make sense here and mapped well thanks
01:12:022 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - but this one looks very random. Bcs music dont have intense character to force make rising space stream. Also it plays bad. Make regular stream here pls. changed in other mods
01:22:401 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ 01:22:401 (1,2,3) - this..yayks Changed before while irc mod with someone
00:59:698 (1) - absolutely random spinner. I dont understand his purpose. It tells nothing. And after this spinner you didnt map drums(another diffs did). fixed in other mods Remove spinner and map drums pls. Also it would make more sense if you continued to map piano , you start it here 00:57:104 (1,2,3) - but in next piano note you add spinner 00:57:104 (1,2,3) - and missed one piano sound here 01:00:347 - . ^
That all. All diffs is actually good. GL with rank boys! :)
Sorry for not responding before, because they are all fixed in different way :o
But thanks for modding!
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