Hi, M4M from your modqueue.[General]
Your map could make better use of the space available. It's very crowded around the centre, make sure to go into the sides and the corners.
[Insane]
Since this is Insane diff, you can make less use of distance snap and put jumps to emphasise strong notes more. Like 00:11:921 (2,3) - where 3 is a very strong note with drum and whistle at the same time.
00:20:222 (2,1,2,3) - Not quite in a straight line. If it's supposed to be straight, make it perfect. If it's curved, then make the curve more obvious.
00:31:727 (2,3,4) - ^
00:22:552 (1,2,3,4) - flow from 3 to 4 is a little uncomfortable, move 4 so that it's more a part of the arc.
00:24:009 (6,1) - slight overlap like this looks untidy, either overlap more so it looks deliberate, or remove overlap.
00:39:591 (1,3) - ^
01:46:581 (1,2) - ^
02:30:417 (2,3,1) - ^
00:27:067 (6,1) - blanket
00:35:805 (3,1,2,3) - stack 3 circle under 3 sliderend.
00:39:009 (3,4) - nudge 4 to the right a little to make it symmetrical and blanketing 3.
00:41:339 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I like the flow in this section!
00:47:746 (3,4) - copy paste to make these sliders the same shape pls
00:49:785 (1,2,3) - ^
00:49:785 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 2 circle in second combo would look better stacked under 1 sliderend in first combo.
01:02:601 (3,4) - make sliderbody 4 in line with 3.
01:08:717 (1,2,3) - Would look better if this pattern was rotationally symmetrical.
01:10:319 (3,4,5,1) - move 5 so that 3,5,1 make an equliateral triangle
01:15:708 (1) - move to x:163 y:279 (rly picky comment I know...)
01:24:882 (5,6,1,2) - move 5,6,1, so that it forms a smooth arc with 2
01:26:630 (4,5,6) - ^ move 5 but also make sure it blankets 6 from a distance
01:50:659 (1,2,3,4,5) - would look better if 5 was parallel with 1
01:53:863 (4,1) - really uncomfortable flow here bc lots of direction changes. consider changing?
02:02:164 (6,1,2,3) - looks like a bow and arrow, would look even better if it was more symmetrical.
02:11:047 (1) - make slider shape more unique to telegraph slow slider speed?
02:25:611 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Ayy this is nice!
02:29:689 (1) - move end anchor to x:216 y:349 (picky comment again :v)
03:07:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - could increase spacing from start to end of stream, as the song increases in intensity
03:18:620 (3,4,5,1) - would look better if symmetrical
[Hard]
HP7 seems excessive. Turn it down to 5, as even Insane only has HP6.
Lots of untidy blanketing in this diff eg. 00:21:533 (1,2) and 00:22:552 (1,2)
00:12:212 (3,4,5,1,2) - stuff not quite in a straight line
00:29:979 (3,4) - weird overlap (I'm not going to point out more of these, it's just places where the overlap doesn't fit the rhythm and doesn't make a cool shape)
00:28:523 (1,1) - 1/2 spacing looks too similar to 1/4 spacing (and vice versa)
01:18:620 (2,3) - ^
01:16:144 (3,1,2) - ^
01:55:319 (1,2) - ^
02:28:378 (2,3,4,1) - ^
03:11:921 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ^
00:57:358 (1,2,3,4) - looks strange and uncomfortable flow. make 1 point to 2 more, and better blanketing
01:02:601 (2,3) - this rhythm is unreadable, just have the slider in time with drum on white tick.
01:41:047 (2,1,2,3) - move stream so that 3 in stream is under 2 sliderend.
02:11:047 (1) - make slider shape more unique to telegraph slow slider speed?
02:21:824 (3,1) - 3/4 beat pause is unintuitive, find a better way to express this rhythm.
03:02:164 (4,5) - ^
03:19:203 (1,2) - ^
02:49:494 (1,2) - blanket
03:08:135 (3,4,5,6,7) - make stream zigzag more obvious
03:21:387 (3,4,1,2,3) - don't switch between 1/8 stack and 1/4 stack, it's too hard to read
[Normal]
00:09:882 (1,2) - 3/4 beat pause is unintuitive, find a better way to express this rhythm.
00:19:785 (1,1) - ^
00:27:795 (2,3) - ^
00:33:766 (1,2) - ^ (I'm not going to point out more of these)
00:21:824 (1,1,2) - remove overlap (new players can't read overlaps)
01:05:513 (2,1) - ^
00:41:630 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - remove all unnecessary overlaps in this section
00:53:572 (3,4,1) - distance snap
00:54:737 (1,2) - blanket
01:22:698 (1,2,3) - too hard to read. 02:37:261 (1,2,3) this is better.
02:49:494 (1,2,3,4,5) - would look better if symmetrical
03:04:348 (4,5) - make these parallel
03:09:882 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - remove all unnecessary overlaps in this section, add more blankets.
[Easy]
00:20:659 (3,1) - 1 1/2 rhythm is unintuitive at this level, find a better way to express this rhythm.
01:35:222 (3,1) - ^
01:44:543 (2,1) - ^
00:49:785 (1,2) - make these rotationally symmetrical
01:19:203 (1) - slider shape is too confusing for new players, esp. with reverse.
01:26:193 (2,3) - make these parallel
01:55:319 (1,2,3) - this pattern looks untidy, maybe find a way to blanket
02:18:038 (3,1,2) - ^
02:01:144 (2,1) - remove overlap
02:33:766 (1,1,2) - ^
03:13:377 (1,1,2) - ^
Gl with your map!