Tachibana Arisu - Kimi ni Todoke

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Sun Rainbow wrote:

yf_bmp wrote:

摆的好随意
我作图才叫随意()

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Topic Starter
S o a p

Gust wrote:

NM request from qq

[Normal]
00:04:913 (2,1) - 这种遮边看着有点不舒服还好

[liaoxingyao's Hard]
00:07:770 (5,1,2) - 应该调一下5和1的ds,现在看着有些不好。。
00:33:485 (2,3) - ds有点小
00:43:723 (3) - 加个NC可能比较好

[Insane]

yf_bmp wrote:

摆的好随意
我开Ai mod有些物件没有对齐轴,不知道是我这里的问题还是本身就是没对齐的
00:16:104 (3) - 可以考虑拆成note这个感觉没什么必要换成note
00:36:580 (2,3) - 用一个slider感觉三连强调下好。
00:42:056 (1) - NC?
00:41:342 (5,1) - 1还可以放的更好看一点改了一点
00:49:914 (8,9,1) - flow有点。。还好吧..
01:00:627 (5,6,1) - ……不太好看……改了点
01:08:008 (2,3,4) - 推荐叠这个还好。我再看看其他人咋说(。

祝早飞谢谢
Kayano
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ArtistUnicode里面的冒号是半角还是全角的最好在游戏里面确认(找骏喵
Topic Starter
S o a p

Kayano wrote:

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关于metadata:
Title:Kimi Ni Todoke
TitleUnicode:きみにとどけ
Artist:Tachibana Arisu (CV:Satou Amina)
ArtistUnicode:橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)
Source:IDOLM@STER CINDERELLA GIRLS
Tags:アイドルマスター シンデレラガールズ Cool jewelries! 003 AKB48 OniJAM liaoxingyao

meta: http://columbia.jp/idolmaster/COCX-39653.html

ArtistUnicode里面的冒号是半角还是全角的最好在游戏里面确认(找骏喵
非常感谢欧尼酱 ;)
smallboat
[Global]

1.難度來源不一樣 (查看Aimod)
2.有個沒使用的osb : Tachibana Arisu (CVSatou Amina) - Kimi Ni Todoke (S o a p).osb

[Normal]

00:27:532 (1) - 間距

[liaoxingyao's Hard]

00:28:247 (2,3,4,5) - 對Hard diff而言這串子的note多了些,建議還是用滑條來取代 (4跟5合併成一個1/4滑條)

[Insane]

00:27:533 (3) - 重音忘了NC
00:54:913 (6) - 同上
liaoxingyao

smallboat wrote:

[liaoxingyao's Hard]

00:28:247 (2,3,4,5) - 對Hard diff而言這串子的note多了些,建議還是用滑條來取代 (4跟5合併成一個1/4滑條)fixed
谢谢船业大大!
Topic Starter
S o a p

smallboat wrote:

[Global]

1.難度來源不一樣 (查看Aimod)
2.有個沒使用的osb : Tachibana Arisu (CVSatou Amina) - Kimi Ni Todoke (S o a p).osb

[Normal]

00:27:532 (1) - 間距

[liaoxingyao's Hard]

00:28:247 (2,3,4,5) - 對Hard diff而言這串子的note多了些,建議還是用滑條來取代 (4跟5合併成一個1/4滑條)

[Insane]

00:27:533 (3) - 重音忘了NC
00:54:913 (6) - 同上
谢船 :)
Kurai
I didn't find anything actually wrong in this set, but I have some suggestions regarding metadata:

  1. Tachibana Arisu is the character singing this song, but not the real person. The artist should be changed accordingly. According to columbia.jp (the company releasing the idolmaster musics), the artist name should be "橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)" (romanised: "Tachibana Arisu (CV: Satou Amina)").
    All the information regarding the metadata can be found on this page: http://columbia.jp/idolmaster/imasnews/160513.html


  2. The original of this song is by Tomofumi Tanizawa, so please consider adding "谷澤智文", "タニザワトモフミ" and "Tomofumi Tanizawa" to the tags.



Edit: I didn't see someone already posted about the metadata, anyway this is still relevent and you should do the fix :D
Topic Starter
S o a p

Kurai wrote:

I didn't find anything actually wrong in this set, but I have some suggestions regarding metadata:

  1. Tachibana Arisu is the character singing this song, but not the real person. The artist should be changed accordingly. According to columbia.jp (the company releasing the idolmaster musics), the artist name should be "橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)" (romanised: "Tachibana Arisu (CV: Satou Amina)").
    All the information regarding the metadata can be found on this page: http://columbia.jp/idolmaster/imasnews/160513.html


  2. The original of this song is by Tomofumi Tanizawa, so please consider adding "谷澤智文", "タニザワトモフミ" and "Tomofumi Tanizawa" to the tags. fix



Edit: I didn't see someone already posted about the metadata, anyway this is still relevent and you should do the fix :D
Unicode Title: きみにとどけ
Romanised Title: Kimi ni Todoke
Unicode Artist: 橘ありす
Romanised Artist: Tachibana Arisu
Source: アイドルマスターシンデレラガールズ

References:
http://columbia.jp/idolmaster/COCX-39653.html
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LwlEPr6m2ZY
https://truth.bahamut.com.tw/s01/201607 ... 7fd2c4.JPG
http://cinderella.idolmaster.jp/


thanks :)
Kurai

S o a p wrote:

Kurai wrote:

I didn't find anything actually wrong in this set, but I have some suggestions regarding metadata:

  1. Tachibana Arisu is the character singing this song, but not the real person. The artist should be changed accordingly. According to columbia.jp (the company releasing the idolmaster musics), the artist name should be "橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)" (romanised: "Tachibana Arisu (CV: Satou Amina)").
    All the information regarding the metadata can be found on this page: http://columbia.jp/idolmaster/imasnews/160513.html


  2. The original of this song is by Tomofumi Tanizawa, so please consider adding "谷澤智文", "タニザワトモフミ" and "Tomofumi Tanizawa" to the tags. fix



Edit: I didn't see someone already posted about the metadata, anyway this is still relevent and you should do the fix :D
Unicode Title: きみにとどけ
Romanised Title: Kimi ni Todoke
Unicode Artist: 橘ありす
Romanised Artist: Tachibana Arisu
Source: アイドルマスターシンデレラガールズ

References:
http://columbia.jp/idolmaster/COCX-39653.html
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LwlEPr6m2ZY
https://truth.bahamut.com.tw/s01/201607 ... 7fd2c4.JPG
http://cinderella.idolmaster.jp/


thanks :)
I disagree with KwaN here. I believe the artist should be "橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)" as it is written "starring by 橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)" everywhere, even on the album's back cover. Anyway, at least add "佐藤亜美菜" and "Satou Amina" in tags?

Also you could probably add "idolmaster" in tags as well; people looking for IDOLM@STER songs are probably more prone to type "idolmaster" in the search bar as it is easier to write than "idolm@ster". 8-)

[General]
- Your background image is a bit too big for a .jpg image (1.13 MB). I re-encoded it and now it is 136 kB (no quality loss): http://up.kuraip.net/0726x3nY2348.jpg
- You should remove "Satou Amina - Kimi Ni Todoke (S o a p).osb" from the folder of your beatmap.
IamKwaN
歌:橘ありす is also everywhere. Uta means Vocal, which we usually interpret it as artist. "starring by" just credits the voice actor, which doesn't necessarily mean artist. We do not care whether the artist is virtual / vocaloid character or not, what we care only is whether it is official.

And ye, you can put THE IDOLMASTER, 佐藤亜美菜 and Satou (or Sato) Amina in tags. Actually 佐藤亜美菜 was a former AKB48 member too.

快點飛了飛 in fact!!
Topic Starter
S o a p

Kurai wrote:

I disagree with KwaN here. I believe the artist should be "橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)" as it is written "starring by 橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)" everywhere, even on the album's back cover. Anyway, at least add "佐藤亜美菜" and "Satou Amina" in tags?

Also you could probably add "idolmaster" in tags as well; people looking for IDOLM@STER songs are probably more prone to type "idolmaster" in the search bar as it is easier to write than "idolm@ster". 8-)

[General]
- Your background image is a bit too big for a .jpg image (1.13 MB). I re-encoded it and now it is 136 kB (no quality loss): http://up.kuraip.net/0726x3nY2348.jpg
- You should remove "Satou Amina - Kimi Ni Todoke (S o a p).osb" from the folder of your beatmap.
;);)
Topic Starter
S o a p
:(

IamKwaN wrote:

歌:橘ありす is also everywhere. Uta means Vocal, which we usually interpret it as artist. "starring by" just credits the voice actor, which doesn't necessarily mean artist. We do not care whether the artist is virtual / vocaloid character or not, what we care only is whether it is official.

And ye, you can put THE IDOLMASTER, 佐藤亜美菜 and Satou (or Sato) Amina in tags. Actually 佐藤亜美菜 was a former AKB48 member too.

快點飛了飛 in fact!!hahaa好的
谢骏喵喵-3-
smallboat
Bubbled (Btw thank Kurai and IamKwaN check ;) )
IamKwaN
Kimi ni Todoke, check my pm
smallboat
Confirm the title fixed, reb it.
Kyuukai
ayyyyyyyy another Kimi ni Todoke :D
Topic Starter
S o a p

Kyuukai wrote:

ayyyyyyyy another Kimi ni Todoke :D
:):)
Mafumafu
M4M as required. My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/542163 You could just choose 2-3 diffs to mod since my mapset is of great size.

[General]
You need to add "Kayano" into tags and might consider adding Sun Rainbow into tags too.

[Kayano's Easy]
00:46:342 (3,1) - Flow here is a bit sharp, recommend: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8777210

[Normal]
00:14:913 (3) - Shape is quite sharp and not matching with the smooth vocal here.
00:19:675 (1,2) - Should be 1.3x in spacing.
00:30:866 (1,2) - I think a parallel pattern would be better.
00:38:723 (1,2,1,2) - Rhythm is pretty empty here, add some 1/2s, for example: 00:42:294
00:43:723 (3,1) - Visual spacing here makes it look closer than it actually is.
00:47:532 (3,1) - Should be 1.3x too. A stable spacing in Normal is needed.
00:48:961 (2,3) - Better blanket them.
00:50:627 (2,3,1) - This double stack is too tricky to exist in Normal.
00:56:818 (3,1) - Poor blanket.
01:08:008 (2,3) - In most cases you could only have one type of rhythm for stack in lower level diffs.

[liaoxingyao's Hard]
00:44:913 (2,3) - 01:03:247 (5,1) - Imperfect blanket.
00:51:818 (5,1) - Enhanced spacing is needed for the cymbal.

[Insane]
This diff obviously needs to be nerf'ed to match with the spread.
00:18:723 (6,1) - I don't think it is appropriate to apply such a large spacing as well as anti-flow for 1/4 gap.
00:52:533 (2,3) - Yes jump might be applied to here but this is excessively large.
00:56:818 (4,5) - Poor flow for 1/4
01:04:437 (4,5,6) - For rhythm consistency, it need to be altered to 3/4 slider + 1/2 slider.

You need a re-bubble from the previous bn and then call me back.
Kayano

Regraz wrote:

[Kayano's Easy]
00:46:342 (3,1) - Flow here is a bit sharp, recommend: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8777210 这一段和 00:39:675 (3,4,1) - 一样都是两个note跟着滑条的方向,note和滑条方向之间有个反向的夹角,我觉得打着还ok,不改的主要原因是我觉得改了之后 00:48:723 (1) - 太丝滑了跟音乐这里偏重的人声有点不搭
thx :)
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