1. Hard (4.34 stars, 178 notes)
2. Normal (2.98 stars, 127 notes)
3. Zero~ (4.79 stars, 275 notes)

hoLysoup wrote:

hi Nymph!
omg Kugimiya Rie version? haha
all suggestions~ lol hi~

[General]
add 'zero no tsukaima' to tags? yeah maybe
and maybe ED/ending but I'm not sure about this
Perhaps make an Easy diff? lol lazy and maybe normal is easy enough

[Hard]
mm.. maybe turn up hitsound volume? it's a bit low right now really? all right~
00:48:595 (7) - New combo because it's jump? K
00:56:595 (7) - ^ K
00:57:595 (1,2,3,4) - can probably make these bigger jumps I think it's more fun because this song's cute and jumpy yeah you are right. changed to jumps.
01:11:595 (6) - New combo? yeah ok.
01:11:845 (7) - I missed this because it's snapped on weird timing. I think move this to 01:11:720 and then extend it to 01:11:970. Think that plays better Nah, I am pretty sure this is on purpose, and it fit the music well, so keep it.
01:27:595 (1) - end this slider at 01:27:970 sounds better I think follows the voice yeah ok~

[Normal] is fine~
^^!

3kinnagi wrote:

arere

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臭nymph还我公主臭nymph还我公主臭nymph还我公主臭nymph还我公主(巨雾

pieguy1372 wrote:

Normal:

00:53:595 (3) - new combo (given what you did last section) I think this is ok~

Hard:

Fine

nice map~ ...[Hard] reminds me of DJPop O.O

_Kiva wrote:

瞎了原来洗衣板也唱过这首歌Your message is too short.

• ●Red-You must fix it.
  ●Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  ●Black-Suggestion only.

• ●Try Offset -391
  ●Break前相当缺音效，建议在一下时间点+whistle
  
  SPOILER

  [list:13168]●00:01:595
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  [Hard]
  
  • ●00:00:595 (1) - 结尾点向右向下各一格使2个圈在一直线上，看上去好看些。。
    ●00:02:595 (5,6) - 类似这样的1/4的spacing建议和之前1,2,3的DS统一为固定格。。这个要改的地方很多而且又不是很有必要所以肯定要被你ignored不过还是当凑字数写在这里了。。（被拍砖）
    ●00:17:595 (1) - Hard的话我觉得从这里就可以开始map，感觉Break好长。
    ●01:04:845 (10,11) - 可以考虑+new combo。
    ●01:22:345 (4) - 1 grid up ?
    ●01:27:595 (1) - 开头+clap ?
    ●01:28:595 (4) - +whistle ?
  [Normal]
  
  • ●00:55:595 (1) - 强烈建议拆成2个slider。突然一个这么多来回的slider会让人很困扰的= =。
    
    ●01:27:095 (2) - 折返点+clap ?
    ●01:28:595 (4) - +whistle ?
  完毕~ 其实都是些nazi的东西= = 直接找BATrank吧
  闪走前再膜拜下（趴）
  咩。
  

JoJo wrote:

直接找BATrank吧

JoJo wrote:

按照惯例MOD前先拜一下神mapper（趴）

• ●Red-You must fix it.
  ●Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  ●Black-Suggestion only.

[General]

• ●Try Offset -391 我不确定= = 再等等别人意见
  ●Break前相当缺音效，建议在一下时间点+whistle =A= 如果说我是故意的 你会想踹我吗..不过我真是故意不加的..
  
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  [list:25895]●00:01:595
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  [Hard]
  
  • ●00:00:595 (1) - 结尾点向右向下各一格使2个圈在一直线上，看上去好看些。。嗯改了
    ●00:02:595 (5,6) - 类似这样的1/4的spacing建议和之前1,2,3的DS统一为固定格。。这个要改的地方很多而且又不是很有必要所以肯定要被你ignored不过还是当凑字数写在这里了。。（被拍砖）我不觉得啊 我觉得现在挺好
    ●00:17:595 (1) - Hard的话我觉得从这里就可以开始map，感觉Break好长。亚达=A=
    ●01:04:845 (10,11) - 可以考虑+new combo。加了一个
    ●01:22:345 (4) - 1 grid up ?神眼力=A=
    ●01:27:595 (1) - 开头+clap ?不要了 背景音CLAP很重了已经=A=
    ●01:28:595 (4) - +whistle ?
  嗯 好吧 加了一个顺便降了15VOLUMN
  
  [Normal]
  
  • ●00:55:595 (1) - 强烈建议拆成2个slider。突然一个这么多来回的slider会让人很困扰的= =。好吧 改了= =
    [attachment=0:25895]123.jpg[/attachment:25895]
    ●01:27:095 (2) - 折返点+clap ?亚达 理由同上
    ●01:28:595 (4) - +whistle ?
  加了 也同上
  
  完毕~ 其实都是些nazi的东西= = 直接找BATrank吧
  闪走前再膜拜下（趴）
  咩。

HellDawn wrote:

Normal
00:10:852- Very long break time so unrankable* =A= no more than 20 sec, I think it is ok
00:49:595- like this I don't see big difference..

01:19:095- 5 grid right nope, it makes the spacing wrong
01:28:595- finish <3 Finish is too loud imo =A=

Hard
01:14:595- finish
01:18:595- finish ?
01:28:595- finish :3 =A= too loud imo

Looks good but very long break time please fix it If i have a kudosu I will give star
Good luck <3

Didn't fix anything but still thanks for modding~

p3n wrote:

[General]
- why do you have "zero no tsukaima" in the tags? (just curious >w<) Because the video is about it:P
- long breaks are long...maybe map the break for the "hard" version? nah don't want to.
- ranking criteria says "at least one map below 3 stars" your normal is at 3,03 so maybe you'll get into trouble here?I am pretty sure it is ok, I have already had a ranked map with it over 3 stars.


[Normal]
Good map but some hitsound suggestions:
01:14:595 (3) - add soft whistle?
01:16:595 (3) - ^
01:17:595 (1) - soft whistle on ending?
01:20:595 (5) - soft whistle?
01:22:595 (3) - ^
01:24:595 (3) - ^
01:25:595 (1) - soft whistle on ending?

You should use "something" to put emphasis on the middle upbeat in this part as it is VERY dominant in the song. If you dont like the soft whistle maybe you can find some nice custom hitsound for those notes? sorry, just don't want to. To make the hitsounds different from the kiai I just don't put hitsounds here on purose...


[Hard]
00:45:970 (3,4,5,6) - 4/4 makes no sense here imo. If you want to map the lyrics 100% use only 1/4 3/4 4/4 (delete (4) and play @25% and you'll hear what I mean); if you want to keep (4) on the downbeat (for the clap) maybe use 2 short sliders instead (will still play a bit weird though)
same applies to the other similar 4/4 streams in the map I don't think so.... they played well for me



Not much to complain...solid mapset. Maybe add an "Easy" version.lazy...yay +1

Nymph_ wrote:

- ranking criteria says "at least one map below 3 stars" your normal is at 3,03 so maybe you'll get into trouble here?I am pretty sure it is ok, I have already had a ranked map with it over 3 stars.

Raging Bull wrote:

Nymph_ wrote:

- ranking criteria says "at least one map below 3 stars" your normal is at 3,03 so maybe you'll get into trouble here?I am pretty sure it is ok, I have already had a ranked map with it over 3 stars.

Sorry, I understand that it is just over .03 , but don't say it was ranked before with over 3 star and you think it's okay. It's best to fix it to avoid these things in the future.

karenying wrote:

Genera
offset早了點,-390左右 =_=好吧 BAKAJO也说早= =
lead-in2500吧我建議 试了试血条还是瞬移。。算了先这样把
Normal
00:48:595 (3) - 為了對稱,copy 00:47:595 (1) - Ctrl+H, Ctrl+R 不好看=_=还得调距离..先这样把
00:56:345 (2) - 如果3.03星不行你就把這個刪掉,然後00:56:595 - 加circle叠着(3)的頭,變成2.99星 不管他啊 逼急了我就AR-1 我明明有RANK过3星多的 为什么不行= =
hitsound看hard的mod

Hard
看完忍不著吐槽了: 為什么全是直slider,哦草還是扭来扭去的低阶婆婆排版orz 妮姆芙妮姆芙你腫么了 哎 我只是觉得这样很适合啊。。没有故意模仿婆婆
排版不會mod,以下建議加whistle =_+其实我是故意一段加一段不加啊= =

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00:49:095 (3) -
00:52:595 (1,3) -
01:04:845 (6,7) -
01:11:845 (2) - 尾
01:12:345 (3) - 頭尾也加
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01:20:345 (3,4) -
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00:09:595 (7) - 可NC嗯NC好了

Nymph_ wrote:

00:56:345 (2) - 如果3.03星不行你就把這個刪掉,然後00:56:595 - 加circle叠着(3)的頭,變成2.99星 不管他啊 逼急了我就AR-1 我明明有RANK过3星多的 为什么不行= =

排版不會mod,以下建議加whistle =_+其实我是故意一段加一段不加啊= =