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Mentholzzz
449 posts
Joined October 2015
Mentholzzz
Halozy, mod from The RRM Modding Queue
Halozy Everywhere
00:15:040 - should be double and 00:15:508 - be single like how it was map b4 , same as 00:15:977 - ^ and so on
02:05:392 - I suggest to make it 1/8 burst like 01:36:249 -
04:13:538 (253538|0) - move this note to 04:13:433 - ? i dont think it missing there and it shouldnt be double here
06:34:680 - should be single here
09:46:080 (586080|2,586244|2,586408|2,586736|2,586900|2,587064|2) - this stack is qwq , maybe swap 09:45:998 (585998|3,586080|2,586654|3,586736|2) - 's column ?
10:07:310 - this part is a bit left heavy, all of the minitrill is in the left hand, pls make it more balance pls qwq
10:26:818 - missing note here ?

10:12:228 - a random thingy, but shouldn't the song name (in sb) appear here instead of 09:51:244 - since you make them appear at the kiai for all of the previous song.
pretty map can't find much aaaa
Virtue-
Beatmap Nominator
1,112 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Virtue-

Mentholzzz wrote:

Halozy, mod from The RRM Modding Queue
Halozy Everywhere
00:15:040 - should be double and 00:15:508 - be single like how it was map b4 , same as 00:15:977 - ^ and so on o rip, you're right... fixed
02:05:392 - I suggest to make it 1/8 burst like 01:36:249 - oki, changed
04:13:538 (253538|0) - move this note to 04:13:433 - ? i dont think it missing there and it shouldnt be double here i think there's no sound there but if i hear it with 25% there's a sound lmao =w= since i follow the synth.. ummmm... maybe i'll consider this again.
06:34:680 - should be single here rip lol
09:46:080 (586080|2,586244|2,586408|2,586736|2,586900|2,587064|2) - this stack is qwq , maybe swap 09:45:998 re-arranged
(585998|3,586080|2,586654|3,586736|2) - 's column ? re-arranged
10:07:310 - this part is a bit left heavy, all of the minitrill is in the left hand, pls make it more balance pls qwq re-arranged
10:26:818 - missing note here ? o boi, dat miss

10:12:228 - a random thingy, but shouldn't the song name (in sb) appear here instead of 09:51:244 - since you make them appear at the kiai for all of the previous song. fixed
pretty map can't find much aaaa
thanks menthoz for the mod >w<
Verniy_Chan
2,321 posts
Joined May 2014
Verniy_Chan
──────▄▌▐▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀​▀▀▀▀▀▀▌
───▄▄██▌█____GENERIC SB, Not really Amazing !_____
███████▌█▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄​▄▄▄▄▄▄▌
▀(@)▀▀▀▀▀▀▀(@)(@)▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀​▀▀▀▀(@)▀............ ngeng~

Nih updated dikit + ada BG 1080p : https://puu.sh/xqlM0.rar
- Ganti penempatan elemen tittle di lagu 3 dan 4
- Tambah timing variasi elemen tittle ngikutin beat
- Tamabh sedikit efek flash di 10:12:228 -

10:12:228 - buat kiai baru lagi disini
Di tag, tambahin semua judul lagunya

BG untuk lagu PLAZMA kayanya perlu di rubah, soalnya kualitasnya rendah. Mungkin ganti dengan BG lain kalau bisa :3

/me run
Envory
Envory
Sori Mod ane delay 1/2 hari dl gan :3
Virtue-
Beatmap Nominator
1,112 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Virtue-

Envory wrote:

Sori Mod ane delay 1/2 hari dl gan :3
gpp kok 'w'
Virtue-
Beatmap Nominator
1,112 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Virtue-

Verniy_Chan wrote:

──────▄▌▐▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀​▀▀▀▀▀▀▌
───▄▄██▌█____GENERIC SB, Not really Amazing !_____
███████▌█▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄​▄▄▄▄▄▄▌
▀(@)▀▀▀▀▀▀▀(@)(@)▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀​▀▀▀▀(@)▀............ ngeng~

Nih updated dikit + ada BG 1080p : https://puu.sh/xqlM0.rar
- Ganti penempatan elemen tittle di lagu 3 dan 4
- Tambah timing variasi elemen tittle ngikutin beat
- Tamabh sedikit efek flash di 10:12:228 -

10:12:228 - buat kiai baru lagi disini
Di tag, tambahin semua judul lagunya

BG untuk lagu PLAZMA kayanya perlu di rubah, soalnya kualitasnya rendah. Mungkin ganti dengan BG lain kalau bisa :3

/me run
OWO TY VERNIY!! Btw, bgny ganti jadi yg mana y? :'DDD
Envory
Envory
Yo bang! untung ga terlalu sibuk kwkwkw jd bs mod hari ini :3
Oklah langsung aj


|1|2|3|4|





Sayang Tante-tante
00:02:735 (2735|3) - Move ke kolom 3
00:02:969 (2969|1,2969|2) - yg di kolom 3 ke 4 (lanjutan atas)
00:05:079 (5079|1) - Hapus aj deh Note biasanya itu .. ga sama kyk 00:04:376 (4376|3,4376|2) - n biar konsisten ama 00:04:610 (4610|1) -
00:06:016 (6016|1,6016|2) - yg di kolom 3 ke 4
00:06:602 (6602|2,6602|1) - 1 note aj cukup keknya :/ toh kicknya ga keras2 amat
02:24:703 (144703|1) - move ke kolom 3
02:24:917 (144917|2) - Ini ke kolom 1
03:04:560 (184560|0) - Ini LN endnya ga di 03:04:774 - ??
03:23:188 (203188|3) - tambang 1 note d kolom 3
05:44:761 (344761|0) - ke 3?
06:04:793 (364793|2) - pindah ke 2
06:05:567 (365567|1,365664|0) - ctrl+g
06:17:180 (377180|1) - ke 3
06:22:890 (382890|3,382890|0,382890|1) - jadiin 4 note skalian buat last kick
06:29:916 (389916|0) - Dari situ ane punya suggest > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013927 (di garis putih pasang 2 biar skalian ngikut layering vokal biar ga krupuk2 amat n biar lebih realistis :v)
08:04:330 (484330|1) - yg di kolom 2 ke 1
08:04:417 (484417|0) - ini juga pindah ke kolom 2
08:09:706 (489706|1,489706|0) - ini kasi 3 aj + d kolom 4
08:09:880 (489880|3,489966|2) - trs ini ctrl+g
08:38:932 (518932|0,518932|3) - ini 3 ..bukan 2 (+d kolom 2) karena ada piano dsitu
08:41:675 (521675|0,521675|3) - ini juga
08:44:418 (524418|0,524418|2) - this too
08:45:789 (525789|0,525789|1) - same ^
08:52:046 (532046|0,532046|1,532132|3,532132|2,532218|0,532218|1,532303|2,532303|3,532389|0,532389|1,532475|2,532475|3,532561|1) - Trill nya mulai dari 08:52:303 (532303|2,532303|3) - bang .. jadi bagian 08:52:046 - dibikin gini aj > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013979
08:57:703 (537703|2,537703|3) - del 1 d kolom 4 biar konsisten sama 08:57:361 (537361|3,537361|2,537446|0,537532|3,537532|2) -
10:08:211 (608211|0) - pindah ke kolom 3
10:08:293 (608293|1,608293|2) - trs yang di 3 pindah ke 1
10:08:949 - tambah 1
10:31:572 (631572|3) - tambah 1 di 3



Ok Done!
GL ya!
gantian mapku lg woe jangan 4get :3
Yukari_Sama
720 posts
Joined April 2015
Yukari_Sama
marked owo)b
mungkin delay lah =w=
Umo-
1,443 posts
Joined April 2016
Umo-
NM req from Umo-'s modding queue

1|2|3|4

Lunatic of marathon
00:21:251 (21251|1) - I guess that LN is for vocals, extend it to 00:21:954 -
00:25:001 (25001|3) - extend to 00:25:704 -
01:09:456 (69456|1,69456|2) - same as 01:10:345 (70345|2) - ?
01:31:749 (91749|0,91749|1) - I dont hear any strong sounds so make that a single note?
I think it would actully be good if you move the current doubles to places like 01:31:535 - 01:31:963 - 01:32:392 - 01:32:820 - and so on
01:37:749 (97749|2,97803|3) - ctrl+j
01:39:678 - 02:35:846 - I guess that you could remove the LN's at 01:39:678 - so that players dont have 2 same songs with a really similar pattern
02:35:846 - um I guess this is copypasted from your ranked version? I would suggest to be more creative or that was only your intention to make it like that
03:01:774 (181774|2,181828|3,182096|0,182149|1,182417|2,182471|3,182846|2,182899|3) - meybe ctrl+j some notes?
03:15:321 (195321|2,195373|3) - ctrl+j works better imo
03:37:978 - could add a note here on 3rd column
03:41:230 (221230|2,221230|3) - make that a triple, its same as 03:40:810 - ?
04:03:468 (243468|0,243468|1,243573|3,243573|2) - ctrl+h so that you dont have 3 double notes in the same columns 04:03:048 (243048|1,243048|0,243258|0,243258|1,243468|0,243468|1) -
04:03:992 (243992|3,243992|2,244097|0,244097|1) - ^
04:52:362 (292362|0,292362|3,292459|1,292459|2,292556|0,292556|3,292652|1,292652|2,292749|3) - this is a bit weird imo, try to rearange the notes a bit
05:25:265 - 05:26:233 - kinda unbalanced
Okay I'm too tierd to mod the rest

Good Luck!
Salty Mermaid
531 posts
Joined September 2016
Salty Mermaid
yoooooo NM from the beautiful modding queue

About the two parts that you copy pasted from your own ranked beatmaps (Three Magic and Don't let you down), obviously they don't need any mods, but still, I think you should remap these parts, or at least change some stuff, more stuff. Try to be a little more creative.

And also I didn't took the time to read the mod of that other dude, so maybe I'll say stuff he said.

I'll use 4 for the column 4

Stuff
  1. 00:05:899 Missing a note? You could add one in col 4.
  2. 00:06:485 (6485|1,6485|0) - Make this a single note, just like this place 00:07:422 (7422|0) -
  3. 01:46:963 (106963|0,107178|0,107392|0,107606|0,107820|0) - Small anchor, I guess, dunno at how many notes exactly we can consider this anchor, so I'll mention it anyway.
  4. 01:48:678 (108678|3,108892|3,109106|3,109320|3,109535|3) - Same.
  5. 01:55:106 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9032729 it's the same as https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9032729 Copy-pasting again. Just don't.
  6. For the rest of "Ring of Fantasia", it about the same, watch out for little anchors and copy-pasting.
  7. 08:18:723 (498723|1) - This a single, cause the sound of the voice is not long enough.
  8. 08:19:070 (499070|0) - Single note too. I don't really hear the sound that is here 08:19:417 (499417|1) -
  9. 08:18:897 (498897|3) - This Ln could be longer, imo, for the voice. You could end it at 08:20:631
  10. 09:17:846 (557846|3) - Why not a double here.
  11. 10:32:392 (632392|3) - 1/8 starts here.

Poop mod. Don't pay attention to it, have a nice day.
Virtue-
Beatmap Nominator
1,112 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Virtue-

Envory wrote:

Yo bang! untung ga terlalu sibuk kwkwkw jd bs mod hari ini :3
Oklah langsung aj

|1|2|3|4|


Sayang Tante-tante
00:02:735 (2735|3) - Move ke kolom 3 apply
00:02:969 (2969|1,2969|2) - yg di kolom 3 ke 4 (lanjutan atas) apply
00:05:079 (5079|1) - Hapus aj deh Note biasanya itu .. ga sama kyk 00:04:376 (4376|3,4376|2) - n biar konsisten ama 00:04:610 (4610|1) - there's a kick there lol
00:06:016 (6016|1,6016|2) - yg di kolom 3 ke 4 reject
00:06:602 (6602|2,6602|1) - 1 note aj cukup keknya :/ toh kicknya ga keras2 amat reject but change 00:06:485 (6485|0,6485|1) - into single since the sound is not too loud (its smaller than u metioned)
02:24:703 (144703|1) - move ke kolom 3
02:24:917 (144917|2) - Ini ke kolom 1
w copas sama pny w yg udh ranked
03:04:560 (184560|0) - Ini LN endnya ga di 03:04:774 - ?? mksdny?
03:23:188 (203188|3) - tambang 1 note d kolom 3 added
05:44:761 (344761|0) - ke 3? jackny beda maz
06:04:793 (364793|2) - pindah ke 2 nope, di pencetny g enak
06:05:567 (365567|1,365664|0) - ctrl+g same reason as above
06:17:180 (377180|1) - ke 3 same reason as above
06:22:890 (382890|3,382890|0,382890|1) - jadiin 4 note skalian buat last kick bisa sih di buat jadi quad, but kekny rada g cocok juga since ini sama" crash
06:29:916 (389916|0) - Dari situ ane punya suggest > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013927 (di garis putih pasang 2 biar skalian ngikut layering vokal biar ga krupuk2 amat n biar lebih realistis :v) suggestionny di reject, but w add LN buat vocalny
08:04:330 (484330|1) - yg di kolom 2 ke 1
08:04:417 (484417|0) - ini juga pindah ke kolom 2
nope, ntar patternny sama kek di depannya
08:09:706 (489706|1,489706|0) - ini kasi 3 aj + d kolom 4 hmmm, kekny rada g cocok gitu dah... tapi klo di denger" cocok juga =w= hadehhh... w pikirin lagi ya
08:09:880 (489880|3,489966|2) - trs ini ctrl+g same reason as above
08:38:932 (518932|0,518932|3) - ini 3 ..bukan 2 (+d kolom 2) karena ada piano dsitu itu w cmn ikutin kickny doang wkwk sorry
08:41:675 (521675|0,521675|3) - ini juga same reason as above
08:44:418 (524418|0,524418|2) - this too same reason as above
08:45:789 (525789|0,525789|1) - same ^ same reason as above
08:52:046 (532046|0,532046|1,532132|3,532132|2,532218|0,532218|1,532303|2,532303|3,532389|0,532389|1,532475|2,532475|3,532561|1) - Trill nya mulai dari 08:52:303 (532303|2,532303|3) - bang .. jadi bagian 08:52:046 - dibikin gini aj > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013979 reject the suggestion, but dibuat rada" mirip seperti suggestion
08:57:703 (537703|2,537703|3) - del 1 d kolom 4 biar konsisten sama 08:57:361 (537361|3,537361|2,537446|0,537532|3,537532|2) - apply and re-arrange them a bit
10:08:211 (608211|0) - pindah ke kolom 3
10:08:293 (608293|1,608293|2) - trs yang di 3 pindah ke 1
10:08:949 - tambah 1
reject all
10:31:572 (631572|3) - tambah 1 di 3 apply

Ok Done!
GL ya!
gantian mapku lg woe jangan 4get :3

Umo- wrote:

NM req from Umo-'s modding queue

1|2|3|4

Lunatic of marathon
00:21:251 (21251|1) - I guess that LN is for vocals, extend it to 00:21:954 - sure, apply this to the similar vocal/LN
00:25:001 (25001|3) - extend to 00:25:704 - same
01:09:456 (69456|1,69456|2) - same as 01:10:345 (70345|2) - ? there's small kick there
01:31:749 (91749|0,91749|1) - I dont hear any strong sounds so make that a single note? its for hi hat
I think it would actully be good if you move the current doubles to places like 01:31:535 - 01:31:963 - 01:32:392 - 01:32:820 - and so on same reason as above. since there's only hi hat that has strong sound owo
01:37:749 (97749|2,97803|3) - ctrl+j not really
01:39:678 - 02:35:846 - I guess that you could remove the LN's at 01:39:678 - so that players dont have 2 same songs with a really similar pattern FINALLY THERE'S SOMEONE WHO NOTICED IT, THANKS. btw, im trying to make both of them different but im stuck ;w; rip.... HELP
02:35:846 - um I guess this is copypasted from your ranked version? I would suggest to be more creative or that was only your intention to make it like that yes, i copypasta from the ranked ver xD hue ;w;
03:01:774 (181774|2,181828|3,182096|0,182149|1,182417|2,182471|3,182846|2,182899|3) - meybe ctrl+j some notes? nope
03:15:321 (195321|2,195373|3) - ctrl+j works better imo sure
03:37:978 - could add a note here on 3rd column rip, added
03:41:230 (221230|2,221230|3) - make that a triple, its same as 03:40:810 - ? they're different lul
04:03:468 (243468|0,243468|1,243573|3,243573|2) - ctrl+h so that you dont have 3 double notes in the same columns 04:03:048 (243048|1,243048|0,243258|0,243258|1,243468|0,243468|1) - sure, why not?
04:03:992 (243992|3,243992|2,244097|0,244097|1) - ^ sure
04:52:362 (292362|0,292362|3,292459|1,292459|2,292556|0,292556|3,292652|1,292652|2,292749|3) - this is a bit weird imo, try to rearange the notes a bit so... im trying to make this part as easy as possible, but i think i messed... rip
05:25:265 - 05:26:233 - kinda unbalancednot really i guess
Okay I'm too tierd to mod the rest

Good Luck!

Salty Mermaid wrote:

yoooooo NM from the beautiful modding queue

About the two parts that you copy pasted from your own ranked beatmaps (Three Magic and Don't let you down), obviously they don't need any mods, but still, I think you should remap these parts, or at least change some stuff, more stuff. Try to be a little more creative. hmm, im trying to make it different and fun. be patient plez

And also I didn't took the time to read the mod of that other dude, so maybe I'll say stuff he said.

I'll use 4 for the column 4

Stuff
  1. 00:05:899 Missing a note? You could add one in col 4. added
  2. 00:06:485 (6485|1,6485|0) - Make this a single note, just like this place 00:07:422 (7422|0) - added
  3. 01:46:963 (106963|0,107178|0,107392|0,107606|0,107820|0) - Small anchor, I guess, dunno at how many notes exactly we can consider this anchor, so I'll mention it anyway. fixed, i guess
  4. 01:48:678 (108678|3,108892|3,109106|3,109320|3,109535|3) - Same. sameeeeee
  5. 01:55:106 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9032729 it's the same as https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9032729 Copy-pasting again. Just don't.
  6. For the rest of "Ring of Fantasia", it about the same, watch out for little anchors and copy-pasting. yeah, sorry :(((
  7. 08:18:723 (498723|1) - This a single, cause the sound of the voice is not long enough. fixed
  8. 08:19:070 (499070|0) - Single note too. I don't really hear the sound that is here 08:19:417 (499417|1) - what? there's a kick there
  9. 08:18:897 (498897|3) - This Ln could be longer, imo, for the voice. You could end it at 08:20:631 sure
  10. 09:17:846 (557846|3) - Why not a double here. added
  11. 10:32:392 (632392|3) - 1/8 starts here. o boi, added

Poop mod. Don't pay attention to it, have a nice day.
THANKS GUYS FOR THE MOD >w<
AchsanLovers
987 posts
Joined April 2015
AchsanLovers
kek nya masih idup, sorry utang 1 bln kmaren blm dibayar awkawkawk :v

[General]
  1. isi tags sesuai dari lagu masing masing, mager ey nyari satu satu :v

[felt compilation kapan kelar ey]
  1. 00:04:610 - mungkin add 1 note lagi buat emphasize vocalnya?
  2. 00:35:899 (35899|3) - delete? dari tadi fokus sama clap sama kick aja ..
  3. 01:27:678 - ini lagunya pernah dibuat kmaren yha tapi diapus/ re-upload lagi dung lagunya enak :v
  4. 01:29:392 - mmhh, knp ga dibuat 1/8 aja disini? suara nya mayan noticeable lho
  5. oke ini part yg three magic copas dari map rank?
  6. 03:24:342 - add note? sama juga sih suara sama yg kyk sblmnya 03:24:027 (204027|1,204027|0,204132|2,204132|3,204237|1,204237|0) -
  7. jigokuraku nya sip ja dah, gaena lagunya
  8. 05:08:136 (308136|3) - move to 3 ? hand balance
  9. 06:28:680 - akhirnya aja juga lagu halozy yg ga pasaran untuk dimap :v
  10. 08:10:747 - astaga ini malah vocal mapping =w= knp ga difollow aja hi-hat nya?
  11. dapet gambar asli kanshou no matenrou dari mana astaga :'vvvvvv
  12. 10:33:211 - add note?

oke dah itu ja, kebanyakan lagu yg dimasukin pasaran semua :'v and why no paranoid lost aaaaaaa ;w;

good luck dah :)
Yukari_Sama
720 posts
Joined April 2015
Yukari_Sama

hii virtue NM req
delaynya udah kebangetean ya ?? :''3

fri rijek
1|2|3|4

AchsanLovers wrote:

[General]
  1. isi tags sesuai dari lagu masing masing, mager ey nyari satu satu :v
sekalian karakter masing2 juga gapapa :''3
5-8 min
  1. 04:51:201 - 04:51:588 - ga tau kenapa kok 1/8nya disini ilang ? padahal ada soundnya loh
  2. 04:53:427 (293427|3) - delet aja ? suaranya mulai disini menurutku 04:53:523
  3. 05:22:846 (322846|0) - col 2
  4. 05:22:943 (322943|1) - col 1
  5. 05:23:039 (323039|2) - col 2
  6. 05:23:136 (323136|0) - col 3
  7. 05:50:954 (350954|1) - col 1
  8. 05:51:341 (351341|0) - col 3
  9. 06:36:180 - add note ?
  10. 06:38:122 - 06:38:475 - 06:39:533 - 06:39:886 - ^ biar sama kaya yg ini 06:36:622 (396622|2,396710|1,396798|0,396798|3,396975|1,397063|2,397151|1,397151|0,397151|3) -
  11. 06:49:857 - loh kelupaan LN ???
  12. 07:00:798 - ini part sini ga kaya di part sebelumnya,ga ada 1/2 LN ato sengaja ?
  13. 10:23:047 (623047|0,623211|0,623539|0,623703|0,624031|0,624195|0,624523|0,624687|0) - anchor jack ? di col 2 blum ada di bagian itu
dah segitu aja,gw paling suka kanshou no matenrou :D :D
Good luck~
Virtue-
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Topic Starter
Virtue-

AchsanLovers wrote:

kek nya masih idup, sorry utang 1 bln kmaren blm dibayar awkawkawk :v

[General]
  1. isi tags sesuai dari lagu masing masing, mager ey nyari satu satu :v KWOAKOWA NTAR LA

[felt compilation kapan kelar ey]
  1. 00:04:610 - mungkin add 1 note lagi buat emphasize vocalnya? hmmm, cmn kan g ada kicknya =w=
  2. 00:35:899 (35899|3) - delete? dari tadi fokus sama clap sama kick aja .. ada suara disana gan =w=
  3. 01:27:678 - ini lagunya pernah dibuat kmaren yha tapi diapus/ re-upload lagi dung lagunya enak :v yup, w apus wkwkw
  4. 01:29:392 - mmhh, knp ga dibuat 1/8 aja disini? suara nya mayan noticeable lho ya masa di awal" lgsg w kasih 1/8 sih wkwk
  5. oke ini part yg three magic copas dari map rank? YES
  6. 03:24:342 - add note? sama juga sih suara sama yg kyk sblmnya 03:24:027 (204027|1,204027|0,204132|2,204132|3,204237|1,204237|0) - rip wkwkwk ty ty
  7. jigokuraku nya sip ja dah, gaena lagunya ENAK WOEEEEE D:<
  8. 05:08:136 (308136|3) - move to 3 ? hand balance moved
  9. 06:28:680 - akhirnya aja juga lagu halozy yg ga pasaran untuk dimap :v w ngemap ini btw
  10. 08:10:747 - astaga ini malah vocal mapping =w= knp ga difollow aja hi-hat nya? tydac mau =w=
  11. dapet gambar asli kanshou no matenrou dari mana astaga :'vvvvvv dpt dari feerum la
  12. 10:33:211 - add note? added gan

oke dah itu ja, kebanyakan lagu yg dimasukin pasaran semua :'v and why no paranoid lost aaaaaaa ;w; songs compilation ke2 coming soon kok :3

good luck dah :)

atian540 wrote:


hii virtue NM req
delaynya udah kebangetean ya ?? :''3

fri rijek
1|2|3|4

AchsanLovers wrote:

[General]
  1. isi tags sesuai dari lagu masing masing, mager ey nyari satu satu :v
sekalian karakter masing2 juga gapapa :''3
5-8 min
  1. 04:51:201 - 04:51:588 - ga tau kenapa kok 1/8nya disini ilang ? padahal ada soundnya loh re-arrange
  2. 04:53:427 (293427|3) - delet aja ? suaranya mulai disini menurutku 04:53:523 oki
  3. 05:22:846 (322846|0) - col 2
  4. 05:22:943 (322943|1) - col 1
  5. 05:23:039 (323039|2) - col 2
  6. 05:23:136 (323136|0) - col 3
  7. 05:50:954 (350954|1) - col 1
  8. 05:51:341 (351341|0) - col 3
    sebagian di apply
  9. 06:36:180 - add note ? added
  10. 06:38:122 - 06:38:475 - 06:39:533 - 06:39:886 - ^ biar sama kaya yg ini 06:36:622 (396622|2,396710|1,396798|0,396798|3,396975|1,397063|2,397151|1,397151|0,397151|3) - added
  11. 06:49:857 - loh kelupaan LN ??? apply dis
  12. 07:00:798 - ini part sini ga kaya di part sebelumnya,ga ada 1/2 LN ato sengaja ? rip, kelupaan wkwk
  13. 10:23:047 (623047|0,623211|0,623539|0,623703|0,624031|0,624195|0,624523|0,624687|0) - anchor jack ? di col 2 blum ada di bagian itu re-arranged
dah segitu aja,gw paling suka kanshou no matenrou :D :D thank you >w<
Good luck~
THANKS FOR THE MOD GUYS >W<
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[ Blaze ]
numpang lewat :P
berbau touhou sih lel
Virtue-
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Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Virtue-

[ Blaze ] wrote:

numpang lewat :P
berbau touhou sih lel
mod atuh wkwk
Himari Kino
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Himari Kino
Masshiro na Yuki <3
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Mark owo
Ampas' Mo
2017-09-30 20:27 Syadow-: oe :v
2017-09-30 20:28 Virtue-: v: eo
2017-09-30 20:29 Syadow-: modnya entar yak
2017-09-30 20:29 Syadow-: w baru pulang orz
2017-09-30 20:29 Virtue-: :v
2017-09-30 20:29 Virtue-: ditunggu
2017-09-30 20:29 Virtue-: w tunggu ae :v
2017-09-30 20:30 Syadow-: waakkwaka yg sabar yaak :3
2017-09-30 21:02 Syadow-: kuy
2017-09-30 21:02 Syadow-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1356817 Halozy - Songs Compilation [Lunatic of Marathon]]
2017-09-30 21:06 Syadow-: hadeh afk
2017-09-30 21:07 Virtue-: ....
2017-09-30 21:07 Virtue-: lagi maen :v
2017-09-30 21:07 Virtue-: bntr"
2017-09-30 21:07 Virtue-: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1217314 Helblinde - Heaven's Fall [Extra]] <osu!mania> |4K|
2017-09-30 21:07 Syadow-: waduu pas w mau off :V yaudah wkwkw
2017-09-30 21:09 Virtue-: HADEHHHHHHHH
2017-09-30 21:09 Virtue-: jadi gmn?
2017-09-30 21:09 Virtue-: mw off?
2017-09-30 21:09 Virtue-: lanjut bsk?
2017-09-30 21:09 Virtue-: ato skrg?
2017-09-30 21:10 Syadow-: skrg aja dah biar ga ada tanggungan
2017-09-30 21:10 Virtue-: ywdh
2017-09-30 21:10 Syadow-: ngetest 1 lagu bentar
2017-09-30 21:12 Virtue-: hadeh
2017-09-30 21:13 Syadow-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1356817 Halozy - Songs Compilation [Lunatic of Marathon]]
2017-09-30 21:13 Syadow-: yg lagu mana nih
2017-09-30 21:13 Virtue-: ya serah
2017-09-30 21:13 Virtue-: bebas
2017-09-30 21:13 Virtue-: lu suka lagu yg mana
2017-09-30 21:13 Syadow-: w males kalo bebas
2017-09-30 21:13 Virtue-: 5 menit pertama dah
2017-09-30 21:13 Syadow-: w mah ena smua wkwkw
2017-09-30 21:14 Syadow-: oki
2017-09-30 21:14 Virtue-: sampe kikoku doukoku jigokuraku kelar
2017-09-30 21:15 Syadow-: 00:03:790 (3790|3) - bisa ke col 3, col 4 kliatan uda byk
2017-09-30 21:16 Virtue-: hmm
2017-09-30 21:16 Virtue-: oke la
2017-09-30 21:16 Syadow-: 00:17:266 (17266|3) - col 3, biar ena ngestair nya
2017-09-30 21:17 Virtue-: moved
2017-09-30 21:17 Syadow-: 00:27:696 (27696|1,27813|0) - swap col, feel nya kyk balik disini
2017-09-30 21:18 Syadow-: 00:32:501 (32501|0) - col 2 ja =w=)b
2017-09-30 21:19 Virtue-: 00:32:266 (32266|0) - ini aja ke col 2 :D
2017-09-30 21:19 Syadow-: okelah :v biar ena diliat wkwkw
2017-09-30 21:19 Virtue-: WKWKWK
2017-09-30 21:19 Virtue-: PERSETAN GAMEPLAY ENA
2017-09-30 21:19 Virtue-: YG PENTING ENAK DILIAT
2017-09-30 21:19 Syadow-: dont let me down patternnya persis yg ranked ?
2017-09-30 21:20 Syadow-: V:
2017-09-30 21:20 Syadow-: TRUEE AF
2017-09-30 21:20 Virtue-: yup
2017-09-30 21:20 Virtue-: dont let you down sama three magic
2017-09-30 21:20 Virtue-: sama
2017-09-30 21:20 Virtue-: 100%
2017-09-30 21:20 Virtue-: yg ring of fantasia juga sih
2017-09-30 21:20 Virtue-: sama persis
2017-09-30 21:20 Syadow-: ntah bisa ngemod ga yak :V
2017-09-30 21:20 Virtue-: cmn dah we delet
2017-09-30 21:21 Virtue-: yg three magic sebenerny pengen w rombak yg di kiainya
2017-09-30 21:21 Virtue-: since patternny g enak bet
2017-09-30 21:21 Virtue-: asli dah
2017-09-30 21:21 Syadow-: three magic yg mna ?
2017-09-30 21:22 Virtue-: ya three magic
2017-09-30 21:22 Virtue-: 02:35:953 (155953|2,156060|0,156167|1,156274|0,156274|2) -
2017-09-30 21:23 Syadow-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9209190
2017-09-30 21:23 Syadow-: coba nih
2017-09-30 21:24 Virtue-: not my style but... mungkin ntar w coba
2017-09-30 21:24 Virtue-: utk sementara ini jgn mod three magic dlu
2017-09-30 21:24 Syadow-: 01:29:392 - sini 1/8 tumben ga dimap
2017-09-30 21:24 Virtue-: lagi coba w rombak abis"an
2017-09-30 21:25 Virtue-: masa awal" lu kasih 1/8
2017-09-30 21:25 Virtue-: kaget atuh
2017-09-30 21:25 Syadow-: 01:30:249 - sini sih
2017-09-30 21:25 Virtue-: 01:29:392 (89392|0) - awalny dari sini...
2017-09-30 21:25 Syadow-: 09:29:771 - ingatlah wahai sobat ku
2017-09-30 21:26 Virtue-: beda uy
2017-09-30 21:26 Virtue-: yg kanshou itu bukan di awal"
2017-09-30 21:26 Virtue-: msh di awal sih, buat itu udh jauh dari awal bet
2017-09-30 21:26 Syadow-: w kira awalan lagu :'v hadeh
2017-09-30 21:26 Virtue-: klo yg ring of fantasia beda
2017-09-30 21:26 Virtue-: itu bener" di awal
2017-09-30 21:27 Virtue-: klo andaikan w taro 1/8 di awal" bisa pada jantungan pas lagi di DT
2017-09-30 21:27 Syadow-: 01:39:678 - kok hampir persis three magic yak
2017-09-30 21:28 Virtue-: I agree!
2017-09-30 21:29 Virtue-: makany three magic mw w rombak salah satu alasannya ini
2017-09-30 21:29 Syadow-: wkwkwk
2017-09-30 21:29 Syadow-: 03:11:953 (191953|2,192060|1) - swap col biar beda sama awalnya
2017-09-30 21:30 Virtue-: wkwk
2017-09-30 21:31 Virtue-: g kepikiran
2017-09-30 21:31 Syadow-: 03:36:824 - kasih note sini 03:36:929 (216929|2,216929|3,217034|1,217034|0,217139|3,217139|2,217244|1,217244|0) - ctrl h
2017-09-30 21:34 Virtue-: re-arranged
2017-09-30 21:34 Virtue-: karna w nemu beberapa pattern g enak
2017-09-30 21:34 Virtue-: :'v
2017-09-30 21:35 Syadow-: 04:17:733 (257733|3,257943|0) - ini bisa pake LN biar 1/8 nya ke cover jg
2017-09-30 21:35 Syadow-: v:
2017-09-30 21:35 Syadow-: dah gg konsistensinya :V apakah ini buat dikit copas style v:
2017-09-30 21:36 Virtue-: ummmm..... rada melenceng dari maksud w buat gitu
2017-09-30 21:36 Virtue-: ntar w pikir" lagi dah
2017-09-30 21:36 Virtue-: IYA
2017-09-30 21:36 Virtue-: WKWKW
2017-09-30 21:36 Virtue-: DIRIKU SUDAH BERUBAH
2017-09-30 21:36 Virtue-: walopun ada beberapa copas ._.
2017-09-30 21:36 Syadow-: 04:33:297 - td uda ada deh :thongkeng
2017-09-30 21:37 Virtue-: instruny sama
2017-09-30 21:37 Virtue-: ya mw gmn lagi lah ya
2017-09-30 21:37 Syadow-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9209330
2017-09-30 21:37 Virtue-: re-arranged dah
2017-09-30 21:37 Syadow-: lainnya jg :V"
2017-09-30 21:37 Virtue-: jelek
2017-09-30 21:37 Virtue-: wkwk
2017-09-30 21:37 Syadow-: anjeg akwkaka
2017-09-30 21:37 Virtue-: lebih wew ini
2017-09-30 21:37 Virtue-: http://puu.sh/xMBUy/b627d8b6bc.jpg
2017-09-30 21:38 Virtue-: WKWKW
2017-09-30 21:39 Syadow-: ngono maneh asw :V
2017-09-30 21:39 Syadow-: 04:39:394 - 04:39:491 - 04:39:685 - bisa add note
2017-09-30 21:39 Syadow-: 04:39:878 (279878|1) - remove ga ada suara -www-
2017-09-30 21:41 Virtue-: suggestion plz
2017-09-30 21:41 Virtue-: gjd
2017-09-30 21:41 Virtue-: dah nemu yg ena
2017-09-30 21:42 Syadow-: anjg :v
2017-09-30 21:42 Virtue-: WKWKWKW
2017-09-30 21:42 Virtue-: MAAP"
2017-09-30 21:43 Syadow-: 05:04:459 (304459|3) - col3 ja ena
2017-09-30 21:44 Syadow-: 05:16:846 (316846|0) - ini jg :V ketok copas e akwkakwkak
2017-09-30 21:44 Virtue-: KAWOKAOWKKAWKOAKW
2017-09-30 21:44 Virtue-: EMNG GUA COPAS
2017-09-30 21:44 Syadow-: akokaokowkao
2017-09-30 21:44 Syadow-: dah itu aja gj :V
2017-09-30 21:45 Syadow-: lanjutannya kalo w ada waktu
2017-09-30 21:45 Virtue-: "kalo" = never
2017-09-30 21:45 Virtue-: WKWKWKW
2017-09-30 21:45 Virtue-: cepat post
2017-09-30 21:45 Syadow-: mao bobox :V
2017-09-30 21:45 Syadow-: bsok ja ku edit mager w wkwkw
2017-09-30 21:46 Syadow-: kudos dlu lah vroh :VV
2017-09-30 21:46 Virtue-: HADEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
2017-09-30 21:46 Syadow-: off jaaneee
2017-09-30 21:46 Virtue-: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
gud lak :V
Shima Rin
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Shima Rin
Hi, Virtue. Mod Request through PM.

4K: 1|2|3|4


[Lunatic of Marathon]
  1. Add all of the song titles to the tags. Here I have listed all for you:
    Koi no Serenade Don't let you down Ring of Fantasia (DiGiTAL WiNG TRANCE REMIX) Three Magic (DiGiTAL WiNG TRANCE REMIX) Brilliant Colors Kikoku Doukoku Jigokuraku Deconstruction Star Masshiro na Yuki Genryuu Kaiko PLAZMA Kanshou no Matenrou
  2. In order to list more clearly, I will mod each song separately for you below.
[Koi no Serenade]
  1. 00:01:329 (1329|1) - I suggest move this note to col3 to make a mirror pattern with 00:02:266 (2266|1,2383|3,2501|0,2501|1) -
  2. 00:03:672 (3672|0,3790|2,3907|1) - Move all these 3 notes one column right so as to mirro the pattern of 00:02:735 (2735|2,2852|0,2969|1,2969|3) -
  3. 00:04:141 (4141|3) - If you apply my previous mod, make this to col2 for a balanced pattern.
  4. 00:31:797 (31797|2,31915|0,31915|1,32032|2,32032|3) - 00:32:735 (32735|2,32852|0,32852|1,32969|2,32969|3) - I suggest you change one of the two patterns to make some differences between them to add some patterning diversity to these same rhythms all the way.
  5. Nothing to say about the general strutucture here. The song is repeating its rhythm for all the kiai.
[Don't let you down]
  1. I have been noticing a really bothering pattern for me when you rank the marathon version of this song: from 00:50:123 - to 00:50:900 - The patterns are much harder than it is looked to be. I would prefer you to vary this pattern to something else (at least don't simply copy from your ranked version I believe). Here is an example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9290631
  2. 01:16:234 (76234|1,76234|2) - How about make these notes to col1 and col2 so as to respond to the pattern you formed later 01:17:900 (77900|0,78011|3,78011|2,78123|3,78123|0,78123|1) -
  3. 01:16:567 (76567|0,76567|1) - If you apply my previous mod, make these to col2 and col3 to respond to 01:18:345 (78345|2,78345|1) -
  4. From 01:18:567 - to 01:19:567 - , I suggest the same thing as from 00:50:123 - to 00:50:900 -
  5. No general things to mention as well.The patterns are nice to me, also because it is made to ranked.
[Ring of Fantasia (DiGiTAL WiNG TRANCE REMIX)]
  1. Here is some general thing I think you can improve in the kiai session of this song: The patterns are simply too generic for me.
  2. One solution, and the easiest solution to improve is: using LNs for vocals, with single notes being around them for background drums and melodies. An example is for you: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9290654 from 01:39:678 - to 01:41:392 -
  3. Another solution, which might take more time, is to use LNs for melodic sounds. They might be harder to catch accurately but it is a way too.
[Three Magic (DiGiTAL WiNG TRANCE REMIX)]
  1. 02:22:131 (142131|3) - If you are representing the vocal, the LN should end at 02:22:988 - because that is where the vocal stops.
  2. 02:24:703 (144703|3) - If this is also for vocal, end it at 02:25:560 - because the sound still presents till that point.
  3. 02:25:560 (145560|0) - Here is the same problem as above.End it at 02:26:417 - to represent the full vocal.
  4. 02:26:631 - and 02:28:346 - For me, they need LNs to represent the vocals, just as what you did for 02:30:060 (150060|1) - , since basically they are on the same pitch with the same length.
  5. The kiai time is still handstreams with one LNs. Just as what I mentioned in Ring of Fantasia (DiGiTAL WiNG TRANCE REMIX), the patterns are simple and neat, but I just feel that they are a little bit too generic, especially when two songs together here make nearly the same patterns with each other. To represent their different styles, or to say, differentiate with them to make your patterns more unique, taking what I mention before as a solution may solve this problem: using LNs for vocals, with single notes being around them for background drums and melodies.
[Brilliant Colors]
  1. 03:10:131 - I suggest you start mapping from this point, as it is the start of a bar,and the sounds from here are clearly identifiable.
  2. 03:11:096 (191096|3,191096|2) - This double note should be deleted because there isn't melodic sound present at this point, just as 03:12:694 (192694|3,192694|0,192908|0,192908|1) -
  3. 03:16:789 (196789|1,196789|2,197104|3,197104|2) - 03:18:468 (198468|2,198468|0,198782|2,198782|1) - 03:20:146 (200146|0,200146|3,200461|2,200461|0) - 03:21:824 (201824|3,201824|1,202139|3,202139|2) - It is better to put such kicks on the same columns to represent that they are the same sounds, which will be easily-identified for the players since they can feel the impact when playing such things stacking on the same columns.
  4. 03:29:167 (209167|1,209272|2,209377|0) - I don't think here should be mapped like this because the melodic sounds are so faint at the end of each bar, and also you only map in such way in this bar. As it turns to be consistent, better change them to only a double note on 03:29:272 -
  5. 03:33:153 (213153|2) - You don't map this sound before like 03:31:475 - , so I prefer it to be deleted.
  6. 03:36:719 (216719|2,216719|1,216929|3,216929|2,217139|2,217139|3,217244|1,217244|0) - Suddenly, you put double notes for all the melodic sounds in this bar when all the melodic sounds before are only single. I treat this as an potential inconsistency and maybe change to single notes for all of those I quote.
  7. 03:39:447 (219447|2) - I don't see any melody here to be represented by this note, so I suggest delete it.
  8. From 03:41:650 - to 03:44:167 - you are mapping them with continuous handstream patterns, but from 03:28:223 - to 03:30:740 - , which is indeed the same as this part, you stop handstreams in the middle. Keep these two parts consistent. Choose one part which you prefer to apply to another, so things will be arranged more evenly and logically.
  9. 04:17:209 - How about stop your 1/8 streams here, replacing them with a few double notes so as to represent the drums at last fully (also in this way patterns will correspond with the motion of the storyboard words better): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9291653
  10. Patterns in the kiai time are well-made, and very corresponding to the song itself, with more uniqueness than the previous two. Good job!
[Kikoku Doukoku Jigokuraku]
  1. 04:39:297 (279297|1) - I suggest deleting this to avoid the minijack on col2. You did simplification for 04:39:491 (279491|2,279685|2) - these two from double notes to single notes, then why not this as well?
  2. 04:42:781 - 04:44:330 - 04:45:878 - 04:47:427 - You missed important kicks here. Add single notes to all of them as they have the same sounds as 04:42:685 (282685|1) - 04:44:233 (284233|1) - 04:45:781 (285781|3) - 04:47:330 (287330|3) -
  3. 04:53:523 (293523|3,293620|1,293717|3,293814|2) - If you are gonna catch those small kicks, they are 1/8 as a matter of fact. To simplify them like this will make here confusing. A better way to revise it is to, instead, start 04:53:910 (293910|1) - this LN earlier, from 04:53:523 -
  4. 05:26:523 - Why do you ignore this melodic sound at all? To make a nicer pattern, just add a sinlge here on col3.
  5. 05:26:717 (326717|3) - Also, to make nicer patterns, delete this note to avoid the mini-jack on col4.
  6. 05:28:072 - 05:28:265 - Here you ignore even two of them. If you find double notes to be too tiring to put here, just put single notes here instead.
  7. General structure in kiai turns good to me, which sufficiently represents the song.
[Deconstruction Star]
  1. 06:19:696 (379696|0,379793|0) - Why not avoid the mini-jack by deleting 06:19:696 (379696|0) - as what you did in 06:19:696 (379696|0) - ?
  2. Again, structure in kiai is well-made.
[Masshiro na Yuki]
  1. 06:30:180 (390180|2,390533|3) - There are no drums here, so I prefer these to be deleted.
  2. 06:46:328 (406328|2) - If this is for vocal, it should end at 06:46:504 - as this is where the vocal stops.
  3. 06:57:622 (417622|1) - This is the same problem as above. End it at 06:57:798 - to represent the vocal best.
  4. 07:04:504 - You need a double note for the drum as what you did in 07:03:975 -
  5. 07:06:445 (426445|3) - This LN should just be a normal note, as no major melody sound present until 07:06:622 - , just like no LN on 07:05:033 -
  6. 07:08:386 (428386|1,428739|2) - 07:09:092 (429092|1) - These LNs should have only half of their original lengths because the vocals end earlier than what you represented here.End 07:08:386 (428386|1) - at 07:08:563 - and 07:08:739 (428739|2) - at 07:08:916 -
  7. 07:10:680 (430680|3,432092|3) - These are the same problems as 07:06:445 (426445|3) -, because the melodic sounds you want to represent do not start from 07:10:680 - and 07:12:092 - but from 07:10:857 - and 07:12:269 -
  8. 07:14:210 (434210|3) - Make this just a normal note because it represents neither a vocal nor a part of melody.
  9. 07:14:386 (434386|1,434739|2) - They have same problems as 07:08:386 (428386|1,428739|2) - 07:09:092 (429092|1) -, because the vocals still end early, which is closer to half length of the original one (1/2) than original full length (1/1).
  10. 07:17:739 (437739|0) - Make this to a normal note, as the same problem with 07:06:445 (426445|3) -
  11. 07:19:680 (439680|2,440033|1,440386|2) - Revise them to half of the original length, as the reasoning has explained for previous same problems in 07:14:386 (434386|1,434739|2) -
  12. 07:25:504 (445504|0) - Here is the same problem as 07:14:210 (434210|3) -, so make this as a normal note.
  13. 07:25:680 (445680|2,446033|1) - Revise them to half of the original length as the same problem with 07:19:680 (439680|2,440033|1,440386|2) -
  14. 07:37:680 (457680|3) - Here is a D sound in the melody, so make this note to a 1/2 LN then as what you did for all other melodic sounds.
  15. 07:38:386 (458386|2) - This one should not be a LN to represent the melody, and the melodic sound,F, present at 07:38:210 - instead.
  16. 07:48:975 (468975|1) - It represents D melodic sound as well, so make it to a 1/2 LN too.
  17. 07:49:239 (469239|1) - I don't hear drum here, so maybe delete this note.
  18. The kiai structure impresses me a lot in this song. With only a few problems listed above being revised, it will be creative and well-made too.
[Genryuu Kaiko]
  1. 08:14:562 - It is a snare here, which you used to put triple on. Add a note on col4 then to make your note use consistent overall.
  2. 08:25:660 - Here turns out the same problem. Add one on col1 this time for consistency of note use.
  3. I can see you try to avoid long stacks in the kiai with all the LNs being around. Really nice job!
[PLAZMA]
  1. 08:40:218 - 08:40:989 - 08:45:703 - 08:46:475 - I can hear cymbals present in these places. Add one more note on each line so as not to miss any important elements here.
  2. 08:46:475 - 08:45:961 - With the melody present on each 1/2 around this part, I would suggest you not to leave these two 1/2 lines empty. Add single notes to both lines to make the patterns continuous.
  3. 08:52:132 - A kick is here, stronger than other cymbals around it, so better put another note on col2 to make a double to represent its relative higher volume.
  4. 09:07:561 - 09:18:532 - Such syncopation sounds around would be a little bit hard to play, so better put single notes on these lines to resolve the problems raised here, and you also did such like 09:13:046 (553046|3) - and 09:02:075 (542075|0) -
  5. The patterns are a bit repetitive to be honest, but they are still following most of the background piano melody line.I would say it is OK for me, but for other modders and nominators, they may have their more creative ideas.
[Kanshou no Matenrou]
  1. 09:32:310 - You miss a kick here, which you used to catch it for all the same patterns after it.
  2. 10:01:900 - Maybe you also need a double note here because it is a heavier snare.
  3. 10:02:474 - I think you need one more here to complete representing the kicks if you map 10:02:310 (602310|0) -
  4. 10:02:883 - to 10:06:982 - You might want to revise it like this to fully represent those drums: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9292011, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9292013 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9292016
  5. 10:12:720 - 10:14:031 - 10:14:687 - 10:15:342 - 10:16:654 - 10:17:310 - 10:17:965 - 10:19:441 - On all of these lines, I can clearly hear the kicks that are necessary to be with double notes, but you only treat them with single notes. Check all of them to hear their sounds then.
  6. 10:21:408 (621408|2) - It will be better to delete this note as no clear sound is here, and you can emphasize more on the drums in this way.
  7. 10:26:818 - A kick is here, so add one more note to better represent it.
  8. 10:30:260 (630260|1,630342|0,630424|3) - These kicks, in my opinion, can be best represented by double notes, as what you did in 10:22:392 (622392|3,622392|2,622474|1,622474|0,622556|2,622556|3,622638|0,622638|1) - . Though they might have a little bit different sound quality, the ideas are the same.
  9. 10:30:506 (630506|2) - I don't hear any drums here, so maybe delete it.
  10. 10:31:408 - A kick is here, the same as 10:31:080 (631080|1,631080|0,631244|2,631244|3) -, so add one note on col2 then. For the sake of balanced patterns, make 10:31:572 (631572|1) - to col3 if you apply this mod.
  11. Well-made, balanced patterns to avoid most of the stacks. Correct some problems above and this kiai structure would be also really nice.
Alright, that will be all I want to comment on this map. Good luck for rank! Hope my mods help you more or less.
Himari Kino
324 posts
Joined June 2015
Himari Kino
hi virtue~
m4m

columns 1|2|3|4

2huthon
00:05:313 - double aja supaya penekanan suaranya kerasa
06:22:503 - mungkin jadikan double aja suaranya gak terlalu nyaring menurut ku
08:40:818 (520818|2) - fokus ke drum aja? soalnya suara sama 08:40:989 - tapi kosong
09:19:732 - mapping drum roll nya aja , kayak https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9530055
cuman nemu segitu, ntap
gdluck :3)//
kalo mau mod lagi bilang aja , kependekan gini gak enak gw ;w;
No_sync
380 posts
Joined November 2014
No_sync
hi!

From my NM/M4M queue.

Columns 4K 0|1|2|3



General
MP3: PASS
  1. 128 Kbps for less weight! Between 128-192 is ok so pass.
BG: PASS
  1. Cool one :3
Video: SKIP
BPM & Offset: PASS
Diff.Spread: PASS
Diff.Name: PASS?
  1. ......... The current one is good, but i was thinking of "Halozy Raid Boss" or something like that. (As far i know, "Raid Boss" means for example: defeat all 8 bosses that you already defeated before, but all at the same time, one after the other until defeat everyone. This could be applied here... but for songs instead lol.)
HP & OD: PASS?
  1. OD=9 seems a bit too high, maybe 8.8 instead?
Hitsound: SKIP
  1. ...i don't see any? (for now?)
Hitsound Volume: FAIL
  1. I only see 0% everywhere. Maybe 30% to 50% will be better even without hitsounds.
Kiai Time: PASS
Metadata: MISS
  1. As far i know is good for the titles that aren't written with japanese language... So there are some that need to be added:
    1. Title1: "恋のセレナーデ" for "Koi no Serenade", Link (3rd song): https://soundcloud.com/halozy/hlzy-0011-tonic-triangle
    2. Title2: "鬼哭慟哭地獄楽" for "Kikoku Doukoku Jigokuraku", Link (8th song): https://web.archive.org/web/20141112201 ... hlzy-0005/ <- Halozy... please stop erasing your data of the internet :^)
    3. Title3: "まっしろな雪" for "Masshiro na Yuki", Link (1st song): http://halozy.com/discography/hlzy-0023/ <- Not erased yay!
    4. Title4: "源流懐古" for "Genryuu Kaiko", Link (9th song): https://web.archive.org/web/20141124233 ... hlzy-0006/ <- :^) again lol
    5. Title5: "感傷の摩天楼" for "Kanshou no Matenrou". Cover from the album, Link (2nd song): https://puu.sh/ymLme.JPG
Widescreen Support: PASS
  1. As far i know, is activated so is good i guess. By the way, first time in like *insert high number but less than 100?* beatmaps that i find one to mod with Storyboard, lol.
Preview Point: PASS?
  1. Not my favourite if i compare the rest, the first two at the start are really good...or the last one. (opinion btw lol). I guess you decided here, because is at the middle?
AiMod Things: MISS
  1. I found some things that i think need some fix:
    1. 5% volume warning... well i already commented about that just above.
    2. There is a BG not used on the beatmap folder and i don't think that is used on the .osb file either. You need to remove it, increases the beatmap size. This one: https://puu.sh/ymfrM.png
    3. ...I don't think that the .rar file is needed there as well. Try to remove it: https://puu.sh/ymfwx.png

Mod!
Natsuki Tofu did this before and look faster to understand! So i will separate with the song titles as well lol:

[Koi no Serenade]
00:02:852 (2852|0,2969|1,3204|0,3321|1) - A bit repetitive in my opinion, I rather move 00:03:204 (3204|0) - to |2|.

00:04:844 (4844|2,4844|0,4844|3) - Is intended to be triple note/Hand for this snare? Since the rest of the map only uses chords... and some triples appear but only for cymbals.

00:05:313 (5313|0,5313|3,6016|1,6016|2) - Tom sounds are chords here. Still i prefer using triple note instead. Up to you.

00:11:290 (11290|0,11407|0,12227|0,12344|0) - I think is better to change of columns here, jacks can be separate more in my opinion. Maybe like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9587737

00:15:626 (15626|0,16094|3) - If you are following the vocal here, i think that the last part is skipped. I don't know if is intended. Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9587818

00:19:727 (19727|3,19844|3,21602|3,21719|3) - Again about changing columns for jacks, maybe like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9587753

00:30:626 (30626|2,31094|1) - The last vocal is skipped in my opinion. Like before, I would try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9587839

00:34:727 (34727|0,34844|0,35665|0,35782|0) - Changing notes placement for jacks again, in this case like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9587773

Why is this song always so good? lol, good work!

[Don't let you down]
00:51:900 (51900|1,51900|0) - ah, this guitar riff... I played before this full song of yours before, and i always think that these guitar riffs lack of impact in my opinion.
I think that one Longnote isn't enough, that or adding SV's. I will leave this suggestion, but of course is up to you after all: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9587892

00:59:456 (59456|0,59678|1,60123|2,60345|3) - If i hearing well, first two Longnotes are for guitar riffs, last two are vocals. So, i rather separate guitar and vocal in this way to distinguish better each sound: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9587969

01:09:900 (69900|2,70123|2,70345|2,70789|2,71011|2,71234|2) - Up to you, but i rather move 01:10:345 (70345|2) - to |3|, so it gets less repetitive.

01:05:567 (65567|3,65678|3,67789|3,67900|3) - Same thing about the jacks in the same column. I rather do something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9588035

01:07:789 (67789|3,67900|3,69123|3,69234|3) - Same case as above, maybe like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9588066

01:10:345 (70345|2) - I rather move this note to |1|, if you applied the comment of above.

This song is sooo goood.

[Ring of Fantasia (DiGiTAL WiNG TRANCE REMIX)]
01:46:749 (106749|2,106963|2,107178|2,107392|2,107606|2,107820|2) - Before this, all the rest of those stacks are acceptable, since i saw good patterns following them, but this one can be better in my opinion. Maybe like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9588128

...And that's all here, i could say a lot of things about those stacks, but because of the amount of notes used, will be useless. Good work!

[Three Magic (DiGiTAL WiNG TRANCE REMIX)]
02:30:810 (150810|1,150917|2,151131|2,151346|2,151560|2) - I think that isn't necessary to use 4-notes stack there, when you can use 3-notes stack with a quick fix: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9588219

02:41:846 (161846|0,162060|0,162274|0,162488|0,162703|0,162917|0,163131|0) - This stack can be reduced to be honest, i would try this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9588241 , Zoom in: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9588243

02:55:131 (175131|0,175346|0,175560|0,175774|0,175988|0,176203|0,176417|0) - Same case here, I would try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9588265 , Zoom in: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9588277

02:57:274 (177274|0,177488|0,177703|0,177917|0,178131|0,178346|0,178560|0) - ^Again the stack, I rather do something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9588301 , Zoom in: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9588298

Not so good like the first two songs, but still good (?)

[Brilliant Colors]
03:11:631 (191631|0,191846|0,192060|0,192275|0) - Stack, i rather move 03:12:275 (192275|0) - to |1| instead.

03:13:328 (193328|0,193538|0,193747|0,193957|0) - ^Again, in this case move 03:13:957 (193957|0) - to |3|.

04:02:838 (242838|3,243048|3,243258|3,243468|3) - ^This time you could move 04:03:258 (243258|3) - to |2|.

04:04:097 (244097|3,244307|3,244517|3,244726|3) - I think all this part could be better by balance out this stack, maybe like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9588369

tuu ru ruu ru ru ru ru ru ru ru ruu ru ru ru ru ruu ru ru ru ru ruu ruu ru ruu ru ru ru ru ru ru ru ruu ru ru ru ru ru ru ru ru ruuuuuu...

Sorry i have time here, so i will use it lol. Third best!

[Kikoku Doukoku Jigokuraku]
05:18:297 (318297|3,318491|3,318685|3,318878|3,319072|3) - Stack, I think that a little movement can fix this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9588503

05:25:652 (325652|3,325846|3,326039|3,326233|3,326426|3) - ^Again, The chord in the middle could be like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9588520

05:27:201 (327201|0,327394|0,327588|0,327781|0,327975|0) - ^In this case, maybe like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9588525

Perfect here!

About the song... eh. pass i guess...

[Deconstruction Star]
05:51:341 (351341|0,351535|0,351728|1,351922|1,352116|0,352309|0) - I think you could move 05:51:728 (351728|1) - to |2| instead and still makes that 2-stack pattern what you want.

05:52:890 (352890|2,353083|2,353083|3,353277|3,353470|1) - If you applied the comment above, then this can be like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9588562

06:22:890 (382890|3,382890|0,382890|1) - A Quad could be good as well, since you finish the song here.

k i r a k i r a :^)

Between the 4 best, i can't decide one though lol

[Masshiro na Yuki]
06:58:857 (418857|2,419033|1) - Not vocals, so i prefer to separate from the Longnote that was a Vocal: 06:58:504 (418504|3) . Because in that way you will emphasize better the difference between sounds. Maybe like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9588610

07:09:092 (429092|1) - This vocal in particular can be separated more, i guess that is a difference pitch. Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9588635 <- The first two notes highlighted were moved for balance, up to you there.

07:20:386 (440386|2) - Same vocal, same reason: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9588665 <- Again the first two notes, up to you.

07:27:092 (447092|2,447269|0,447445|1) - These vocals in particular as well, i think that could emphasize them better if you try a different arrange. Maybe like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9588696

Yurara Yurari~

One more to the good ones lol.

[Genryuu Kaiko]
08:13:521 (493521|1,493695|2,494388|1,494562|2) - Is similar and i don't prefer that for the vocals. Maybe you can try this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9588740

08:24:619 (504619|2,504793|1,505487|2,505660|1) - Same case, just inverted: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9588750

08:32:943 - Quad? Up to you.

Neutral about this song, not enough good but not bad either.

[PLAZMA]
09:19:046 (559046|2,559218|2,559389|2,559732|2,559903|2,560075|2) - Again? I rather use the column |0|. Like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9588772 . About this, using the left hand will be good enough in my opinion rather than two times the right hand for 3-notes stacks (because you are holding the Longnote as well).

Nothing more here, good work!

[Kanshou no Matenrou]
Ah, i was expecting the last part of this song... oh well...

09:58:457 (598457|0,598621|1,598621|0,598785|1,598785|0,598949|1) - I rather move 09:58:621 (598621|1) - to |3| instead, to less strain on the left hand.

10:07:801 (607801|2,607965|2,608129|2,608293|2) - Stack, I guess you can move 10:08:129 (608129|2) - to |3| instead.

10:10:916 (610916|0,611244|1,611572|3,611572|2) - I think that for symmetry you can do this instead (despite the extension of the vocal with the longnote, i prefer this) : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9588829

tututututu tu tu tu tu tu tuuu tu tuuuuuu tu tu tuu tu tuu tu tuu tu tu tu tu tu tuuuuuu tu tuuu

Another one good!

Sorry for the delay! Also, sorry for singing some parts i really liked this compilation lol, just add those hitsounds!. By the way, why is this on graveyard if you revived three days ago? :^)

Good Luck! :)
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gonna pending it first, thanks guys for the mods
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