Kobayakawa Sae (CV: Tachibana Rika) - HANAKANZASHI

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domSaur
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, August 12, 2017 at 1:50:48 AM

Artist: Kobayakawa Sae (CV: Tachibana Rika)
Title: HANAKANZASHI
Source: アイドルマスター シンデレラガールズ
Tags: the idolm@ster cinderella girls master 029 idolmaster im@s imas starlight stage deresute arm iosys ricca
BPM: 90
Filesize: 11527kb
Play Time: 04:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. Floral Hairpin (4.11 stars, 938 notes)


Download: Kobayakawa Sae (CV: Tachibana Rika) - HANAKANZASHI
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RevengeZ
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Lince Cosmico wrote:

Hallo, ill try my best :)

General:
- Metadata seems to be right actually
- Add "IOSYS" on tags since it's the actual composer of the song
- You should put "Sae Kobayakawa" instead of "Kobayakawa Sae" (it's in that order in the kanji name so i guess romanised should be that way too, but call an expert on this since im not sure at all)
Source
According to Modding Assistant, you're not using the following hitsounds:
/// - soft-slidertick2.wav - ///
Objects:
• This is offsnaped 00:06:347 (2) - .... it should start on the red tic ( 00:06:513 - ). You can be sure about this if you hear that part at 25% playback rate
• 00:29:141 (2,3,2,3) - I suggest you to keep the spacing that you used on 00:25:301 (2,3) - , it's a pretty consistent way to keep up your map
• 00:32:141 (6) - The curve of this slider is slightly noticeable, i think that you could add a bit more of curve so there would be an actual difference between straigh and curvy
• 00:36:461 (1) - I'd move this a bit up so it wont be that close to 00:35:261 (2) -
• 00:38:861 (2) - Why is here less spacing than 00:40:301 (1,2) - ? It feels really close to the slider right now
• 00:41:261 (5,6) - Same here... Also if you move this a bit down 00:41:021 (4,7) - this won't overlap so its a plus point
• 00:43:661 (3) - What about moving this (and all the circles snapped there) to x:343 y:104? It would fit the triple shape of 00:41:621 (6,7,3) - as you did on 00:42:461 (2,3,4,2) -
• 00:45:821 (5) - You should adjust this one a bit so it fits the triple shape (00:44:381 (2,3,4,5) - )
• 00:55:181 (1) - Add NC for emphasis, currently it seems like this two circles has different sounds than 00:54:221 (2,3,4,5) -
• 00:54:941 (5,2,3,4) - Adjust the triple a bit so it fits with the circle 5
• 00:56:621 (6) - Add NC? The vocal starts here and its pretty loud tho so it would give a really good emphasis to the pattern (NOTE: you did it here 02:17:261 (1) - )
• 01:01:301 (6,1) - This seems to be the only 2 notes that are not spaced from the slider, why?
• 01:42:701 (2) - This sliders seems to be wrong, It should be an 1/6 slider with 4 reverses
• 01:58:061 (1) - This circle feels awkward, Why would you add this on a slow part? Player should be relaxing until the kiai so there shouldn't be really this kind of things imo, Also you already emphasized it with the NC, you could just reduce the spacing a bit (to like 1,4x), it would still be noticeable and wont be such as spaced as now
• 02:04:061 (7) - Move this circle JUST A BIT to the right so it fits the triple shape
• 02:55:421 (4,4) - Stack?
• 03:32:381 - Feels like you're missing a pretty notorious sound here, maybe instead of using a weird blue line slider after the whole 1/2 rhythm part you could put 2 circles
• 03:34:541 (8,1) - I'd suggest you to space that circle a bit more as i said before
• 04:13:901 (3) - I'd move it to x:456 y:217 so it would be exactly between 04:13:061 (2,3) - without making a weird overlap

It's a pretty good map and it have my thumbs up since its slow and the hexagonal gimmicks are well done... Good luck with it :)
Flower sliderart
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Topic Starter
domSaur

RevengeZ wrote:

General:
- Metadata seems to be right actually
- Add "IOSYS" on tags since it's the actual composer of the song g
- You should put "Sae Kobayakawa" instead of "Kobayakawa Sae" (it's in that order in the kanji name so i guess romanised should be that way too, but call an expert on this since im not sure at all) im p sure the name order is correct (Sae the given name and all unless it's supposed to be romanized the western way)
Source
According to Modding Assistant, you're not using the following hitsounds:
/// - soft-slidertick2.wav - /// removed
Objects:
• This is offsnaped 00:06:347 (2) - .... it should start on the red tic ( 00:06:513 - ). You can be sure about this if you hear that part at 25% playback rate actually i feel like it's supposed to be at the yellow tick in 1/8 but it feels unintuitive to play so i guess i'll put it at the red til someone say otherwise
• 00:29:141 (2,3,2,3) - I suggest you to keep the spacing that you used on 00:25:301 (2,3) - , it's a pretty consistent way to keep up your map did it on the stack but i'd like to keep it on the stream
• 00:32:141 (6) - The curve of this slider is slightly noticeable, i think that you could add a bit more of curve so there would be an actual difference between straigh and curvy sure
• 00:36:461 (1) - I'd move this a bit up so it wont be that close to 00:35:261 (2) - fixed
• 00:38:861 (2) - Why is here less spacing than 00:40:301 (1,2) - ? It feels really close to the slider right now fixed
• 00:41:261 (5,6) - Same here... Also if you move this a bit down 00:41:021 (4,7) - this won't overlap so its a plus point fixed
• 00:43:661 (3) - What about moving this (and all the circles snapped there) to x:343 y:104? It would fit the triple shape of 00:41:621 (6,7,3) - as you did on 00:42:461 (2,3,4,2) - i was kinda confused but fixed
• 00:45:821 (5) - You should adjust this one a bit so it fits the triple shape (00:44:381 (2,3,4,5) - )
• 00:55:181 (1) - Add NC for emphasis, currently it seems like this two circles has different sounds than 00:54:221 (2,3,4,5) - sure(i might also change this entire part so the distance also emphasizes the sound change
• 00:54:941 (5,2,3,4) - Adjust the triple a bit so it fits with the circle 5
• 00:56:621 (6) - Add NC? The vocal starts here and its pretty loud tho so it would give a really good emphasis to the pattern (NOTE: you did it here 02:17:261 (1) - ) fixed
• 01:01:301 (6,1) - This seems to be the only 2 notes that are not spaced from the slider, why? yea forgot. now spaced
• 01:42:701 (2) - This sliders seems to be wrong, It should be an 1/6 slider with 4 reverses i have no ears
• 01:58:061 (1) - This circle feels awkward, Why would you add this on a slow part? Player should be relaxing until the kiai so there shouldn't be really this kind of things imo, Also you already emphasized it with the NC, you could just reduce the spacing a bit (to like 1,4x), it would still be noticeable and wont be such as spaced as now it's not of the same distance with the rest of the stream. only thought the same when i actually played it orz
• 02:04:061 (7) - Move this circle JUST A BIT to the right so it fits the triple shape moved
• 02:55:421 (4,4) - Stack? stack
• 03:32:381 - Feels like you're missing a pretty notorious sound here, maybe instead of using a weird blue line slider after the whole 1/2 rhythm part you could put 2 circles i dunno if i understand it correct but i removed that 1/2 and placed a circle instead so it feels more emhpasized
• 03:34:541 (8,1) - I'd suggest you to space that circle a bit more as i said before
• 04:13:901 (3) - I'd move it to x:456 y:217 so it would be exactly between 04:13:061 (2,3) - without making a weird overlap
anything that wasn't replied are also fixed(basically applied everything uwu)
thanks for the mod

and the sliderart doesn't reach until the end of the drain time :(
RevengeZ

domSaur wrote:

anything that wasn't replied are also fixed(basically applied everything uwu)
thanks for the mod

and the sliderart doesn't reach until the end of the drain time :(
Jus change slider velocity until it fit
Topic Starter
domSaur
i did even going below 0.50 it was like between x0.31 and x0.32

decided to just fiddle with the head and tail(rly didn't want to touch it as much as possible xd) and i got it snapped fine oright altho the side feels slightly botched :s
Rizen
  1. 00:52:541 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - would be nice to see an increasing DS pattern within these triples (like a buildup)
  2. 01:11:021 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - if u r gonna do this, perhaps make it so 01:11:381 (4,1) - aren't touching so the idea is more consistent with 01:11:861 (4,1) - . same to other kiai instances
  3. 02:11:741 (2,3,4) - different DS to 02:10:781 (2,3,4) -
  4. 02:13:181 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - NC pattern here different to 00:52:541 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -
  5. 02:52:301 (3) - I would NC 1/4 placed circles in this section to help with readability cos the spacing for these 1/4 is similar to the 1/2 ones like 02:53:141 (3,4) -
  6. 03:04:301 (1) - perhaps lower volume at this section, pretty calm compared to kiai which uses the same volume
  7. 04:20:621 (6,7,8,9,1) - calps are kinda noisy tbh, especially for the soft string instrument. Also because you didn't do so at 01:23:981 (5,6,7,8,1) -
  8. 04:32:141 (3,4,5,6,1) - looks kinda messy with the DS. I see a DS idea happening here, but it's so miniscule that the effect can't really be seen


glgl
Topic Starter
domSaur

Rizen wrote:

  1. 00:52:541 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - would be nice to see an increasing DS pattern within these triples (like a buildup) yea
  2. 01:11:021 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - if u r gonna do this, perhaps make it so 01:11:381 (4,1) - aren't touching so the idea is more consistent with 01:11:861 (4,1) - . same to other kiai instances indeed. now it's spaced albeit with smaller ds than the one with the 1/4 sliders
  3. 02:11:741 (2,3,4) - different DS to 02:10:781 (2,3,4) - now it's same
  4. 02:13:181 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - NC pattern here different to 00:52:541 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - reworked the nc of 00:52:541 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - instead to match 02:13:181 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) -
  5. 02:52:301 (3) - I would NC 1/4 placed circles in this section to help with readability cos the spacing for these 1/4 is similar to the 1/2 ones like 02:53:141 (3,4) - m
  6. 03:04:301 (1) - perhaps lower volume at this section, pretty calm compared to kiai which uses the same volume now at 50
  7. 04:20:621 (6,7,8,9,1) - calps are kinda noisy tbh, especially for the soft string instrument. Also because you didn't do so at 01:23:981 (5,6,7,8,1) - wtf why is there even claps here. removed.
  8. 04:32:141 (3,4,5,6,1) - looks kinda messy with the DS. I see a DS idea happening here, but it's so miniscule that the effect can't really be seen it is not supposed to wiggle if that's what ur pointing but changed the entire shape of it instead


glgl
thanks for the mod
Affirmation
Q

[asdf]
00:34:061 (1) - You don't need to add NC here
01:42:701 (2,3,4,5) - you should follow the piano? sound.
01:49:901 (2,3) - weird stack
02:22:061 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest you set pentagon for better structure
04:50:841 (1,2,3,4,1) - 1/6

GL
Topic Starter
domSaur

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[asdf]
00:34:061 (1) - You don't need to add NC here agree
01:42:701 (2,3,4,5) - you should follow the piano? sound. the kicks are stronger at this point and i thought i'd emphasize that instead. that string was just for filler
01:49:901 (2,3) - weird stack seems fine to me
02:22:061 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest you set pentagon for better structure okek
04:50:841 (1,2,3,4,1) - 1/6 actually i think it's one 1/8 but chanced

GL
thanks for the mod
-Smine-
Floral Hairpin

00:57:581 - The audio in Kiai is higher. 70 % is enough (make this in all kiai)
01:35:021 (4,5,6,7,1) - Put a circle between the Sliders for good variety

Only this e.e
Good luck!
Topic Starter
domSaur

Sminebrasil wrote:

Floral Hairpin

00:57:581 - The audio in Kiai is higher. 70 % is enough (make this in all kiai) tbh idk if it's rly that necesary but anyways kiais are now 10%
louder

01:35:021 (4,5,6,7,1) - Put a circle between the Sliders for good variety no it's fine

Only this e.e
Good luck!
thanks
Dizick
00:47:981 (1) - do this slider like 00:48:461 (2) -
00:53:741 (1) - remove NC here and add here 00:54:221 (2) -
01:15:821 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - do spacing here like 01:04:301 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) -
02:16:541 (2,3,4) - i think will better if you do it like this https://puu.sh/wOHjt/0e4ab20229.png
02:17:741 (2) - https://puu.sh/wOHn7/ca5b193694.png

Nice map and song <3
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
domSaur

My Angel DanyL wrote:

00:47:981 (1) - do this slider like 00:48:461 (2) - (2) is already in symmetry with (3) and it's also for change of stanza i think
00:53:741 (1) - remove NC here and add here 00:54:221 (2) - the (1) is the stronger sound tho
01:15:821 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - do spacing here like 01:04:301 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - rather i instead set it to x0.8 to match the ds of 02:24:941 (5,6,7,8) - and 04:00:941 (5,6,7,8) - this the first massive stream in the map and i think it's ok if the ds isn't that big yet
02:16:541 (2,3,4) - i think will better if you do it like this https://puu.sh/wOHjt/0e4ab20229.png the other same triples in this part isn't stacked so no
02:17:741 (2) - https://puu.sh/wOHn7/ca5b193694.png sure

Nice map and song <3
Good Luck!
thanks for the mod
osuwiktor-PL
00:27:221 (2) - Move this in between sliders.
00:29:141 (2) - The same here.
00:30:461 (2,1) - Space them apart.
00:30:701 (1,2,3) - Move them closer a bit.
00:32:621 (1,2,3) - The same as 00:27:221 (2)
00:37:661 (4,5,6) - Space them apart a bit.
Topic Starter
domSaur

osuwiktor-PL wrote:

00:27:221 (2) - Move this in between sliders. i want to emphasize the sound in 00:27:221 (2,3) - together
00:29:141 (2) - The same here.
00:30:461 (2,1) - Space them apart.
00:30:701 (1,2,3) - Move them closer a bit.
00:32:621 (1,2,3) - The same as 00:27:221 (2)
00:37:661 (4,5,6) - Space them apart a bit.
ok sorry but not applying all that for single reason: your modding is basically space out the objects but the reason they're compressed is because i want to emphasize the sound that way by having them clickable in the same spot

nevertheless, thanks.
MaestroSplinter
Great map
Hikan
i like
00:29:981 (3,5,6) - these japanese sounds dont get emphasised at all, athough it is kinda unique in this circumstance, maybe change 2 of them into 1/4 kick?
00:35:501 (3) - nc here? Since you nc the same sound around there 01:56:141 (3) -
00:40:781 (3,4,5) - direction of the (5) make this flow looks weird though the song is still calm, can I suggest ctrl g (5)?
00:47:981 (1) - this curve looks random >_> , I would like to make it less curvy for a nicer aesthetic but up to you since it isnt very important
00:53:741 (1,2) - I think swap nc here would be nice. To fit the triplet and start a star instead of just nc downbeat like dat 02:14:381 (1,2) -
00:57:101 (2,2) - overlapped slider head make it look odd, fix them, overlap sliderbody is fine tho
00:57:581 (1,1) - consistent shape would be cool
01:04:301 (5) - nc? to make players recognize the stream has been starting why not 01:15:821 (4) -
01:07:901 (4) - nc as well? xd too long combo would have the hp drain decreased a bit
01:08:621 (8) - How about changing them to 2 circles to have the vocal clicked, slidertail doesnt emphasis the high pitch vocal good enough imo.
01:20:621 (1,2) - something im gonna say would be dumb. How about swapping nc here, starting combo at the vocal would make it stronger, instead of nc a lonely high beat. It is stupid right? But i think the vocal would need more priority here
01:35:381 - map? also 01:35:021 (4) - nc this to emphasis the bell maybe, 01:39:821 (4) - and this as well urghh
03:18:461 (2,3) - ctrl g to fit rhythm better imo
03:58:061 (1,2,3,4,5) - could be able to make a perfect star here
04:14:381 (5,6) - blanket looks wrong
04:34:541 - lower volume here or they wont know that has a sound lol
04:44:774 (3) - nc please
04:51:309 (1) - would you please loosen it up a bit, slider might be kind of hard to read since you might not know which direction to turn in without snaking slider
Those first kiai part effect to the 2nd and 3rd as well, please considering it carefully, I just dont want to extend my mod with repetitive sentences, I just dont want to extend my mod with repetitive sentences, I just dont want to extend my mod with repetitive sentences.
hope to see this get further, goodest luck to you.
Seto Kousuke

hi hi from the 7x1 queue
LOL that break at the ending for the 5 min drain time HAHAHA XD genius
[Floral Hairpin]
  1. 00:06:430 (1,2) - Need less DS...too agressive motion for such little time...same applies for other moments like 01:41:741 (1,2,3,4) - 1->2 is kinda OK, but the 2->3->4 is wayy too much overkill
  2. 00:59:981 (2,3,4) - I think these kind of patterns on this DS are more harsh than it looks like due to the agressive change of direction (2/3 = right left, 3/4 = up and 4 heading down)...specially when you play with DT or HR...it's ok as it is, but ''maybe'' you could test arrange these patterns to something more natural with less agressive angles? same applies for 00:58:061 (2,3,4) - and other moments you feel like...
  3. 01:11:501 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I feel like this flow is a bit too harsh and sharp...i suggest you do it more like the other ones : 02:32:141 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - and 04:08:141 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
  4. 01:52:301 (3,4,1) - These motions have more tension that the song feels like...I suggest you Ctrl + G 01:52:781 (4) - and then Ctrl + G 01:53:261 (1) - for a lot smoother flow
  5. 02:06:701 (1,2) - DS Inconsistency, adjust it like the other ones 01:59:021 (1,2,3) -
  6. 03:09:581 (2,3,1) - that's kinda an overkill of DS, it was the only moment of this entire section you used such agressive jump which is almost similar to 03:33:101 (1,2) - that has a way higher intensity >w< I suggest you adapt these rythms to a more calmer pattern ^^
  7. 03:35:021 (1) - do you really want this kiai? it's an strong moment yes, but it's not like the chorus of the song o: you could remove the kiai that it would actually give proper emphasis to chorus and still have this strong moment
  8. 03:42:221 (6) - Ctrl + G ? It will make the flow less harsh and more comfortable...the boost of DS to 03:42:221 (6,1) - is probably fine....you could adjust it too if needed, not big stuff
  9. 04:51:309 (1) - cute <3 btw, the head and tails are 100% overlaps, it's hard to know to what side it's going to go...for me it's ok since the slider is slow, it's cute, blablabla...but I suggest taking an opinion from a BN to know if it's really okay o:

loved the map, really good job ! :) fun, consistent and pretty
Topic Starter
domSaur

Hikan wrote:

i like
00:29:981 (3,5,6) - these japanese sounds dont get emphasised at all, athough it is kinda unique in this circumstance, maybe change 2 of them into 1/4 kick? rn i can't think of any way to change this without making a huge change in the patterns after it so i'll probably leave it as is for now
00:35:501 (3) - nc here? Since you nc the same sound around there 01:56:141 (3) - sure
00:40:781 (3,4,5) - direction of the (5) make this flow looks weird though the song is still calm, can I suggest ctrl g (5)? ctrl+g'd and also lessened the curve
00:47:981 (1) - this curve looks random >_> , I would like to make it less curvy for a nicer aesthetic but up to you since it isnt very important it seems that ppl rly hate this(well me too xd) so it now looks like the sliders after it
00:53:741 (1,2) - I think swap nc here would be nice. To fit the triplet and start a star instead of just nc downbeat like dat 02:14:381 (1,2) - also another thing the past modders mention. i rly think the nc should be on the downbeat bec it's pretty strong
00:57:101 (2,2) - overlapped slider head make it look odd, fix them, overlap sliderbody is fine tho getting it out of there would be too far...
just neaten it up a bit

00:57:581 (1,1) - consistent shape would be cool now cool
01:04:301 (5) - nc? to make players recognize the stream has been starting why not 01:15:821 (4) - nc
01:07:901 (4) - nc as well? xd too long combo would have the hp drain decreased a bit nc
01:08:621 (8) - How about changing them to 2 circles to have the vocal clicked, slidertail doesnt emphasis the high pitch vocal good enough imo.
01:20:621 (1,2) - something im gonna say would be dumb. How about swapping nc here, starting combo at the vocal would make it stronger, instead of nc a lonely high beat. It is stupid right? But i think the vocal would need more priority here i was pondering to this but nope sry. aside from the times where vocal lands on a red tick, active rhythms are always on white and i think ppl would expect on the big white more
01:35:381 - map? also 01:35:021 (4) - nc this to emphasis the bell maybe, 01:39:821 (4) - and this as well urghh added circle. nc on slider no, on circle yes.
03:18:461 (2,3) - ctrl g to fit rhythm better imo g
03:58:061 (1,2,3,4,5) - could be able to make a perfect star here star
04:14:381 (5,6) - blanket looks wrong must've dislodged it somehow
04:34:541 - lower volume here or they wont know that has a sound lol
04:44:774 (3) - nc please
04:51:309 (1) - would you please loosen it up a bit, slider might be kind of hard to read since you might not know which direction to turn in without snaking slider loosen up the head and tail overlap but rly, i though the slider's pretty slow you can figure it out alreads
Those first kiai part effect to the 2nd and 3rd as well, please considering it carefully, I just dont want to extend my mod with repetitive sentences, I just dont want to extend my mod with repetitive sentences, I just dont want to extend my mod with repetitive sentences.
hope to see this get further, goodest luck to you.

Seto Kousuke wrote:


hi hi from the 7x1 queue
LOL that break at the ending for the 5 min drain time HAHAHA XD genius
[Floral Hairpin]
  1. 00:06:430 (1,2) - Need less DS...too agressive motion for such little time...same applies for other moments like 01:41:741 (1,2,3,4) - 1->2 is kinda OK, but the 2->3->4 is wayy too much overkill reduced
  2. 00:59:981 (2,3,4) - I think these kind of patterns on this DS are more harsh than it looks like due to the agressive change of direction (2/3 = right left, 3/4 = up and 4 heading down)...specially when you play with DT or HR...it's ok as it is, but ''maybe'' you could test arrange these patterns to something more natural with less agressive angles? same applies for 00:58:061 (2,3,4) - and other moments you feel like... can't think of any alternatives and i generally don't like using linear patterns so :\
  3. 01:11:501 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I feel like this flow is a bit too harsh and sharp...i suggest you do it more like the other ones : 02:32:141 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - and 04:08:141 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i'll also try to come up with something.. actually if anything i was aiming for the other streams to be as sharp as this and not the other way around
  4. 01:52:301 (3,4,1) - These motions have more tension that the song feels like...I suggest you Ctrl + G 01:52:781 (4) - and then Ctrl + G 01:53:261 (1) - for a lot smoother flow ctrl+g'd
  5. 02:06:701 (1,2) - DS Inconsistency, adjust it like the other ones 01:59:021 (1,2,3) - restructured
  6. 03:09:581 (2,3,1) - that's kinda an overkill of DS, it was the only moment of this entire section you used such agressive jump which is almost similar to 03:33:101 (1,2) - that has a way higher intensity >w< I suggest you adapt these rythms to a more calmer pattern ^^ yea i stacked it instead like the 2-kick sounds after it
  7. 03:35:021 (1) - do you really want this kiai? it's an strong moment yes, but it's not like the chorus of the song o: you could remove the kiai that it would actually give proper emphasis to chorus and still have this strong moment just made it into a "flash"
  8. 03:42:221 (6) - Ctrl + G ? It will make the flow less harsh and more comfortable...the boost of DS to 03:42:221 (6,1) - is probably fine....you could adjust it too if needed, not big stuff ctrl+g'd all of them including the 1/4s too
  9. 04:51:309 (1) - cute <3 btw, the head and tails are 100% overlaps, it's hard to know to what side it's going to go...for me it's ok since the slider is slow, it's cute, blablabla...but I suggest taking an opinion from a BN to know if it's really okay o: dunno either.. slightly unstacked them for now at least

loved the map, really good job ! :) fun, consistent and pretty
thanks for the mods
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