Timing & Rhythm (--) ---
Note placement & Alikes00:05:691 (2) - In my opinion, you should add a note here, it sounds better, and improves overall feel.
00:07:873 (2) - ^ (Same as above)
00:09:691 (2) - Here, however, you should leave empty.
00:13:691 (7) - Same as 1 & 2.
00:15:509 (2) - Same as 3.
00:15:691 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - This part is not as "streamy" as the map is making it sound, try to manage this better.
---Overall Aesthetics & Looks (--) Notes
- In my opinion, you should try making everything "rounder" lol does this even exist? -
- Symmetry is a good thing, but overusing it is NOT. just like everything in mapping. -
- You should try mastering blankets Q: What are blankets?, blankets are the harmony between a slider and a circle, basically making them look good together. ----
00:15:691 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - This whole part, I'll make things short here, try to look out to making the map too tight, try to space things out.
I see you're making slider arts, and they do not look bad! I just got those obvservations: Avoid touching the slider's border to itself. If there's another slider coming up, avoid making them conflict in the same area.---
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New Combos (NC's)00:04:782 (1,1) - Remove "New combos", the music didn't change, nor did the combo count go crazy high (12+ W/O streams)
00:06:964 (1,1) - ^
00:09:509 (1) - ^
00:09:873 (1) - However, leave this one, there's a new music section going on.
00:11:327 (1) - Same as 1, 2 & 3
00:14:236 (9) - Put New combo (NC) here.
00:15:327 (1) - Remove this one.
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