thanks for mod -Hex- and xXShockwaveXx !xXShockwaveXx wrote:
Here is my mod!Momota's SaladYour style and the way you work with small CS is really cool and i love what you have done with this. There are a few things that i would like to point out
00:15:621 (1,1) - This is against ranking Criteria because there is a item to soon after the spinner. Because of the maps bpm there has to be one bar of space in between the 2 itemsAdequate time must be left between objects and the start and end of spinners to ensure readability. Depending on the BPM of the song, this time must conform to the following:so i think you should just put in a slider that matches the time like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675213 im not saying it needs to look exactly like that im just saying you should do a slider that fits the timing and this one doesapplied
BPM < 120 - 1/2 bar
BPM < 240 - 1 bar
BPM ≥ 240 - 2 bars
00:18:325 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - these are the circles during that little gap and it comes across as awkword to me. why dont you make some of the circles sliders so it does not come across that way like this! https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675264 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675266 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675268 and maybe move 00:23:981 (7) - (the slider that replaced 7 and 8 as circles) and the slider after it to make it look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675281 Your timing was not wrong and i hope all of these do not come across as rude. I only want to make the map look better. I tried to make the slider's straight in my example to fit the unique style you have and i hope it makes your map look better! its okay! im little confused on this part btw,and u come mod this part! thanks for help, this so helpfull thanks!
00:26:932 (2,3,4) - You can just make this a slider with a reverse arrow like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675310 keep pattern like 00:18:325 to keep pattern
00:30:129 (1,2) - connect these two as a slider (you dont have to it just looks better) and make 00:29:637 (4) - face the other direction its kind of like its leading up to it you know? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675334
00:34:063 (5,6) - Connect these 2 as a slider and make the slider longer to fit the time. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675351
00:37:998 (5,6) - same here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675354
00:41:932 (5,6) - same here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675392
00:44:145 (1,2) - and finally same here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675411
01:37:015 (5,6) - replace 5 and 6 with a slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675430
01:40:949 (5,6) - do the same thing here and replace these with a slider https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675447
01:44:882 (5,6) - my final edit is to combine these two and make it a slider like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8675458 apply all
now i understand what you are doing. Your timing is matching the vocals and the piano and that is great! My only problem with that is during those breaks you choose to put circles so the catcher has like a little bit of time where he doesn't need to do anything and we dont want that. That is why i gave you so many recommendations for sliders. This does not mean your map is bad by any means i love the style and the way you did things! i just want to make it look better for you! (P.S i love how well you timed the spinner at the end that is great so good job m8!)thanks for detailed mod with screen shot, very appreciated !
Wow this map is great! The timing fits really well i have not seen a ctb map like this one before! it has a very unique style that i love! I hope this map becomes ranked and great job!!!
yohanes rio
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ArtistUnicode:柊真雪(CV.小倉唯)、萩野千秋(CV.東城日沙子)
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