General:- Metadata seems to be right actually
- Add "IOSYS" on tags since it's the actual composer of the song
g- You should put "Sae Kobayakawa" instead of "Kobayakawa Sae" (it's in that order in the kanji name so i guess romanised should be that way too, but call an expert on this since im not sure at all)
im p sure the name order is correct (Sae the given name and all unless it's supposed to be romanized the western way)SourceAccording to Modding Assistant, you're not using the following hitsounds:
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removedObjects:• This is offsnaped 00:06:347 (2) - .... it should start on the red tic ( 00:06:513 - ). You can be sure about this if you hear that part at 25% playback rate
actually i feel like it's supposed to be at the yellow tick in 1/8 but it feels unintuitive to play so i guess i'll put it at the red til someone say otherwise• 00:29:141 (2,3,2,3) - I suggest you to keep the spacing that you used on 00:25:301 (2,3) - , it's a pretty consistent way to keep up your map
did it on the stack but i'd like to keep it on the stream • 00:32:141 (6) - The curve of this slider is slightly noticeable, i think that you could add a bit more of curve so there would be an actual difference between straigh and curvy
sure• 00:36:461 (1) - I'd move this a bit up so it wont be that close to 00:35:261 (2) -
fixed• 00:38:861 (2) - Why is here less spacing than 00:40:301 (1,2) - ? It feels really close to the slider right now
fixed• 00:41:261 (5,6) - Same here... Also if you move this a bit down 00:41:021 (4,7) - this won't overlap so its a plus point
fixed• 00:43:661 (3) - What about moving this (and all the circles snapped there) to x:343 y:104? It would fit the triple shape of 00:41:621 (6,7,3) - as you did on 00:42:461 (2,3,4,2) -
i was kinda confused but fixed• 00:45:821 (5) - You should adjust this one a bit so it fits the triple shape (00:44:381 (2,3,4,5) - )
• 00:55:181 (1) - Add NC for emphasis, currently it seems like this two circles has different sounds than 00:54:221 (2,3,4,5) -
sure(i might also change this entire part so the distance also emphasizes the sound change• 00:54:941 (5,2,3,4) - Adjust the triple a bit so it fits with the circle 5
• 00:56:621 (6) - Add NC? The vocal starts here and its pretty loud tho so it would give a really good emphasis to the pattern (NOTE: you did it here 02:17:261 (1) - )
fixed• 01:01:301 (6,1) - This seems to be the only 2 notes that are not spaced from the slider, why?
yea forgot. now spaced• 01:42:701 (2) - This sliders seems to be wrong, It should be an 1/6 slider with 4 reverses
i have no ears• 01:58:061 (1) - This circle feels awkward, Why would you add this on a slow part? Player should be relaxing until the kiai so there shouldn't be really this kind of things imo, Also you already emphasized it with the NC, you could just reduce the spacing a bit (to like 1,4x), it would still be noticeable and wont be such as spaced as now
it's not of the same distance with the rest of the stream. only thought the same when i actually played it orz• 02:04:061 (7) - Move this circle JUST A BIT to the right so it fits the triple shape
moved• 02:55:421 (4,4) - Stack?
stack• 03:32:381 - Feels like you're missing a pretty notorious sound here, maybe instead of using a weird blue line slider after the whole 1/2 rhythm part you could put 2 circles
i dunno if i understand it correct but i removed that 1/2 and placed a circle instead so it feels more emhpasized• 03:34:541 (8,1) - I'd suggest you to space that circle a bit more as i said before
• 04:13:901 (3) - I'd move it to x:456 y:217 so it would be exactly between 04:13:061 (2,3) - without making a weird overlap