Louis Cyphre wrote:

[Insane]
00:33:688 (1,2,3,4,5) - :/ please place it somewhere else, it looks weird.
everything else looks great, but i dislike alot overmapped triplets...

same in Aenna's diff. Mapset is great, i think i can leave this to YGO, let him decide what is what.

1. The mp3 quality is quite bad.Please change a better one if possible.
2. Tag: Consider adding "aabc" to tag because we also called aabc271 as aabc

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. AR -1 to consistant the overall difficulty setting?
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 01:15:308 (1,2) - I suggest to change another pattern here because I have seen this pattern before, I hope you can use various arrangement in a same.Then it can give more "feeling" to player.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:36:434 (2) - Please remove the finish hitsound here because there aren't have any kind of accent and that didn't fit the music quite well.Remove that is the best way I think.
   2. 00:41:505 (1) - You can consider a finish at the beginning of the slider due to the strong accent point.

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:24:603 (1,2) - I was wondering the rhythm here, why you want to put the rhythm like this?Nothing was supported the reverse of the slider.I mean the rhythm.Something 1/1 here sounds good.
   2. 01:05:167 (1) - ^Same.I can't understand the rhythm.
   3. 01:08:547 (1,2) - (design) Hum,probably make this slider more beautiful? Here's the advice I have suggested:
      
      Suggestion

      

      326,140,68547,6,0,B|378:111|430:131|430:131|408:181|456:208,2,180

   4. 01:29:251 (3) - I would add a new combo here if I were you because the "star" pattern was starting here.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:41:505 (1) - You can consider a finish at the beginning of the slider due to the strong accent point.
   2. 00:42:350 (1) - Add a clap here.
   3. 00:44:040 (1)- ^Same.
   4. 00:45:730 (1) - ^
   5. 00:47:420 (4) - Add a clap at the reverse of the slider.

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. I can see AR7 can fit the song very well.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:12:984 (4) - I think that would be more fun if you can make a jump here.Yeah,it just fit the music.
   2. 00:30:942 (5,6,7) - This triplet sounds strange to me, the main reason may be it doesn't start from red line and I can't here any triplet on the music on this timing.Remove 00:31:047 (6) - can fix this.
   3. 00:42:984 (1) - I would add a new combo here if I were you because this chain of combo is much longer than others,so I add a nc here to consistent the combo lenght.
   4. 01:10:871 (6) - ^Same.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:04:322 (x) - Probably add a whistle at the end of the slider?
   2. 00:06:012 (1) - Add a clap at the end of slider to fit your hitclap pattern.
   3. 00:06:857 (3) - ^
   4. 00:31:998 (2) - Why do you add the finish like this...It doesn't fit the music.Extremely weird.

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:11:716 (7) - I would add a new combo here if I were you because this chain of combo is much longer than others,so I add a nc here to consistent the combo lenght.
   2. 00:22:280 (6) - ^Same.
   3. 00:47:843 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why it needs to reduce the spacing here?I can't see any reason that you need to do that.The slider speed is speed up after this stream,so I think you need to increase the spacing here.
   4. 00:58:406 (6) - I guess you need to add a new combo here because the kiai time is starting here.
   5. 01:27:772 (x) - I think you should add a note here because I can see you general put the rhythm in 1/2,so add a note here for consistency.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:06:012 (2,3) - Add the whistle at the end of the slider?
   2. 00:50:589 (2) - Remove the finish at the beginning of the slider because it doesn't have any accent point there.
   3. 00:53:125 (4) - Remove the clap here please,it doesn't fit the music here.

1. Remove the video from this diff if possible?
2. 00:10:026 (1,1,1) - I found dkd didn't fit the music that much.I prefer ddd instead of that.
3. 00:12:878 (3) - Change to kat here?
4. 01:03:054 (1) - Change to kat to fiit the drum sound.
5. 01:08:125 (3) - ^Same.

kanpakyin wrote:

As per your request:

[General]

1. The mp3 quality is quite bad.Please change a better one if possible.sorry,Could not find anything better than this mp3 T-T
2. Tag: Consider adding "aabc" to tag because we also called aabc271 as aabc

[Easy]

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. AR -1 to consistant the overall difficulty setting?
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 01:15:308 (1,2) - I suggest to change another pattern here because I have seen this pattern before, I hope you can use various arrangement in a same.Then it can give more "feeling" to player.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:36:434 (2) - Please remove the finish hitsound here because there aren't have any kind of accent and that didn't fit the music quite well.Remove that is the best way I think.
   2. 00:41:505 (1) - You can consider a finish at the beginning of the slider due to the strong accent point.

[Normal]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:24:603 (1,2) - I was wondering the rhythm here, why you want to put the rhythm like this?Nothing was supported the reverse of the slider.I mean the rhythm.Something 1/1 here sounds good.
   2. 01:05:167 (1) - ^Same.I can't understand the rhythm.
   3. 01:08:547 (1,2) - (design) Hum,probably make this slider more beautiful? Here's the advice I have suggested:
      
      Suggestion

      

      326,140,68547,6,0,B|378:111|430:131|430:131|408:181|456:208,2,180

   4. 01:29:251 (3) - I would add a new combo here if I were you because the "star" pattern was starting here.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:41:505 (1) - You can consider a finish at the beginning of the slider due to the strong accent point.
   2. 00:42:350 (1) - Add a clap here.
   3. 00:44:040 (1)- ^Same.
   4. 00:45:730 (1) - ^
   5. 00:47:420 (4) - Add a clap at the reverse of the slider.

[Aenna]

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. I can see AR7 can fit the song very well.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:12:984 (4) - I think that would be more fun if you can make a jump here.Yeah,it just fit the music.
   2. 00:30:942 (5,6,7) - This triplet sounds strange to me, the main reason may be it doesn't start from red line and I can't here any triplet on the music on this timing.Remove 00:31:047 (6) - can fix this.
   3. 00:42:984 (1) - I would add a new combo here if I were you because this chain of combo is much longer than others,so I add a nc here to consistent the combo lenght.
   4. 01:10:871 (6) - ^Same.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:04:322 (x) - Probably add a whistle at the end of the slider?
   2. 00:06:012 (1) - Add a clap at the end of slider to fit your hitclap pattern.
   3. 00:06:857 (3) - ^
   4. 00:31:998 (2) - Why do you add the finish like this...It doesn't fit the music.Extremely weird.

[Insane]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:11:716 (7) - I would add a new combo here if I were you because this chain of combo is much longer than others,so I add a nc here to consistent the combo lenght.
   2. 00:22:280 (6) - ^Same.
   3. 00:47:843 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why it needs to reduce the spacing here?I can't see any reason that you need to do that.The slider speed is speed up after this stream,so I think you need to increase the spacing here.
   4. 00:58:406 (6) - I guess you need to add a new combo here because the kiai time is starting here.
   5. 01:27:772 (x) - I think you should add a note here because I can see you general put the rhythm in 1/2,so add a note here for consistency.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:06:012 (2,3) - Add the whistle at the end of the slider?
   2. 00:50:589 (2) - Remove the finish at the beginning of the slider because it doesn't have any accent point there.
   3. 00:53:125 (4) - Remove the clap here please,it doesn't fit the music here.

kanpakyin wrote:

[aabc's Taiko]

1. Remove the video from this diff if possible? I think it's fine, as many Taiko diffs have video too, and it is not distracting in gameplay ...?
2. 00:10:026 (1,1,1) - I found dkd didn't fit the music that much.I prefer ddd instead of that. OK~
3. 00:12:878 (3) - Change to kat here? OK~
4. 01:03:054 (1) - Change to kat to fiit the drum sound. OK~
5. 01:08:125 (3) - ^Same. OK~

aabc271 wrote:

kanpakyin wrote:

[aabc's Taiko]

1. Remove the video from this diff if possible? I think it's fine, as many Taiko diffs have video too, and it is not distracting in gameplay ...?
2. 00:10:026 (1,1,1) - I found dkd didn't fit the music that much.I prefer ddd instead of that. OK~
3. 00:12:878 (3) - Change to kat here? OK~
4. 01:03:054 (1) - Change to kat to fiit the drum sound. OK~
5. 01:08:125 (3) - ^Same. OK~

Thx for your modding

kanpakyin wrote:

Well,the mapset is really well itself.Everything check out,nothing need to complain.

Bubbled.

YGOkid8 wrote:

*pop*

General:
- I don't think you need "game" in tags, since that will be set as genre although I'm not sure if you remove it, searching "hentai game" would still work. Fixed!!
- For silent .wav files, you need to use a 0 byte file. To do this, make a new text document, then rename the filename and extension. Otherwise, download this and rename as needed. Don't forget to full submit!Fixed!!

Easy:

00:12:815 (3) - Slider could look better imo. I completely changed the shape, but try this?

Fixed!!

368,104,12815,2,0,B|352:8|256:-24|160:8|144:104,1,320,0|4

Fixed!!

00:41:548 (1,2,1,2) - Sliders, again. Hard to show in screenshot, so just see how you like it.

320,168,41548,6,0,B|416:176|464:272|416:368|320:376,1,320,4|0
208,320,44083,1,2
100,252,44928,6,0,B|4:244|-44:148|4:52|100:44,1,320,4|0
212,100,47463,1,2

Fixed!!
00:54:858 (1) - Since everything in this diff. pretty much start on white ticks, it'd make more sense to start this on the downbeat rather than follow the vocals. Fixed!!
01:09:435 (3) - New Combo. Fixed!!
01:32:041 (1) - Start on downbeat, but finish on 01:34:787 - . sorry, no change


Normal:

00:04:365 (1) - It's snapped incorrectly in the screenshot, but you know what I mean

Fixed!!

308,251,4365,6,0,B|408:237|427:126|338:78,2,240,0|2|0

　Fixed!!

00:07:745 (5,1) - Switch New Combos.Fixed!!

00:11:125 (5,1) - ^Fixed!!

00:43:238 (1) - Remove New Combo, and use this.

　Fixed!!

156,92,43238,6,0,B|192:36|256:16|320:36|356:92,1,240,0|8

Fixed!!

01:17:041 (1) - Remove New Combo. Fixed!!

01:18:731 (1) - Do the same for (3) as well.

Fixed!!

348,152,78731,6,0,B|324:88|256:64|188:88|164:152,1,240,4|0

Fixed!!

01:27:182 (5,1) - Switch New Combos.
Fixed!!

Aenna:
00:36:266 (8,1) - Switch New Combos.
Fixed!!

Insane:
00:31:407 (6,1) - Switch New Combos.Fixed!!
00:32:041 (8) - Ctrl + R. sorry, no change
00:36:055 (1,5) - Switch New Combos. Fixed!!

00:40:280 (2) - Remove clap off slider-end. Fixed!!

00:40:597 - Add a beat here, sounds a bit empty. sorry, no change


00:40:703 (1,1) - Remove New Combos. Fixed!!

01:04:787 (1) - ^ and the finish as well. Fixed!!

01:09:858 (1) - Remove New Combo. Fixed!!

01:11:548 (1) - ^ Fixed!!

Breeze wrote:

Taiko

1. Maybe you can remove video in this diff? I think video is unnecessary for taiko diff OK removed, as kpy also said that.
   Actually I think it's fine to keep it, but anyway :3
2. Generally, taiko difficulty set should be in the centre right?

In fact, there's no such limit to centre all diff settings. That is only a default setting.
If you go to browse the ranked Taiko maps, you can notice a lot of different difficulty settings.

Example 1, 2, 3
In this diff, I set the diff setting of my own usual habit. You may refer to this or this

Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff, you should fix
Blue : Important things, you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions, fix it only if you want

Aenna

1. 00:47:252 (2,3,4,5) - Hmm, I feel this partten might be confusing, maybe use two notes instead of 00:47:780 (3) - would be better?

Taiko

1. Maybe you can remove video in this diff? I think video is unnecessary for taiko diff
2. Generally, taiko difficulty set should be in the centre right?

Take what you want to fix and when you done changes, send me a forum PM for recheck

Breeze wrote:

❤kantoku art
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