Hi, from my modding queue.
[General]
> Metadata check:
http://tsuredure-project.jp/music! Imo offset should be
582 (+7), the current sounds off, esp.ly at 00:40:950 - (I use old timing for modding now, you can change the offset in the final step.)
! There's audio in your video clip! Remove the audio part please....
! 00:33:056 - / 00:36:665 - / 00:37:567 - / 00:49:296 - / 00:52:905 - common Finishers should be displayed
> 00:56:514 - 50% for a quieter spinner?
[Kantan]
! The drum kick matching kat patterns at 00:04:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - / 00:42:078 (2,3,4,5,6) - are too monotonous. Kantan is about the essence of the music, it does not require an exact accurate matching of notes and musical elements. The mapping choice of the former is not that wise as well since the melody comes out with vocal accompanishment which should be highlighted instead of off-beat drum kicks.
For example 00:04:184 (1) - you may try:
It keeps a simple pattern and express the music briefly. I will leave 00:42:078 - for you to fix. You need to not to change much since some kats fall on the melody, I want something similar with very small variations.
> 00:14:108 - / 00:17:717 - They could be shifted 1/2 backward to match the vocal accurately, being consistent with 00:22:905 - / 00:24:710 -
! From 00:42:078 - to 00:49:296 - , please consider re-mapping this section as stated at the first '!'.
[Futsuu]
! 00:04:184 - if you change the introduction part in Kantan, you have to fix Futsuu's as well for a better spread.
> 00:06:665 - / 00:06:890 - there should be some notes put here to show the melody and vocal (for 00:06:890 - )
> 00:18:168 - consistent k here for drum kicks
> 00:20:424 - change to k for a better flow and pitch following
> 00:34:860 - if 00:33:056 - is changed to D, it could be K to show nN pattern consistently.
> 00:44:559 - / 00:46:364 - ctrl+G them to show a better pitch flow according to tension of music.
> 00:49:296 - the 1/2 triplet here is unfitting, as of stated Finishers usage suggestion in General part. A simpler pattern is prefered to balance with Kantan's part. Let's try: 00:49:296 (1) -
00:50:650 - is added to favour the background piano.
[Muzukashii]
> 00:08:695 - consistent k
> 00:19:747 - k sounds fitter with 00:18:845 -
> 00:24:033 - / 00:24:710 - imo they could be Finishers, Muzukashii can tolerate this kind of usage, not only can Oni do.
> 00:33:732 - change it to k for a smoother flow
> 00:42:529 - no need Finisher, 00:42:078 - is the strongest, albeit the starting of vocal cry at 00:42:529 -
> 00:43:206 (125) - How about:
The first thing is matching the drum kicks with kat as usual practises; the second thing is 00:44:559 - / 00:46:364 - (the mod in Muzukashii), the third thing is improving flow again
> 00:48:620 - shifting it to 00:49:071 - is more natural as you follow vocal. After 00:48:168 - there's should be a break hence.
> 00:48:845 - / 00:49:296 - same as 00:24:033 - / 00:24:710 - , Finishers are quite necessary for harder difficulties.
> 00:52:680 - shift to 00:52:229 - to form a nnn nnn pattern from 00:51:101 - , and isolate the common Finisher at 00:52:905 - listed in the General mod.
[Oni]
! 00:08:244 (22,2,4) - Wrong usage of Finishers due to lack of supportive musical elements and comparative concerns on 00:09:597 - .
> 00:10:048 - this don is clumsy to show the melody clearly, remove it.
> 00:17:717 (40,41,42) - remove the triplet to provide a common gap across the difficulties. 00:17:943 - can be kept though
> 00:18:620 - Finisher available, optional add-or-drop.
> 00:20:650 - kdk fits everything instead of dkd
> 00:25:387 - same as 00:10:950 -
> 00:27:417 - add a kat to link the vocals up, and change 00:27:642 - to d
> 00:31:026 - same as above
> 00:32:379 - the 5-plets sounds weird and rough due to ddkdd, the best way to deal with it is removing 00:32:717 -
> 00:42:529 - / 00:43:206 - same as Muzukashii's mod
> 00:48:168 - kkd or kdd is better than repetitive uses of don for a few beats
> 00:53:695 - you can put a d to make the pattern more interesting
> 00:55:387 - / 00:56:289 - extra Finisher, remove it
00:54:710 - / 00:55:612 - should be the only two Finishers in the outro part.
> 00:55:161 - / 00:56:063 - k is prefered here since it is Oni.
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The mapset needs more opinion after the huge fix above. Gather 3 more mods then get to me again. It is not ready now....