1. B O K Oni (3.57 stars, 1095 notes)

raii wrote:

General: My first mod. If you map the piano, you need to do it fully, left out alot. Leaving out mappable stuff is bad rip.... i can't find the right slowing bpm T_T...hope someone help me. Keep mapping consistency through the whole map. Also finisher in a triple ????????????? no i know....**** ranking criteria T_T. Really need to stop mapping so much of the vocals, missing important beats. Mapping to the vocals is muzukashii, oni is to the beat. If you decide to keep mapping to the vocals, change it to muzukashii and make the patterns simplier, as a muzukashii would be. Last kiai has gud patterns. (Sorry, I am not too good with the good and bads of slow parts, but hope I helped. vocal or beat depend on mapper style..... i think Oni can use vocal as much as muzukashii with complex pattern

00:07:645 (8,9,10) - k, d , d hmm... the sound there is different from 00:04:010 (3,4,5) - ... i think it like a mirror

00:35:601 (8) - k ok ... agree

01:16:737 (146,147) - k, d eventhough prefer finish there but k d is fine too

02:42:535 (172) - delete ok....doesn't realize this mistake

02:42:760 - add k v

02:42:874 (174) - remove finisher for both mod on 02:42:760, i agree....and 02:42:419 - changed to k

02:50:146 (201) - remove finisher prefer finish there but because of ranking criteria.....it can't be helped -_-

02:55:146 (227) - k disagree....the pitch there is different from 02:54:919 - ...d suit well since i use k before

03:01:169 (261,262,264) - k, d , k the suggestion pattern is fine too...but i feel current kdkdd fit better than that

03:03:555 (273) - add finisher ok...np i think

03:04:234 (275) - k disagree....different pitch from note before

03:04:578 (277,278) - d, k ok...it fit well

03:04:692 (278) remove finisher!!! (never put finisher in stream / triple) ^^

03:06:964 (290) - k ok....nice for this

03:09:010 (302) - k ok..agree

03:11:055 (308,309,310,311,312) - change up to 311 to k and 312 to d hmm... kkkkd is fine but i think kkdkd fit well with the sound

03:11:737 (313,314) k ok...nice

03:19:919 (352) k hmm..... the pitch seem doesn't enough to use k imo

03:20:828 (353, 354, 355) - k, d, k hmm...this part of the sound is so tricky pitch.... it can be mapped many way.....prefer the current one for now

03:49:237 (426) - k ok...agree on this pitch

03:53:101 (436,437,438) - k, k, d agree on pitch again

04:11:283 (503,504,505,506) - k, d, d, k hmm.... ok ...better i guess

04:17:419 (529) - remove finisher ;;;;;;;; ^^

04:21:851 (554,556,557) - d, k, d hmm... hard to decide but my pattern is wrong too...changed to kdkdd k

04:30:828 (607) - add finisher ok

04:31:964 (612) - remove finisher ^^

04:59:237 (1) - remove spinner *from this mod onward.....the last part still not timed correctly... can't find the slowing bpm so i can't do much for now*

05:01:055 (44) - add k *

05:02:874 (45) - add k *

05:03:101 (46) - add d *

05:03:555 (47) - add d *

05:03:986 (48) - add d *

05:04:237 (49) - add d *

05:04:692 (50) - add d *

05:05:146 (51) - add d *

05:05:601 (52) - add d *




Hope it was helpful!!

Good luck for ranked ~ just mapping for the song i like tbh.....maybe going for rank if able '-')

Tyistiana wrote:

Hi~
Sorry for a big late ;;w;; No problem at all ... i'm glad you mod it

[ B O K Oni]
00:07:646 (8,9,10) - How about kkd ? , it would fit to the piano pitch at first i thought that make it ddk will distinguish 00:14:919 (18,19,20) - but now it seem fine too... so i guess i was wrong before .
00:16:055 - Seems too balnk , how about add a spinner here? hmm... i think a spinner there is not so suitable since still in the middle of intro.... but let's try '-' Trying slider/roll instead work well
00:41:055 - This pitch is not dominate like 00:39:237. I suggest to remove the finisher in this point hmm.. good point... the same sound next part also didn't use finisher so i was wrong .
00:55:374 (68,69,70) - How about kkd ? , to make 00:55:601 (70) become d which it'll consist to 00:53:783 piano pitch. agree with consistency... i still can't distinguish the pitch well -_- maybe kdd fit better
01:25:374 - How about k , the pitch here seems high , and to make a difference to 01:25:601 wow that look nicer '-')b
01:54:692 - A dominate finisher sound stand here. Make this note as a finisher would be nice. yes i think it too.... maybe i was afraid to use finisher style
02:53:555 - k , only my opinion here. no objection this pattern...feel fine for both
03:33:669 - A vocal stands here, since you've use the vocal as a main , so this point shouldn't be ignore to place a note.sorry but i got too many critic on using Finisher at triplet pattern T_T
04:28:555 - d would be nice in my opinion. this last kiai part really make me think and trial a lot ....i don't know which one better.... so no problem
...And the spinner on the end should be end on 05:17:520 , the music end here. :3 maybe i overheard the last sound to much

Yep, great map!! >w<
Good luck Thank you very much Tyistiana

JarvisGaming YT wrote:

From queue
[Dem Oni]
00:04:465 (5) - Might wanna consider changing this to k because its higher pitch than last note sound better...agree
00:11:737 (15) - ^ ^^
00:51:737 (56,57) - kd to fit vocal hmm both kd and dlk seems fine for me...applied
Can't find anything wrong in most of the map
04:51:283 (17,18,19) - kkd sounds better although i think ddk was right but kkd fit well too...not hurt to applied '-'

Gl :3
Couldn't find much wrong

thank for the mod JarvisGaming YT ... This map is not for ranked because i got trauma that my map become messed up after BN's mod and he/she still doesn't approve it T_T....Let the feel of this map stay still ._.)