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Eir_DELETED

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Eir_DELETED 2017-08-16T16:27:38+00:00

Big thanks Lasse! I will consider your meaning deeply again when I arrived my home.
I wanna reply the mod right now however I can't so that I'm back to my hometown for several days in order to have some works at here...

i apologize what im delay for replying your mod... as the conclusion that i considered some elements, i decided to remap some parts.(maybe i will remap on the whole lel)
the diff has not only lacks of inconsistent rhythm pattern for mainly issues, but also looks bad for aesthetics stuffs right now.

thanks for mod!

edit: okay done remap top diff ready for mod!

Last edited by Eir_DELETED 2017-08-26T11:26:08+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Lemaire

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Joined October 2012

Lemaire 2017-08-26T07:19:47+00:00

＠Lasse
all fixed. thx mod!

＠じょーかーさん
遅くなって申し訳ないです

code

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TitleUnicode:Million Smile
Artist:Machico
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Creator:joker-
Version:RepL4y's Insane
Source:この素晴らしい世界に祝福を！ -この欲深いゲームに審判を！-
Tags:opening RepL4y 園田智也 Tomoya Sonoda OP Kono Subarashii Sekai ni Syukufuku Yokubukai Game Shinpan wo PS4 PS Vita PlayStation NIPPON COLUMBIA KONOSUBA God's blessing on this wonderful world
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Ryuusei Aika

Elite Mapper

1,085 posts

Joined January 2016

Ryuusei Aika 2017-08-29T17:03:55+00:00

m4m
map here

Easy
00:27:620 (1,3) - why not making two symmetry shapes lol current one looks a little weird

Normal
00:45:991 - two green lines
00:46:075 - ^
00:53:912 (5) - buy considering your usage of rhythm at 00:56:609 (5,6) - , i think maybe you can use the same rhythm here to make the beat at 00:54:249 - be clickable too?
01:04:699 (5) - ^

Repl4y
01:31:581 (3,4) - stack?

Grin
00:10:092 (1,2) - rhythm here seems quite simple comparing with the other parts of this section. try to use something like four 3/4 sliders?

good luck :3

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Asuka_- 2017-08-30T14:56:15+00:00

ひ quick m4m
top diff

全て提案なので、めんどかったら無視してくださいｗｗ
count down と wide screeen　チェック入ってます（自分ここらへんよくわからないけど指摘してる人多いから一応ｗ）

00:31:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - このままでもokだと思うんですが、00:32:339 - がclickableでもいいかなーとか思ったり思わなかったりｗ
https://i.gyazo.com/f2fc231cefb2f9038d4 ... 945def.png

00:51:384 (2,3,4) - ここ確かにwhistleの音あるんですけど、直後のkiaiを強調するために少し音量を下げませんか？　ちょっと大きすぎる様な印象を受けました。

00:57:114 - 意図的だとは思うんですがやっぱりkiaiの中だし　一応音っぽいのあるので拾った方が良いかも。。。？
00:56:946 (8) - を1/2に変えて次の(1)に軽く重ねるといいかもです。　https://i.gyazo.com/4bf51bbc67060a0bc1a2fe9356f427ad.png

頑張ってください！！
あとdont say lazyの譜面　starありがとです～( *´艸｀)

Eir_DELETED

Topic Starter

Eir_DELETED 2017-08-31T10:55:38+00:00

Ryuusei Aika wrote:
m4m
map here

Easy
00:27:620 (1,3) - why not making two symmetry shapes lol current one looks a little weird oh really? they are a just my taste...

Normal
00:45:991 - two green lines my bad
00:46:075 - ^ ^
00:53:912 (5) - buy considering your usage of rhythm at 00:56:609 (5,6) - , i think maybe you can use the same rhythm here to make the beat at 00:54:249 - be clickable too? id like to mean they are consistency with 00:53:912 (5) - and 01:04:699 (5) - at my all diffs cuz of avoiding monotonousness. but i will reconsider them.
01:04:699 (5) - ^

Grin
00:10:092 (1,2) - rhythm here seems quite simple comparing with the other parts of this section. try to use something like four 3/4 sliders? this part is simplified intentionally since this part is not any 1/2 sounds and complicated rhythm doesnt suit for this part in my thoght

good luck :3
big thanks :3

Asuka_- wrote:
ひ quick m4m
top diff

全て提案なので、めんどかったら無視してくださいｗｗ
count down と wide screeen　チェック入ってます（自分ここらへんよくわからないけど指摘してる人多いから一応ｗ）両方消しときましたｗ

00:31:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - このままでもokだと思うんですが、00:32:339 - がclickableでもいいかなーとか思ったり思わなかったりｗ　うーん…自分の譜面だとサビ以外メロディーとボーカルをメインにフォローしてるんでここでそこのドラムclickableにしなくてもいいんじゃないかと思うんですが、どうでしょうか…
https://i.gyazo.com/f2fc231cefb2f9038d4 ... 945def.png

00:51:384 (2,3,4) - ここ確かにwhistleの音あるんですけど、直後のkiaiを強調するために少し音量を下げませんか？　ちょっと大きすぎる様な印象を受けました。　ですね、下げました

00:57:114 - 意図的だとは思うんですがやっぱりkiaiの中だし　一応音っぽいのあるので拾った方が良いかも。。。？　めっちゃ聞きなおしましたけどここに音あります…？ごめんなさいぼくにはわからなかったです。。。
00:56:946 (8) - を1/2に変えて次の(1)に軽く重ねるといいかもです。　https://i.gyazo.com/4bf51bbc67060a0bc1a2fe9356f427ad.png

頑張ってください！！
あとdont say lazyの譜面　starありがとです～( *´艸｀)
いえいえ～こちらこそこちらの譜面に星投げてくれてありがとうです～！がんばります！

＠りぷれいさん　カウントダウンとワイドスクリーンサポートだけチェック外させてもらいました～

rollpan

54 posts

Joined August 2013

rollpan 2017-09-04T05:54:06+00:00

owo/

[Grin]

00:10:092 (1,2) - ここ休憩入れるよりも1/2スライダー4つの方がいいと思う！
00:50:373 (8) - 個人的にはスライダーじゃなくてサークルで溜め作る方が好き
00:57:114 - ここ何かしらあってもいいと思います！前に1/2スライダー置いてもサークル置いてもも違和感なく出来ると思います
その前のパートでは直線スライダーほとんど使ってなかったのでサビでもっと増やしてもいいかな？って思いました
01:13:294 (6,7,1) - 今までのパターン的にスタックよりもちょっとずらしたほうが自然？

短くてごめんね～

DeletedUser_7370134

DeletedUser_7370134 2017-09-04T07:44:18+00:00

あはん
[Grin]

00:00:654 (1) - じゃなくて00:01:665 (3) - にNC?
変えるのめんどそうではあるが
00:01:665 (3) - を1/1にして00:02:002 - のスネアを拾ったり
00:02:508 - からのドラムの三連を拾ったりするのはどうだろうか
例→http://puu.sh/xr8Ob/fa29bef628.jpg（出だしからの画像だす）
00:05:036 - ここだけS:C2じゃね？いまだとスネアのとこにバスドラム鳴ってるっぽい
00:11:272 - か00:10:598 - かのどっちかはせめてとったほうが良さげ？サークル置くだけでも変わるかも
いまのだと急に密度薄くなってる感ある気がする
00:13:126 (2) - remove whistle
00:21:721 (5) - NCからの00:22:227 (1) - NC消してからの00:22:901 (2) - NCとかはどうだろうか　好みの問題かもしれないが読みやすいかも
00:29:643 (3) - 頭じゃなくてケツにwhistleかも？
00:35:204 (4) - NCして00:35:541 (1) - NCとる？次のオブジェクトもNCついてるし頻繁かも
01:18:856 (1) - CTRL＋Gはどうかしら、flowてきに
バリうめえ

umee

Meg

1,617 posts

Joined August 2012

Meg 2017-09-04T08:32:59+00:00

あ　く　ま　で　す　べ　て　Ｓ　Ｕ　Ｇ　Ｇ　Ｅ　Ｓ　Ｔ　Ｉ　Ｏ　Ｎ　で　す

Grin

00:00:654 (1) - ここにNCを入れる意味はないと思う。デザイン的にもない方が普通にスッキリしてる
00:06:047 (3,4,5) - 特に00:06:216 (4,5) - に目立った音もないしここは1/8reverseとかどう？
SPOILER
00:07:564 (2,3) - 00:08:238 (5,6) - 提案を2つほど。ご一考ください
【提案1】全部1/2sliderにする
【提案2】00:08:238 (5) - だけ音が高いのを利用して00:07:564 (2,3) - を1/2sliderにする
00:16:412 (5,6) - 00:16:665 (7,8) - 個人的な美学だけどこういう3連打を続けるなら同じようなスペーシングにした方が綺麗に見えるかも？https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013144
00:21:047 (2,3) - naziだけどもうちょい上にしたいかな？前のsliderと近く見える
00:21:721 (5,6,7,1) - aimしてて少し窮屈に感じた。恐らく00:21:890 (6,7) - の角度の問題だからいっそのこと00:22:058 (7) - を00:21:384 (4) - のケツにstackさせるのもアリ
00:27:283 (5) - snare強調でもう少し飛ばさない？00:27:114 (4,6) - の正三角形に当たる位置(473:114)とかどうでしょ
00:31:497 (1,2,3) - softのwhistleいいね。でもsamplesetをdrumにしてあげるともっとバックの音を綺麗にフォローできると思う。ということでsampleset:drum, additions:softのwhistleとかどうでしょう
00:37:901 (4,5,6) - さっきと同じ指摘だけどどっちでもいいよ
00:40:598 (5,6) - 飛ばすなら00:40:766 (6,1) - のスペーシングかな。大体だけど80:80あたり
00:44:811 - 俺ならここはsnareより00:44:643 - と同じくclapの音を鳴らしたい！そうしたい！
00:49:867 (5) - add NC? 単発続くときはNCつけると見やすくなる理論(謎)
00:51:553 (4) - シンバルあるよ！ add finish
00:56:946 (8,1) - こういうaimブレイクを使うときはシンプルにsliderの頭にstackさせてあげた方が気持ちいいと思う
01:00:654 (5) - シンバルに合わせてadd NCするのもアリ。アリ寄りのアリ。
01:01:834 (4) - ^
01:03:350 (3) - Ctrl+Gした方が01:02:676 (1,2) - からの流れ的に自然じゃない？
01:11:777 (5) - もうこれも3/4slider+circleにしちゃわない？そうするなら01:11:272 (3,5) - にadd NCしてあげた方がデザイン的にGOOD (*'∀')b
01:34:867 (9,1,2,3) - こういうのってスペーシングが近いほどmiss readingする危険性が高まるのでもうちょっと離してあげたい。星型の中心に置いてるのはわかるから変えにくいかもしれないけど･･･変えるなら01:34:024 (3) - の位置に置くかな

gl!

Eir_DELETED

Topic Starter

Eir_DELETED 2017-09-04T10:34:51+00:00

Shirasaka Koume wrote:
owo/

[Grin]
00:10:092 (1,2) - ここ休憩入れるよりも1/2スライダー4つの方がいいと思う！　自分的には休憩入れたほうが好きだったんですけどほかの人にも言われたんで変えます！
00:50:373 (8) - 個人的にはスライダーじゃなくてサークルで溜め作る方が好き　たしかに！
00:57:114 - ここ何かしらあってもいいと思います！前に1/2スライダー置いてもサークル置いてもも違和感なく出来ると思います　あすかさんにも言われたんですけど僕の耳がおかしいだけっぽいですね、1/2すらいだーにかえました
その前のパートでは直線スライダーほとんど使ってなかったのでサビでもっと増やしてもいいかな？って思いました　えっと…とりあえずkeepでおねがいします！
01:13:294 (6,7,1) - 今までのパターン的にスタックよりもちょっとずらしたほうが自然？　その配置パターンは３連打　+３連最後にスライダーのところでつかうようにしてます！
短くてごめんね～　めっちゃ助かりましたありがとうです！

Nanashima Asami wrote:
あはん
[Grin]
00:00:654 (1) - じゃなくて00:01:665 (3) - にNC?　たしかに、全diffそうした
変えるのめんどそうではあるが
00:01:665 (3) - を1/1にして00:02:002 - のスネアを拾ったり
00:02:508 - からのドラムの三連を拾ったりするのはどうだろうか　これもいいけど、明確にメインメロディーでとってるし無視してもいいんじゃないかなぁ。。。って思ってみたり
例→http://puu.sh/xr8Ob/fa29bef628.jpg（出だしからの画像だす）
00:05:036 - ここだけS:C2じゃね？いまだとスネアのとこにバスドラム鳴ってるっぽい　たしかに・・・
00:11:272 - か00:10:598 - かのどっちかはせめてとったほうが良さげ？サークル置くだけでも変わるかも　僕の感性いかれてたみたいです変えました
いまのだと急に密度薄くなってる感ある気がする
00:13:126 (2) - remove whistle　おｋ
00:21:721 (5) - NCからの00:22:227 (1) - NC消してからの00:22:901 (2) - NCとかはどうだろうか　好みの問題かもしれないが読みやすいかも　視覚てきにもそのほうがきれいだね、変えました
00:29:643 (3) - 頭じゃなくてケツにwhistleかも？　hitsoundむりたすけて
00:35:204 (4) - NCして00:35:541 (1) - NCとる？次のオブジェクトもNCついてるし頻繁かも　うおおおおおすげええええええ
01:18:856 (1) - CTRL＋Gはどうかしら、flowてきに　ちょっとそれだと遠すぎたのでCtrlGして前後調整しました
バリうめえ　涙出そう
umee　感謝感激

Meg wrote:
あ　く　ま　で　す　べ　て　Ｓ　Ｕ　Ｇ　Ｇ　Ｅ　Ｓ　Ｔ　Ｉ　Ｏ　Ｎ　で　す
Grin
00:00:654 (1) - ここにNCを入れる意味はないと思う。デザイン的にもない方が普通にスッキリしてる　全diffそうしました
00:06:047 (3,4,5) - 特に00:06:216 (4,5) - に目立った音もないしここは1/8reverseとかどう？　ここすごい迷った。こういうピアノを1/8で処理していいものなのか経験浅すぎてわかんなかったけど、そっちのほうが譜面的に面白くなりそうなので変えました。
SPOILER
00:07:564 (2,3) - 00:08:238 (5,6) - 提案を2つほど。ご一考ください　
【提案1】全部1/2sliderにする　
【提案2】00:08:238 (5) - だけ音が高いのを利用して00:07:564 (2,3) - を1/2sliderにする　こっちで！
00:16:412 (5,6) - 00:16:665 (7,8) - 個人的な美学だけどこういう3連打を続けるなら同じようなスペーシングにした方が綺麗に見えるかも？https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013144　個人的にスライダーエンドの連打はスタックさせるのが好きなんでとりあえずkeepで！
00:21:047 (2,3) - naziだけどもうちょい上にしたいかな？前のsliderと近く見える　たしかに
00:21:721 (5,6,7,1) - aimしてて少し窮屈に感じた。恐らく00:21:890 (6,7) - の角度の問題だからいっそのこと00:22:058 (7) - を00:21:384 (4) - のケツにstackさせるのもアリ　stackさせるのがなんか個人的にいいflowのように思えなかったんで、ここら辺全体を調整して少し窮屈な感じは緩和できたかもしれない
00:27:283 (5) - snare強調でもう少し飛ばさない？00:27:114 (4,6) - の正三角形に当たる位置(473:114)とかどうでしょ　おｋ！
00:31:497 (1,2,3) - softのwhistleいいね。でもsamplesetをdrumにしてあげるともっとバックの音を綺麗にフォローできると思う。ということでsampleset:drum, additions:softのwhistleとかどうでしょう　いまだにsumplesetとadditionsを使いこなせてないあたり問題だわ、直しました
00:37:901 (4,5,6) - さっきと同じ指摘だけどどっちでもいいよ　^
00:40:598 (5,6) - 飛ばすなら00:40:766 (6,1) - のスペーシングかな。大体だけど80:80あたりいいね～
00:44:811 - 俺ならここはsnareより00:44:643 - と同じくclapの音を鳴らしたい！そうしたい！　僕はsnareを鳴らしたい！
00:49:867 (5) - add NC? 単発続くときはNCつけると見やすくなる理論(謎)　すげえ
00:51:553 (4) - シンバルあるよ！ add finish　全く気が付きませんでした
00:56:946 (8,1) - こういうaimブレイクを使うときはシンプルにsliderの頭にstackさせてあげた方が気持ちいいと思う　1/2スライダー入れたのでaimブレイクは消失しました
01:00:654 (5) - シンバルに合わせてadd NCするのもアリ。アリ寄りのアリ。　アリ！
01:01:834 (4) - ^　^
01:03:350 (3) - Ctrl+Gした方が01:02:676 (1,2) - からの流れ的に自然じゃない？たしかに、CtrlG下次のサークルちょっと遠い気がしたの少し近づけました
01:11:777 (5) - もうこれも3/4slider+circleにしちゃわない？そうするなら01:11:272 (3,5) - にadd NCしてあげた方がデザイン的にGOOD (*'∀')b　おっけ！
01:34:867 (9,1,2,3) - こういうのってスペーシングが近いほどmiss readingする危険性が高まるのでもうちょっと離してあげたい。星型の中心に置いてるのはわかるから変えにくいかもしれないけど･･･変えるなら01:34:024 (3) - の位置に置くかな　やっぱりやりにくいのね、かえました
gl!　めっちゃよくなった気がする！ありがとう！

みんなほんとに助かりましたmodありがとう！

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2017-09-04T23:53:39+00:00

01:26:272 (6,7,8,9,10) - miss Hitsound ?

repl4y sinner - 168ms

Lemaire

183 posts

Joined October 2012

Lemaire 2017-09-05T03:45:57+00:00

＠じょーかーさん
了解です

ちょっと変えたのであぷでお願いします。
何度もすいません；；

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Eir_DELETED

Topic Starter

Eir_DELETED 2017-09-05T04:11:49+00:00

@Narcissu
i forgot to add hitsound when i changed the pattern thanks!

Updated all!

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

HelloSCV 2017-09-08T18:37:52+00:00

From my queue ~~after 11 months huh~~

[General]

Snap the preview point properly

[Grin]

00:05:963 (2) - What about placing this note the previous slider? like this or somewhere else. It seems like you used the current pattern to emphasize the piano sound at 00:06:047 - here but I think placing closely with the previous slider is way better to do so. It would be nice if you add NC on 00:06:047 (3) - this slider
00:07:564 (1) - Try adding a clap on end. it feels great
00:10:429 (2) - , 00:11:103 (2) - These notes need clap to fit with the song better
00:21:721 (1) - remove NC and add it on 00:22:227 (4) - here. Do the same on 00:22:901 (1,4) - these note. Lastly, 00:23:744 (1) - remove NC on this note. To make the same with 00:32:508 (6) - this part and it actually fits better with the voice.
00:35:204 (1) - similar opinion with above. I think there is no reason to add NC suddenly. Tyr removing it and adding it on 00:35:541 (6) - this slider.
01:07:817 (7) - I don't think there's anything suitable sound for this note. It particularly stands out because of hitsounds that placed on 01:07:732 (6,8,9) - these notes. Try deleting this note and relocating the pattern
01:12:789 (2) - What about adding NC to highlight the last part of the song? It works nicely

~~I'll finish the rest when I wake up~~ sorry for late

[Easy]

00:10:092 (3,4) - uh is there anything special reason that you didn't add clap on here? or it's just because you c&p hitsounds from Grin diff

[Normal]

00:10:429 -, 00:11:103 (5) - same opinion as Grin diff, these objects need clap
01:07:058 (5,6) - consider changing this rhythm to this one. most of the rhythms fit with the vocal quite nicely while this one doesn't

[Hard]

00:10:092 (1,2) - same as Grin diff

[RepL4y's Insane]

00:12:283 (3,1) - well, I expected a larger space between these objects because of the strong cymbal sound. What about changing this pattern?
for example
00:23:912 (2,3) - Try reversing this rhythm to follow the vocal well. I know that you didn't intend to follow the vocal exactly but most of the rhythms are quite reasonable except this one.
01:32:845 (1) - Since there is no suitable sound for a note, deleting this note or replacing 01:32:676 (3) - this note with a 1/2 slider, like this, would be great
01:34:193 (3) - I think dividing this slider into a note and a 1/2 slider fits nicely with the guitar sound. the current one looks a little bit awkward in my opinion even if you intended to follow the cymbal sound.

steady mapset, good luck!

Eir_DELETED

Topic Starter

Eir_DELETED 2017-09-09T23:48:05+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
From my queue ~~after 11 months huh~~

[General]
Snap the preview point properly
oh, i forgeot to resnap it when i changed all timing lines

[Grin]
00:05:963 (2) - What about placing this note the previous slider? like this or somewhere else. It seems like you used the current pattern to emphasize the piano sound at 00:06:047 - here but I think placing closely with the previous slider is way better to do so. It would be nice if you add NC on 00:06:047 (3) - this slider i know what you mean, but it really doesnt fit with my map since the placement is kinda gimmicky and not playable topically i guess
00:07:564 (1) - Try adding a clap on end. it feels great oops my bad
00:10:429 (2) - , 00:11:103 (2) - These notes need clap to fit with the song better same
00:21:721 (1) - remove NC and add it on 00:22:227 (4) - here. Do the same on 00:22:901 (1,4) - these note. Lastly, 00:23:744 (1) - remove NC on this note. To make the same with 00:32:508 (6) - this part and it actually fits better with the voice. nice idea
00:35:204 (1) - similar opinion with above. I think there is no reason to add NC suddenly. Tyr removing it and adding it on 00:35:541 (6) - this slider. ^
01:07:817 (7) - I don't think there's anything suitable sound for this note. It particularly stands out because of hitsounds that placed on 01:07:732 (6,8,9) - these notes. Try deleting this note and relocating the pattern i wanna keep it as possible cuz ofc i take drum hitsound on those objects mainly however i assume there is audible sound in background in my thought
01:12:789 (2) - What about adding NC to highlight the last part of the song? It works nicely sorry... it doesnt my preference for aesthetics
~~I'll finish the rest when I wake up~~ sorry for late np, thanks a lot!

[Easy]
00:10:092 (3,4) - uh is there anything special reason that you didn't add clap on here? or it's just because you c&p hitsounds from Grin diff idk why i didnt place any hitsound...
[Normal]
00:10:429 -, 00:11:103 (5) - same opinion as Grin diff, these objects need clap ^
01:07:058 (5,6) - consider changing this rhythm to this one. most of the rhythms fit with the vocal quite nicely while this one doesn't i'd prefer to click cymbal
[Hard]
00:10:092 (1,2) - same as Grin diff omg
steady mapset, good luck! thanks!

@りぷれいさん
プレビューポイントがスナップされてなかったところだけこっちで修正させてもらってます～

Lemaire

183 posts

Joined October 2012

Lemaire 2017-09-12T10:25:51+00:00

@HelloSCV all fixed~ thx mod!

@じょーかーさん　了解です～！

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Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2017-10-05T00:25:01+00:00

sry for taking a while ;;
[Easy]

00:14:811 (2,3) - not the best pattern to use in an easy, the object looks closer than it actually is so players wont be able to judge rhythm https://puu.sh/xQcUT/58d4deb213.png
00:50:373 (3) - 1/2 slider feels pretty weird here cos the guitar ends closer to 00:50:879 . maybe use a 3/2 slider instead or just a circle
00:57:283 (4,1) - nc should be on 4 here to keep things organised in 2 measures

[Normal]

00:50:373 (4) - same with easy

[Hard]

00:25:261 (2,3) - like the only time you do this in the section. could be confusing since it flows back on itself, should just avoid it overall
00:50:373 (6) - thing in normal/easy applies here too i guess lol
01:07:227 (3) - should avoid stacking here or move the stack to 01:07:395 (4) . 3 deserves movement because of the strong finish
01:31:159 (2,3) - stack here doesnt work too well cos it makes the following one less important. 01:31:665 (4,5) - is two really strong sounds so should try to keep the stack specific to that
01:35:204 - really strong triplet here, dont think it needs to be skipped in a hard. 1/4 repeat could work as well if you dont want a triplet

[Repl4y's Insane]

00:21:216 (2,3,1,2,3) - should really avoid using consecutive circles when the music isnt really doing anything, makes the part feel harder than it should be
00:34:025 (4,5,1) - two strong sounds here on 4 and 1 but a triplet on emphasises 1. id just remove 00:34:109 (5) - and space the two apart
00:35:541 (1) - ctrl g here is nice to make the angle sharper/more spacing makes the downbeat feel stronger
01:00:991 (5,6,1) - looks quite off from your other patterns like this 01:14:137 (4,5,6) - should try keep them looking consistent
01:03:603 (5) - 01:04:614 (4) - triplet overmapping is quite awkward here, mainly cause they arent used consistently 01:03:519 (4,5,6) - leads into snare 01:04:530 (3,4,5) - leads into kick. should try put the triplets on the same tick - or just remove them
01:40:598 - try end spinner here to be consistent with other diffs

[Grin]

00:07:564 (1) - dont think u need the nc here
01:11:777 (1,2) - try keep consistent 1/4 spacing to 01:10:766 (1,2,1,2) - so they feel somewhat related

call me bak

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Eir_DELETED 2017-10-05T15:04:40+00:00

Pentori wrote:
sry for taking a while ;;
[Easy]
00:14:811 (2,3) - not the best pattern to use in an easy, the object looks closer than it actually is so players wont be able to judge rhythm https://puu.sh/xQcUT/58d4deb213.png tried to adjust placement to avoid it
00:50:373 (3) - 1/2 slider feels pretty weird here cos the guitar ends closer to 00:50:879 . maybe use a 3/2 slider instead or just a circle replaced a circle
00:57:283 (4,1) - nc should be on 4 here to keep things organised in 2 measures trashed NC lol
[Normal]
00:50:373 (4) - same with easy circled
[Hard]
00:25:261 (2,3) - like the only time you do this in the section. could be confusing since it flows back on itself, should just avoid it overall yea, avoid the overlap
00:50:373 (6) - thing in normal/easy applies here too i guess lol ^
01:07:227 (3) - should avoid stacking here or move the stack to 01:07:395 (4) . 3 deserves movement because of the strong finish ye
01:31:159 (2,3) - stack here doesnt work too well cos it makes the following one less important. 01:31:665 (4,5) - is two really strong sounds so should try to keep the stack specific to that i see
01:35:204 - really strong triplet here, dont think it needs to be skipped in a hard. 1/4 repeat could work as well if you dont want a triplet gotcha
[Grin]
00:07:564 (1) - dont think u need the nc here omg
01:11:777 (1,2) - try keep consistent 1/4 spacing to 01:10:766 (1,2,1,2) - so they feel somewhat related alright
call me bak

thanks for checking! when i made sure the gd's post, i will ask you again!

Lemaire

183 posts

Joined October 2012

Lemaire 2017-10-09T10:13:45+00:00

Pentori wrote:
sry for taking a while ;;
[Repl4y's Insane]
00:21:216 (2,3,1,2,3) - should really avoid using consecutive circles when the music isnt really doing anything, makes the part feel harder than it should be
00:34:025 (4,5,1) - two strong sounds here on 4 and 1 but a triplet on emphasises 1. id just remove 00:34:109 (5) - and space the two apart
00:35:541 (1) - ctrl g here is nice to make the angle sharper/more spacing makes the downbeat feel stronger
01:00:991 (5,6,1) - looks quite off from your other patterns like this 01:14:137 (4,5,6) - should try keep them looking consistent
01:03:603 (5) - 01:04:614 (4) - triplet overmapping is quite awkward here, mainly cause they arent used consistently 01:03:519 (4,5,6) - leads into snare 01:04:530 (3,4,5) - leads into kick. should try put the triplets on the same tick - or just remove them replaced a circle
01:40:598 - try end spinner here to be consistent with other diffs
call me bak

no reply = fixed

thx Pentori!

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203,248,91328,2,0,P|206:287|214:343,1,80,8|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
217,349,91581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,350,91665,1,2,0:0:0:0:
386,260,91834,1,2,3:0:0:0:
267,147,92002,2,0,P|227:147|187:158,1,80,8|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
45,305,92339,5,2,0:0:0:0:
240,244,92508,1,2,0:0:0:0:
138,71,92676,2,0,P|109:99|89:135,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,316,93013,5,8,0:0:0:0:
262,102,93182,1,0,3:0:0:0:
262,102,93266,1,0,3:0:0:0:
262,102,93350,1,8,0:0:0:0:
492,200,93519,6,0,P|416:213|315:226,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,193,94025,1,8,0:0:0:0:
394,117,94193,1,6,0:0:0:0:
359,347,94362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
262,102,94530,5,8,0:0:0:0:
262,102,94614,1,8,0:0:0:0:
262,102,94699,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,252,94867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,252,94952,1,8,0:0:0:0:
199,349,95204,5,2,0:0:0:0:
175,343,95288,1,2,0:0:0:0:
151,337,95373,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,95457,12,0,100598,0:0:0:0:

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2017-10-09T10:50:45+00:00

oke

Eir_DELETED

Topic Starter

Eir_DELETED 2017-10-09T10:57:00+00:00

thanksu

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2017-10-25T07:02:01+00:00

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00:10:766 (1) - eh you really don't need this NC, it's useless
00:12:620 (1) - the slider shape can be improved a bit, the S shape doesn't looks nice atm
01:13:294 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - probably the only pattern that feels out of place, I think you can design it better o.O

hard

01:00:317 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - you're making this diff too complicated with patterns like this, which are denser than the insane diff, try to reduce the note density a bit

normal

your OD is really low here, 4 is more balanced with the AR

Eir_DELETED

Topic Starter

Eir_DELETED 2017-10-25T13:05:00+00:00

Natsu wrote:
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00:10:766 (1) - eh you really don't need this NC, it's useless
00:12:620 (1) - the slider shape can be improved a bit, the S shape doesn't looks nice atm
01:13:294 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - probably the only pattern that feels out of place, I think you can design it better o.O huh... i tried to be better in my effort. but i cant change largely since i wanna keep the flow
hard

01:00:317 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - you're making this diff too complicated with patterns like this, which are denser than the insane diff, try to reduce the note density a bit remove the triples
normal

your OD is really low here, 4 is more balanced with the AR

no comment means fixed, Thanks Natsu!