from my queue
[Easy]
00:15:255 (4,1) - Is the DS lower intentionally? if not fix.
00:25:683 (1,1) - totally personal opinion but I don't like these shapes. the second slider seems to shrink like that to fit with 00:25:303 (1) but don't really follow any kind of pattern.
00:32:519 (4,1,2) - make this a triangle and blanket 1 and 2? like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/894079600:35:177 (3,1) - better blanket
00:37:455 (3,1) - try not to miss out these aesthetic opportunities?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/894082100:48:088 (2) - did you try to make it symmetrical? because its not.
[Normal]
Timing point at -694 wtf xP it happens on every diff except easy, which I guess is the one correct?
00:20:774 (1) - why does it starts here? start it like you did on easy diff.
00:27:202 (2) - instead of a single slider, how about note+slider?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/894103800:31:759 (5) - bad repeated slider. theres a Su-mi~ sound (don't know what it says really xD) on white tick and red tick. so either a single slider starting on white tick or two notes. but not a repeated slider.
00:40:114 (3) - theres a strong beat here, maybe put a slider instead of a not on 00:40:304 (3) here.
00:41:063 (5) - why you ignore vocals here, you've been mapping vocals
00:42:013 (1,2) - weird rhythm choice. probably two sliders would fit better.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8941102[Vat's Hard]
00:21:585 (7,8) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8941133 ? i know the map isn't really about blankets but here its so close that just make it lol
00:25:683 (2,3) - change this to this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8941154 [Insane]
General - Try using more editing space, most of the map feels very centered and there are some overlap that doesn't seem intentional.
00:12:597 (8) - end it as a single note as you did 00:06:521 (8) it emphatize better imo.
00:27:962 (4,1) - increase DS here or place it like you do here (you do it constantly) 00:29:860 (1,2)
[Vat's Insane]
00:09:464 (6,7,1) - don't make these weird overlaps in this kind of mapping, its unnecessarely hard to read.
00:18:293 (5,6,7,8,9,2,3,4) - ^
the map is fun to play but it constantly have those overlaps, you don't really scape from the center so its normal to have those issues, unless its intentional I would try to expand more to the corners and use more patterns to keep those overlaps controlled at the very least.
[buhei's extra]
00:05:381 (1,2) - the slider definetly starts on the red tick. maybe having two kick sliders like this?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/894136800:49:797 (1,2,3,4) - as no other diff mapped this they didn't bother to time this correctly. but its definetly offbeat. a fast timing tells me its 145~
thats all from me
good luck with the mappset