From my queue@りぷれいさん
after 11 months huh
[General]oh, i forgeot to resnap it when i changed all timing lines
- 00:05:963 (2) - What about placing this note the previous slider? like this or somewhere else. It seems like you used the current pattern to emphasize the piano sound at 00:06:047 - here but I think placing closely with the previous slider is way better to do so. It would be nice if you add NC on 00:06:047 (3) - this slider i know what you mean, but it really doesnt fit with my map since the placement is kinda gimmicky and not playable topically i guess
- 00:07:564 (1) - Try adding a clap on end. it feels great oops my bad
- 00:10:429 (2) - , 00:11:103 (2) - These notes need clap to fit with the song better same
- 00:21:721 (1) - remove NC and add it on 00:22:227 (4) - here. Do the same on 00:22:901 (1,4) - these note. Lastly, 00:23:744 (1) - remove NC on this note. To make the same with 00:32:508 (6) - this part and it actually fits better with the voice. nice idea
- 00:35:204 (1) - similar opinion with above. I think there is no reason to add NC suddenly. Tyr removing it and adding it on 00:35:541 (6) - this slider. ^
- 01:07:817 (7) - I don't think there's anything suitable sound for this note. It particularly stands out because of hitsounds that placed on 01:07:732 (6,8,9) - these notes. Try deleting this note and relocating the pattern i wanna keep it as possible cuz ofc i take drum hitsound on those objects mainly however i assume there is audible sound in background in my thought
- 01:12:789 (2) - What about adding NC to highlight the last part of the song? It works nicely sorry... it doesnt my preference for aesthetics
I'll finish the rest when I wake upsorry for late np, thanks a lot!
- 00:10:092 (3,4) - uh is there anything special reason that you didn't add clap on here? or it's just because you c&p hitsounds from Grin diff idk why i didnt place any hitsound...
- 00:10:429 -, 00:11:103 (5) - same opinion as Grin diff, these objects need clap ^
- 01:07:058 (5,6) - consider changing this rhythm to this one. most of the rhythms fit with the vocal quite nicely while this one doesn't i'd prefer to click cymbal
- 00:10:092 (1,2) - same as Grin diff omg
steady mapset, good luck! thanks!