1. 00:02:994 (1) - Minor stuff, but move the midpoint one grid left to make the slidertick perfectly in the center
2. 00:06:994 (4) - Hmm, 2/1 slider here instead of repeating 1/1? Because slidertick sounds better on 00:07:327 instead of loud normal hitsample. You can arrange like this, for example:
   
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3. 00:10:994 (3,4) - Here also, I prefer to combine them as 2/1 slider to get that slidertick sound.
4. 00:22:994 (3) - Don't be afraid to put claps also on the repeat! It sounds great ~
5. 00:32:327 (3) - (optional) Move this one grid right to give more space (and a better angle) against (2)
6. 00:37:660 (4) - I personally don't like how this got overlapped with 00:36:327 (2), but that's not a big problem (:
7. 00:41:660 (x) - It seems like... a note should be here. Maybe start a 1/1 slider here, like you previously did on 00:36:327 (2)?
8. 00:42:994 (4) - Considering you add a new combo on 00:21:660 (1) previously, I highly suggest to add a NC also here.
9. 00:53:660 (5,6,1) - (optional) Why not put (5) centered? This way, you can give more space so (6,1,2) can form an arc with better angle:
   
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10. 01:04:327 (4) - New combo here can help to emphasize this powerful part (:
11. 01:28:327 (2,3) - I prefer to inverse the order (2/1 slider first then 1/1 slider) here, again because the slidertick sounds better on 01:28:660
12. 01:30:994 (5) - New combo here (I don't think a Beginner needs a 7-combo streak, orz ><)
13. 01:42:994 (x) - Feels kinda empty without note here. Not something you have to add though :3

1. 00:09:327 (2) - One grid down to make the spacing to (1) and (3) more equal (if you want it to be 100% equal, grid lv4 should be used though ><)
2. 00:17:327 (2) - (optional) One grid down to make a better angle, thus flowing better?
3. 00:18:660 (4) - You can move this few grid up also to build more flow (:
4. 00:21:660 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - There's still a lot of space below! Don't be afraid to push (2,3,4,5) lower imo, because your current (2,3,4,5) feels forced ><
   
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5. 00:34:994 (1,2) - I don't like how these turning out too linear... imo, you can play more with slider curves here. Like this perhaps?
   
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6. 00:50:660 (4,1) - Move (4) one grid up and left, (1) one grid down and right so (1)'s end stacked to (3)?
7. 01:00:660 (4) - Hmm, did you forgot to add clap on slider's start? (or it's intentional? o.o)
8. 01:02:660 (2) - (optional) Move one grid up to form a better angle/flow
9. 01:06:994 (1) - Uh... Your slider's curve is actually fine, but I prefer tilted slider wave here. Flows better imo:
   
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10. 01:21:660 (3) - Create slider like this? It looks better imo, thus it only needs a small modification from your current slider's shape:
    
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11. 01:46:994 (1) - Hmm, what is the purpose of this note? I think it's better to delete this to give more recovery time after spinner (this is a Normal diff afterall ><)

1. 00:05:494 (3) - (optional) Arrange a small jump like this? Won't be hard to catch, but fun imo :3
   
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2. 00:18:994 (1) - Not perfectly stacked to (3)'s end (and quite visible orz >_<)
3. 00:19:494 (2) - Move it to the extreme low (~3 grids down) for a better flow maybe? (don't worry, it's not offscreen)
4. 00:20:827 (2) - I prefer to curve this upward a bit to keep your slider curves consistent, but not something you have to change though
5. 00:27:494 (2) - It's closer to (1) rather than to (3) a bit, barely noticeable though
6. 00:30:160 (2) - Move both midpoints one grid right. It might just be a minor stuff, but I highly recommend doing this because it will look MUCH more symmetrical this way :3
7. 00:33:994 (6,7) - (optional) Maybe add a repeat on (6) and delete (7) ? The vocal on 00:34:327 is too gorgeous to be ignored ><
8. 00:45:661 (2,3,4) - Arrange like this? (even if you decide to keep (2,4) as is, I still highly recommend to move (3) two grids up like in the image below)
   
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9. 00:51:327 (2,3,4) - Same suggestion as before
10. 01:01:661 (1,2,3,4,5,...) - Don't you think circle-madness like this would be hard on DoubleTime? orz :3 :3 :3
11. 01:31:494 (2) - Face this slider upward like this, to emphasize the direction to (1)?
    
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12. 01:44:160 (6) - This note is standing too close to (5). One grid up?

1. 00:10:660 (12) - (optional) Curve this to another direction (left) to make this flow together more with (1)?
2. 00:18:161 (8,9) - This jump is good, but... quite random for me. idk... maybe make the distance more equal?
   
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3. 00:23:660 (8) - Extend by 1/4 more? (sounds good here! ^^)
4. 00:42:161 (6) - (optional) Stack to (8)'s end instead?
5. 00:44:661 (6,7,8) - Well, I personally feel (8) will play better if stacked to (1). So, maybe arrange like this? (6) is stacked to (4)'s end, btw :
   
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6. 01:18:660 (8) - Minor stuff, but one grid (lv3) down for the midpoint to make it encircle better
7. 01:39:327 (2,3) - Swap these two's placement, to prevent overlap with (10)?
8. 01:45:494 (x) - Feels empty without a note here imo, so, add a circle here maybe? Stack with (3)'s end (:

[Another]
I think this diff need add more newcombo , now the combo is too long

wcx19911123 wrote:

mod

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[Another]
Things like 00:13:327 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - or 00:16:327 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - with space changes everywhere aren't good.
Popping for now until the New Combos get fixed

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