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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年9月29日 at 23:12:08

Artist: Boys Like Girls
Title: The Great Escape
Tags: shinki pokie collab
BPM: 150
Filesize: 3714kb
Play Time: 03:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.51 stars, 144 notes)
  2. JauiPokie (5 stars, 505 notes)
  3. Shinki's Normal (3.45 stars, 207 notes)
Download: Boys Like Girls - The Great Escape
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Cause we are finally free tonight!
My 10th beatmap.

Shinki's Normal by Shinki.
JauiPokie escapecollab with Pokie.
And thanks for kanpakyin and Weiren's skin assistances.

Hope you'll like it!
Pokie
\:D/ 沙沙沙發
字數字數字數字數
還沒夠還沒夠
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General
  • - 木有General
    - 噢我好像說要調offset來著, -5求確認


Easy
  • 01:53:909 (1,2,1) - (1,2)和(2,1)的間距不等



    大萌神's Normal
    [list:1e75d]- 個人認為有部份跟vocal的地方不太恰當
00:46:509 (3) - 後移1/2拍, 調整spacing如何..? 原因是這邊似乎沒需要貼在紅線跟vocal, 沿上一小節那樣打節奏就行
01:54:509 (2,3) - 同後移1/2拍, 調整spacing
01:58:709 (1) - 拉長成1/1拍slider, 調整spacing
02:34:309 (1) - 後移1/2拍, 調整spacing.. 這段你依跟vocal為主, 那麼這邊也該照著放才對


00:14:709 (2,1) - 這種節奏出現在Normal還是有點不合適, 相當於3/4拍子, 低AR情況下後面的circle會容易按快... 嘛雖說這是玩家的事了
00:37:109 (1) - 個人認為這個spinner最後出現的finish音量可下降...約45左右
00:40:909 (2) - 折角可以拉的再明顯些? 看起來和bezier slider差不多
00:48:309 (2) - nazi, 左移2格, 下移1格 (grid 4)
00:57:109 (T) - 音量往上調至30左右
01:06:309 (1,2,1) - nazi, (2)可移至 x:144 y:200
01:23:509 (1,2) - 還是比較喜歡你第一次弄的造型, 不過這個也不錯
01:28:309 (T) - 同00:57:109 (T)
02:13:709 (T) - 在Collab中, 這部份我是使用soft音效.. 因為個人認為使用Normal其實挺不搭的, 看你要不要也改成soft, clap用whistle替代
02:19:909 (T), 02:23:109 (T), 02:24:109 (T) - ^
03:00:309 (T) - 同00:57:109 (T)

其實大問題沒有, 這些都是細節上的小錯誤
整體還是做的不錯 XD



Collab
[list:1e75d]00:25:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 較喜歡舊版的節奏, 主要是1/1原地停頓後接移動5連手感不好...
00:31:709 (3,4,5,6,1) - 只留slider結尾上的clap, 這邊是進入安靜的部份... 一串clap聽著不好
00:44:709 (4) - 這clap軟的聽不見.. 可以考慮在前一個slider結尾加個clap增強?
00:56:309 (5) - clap>finish
01:08:709 (2,3) - (2)clap, (3)取消
01:15:109 (1,2) - (1)取消, (2)clap

02:01:509 (3,4,5,6,7) - 同00:31:709 (3,4,5,6,1), 只留第一個clap
02:28:109 (1,2,3,4,5) - 其實這跳真的非常坑爹, 我改
02:40:709 (1) - 這我也得改
02:41:809 (T) - 無用綠線

02:47:909 (5,6,7,8,1) - 只留(6)的clap, (1)可finish
02:53:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這長串我也不知道怎麼改... 我是調這樣 o o x x o x x o (o = clap)

其實挑這clap的作用是襯托歌曲, 不太適合使用24方式下
00:51:509 - 像這段其實表現的就不錯
但像 02:41:909 - 以最後一段kiai來說, 音效應該要下的比較激情, 就現狀來說是有點過於平淡...



適當無視吧這mod :o

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我的部份 fixed

Download: Boys Like Girls - The Great Escape (JauiPlaY) [JauiPokie].osu
Nymph
基片鸭喊我来骗KUDO :o

General:
这么一坨下落圈..你认真的么...好厚..

Easy:
02:29:109 (1) - 头FINISH?
其余就是KIAI声音是不是有点太小了 全程都是55除了SOFT 有的地方几乎听不见

326大萌神's normal:
00:16:309 (2) - 推荐这里用前面的白线SLIDER+circle
00:19:509 (2) - 头FINISH?
00:38:709 (1) - ^ 再不提这类东西了
00:50:909 (1) - 很别扭 延长到红线跟下一个SLIDER连起来呢?
02:28:109 (1) - 噗 故意红线放个WHISTLE吗?如果是我故意放也许会放长白线上.. 再做个音量渐变什么的。。

基片鸭和波奇:
00:51:909 (2,3,4) - 这几个SPACING很别扭啊
01:43:509 (1,2,3) - 打到这我才发现 原来KIAI加SPACING的?那这里又错了
02:00:709 (6) - 加个NOTE在屏幕中间被 对我个人来说打着更舒服一点

饿坏了所以MOD不是很认真 我的错 :| 吃饭去也
LKs
我周围环境比较吵可能音效听不准

Easy

没什么说的 简单明确直白合理
但复制和对称的弊端在于无法最好地贴合歌曲节奏 以及单调

Shinki's Normal

[00:14:709] 2 grids left
[00:29:909] no clap
[00:39:109] clap here, remove clap at [00:39:309]
[00:39:709] clap at start point&end
[00:40:309] no clap
[00:41:909] 这长slider明显在kiai里有点hold不住 换换节奏
[01:29:909]~[01:31:509] 这里和上面那个kiai一样
[02:29:109]~[__:__:___] ~
[02:37:709] 形状不太给力

虽然是normal但跟歌有点多还是..

JauiPokie


[00:52:109] 间距看着就不太舒服..
[02:40:709] 这nc有用? 我觉得ncslider就行吧

其他的我不太说 map style之类的每个人不一样

not bad
Aleks719
General
Since hardest diff is a collab... I want to see parts. Where yours and Pokie's parts. You can make it by SB or at least write about it in Creator's words

JauiPokie
HP+1 maybe?
00:36:709 (7) - add finish to the end?
00:40:309 (1) - add finish to the start
01:25:909 - add note?
01:29:909 (1) - add finish to the start
01:35:509 (3) - there is jump and antijump here. try this?
code for (3,4,5) because (5) needs in replacing too
332,48,95509,2,0,B|349:112|300:166,1,120,0|8
197,165,95909,1,0
332,48,96109,1,8
02:22:509 (1) - this slidertick >< maybe make slider 1/4 shorter?

Shinki's Normal
00:52:909 - add note imo
01:29:909 (1) - add finish to the start
01:43:509 (1) - remove this note?
02:28:109 (1) - well, normal whistle. If you made it specially, then add whistles please to the start and last reverse(02:28:609), imo will be fits the voice better
02:49:509 (2) - imo, slider must be 1/2 longer, end of slider on to 02:49:909

Easy
This diff doesn't have constant spacing, but all is readable
01:42:709 (1,2) - not stacked perfect. also hidden notes is not a good idea for Easy, really.As mapper, I always try to avoid it :)
01:44:309 (1,2) - ^


Oh, that's all. Star'd. I could make guest Hard for you :D
PM me, if you need in Hard diff for mapset~
Shadow
Second attempt at modding! This mapset is very well done! Good job :) All of the following are just suggestions you can feel free to ignore.

[Easy]
Nice diff, it has some notes that are under sliders, which I knew confused me when I was a beginner, maybe consider fixing those parts?

[Shinki's Normal]

Another good diff :)

AR +1 maybe?

01:54:509 (2,3) - Move one grid to the left maybe?

02:01:509 (3) - fine as it is, just plays nicer if you move it like this? maybe


02:33:709 (3) - move 1 grid up or 2-3 down ( if latter, fix rest ) to make it look a bit nicer

[JauiPokie]

01:25:109 (5,6,7,8) - See screenshot, In my opinion, a little nicer to play and it looks better.



01:26:709 (1,2,3,4) - See screenshot, In my opinion, a little nicer to play and it looks better.



02:25:909 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I like this idea, but it plays nicer if you keep all 3 in stacks, maybe try something like this?

Neptunus
;)
[EZ]
00:52:309 (2) - & 00:53:909 (2) - 既然是EZ,不确定新手是否能读懂,因为前面(1) SLIDER 很短,也许反应不过来?
01:43:509 (2,2) - 同上哟
01:58:709 (1,2,3) - 这里节奏有点太难?
02:01:909 (1) - 移动到 02:01:509 (1) - 同时 02:02:009 (1) - 移动到 02:01:909 (1) - ,我知道你肯定也在这里想了很多,但是我仍不建议在这里太较劲儿这一个 CLAP+FINISH

[326]
00:35:309 (1) -建议从00:35:509 (1) -这里开始就行 , 别太强调VOCAL, 毕竟前面几个NOTE都是跟着RHYTHME
00:39:709 (1) - 建议去掉NC,反正是一段歌词中的部分
00:56:109 (4,1) - 拉开距离吧,由于本难度设置的AR低,NORMAL玩家存在容易点快的风险。。
01:12:309 (1) - 建议去掉NC
01:25:109 (2) - 建议换成这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/145235 SPINNER结束位置不变
01:30:909 (1) - 去NC
01:53:909 (1,2,3) - 尤其是(3),开慢点可以听到这里卡不上VOCAL,建议换排列
02:28:109 (1) - 做成渐强音效?
02:34:109 (1) - NO, remove this!
02:34:509 (4) - 同时这个NC,02:35:509 (1) - 去掉NC
03:00:309 (3) - 建议缩短,使spinner在03:01:109 (1) - 开始


[JPK]
STR改成2
01:17:109 (1) - 这个地方由于背景和NOTE APPROACH CIRCLE很近,会不会看不清楚,而且考虑到1/4
没了,这难度做的真好,这难度节奏敲的真好!
kanpakyin
表示hitcircleoverlay和hitcircle都很有熟悉感....

是從star story拿過來的嗎? o.o 是的話麻煩注明一下..
Megurine Luka
\Boys like girls 塞高/

星星一枚☆

字数补丁

[General]
BG的话没想过用专辑封面么._. Boys like girls的专辑封面都很帅ovo
Skin方面不是很懂,但是好像这个approach circle有点太粗了OAO?转圈的时候那个粗条子吓了我一跳


[Easy]
00:17:909 到spinner开始都有点不合音乐的感觉._.
01:16:709 (2) - 感觉改成一个单circle会好一点
01:26:709 (1) - nazi一下,这个略远了,虽然我可以理解你想要和2对称的心情._.
建议整体下移成这样 http://puu.sh/5rvB
01:43:509 (2) - Easy 不建议stack ._.(这里是被挑过刺的QAQ
01:45:109 (2) - ^
01:59:109 (2) - ^
02:01:909 (1) - 移到02:01:509,把spinner移到这里
02:27:109 (3) - 不下个轻点的fin什么的?


[326大baka\(≧▽≦)/]
AR-1~2
00:19:509 (2) - 移到00:19:309?
01:54:509 (2,3) - 放好一点吧ovo,和slider呈一条直线


[Collab]
00:49:109 (3) - 为了和前一个搭调这个也延长到蓝线?
质疑一下offset,02:15:709 (3) 有off的感觉。不过我不确定是因为vocal给我的误导还是怎么的,毕竟其他听上去都没问题._.Timing方面没仔细听不过最好还是找比较强的人来听一下?


其他没啥问题._.
Shinki

Pokie wrote:

大萌神's Normal
  • - 個人認為有部份跟vocal的地方不太恰當
00:46:509 (3) - 後移1/2拍, 調整spacing如何..? 原因是這邊似乎沒需要貼在紅線跟vocal, 沿上一小節那樣打節奏就行 fix
01:54:509 (2,3) - 同後移1/2拍, 調整spacing 没改 不过叠在一起了(这里跟vocal我觉得好些..

01:58:709 (1) - 拉長成1/1拍slider, 調整spacing fix
02:34:309 (1) - 後移1/2拍, 調整spacing.. 這段你依跟vocal為主, 那麼這邊也該照著放才對 还是改回三连了


00:14:709 (2,1) - 這種節奏出現在Normal還是有點不合適, 相當於3/4拍子, 低AR情況下後面的circle會容易按快... 嘛雖說這是玩家的事了 就当锻炼男/女子气魄好了,向更加坑爹的节奏迈进=A=
00:37:109 (1) - 個人認為這個spinner最後出現的finish音量可下降...約45左右 →30%

00:40:909 (2) - 折角可以拉的再明顯些? 看起來和bezier slider差不多 红色的锚点向右拉了点
00:48:309 (2) - nazi, 左移2格, 下移1格 (grid 4) 因为之前的 3 调整过位置了所以后面这个稍微移动了下
00:57:109 (T) - 音量往上調至30左右 fix
01:06:309 (1,2,1) - nazi, (2)可移至 x:144 y:200 没改
01:23:509 (1,2) - 還是比較喜歡你第一次弄的造型, 不過這個也不錯 拉滑条很好玩XD
01:28:309 (T) - 同00:57:109 (T)
02:13:709 (T) - 在Collab中, 這部份我是使用soft音效.. 因為個人認為使用Normal其實挺不搭的, 看你要不要也改成soft, clap用whistle替代 那就跟最高难度统一吧.....NM感觉上确实有点强烈了 谢谢^^
02:19:909 (T), 02:23:109 (T), 02:24:109 (T) - ^
03:00:309 (T) - 同00:57:109 (T)
感谢pokie的mod<(_ _)>
Shinki

Nymph_ wrote:

326大萌神's normal:
00:16:309 (2) - 推荐这里用前面的白线SLIDER+circle 没改 没听懂 OTZ 不过感觉原来这个也说得过去..
00:19:509 (2) - 头FINISH? 没改 跟背景音效重叠了
00:38:709 (1) - ^ 再不提这类东西了 同上 辛苦你了(摸头)..
00:50:909 (1) - 很别扭 延长到红线跟下一个SLIDER连起来呢? 这里要跟vocal的 所以应该会有点别扭.. 后面的mod再提到的话我在考虑看看.. 意见保留
02:28:109 (1) - 噗 故意红线放个WHISTLE吗?如果是我故意放也许会放长白线上.. 再做个音量渐变什么的。。渐变 fix
感谢尼姆♂fu的mod<(_ _)>
Shinki

LKs wrote:

Shinki's Normal

[00:14:709] 2 grids left x:256 y:272 应该没错吧OTZ?
[00:29:909] no clap fix
[00:39:109] clap here, remove clap at [00:39:309] fix 后面两个 kiai开头那个也改了
[00:39:709] clap at start point&end 没改 OTZ 等jpy回来再听下意见吧..
[00:40:309] no clap 同上
[00:41:909] 这长slider明显在kiai里有点hold不住 换换节奏 重做了下 偷懒了...
[01:29:909]~[01:31:509] 这里和上面那个kiai一样
[02:29:109]~[__:__:___] ~
[02:37:709] 形状不太给力 又偷懒换了个..

虽然是normal但跟歌有点多还是..因为rating容易降下来 OTZ

感谢拉克丝老湿的mod XD
Shinki

Aleks719 wrote:

[Shinki's Normal
00:52:909 - add note imo didnt fix
01:29:909 (1) - add finish to the start no need,so sorry...
01:43:509 (1) - remove this note? keep the idea
02:28:109 (1) - well, normal whistle. If you made it specially, then add whistles please to the start and last reverse(02:28:609), imo will be fits the voice better nice idea XD
02:49:509 (2) - imo, slider must be 1/2 longer, end of slider on to 02:49:909 fix
thanks for your mod^^
Shinki

ShadowLord wrote:

[Shinki's Normal]

Another good diff :)
AR +1 maybe?fix

01:54:509 (2,3) - Move one grid to the left maybe? Ive overlap it

02:01:509 (3) - fine as it is, just plays nicer if you move it like this? maybe fix


02:33:709 (3) - move 1 grid up or 2-3 down ( if latter, fix rest ) to make it look a bit nicerfix

thanks for your mod^^
Shinki

Neptunus wrote:

[326]
00:35:309 (1) -建议从00:35:509 (1) -这里开始就行 , 别太强调VOCAL, 毕竟前面几个NOTE都是跟着RHYTHMEfix
00:39:709 (1) - 建议去掉NC,反正是一段歌词中的部分 个人习惯
00:56:109 (4,1) - 拉开距离吧,由于本难度设置的AR低,NORMAL玩家存在容易点快的风险。。 AR+1了
01:12:309 (1) - 建议去掉NC 同上上
01:25:109 (2) - 建议换成这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/145235 SPINNER结束位置不变 这两个slider 费了我半个点啊QAQ
01:30:909 (1) - 去NC 同上上
01:53:909 (1,2,3) - 尤其是(3),开慢点可以听到这里卡不上VOCAL,建议换排列 我觉得没问题
02:28:109 (1) - 做成渐强音效? 改过了~
02:34:109 (1) - NO, remove this! 好几个人都说了...OTZ 还是改掉吧..
02:34:509 (4) - 同时这个NC,02:35:509 (1) - 去掉NC 同上上上上
03:00:309 (3) - 建议缩短,使spinner在03:01:109 (1) - 开始 这里应该是刚刚好他来时把音拉开的部分...所以不改了
谢谢萝卜的mod=A=

到目前为止的mod 都改完了 有些保留的私聊里说吧

Download: Boys Like Girls - The Great Escape (JauiPlaY) [Shinki's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY

kanpakyin wrote:

表示hitcircleoverlay和hitcircle都很有熟悉感....

是從star story拿過來的嗎? o.o 是的話麻煩注明一下..
lol
我也剛想起來這事,之前忘了不好意思

Megurine Luka wrote:

\Boys like girls 塞高/

星星一枚☆

字数补丁
非常感謝!!
其實這樂隊還有很多別的好歌來著...可惜不是很出名lol

and kudosu for Shinki's guest diff.

edit: fixed some, thank you for your modding! :)
Raging Bull
Oh wow Chinese mapper mapping english song. :o Anyways I love this song. Maybe I'll mod it if I have time I guess.
spboxer3
真的是沒什麼好mod的
star~
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Megurine Luka
好的Baka JauiPlaY._.

KD补丁完成._.记得check前面帖子的edit
Tanmak
So Great!!


[JauiPokie]

01:29:509 (6) - New combo?


:)
The 08 team_Bourdon
ellow~~ :3
maybe i just can give a bit suggestion only~

Easy
00:29:909 (1) - delete this circle? and use the previous slider to make a repeating?

Shinki's Normal
  1. Circle Size change to the large?
  2. AR change to 5?
01:18:709 (4) - left 6 grid? x:108 y:44
02:28:109 (1) - change to 1/2 repeating slider?

JauiPokie
look fine!

----
Nice Mapset!
hope can fast to rank it ^^
shoot a little star for you~ 8-)
pieguyn
Easy:

01:04:309 ~ 01:47:509 - I think you could do something more interesting here instead of copy/pasting :cry:
01:53:909 (1) - remove NC?
02:01:909 (1) - too far from (2)
02:02:009 (1) - end it 1/2 later? IMO it fits the vocals better

Shinki's Normal:

00:50:709 - add a note?
02:43:909 (1) - too far from (3)

JauiPokie:

00:30:709 (1) - for some reason, I always want to hit the other end of this slider :o If you think it's fine, just keep it~
01:39:109 - add a note?
01:39:309 (1) - too close to (3)
02:02:009 (1) - end it 1/2 later?
02:15:709 (3) - too close to (2)

nice map~ :)
Pokie

pieguy1372 wrote:

JauiPokie:

02:15:709 (3) - too close to (2) umm, imo it's not a need to follow spacing on this part.
Actually I mapped it with no DS, so you would see my spacing is strange XD
ah I lost my last update file
wcx19911123
from my que
sry for the delay

[General]
MP3带了标签,不知道会不会被吐槽

[Skin]
slider ball组件只有一个follow circle这是什么意思?

[SB]
没有惯例的collab sb?

[神mapper基片鸭]
我不知道会不会有人吐槽这个:
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
个人不喜欢spinner静音
00:47:509 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/5JAk
01:38:709 (2,3) - 敢不敢不复制
01:52:309 (1,2,1) - 碰到一起真心不好看(nazi
02:02:009 (1) - end at 02:05:109

[326神挂B]
00:34:709 (3) - 可以折返一次,spinner 00:35:709 - 开始
00:56:109 (4,1) - 真心confusing,别叠好么
01:23:509 (1) -
224,100,83509,6,0,B|252:140|252:140|308:140|332:188|328:192|328:248,1,200,0|0
02:13:709 - 这里开始太小声了
02:28:609 - whistle移到02:28:709,记得音量调小点
02:38:709 (3) - vocal off
02:43:309 (3,1) - 这泥马的跳是怎么回事,你是加了个circle在02:43:909然后忘记spacing了么
02:46:509 (3) - end at 02:47:109

[基片鸭和他的好基友]
01:10:709 - 无用绿线?
02:41:909 - ^
00:19:109 (5) - slider到00:19:309,spinner start at 00:19:509?
00:32:309 - 强烈建议这里开始用0.75速,到这里结束00:38:709
01:04:309 - ^ 结束在01:10:709
02:00:309 (5,6,1) - 略无节操
02:02:009 (1) - spinner end我强烈建议跟节奏不要跟vocal,02:05:109这里结束

膜拜神mapper们
tutuhaha
TAT基片鸭同学,因为我不是神mapper,所以我完全找不了茬OTL.............
TAT唯一值得吐槽的就是326同学的slider拉的有点扭曲,然后就没了啦呜呜呜呜(PД`q。)·。'゜.............
跪了OTL别逼我贴一堆NC上去......
神mapper各种膜拜 <(_ _)>
.....其实要真找茬还是找的出来的
shinki
00:24:309 (1) - spinner从这里开始
00:54:909 (2) - 总觉得这个不要重叠比较好
01:16:309 (X) - +clap
01:17:109 (X) - +finish
01:26:309 (1) - spinner从这里开始·
02:13:709 (1) - 控好点
02:46:509 (3) - 这个到02:47:109结束会比较好
02:48:709 (X) - 别在这里空拍加回去

....EASY真心懒得找OTL....费脑
最难的已经IRC↓
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/149327
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/149329

哦也我居然找了神mapper的茬哦也啊哈哈哈哈............【疯子】
....吃晚饭去
Anshi_old
easy

01:52:309 note1 和01:53:109的note2没有对齐呢?是打算对齐的吧?


normal
01:09:109 觉得可以不用回转。试着延长一下slider到01:09:709?
01:10:109 然后在这里添加一个note?

01:18:709 这里的slider 一直后面(01:20:509) 节奏也许可以换一下??不换也没什么。。


02:49:509 slider缩短一些..?我这里调到02:49:709 效果不错。。?

JauiPokie
02:36:309 ~ 02:36:909 做一些改动会更好吗?这里调的是?

02:36:309 add一个slider到02:36:409 止实际上就是一格的slider(下同)
02:36:509 add一个slider02:36:609 止
02:36:709 add一根绿线 改了slider的speed 改为0.5 add一个slider(2格)02:36:909 止 也加了跟速度还原的绿线




看BG的时候完全没想到是这种类型的歌.. XDDD
Pokie
@wcx: 綠線修復, 至於75%我覺得不必要...01:04:309 - 這部份map的空拍較多, 沒必要再刻意減速吧.. 好吧我是懶的改

@tutuhaha: 不太習慣finish再加clap..有破音的感覺

@Anshi: 謝謝

Download: Boys Like Girls - The Great Escape (JauiPlaY) [JauiPokie].osu
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
updated.
thank you for your modding guys! :)

Yes, my message is too short. But seriously I do not care about it at all.
Shinki
[326大baka\(≧▽≦)/] 我更喜欢 hentai D:
AR-1~2 AR5
00:19:509 (2) - 移到00:19:309?
01:54:509 (2,3) - 放好一点吧ovo,和slider呈一条直线 不想改 OTZ

Shinki's Normal

Circle Size change to the large? I think use this side may better but not normal
AR change to 5? ok
01:18:709 (4) - left 6 grid? x:108 y:44 It's find, but I prefer this type
02:28:109 (1) - change to 1/2 repeating slider? I think that one has more feeling >口<(I will fix it if other mod refer this

Shinki's Normal:

00:50:709 - add a note?
02:43:909 (1) - too far from (3) fix

[326神挂B] 神挂科 成绩B
00:34:709 (3) - 可以折返一次,spinner 00:35:709 - 开始 想给一个地方休息下的 感觉这里再拉个slider玩起来有点累了
00:56:109 (4,1) - 真心confusing,别叠好么ok
01:23:509 (1) -
Code:
224,100,83509,6,0,B|252:140|252:140|308:140|332:188|328:192|328:248,1,200,0|0

02:13:709 - 这里开始太小声了感觉应该能接受的=A=
02:28:609 - whistle移到02:28:709,记得音量调小点恩 笔记
02:38:709 (3) - vocal off 就一下 OTZ 就让我不跟吧
02:43:309 (3,1) - 这泥马的跳是怎么回事,你是加了个circle在02:43:909然后忘记spacing了么估计是 OTZ 已经改了
02:46:509 (3) - end at 02:47:109重做了下

我就是扭曲了=口=(黑化)
shinki
00:24:309 (1) - spinner从这里开始 打起来感觉原来的位置好点..
00:54:909 (2) - 总觉得这个不要重叠比较好 改了
01:16:309 (X) - +clap 否决=A=
01:17:109 (X) - +finish 貌似原来就有=A=
01:26:309 (1) - spinner从这里开始·同上
02:13:709 (1) - 控好点 我故意的=A=
02:46:509 (3) - 这个到02:47:109结束会比较好这里重做了下
02:48:709 (X) - 别在这里空拍加回去yada =A=

normal
01:09:109 觉得可以不用回转。试着延长一下slider到01:09:709?我也这样想过 不过转完再打吗蛮累的
01:10:109 然后在这里添加一个note?感觉没必要

01:18:709 这里的slider 一直后面(01:20:509) 节奏也许可以换一下??不换也没什么。。改了~


02:49:509 slider缩短一些..?我这里调到02:49:709 效果不错。。?都说这个OTZ 改短了~
Rukario
Easy:
00:51:509 (1,2) - Imo this would be better if you removed the second note and made it a repeat slider, the next one too and the copy paste places of this. Your decision.
01:53:909 (1,2,1) - This flows better if the second (1) is flipped horizontally. To not screw up the patterns, flip everything until the slider (not so much to flip actually)

Shinki's Normal:
00:51:509 (2) - I think this would sound better one 1/2 tick earlier. Same for the next one.
01:42:709 (2) - ^
01:43:509 (1,2) - Maybe have them one 1/2 tick later

JauiPokie:
- I'd really like Tick Rate 2 on this.
01:26:309 (2,1) - This jump felt rather sudden. Didn't really see that one coming.

Pretty nice.
Shinki
Shinki's Normal:
00:51:509 (2) - I think this would sound better one 1/2 tick earlier. Same for the next one.
01:42:709 (2) - ^
01:43:509 (1,2) - Maybe have them one 1/2 tick later
all fix



Sorry for this three part was remind from other mods,but I didnt care it before.;_;
真的很抱歉,之前不少mod都有提到这几点而我没去重视去改...
Rukario
Looking all good now. Bubbled. Pretty nice set btw. Enjoyed the collabed diff a lot.
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
Thanks a lot Ruka! :)
Yes, my message is too short. But seriously I do not care about it at all.
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