1. 00:07:777 (1) - feels like it should have more spacing than the rest of this pattern because strong finish, it doesn't really stand out right now, something like you did 00:15:519 (1) - here is way better
   
2. 00:42:616 (1,2,3) - why do they have to overlap in such a weird manner? the song is very calm here so i think you can utilize the playfield more here. Also, I think making 00:43:584 (3,1) - these sliders similar in shape would work way better, since the vocal have the same sort of intensity/tone
   
3. 00:51:084 (2,3) - the placement of this slider is kinda weird too, why not utilize the left of the playfield? Everything is kinda cramped into this corner here
   
4. 00:52:294 (1,2) - having 2 on the other end (less spacing) would be more fitting since you can really emphasize the strong sound on 00:53:261 (3) - that way better
   
5. 00:53:745 (5) - i don't really like the look of this either, its kinda messy overlapping with both 1 and 3 that way, maybe find some other kind of placement or a way to stack it with either the slider or note. Moving it to another position creates a better jump/emphasis towards the new section here 00:54:229 (1) - too
   
6. 00:57:132 (3,4,1) - 3 and 4 should be closer together, 1 should be a jump for better pattern separation
   
7. 01:02:939 (3,1) - blanket them better?
   
8. 01:25:197 (1) - this could have a tad more spacing too, its like the bridge between the leadin and the intense part, has a strong finish and seeing things like 01:26:890 (6,1) - have a huge spacing difference as well i think it'd fit nicely here
   
9. 01:27:616 (2,4) - lol pls polish it a bit
   
10. 01:37:535 (3,4) - why is the spacing so drastically different from 01:36:568 (6,1) - and 01:38:503 (6,1) - ? it's a very tiny jump here unlike the others
    
11. 01:41:648 (3,1) - tiny things, but just copying one of these sliders and rotating it by 90 degrees will give patterns like this a much more polished feel, right now they are just barely different from each other which looks kinda messy
    
12. 01:48:423 (1) - can it have more spacing? and 01:47:939 (6) - perhaps a bit less
    
13. 02:23:261 (1,4,1) - all of these can be more emphasized imo, spacing on the finishes should differ more from 02:24:713 (5,6) -
    
14. 02:29:794 (2,3,4,5,6) - some hitsounds are missing? idk sounds kinda off compared to how you hsed these before. sounds like a stronger sound should be on 02:30:035 (3) -
    
15. 02:34:148 (5) - same goes for this, should be a hitsound on here i think. Same for 02:41:890 (5) -
    
16. 03:18:181 (3,4) - rly like this kinda movement with the snappy/sharp angle on the finish
    
17. 03:21:326 (1) - needs more emphasis tho, something like https://voli.s-ul.eu/G8vM3d2G.png would work better (i rotated by 50degrees)
    
18. 03:28:342 (5) - missing hs again, 03:36:084 (5) - too

1. 00:06:810 (1,2,1,2) - Do you really need big jumps like this at the beginning of the map? What do they emphasize?
2. 00:42:616 (1,2,3) - I don't like how those objects are put next to each other like this. This is the only place where you did a pattern like this and it seems rather unfitting.
3. 01:24:955 (2,1) - This jump is a no-no. It is way too large, you have to cross the whole screen to reach it.
4. 02:26:890 (6,1) - Same thing for this one.
5. 02:38:261 (5,1) - I don't really like how the circle overlaps the slider.
6. 03:36:084 (5,6,7,1) - Same as before, these jumps do seem a bit too large.

1. I'm pretty sure the offset should be 26ms; I am way more accurate with this as I am always clicking the circles too early with 36ms.

MeMEssszz

Kurai wrote:

Before I proceed, I have a few concerns about the highest difficulty. I know this is suposed to be an Insane, but I consider some jumps to be a bit too large compared to the rest of the difficulty, especially for a 3.66 SD map. Also, I have some doubts about the offset.

[Insane]

1. 00:06:810 (1,2,1,2) - Do you really need big jumps like this at the beginning of the map? What do they emphasize? They emphasis the strongest drum sounds of the song, you can find the same thing in moments like 01:24:229 (1,2,1,2) -
2. 00:42:616 (1,2,3) - I don't like how those objects are put next to each other like this. This is the only place where you did a pattern like this and it seems rather unfitting. well, since everyone tells me about this lemme fix.
3. 01:24:955 (2,1) - This jump is a no-no. It is way too large, you have to cross the whole screen to reach it. reduced
4. 02:26:890 (6,1) - Same thing for this one. reduced
5. 02:38:261 (5,1) - I don't really like how the circle overlaps the slider. I'm sorry, but it's fine for me, it's a part of my mapping style
6. 03:36:084 (5,6,7,1) - Same as before, these jumps do seem a bit too large. music gets louder here but well reduced a bit

[Timing]

1. I'm pretty sure the offset should be 26ms; I am way more accurate with this as I am always clicking the circles too early with 36ms. 26 sounds even worse, asked pishifat for checking and he told me to move offset by -4 so moved

MeMEssszz

CptSqBany wrote:

[General]
I would consider putting an epilepsy warning it's useless in this map because SB doesn't have much strobes

I'm getting seizures after seeing all "straight" sliders not being straight, thanks it's my style

[Normal]

00:54:225 (1) - It looks more natural that way. they are kinda the same. everything is changed is curve style, waji uses another type of curves and it's totally fine, it won't have any effect while playing

[Hard]

it's ok

[Insane]

I would change the ar to like 8,3 BPM of the song is low so 8 works great

01:24:225 (1) - slider? no reasons to put a slider here

M a r v o l l o wrote:

rest in peace Chester, we all will miss you ;w;