Tachibana Arisu - Kimi ni Todoke · forum

S o a p

359 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

S o a p 2017-08-02T01:14:18+00:00

Kyuukai wrote:
ayyyyyyyy another Kimi ni Todoke

Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

3,367 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2017-08-06T13:11:32+00:00

M4M as required. My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/542163 You could just choose 2-3 diffs to mod since my mapset is of great size.

[General]
You need to add "Kayano" into tags and might consider adding Sun Rainbow into tags too.

[Kayano's Easy]
00:46:342 (3,1) - Flow here is a bit sharp, recommend: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8777210

[Normal]
00:14:913 (3) - Shape is quite sharp and not matching with the smooth vocal here.
00:19:675 (1,2) - Should be 1.3x in spacing.
00:30:866 (1,2) - I think a parallel pattern would be better.
00:38:723 (1,2,1,2) - Rhythm is pretty empty here, add some 1/2s, for example: 00:42:294
00:43:723 (3,1) - Visual spacing here makes it look closer than it actually is.
00:47:532 (3,1) - Should be 1.3x too. A stable spacing in Normal is needed.
00:48:961 (2,3) - Better blanket them.
00:50:627 (2,3,1) - This double stack is too tricky to exist in Normal.
00:56:818 (3,1) - Poor blanket.
01:08:008 (2,3) - In most cases you could only have one type of rhythm for stack in lower level diffs.

[liaoxingyao's Hard]
00:44:913 (2,3) - 01:03:247 (5,1) - Imperfect blanket.
00:51:818 (5,1) - Enhanced spacing is needed for the cymbal.

[Insane]
This diff obviously needs to be nerf'ed to match with the spread.
00:18:723 (6,1) - I don't think it is appropriate to apply such a large spacing as well as anti-flow for 1/4 gap.
00:52:533 (2,3) - Yes jump might be applied to here but this is excessively large.
00:56:818 (4,5) - Poor flow for 1/4
01:04:437 (4,5,6) - For rhythm consistency, it need to be altered to 3/4 slider + 1/2 slider.

You need a re-bubble from the previous bn and then call me back.

Kayano

1,286 posts

Joined July 2011

Kayano 2017-08-06T14:26:14+00:00

Regraz wrote:
[Kayano's Easy]
00:46:342 (3,1) - Flow here is a bit sharp, recommend: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8777210 这一段和 00:39:675 (3,4,1) - 一样都是两个note跟着滑条的方向，note和滑条方向之间有个反向的夹角，我觉得打着还ok，不改的主要原因是我觉得改了之后 00:48:723 (1) - 太丝滑了跟音乐这里偏重的人声有点不搭

thx

S o a p

359 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

S o a p 2017-08-06T14:43:54+00:00

Regraz wrote:
M4M as required. My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/542163 You could just choose 2-3 diffs to mod since my mapset is of great size.

[General]
You need to add "Kayano" into tags and might consider adding Sun Rainbow into tags too.√

[Kayano's Easy]
00:46:342 (3,1) - Flow here is a bit sharp, recommend: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8777210

[Normal]
00:14:913 (3) - Shape is quite sharp and not matching with the smooth vocal here.我认为这还可以
00:19:675 (1,2) - Should be 1.3x in spacing.√
00:30:866 (1,2) - I think a parallel pattern would be better.我试了一下觉得平行的看起来很死板
00:38:723 (1,2,1,2) - Rhythm is pretty empty here, add some 1/2s, for example: 00:42:294 加了两个note
00:43:723 (3,1) - Visual spacing here makes it look closer than it actually is.√
00:47:532 (3,1) - Should be 1.3x too. A stable spacing in Normal is needed.√
00:48:961 (2,3) - Better blanket them.√
00:50:627 (2,3,1) - This double stack is too tricky to exist in Normal.有吗。。那我把NC移到note上好了。（
00:56:818 (3,1) - Poor blanket.√
01:08:008 (2,3) - In most cases you could only have one type of rhythm for stack in lower level diffs.换成了个滑条。不然觉得空空的

[liaoxingyao's Hard]
00:44:913 (2,3) - 01:03:247 (5,1) - Imperfect blanket.
00:51:818 (5,1) - Enhanced spacing is needed for the cymbal.

[Insane]
This diff obviously needs to be nerf'ed to match with the spread.我觉得我还是做的很良心送分了
00:18:723 (6,1) - I don't think it is appropriate to apply such a large spacing as well as anti-flow for 1/4 gap.√
00:52:533 (2,3) - Yes jump might be applied to here but this is excessively large.间距改小了一点
00:56:818 (4,5) - Poor flow for 1/4√
01:04:437 (4,5,6) - For rhythm consistency, it need to be altered to 3/4 slider + 1/2 slider.√

You need a re-bubble from the previous bn and then call me back.

谢谢瓜子