Machico - Million Smile

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Toyosaki Aki
owo!

Insane
  1. widescreen supportこれだけcheck外れてる
  2. 00:02:002 (2) - Ctrl+Hしたほうが見た目好きかな~
  3. 00:05:963 (5,6,7,8) - ドランム拾ってるとしたら00:06:131 (7) - 鳴ってないのと00:06:300 - skipしてない?
    00:15:991 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - と同じパターンにしたほうが良いかも 今のままだとplayしてて少し違和感がが
  4. めちゃくちゃどうでもいいから無視してもらっていいんだけど00:04:867 (2,3) - なんとなく配置が窮屈な感じがしたのでもうちょっとスペース使ってこんな感じとか
  5. たのしい!
RepL4y's Gonkanau
  1. 00:06:131 (3) - 鳴ってないような? 00:05:963 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - が偶数連打みたいになっててやりにくかったでつ
    個人的には00:15:991 (4,1,2,3,1) - みたいな音取りのが合ってると思う パターン変えないにしても00:05:541 (1,1) - はちょっと離れすぎかも
  2. 01:34:867 (1) - 多分ncこっち?01:35:204 (2) -
  3. さすがうまい
Normal
  1. 00:36:047 (2) - circle2つにするとclap強調できてよいかも
  2. 00:48:519 (5) - これcircleにしたほうがflow的にも良いと思う
  3. 01:21:890 (2,3) - 遠ぃ(誤差)
GL~!!!
Lemaire
@とよさきさん
全部直しました~!ありがとう!

@じょーかーさん
了解です 8-)

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Artist:Machico
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Version:RepL4y's Insane
Source:この素晴らしい世界に祝福を! -この欲深いゲームに審判を!-
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Momochikun
hi, m4m from ur queue

[Insane]
00:02:002 (2,3) - add drum clap on their slider tail
00:05:204 (3) - its better like thsi imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784681
00:16:834 - finish ?
00:20:710 (1) - whistle at head
01:30:654 (4) - 01:31:159 (1) - swap nc, its better because (4) indicate new pattern imo
01:34:952 - add note ? there're drum playing

[Hard]
00:00:485 (1,2,3) - flip vertically ?
00:25:598 (3,4,1) - its confusing here, i thought from 00:25:935 (4,1) - was 1/2 jump because the way you spaced it before
00:37:564 (2,3,4) - the auto stack make it looks bad
00:50:373 (1,2) - swap nc, like your insane diff

[Normal]
00:02:845 (5) - try 1/2 slider
00:32:002 (4) - change this into a 1/1 slider to follow instrument better

nice
Lemaire
ちょっと変えたのでupdateお願いします~!

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Title:Million Smile
TitleUnicode:Million Smile
Artist:Machico
ArtistUnicode:Machico
Creator:joker-
Version:RepL4y's Insane
Source:この素晴らしい世界に祝福を! -この欲深いゲームに審判を!-
Tags:opening RepL4y
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Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED

Toyosaki Aki wrote:

owo!

Insane
  1. widescreen supportこれだけcheck外れてる
  2. 00:02:002 (2) - Ctrl+Hしたほうが見た目好きかな~
  3. 00:05:963 (5,6,7,8) - ドランム拾ってるとしたら00:06:131 (7) - 鳴ってないのと00:06:300 - skipしてない?
    00:15:991 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - と同じパターンにしたほうが良いかも 今のままだとplayしてて少し違和感がが
  4. めちゃくちゃどうでもいいから無視してもらっていいんだけど00:04:867 (2,3) - なんとなく配置が窮屈な感じがしたのでもうちょっとスペース使ってこんな感じとか 個人的に今回この配置試したいのでとりあえずkeepでお願いします
  5. たのしい!
Normal
  1. 00:36:047 (2) - circle2つにするとclap強調できてよいかも
  2. 00:48:519 (5) - これcircleにしたほうがflow的にも良いと思う ボーカルをフォローしてる感を出したい(白目)
  3. 01:21:890 (2,3) - 遠ぃ(誤差)
GL~!!!
ほぼ全部直しました! ありがとう!! :)

Momochikun wrote:

hi, m4m from ur queue

[Insane]
00:02:002 (2,3) - add drum clap on their slider tail
00:05:204 (3) - its better like thsi imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784681
00:16:834 - finish ? it's not my preference ><
00:20:710 (1) - whistle at head
01:30:654 (4) - 01:31:159 (1) - swap nc, its better because (4) indicate new pattern imo
01:34:952 - add note ? there're drum playing change to kick slider

[Hard]
00:00:485 (1,2,3) - flip vertically ?
00:25:598 (3,4,1) - its confusing here, i thought from 00:25:935 (4,1) - was 1/2 jump because the way you spaced it before
00:37:564 (2,3,4) - the auto stack make it looks bad
00:50:373 (1,2) - swap nc, like your insane diff

[Normal]
00:02:845 (5) - try 1/2 slider hmm... then they are too density topically only here i guess
00:32:002 (4) - change this into a 1/1 slider to follow instrument better i know, but i prefer to follow base sound(?)...

nice thank uwu
most fixed!
thanks Mochi!

@りぷれいさん
更新しました~
Lama Poluna

Hello, from metadata help queue.


Metadata is right.
Tags: 園田智也 Tomoya Sonoda OP Kono Subarashii Sekai ni Syukufuku Yokubukai Game Shinpan wo PS4 PS Vita PlayStation NIPPON COLUMBIA KONOSUBA God's blessing on this wonderful world
Source:
1) http://5pb.jp/games/konosuba/product/
Ohwow
m4m

[normal]
01:07:058 (5,6) - feels weird, I feel like you should just do 1/2 slider + 1/1 slider (or similar to what you did before) because I was expecting the sliders to follow the vocals, but all of the sudden it doesn't. just my opinion.

[hard]
00:49:530 (2,3,4) - I kinda find it weird to stack 2 & 3 and have a jump on 4. If anything, you should stack 3&4 instead and have a jump between 2&3 to emphasize the vocal on 3, whereas 4 has no vocal


[RepL4y's Insane]
00:03:688 (2,3,4,5,6) - Should lower note 4 down, cause you don't want spacing of 00:03:856 (3,4,5) - be bigger than 00:04:362 (6,1) -
00:06:216 (4,5,1) - Uneven visual spacing, looks a bit weird.
00:09:249 - 00:09:418 - Shouuld be clickable to follow the melody
00:11:946 (2,3,4) - Should be 2 1/2 sliders tbh to follow the melody.
00:47:339 (4,1) - weird overlap
00:47:508 (5,1) - I'm feeling 5 should just be a circle and 1 should be pushed back to the red tick to follow that background melody, cause there isn't really any major sound to map to on the white tick.
00:52:901 (5,1) - Not liking how this isn't following the vocal that well. A circle + a 1/2 slider + circle would be better than 2 1/2 sliders
00:55:598 (5,1) - ^ imo vocals are the highlight so it should be followed, but if you're not following vocal, i guess ignore.
00:53:912 (5,6) - can line up a bit better.
01:34:867 (6) - I would just put a double there. since it's the same sound as 01:34:614 (4,5) -

[Insane]
00:53:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Not liking how these notes are kinda there for difficulty rather than following the music. It's not really following the vocals or the drums (missing 1/4 00:53:828 - ) 00:54:081 (6) - there's no sound here. I suggest put some 1/4 beats and some sliders to better map to the music. Applies to all other similar jumps.

really good mapset, couldn't find much. maybe just work on the higher diffs a bit imo. lower diffs are really good. GL here's a star
Alisia
Easy
00:04:530 (3) の始点を 00:04:362 にすると初心者がやりやすくなる。
Normal
00:02:845 (5) を消して 00:03:182 (1) の始点を一つ前の白い目盛りに移す。
00:33:047 (2) を消して 00:35:541 (1) の終点を一つ後ろに移動する。
00:50:373 (4) の終点を 00:50:879 にする。
Hard
00:31:581 の Whistle は曲にあっていないと思う。
00:59:221 (4) はない方がいいと思う。
Insane
00:02:845 (5,6,7,8) Whistle を外す
01:02:171 (5) NCにする

Good Luck.
Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED
@Lama Poluna
thanks dude! added tags!
@Ohwow
applied all~
@sers zgk
rejected all since there are no reasons in your all suggestions
理由を書いてくれないとそれに対する返答ができないのでmodを書く際に理由付けをできるだけするようにしましょう

thanks everybody~

@りぷれいさん
tagsだけこっちでいじらせてもらいました
もしそっちで何か変更していたならtagだけコピペしてくれたら問題ないです!
Lemaire

Ohwow wrote:

m4m

[RepL4y's Insane]
00:03:688 (2,3,4,5,6) - Should lower note 4 down, cause you don't want spacing of 00:03:856 (3,4,5) - be bigger than 00:04:362 (6,1) - ?
00:06:216 (4,5,1) - Uneven visual spacing, looks a bit weird. ok
00:09:249 - 00:09:418 - Shouuld be clickable to follow the melody it matches song , so no problem
00:11:946 (2,3,4) - Should be 2 1/2 sliders tbh to follow the melody. ^
00:47:339 (4,1) - weird overlap ok
00:47:508 (5,1) - I'm feeling 5 should just be a circle and 1 should be pushed back to the red tick to follow that background melody, cause there isn't really any major sound to map to on the white tick. ok-
00:52:901 (5,1) - Not liking how this isn't following the vocal that well. A circle + a 1/2 slider + circle would be better than 2 1/2 sliders not follow vocals but It following the drums
00:55:598 (5,1) - ^ imo vocals are the highlight so it should be followed, but if you're not following vocal, i guess ignore. ^
00:53:912 (5,6) - can line up a bit better.
01:34:867 (6) - I would just put a double there. since it's the same sound as 01:34:614 (4,5) - its my fav

really good mapset, couldn't find much. maybe just work on the higher diffs a bit imo. lower diffs are really good. GL here's a star
thx~
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Lasse
insane
yea would be nice if you didn't ignore the unique drum 1/4 rhythms on spots like 00:52:480 -00:55:176 - etc , just adding a circle on these would be so much better
00:08:575 (1,2,3) - seems unfitting cause high spacing circle on 2 takes away so much from melody starting on the next note. stacking 00:09:081 (2) - on 1 tail would be nicer
00:17:845 (4,5,1,2) - no idea what this is supposed to follow, it mixed vocals snares and kicks into one jump pattern and then you map 00:18:688 - as a sliderend despite vocal and piano
00:28:126 (2,3,4,5) - similar here, you start it on a vocal but then sliderend vocal on 00:28:631 (5) - puts much more emphasis on the drum?
similar things happen for most of this part, the rhythm you went for just doesn't feel like it utilizes the song very well
I don#t even know why things like 00:42:620 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - have to jump spam mixing multiple layers
00:43:800 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - this is nice though
00:49:193 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - similarly this just mixed everything into jump spam not differentiating different layers in any way (like angles, spacing, sliders, ...)
rhythms like 00:53:070 (4,1,2) - have similar issues so, idk what you want to do with this but it's pretty tilting lol
01:14:390 - would also be nice to have these things not skipped
part after chorus also ignores all the cute 1/4 drum rhythms

repl4y
hp6 would make more sense
00:06:384 (1,2) - 3/4 sliders that skip over such noticeable beats just to then end on nothing are so gross :/ 1/1 slider or 1/2 + circle make so much more sense
00:09:081 (2) - would make so much more sense to click the red tick for melody instead
00:12:114 (3,4) - similar
00:10:008 (1) - there is so much wrong with this I don't even know where to start , why is it randomly overmappe, why is the blue tick nc'd which also makes it ass to read
00:15:822 (2,3,4) - this one is even worse cause the song has clear 1/2 emphasis
ok basically your whole rhythm doesn't make much sense to me since you do similar stuff for the whole map
the way you overmap triples in the chorus also completely ignores how the drums actually tend to play doubles there so lol
00:56:946 (6,7,8,9) - alright

hard
00:25:261 (2,4) - seems a bit like a sudden reading spike. could just move 4 somewhere else or maybe overlap http://i.imgur.com/zvmr9b1.jpg

normal
00:49:699 (2,3) - why not something like http://i.imgur.com/0Gokyfr.jpg seems nicer with melody/vocals
00:51:216 (5,6) - now this seems a bit too intense for the music just building up into the chorus, 1/1 slider would be nicer

easy looks alright even though it could probably have some more gaps > 1/1

gl
Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED
Big thanks Lasse! I will consider your meaning deeply again when I arrived my home.
I wanna reply the mod right now however I can't so that I'm back to my hometown for several days in order to have some works at here...


i apologize what im delay for replying your mod... as the conclusion that i considered some elements, i decided to remap some parts.(maybe i will remap on the whole lel)
the diff has not only lacks of inconsistent rhythm pattern for mainly issues, but also looks bad for aesthetics stuffs right now.

thanks for mod!

edit: okay done remap top diff ready for mod!
Lemaire
@Lasse
all fixed. thx mod!

@じょーかーさん
遅くなって申し訳ないです :o
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286,33,74643,6,0,P|275:107|314:183,1,160,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,180,75148,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,95,75317,2,10,P|427:101|461:122,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,296,75654,1,0,2:3:0:0:
370,296,75738,1,0,2:3:0:0:
370,296,75822,2,0,L|306:303,1,47.9999985351563,0|0,2:3|2:3,0:0:0:0:
257,358,75991,2,0,L|209:352,1,47.9999985351563,0|0,2:3|2:3,0:0:0:0:
136,306,76159,6,0,P|142:227|146:134,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,56,76665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
91,56,76749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
91,56,76834,2,0,P|50:64|-1:66,2,80,2|2|8,3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,6,77339,6,0,P|266:18|373:18,1,160,2|2,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
462,96,77845,1,8,0:0:0:0:
333,234,78013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
333,234,78098,1,0,0:0:0:0:
333,234,78182,2,0,P|332:194|341:156,1,80,2|2,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
454,219,78519,2,0,P|462:257|461:297,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,362,78856,6,0,P|282:314|206:326,1,160,2|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,361,79362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
85,361,79446,1,0,0:0:0:0:
85,361,79530,2,0,P|92:322|96:267,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,114,79867,1,2,3:0:0:0:
16,220,80036,6,0,P|100:238|164:193,1,160,2|2,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
220,70,80541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
334,173,80710,1,2,3:0:0:0:
334,173,80794,1,2,0:0:0:0:
334,173,80879,2,0,L|324:268,1,80,2|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
469,313,81216,2,0,L|460:233,1,80,8|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
443,86,81553,6,0,B|385:91|385:91|345:75|345:75|282:82,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,149,82058,1,0,0:0:0:0:
102,149,82143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
102,149,82227,2,0,L|204:160,1,80,2|2,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
334,173,82564,1,8,0:0:0:0:
211,83,82732,1,2,3:0:0:0:
203,235,82901,6,0,P|204:172|208:110,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,83,83238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
334,173,83407,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,188,83491,1,0,0:0:0:0:
330,203,83575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,343,83744,1,2,3:0:0:0:
437,197,83912,2,0,P|438:154|423:116,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,43,84249,6,0,P|242:54|149:56,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,143,84755,1,0,0:0:0:0:
1,143,84839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
1,143,84923,2,0,P|41:149|86:148,1,80,2|2,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
251,149,85261,1,8,0:0:0:0:
158,56,85429,6,0,P|121:122|136:215,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,331,85935,1,2,3:0:0:0:
259,315,86019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,306,86103,1,2,3:0:0:0:
201,306,86187,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,314,86272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
329,258,86440,1,2,3:0:0:0:
151,334,86609,2,0,P|160:278|165:190,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,131,86946,6,0,P|168:181|244:136,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,61,87452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
381,61,87536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
381,61,87620,2,0,L|301:49,1,80,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,172,87957,2,0,L|493:160,1,80,8|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
445,297,88294,6,0,P|373:263|288:273,1,160,2|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,350,88800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,350,88884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,350,88968,1,2,3:0:0:0:
66,280,89137,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,167,89305,1,8,0:0:0:0:
163,258,89474,1,2,3:0:0:0:
31,195,89643,6,0,P|23:116|67:52,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,135,90148,2,0,P|170:146|128:144,1,80,0|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
242,21,90485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,123,90654,2,0,P|314:202|308:300,1,160,6|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
406,337,91159,5,2,3:0:0:0:
203,248,91328,2,0,P|206:287|214:343,1,80,8|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
217,349,91581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,350,91665,1,2,0:0:0:0:
386,260,91834,1,2,3:0:0:0:
263,151,92002,2,0,P|223:151|183:162,1,80,8|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
77,291,92339,5,6,0:0:0:0:
115,120,92508,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,237,92676,1,8,0:0:0:0:
37,195,92845,5,0,0:0:0:0:
175,316,93014,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,136,93182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
247,141,93266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
273,148,93350,1,8,0:0:0:0:
486,203,93519,6,0,P|409:190|334:230,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,334,94025,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,312,94193,2,0,P|291:230|296:145,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,129,94614,1,2,0:0:0:0:
295,129,94699,1,2,0:0:0:0:
158,24,94867,2,0,L|167:88,1,40,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,239,95204,5,2,0:0:0:0:
183,239,95289,1,2,0:0:0:0:
183,239,95373,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,95457,12,0,100766,0:0:0:0:
Ryuusei Aika
m4m
map here

Easy
00:27:620 (1,3) - why not making two symmetry shapes lol current one looks a little weird

Normal
00:45:991 - two green lines
00:46:075 - ^
00:53:912 (5) - buy considering your usage of rhythm at 00:56:609 (5,6) - , i think maybe you can use the same rhythm here to make the beat at 00:54:249 - be clickable too?
01:04:699 (5) - ^

Repl4y
01:31:581 (3,4) - stack?

Grin
00:10:092 (1,2) - rhythm here seems quite simple comparing with the other parts of this section. try to use something like four 3/4 sliders?

good luck :3
Asuka_-
ひ quick m4m
top diff

全て提案なので、めんどかったら無視してくださいww
count down と wide screeen チェック入ってます(自分ここらへんよくわからないけど指摘してる人多いから一応w)

00:31:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - このままでもokだと思うんですが、00:32:339 - がclickableでもいいかなーとか思ったり思わなかったりw
https://i.gyazo.com/f2fc231cefb2f9038d4 ... 945def.png


00:51:384 (2,3,4) - ここ確かにwhistleの音あるんですけど、直後のkiaiを強調するために少し音量を下げませんか? ちょっと大きすぎる様な印象を受けました。


00:57:114 - 意図的だとは思うんですがやっぱりkiaiの中だし 一応音っぽいのあるので拾った方が良いかも。。。?
00:56:946 (8) - を1/2に変えて次の(1)に軽く重ねるといいかもです。 https://i.gyazo.com/4bf51bbc67060a0bc1a2fe9356f427ad.png

頑張ってください!!
あとdont say lazyの譜面 starありがとです~( *´艸`)
Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED

Ryuusei Aika wrote:

m4m
map here

Easy
00:27:620 (1,3) - why not making two symmetry shapes lol current one looks a little weird oh really? they are a just my taste...

Normal
00:45:991 - two green lines my bad
00:46:075 - ^ ^
00:53:912 (5) - buy considering your usage of rhythm at 00:56:609 (5,6) - , i think maybe you can use the same rhythm here to make the beat at 00:54:249 - be clickable too? id like to mean they are consistency with 00:53:912 (5) - and 01:04:699 (5) - at my all diffs cuz of avoiding monotonousness. but i will reconsider them.
01:04:699 (5) - ^

Grin
00:10:092 (1,2) - rhythm here seems quite simple comparing with the other parts of this section. try to use something like four 3/4 sliders? this part is simplified intentionally since this part is not any 1/2 sounds and complicated rhythm doesnt suit for this part in my thoght

good luck :3
big thanks :3

Asuka_- wrote:

ひ quick m4m
top diff

全て提案なので、めんどかったら無視してくださいww
count down と wide screeen チェック入ってます(自分ここらへんよくわからないけど指摘してる人多いから一応w)両方消しときましたw

00:31:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - このままでもokだと思うんですが、00:32:339 - がclickableでもいいかなーとか思ったり思わなかったりw うーん…自分の譜面だとサビ以外メロディーとボーカルをメインにフォローしてるんでここでそこのドラムclickableにしなくてもいいんじゃないかと思うんですが、どうでしょうか…
https://i.gyazo.com/f2fc231cefb2f9038d4 ... 945def.png


00:51:384 (2,3,4) - ここ確かにwhistleの音あるんですけど、直後のkiaiを強調するために少し音量を下げませんか? ちょっと大きすぎる様な印象を受けました。 ですね、下げました


00:57:114 - 意図的だとは思うんですがやっぱりkiaiの中だし 一応音っぽいのあるので拾った方が良いかも。。。? めっちゃ聞きなおしましたけどここに音あります…?ごめんなさいぼくにはわからなかったです。。。
00:56:946 (8) - を1/2に変えて次の(1)に軽く重ねるといいかもです。 https://i.gyazo.com/4bf51bbc67060a0bc1a2fe9356f427ad.png

頑張ってください!!
あとdont say lazyの譜面 starありがとです~( *´艸`)
いえいえ~こちらこそこちらの譜面に星投げてくれてありがとうです~!がんばります!
@りぷれいさん カウントダウンとワイドスクリーンサポートだけチェック外させてもらいました~
rollpan
owo/

[Grin]
  1. 00:10:092 (1,2) - ここ休憩入れるよりも1/2スライダー4つの方がいいと思う!
  2. 00:50:373 (8) - 個人的にはスライダーじゃなくてサークルで溜め作る方が好き
  3. 00:57:114 - ここ何かしらあってもいいと思います!前に1/2スライダー置いてもサークル置いてもも違和感なく出来ると思います
  4. その前のパートでは直線スライダーほとんど使ってなかったのでサビでもっと増やしてもいいかな?って思いました
  5. 01:13:294 (6,7,1) - 今までのパターン的にスタックよりもちょっとずらしたほうが自然?


短くてごめんね~
Nanashima Asami
あはん
[Grin]
  1. 00:00:654 (1) - じゃなくて00:01:665 (3) - にNC?
  2. 変えるのめんどそうではあるが
    00:01:665 (3) - を1/1にして00:02:002 - のスネアを拾ったり
    00:02:508 - からのドラムの三連を拾ったりするのはどうだろうか
    例→http://puu.sh/xr8Ob/fa29bef628.jpg(出だしからの画像だす)
  3. 00:05:036 - ここだけS:C2じゃね?いまだとスネアのとこにバスドラム鳴ってるっぽい
  4. 00:11:272 - か00:10:598 - かのどっちかはせめてとったほうが良さげ?サークル置くだけでも変わるかも
    いまのだと急に密度薄くなってる感ある気がする
  5. 00:13:126 (2) - remove whistle
  6. 00:21:721 (5) - NCからの00:22:227 (1) - NC消してからの00:22:901 (2) - NCとかはどうだろうか 好みの問題かもしれないが読みやすいかも
  7. 00:29:643 (3) - 頭じゃなくてケツにwhistleかも?
  8. 00:35:204 (4) - NCして00:35:541 (1) - NCとる?次のオブジェクトもNCついてるし頻繁かも
  9. 01:18:856 (1) - CTRL+Gはどうかしら、flowてきに
  10. バリうめえ

umee
Meg
あ く ま で す べ て S U G G E S T I O N で す

Grin

  1. 00:00:654 (1) - ここにNCを入れる意味はないと思う。デザイン的にもない方が普通にスッキリしてる
  2. 00:06:047 (3,4,5) - 特に00:06:216 (4,5) - に目立った音もないしここは1/8reverseとかどう?
  3. 00:07:564 (2,3) - 00:08:238 (5,6) - 提案を2つほど。ご一考ください
    【提案1】全部1/2sliderにする
    【提案2】00:08:238 (5) - だけ音が高いのを利用して00:07:564 (2,3) - を1/2sliderにする
  4. 00:16:412 (5,6) - 00:16:665 (7,8) - 個人的な美学だけどこういう3連打を続けるなら同じようなスペーシングにした方が綺麗に見えるかも?https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013144
  5. 00:21:047 (2,3) - naziだけどもうちょい上にしたいかな?前のsliderと近く見える
  6. 00:21:721 (5,6,7,1) - aimしてて少し窮屈に感じた。恐らく00:21:890 (6,7) - の角度の問題だからいっそのこと00:22:058 (7) - を00:21:384 (4) - のケツにstackさせるのもアリ
  7. 00:27:283 (5) - snare強調でもう少し飛ばさない?00:27:114 (4,6) - の正三角形に当たる位置(473:114)とかどうでしょ
  8. 00:31:497 (1,2,3) - softのwhistleいいね。でもsamplesetをdrumにしてあげるともっとバックの音を綺麗にフォローできると思う。ということでsampleset:drum, additions:softのwhistleとかどうでしょう
  9. 00:37:901 (4,5,6) - さっきと同じ指摘だけどどっちでもいいよ
  10. 00:40:598 (5,6) - 飛ばすなら00:40:766 (6,1) - のスペーシングかな。大体だけど80:80あたり
  11. 00:44:811 - 俺ならここはsnareより00:44:643 - と同じくclapの音を鳴らしたい!そうしたい!
  12. 00:49:867 (5) - add NC? 単発続くときはNCつけると見やすくなる理論(謎)
  13. 00:51:553 (4) - シンバルあるよ! add finish
  14. 00:56:946 (8,1) - こういうaimブレイクを使うときはシンプルにsliderの頭にstackさせてあげた方が気持ちいいと思う
  15. 01:00:654 (5) - シンバルに合わせてadd NCするのもアリ。アリ寄りのアリ。
  16. 01:01:834 (4) - ^
  17. 01:03:350 (3) - Ctrl+Gした方が01:02:676 (1,2) - からの流れ的に自然じゃない?
  18. 01:11:777 (5) - もうこれも3/4slider+circleにしちゃわない?そうするなら01:11:272 (3,5) - にadd NCしてあげた方がデザイン的にGOOD (*'∀')b
  19. 01:34:867 (9,1,2,3) - こういうのってスペーシングが近いほどmiss readingする危険性が高まるのでもうちょっと離してあげたい。星型の中心に置いてるのはわかるから変えにくいかもしれないけど・・・変えるなら01:34:024 (3) - の位置に置くかな
gl!
Topic Starter
Eir_DELETED

Shirasaka Koume wrote:

owo/

[Grin]
  1. 00:10:092 (1,2) - ここ休憩入れるよりも1/2スライダー4つの方がいいと思う! 自分的には休憩入れたほうが好きだったんですけどほかの人にも言われたんで変えます!
  2. 00:50:373 (8) - 個人的にはスライダーじゃなくてサークルで溜め作る方が好き たしかに!
  3. 00:57:114 - ここ何かしらあってもいいと思います!前に1/2スライダー置いてもサークル置いてもも違和感なく出来ると思います あすかさんにも言われたんですけど僕の耳がおかしいだけっぽいですね、1/2すらいだーにかえました
  4. その前のパートでは直線スライダーほとんど使ってなかったのでサビでもっと増やしてもいいかな?って思いました えっと…とりあえずkeepでおねがいします!
  5. 01:13:294 (6,7,1) - 今までのパターン的にスタックよりもちょっとずらしたほうが自然? その配置パターンは3連打 +3連最後にスライダーのところでつかうようにしてます!


短くてごめんね~ めっちゃ助かりましたありがとうです!

Nanashima Asami wrote:

あはん
[Grin]
  1. 00:00:654 (1) - じゃなくて00:01:665 (3) - にNC? たしかに、全diffそうした
  2. 変えるのめんどそうではあるが
    00:01:665 (3) - を1/1にして00:02:002 - のスネアを拾ったり
    00:02:508 - からのドラムの三連を拾ったりするのはどうだろうか これもいいけど、明確にメインメロディーでとってるし無視してもいいんじゃないかなぁ。。。って思ってみたり
    例→http://puu.sh/xr8Ob/fa29bef628.jpg(出だしからの画像だす)
  3. 00:05:036 - ここだけS:C2じゃね?いまだとスネアのとこにバスドラム鳴ってるっぽい たしかに・・・
  4. 00:11:272 - か00:10:598 - かのどっちかはせめてとったほうが良さげ?サークル置くだけでも変わるかも 僕の感性いかれてたみたいです変えました
    いまのだと急に密度薄くなってる感ある気がする
  5. 00:13:126 (2) - remove whistle おk
  6. 00:21:721 (5) - NCからの00:22:227 (1) - NC消してからの00:22:901 (2) - NCとかはどうだろうか 好みの問題かもしれないが読みやすいかも 視覚てきにもそのほうがきれいだね、変えました
  7. 00:29:643 (3) - 頭じゃなくてケツにwhistleかも? hitsoundむりたすけて
  8. 00:35:204 (4) - NCして00:35:541 (1) - NCとる?次のオブジェクトもNCついてるし頻繁かも うおおおおおすげええええええ
  9. 01:18:856 (1) - CTRL+Gはどうかしら、flowてきに ちょっとそれだと遠すぎたのでCtrlGして前後調整しました
  10. バリうめえ 涙出そう

umee 感謝感激

Meg wrote:

あ く ま で す べ て S U G G E S T I O N で す

Grin

  1. 00:00:654 (1) - ここにNCを入れる意味はないと思う。デザイン的にもない方が普通にスッキリしてる 全diffそうしました
  2. 00:06:047 (3,4,5) - 特に00:06:216 (4,5) - に目立った音もないしここは1/8reverseとかどう? ここすごい迷った。こういうピアノを1/8で処理していいものなのか経験浅すぎてわかんなかったけど、そっちのほうが譜面的に面白くなりそうなので変えました。
  3. 00:07:564 (2,3) - 00:08:238 (5,6) - 提案を2つほど。ご一考ください 
    【提案1】全部1/2sliderにする 
    【提案2】00:08:238 (5) - だけ音が高いのを利用して00:07:564 (2,3) - を1/2sliderにする こっちで!
  4. 00:16:412 (5,6) - 00:16:665 (7,8) - 個人的な美学だけどこういう3連打を続けるなら同じようなスペーシングにした方が綺麗に見えるかも?https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013144 個人的にスライダーエンドの連打はスタックさせるのが好きなんでとりあえずkeepで!
  5. 00:21:047 (2,3) - naziだけどもうちょい上にしたいかな?前のsliderと近く見える たしかに
  6. 00:21:721 (5,6,7,1) - aimしてて少し窮屈に感じた。恐らく00:21:890 (6,7) - の角度の問題だからいっそのこと00:22:058 (7) - を00:21:384 (4) - のケツにstackさせるのもアリ stackさせるのがなんか個人的にいいflowのように思えなかったんで、ここら辺全体を調整して少し窮屈な感じは緩和できたかもしれない
  7. 00:27:283 (5) - snare強調でもう少し飛ばさない?00:27:114 (4,6) - の正三角形に当たる位置(473:114)とかどうでしょ おk!
  8. 00:31:497 (1,2,3) - softのwhistleいいね。でもsamplesetをdrumにしてあげるともっとバックの音を綺麗にフォローできると思う。ということでsampleset:drum, additions:softのwhistleとかどうでしょう いまだにsumplesetとadditionsを使いこなせてないあたり問題だわ、直しました
  9. 00:37:901 (4,5,6) - さっきと同じ指摘だけどどっちでもいいよ ^
  10. 00:40:598 (5,6) - 飛ばすなら00:40:766 (6,1) - のスペーシングかな。大体だけど80:80あたり いいね~
  11. 00:44:811 - 俺ならここはsnareより00:44:643 - と同じくclapの音を鳴らしたい!そうしたい! 僕はsnareを鳴らしたい!
  12. 00:49:867 (5) - add NC? 単発続くときはNCつけると見やすくなる理論(謎) すげえ
  13. 00:51:553 (4) - シンバルあるよ! add finish 全く気が付きませんでした
  14. 00:56:946 (8,1) - こういうaimブレイクを使うときはシンプルにsliderの頭にstackさせてあげた方が気持ちいいと思う 1/2スライダー入れたのでaimブレイクは消失しました
  15. 01:00:654 (5) - シンバルに合わせてadd NCするのもアリ。アリ寄りのアリ。 アリ!
  16. 01:01:834 (4) - ^ ^
  17. 01:03:350 (3) - Ctrl+Gした方が01:02:676 (1,2) - からの流れ的に自然じゃない? たしかに、CtrlG下次のサークルちょっと遠い気がしたの少し近づけました
  18. 01:11:777 (5) - もうこれも3/4slider+circleにしちゃわない?そうするなら01:11:272 (3,5) - にadd NCしてあげた方がデザイン的にGOOD (*'∀')b おっけ!
  19. 01:34:867 (9,1,2,3) - こういうのってスペーシングが近いほどmiss readingする危険性が高まるのでもうちょっと離してあげたい。星型の中心に置いてるのはわかるから変えにくいかもしれないけど・・・変えるなら01:34:024 (3) - の位置に置くかな やっぱりやりにくいのね、かえました
gl! めっちゃよくなった気がする!ありがとう!
みんなほんとに助かりましたmodありがとう!
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