yf_bmp wrote:

摆的好随意

h4d0uk3n1 wrote:

Hello, m4m here

Insane:

1. I didn't get ncs idea, maybe just put it on every big white tick? sometime it feels random
2. some of the triples don't have sound supporting them, are you sure you want to keep them? (examples: 00:36:580 (2,3,4) - 00:45:866 (6,7,1) - and so on)
3. 00:46:580 - there is vocal note, maybe make repeat there or something like this?
4. 00:49:199 (5) - why did you decide to emphasize vocal like this here? maybe just circle?

liaoxingyao's Hard:

1. 00:54:437 (6,1) - a little bit awkward, i think you should overlap them (like this 00:47:294 (4,5) - )
2. 01:08:723 (6,7,1) - i think would be better if you made these circles go down

Normal

1. 00:22:532 (3,1) - why these fully overlap each other while these 00:11:580 (5,1) - stacked normally
2. 01:08:008 (2,3) - the only 1/2 stack in the whole diff

Hope I helped. Good luck!

h4d0uk3n1 wrote:

Hello, m4m here

liaoxingyao's Hard:

1. 00:54:437 (6,1) - a little bit awkward, i think you should overlap them (like this 00:47:294 (4,5) - ) ok
2. 01:08:723 (6,7,1) - i think would be better if you made these circles go down its fine i think

Hope I helped. Good luck!

Gust wrote:

[liaoxingyao's Hard]
00:07:770 (5,1,2) - 应该调一下5和1的ds，现在看着有些不好。。改了
00:33:485 (2,3) - ds有点小 ok
00:43:723 (3) - 加个NC可能比较好 这个应该还行..

Sun Rainbow wrote:

yf_bmp wrote:

摆的好随意

我作图才叫随意（）

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https://puu.sh/wQEFs/74f587c79c.osb

Gust wrote:

NM request from qq

[Normal]
00:04:913 (2,1) - 这种遮边看着有点不舒服还好

[liaoxingyao's Hard]
00:07:770 (5,1,2) - 应该调一下5和1的ds，现在看着有些不好。。
00:33:485 (2,3) - ds有点小
00:43:723 (3) - 加个NC可能比较好

[Insane]

yf_bmp wrote:

摆的好随意

我开Ai mod有些物件没有对齐轴，不知道是我这里的问题还是本身就是没对齐的√
00:16:104 (3) - 可以考虑拆成note这个感觉没什么必要换成note
00:36:580 (2,3) - 用一个slider感觉三连强调下好。
00:42:056 (1) - NC？√
00:41:342 (5,1) - 1还可以放的更好看一点改了一点
00:49:914 (8,9,1) - flow有点。。还好吧..
01:00:627 (5,6,1) - ……不太好看……改了点
01:08:008 (2,3,4) - 推荐叠这个还好。我再看看其他人咋说（。

祝早飞谢谢

Kayano wrote:

Easy

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Title:Kimi Ni Todoke
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Artist:Tachibana Arisu (CV:Satou Amina)
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ArtistUnicode里面的冒号是半角还是全角的最好在游戏里面确认（找骏喵

smallboat wrote:

[liaoxingyao's Hard]

00:28:247 (2,3,4,5) - 對Hard diff而言這串子的note多了些，建議還是用滑條來取代 (4跟5合併成一個1/4滑條)fixed

smallboat wrote:

[Global]

1.難度來源不一樣 (查看Aimod)√
2.有個沒使用的osb : Tachibana Arisu (CVSatou Amina) - Kimi Ni Todoke (S o a p).osb√

[Normal]

00:27:532 (1) - 間距√

[liaoxingyao's Hard]

00:28:247 (2,3,4,5) - 對Hard diff而言這串子的note多了些，建議還是用滑條來取代 (4跟5合併成一個1/4滑條)

[Insane]

00:27:533 (3) - 重音忘了NC√
00:54:913 (6) - 同上√

1. Tachibana Arisu is the character singing this song, but not the real person. The artist should be changed accordingly. According to columbia.jp (the company releasing the idolmaster musics), the artist name should be "橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)" (romanised: "Tachibana Arisu (CV: Satou Amina)").
   All the information regarding the metadata can be found on this page: http://columbia.jp/idolmaster/imasnews/160513.html
   
   
   
2. The original of this song is by Tomofumi Tanizawa, so please consider adding "谷澤智文", "タニザワトモフミ" and "Tomofumi Tanizawa" to the tags.
   
   

Kurai wrote:

I didn't find anything actually wrong in this set, but I have some suggestions regarding metadata:

1. Tachibana Arisu is the character singing this song, but not the real person. The artist should be changed accordingly. According to columbia.jp (the company releasing the idolmaster musics), the artist name should be "橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)" (romanised: "Tachibana Arisu (CV: Satou Amina)").
   All the information regarding the metadata can be found on this page: http://columbia.jp/idolmaster/imasnews/160513.html
   
   
   
2. The original of this song is by Tomofumi Tanizawa, so please consider adding "谷澤智文", "タニザワトモフミ" and "Tomofumi Tanizawa" to the tags. fix
   
   

Edit: I didn't see someone already posted about the metadata, anyway this is still relevent and you should do the fix

S o a p wrote:

Kurai wrote:

I didn't find anything actually wrong in this set, but I have some suggestions regarding metadata:

1. Tachibana Arisu is the character singing this song, but not the real person. The artist should be changed accordingly. According to columbia.jp (the company releasing the idolmaster musics), the artist name should be "橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)" (romanised: "Tachibana Arisu (CV: Satou Amina)").
   All the information regarding the metadata can be found on this page: http://columbia.jp/idolmaster/imasnews/160513.html
   
   
   
2. The original of this song is by Tomofumi Tanizawa, so please consider adding "谷澤智文", "タニザワトモフミ" and "Tomofumi Tanizawa" to the tags. fix
   
   

Edit: I didn't see someone already posted about the metadata, anyway this is still relevent and you should do the fix

From IamKwaN

Unicode Title: きみにとどけ
Romanised Title: Kimi ni Todoke
Unicode Artist: 橘ありす
Romanised Artist: Tachibana Arisu
Source: アイドルマスターシンデレラガールズ

References:
http://columbia.jp/idolmaster/COCX-39653.html
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LwlEPr6m2ZY
https://truth.bahamut.com.tw/s01/201607 ... 7fd2c4.JPG
http://cinderella.idolmaster.jp/

thanks

Kurai wrote:

I disagree with KwaN here. I believe the artist should be "橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)" as it is written "starring by 橘ありす(CV:佐藤亜美菜)" everywhere, even on the album's back cover. Anyway, at least add "佐藤亜美菜" and "Satou Amina" in tags?√

Also you could probably add "idolmaster" in tags as well; people looking for IDOLM@STER songs are probably more prone to type "idolmaster" in the search bar as it is easier to write than "idolm@ster".

[General]
- Your background image is a bit too big for a .jpg image (1.13 MB). I re-encoded it and now it is 136 kB (no quality loss): http://up.kuraip.net/0726x3nY2348.jpg√
- You should remove "Satou Amina - Kimi Ni Todoke (S o a p).osb" from the folder of your beatmap.√

IamKwaN wrote:

歌：橘ありす is also everywhere. Uta means Vocal, which we usually interpret it as artist. "starring by" just credits the voice actor, which doesn't necessarily mean artist. We do not care whether the artist is virtual / vocaloid character or not, what we care only is whether it is official.

And ye, you can put THE IDOLMASTER, 佐藤亜美菜 and Satou (or Sato) Amina in tags.√ Actually 佐藤亜美菜 was a former AKB48 member too.

快點飛了飛 in fact!!hahaa好的

Kyuukai wrote:

ayyyyyyyy another Kimi ni Todoke

Regraz wrote:

[Kayano's Easy]
00:46:342 (3,1) - Flow here is a bit sharp, recommend: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8777210 这一段和 00:39:675 (3,4,1) - 一样都是两个note跟着滑条的方向，note和滑条方向之间有个反向的夹角，我觉得打着还ok，不改的主要原因是我觉得改了之后 00:48:723 (1) - 太丝滑了跟音乐这里偏重的人声有点不搭

Regraz wrote:

M4M as required. My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/542163 You could just choose 2-3 diffs to mod since my mapset is of great size.

[General]
You need to add "Kayano" into tags and might consider adding Sun Rainbow into tags too.√

[Kayano's Easy]
00:46:342 (3,1) - Flow here is a bit sharp, recommend: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8777210

[Normal]
00:14:913 (3) - Shape is quite sharp and not matching with the smooth vocal here.我认为这还可以
00:19:675 (1,2) - Should be 1.3x in spacing.√
00:30:866 (1,2) - I think a parallel pattern would be better.我试了一下觉得平行的看起来很死板
00:38:723 (1,2,1,2) - Rhythm is pretty empty here, add some 1/2s, for example: 00:42:294 加了两个note
00:43:723 (3,1) - Visual spacing here makes it look closer than it actually is.√
00:47:532 (3,1) - Should be 1.3x too. A stable spacing in Normal is needed.√
00:48:961 (2,3) - Better blanket them.√
00:50:627 (2,3,1) - This double stack is too tricky to exist in Normal.有吗。。那我把NC移到note上好了。（
00:56:818 (3,1) - Poor blanket.√
01:08:008 (2,3) - In most cases you could only have one type of rhythm for stack in lower level diffs.换成了个滑条。不然觉得空空的

[liaoxingyao's Hard]
00:44:913 (2,3) - 01:03:247 (5,1) - Imperfect blanket.
00:51:818 (5,1) - Enhanced spacing is needed for the cymbal.

[Insane]
This diff obviously needs to be nerf'ed to match with the spread.我觉得我还是做的很良心送分了
00:18:723 (6,1) - I don't think it is appropriate to apply such a large spacing as well as anti-flow for 1/4 gap.√
00:52:533 (2,3) - Yes jump might be applied to here but this is excessively large.间距改小了一点
00:56:818 (4,5) - Poor flow for 1/4√
01:04:437 (4,5,6) - For rhythm consistency, it need to be altered to 3/4 slider + 1/2 slider.√

You need a re-bubble from the previous bn and then call me back.

Karen wrote:

00:49:199 (5,6) - keng

IamKwaN wrote:

好了，该飞in fact了

Suzuki_1112 wrote:

fly了，迟来的congratz
性先生不要打我就好了

-[Apple]- wrote:

？

mr.xingyao nbnb, congratulation here

-[Apple]- wrote:

？

mr.xingyao nbnb, congratulation here

liaoxingyao wrote:

-[Apple]- wrote:

？

mr.xingyao nbnb, congratulation here

cmn

[Mahua] wrote:

哇 这么快就飞了