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Ryuusei Aika wrote:

m4m
map here

Easy
00:27:620 (1,3) - why not making two symmetry shapes lol current one looks a little weird oh really? they are a just my taste...

Normal
00:45:991 - two green lines my bad
00:46:075 - ^ ^
00:53:912 (5) - buy considering your usage of rhythm at 00:56:609 (5,6) - , i think maybe you can use the same rhythm here to make the beat at 00:54:249 - be clickable too? id like to mean they are consistency with 00:53:912 (5) - and 01:04:699 (5) - at my all diffs cuz of avoiding monotonousness. but i will reconsider them.
01:04:699 (5) - ^

Grin
00:10:092 (1,2) - rhythm here seems quite simple comparing with the other parts of this section. try to use something like four 3/4 sliders? this part is simplified intentionally since this part is not any 1/2 sounds and complicated rhythm doesnt suit for this part in my thoght

good luck :3
big thanks :3

Asuka_- wrote:

ひ quick m4m
top diff

全て提案なので、めんどかったら無視してくださいww
count down と wide screeen チェック入ってます(自分ここらへんよくわからないけど指摘してる人多いから一応w)両方消しときましたw

00:31:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - このままでもokだと思うんですが、00:32:339 - がclickableでもいいかなーとか思ったり思わなかったりw うーん…自分の譜面だとサビ以外メロディーとボーカルをメインにフォローしてるんでここでそこのドラムclickableにしなくてもいいんじゃないかと思うんですが、どうでしょうか…
https://i.gyazo.com/f2fc231cefb2f9038d4 ... 945def.png


00:51:384 (2,3,4) - ここ確かにwhistleの音あるんですけど、直後のkiaiを強調するために少し音量を下げませんか? ちょっと大きすぎる様な印象を受けました。 ですね、下げました


00:57:114 - 意図的だとは思うんですがやっぱりkiaiの中だし 一応音っぽいのあるので拾った方が良いかも。。。? めっちゃ聞きなおしましたけどここに音あります…?ごめんなさいぼくにはわからなかったです。。。
00:56:946 (8) - を1/2に変えて次の(1)に軽く重ねるといいかもです。 https://i.gyazo.com/4bf51bbc67060a0bc1a2fe9356f427ad.png

頑張ってください!!
あとdont say lazyの譜面 starありがとです~( *´艸`)
いえいえ~こちらこそこちらの譜面に星投げてくれてありがとうです~!がんばります!
@りぷれいさん カウントダウンとワイドスクリーンサポートだけチェック外させてもらいました~
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owo/

[Grin]
  1. 00:10:092 (1,2) - ここ休憩入れるよりも1/2スライダー4つの方がいいと思う!
  2. 00:50:373 (8) - 個人的にはスライダーじゃなくてサークルで溜め作る方が好き
  3. 00:57:114 - ここ何かしらあってもいいと思います!前に1/2スライダー置いてもサークル置いてもも違和感なく出来ると思います
  4. その前のパートでは直線スライダーほとんど使ってなかったのでサビでもっと増やしてもいいかな?って思いました
  5. 01:13:294 (6,7,1) - 今までのパターン的にスタックよりもちょっとずらしたほうが自然?


短くてごめんね~
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あはん
[Grin]
  1. 00:00:654 (1) - じゃなくて00:01:665 (3) - にNC?
  2. 変えるのめんどそうではあるが
    00:01:665 (3) - を1/1にして00:02:002 - のスネアを拾ったり
    00:02:508 - からのドラムの三連を拾ったりするのはどうだろうか
    例→http://puu.sh/xr8Ob/fa29bef628.jpg(出だしからの画像だす)
  3. 00:05:036 - ここだけS:C2じゃね?いまだとスネアのとこにバスドラム鳴ってるっぽい
  4. 00:11:272 - か00:10:598 - かのどっちかはせめてとったほうが良さげ?サークル置くだけでも変わるかも
    いまのだと急に密度薄くなってる感ある気がする
  5. 00:13:126 (2) - remove whistle
  6. 00:21:721 (5) - NCからの00:22:227 (1) - NC消してからの00:22:901 (2) - NCとかはどうだろうか 好みの問題かもしれないが読みやすいかも
  7. 00:29:643 (3) - 頭じゃなくてケツにwhistleかも?
  8. 00:35:204 (4) - NCして00:35:541 (1) - NCとる?次のオブジェクトもNCついてるし頻繁かも
  9. 01:18:856 (1) - CTRL+Gはどうかしら、flowてきに
  10. バリうめえ

umee
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あ く ま で す べ て S U G G E S T I O N で す

Grin

  1. 00:00:654 (1) - ここにNCを入れる意味はないと思う。デザイン的にもない方が普通にスッキリしてる
  2. 00:06:047 (3,4,5) - 特に00:06:216 (4,5) - に目立った音もないしここは1/8reverseとかどう?
  3. 00:07:564 (2,3) - 00:08:238 (5,6) - 提案を2つほど。ご一考ください
    【提案1】全部1/2sliderにする
    【提案2】00:08:238 (5) - だけ音が高いのを利用して00:07:564 (2,3) - を1/2sliderにする
  4. 00:16:412 (5,6) - 00:16:665 (7,8) - 個人的な美学だけどこういう3連打を続けるなら同じようなスペーシングにした方が綺麗に見えるかも?https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013144
  5. 00:21:047 (2,3) - naziだけどもうちょい上にしたいかな?前のsliderと近く見える
  6. 00:21:721 (5,6,7,1) - aimしてて少し窮屈に感じた。恐らく00:21:890 (6,7) - の角度の問題だからいっそのこと00:22:058 (7) - を00:21:384 (4) - のケツにstackさせるのもアリ
  7. 00:27:283 (5) - snare強調でもう少し飛ばさない?00:27:114 (4,6) - の正三角形に当たる位置(473:114)とかどうでしょ
  8. 00:31:497 (1,2,3) - softのwhistleいいね。でもsamplesetをdrumにしてあげるともっとバックの音を綺麗にフォローできると思う。ということでsampleset:drum, additions:softのwhistleとかどうでしょう
  9. 00:37:901 (4,5,6) - さっきと同じ指摘だけどどっちでもいいよ
  10. 00:40:598 (5,6) - 飛ばすなら00:40:766 (6,1) - のスペーシングかな。大体だけど80:80あたり
  11. 00:44:811 - 俺ならここはsnareより00:44:643 - と同じくclapの音を鳴らしたい!そうしたい!
  12. 00:49:867 (5) - add NC? 単発続くときはNCつけると見やすくなる理論(謎)
  13. 00:51:553 (4) - シンバルあるよ! add finish
  14. 00:56:946 (8,1) - こういうaimブレイクを使うときはシンプルにsliderの頭にstackさせてあげた方が気持ちいいと思う
  15. 01:00:654 (5) - シンバルに合わせてadd NCするのもアリ。アリ寄りのアリ。
  16. 01:01:834 (4) - ^
  17. 01:03:350 (3) - Ctrl+Gした方が01:02:676 (1,2) - からの流れ的に自然じゃない?
  18. 01:11:777 (5) - もうこれも3/4slider+circleにしちゃわない?そうするなら01:11:272 (3,5) - にadd NCしてあげた方がデザイン的にGOOD (*'∀')b
  19. 01:34:867 (9,1,2,3) - こういうのってスペーシングが近いほどmiss readingする危険性が高まるのでもうちょっと離してあげたい。星型の中心に置いてるのはわかるから変えにくいかもしれないけど・・・変えるなら01:34:024 (3) - の位置に置くかな
gl!
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Shirasaka Koume wrote:

owo/

[Grin]
  1. 00:10:092 (1,2) - ここ休憩入れるよりも1/2スライダー4つの方がいいと思う! 自分的には休憩入れたほうが好きだったんですけどほかの人にも言われたんで変えます!
  2. 00:50:373 (8) - 個人的にはスライダーじゃなくてサークルで溜め作る方が好き たしかに!
  3. 00:57:114 - ここ何かしらあってもいいと思います!前に1/2スライダー置いてもサークル置いてもも違和感なく出来ると思います あすかさんにも言われたんですけど僕の耳がおかしいだけっぽいですね、1/2すらいだーにかえました
  4. その前のパートでは直線スライダーほとんど使ってなかったのでサビでもっと増やしてもいいかな?って思いました えっと…とりあえずkeepでおねがいします!
  5. 01:13:294 (6,7,1) - 今までのパターン的にスタックよりもちょっとずらしたほうが自然? その配置パターンは3連打 +3連最後にスライダーのところでつかうようにしてます!


短くてごめんね~ めっちゃ助かりましたありがとうです!

Nanashima Asami wrote:

あはん
[Grin]
  1. 00:00:654 (1) - じゃなくて00:01:665 (3) - にNC? たしかに、全diffそうした
  2. 変えるのめんどそうではあるが
    00:01:665 (3) - を1/1にして00:02:002 - のスネアを拾ったり
    00:02:508 - からのドラムの三連を拾ったりするのはどうだろうか これもいいけど、明確にメインメロディーでとってるし無視してもいいんじゃないかなぁ。。。って思ってみたり
    例→http://puu.sh/xr8Ob/fa29bef628.jpg(出だしからの画像だす)
  3. 00:05:036 - ここだけS:C2じゃね?いまだとスネアのとこにバスドラム鳴ってるっぽい たしかに・・・
  4. 00:11:272 - か00:10:598 - かのどっちかはせめてとったほうが良さげ?サークル置くだけでも変わるかも 僕の感性いかれてたみたいです変えました
    いまのだと急に密度薄くなってる感ある気がする
  5. 00:13:126 (2) - remove whistle おk
  6. 00:21:721 (5) - NCからの00:22:227 (1) - NC消してからの00:22:901 (2) - NCとかはどうだろうか 好みの問題かもしれないが読みやすいかも 視覚てきにもそのほうがきれいだね、変えました
  7. 00:29:643 (3) - 頭じゃなくてケツにwhistleかも? hitsoundむりたすけて
  8. 00:35:204 (4) - NCして00:35:541 (1) - NCとる?次のオブジェクトもNCついてるし頻繁かも うおおおおおすげええええええ
  9. 01:18:856 (1) - CTRL+Gはどうかしら、flowてきに ちょっとそれだと遠すぎたのでCtrlGして前後調整しました
  10. バリうめえ 涙出そう

umee 感謝感激

Meg wrote:

あ く ま で す べ て S U G G E S T I O N で す

Grin

  1. 00:00:654 (1) - ここにNCを入れる意味はないと思う。デザイン的にもない方が普通にスッキリしてる 全diffそうしました
  2. 00:06:047 (3,4,5) - 特に00:06:216 (4,5) - に目立った音もないしここは1/8reverseとかどう? ここすごい迷った。こういうピアノを1/8で処理していいものなのか経験浅すぎてわかんなかったけど、そっちのほうが譜面的に面白くなりそうなので変えました。
  3. 00:07:564 (2,3) - 00:08:238 (5,6) - 提案を2つほど。ご一考ください 
    【提案1】全部1/2sliderにする 
    【提案2】00:08:238 (5) - だけ音が高いのを利用して00:07:564 (2,3) - を1/2sliderにする こっちで!
  4. 00:16:412 (5,6) - 00:16:665 (7,8) - 個人的な美学だけどこういう3連打を続けるなら同じようなスペーシングにした方が綺麗に見えるかも?https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013144 個人的にスライダーエンドの連打はスタックさせるのが好きなんでとりあえずkeepで!
  5. 00:21:047 (2,3) - naziだけどもうちょい上にしたいかな?前のsliderと近く見える たしかに
  6. 00:21:721 (5,6,7,1) - aimしてて少し窮屈に感じた。恐らく00:21:890 (6,7) - の角度の問題だからいっそのこと00:22:058 (7) - を00:21:384 (4) - のケツにstackさせるのもアリ stackさせるのがなんか個人的にいいflowのように思えなかったんで、ここら辺全体を調整して少し窮屈な感じは緩和できたかもしれない
  7. 00:27:283 (5) - snare強調でもう少し飛ばさない?00:27:114 (4,6) - の正三角形に当たる位置(473:114)とかどうでしょ おk!
  8. 00:31:497 (1,2,3) - softのwhistleいいね。でもsamplesetをdrumにしてあげるともっとバックの音を綺麗にフォローできると思う。ということでsampleset:drum, additions:softのwhistleとかどうでしょう いまだにsumplesetとadditionsを使いこなせてないあたり問題だわ、直しました
  9. 00:37:901 (4,5,6) - さっきと同じ指摘だけどどっちでもいいよ ^
  10. 00:40:598 (5,6) - 飛ばすなら00:40:766 (6,1) - のスペーシングかな。大体だけど80:80あたり いいね~
  11. 00:44:811 - 俺ならここはsnareより00:44:643 - と同じくclapの音を鳴らしたい!そうしたい! 僕はsnareを鳴らしたい!
  12. 00:49:867 (5) - add NC? 単発続くときはNCつけると見やすくなる理論(謎) すげえ
  13. 00:51:553 (4) - シンバルあるよ! add finish 全く気が付きませんでした
  14. 00:56:946 (8,1) - こういうaimブレイクを使うときはシンプルにsliderの頭にstackさせてあげた方が気持ちいいと思う 1/2スライダー入れたのでaimブレイクは消失しました
  15. 01:00:654 (5) - シンバルに合わせてadd NCするのもアリ。アリ寄りのアリ。 アリ!
  16. 01:01:834 (4) - ^ ^
  17. 01:03:350 (3) - Ctrl+Gした方が01:02:676 (1,2) - からの流れ的に自然じゃない? たしかに、CtrlG下次のサークルちょっと遠い気がしたの少し近づけました
  18. 01:11:777 (5) - もうこれも3/4slider+circleにしちゃわない?そうするなら01:11:272 (3,5) - にadd NCしてあげた方がデザイン的にGOOD (*'∀')b おっけ!
  19. 01:34:867 (9,1,2,3) - こういうのってスペーシングが近いほどmiss readingする危険性が高まるのでもうちょっと離してあげたい。星型の中心に置いてるのはわかるから変えにくいかもしれないけど・・・変えるなら01:34:024 (3) - の位置に置くかな やっぱりやりにくいのね、かえました
gl! めっちゃよくなった気がする!ありがとう!
みんなほんとに助かりましたmodありがとう!
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01:26:272 (6,7,8,9,10) - miss Hitsound ?

repl4y sinner - 168ms
posted
@じょーかーさん
了解です :)

ちょっと変えたのであぷでお願いします。
何度もすいません;;
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posted
@Narcissu
i forgot to add hitsound when i changed the pattern thanks!

Updated all!
posted
From my queue after 11 months huh

[General]
  1. Snap the preview point properly


[Grin]
  1. 00:05:963 (2) - What about placing this note the previous slider? like this or somewhere else. It seems like you used the current pattern to emphasize the piano sound at 00:06:047 - here but I think placing closely with the previous slider is way better to do so. It would be nice if you add NC on 00:06:047 (3) - this slider
  2. 00:07:564 (1) - Try adding a clap on end. it feels great
  3. 00:10:429 (2) - , 00:11:103 (2) - These notes need clap to fit with the song better
  4. 00:21:721 (1) - remove NC and add it on 00:22:227 (4) - here. Do the same on 00:22:901 (1,4) - these note. Lastly, 00:23:744 (1) - remove NC on this note. To make the same with 00:32:508 (6) - this part and it actually fits better with the voice.
  5. 00:35:204 (1) - similar opinion with above. I think there is no reason to add NC suddenly. Tyr removing it and adding it on 00:35:541 (6) - this slider.
  6. 01:07:817 (7) - I don't think there's anything suitable sound for this note. It particularly stands out because of hitsounds that placed on 01:07:732 (6,8,9) - these notes. Try deleting this note and relocating the pattern
  7. 01:12:789 (2) - What about adding NC to highlight the last part of the song? It works nicely


I'll finish the rest when I wake up sorry for late

[Easy]
  1. 00:10:092 (3,4) - uh is there anything special reason that you didn't add clap on here? or it's just because you c&p hitsounds from Grin diff :?


[Normal]
  1. 00:10:429 -, 00:11:103 (5) - same opinion as Grin diff, these objects need clap
  2. 01:07:058 (5,6) - consider changing this rhythm to this one. most of the rhythms fit with the vocal quite nicely while this one doesn't


[Hard]
  1. 00:10:092 (1,2) - same as Grin diff


[RepL4y's Insane]
  1. 00:12:283 (3,1) - well, I expected a larger space between these objects because of the strong cymbal sound. What about changing this pattern?
  2. 00:23:912 (2,3) - Try reversing this rhythm to follow the vocal well. I know that you didn't intend to follow the vocal exactly but most of the rhythms are quite reasonable except this one.
  3. 01:32:845 (1) - Since there is no suitable sound for a note, deleting this note or replacing 01:32:676 (3) - this note with a 1/2 slider, like this, would be great
  4. 01:34:193 (3) - I think dividing this slider into a note and a 1/2 slider fits nicely with the guitar sound. the current one looks a little bit awkward in my opinion even if you intended to follow the cymbal sound.


steady mapset, good luck!
posted

HelloSCV wrote:

From my queue after 11 months huh

[General]
  1. Snap the preview point properly
oh, i forgeot to resnap it when i changed all timing lines

[Grin]
  1. 00:05:963 (2) - What about placing this note the previous slider? like this or somewhere else. It seems like you used the current pattern to emphasize the piano sound at 00:06:047 - here but I think placing closely with the previous slider is way better to do so. It would be nice if you add NC on 00:06:047 (3) - this slider i know what you mean, but it really doesnt fit with my map since the placement is kinda gimmicky and not playable topically i guess
  2. 00:07:564 (1) - Try adding a clap on end. it feels great oops my bad
  3. 00:10:429 (2) - , 00:11:103 (2) - These notes need clap to fit with the song better same
  4. 00:21:721 (1) - remove NC and add it on 00:22:227 (4) - here. Do the same on 00:22:901 (1,4) - these note. Lastly, 00:23:744 (1) - remove NC on this note. To make the same with 00:32:508 (6) - this part and it actually fits better with the voice. nice idea
  5. 00:35:204 (1) - similar opinion with above. I think there is no reason to add NC suddenly. Tyr removing it and adding it on 00:35:541 (6) - this slider. ^
  6. 01:07:817 (7) - I don't think there's anything suitable sound for this note. It particularly stands out because of hitsounds that placed on 01:07:732 (6,8,9) - these notes. Try deleting this note and relocating the pattern i wanna keep it as possible cuz ofc i take drum hitsound on those objects mainly however i assume there is audible sound in background in my thought
  7. 01:12:789 (2) - What about adding NC to highlight the last part of the song? It works nicely sorry... it doesnt my preference for aesthetics


I'll finish the rest when I wake up sorry for late np, thanks a lot!

[Easy]
  1. 00:10:092 (3,4) - uh is there anything special reason that you didn't add clap on here? or it's just because you c&p hitsounds from Grin diff :?idk why i didnt place any hitsound...


[Normal]
  1. 00:10:429 -, 00:11:103 (5) - same opinion as Grin diff, these objects need clap ^
  2. 01:07:058 (5,6) - consider changing this rhythm to this one. most of the rhythms fit with the vocal quite nicely while this one doesn't i'd prefer to click cymbal


[Hard]
  1. 00:10:092 (1,2) - same as Grin diff omg


steady mapset, good luck! thanks!
@りぷれいさん
プレビューポイントがスナップされてなかったところだけこっちで修正させてもらってます~
posted
@HelloSCV all fixed~ thx mod!

@じょーかーさん 了解です~!

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posted
sry for taking a while ;;
[Easy]
  1. 00:14:811 (2,3) - not the best pattern to use in an easy, the object looks closer than it actually is so players wont be able to judge rhythm https://puu.sh/xQcUT/58d4deb213.png
  2. 00:50:373 (3) - 1/2 slider feels pretty weird here cos the guitar ends closer to 00:50:879 . maybe use a 3/2 slider instead or just a circle
  3. 00:57:283 (4,1) - nc should be on 4 here to keep things organised in 2 measures


[Normal]
  1. 00:50:373 (4) - same with easy


[Hard]
  1. 00:25:261 (2,3) - like the only time you do this in the section. could be confusing since it flows back on itself, should just avoid it overall
  2. 00:50:373 (6) - thing in normal/easy applies here too i guess lol
  3. 01:07:227 (3) - should avoid stacking here or move the stack to 01:07:395 (4) . 3 deserves movement because of the strong finish
  4. 01:31:159 (2,3) - stack here doesnt work too well cos it makes the following one less important. 01:31:665 (4,5) - is two really strong sounds so should try to keep the stack specific to that
  5. 01:35:204 - really strong triplet here, dont think it needs to be skipped in a hard. 1/4 repeat could work as well if you dont want a triplet


[Repl4y's Insane]
  1. 00:21:216 (2,3,1,2,3) - should really avoid using consecutive circles when the music isnt really doing anything, makes the part feel harder than it should be
  2. 00:34:025 (4,5,1) - two strong sounds here on 4 and 1 but a triplet on emphasises 1. id just remove 00:34:109 (5) - and space the two apart
  3. 00:35:541 (1) - ctrl g here is nice to make the angle sharper/more spacing makes the downbeat feel stronger
  4. 01:00:991 (5,6,1) - looks quite off from your other patterns like this 01:14:137 (4,5,6) - should try keep them looking consistent
  5. 01:03:603 (5) - 01:04:614 (4) - triplet overmapping is quite awkward here, mainly cause they arent used consistently 01:03:519 (4,5,6) - leads into snare 01:04:530 (3,4,5) - leads into kick. should try put the triplets on the same tick - or just remove them
  6. 01:40:598 - try end spinner here to be consistent with other diffs


[Grin]
  1. 00:07:564 (1) - dont think u need the nc here
  2. 01:11:777 (1,2) - try keep consistent 1/4 spacing to 01:10:766 (1,2,1,2) - so they feel somewhat related


call me bak
posted

Pentori wrote:

sry for taking a while ;;
[Easy]
  1. 00:14:811 (2,3) - not the best pattern to use in an easy, the object looks closer than it actually is so players wont be able to judge rhythm https://puu.sh/xQcUT/58d4deb213.png tried to adjust placement to avoid it
  2. 00:50:373 (3) - 1/2 slider feels pretty weird here cos the guitar ends closer to 00:50:879 . maybe use a 3/2 slider instead or just a circle replaced a circle
  3. 00:57:283 (4,1) - nc should be on 4 here to keep things organised in 2 measures trashed NC lol


[Normal]
  1. 00:50:373 (4) - same with easy circled


[Hard]
  1. 00:25:261 (2,3) - like the only time you do this in the section. could be confusing since it flows back on itself, should just avoid it overall yea, avoid the overlap
  2. 00:50:373 (6) - thing in normal/easy applies here too i guess lol ^
  3. 01:07:227 (3) - should avoid stacking here or move the stack to 01:07:395 (4) . 3 deserves movement because of the strong finish ye
  4. 01:31:159 (2,3) - stack here doesnt work too well cos it makes the following one less important. 01:31:665 (4,5) - is two really strong sounds so should try to keep the stack specific to that i see
  5. 01:35:204 - really strong triplet here, dont think it needs to be skipped in a hard. 1/4 repeat could work as well if you dont want a triplet gotcha


[Grin]
  1. 00:07:564 (1) - dont think u need the nc here omg
  2. 01:11:777 (1,2) - try keep consistent 1/4 spacing to 01:10:766 (1,2,1,2) - so they feel somewhat related alright


call me bak
thanks for checking! when i made sure the gd's post, i will ask you again!
posted

Pentori wrote:

sry for taking a while ;;
[Repl4y's Insane]
  1. 00:21:216 (2,3,1,2,3) - should really avoid using consecutive circles when the music isnt really doing anything, makes the part feel harder than it should be
  2. 00:34:025 (4,5,1) - two strong sounds here on 4 and 1 but a triplet on emphasises 1. id just remove 00:34:109 (5) - and space the two apart
  3. 00:35:541 (1) - ctrl g here is nice to make the angle sharper/more spacing makes the downbeat feel stronger
  4. 01:00:991 (5,6,1) - looks quite off from your other patterns like this 01:14:137 (4,5,6) - should try keep them looking consistent
  5. 01:03:603 (5) - 01:04:614 (4) - triplet overmapping is quite awkward here, mainly cause they arent used consistently 01:03:519 (4,5,6) - leads into snare 01:04:530 (3,4,5) - leads into kick. should try put the triplets on the same tick - or just remove them replaced a circle
  6. 01:40:598 - try end spinner here to be consistent with other diffs

call me bak
no reply = fixed

thx Pentori!

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443,86,81553,6,0,B|385:91|385:91|345:75|345:75|282:82,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,149,82058,1,0,0:0:0:0:
102,149,82143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
102,149,82227,2,0,L|204:160,1,80,2|2,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
334,173,82564,1,8,0:0:0:0:
211,83,82732,1,2,3:0:0:0:
203,235,82901,6,0,P|204:172|208:110,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,83,83238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
334,173,83407,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,188,83491,1,0,0:0:0:0:
330,203,83575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,343,83744,1,2,3:0:0:0:
437,197,83912,2,0,P|438:154|423:116,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,43,84249,6,0,P|242:54|149:56,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,143,84755,1,0,0:0:0:0:
1,143,84839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
1,143,84923,2,0,P|41:149|86:148,1,80,2|2,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
251,149,85261,1,8,0:0:0:0:
158,56,85429,6,0,P|121:122|136:215,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,331,85935,1,2,3:0:0:0:
259,315,86019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,306,86103,1,2,3:0:0:0:
201,306,86187,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,314,86272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
329,258,86440,1,2,3:0:0:0:
151,334,86609,2,0,P|160:278|165:190,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,131,86946,6,0,P|168:181|244:136,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,61,87452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
381,61,87536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
381,61,87620,2,0,L|301:49,1,80,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,172,87957,2,0,L|493:160,1,80,8|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
445,297,88294,6,0,P|373:263|288:273,1,160,2|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,350,88800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,350,88884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,350,88968,1,2,3:0:0:0:
66,280,89137,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,167,89305,1,8,0:0:0:0:
163,258,89474,1,2,3:0:0:0:
31,195,89643,6,0,P|23:116|67:52,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,135,90148,2,0,P|170:146|128:144,1,80,0|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
242,21,90485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,123,90654,2,0,P|314:202|308:300,1,160,6|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
406,337,91159,5,2,3:0:0:0:
203,248,91328,2,0,P|206:287|214:343,1,80,8|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
217,349,91581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,350,91665,1,2,0:0:0:0:
386,260,91834,1,2,3:0:0:0:
267,147,92002,2,0,P|227:147|187:158,1,80,8|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
45,305,92339,5,2,0:0:0:0:
240,244,92508,1,2,0:0:0:0:
138,71,92676,2,0,P|109:99|89:135,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,316,93013,5,8,0:0:0:0:
262,102,93182,1,0,3:0:0:0:
262,102,93266,1,0,3:0:0:0:
262,102,93350,1,8,0:0:0:0:
492,200,93519,6,0,P|416:213|315:226,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,193,94025,1,8,0:0:0:0:
394,117,94193,1,6,0:0:0:0:
359,347,94362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
262,102,94530,5,8,0:0:0:0:
262,102,94614,1,8,0:0:0:0:
262,102,94699,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,252,94867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,252,94952,1,8,0:0:0:0:
199,349,95204,5,2,0:0:0:0:
175,343,95288,1,2,0:0:0:0:
151,337,95373,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,95457,12,0,100598,0:0:0:0:
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  1. 00:10:766 (1) - eh you really don't need this NC, it's useless
  2. 00:12:620 (1) - the slider shape can be improved a bit, the S shape doesn't looks nice atm
  3. 01:13:294 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - probably the only pattern that feels out of place, I think you can design it better o.O


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  1. 01:00:317 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - you're making this diff too complicated with patterns like this, which are denser than the insane diff, try to reduce the note density a bit


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  1. your OD is really low here, 4 is more balanced with the AR
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  1. 00:10:766 (1) - eh you really don't need this NC, it's useless
  2. 00:12:620 (1) - the slider shape can be improved a bit, the S shape doesn't looks nice atm
  3. 01:13:294 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - probably the only pattern that feels out of place, I think you can design it better o.O huh... i tried to be better in my effort. but i cant change largely since i wanna keep the flow


hard

  1. 01:00:317 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - you're making this diff too complicated with patterns like this, which are denser than the insane diff, try to reduce the note density a bit remove the triples


normal

  1. your OD is really low here, 4 is more balanced with the AR
no comment means fixed, Thanks Natsu!
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