00:23:165 (6) - Change to a k, the guitar tremolos here move higher up the fretboard and then back down so changing it to d k d will follow this
00:25:908 (12) - Same as above, change to k
00:26:251 (13) -
Could also change this to a k since there's a pretty harsh snare hit here, but I understand not wanting to have d k k since it is a bit of an awkward pattern00:31:565 (23) - Move this to 00:31:736 - , it makes it consistent with 00:32:593 (25,26) - and 00:31:736 - is the start of a pretty sweet sweep on the guitar so mapping the first note of it feels good to play!
00:35:165 (1) - Change to d, the guitar here starts off low and the where the next couple of notes are, plays some pretty high notes
00:37:222 (5) - Change this one to d also since the guitar here slides back down to the low tones
00:39:965 (9) - Same here change to d. It would also help vary this section a little bit since it is all k's currently
00:42:708 (14) - Saaaame here, change to d!
00:51:622 (5) -
Change this to a d? Guitar here is lower than notes before it. I understand you might not want to for variation sake so it's just a suggestion01:02:422 (8) - Move this to 01:02:593 - Feels like a weirdly syncopated note where it is atm since all the major sounds in the music are on 1/1 + 1/2 beats. (Could also move it to 01:02:251 - if you wanted a 4 note pattern!)
01:09:965 (23) - Move this note forward to 01:10:136 - for the same reason as last suggestion, it also makes the pattern consistent with 01:10:993 (25,26) -
01:21:108 (14) - Change this note to a d, it's the start of the guitar climbing the fretboard (arpeggio? my music lingo is lacking
) so it's the lowest sound and makes sense for it to be a lower sounding note
01:40:822 (5) - Move this to 01:40:993 - , it's where the next snare hit lands which is the most prominent part of this section (apart from that aaaa-a-a-a-aaa noise but mapping that in a kantan would blow the SR out the water :v)
01:45:794 (14) - Add a finish to this note, it's the first note after the pause at 01:45:451 (13) - so it would have some nice emphasis
01:47:678 (17) - Remove the finish on this note or move it to 01:47:336 - , where it is the emphasis of a finisher doesn't make much sense since the rest of the band is also going hard so there's nothing that stands out enough for the finish to cover
01:52:651 (26) -
You seem to be using a few syncopated notes in this map so maybe you could move this to 01:52:822 - since the drums here stop/start again01:58:137 (37) -
Same as last note, could move this to 01:58:308 - ?02:03:622 (6,7) - Add finishes to these notes! The cymbal crashes mixed with the guitar sweeps resetting on these notes makes for good emphasis
02:55:051 (10) - Change to a D? It's a pretty deep sounding stop here and I think it would contrast well with 02:55:736 (11) -
03:06:536 (26) - I'd suggest deleting this note and moving 03:06:879 (27) - to 03:06:708 - to better follow the drum roll/guitar peak. Where the notes are they are pretty syncopated to the emphasis in the music but moving them around a bit snaps the flow back into place. (Could also make it a finish if you wanted)
03:12:022 (37) - Same as above, delete this note and move 03:12:365 (38) - to 03:12:193 -
03:17:508 (48) - For variation you could move this note back to 03:17:336 - so it lands on where the cymbal bells start being hit and still keeps the k k flow you have going on
03:23:851 (5) - Change to a d for the same reason as the other suggestions of these notes
03:29:337 (15) - Same as above, change to a d