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nanobii - HYPERDRIVE [CatchTheBeat]

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helo

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[ General]

  • Combo Colors
  1. Add custom ones in. You may copy the following code into the corresponding spaces in the .osu files:
    Combo1 : 30,205,223
    Combo2 : 253,193,128
    Combo3 : 202,131,202
    Combo4 : 69,177,158

    Metadata
  2. With regard to the song name, which one is correct: HYPERDRIVE, HYPER DRIVE or HYPER*DRIVE? Maybe we need to confirm it (or actually osu! has something to say?)
  3. For the tags, add: J-NERATION 3 , JNCD-0003

    Design
  4. Remove Countdown and disable Widescreen Support in all of the difficulties.

[ Salad]
  1. the best diff in the entire universe

[ Platter]

  • Gameplay
  1. 00:10:689 (8,1) - Maybe a HDash here? To state the stanza change.
  2. 00:32:586 (3,1) - ^, to fix this: Firstly, move 00:33:103 (1,2,3,4) - to x:304 ; Secondly, change the pattern to something like *this so the HDash can be implemented.
  3. 00:37:931 (4,1) - At least increase the distance here so a dash is required. The current one can be caught by walking, which doesn't emphasize the Finish hitsound at (1).
  4. 00:41:379 (1,2) - Slant them more, the current ones are too straight in gameplay.
  5. 00:47:931 (3,4) - Reduce the distance here slightly.
  6. 02:38:793 (4,5) - Add HDash here to stay consistent with 01:05:344 (5,6) - . You can do this by first moving 02:37:242 (1,2,3,4) - to x:184 ; then move 02:39:310 (5) - to x:252, for aesthetic you can also use the same slider of (6) ; and 02:39:655 (6) - to x:392. Like *this.

[ Rain]

  • Gameplay
  1. 00:49:310 (3,1) - Missed a HDash, as there are HDashes at 00:43:793 (5,1) - , 00:54:827 (5,1) - and 01:00:344 (3,1) - , which are also the same part of the rhythm. You can fix this by first deleting the note at 00:49:655 - , then copy 00:50:000 (2) - and Ctrl+H, finally move the new slider to x:120 to replace the original slider.
  2. 01:03:103 (4,1) - Add a HDash here. Maybe use the slider shape of 01:02:068 (1) - for the note 01:03:103 (4) - , like *this?
  3. 01:09:655 (2,3,4) - This pattern is a bit tricky thus far in a Rain. Try to use other patterns here.
  4. 01:53:103 (1,2) - Same thing as the one mentioned in Platter, slant the sliders more.
  5. 02:05:517 (2,3,4) - ^, this pattern is also very weird so I recommend using other movements after slanting the sliders.
  6. 02:23:103 (3,1) - Yup, add a HDash.
  7. 02:36:896 (4,1) - ^
  8. 02:50:689 (6) - Slant this like 01:16:896 (6) - , the current one is not inclined enough.
  9. 03:01:724 (3,1) - HDash to close up?

[ Overdose]

  • Gameplay
  1. 00:33:793 (2) - To be more aesthetic, maybe use the same slider shape of 00:33:103 (1) - here?
  2. 00:37:241 (1) - Remove NC.
  3. 00:39:310 (6) - , 00:40:689 (7) - ^
  4. 01:51:379 (4,1) - Add a dash here. Generally because 01:50:689 - 01:52:931 - this whole part can be FC'ed without dashing, which is too easy as an Overdose.
  5. 01:53:103 (1,2,1) - Slant them a bit slightly, so they don't look that straight in gameplay.
Topic Starter
Ascendance

alienflybot wrote:

helo

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[ General]

  • Combo Colors
  1. Add custom ones in. You may copy the following code into the corresponding spaces in the .osu files: done.
    Combo1 : 30,205,223
    Combo2 : 253,193,128
    Combo3 : 202,131,202
    Combo4 : 69,177,158

    Metadata
  2. With regard to the song name, which one is correct: HYPERDRIVE, HYPER DRIVE or HYPER*DRIVE? Maybe we need to confirm it (or actually osu! has something to say?) I took the one directly from the contest metadata, so I guess this would be correct but I'll have someone double check.
  3. For the tags, add: J-NERATION 3 , JNCD-0003 yeet

    Design
  4. Remove Countdown and disable Widescreen Support in all of the difficulties. done

[ Platter]

  • Gameplay
  1. 00:10:689 (8,1) - Maybe a HDash here? To state the stanza change. I increased the dash distance, but it was my intention to have the beginning here with no hdashes.
  2. 00:32:586 (3,1) - ^, to fix this: Firstly, move 00:33:103 (1,2,3,4) - to x:304 ; Secondly, change the pattern to something like *this so the HDash can be implemented. I changed it but I tried to keep it closer to my original pattern
  3. 00:37:931 (4,1) - At least increase the distance here so a dash is required. The current one can be caught by walking, which doesn't emphasize the Finish hitsound at (1). Sure
  4. 00:41:379 (1,2) - Slant them more, the current ones are too straight in gameplay. Done
  5. 00:47:931 (3,4) - Reduce the distance here slightly. Yep, fixed the slant on the slider as well
  6. 02:38:793 (4,5) - Add HDash here to stay consistent with 01:05:344 (5,6) - . You can do this by first moving 02:37:242 (1,2,3,4) - to x:184 ; then move 02:39:310 (5) - to x:252, for aesthetic you can also use the same slider of (6) ; and 02:39:655 (6) - to x:392. Like *this. Fixed

[ Rain]

  • Gameplay
  1. 00:49:310 (3,1) - Missed a HDash, as there are HDashes at 00:43:793 (5,1) - , 00:54:827 (5,1) - and 01:00:344 (3,1) - , which are also the same part of the rhythm. You can fix this by first deleting the note at 00:49:655 - , then copy 00:50:000 (2) - and Ctrl+H, finally move the new slider to x:120 to replace the original slider. Did something a bit differently here.
  2. 01:03:103 (4,1) - Add a HDash here. Maybe use the slider shape of 01:02:068 (1) - for the note 01:03:103 (4) - , like *this? Sure, done.
  3. 01:09:655 (2,3,4) - This pattern is a bit tricky thus far in a Rain. Try to use other patterns here. Personally, I don't think it's too challenging, but if someone else points it out, I'll change it for sure
  4. 01:53:103 (1,2) - Same thing as the one mentioned in Platter, slant the sliders more. Done
  5. 02:05:517 (2,3,4) - ^, this pattern is also very weird so I recommend using other movements after slanting the sliders. Yup
  6. 02:23:103 (3,1) - Yup, add a HDash. Added
  7. 02:36:896 (4,1) - ^ Done
  8. 02:50:689 (6) - Slant this like 01:16:896 (6) - , the current one is not inclined enough. Syre
  9. 03:01:724 (3,1) - HDash to close up? Yep

[ Overdose]

  • Gameplay
  1. 00:33:793 (2) - To be more aesthetic, maybe use the same slider shape of 00:33:103 (1) - here? aes
  2. 00:37:241 (1) - Remove NC. ye
  3. 00:39:310 (6) - , 00:40:689 (7) - ^
  4. 01:51:379 (4,1) - Add a dash here. Generally because 01:50:689 - 01:52:931 - this whole part can be FC'ed without dashing, which is too easy as an Overdose. added some dashes
  5. 01:53:103 (1,2,1) - Slant them a bit slightly, so they don't look that straight in gameplay. yes
Thanks for modding~
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NM request from Discord (afb sniped me)

General

Hitsound this beast of a map, duh.

Try a color pallette for combo colors:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 121,255,255
Combo2 : 89,89,255
Combo3 : 255,159,64
Combo4 : 255,128,255

Salad

Your ½ dashes are a bit edgedashy because they can be read as a walk if you're not careful. Raise them to 2.5x instead to gurantee it reads as a dash.

Good Salad


Platter

Your ½ dashes seem a little small to me where some I could easily confuse for walks. Try 2.6x to 2.7x instead.

I don't get why you insist on using hypers that are 1.5x the trigger distance in every Platter you do (or at least the ones in the maps you've given me). Hyperdashes trigger at 3x so your largest hyperdashes should be 3.4x and no higher otherwise it starts to feel like a Rain with the lower AR. Example: Your introductary hyper feels large for a new player to hypers 00:21:724 (3,1) – and should be the basis for emphasis instead of the skill base for the player. 00:31:378 (4,1) – Like here, is where the 3.4x would be appropriate since the sound needs extra emphasis. (I will give credit that your hyperdensity is something I strive for in my Platters, so good job on that)

01:16:896 (6,7,8) – Try .80x spacing to make this a little more comfortable to walk.

01:32:068 (1) – Start this at 01:32:241 – to follow the sound there instead.

01:55:172 (3,4) – Specifically pointing this out when it follows my general comment about hypers because I'm extra triggered by 4x and 5x hypers in a platter. That stuff is for Rains and Overdoses.

02:50:690 (6,7,8) – try .80x spacing


Rain

Personally, I'd tilt the 1/1 sliders a bit because the slider velocity is a little fast just to provide some leniacy when walking. Example, 00:23:275 (1) – is a bit hard because you need to be constant in your movements to catch and even then it feels like you're on the edge of your catcher the entire time.

00:13:103 (4,1) – I don't like this is repeated antiflow three times in a row. I'd CTRL+G (4) and then the reverse slider to accomedate it. A tip one how to do this, you're going to need to make 00:16:551 (1) – flipped to do so from how I did it when playing around with it.


Overdose

Looks good structurely, but some dashes seems a little large to me such as at 00:48:793 (3,4) – and make this distance a little shorter because the note snaps to the larger value on the grid at 02:32:413 (3,4) -
autofanboy
Made some minor changes in my own difficulty based on Roseus's mod and my own fine tuning.
Thanks for mod!

Fix
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 44051
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
Bookmarks: 83448,88275,194482
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:HYPERDRIVE
TitleUnicode:HYPER★DRIVE
Artist:nanobii
ArtistUnicode:nanobii
Creator:Ascendance
Version:Salad
Source:osu!
Tags:happycore happy hardcore hyper drive alienflybot afb monthly beatmapping competition #14 mbc J-NERATION 3 JNCD-0003
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Topic Starter
Ascendance
Updated!
F D Flourite
inb4 the slowest ranking process of a MBC winning entry

You haven't reply to Roseus' mod. Please reply to it before we can do anything.

[General]
  1. Further metadata confirmation is needed?
[Salad]
  1. 01:15:172 (2,3) - Kinda confused about it being whether a jump or a walk
  2. 01:37:241 (2,3) - want to see a jump here, just like how you did on 03:05:517 (2,3,4) -
  3. 01:47:241 (5,1) - I think this movement needs a jump to emphasize, but 01:46:034 (3,4) - doesn't
  4. 03:10:345 (1,2,3) - Same ^. The jump point seems kinda weird. I'd like to emphasize 03:11:034 (3) - instead of 03:10:689 (2) - .
[Platter]
  1. 00:01:379 (2,1) - Why not make it a jump?
  2. 00:27:413 - jump from here to 00:27:586 - is a better option imo. The more emphasized sound is on the stanza
  3. 01:31:896 (3) - Probably remove it? I don't understand what to express with this circle.


[Rain]
  1. 01:31:034 (1,2) - Suggestion. Your current design makes the jump at a weird timing spot
[Overdose]
  1. 01:06:551 (2) - Make this slider slightly turn to the left instead to make the flow on 01:06:551 (2,3) - better? (Just like 01:06:206 (1) - )
I feel like modding a bunch of copypaste things zzz
call me back (for 2nd mod because I'm really tired)
Topic Starter
Ascendance

RoseusJaeger wrote:

NM request from Discord (afb sniped me)

General

Hitsound this beast of a map, duh. it has hitsounds :0

Try a color pallette for combo colors: It has combo colors also xD

[Colours]
Combo1 : 121,255,255
Combo2 : 89,89,255
Combo3 : 255,159,64
Combo4 : 255,128,255

Platter

Your ½ dashes seem a little small to me where some I could easily confuse for walks. Try 2.6x to 2.7x instead.

I don't get why you insist on using hypers that are 1.5x the trigger distance in every Platter you do (or at least the ones in the maps you've given me). Hyperdashes trigger at 3x so your largest hyperdashes should be 3.4x and no higher otherwise it starts to feel like a Rain with the lower AR. Example: Your introductary hyper feels large for a new player to hypers 00:21:724 (3,1) – and should be the basis for emphasis instead of the skill base for the player. 00:31:378 (4,1) – Like here, is where the 3.4x would be appropriate since the sound needs extra emphasis. (I will give credit that your hyperdensity is something I strive for in my Platters, so good job on that) I'm getting better at less hyper spam B)

01:16:896 (6,7,8) – Try .80x spacing to make this a little more comfortable to walk. reduced a tiny bit

01:32:068 (1) – Start this at 01:32:241 – to follow the sound there instead. sure

01:55:172 (3,4) – Specifically pointing this out when it follows my general comment about hypers because I'm extra triggered by 4x and 5x hypers in a platter. That stuff is for Rains and Overdoses. sorrynasai for this one, these have big noises so I gotta keep em b i g

02:50:690 (6,7,8) – try .80x spacing did something similar to the previous


Rain

Personally, I'd tilt the 1/1 sliders a bit because the slider velocity is a little fast just to provide some leniacy when walking. Example, 00:23:275 (1) – is a bit hard because you need to be constant in your movements to catch and even then it feels like you're on the edge of your catcher the entire time. fixed some specific offenders

00:13:103 (4,1) – I don't like this is repeated antiflow three times in a row. I'd CTRL+G (4) and then the reverse slider to accomedate it. A tip one how to do this, you're going to need to make 00:16:551 (1) – flipped to do so from how I did it when playing around with it. okay


Overdose

Looks good structurely, but some dashes seems a little large to me such as at 00:48:793 (3,4) – and make this distance a little shorter because the note snaps to the larger value on the grid at 02:32:413 (3,4) - ok desu

F D Flourite wrote:

inb4 the slowest ranking process of a MBC winning entry T_T send more BNs

You haven't reply to Roseus' mod. Please reply to it before we can do anything.

[General]
  1. Further metadata confirmation is needed? Not sure, I just used the direct metadata from the contest .osz file.
[Platter]
  1. 00:01:379 (2,1) - Why not make it a jump? Sure, done
  2. 00:27:413 - jump from here to 00:27:586 - is a better option imo. The more emphasized sound is on the stanza That makes sense if I was following the percussion, but to me the strong downbeat in the synth noises is on 00:27:413 - , making it an acceptable dash
  3. 01:31:896 (3) - Probably remove it? I don't understand what to express with this circle. If you delete it, the final sound is there :P


[Rain]
  1. 01:31:034 (1,2) - Suggestion. Your current design makes the jump at a weird timing spot did something a bit differently
[Overdose]
  1. 01:06:551 (2) - Make this slider slightly turn to the left instead to make the flow on 01:06:551 (2,3) - better? (Just like 01:06:206 (1) - ) Sure
I feel like modding a bunch of copypaste things zzz
call me back (for 2nd mod because I'm really tired)
Thank you both for modding!
-Sh1n1-

F D Flourite wrote:

inb4 the slowest ranking process of a MBC winning entry T_T send more BNs
yo!
autofanboy

F D Flourite wrote:

[Salad]
  1. 01:15:172 (2,3) - Kinda confused about it being whether a jump or a walk - Moved (3) slightly to the right.
  2. 01:37:241 (2,3) - want to see a jump here, just like how you did on 03:05:517 (2,3,4) - Added.
  3. 01:47:241 (5,1) - I think this movement needs a jump to emphasize, but 01:46:034 (3,4) - doesn't - Done.
  4. 03:10:345 (1,2,3) - Same ^. The jump point seems kinda weird. I'd like to emphasize 03:11:034 (3) - instead of 03:10:689 (2) - . - The dash between (1) and (2) is to emphasize the start of the combo, which is 03:10:345 (1) - . Not making it a 1/2 dash because it would be a bit dense here after such amendment.
Thanks for mod!

Fix
osu file format v14

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F D Flourite
I still don't see the update of Salad by Ascendance. But I have to be absent for about 3~5 days from tomorrow. So if there's any other BN trying to move it forward, please go ahead.
Topic Starter
Ascendance
Whoops, updated

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Kimitakari

F D Flourite wrote:

inb4 the slowest ranking process of a MBC winning entry
Perfect example of why osu!catch maps are rarely seen in Ranked Status. I may mod your map for an extra support.
JBHyperion

F D Flourite wrote:

inb4 the slowest ranking process of a MBC winning entry
Does CBC yuki. contest count? XDDD

I am more than happy to give some quick input on this tomorrow if required.
Topic Starter
Ascendance

JBHyperion wrote:

F D Flourite wrote:

inb4 the slowest ranking process of a MBC winning entry
Does CBC yuki. contest count? XDDD

I am more than happy to give some quick input on this tomorrow if required.
Anything helps!
JBHyperion
Some suggestions as promised

General
  1. Hitsounds in the first section 00:00:000 - 00:05:517 - feel a little too quiet for me, perhaps you could buff them 5% or so

Salad
  1. 00:02:758 (5) - NC here please, this is 12 fruits without it and your following combos are only 4 beats long instead of 8 here
  2. 00:04:137 (7,1) - Unexpectedly high spacing for a walk in the calmest part of the map. Suggest reducing this slightly
  3. 00:07:931 (5,1) - Can your first introduction to dash not be a borderline walk with antiflow please? Really confusing for the player considering it's visually similar to the above spacing and requires precision to avoid an overshoot. Ctrl+H the slider and move it slightly closer
  4. 00:12:758 (4,1) - 00:15:172 (3,1) - 00:18:965 (6,1) - etc. - Are these intended to be walks? If so, they suffer the same problems I mentioned above, since you increased the SV the spacing is larger than it appears and new players will struggle to walk this. If these are intended dashes, please increase the spacing for better contrast
  5. 00:31:379 (3,4) - Unexpected 1/2 dash with antiflow, though this is walkable without too much trouble. A smaller walk with the same direction, or a jump with the antiflow removed like 00:32:586 (7,1) - would work better as this section is still not that intense
  6. 00:55:862 (2,3,4,5) - Curve size could be increased for a nicer aesthetic, looks a bit squashed at present
  7. 00:58:620 (2,3) - Antiflow dash after a wiggle will really punish new players, even if the kiai is intense this is not expected at all. Ctrl+H (3) would be much more accessible
  8. 01:50:000 (3,1) - Even though this is a downbeat, the sound is very weak here and this jump is not expected given your previous emphasis. Giving 01:50:689 (2) - or 01:51:034 (3,4) - 01:52:758 (6,1) - more spacing would fit much better in my opinion
  9. 03:05:862 (3,4) - Same as 00:31:379 (3,4) - in the intro
  10. 03:12:931 (8,1) - You'll need to leave at least 1 whole beat between the last object and the spinner start to ensure rankability. Suggest starting the spinner at 03:13:275 - or removing 03:12:758 (7) - and starting it at 03:12:931 -

Platter
  1. 00:03:792 (3,1) - Appears walkable, but will be quite difficult at this level. Consider increasing the distance here and at 00:05:171 (3,1) - which certainly deserves a dash if 00:00:000 (1,2) - had one due to the increased intensity at the start of the new stanza
  2. 00:07:931 (4,1) - Distance could also be increased slightly here for a clearer dash on the high pitch sound
  3. 00:42:758 (1,2,3,4,5) - Slightly uncomfortable to walk if you're a little slow on the direction change. I'd reduce these distances a tiny bit, since you're still building up to the kiai here
  4. 01:16:982 (7) - Triplet feels forced here, there's no strong sound to support the 1/4 and you didn't do it anywhere previously where it actually was noticeable like 00:43:620 (6) - or where it could have provided more worthwhile emphasis like 00:54:310 (5,6) -
  5. 01:31:379 (2) - Feels weird to me that you mapped the slider head to a weak sound with a dash, but the strong sound is on the tail. Then at 01:31:896 (3) - you just skipped the strong sound altogether, presumably to give some more leniency on the spinner. I feel something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8842436 would work better for consistency
  6. 02:02:068 (2,3,4) - Kinda weird spacing because they are similar in size and the direction changes can make these much harder than necessary to walk if the player is a little slow to react. Reducing (2,3) and increasing (3,4) would be easier to read imo
  7. 02:50:776 (7) - Same as 01:16:982 (7) -
  8. 03:06:034 (3,4) - Spacing could be increased on these for a smoother walk, stop-start pattern looks a bit squashed atm

Rain
  1. 00:07:931 (4,1) - Maybe personal preference, but I'd have expected a hyper here given how strong this sound is relative to the surrounding ones and certainly compared to your next hyper which is at 00:10:862 (4,1) -
  2. 00:21:896 (6,1) - Music is still not that intense here, so given (1) is almost total antiflow, a slightly weaker hyper would be nice to minimise the risk of overshooting and allow the player to get accustomed to the spacing and dash strength
Nothing much to say here, it's pretty solid.

Overdose
  1. 00:07:931 (4,1) - Same comment regarding hyper as in Rain
  2. 01:37:241 (2,3) - Another place that could really benefit from a hyper, especially if you added a white tick note. Would provide some nice contrast in the otherwise calm section to give it real emphasis it deserves. Could also be applied to 01:40:172 (3,4) - 01:41:551 (6,1) - 01:51:379 (4,1) - since at present, this interlude part feels a little flat to me
  3. 02:16:551 (1) - How come you only used a circle here but then followed the last synth note at 02:17:413 (2) - ? Seems weirdly inconsistent when you could have just mapped this part out with a couple more sliders
  4. 03:02:931 (4) - Tail here maps such a strong sound, would benefit more from splitting this up and adding a jump imo
  5. 03:06:034 (3) - 03:08:793 (4) - NC these for maintaining your 4-beat pattern
Call me back if necessary. Hope these suggestions helped! (:
autofanboy

JBHyperion wrote:

Some suggestions as promised

General
  1. Hitsounds in the first section 00:00:000 - 00:05:517 - feel a little too quiet for me, perhaps you could buff them 5% or so - Increased volume

Salad
  1. 00:02:758 (5) - NC here please, this is 12 fruits without it and your following combos are only 4 beats long instead of 8 here - Done
  2. 00:04:137 (7,1) - Unexpectedly high spacing for a walk in the calmest part of the map. Suggest reducing this slightly - Not really a difficult part in my opinion. It is simple to follow and the slider velocity is actually reduced to a suitable amount.
    As a good finisher before entering the next stanza, this would be fit.
  3. 00:07:931 (5,1) - Can your first introduction to dash not be a borderline walk with antiflow please? Really confusing for the player considering it's visually similar to the above spacing and requires precision to avoid an overshoot. Ctrl+H the slider and move it slightly closer - Moved (5) closer to (4) so the movement of (4,5) is actually a walk, giving more time for players to react.
  4. 00:12:758 (4,1) - 00:15:172 (3,1) - 00:18:965 (6,1) - etc. - Are these intended to be walks? If so, they suffer the same problems I mentioned above, since you increased the SV the spacing is larger than it appears and new players will struggle to walk this. If these are intended dashes, please increase the spacing for better contrast - Basically these are not difficult to catch, most of them are having simple paths and are made for Slider Tick Rate 1 (but Ascendance decided to use Slider Tick Rate 2 to stay consistent with other difficulties. I actually prefer using Tick 1 so changing to that would be a lot easier, while not lacking of rhythmical movements.
  5. 00:31:379 (3,4) - Unexpected 1/2 dash with antiflow, though this is walkable without too much trouble. A smaller walk with the same direction, or a jump with the antiflow removed like 00:32:586 (7,1) - would work better as this section is still not that intense - Reduced the distance of (2,3) to make it easier, though not changing the pattern, it is still easy to follow.
  6. 00:55:862 (2,3,4,5) - Curve size could be increased for a nicer aesthetic, looks a bit squashed at present - Fine
  7. 00:58:620 (2,3) - Antiflow dash after a wiggle will really punish new players, even if the kiai is intense this is not expected at all. Ctrl+H (3) would be much more accessible - Doesn't that makes it even harder? The current one is not really that hard to follow... I will just slant 00:58:620 (2) - a bit so it doesn't provide that many movements.
  8. 01:50:000 (3,1) - Even though this is a downbeat, the sound is very weak here and this jump is not expected given your previous emphasis. Giving 01:50:689 (2) - or 01:51:034 (3,4) - 01:52:758 (6,1) - more spacing would fit much better in my opinion - Changed this pattern.
  9. 03:05:862 (3,4) - Same as 00:31:379 (3,4) - in the intro - Done
  10. 03:12:931 (8,1) - You'll need to leave at least 1 whole beat between the last object and the spinner start to ensure rankability. Suggest starting the spinner at 03:13:275 - or removing 03:12:758 (7) - and starting it at 03:12:931 - Seems fair.
Thanks for mod!

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Topic Starter
Ascendance

JBHyperion wrote:

Some suggestions as promised

General
  1. Hitsounds in the first section 00:00:000 - 00:05:517 - feel a little too quiet for me, perhaps you could buff them 5% or so

Platter
  1. 00:03:792 (3,1) - Appears walkable, but will be quite difficult at this level. Consider increasing the distance here and at 00:05:171 (3,1) - which certainly deserves a dash if 00:00:000 (1,2) - had one due to the increased intensity at the start of the new stanza Yup, did both
  2. 00:07:931 (4,1) - Distance could also be increased slightly here for a clearer dash on the high pitch sound Increased a bit!
  3. 00:42:758 (1,2,3,4,5) - Slightly uncomfortable to walk if you're a little slow on the direction change. I'd reduce these distances a tiny bit, since you're still building up to the kiai here reduced them just a little bit since I don't feel it's too bad rn
  4. 01:16:982 (7) - Triplet feels forced here, there's no strong sound to support the 1/4 and you didn't do it anywhere previously where it actually was noticeable like 00:43:620 (6) - or where it could have provided more worthwhile emphasis like 00:54:310 (5,6) - Yeah, you're right. I mapped this after the rain so I was probably in the groove of it
  5. 01:31:379 (2) - Feels weird to me that you mapped the slider head to a weak sound with a dash, but the strong sound is on the tail. Then at 01:31:896 (3) - you just skipped the strong sound altogether, presumably to give some more leniency on the spinner. I feel something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8842436 would work better for consistency Even though it's a weaker sound in that string of notes, it does act as a downbeat and it gives a better lead-in to the spinner rather than just a walk. For me, this dash acts as the "end" of this section of music.
  6. 02:02:068 (2,3,4) - Kinda weird spacing because they are similar in size and the direction changes can make these much harder than necessary to walk if the player is a little slow to react. Reducing (2,3) and increasing (3,4) would be easier to read imo Agreed, fixed!
  7. 02:50:776 (7) - Same as 01:16:982 (7) - dab
  8. 03:06:034 (3,4) - Spacing could be increased on these for a smoother walk, stop-start pattern looks a bit squashed atm right, done!

Rain
  1. 00:07:931 (4,1) - Maybe personal preference, but I'd have expected a hyper here given how strong this sound is relative to the surrounding ones and certainly compared to your next hyper which is at 00:10:862 (4,1) - wanna discuss with you later :D
  2. 00:21:896 (6,1) - Music is still not that intense here, so given (1) is almost total antiflow, a slightly weaker hyper would be nice to minimise the risk of overshooting and allow the player to get accustomed to the spacing and dash strength Reduced a bit
Nothing much to say here, it's pretty solid.

Overdose
  1. 00:07:931 (4,1) - Same comment regarding hyper as in Rain Same
  2. 01:37:241 (2,3) - Another place that could really benefit from a hyper, especially if you added a white tick note. Would provide some nice contrast in the otherwise calm section to give it real emphasis it deserves. Could also be applied to 01:40:172 (3,4) - 01:41:551 (6,1) - 01:51:379 (4,1) - since at present, this interlude part feels a little flat to me Sure, added them
  3. 02:16:551 (1) - How come you only used a circle here but then followed the last synth note at 02:17:413 (2) - ? Seems weirdly inconsistent when you could have just mapped this part out with a couple more sliders slidered it up
  4. 03:02:931 (4) - Tail here maps such a strong sound, would benefit more from splitting this up and adding a jump imo sure, did it to the rest too
  5. 03:06:034 (3) - 03:08:793 (4) - NC these for maintaining your 4-beat pattern donedone!
Call me back if necessary. Hope these suggestions helped! (:
Thanks a lot!
ZiRoX
Checking this.

[Salad]
  1. 00:22:068 (1,2) - If you intended this (and all the similar patterns to be dashed), they would benefit from a couple grid spaces more of distance, to make it even clearer.
  2. 00:31:034 (2,3,1) - I don't consider this the best pattern to introduce the first 1/2 dash in this diff, as it requires 2 direction changes. I would either delete (3) and rearrange stuff, or Ctrl+H 00:31:551 (1,2,3) - and move it towards the center to keep the 1/2 dash.
  3. 00:42:758 (1,2,1) - Although I understand that you placed the circle on the red tick because the higher pitched sound is there, to me it sounds way better on the white tick. Also, the pattern requires 2 direction changes, which feels a bit too uncomfortable to play. So I suggest you move (2) to the white tick, have it follow the movement of the slider, and then you can Ctrl+H 00:44:137 (1) - and play with the following notes around a bit.
  4. 00:58:620 (2) - I'd slant this slider a bit more, so that it does look like you can stay still on it to catch it. With the current angle, some players might try to wiggle it which will make the following dash a bit hard to do.
  5. 01:11:724 (1,2) - I'd prefer if you had the slider first, as it adds some leniency to the 1/2 dash, and it also follows the music a bit as there's a held sound in the downbeat. Also applies for similar parts, such as 01:25:517 (1,2) - .
  6. 01:23:448 (2,3) - and 01:25:862 (2,3) - This part of the song is calm, so the dashes aren't really fitting here.
  7. 01:54:137 (3,1) - (1) isn't that intense to require a dash on this, so I'd remove it.
  8. 02:13:792 (1,2) - This is a rather ambiguous distance, and the sound at (2) is rather weak, so I'd reduce the distance to make the walk clearer.
  9. 02:57:241 (2,3) - and 02:59:655 (2,3) - same as previously mentioned.
  10. 03:07:413 (7,1) - This looks rather weird, and it's inconsistent with a previous similar pattern that had no dash at all (01:34:482 (2,3) - ), so I'd make it walkable.
[Platter]
  1. 00:00:000 (1,2,1) - The distances between these objects are so different, yet the sounds are exactly the same. The first one feels way to large, and it can really throw players off being the first jump of the map, while the second one falls a bit short. I'd move 00:00:000 (1,2) - around so the distances are ~x1.9 between each object.
  2. 00:06:379 (3) - Why is there a dash to this? The song isn't really calling it and it's inconsistent with all your previous patterning. I'd Ctrl+G it.
  3. 00:10:517 (7,8) - This dash feels slightly off on its own, since it's on an upbeat. If anything, I would have expected a dash between 00:10:172 (5,6) - .
  4. 00:12:413 (5,6) - Rather ambiguous distance, I'd reduce it a bit to make it more walkable, since having two dashes in a row doesn't fit your patterning for this section.
  5. 00:27:068 (5,1) - This patterns feels odd because the jump emphasizes the synth, while the slider end focuses on the drums. I'd suggest either extending the (1) slider to the red tick, so it follows the synth and keeps the focus on it, or even extend it to the white tick where (2) starts and map a circle on 00:28:275 - (or a slider covering both that note and (3)).
  6. 00:50:862 (3,4) - The dash between these notes is really unfitting, as the sound on the red tick is really weak. Not to mention, the whole movement is unexpected because for a similar sound you had a slider covering it (00:45:344 (3) - ). So I'd go for consistency here and keep the slider.
  7. 00:57:931 (1,2) - Again, the direction change here is really uncalled for. I'd just go for the pattern that you used previously in 00:46:896 (1,2,3) - .
  8. 01:16:379 (5,6,7) - I'd reduce the distance between these objects to add some leniency to the pattern, since it's two direction changes leading to a HDash.
  9. 01:22:758 (1,2) - I'd go for slider and then circle instead, to add leniency and consistency to the pattern.
  10. 01:31:379 (2,3) - This dash is really uncalled, and I think the circle sounds way better on the following white tick.
  11. 01:40:517 (3,4) - Either a repeat slider or going for slider > circle fits better.
  12. 01:52:241 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I find it rather weird that you changed the focus from the synth to the stuff in the back. I would replace 01:52:931 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - with two 3/2 sliders like 01:51:551 (1,2) - , and then switch the focus at 01:54:482 (1,2,3,4) -.
  13. 02:32:586 (8,1,2) - Same suggestion as in 00:58:793 (2,3).
  14. 02:50:173 (5,6,7) - Similar stuff as mentioned for 01:16:379 (5,6,7) -.
  15. 02:56:551 (1,2) - And same stuff as in 01:22:758 (1,2) -.
  16. 03:04:827 (1,2) - This distance is a bit ambiguous to me. I'd move (2) to the right a a bit to make it walkable, while making a larger jump to (3) which probably deserves it due to its higher pitch.
[Rain]
  1. 00:21:379 (5,6) - I'd put the circle first and then the repeat slider, it fits the music better. Try this:
  2. 00:26:034 (1) - Since some people wish death to things or persons they don't agree with, death to extended sliders!
  3. 00:31:551 (1) - ^
  4. 00:39:827 (1) - This feels so off, considering you've used C-shaped sliders for all the sounds like this, even throughout the Kiai. And the antiflow makes it harsher than it should be.
  5. 00:56:379 (1) - ^Same.
  6. 01:22:758 (1,2) - Replace with a single 1/1 slider for consistency please.
  7. 01:33:620 (5,1) - This could use a larger distance, to emphasize the change in the song.
  8. 01:28:275 (1,2,3,4,5) - To me the strongest sounds land on (4) and (5)'s tail (kinda like you did on 01:29:655 (1,2,3) - ), so moving the repeat slider 1/2 earlier and taking one repeat off follows the music more closely (and, of course, re-adding the circle on 01:29:310 - ). The same applies for 01:31:034 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:32:413 (1,2,3,4,5) - , although in this last one the sounds are weaker, but the player would expect it for consistency.
  9. 01:35:000 (3) - One could expect a larger distance to this, based on its pitch. Maybe Ctrl+G it?
  10. 01:38:275 (2,3) - I think this sounds slightly better if you take the circle away and move the slider 1/2 earlier. If you do this, you should move both sliders a bit to the right.
  11. 01:40:517 (1,2) - Slider first follows the music in a better way, and it's more consistent with the rest of your patterns.
  12. 01:50:344 (1) - I would remove this note, as it takes emphasis away from the synth, which you have been following throughout this section.
  13. 01:53:103 (1,2) - Same comment as done for the Platter.
  14. 02:37:241 (1,2,3,4) - Place (4) closer to the triplet, as it can be easy to miss considering the antiflow movement.


[Overdose]
  1. 00:06:551 (4,1) - This should have a larger distance for consistency with the previous ones. It currently feels a bit underwhelming.
  2. 00:22:413 (2,3) - This should be slider first and circle after it, to follow the music better. You're missing a relatively strong sound at 00:22:758 - the way it is now.
  3. 00:25:172 (2,3) - Similar stuff here. Two 1/2 sliders could do.
  4. 00:26:034 (1) - and 00:31:551 (1) - :^)
  5. 00:38:620 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Really weird that you have an HDash between (1,2) and not between (5,1), considering (1) is stronger (and is emphasized that way with your afb's hitsounding
  6. 00:48:275 (1,2) - This plays and sounds really weird to me, without being overmapped. I would have gone for a 1/2 repeat or something like you did on 00:46:896 (1,2) - . Also applies for the same pattern in the second half of the Kiai.
  7. 01:07:586 (1,2,3) - It's weird that the distances are so similar when (3) is stronger. You could even have an HDash to it.
  8. 01:18:448 (5,1) - This is way too harsh for what the section is. I'd go for normal flow here.
  9. 01:29:655 (1,2,3,4) - The change in spacing from the previous pattern feels a bit sudden, so I'd reduce the distance here.
  10. 01:50:344 (1) - Same comment as in Rain.
  11. 01:55:517 (3) - In this case I'm not against the extended slider, but having a x7.4 1/4 HDash is way overdoing it. Maybe you can curve the slider a bit more so the strenght of the HDash isn't that much. Also, it's easy to overshoot considering the next section has lower SV.
  12. 02:22:068 (1,2,3) - Same comment as in the previous Kiai.
  13. 02:33:103 (1,2,3,4) - ^Same stuff. Also, it doesn't make sense that (1,2) is larger than (4,5) since (5) is stronger.
  14. 02:41:206 (5,1) - Again, the harsh antiflow doesn't fit the section.
  15. 02:51:034 (1) - ^
autofanboy

ZiRoX wrote:

Checking this.

[Salad]
  1. 00:22:068 (1,2) - If you intended this (and all the similar patterns to be dashed), they would benefit from a couple grid spaces more of distance, to make it even clearer. - Fine
  2. 00:31:034 (2,3,1) - I don't consider this the best pattern to introduce the first 1/2 dash in this diff, as it requires 2 direction changes. I would either delete (3) and rearrange stuff, or Ctrl+H 00:31:551 (1,2,3) - and move it towards the center to keep the 1/2 dash. - Changed in another way.
  3. 00:42:758 (1,2,1) - Although I understand that you placed the circle on the red tick because the higher pitched sound is there, to me it sounds way better on the white tick. Also, the pattern requires 2 direction changes, which feels a bit too uncomfortable to play. So I suggest you move (2) to the white tick, have it follow the movement of the slider, and then you can Ctrl+H 00:44:137 (1) - and play with the following notes around a bit. - Changed in another way.
  4. 00:58:620 (2) - I'd slant this slider a bit more, so that it does look like you can stay still on it to catch it. With the current angle, some players might try to wiggle it which will make the following dash a bit hard to do. - Not going to change, I have made small changes in the previous mod stating that the movements here are too large. Now I think this is the state that can satisfy both difficulty and the flow here.
  5. 01:11:724 (1,2) - I'd prefer if you had the slider first, as it adds some leniency to the 1/2 dash, and it also follows the music a bit as there's a held sound in the downbeat. Also applies for similar parts, such as 01:25:517 (1,2) - . - Done for the first one, but I am not going to change for the second part, as I want to keep the curve pattern: 01:24:137 (3,4,5,6,1) - , also the current state is clearer to read.
  6. 01:23:448 (2,3) - and 01:25:862 (2,3) - This part of the song is calm, so the dashes aren't really fitting here. - Reduced both distance and made small changes to associated patterns.
  7. 01:54:137 (3,1) - (1) isn't that intense to require a dash on this, so I'd remove it. - I will keep this one, too hard to make changes as it will probably ruin the whole pattern. Besides the current one can act as a build-up.
  8. 02:13:792 (1,2) - This is a rather ambiguous distance, and the sound at (2) is rather weak, so I'd reduce the distance to make the walk clearer. - Increased distance instead to a sure-dash. Removing dash seems weird here as I am trying to create a rhythm here, dashing between every stanzas starting from 02:12:413 - .
  9. 02:57:241 (2,3) - and 02:59:655 (2,3) - same as previously mentioned. - Done
  10. 03:07:413 (7,1) - This looks rather weird, and it's inconsistent with a previous similar pattern that had no dash at all (01:34:482 (2,3) - ), so I'd make it walkable. - I still think that a dash fits here. The sound at 03:07:931 - is louder than the one you cited. Also I think it works as a good build-up at the end.
Thanks for mod!

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Topic Starter
Ascendance

ZiRoX wrote:

Checking this.

[Platter]
  1. 00:00:000 (1,2,1) - The distances between these objects are so different, yet the sounds are exactly the same. The first one feels way to large, and it can really throw players off being the first jump of the map, while the second one falls a bit short. I'd move 00:00:000 (1,2) - around so the distances are ~x1.9 between each object. Fixed
  2. 00:06:379 (3) - Why is there a dash to this? The song isn't really calling it and it's inconsistent with all your previous patterning. I'd Ctrl+G it. Didn't ctrl+g, but removed the dash to make a different shape
  3. 00:10:517 (7,8) - This dash feels slightly off on its own, since it's on an upbeat. If anything, I would have expected a dash between 00:10:172 (5,6) - . Dash is there because it's the strongest note in that sequence, and I'd like to create a small lead-in to 00:10:689 (8,1) - .
  4. 00:12:413 (5,6) - Rather ambiguous distance, I'd reduce it a bit to make it more walkable, since having two dashes in a row doesn't fit your patterning for this section. Fixed!
  5. 00:27:068 (5,1) - This patterns feels odd because the jump emphasizes the synth, while the slider end focuses on the drums. I'd suggest either extending the (1) slider to the red tick, so it follows the synth and keeps the focus on it, or even extend it to the white tick where (2) starts and map a circle on 00:28:275 - (or a slider covering both that note and (3)). Took the first option
  6. 00:50:862 (3,4) - The dash between these notes is really unfitting, as the sound on the red tick is really weak. Not to mention, the whole movement is unexpected because for a similar sound you had a slider covering it (00:45:344 (3) - ). So I'd go for consistency here and keep the slider. Yeah, reduced the distance and changed the shape a bit
  7. 00:57:931 (1,2) - Again, the direction change here is really uncalled for. I'd just go for the pattern that you used previously in 00:46:896 (1,2,3) - . Consistency!
  8. 01:16:379 (5,6,7) - I'd reduce the distance between these objects to add some leniency to the pattern, since it's two direction changes leading to a HDash.It's a pretty high intensity section so I wanna keep that aspect of it, but I reduced it a little
  9. 01:22:758 (1,2) - I'd go for slider and then circle instead, to add leniency and consistency to the pattern. Gonna keep this since I want the hdash to be easier (01:22:413 (6,1) -) and have 01:23:103 (2) - emphasize that increase in pitch.
  10. 01:31:379 (2,3) - This dash is really uncalled, and I think the circle sounds way better on the following white tick. fixed the dash but kept the timeline placement, I'm emphasizing the foreground stuff rather than the bg
  11. 01:40:517 (3,4) - Either a repeat slider or going for slider > circle fits better. repeat slider it is
  12. 01:52:241 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I find it rather weird that you changed the focus from the synth to the stuff in the back. I would replace 01:52:931 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - with two 3/2 sliders like 01:51:551 (1,2) - , and then switch the focus at 01:54:482 (1,2,3,4) -. I do this in all diffs mainly because the introduction of the gradually increasing pitch of the synth is something to emphasize and bring out here. This increase also gives a significant buildup into the next section of music at 01:55:862 (1) - , so it feels really nice to play and not super abrupt.
  13. 02:32:586 (8,1,2) - Same suggestion as in 00:58:793 (2,3). done
  14. 02:50:173 (5,6,7) - Similar stuff as mentioned for 01:16:379 (5,6,7) -. same deal
  15. 02:56:551 (1,2) - And same stuff as in 01:22:758 (1,2) -. same thing
  16. 03:04:827 (1,2) - This distance is a bit ambiguous to me. I'd move (2) to the right a a bit to make it walkable, while making a larger jump to (3) which probably deserves it due to its higher pitch. Agreed
[Rain]
  1. 00:21:379 (5,6) - I'd put the circle first and then the repeat slider, it fits the music better. Try this: switched the timeline and did something slightly different for placement
  2. 00:26:034 (1) - Since some people wish death to things or persons they don't agree with, death to extended sliders! Normally I'd agree with you, but this extended slider is representing a held sound, which is why I'll keep it. There's no extended slider abuse in this mapset besides for rhythms that already exist in the song! :D
  3. 00:31:551 (1) - ^ beep boop
  4. 00:39:827 (1) - This feels so off, considering you've used C-shaped sliders for all the sounds like this, even throughout the Kiai. And the antiflow makes it harsher than it should be. I've given it some curve so that way it isn't as harsh
  5. 00:56:379 (1) - ^Same. same!
  6. 01:22:758 (1,2) - Replace with a single 1/1 slider for consistency please. I want it like this because 01:23:103 (2,3,4) - captures the high pitched notes really well, rather than having the start of it land on a sliderend
  7. 01:33:620 (5,1) - This could use a larger distance, to emphasize the change in the song. agree!
  8. 01:28:275 (1,2,3,4,5) - To me the strongest sounds land on (4) and (5)'s tail (kinda like you did on 01:29:655 (1,2,3) - ), so moving the repeat slider 1/2 earlier and taking one repeat off follows the music more closely (and, of course, re-adding the circle on 01:29:310 - ). The same applies for 01:31:034 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:32:413 (1,2,3,4,5) - , although in this last one the sounds are weaker, but the player would expect it for consistency. Mainly this part of the song was emphasized in the back and forth sounds (i.e. 01:28:965 (5) - ) because I couldn't really understand what to follow here.
    I didn't do much about moving around things on the timeline, but I did change some distances more appropriately
  9. 01:35:000 (3) - One could expect a larger distance to this, based on its pitch. Maybe Ctrl+G it? Yup
  10. 01:38:275 (2,3) - I think this sounds slightly better if you take the circle away and move the slider 1/2 earlier. If you do this, you should move both sliders a bit to the right. yeeeeeeep
  11. 01:40:517 (1,2) - Slider first follows the music in a better way, and it's more consistent with the rest of your patterns. Slider is there for the held note though, keeping this one!
  12. 01:50:344 (1) - I would remove this note, as it takes emphasis away from the synth, which you have been following throughout this section. Important downbeat though, and also it has a small crescendo here in pitch
  13. 01:53:103 (1,2) - Same comment as done for the Platter. same as there
  14. 02:37:241 (1,2,3,4) - Place (4) closer to the triplet, as it can be easy to miss considering the antiflow movement. fixed


[Overdose]
  1. 00:06:551 (4,1) - This should have a larger distance for consistency with the previous ones. It currently feels a bit underwhelming. Fixed I hope
  2. 00:22:413 (2,3) - This should be slider first and circle after it, to follow the music better. You're missing a relatively strong sound at 00:22:758 - the way it is now. sure, fixed
  3. 00:25:172 (2,3) - Similar stuff here. Two 1/2 sliders could do. personally believe this one is fine
  4. 00:26:034 (1) - and 00:31:551 (1) - :^) same explanation as in rain
  5. 00:38:620 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Really weird that you have an HDash between (1,2) and not between (5,1), considering (1) is stronger (and is emphasized that way with your afb's hitsounding Everyone gets an hdash now
  6. 00:48:275 (1,2) - This plays and sounds really weird to me, without being overmapped. I would have gone for a 1/2 repeat or something like you did on 00:46:896 (1,2) - . Also applies for the same pattern in the second half of the Kiai. changed the way it plays but I kept the triplet because improvising rhythms (imo) is necessary when the song is repetitive. It adds flair and uniqueness!
  7. 01:07:586 (1,2,3) - It's weird that the distances are so similar when (3) is stronger. You could even have an HDash to it. No hdash, but I increased the distance!
  8. 01:18:448 (5,1) - This is way too harsh for what the section is. I'd go for normal flow here. fixfix
  9. 01:29:655 (1,2,3,4) - The change in spacing from the previous pattern feels a bit sudden, so I'd reduce the distance here. reduced a bit
  10. 01:50:344 (1) - Same comment as in Rain. same!
  11. 01:55:517 (3) - In this case I'm not against the extended slider, but having a x7.4 1/4 HDash is way overdoing it. Maybe you can curve the slider a bit more so the strenght of the HDash isn't that much. Also, it's easy to overshoot considering the next section has lower SV. changed it up a bit
  12. 02:22:068 (1,2,3) - Same comment as in the previous Kiai. same as before
  13. 02:33:103 (1,2,3,4) - ^Same stuff. Also, it doesn't make sense that (1,2) is larger than (4,5) since (5) is stronger. fixed the distances
  14. 02:41:206 (5,1) - Again, the harsh antiflow doesn't fit the section. fix
  15. 02:51:034 (1) - ^ this one is okay imo cause strong cymbal and this is the finale of the map pmuch


Thanks for modding!
ZiRoX
Get this to 12 SP lul
Topic Starter
Ascendance
Speedrank
ZiRoX
Discussed a few last changes with Ascendance. I don't agree with one particular response from alienflybot, something being too hard to apply - which, actually, it isn't because I tried a solution that worked IMO - isn't a reason to deny a suggestion. However, the issue is not that big as to prevent this from being ranked, so I'm still moving it forward.

Bubbled!
Topic Starter
Ascendance
Good day Elite Mapper :_>
Soul Evans
Goodluck for speedrank

was pretty hard ranking mine
Topic Starter
Ascendance
Just letting you know the update is due to a bg change, which I confirmed does not need a rebubble:

F D Flourite
I'm back Asc boi

NO KD

[Salad]
  1. 01:39:137 (6,1) - Swap NC? The strong sound is on the sliderhead of 01:39:137 (6) -
  2. 01:54:482 (1) - NC is not needed imo. This place is a build-up. So a fountain for NC would kinda ruin the feeling of build-up: it pours before it accumulates.
  3. 01:56:724 - add a circle here or 01:57:068 - here? This section sounds a little bit blank even if it has more rhythm than following sections. (For example, you just self-made a sound at 01:59:827 - where there's probably nothing to express)
  4. 02:02:241 - or 02:02:586 - same ^
  5. 03:11:034 (3,1) - could've been a jump here
  6. 00:42:068 (3,1) - A little bit ambiguous distance actually. It can be larger.
  7. 01:42:413 (6) - Ctrl+G? A direction change may be needed.
TBC~ sleep zzz
autofanboy

F D Flourite wrote:

I'm back Asc boi

NO KD

[Salad]
  1. 01:39:137 (6,1) - Swap NC? The strong sound is on the sliderhead of 01:39:137 (6) - I think 01:39:655 - is the point where transition occurs so I am not changing this.
  2. 01:54:482 (1) - NC is not needed imo. This place is a build-up. So a fountain for NC would kinda ruin the feeling of build-up: it pours before it accumulates. - Pretty much become unrankable if I removed the NC, as the ranking criteria mentioned that 10 objects in a combo is maximum for Salad. In fact I remapped the build-up section here and omitted the dash at the start. Should be relatively better now.
  3. 01:56:724 - add a circle here or 01:57:068 - here? This section sounds a little bit blank even if it has more rhythm than following sections. (For example, you just self-made a sound at 01:59:827 - where there's probably nothing to express) - Added slider to map 01:57:068 - .
  4. 02:02:241 - or 02:02:586 - same ^ - Not changing this one because there is an additional rhythm at 02:03:103 (5) - which I find it suitable enough.
  5. 03:11:034 (3,1) - could've been a jump here - Added and remapped the last section.
  6. 00:42:068 (3,1) - A little bit ambiguous distance actually. It can be larger. - Not supposed to be a dash, it has the same distance as 00:41:380 (1,2) - so I think it is good to go.
  7. 01:42:413 (6) - Ctrl+G? A direction change may be needed. - Did similar change.
TBC~ sleep zzz
Thanks for mod!

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Topic Starter
Ascendance
Please re-dl if you haven't already. With F D Flourite, I compressed the bg image to a much smaller size, and we went through some things in all the difficulties.
F D Flourite
HYPPERRANK


Did irc with Ascendance on some small placement issues. Should be good to go now~
Topic Starter
Ascendance

F D Flourite wrote:

HYPPERRANK


Did irc with Ascendance on some small placement issues. Should be good to go now~
Thank you so much :D
Monstrata
Elite Mapper where?
Topic Starter
Ascendance

Monstrata wrote:

Elite Mapper where?
They said they might not give it T_T I hope they do, I worked hard for it!
autofanboy
Elite Salad Mapper where
Soul Evans
Elite (congrats mango)
MBomb
Was modding this as I was the planned qualify icon, but there are severe quality issues in the salad which really need to be addressed, which is why I was taking time, and then saw someone else already qualified, so posting my mod as it was now.

[Salad]

Firstly, this difficulty is near FCable without dashing. Not only are the dashes small enough distances to the fact where they're possible without dashing, they're so low to the point where they could easily be misread by a salad player.some of these "dashes" are possible to hit without dashing by over 32 pixels, which is over 1/16th of the screen, which may seem like a small amount, but keep in mind that this is meant for lower players, who the readability of the map would greatly suffer due to this, as supposedly distances intended to be dashes have moderately small distances, however for most salad players, these distances would be too big to not dash. Whilst I admit, maybe they don't need to be entirely impossible without dashing, such a huge difference should not be allowed.

00:05:517 (1) - Dash here suffers from that exact problem, x:496 would be a lot better, still possible without dashing but greatly increases readability here.
00:08:275 (1) - Not sure if this is intended to be a dash to this or not, if it is, the distance is far too low, this would definitely get misread as a non-dash, considering this is over 32 pixels off being a dash, however if it's not intended to be a dash, the distance is far too strong for an average salad player. Either way, the emphasis on this slider is super weird anyway, as you have a dash to the head, and then the strongest note in the slider is on the repeat, both in terms of pitch and volume, and that just seems very strange.
00:10:344 (3,4,5) - Also really not a fan of how the flow on that feels for a salad, may be a bit too awkward to play, but this is a minor issue here.
00:11:034 (1) - Another one of those cases where it's either a really strong non-dash or a dash which can be avoided by around 32 pixels. x:376 would be a lot of a safer move here if the dash is intended, as I assume by the change in music, but I'm really not sure.
00:13:793 (1) - Considering the really strong distance to this, I assume it might be intended to be a dash, however, this is not only weaker than your previous dashes in terms of distance, but the sound in the song isn't even that strong. There's a possibility this wasn't intended to be a dash, but the distance is still ridiculously strong considering that.
00:15:172 (3) - Why would you not have a dash to this, considering you've had a dash to much weaker sounds throughout this? Emphasis on here is really strange.

Honestly, I think it's better for me to just list all the places where it seems dashes were intended, and tell you how to add distance to at least make them more readable for a salad player, so here you go:

List of dashes
00:16:551 (1) - x:24 would make this one still possible without dashing, but would make the readability greatly improved.
00:22:068 (1,2) - There is a dash distance that is ridiculously small and possible without dashing here, but the bigger problem is the obvious emphasis to the weaker sound rather than to the stronger sound here which makes very little sense from a playing standpoint, and even caused misses from me whilst playing this due to the rhythm sounding very off. I would recommend putting 1 on x:208.
00:24:827 (1,2) - Same emphasis problem here as well as the really low distancing. x:232 on 1 is possible without dashing but I think that's strong enough for a salad player to view it as a dash.
00:27:586 (1,2) - And again. 1 on x:240 would be nice.
00:33:103 (1) - Definitely too weak for a dash as it is now, could confuse players, x:384 would be better.
00:38:620 (1) - Far too weak and overly confusing distance as it is now, try x:192.
00:44:137 (1) - x:232 would still make it possible without dashing, but would definitely make it more visable as a dash to a salad player.
00:46:896 (1) - x:448 would make it more visable as a dash, this distance could definitely confuse a salad player.

00:19:310 (1) - Why such a strong distance to this? Not only is it very difficult to hit without dashing for a salad player, but there's near no note strong enough to emphasise this anywhere near this much here. Moving 00:18:965 (6) - to x:304 solves this problem, however you might want a different way to fix it, if you don't like the idea of holding right here.
00:30:344 (1) - Major consistency error here. You've used a dash to the 1/1 on almost all of these (Which I've specifically said you shouldn't, but if you deny those points then that makes this stand out even more), yet you use a slider end on the same sound here. I'd really recommend adding the dash to the slider head here, with consistency with my previous dash recommendations.
00:31:551 (1) - I think a dash to this sound would be really fitting for the pitch change, however that might be difficult to achieve due to the wall being so close. However, the current distance is definitely too strong for an average salad player to hit and so should probably be reduced slightly.
00:35:862 (1) - Kinda difficult movement into this for a salad, especially considering the direction change in the slider, maybe try x:400?
00:42:758 (1) - Feels kinda strong to play right now, very difficult to hit for a salad player without dashing, however I think this one wasn't intended to be a dash as it is an even lower distance than most of the other ones. x:272 would feel nicer to play.

This mod is unfinished, but just want to post now to bring up a few of the issues in this map which show it being not ready for qualified, so we can slow this down a bit, giving more time to look over the set.
autofanboy

- Magic Bomb - wrote:

Was modding this as I was the planned qualify icon, but there are severe quality issues in the salad which really need to be addressed, which is why I was taking time, and then saw someone else already qualified, so posting my mod as it was now.

[Salad]

Firstly, this difficulty is near FCable without dashing. Not only are the dashes small enough distances to the fact where they're possible without dashing, they're so low to the point where they could easily be misread by a salad player.some of these "dashes" are possible to hit without dashing by over 32 pixels, which is over 1/16th of the screen, which may seem like a small amount, but keep in mind that this is meant for lower players, who the readability of the map would greatly suffer due to this, as supposedly distances intended to be dashes have moderately small distances, however for most salad players, these distances would be too big to not dash. Whilst I admit, maybe they don't need to be entirely impossible without dashing, such a huge difference should not be allowed. - Increased most of the distances for dashing. Yet these jumps do give a sense to dash, so I think the amendment now should help slightly.

00:05:517 (1) - Dash here suffers from that exact problem, x:496 would be a lot better, still possible without dashing but greatly increases readability here.
00:08:275 (1) - Not sure if this is intended to be a dash to this or not, if it is, the distance is far too low, this would definitely get misread as a non-dash, considering this is over 32 pixels off being a dash, however if it's not intended to be a dash, the distance is far too strong for an average salad player. Either way, the emphasis on this slider is super weird anyway, as you have a dash to the head, and then the strongest note in the slider is on the repeat, both in terms of pitch and volume, and that just seems very strange.
00:10:344 (3,4,5) - Also really not a fan of how the flow on that feels for a salad, may be a bit too awkward to play, but this is a minor issue here. - I think this pattern is fine as it is simple to read for beginners. Changing this to patterns like curved circle paths or horizontal paths may be too strange or too difficult here, respectively.
00:11:034 (1) - Another one of those cases where it's either a really strong non-dash or a dash which can be avoided by around 32 pixels. x:376 would be a lot of a safer move here if the dash is intended, as I assume by the change in music, but I'm really not sure.
00:13:793 (1) - Considering the really strong distance to this, I assume it might be intended to be a dash, however, this is not only weaker than your previous dashes in terms of distance, but the sound in the song isn't even that strong. There's a possibility this wasn't intended to be a dash, but the distance is still ridiculously strong considering that.
00:15:172 (3) - Why would you not have a dash to this, considering you've had a dash to much weaker sounds throughout this? Emphasis on here is really strange. - Focusing on 00:15:172 (3,1) - instead, otherwise there will be too many HDashes here (only Kiai Time parts are supposed to be a bit denser)

Honestly, I think it's better for me to just list all the places where it seems dashes were intended, and tell you how to add distance to at least make them more readable for a salad player, so here you go:

List of dashes
00:16:551 (1) - x:24 would make this one still possible without dashing, but would make the readability greatly improved.
00:22:068 (1,2) - There is a dash distance that is ridiculously small and possible without dashing here, but the bigger problem is the obvious emphasis to the weaker sound rather than to the stronger sound here which makes very little sense from a playing standpoint, and even caused misses from me whilst playing this due to the rhythm sounding very off. I would recommend putting 1 on x:208.
00:24:827 (1,2) - Same emphasis problem here as well as the really low distancing. x:232 on 1 is possible without dashing but I think that's strong enough for a salad player to view it as a dash.
00:27:586 (1,2) - And again. 1 on x:240 would be nice.
00:33:103 (1) - Definitely too weak for a dash as it is now, could confuse players, x:384 would be better.
00:38:620 (1) - Far too weak and overly confusing distance as it is now, try x:192.
00:44:137 (1) - x:232 would still make it possible without dashing, but would definitely make it more visable as a dash to a salad player.
00:46:896 (1) - x:448 would make it more visable as a dash, this distance could definitely confuse a salad player.

00:19:310 (1) - Why such a strong distance to this? Not only is it very difficult to hit without dashing for a salad player, but there's near no note strong enough to emphasise this anywhere near this much here. Moving 00:18:965 (6) - to x:304 solves this problem, however you might want a different way to fix it, if you don't like the idea of holding right here. - Changed in another way.
00:30:344 (1) - Major consistency error here. You've used a dash to the 1/1 on almost all of these (Which I've specifically said you shouldn't, but if you deny those points then that makes this stand out even more), yet you use a slider end on the same sound here. I'd really recommend adding the dash to the slider head here, with consistency with my previous dash recommendations. - Making this part slightly easier so the dash at 00:31:206 (3,1) - can be accentuated well. Also I think it still follows the rhythm with different types of patterns, so is fine to go in my opinion.
00:31:551 (1) - I think a dash to this sound would be really fitting for the pitch change, however that might be difficult to achieve due to the wall being so close. However, the current distance is definitely too strong for an average salad player to hit and so should probably be reduced slightly.
00:35:862 (1) - Kinda difficult movement into this for a salad, especially considering the direction change in the slider, maybe try x:400? - That's a dash.
00:42:758 (1) - Feels kinda strong to play right now, very difficult to hit for a salad player without dashing, however I think this one wasn't intended to be a dash as it is an even lower distance than most of the other ones. x:272 would feel nicer to play. - ^

This mod is unfinished, but just want to post now to bring up a few of the issues in this map which show it being not ready for qualified, so we can slow this down a bit, giving more time to look over the set.
Thanks for the check!

Revised most of the parts throughout the whole difficulty. Most of the problems are related to the sense of dashing, where I have responded above (honestly dashing is needed for most of the cases if the players are standing straightly below each fruit, not at the edge). Please disqualify and update:

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Kyouren
Wow, congratulations <3

Really nice CTB map!
JBHyperion
DQ upon creator request to make the mentioned changes to the [Salad] difficulty
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Ascendance
I applied the changes above, but seriously, you know it's bad when you have to get a map qualified in order to get someone to post a mod :v

I very much respect your modding ability, but the reason I had it qualified in the first place was because out of the 4 nominators / QATs I asked, you were the only one who found issue in the salad difficulty, essentially making it a veto of sorts. Also, from what I heard, the map was a free-for-all because of it's high priority (note: high priority) so it didn't matter who was listed as long as it was qualified from my understanding

As of right now, we are currently holding back an official announcement from staff about the conclusion of this contest. I'd like to not hold them up any longer, so if we can resolve this issue quickly, that would be heavenly.

I updated AFB's new difficulty.
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