Tachibana Arisu - Kimi ni Todoke

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smallboat
Bubbled (Btw thank Kurai and IamKwaN check ;) )
IamKwaN
Kimi ni Todoke, check my pm
smallboat
Confirm the title fixed, reb it.
Kyuukai
ayyyyyyyy another Kimi ni Todoke :D
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S o a p

Kyuukai wrote:

ayyyyyyyy another Kimi ni Todoke :D
:):)
Mafumafu
M4M as required. My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/542163 You could just choose 2-3 diffs to mod since my mapset is of great size.

[General]
You need to add "Kayano" into tags and might consider adding Sun Rainbow into tags too.

[Kayano's Easy]
00:46:342 (3,1) - Flow here is a bit sharp, recommend: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8777210

[Normal]
00:14:913 (3) - Shape is quite sharp and not matching with the smooth vocal here.
00:19:675 (1,2) - Should be 1.3x in spacing.
00:30:866 (1,2) - I think a parallel pattern would be better.
00:38:723 (1,2,1,2) - Rhythm is pretty empty here, add some 1/2s, for example: 00:42:294
00:43:723 (3,1) - Visual spacing here makes it look closer than it actually is.
00:47:532 (3,1) - Should be 1.3x too. A stable spacing in Normal is needed.
00:48:961 (2,3) - Better blanket them.
00:50:627 (2,3,1) - This double stack is too tricky to exist in Normal.
00:56:818 (3,1) - Poor blanket.
01:08:008 (2,3) - In most cases you could only have one type of rhythm for stack in lower level diffs.

[liaoxingyao's Hard]
00:44:913 (2,3) - 01:03:247 (5,1) - Imperfect blanket.
00:51:818 (5,1) - Enhanced spacing is needed for the cymbal.

[Insane]
This diff obviously needs to be nerf'ed to match with the spread.
00:18:723 (6,1) - I don't think it is appropriate to apply such a large spacing as well as anti-flow for 1/4 gap.
00:52:533 (2,3) - Yes jump might be applied to here but this is excessively large.
00:56:818 (4,5) - Poor flow for 1/4
01:04:437 (4,5,6) - For rhythm consistency, it need to be altered to 3/4 slider + 1/2 slider.

You need a re-bubble from the previous bn and then call me back.
Kayano

Regraz wrote:

[Kayano's Easy]
00:46:342 (3,1) - Flow here is a bit sharp, recommend: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8777210 这一段和 00:39:675 (3,4,1) - 一样都是两个note跟着滑条的方向,note和滑条方向之间有个反向的夹角,我觉得打着还ok,不改的主要原因是我觉得改了之后 00:48:723 (1) - 太丝滑了跟音乐这里偏重的人声有点不搭
thx :)
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S o a p

Regraz wrote:

M4M as required. My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/542163 You could just choose 2-3 diffs to mod since my mapset is of great size.

[General]
You need to add "Kayano" into tags and might consider adding Sun Rainbow into tags too.

[Kayano's Easy]
00:46:342 (3,1) - Flow here is a bit sharp, recommend: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8777210

[Normal]
00:14:913 (3) - Shape is quite sharp and not matching with the smooth vocal here.我认为这还可以
00:19:675 (1,2) - Should be 1.3x in spacing.
00:30:866 (1,2) - I think a parallel pattern would be better.我试了一下觉得平行的看起来很死板
00:38:723 (1,2,1,2) - Rhythm is pretty empty here, add some 1/2s, for example: 00:42:294 加了两个note
00:43:723 (3,1) - Visual spacing here makes it look closer than it actually is.
00:47:532 (3,1) - Should be 1.3x too. A stable spacing in Normal is needed.
00:48:961 (2,3) - Better blanket them.
00:50:627 (2,3,1) - This double stack is too tricky to exist in Normal.有吗。。那我把NC移到note上好了。(
00:56:818 (3,1) - Poor blanket.
01:08:008 (2,3) - In most cases you could only have one type of rhythm for stack in lower level diffs.换成了个滑条。不然觉得空空的

[liaoxingyao's Hard]
00:44:913 (2,3) - 01:03:247 (5,1) - Imperfect blanket.
00:51:818 (5,1) - Enhanced spacing is needed for the cymbal.

[Insane]
This diff obviously needs to be nerf'ed to match with the spread.我觉得我还是做的很良心送分了
00:18:723 (6,1) - I don't think it is appropriate to apply such a large spacing as well as anti-flow for 1/4 gap.
00:52:533 (2,3) - Yes jump might be applied to here but this is excessively large.间距改小了一点
00:56:818 (4,5) - Poor flow for 1/4
01:04:437 (4,5,6) - For rhythm consistency, it need to be altered to 3/4 slider + 1/2 slider.

You need a re-bubble from the previous bn and then call me back.
谢谢瓜子
smallboat
Okay thanks Regraz check give it reb.
Mafumafu
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IamKwaN
好了,该飞in fact了
Karen
00:49:199 (5,6) - keng
Topic Starter
S o a p

Karen wrote:

00:49:199 (5,6) - keng
bu keng bu keng
Topic Starter
S o a p

IamKwaN wrote:

好了,该飞in fact了

完全o**k
Otosaka-Yu
fly了,迟来的congratz
性先生不要打我就好了
liaoxingyao

Suzuki_1112 wrote:

fly了,迟来的congratz
性先生不要打我就好了
你又不是Mr.aipao
_Zenith


mr.xingyao nbnb, congratulation here
Otosaka-Yu

-[Apple]- wrote:



mr.xingyao nbnb, congratulation here
这位爱跑先生毒奶选手
liaoxingyao

-[Apple]- wrote:



mr.xingyao nbnb, congratulation here
cmn
[Mahua]
哇 这么快就飞了
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