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Iguchi Yuka, Kitamura Eri & Ise Mariya - Kimi ni Gohoushi

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Nymph
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3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
Hi Nymph here and request from Lan wings~

General:
BG 800k...seems a little too large. maybe fix it then people can download the map easier.
Noku's name sb really hard to see for the colour is light pink..

Normal:
Issue/unrankable stuff
AR is too low and HP drain is high... I suggest AR+2 HP-1.
02:07:276 (1) - the kiai timing section is not snapped, plz snap it~

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:39:275 (2,3,4) - Actually I think you make these spacing on purpose? but I really prefer you don't. Really don't need to make the spacing too complicated in a normal diff like this.
00:59:719 (4) - combo seems mass up here, new combo here?
01:01:054 (1) - and remove this new combo?
01:02:831 (3) - new combo here?
some combos are like these.. I suggest you check them again.
02:27:719 (4) - spacing?
02:35:497 (1) - werid for this spinner. for it didn't follow anything, I suggest only a note instead of the spinner.
02:48:831 (1) - I was told many times that should not use sliders repeat many times like this. so maybe change this to other patterns?
02:50:831 - feel empty. add a note here?
03:04:164 (1) - little hidden by the comboburst.. maybe move out a little bit?
03:25:497 - maybe add a note here? =A=

Hitsound
00:20:608 (1,2,3,4) - why using whistles here and turn to claps on 5 suddenly? I suggest make them the same hitsounds.
00:52:608 (1) - finish on the head?
02:07:276 (1) - ^


Hard:
Issue/unrankable stuff
HP drain is too high. maybe -2?
01:47:275 (7) - the 2nd slider arrow is a little hidden to see if I don't play carefully... Maybe change to some other pattern?
01:51:275 (7) - and slider repeat arrow...totally hidden like this.. change to another pattern maybe.
02:02:164 (2) - same....^
02:07:276 (1) - the kiai timing section is not snapped, plz snap it~

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:21:053 (3) - new combo here? for either begin of vocal and the slider speed change.
00:53:497 (1,1) - why new combos here, didn't get it.
01:49:053 (1,2) - this is kinda of werid to play and listen. I suggest like this:
03:25:497 - maybe add a note here? =A= just suggestion~ won't mention again..

Hitsound
00:21:053 (3) - only one whistle here and others all clap...so maybe don't whistle here either. clap plz.
00:52:608 (1) - again suggest head finish on the slider, won't mention about this again.
01:00:164 (4) - I suggest only clap here, clap and whistle mix is a little mess up.
01:23:720 (4) - head clap here?
01:24:608 (6) - also suggest to add a clap on the head of this slider.



Lan Gu:
Issue/unrankable stuff
oops no breaktime..
02:21:497 (7) - kiai timing section didn't snap well..

Hitsound
00:27:719 (5,6,7) - not finish again.. using too many here.
00:32:164 (5) - I suggest don't use finish here, but just suggestion.
00:36:608 (6) - ^
00:52:608 (1) - this sure need a finish...
01:05:942 (4) - and finish on the tail...
01:09:497 (8) - I suggest whistle instead of finish on the tail.
02:09:719 (6) - whistle seems not necessary..
02:09:942 (7,8) - I suggest only claps are ok... but just suggestion.
02:11:275 (2,6) - too many finish imo.
02:16:164 (5,1) - ^
02:22:386 (4) - ^
02:25:942 (4) -
02:27:275 (4) -
02:28:164 (8,9) - move the finish on 9 to 8?
02:31:275 (1) - finish on the tail seems not necessary.....
02:40:608 (8) -
02:49:053 (3) -
02:51:275 (4) -
02:54:831 (4) -
well...these are just suggestions....for I don't like too much finish... feel free to ignore them


No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu

Nymph wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from Lan wings~

General:
BG 800k...seems a little too large. maybe fix it then people can download the map easier. change to JPEG
Noku's name sb really hard to see for the colour is light pink..

Normal:
Issue/unrankable stuff

fixed
AR is too low and HP drain is high... I suggest AR+2 HP-1.
02:07:276 (1) - the kiai timing section is not snapped, plz snap it~

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:39:275 (2,3,4) - Actually I think you make these spacing on purpose? but I really prefer you don't. Really don't need to make the spacing too complicated in a normal diff like this.
00:59:719 (4) - combo seems mass up here, new combo here?
01:01:054 (1) - and remove this new combo?
01:02:831 (3) - new combo here?
some combos are like these.. I suggest you check them again.
02:27:719 (4) - spacing?
02:35:497 (1) - werid for this spinner. for it didn't follow anything, I suggest only a note instead of the spinner.
02:48:831 (1) - I was told many times that should not use sliders repeat many times like this. so maybe change this to other patterns?
02:50:831 - feel empty. add a note here?
03:04:164 (1) - little hidden by the comboburst.. maybe move out a little bit?

03:25:497 - maybe add a note here? =A= Why =A=

Hitsound
00:20:608 (1,2,3,4) - why using whistles here and turn to claps on 5 suddenly? I suggest make them the same hitsounds.
from 00:20:608 to 00:33:942 change clap to whistle
fixed
00:52:608 (1) - finish on the head?
02:07:276 (1) - ^



Hard:
Issue/unrankable stuff
fixed
HP drain is too high. maybe -2?
01:47:275 (7) - the 2nd slider arrow is a little hidden to see if I don't play carefully... Maybe change to some other pattern?[attachment=2:500da]-1.jpg[/attachment:500da]
01:51:275 (7) - and slider repeat arrow...totally hidden like this.. change to another pattern maybe.[attachment=1:500da]-2.jpg[/attachment:500da]
02:02:164 (2) - same....^[attachment=0:500da]-3.jpg[/attachment:500da]
02:07:276 (1) - the kiai timing section is not snapped, plz snap it~

Beatmap design/suggestion
fixed
00:21:053 (3) - new combo here? for either begin of vocal and the slider speed change.
00:53:497 (1,1) - why new combos here, didn't get it.
03:25:497 - maybe add a note here? =A= just suggestion~ won't mention again..

01:49:053 (1,2) - this is kinda of werid to play and listen. I suggest like this: Where is your suggestion?>-<

Hitsound
fixed
00:21:053 (3) - only one whistle here and others all clap...so maybe don't whistle here either. clap plz.
00:52:608 (1) - again suggest head finish on the slider, won't mention about this again.
01:00:164 (4) - I suggest only clap here, clap and whistle mix is a little mess up.
01:23:720 (4) - head clap here?
01:24:608 (6) - also suggest to add a clap on the head of this slider.


Lan Gu:
Issue/unrankable stuff
oops no breaktime.. Lan wings likes high score.So...
02:21:497 (7) - kiai timing section didn't snap well.. fixed

Hitsound
fixed
00:52:608 (1) - this sure need a finish...
01:05:942 (4) - and finish on the tail...
01:09:497 (8) - I suggest whistle instead of finish on the tail.
02:09:719 (6) - whistle seems not necessary..
02:09:942 (7,8) - I suggest only claps are ok... but just suggestion.
英文压力略大啊- -。。。






烂翅膀的hitsounds
00:27:719 (5,6,7) - not finish again.. using too many here.
00:32:164 (5) - I suggest don't use finish here, but just suggestion.
00:36:608 (6) - ^
02:11:275 (2,6) - too many finish imo.
02:16:164 (5,1) - ^
02:22:386 (4) - ^
02:25:942 (4) -
02:27:275 (4) -
02:28:164 (8,9) - move the finish on 9 to 8?
02:31:275 (1) - finish on the tail seems not necessary.....
02:40:608 (8) -
02:49:053 (3) -
02:51:275 (4) -
02:54:831 (4) -
Neptunus
335 posts
Joined April 2010
Neptunus
Hey~(呃。。。忘了要用中文

你好～
首先指出一个unrankable的问题： 现在你的: Slider Tick Rate 是0.5， 根据新规则，这是不能被rank的，请改掉～

另外，很棒的mapset，没有实质性的排列问题，仅仅有一些newcombo风格不一致的点

Normal：
00:31:275 (4) - 这里加上newcombo，同时00:32:608 (1) - 这里去掉newcombo因为无论从节奏还是歌词，这属于同一部分
00:39:275 (1) - 去掉Newcombo， 同时00:41:053 (4) - 加上newcombo，原因同上，但是操作相反
00:42:831 (1) - 去掉newcombo，00:43:719 (2) - 加上newcombo
01:14:386 (6) - newcombo 同时01:15:719 (1) - 去掉newcombo
01:45:942 (6) - 当然了，这里由于combo的风格不同于第一段歌词，无需更改
02:21:497 (6) - newcombo，02:22:386 (1) - 去掉newcombo这样才能于02:25:053 (1) - 这里保持一致


Hard：
节奏有些紧密，毕竟是hard
01:16:608 (9) - 因此类似这样的jump不可取，建议去掉，而且这个音放在这里也不合拍，没有节奏或者vocal与之对应
02:12:387 (6) - 这里也是，发现还有很多类似的，就不一一指出了
01:49:053 (1,2,3) - 这里稍微变换一下排列，对于hard有点难
03:12:608 (5) - 像这样的jump绝对不应该在hard里面出现啊
給HARD难度的一点建议：jump的时候要有预兆，在没有预兆且节奏一致的情况下忽然的jump很不好玩，当然了，insane之类的可以无视我这条建议


Lan&Gu:
00:26:831 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里的排列方式太棒了！！REALLY NICE IDEA~（笔记
然后这个难度没有实质问题，仅仅就是： 我注意到这个难度的stream都是直线形，其实可以排列的弯曲一点好看，尤其是动漫歌曲，可以增加萌程度XD


其实这张map已经很完善了，good luck on ranking!~ ;)
Lan wings
790 posts
Joined August 2010
Lan wings

Nymph wrote:

SPOILER
Hi Nymph here and request from Lan wings~

General:
BG 800k...seems a little too large. maybe fix it then people can download the map easier.
Noku's name sb really hard to see for the colour is light pink..

Normal:
Issue/unrankable stuff
AR is too low and HP drain is high... I suggest AR+2 HP-1.
02:07:276 (1) - the kiai timing section is not snapped, plz snap it~

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:39:275 (2,3,4) - Actually I think you make these spacing on purpose? but I really prefer you don't. Really don't need to make the spacing too complicated in a normal diff like this.
00:59:719 (4) - combo seems mass up here, new combo here?
01:01:054 (1) - and remove this new combo?
01:02:831 (3) - new combo here?
some combos are like these.. I suggest you check them again.
02:27:719 (4) - spacing?
02:35:497 (1) - werid for this spinner. for it didn't follow anything, I suggest only a note instead of the spinner.
02:48:831 (1) - I was told many times that should not use sliders repeat many times like this. so maybe change this to other patterns?
02:50:831 - feel empty. add a note here?
03:04:164 (1) - little hidden by the comboburst.. maybe move out a little bit?
03:25:497 - maybe add a note here? =A=

Hitsound
00:20:608 (1,2,3,4) - why using whistles here and turn to claps on 5 suddenly? I suggest make them the same hitsounds.
00:52:608 (1) - finish on the head?
02:07:276 (1) - ^


Hard:
Issue/unrankable stuff
HP drain is too high. maybe -2?
01:47:275 (7) - the 2nd slider arrow is a little hidden to see if I don't play carefully... Maybe change to some other pattern?[attachment=2:51687]-1.jpg[/attachment:51687]
01:51:275 (7) - and slider repeat arrow...totally hidden like this.. change to another pattern maybe.[attachment=1:51687]-2.jpg[/attachment:51687]
02:02:164 (2) - same....^[attachment=0:51687]-3.jpg[/attachment:51687]
02:07:276 (1) - the kiai timing section is not snapped, plz snap it~

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:21:053 (3) - new combo here? for either begin of vocal and the slider speed change.
00:53:497 (1,1) - why new combos here, didn't get it.
01:49:053 (1,2) - this is kinda of werid to play and listen. I suggest like this:
03:25:497 - maybe add a note here? =A= just suggestion~ won't mention again..

Hitsound
00:21:053 (3) - only one whistle here and others all clap...so maybe don't whistle here either. clap plz.
00:52:608 (1) - again suggest head finish on the slider, won't mention about this again.
01:00:164 (4) - I suggest only clap here, clap and whistle mix is a little mess up.
01:23:720 (4) - head clap here?
01:24:608 (6) - also suggest to add a clap on the head of this slider.



Lan Gu:
Issue/unrankable stuff
oops no breaktime..
02:21:497 (7) - kiai timing section didn't snap well..

Hitsound
00:27:719 (5,6,7) - not finish again.. using too many here.
00:32:164 (5) - I suggest don't use finish here, but just suggestion.
00:36:608 (6) - ^
00:52:608 (1) - this sure need a finish...
01:05:942 (4) - and finish on the tail...
01:09:497 (8) - I suggest whistle instead of finish on the tail.
02:09:719 (6) - whistle seems not necessary..
02:09:942 (7,8) - I suggest only claps are ok... but just suggestion.
02:11:275 (2,6) - too many finish imo.
02:16:164 (5,1) - ^
02:22:386 (4) - ^
02:25:942 (4) -
02:27:275 (4) -
02:28:164 (8,9) - move the finish on 9 to 8?
02:31:275 (1) - finish on the tail seems not necessary.....
02:40:608 (8) -
02:49:053 (3) -
02:51:275 (4) -
02:54:831 (4) -
well...these are just suggestions....for I don't like too much finish... feel free to ignore them
泥煤的敢不用英文么``

Neptunus wrote:

然后这个难度没有实质问题，仅仅就是： 我注意到这个难度的stream都是直线形，其实可以排列的弯曲一点好看，尤其是动漫歌曲，可以增加萌程度XD
其实我喜欢稍微有点弯的slider``感觉太弯了不好看



害我浪费脑细胞翻旧账


slider tick你就不能弄到2么
图片名字改为BG.JPG
[Lan & gu]
SB:谷子你的名字放左上角看不清
另外``其他难度也有名字卡``记得去掉
AR改为8
01:01:280 (4,5,6) - 像这样的连打间距小一点
01:05:502 kiai结束
01:06:836 kiai开始
01:11:947 (3,4,5,6,7) - 间距小一点
01:13:058 (8) - 去掉一个折返 加一个note
01:28:169 - 01:34:836 如果有人吐槽没休息时间``这里就break吧``
01:36:836 (5,6,7,8) - 间距小一点``
02:01:725 (4,5) - 2.0太跳了``
02:20:169 kiai结束
02:21:502 kiai开始
03:23:502 (1) - 改为circle
03:23:725 spin从这里开始
Last edited by Lan wings , edited 3 times in total.
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu

Neptunus wrote:

Hey~(呃。。。忘了要用中文

你好～
首先指出一个unrankable的问题： 现在你的: Slider Tick Rate 是0.5， 根据新规则，这是不能被rank的，请改掉～不太清楚这点是不是必须加的。个人不太喜欢用tick。。除非easy要用tick来clap之外。
另外，很棒的mapset，没有实质性的排列问题，仅仅有一些newcombo风格不一致的点

Normal：
fixed
00:31:275 (4) - 这里加上newcombo，同时00:32:608 (1) - 这里去掉newcombo因为无论从节奏还是歌词，这属于同一部分
00:39:275 (1) - 去掉Newcombo， 同时00:41:053 (4) - 加上newcombo，原因同上，但是操作相反
00:42:831 (1) - 去掉newcombo，00:43:719 (2) - 加上newcombo
01:14:386 (6) - newcombo 同时01:15:719 (1) - 去掉newcombo
01:45:942 (6) - 当然了，这里由于combo的风格不同于第一段歌词，无需更改
02:21:497 (6) - newcombo，02:22:386 (1) - 去掉newcombo这样才能于02:25:053 (1) - 这里保持一致
New combo 排得稍微有点随意了。只是听着歌看图形随便分的。。

Hard：
fixed
节奏有些紧密，毕竟是hard
01:16:608 (9) - 因此类似这样的jump不可取，建议去掉，而且这个音放在这里也不合拍，没有节奏或者vocal与之对应
02:12:387 (6) - 这里也是，发现还有很多类似的，就不一一指出了
01:49:053 (1,2,3) - 这里稍微变换一下排列，对于hard有点难
03:12:608 (5) - 像这样的jump绝对不应该在hard里面出现啊
給HARD难度的一点建议：jump的时候要有预兆，在没有预兆且节奏一致的情况下忽然的jump很不好玩，当然了，insane之类的可以无视我这条建议

Lan&Gu:
fixed
00:26:831 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里的排列方式太棒了！！REALLY NICE IDEA~（笔记
然后这个难度没有实质问题，仅仅就是： 我注意到这个难度的stream都是直线形，其实可以排列的弯曲一点好看，尤其是动漫歌曲，可以增加萌程度XD

其实这张map已经很完善了，good luck on ranking!~ ;)

感谢mod 0 0
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
from in-game pm

[General]
offset must be 1503 , timing sections should always follow the heavy beats
slider tick rate 0.5 is unrankble now , put it 1 or more plz

[Normal]
01:05:942 (5) - repeat 1 time more ?
01:08:608 (3) - 
208,108,68608,2,0,B|167:82|116:112|108:155,2,120,0|8|0
01:15:719 (3,4) - try this ?
01:24:608 (2) - kinda ugly..
01:28:164 - break start here
02:05:497 (1,2) - I suggest change this to slider , kinda hard for newbies to play
02:48:608 - too quiet , volume up a bit plz
03:06:831 (4) - out of playing area , move it up a bit

[Hard]
00:34:386 (9) - volume down a bit plz , too noisy
00:57:276 (5) - NC
01:13:942 (2,3) - this spacing is very confusing , player may think this slider is start at 01:14:164
01:15:053 - add a note
01:28:164 - break start here
01:42:386 (5) - ctrl + 1 , red square down 1 gird
01:49:275 - add note , make it all stack or a stream
02:01:942 (2) - back arrow is kinda hidden by something
02:03:053 (5) - x:208 y:132 ?
02:03:497 - if you fix ^ , I suggest you add a note here to make circles a pentagon , and spinner start later
02:26:608 (3) - 
328,148,146608,2,0,B|368:152|400:188|400:224|400:224|400:288|400:288,1,160
02:51:497 (9) - 
104,304,171497,2,0,B|92:244|144:192|204:208,1,160,0|0
03:09:053 (7) - try this ?

[Lan & Gu]
01:35:275 (1,2) - kinda confusing here.. slider end at 01:35:497 sound better
01:46:831 (3,4) - change to circles ?
03:01:053 (3) - back arrow hidden by something
03:11:275 (1,2) - confusing , I suggest you make 03:11:719 (2,3) into a slider

that's all
good luck
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu

wcx19911123 wrote:

from in-game pm

[General]
fixed
offset must be 1503 , timing sections should always follow the heavy beats
slider tick rate 0.5 is unrankble now , put it 1 or more plz
[Normal]
fixed
01:05:942 (5) - repeat 1 time more ?
01:08:608 (3) - 
208,108,68608,2,0,B|167:82|116:112|108:155,2,120,0|8|0
01:15:719 (3,4) - try this ?
01:24:608 (2) - kinda ugly..
01:28:164 - break start here
02:05:497 (1,2) - I suggest change this to slider , kinda hard for newbies to play
02:48:608 - too quiet , volume up a bit plz
03:06:831 (4) - out of playing area , move it up a bit

[Hard]
fixed
00:34:386 (9) - volume down a bit plz , too noisy
00:57:276 (5) - NC
01:13:942 (2,3) - this spacing is very confusing , player may think this slider is start at 01:14:164
01:15:053 - add a note
01:28:164 - break start here
01:42:386 (5) - ctrl + 1 , red square down 1 gird
01:49:275 - add note , make it all stack or a stream
02:01:942 (2) - back arrow is kinda hidden by something
02:03:053 (5) - x:208 y:132 ?
02:03:497 - if you fix ^ , I suggest you add a note here to make circles a pentagon , and spinner start later
02:26:608 (3) - 
328,148,146608,2,0,B|368:152|400:188|400:224|400:224|400:288|400:288,1,160
02:51:497 (9) - 
104,304,171497,2,0,B|92:244|144:192|204:208,1,160,0|0
03:09:053 (7) - try this ?
[Lan & Gu]
fixed
01:35:275 (1,2) - kinda confusing here.. slider end at 01:35:497 sound better
01:46:831 (3,4) - change to circles ?
03:11:275 (1,2) - confusing , I suggest you make 03:11:719 (2,3) into a slider
that's all
good luck



Thanks for modding :3







烂翅膀
03:01:053 (3) - back arrow hidden by something (箭头被什么东西挡住了)
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
i guess it's high time to post here a chinese mod
general

[00:01:058] 其实这里放红线也没问题吧 我这么觉得
kiai不弄一样吗

Normal

Download: Iguchi Yuka, Kitamura Eri & Ise Mariya - Kimi ni Gohoushi (No_Gu) [Normal].osu

我没做任何改动 只在开头几个地方动了下NC 可以看看感觉

kiai的某些重要地方不妨加点whistle 改变听觉

Hard

[01:51:280] 这两个明显不好看
[02:02:836] 这NC吧

NC的频率还是略低 在当今看来 不过也可

Lan & Gu

真没问题

star
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu

LKs wrote:

i guess it's high time to post here a chinese mod
general

[00:01:058] 其实这里放红线也没问题吧 我这么觉得 等个准确timing再改吧。。一改红线绿线都要改。。

kiai不弄一样吗 fixed

Normal

[attachment=0:406fa]Iguchi Yuka, Kitamura Eri & Ise Mariya - Kimi ni Gohoushi (No_Gu) [Normal].osu[/attachment:406fa]

我没做任何改动 只在开头几个地方动了下NC 可以看看感觉

kiai的某些重要地方不妨加点whistle 改变听觉

Hard
fixed
[01:51:280] 这两个明显不好看
[02:02:836] 这NC吧

NC的频率还是略低 在当今看来 不过也可

Lan & Gu

真没问题

star

Thanks for mod & star.
NC和whistle这周末重新弄一弄。。
mi sa
59 posts
Joined January 2011
mi sa
Lan wings同学找我mod，开始我还以为是他做的...恩，简单说点感觉。
normal总体感觉还不错，就是那种折返的slider以及circle+折返slider有点多，可以多些组合，比如说像00:34:836 (1,2,3,4) - 这种挺好。
最后一段开始的地方02:48:836 (1,2,3) - 我以为后面也会note之间间隔比较大，那样接最后的kiai可能会更有感觉。
hard音效弄得不多，可以再花点功夫
insane这段可以均匀一些01:19:280 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) -
01:55:058 (6,7,8,9) - 同上
像这种末段的节奏我觉得可以加一个跳02:05:502 (1,2) - 不用弄成stack
发现你很喜欢对称着作图，中间是轴线，这样整齐但略微简单了一些，可以多些变化。insane可以适当加些小跳，现在这样没有难点。
聊天记录里弄下来的，比较乱，将就着看。
恩，加油加油。 :D
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu

mi sa wrote:

Lan wings同学找我mod，开始我还以为是他做的...恩，简单说点感觉。
normal总体感觉还不错，就是那种折返的slider以及circle+折返slider有点多，可以多些组合，比如说像00:34:836 (1,2,3,4) - 这种挺好。
最后一段开始的地方02:48:836 (1,2,3) - 我以为后面也会note之间间隔比较大，那样接最后的kiai可能会更有感觉。
hard音效弄得不多，可以再花点功夫
insane这段可以均匀一些01:19:280 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) -
01:55:058 (6,7,8,9) - 同上
像这种末段的节奏我觉得可以加一个跳02:05:502 (1,2) - 不用弄成stack
发现你很喜欢对称着作图，中间是轴线，这样整齐但略微简单了一些，可以多些变化。insane可以适当加些小跳，现在这样没有难点。
聊天记录里弄下来的，比较乱，将就着看。
恩，加油加油。 :D
恩0 0基本上都解决了
Megurine Luka
2,579 posts
Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
Request from Lan Wings from In-game

不好意思晚了w

之前mod过一个TV size所以以为已经mod过了lol

[General]

标题名后面加一个full ver字样吧。
更改标题见 viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443


[Normal]
CS-1，他毕竟也是你的最低难度
00:21:058 (2) - Nazi~这个好像有点歪了._
00:43:724 (4) - NC
01:19:724 (3) - 弄一个和2一样的吧
01:25:502 (3) - http://puu.sh/7tyL 这样比较好看
01:44:169 (4) - NC，后面的1取消NC
02:27:724 (4) - 移到完全离开3的位置上去o.o
03:10:391 (1) - 去掉一个折返，尾部加clap

[Hard]
00:24:169 (8) - NC
00:28:613 (7) - NC，后面不讲了，总体来说C数太长了，很多地方可以拆分的就拆分一下吧
00:32:613 (1) - 这个fin有点突然了，可以考虑降音
00:41:058 (1) - 这个slider可以考虑0.5倍速取消所有折返
01:37:502 (6) - 彻底远离4,5
01:38:836 (1,2) - 往上移一点，让2彻底远离9
01:57:280 (3) - 往左下移动一点，移动到3的尾部和2的尾部看上去和常规spacing一样的程度，后面两个slider可以这样处理（头部之间spacing看上去和常规一样也可以，意思就是加大slider的跳跃）
02:11:947 (4) - 突然折回去绝对属于坑人，还是放在1的地方吧
03:17:725 (x) - add circle

[Insane]
建议开头时间和其他diff一致
00:33:502 (4) - 放完全水平？
00:51:502 (1) - 最好离上一个note再远一点._.这样很容易误导人
01:24:613 (5) - 去掉一个折返然后01:25:947加个circle
02:00:836 (2) - 和hard一样的建议，后面一组slider也是
02:33:058 (5,6) - ctrl+H？
02:34:613 (2) - 有一点点远了~
02:39:058 (1) - 有一点点近了~
02:39:724 (4) - 和前一个slider对称？
02:44:391 (2) - ^


哟西~
Lan wings
790 posts
Joined August 2010
Lan wings

Megurine Luka wrote:

Request from Lan Wings from In-game

不好意思晚了w

之前mod过一个TV size所以以为已经mod过了lol

SPOILER
[General]

标题名后面加一个full ver字样吧。
更改标题见 viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443


[Normal]
CS-1，他毕竟也是你的最低难度
00:21:058 (2) - Nazi~这个好像有点歪了._
00:43:724 (4) - NC
01:19:724 (3) - 弄一个和2一样的吧
01:25:502 (3) - http://puu.sh/7tyL 这样比较好看
01:44:169 (4) - NC，后面的1取消NC
02:27:724 (4) - 移到完全离开3的位置上去o.o
03:10:391 (1) - 去掉一个折返，尾部加clap

[Hard]
00:24:169 (8) - NC
00:28:613 (7) - NC，后面不讲了，总体来说C数太长了，很多地方可以拆分的就拆分一下吧
00:32:613 (1) - 这个fin有点突然了，可以考虑降音
00:41:058 (1) - 这个slider可以考虑0.5倍速取消所有折返
01:37:502 (6) - 彻底远离4,5
01:38:836 (1,2) - 往上移一点，让2彻底远离9
01:57:280 (3) - 往左下移动一点，移动到3的尾部和2的尾部看上去和常规spacing一样的程度，后面两个slider可以这样处理（头部之间spacing看上去和常规一样也可以，意思就是加大slider的跳跃）
02:11:947 (4) - 突然折回去绝对属于坑人，还是放在1的地方吧
03:17:725 (x) - add circle
[Insane]
建议开头时间和其他diff一致
00:33:502 (4) - 放完全水平？fixed
00:51:502 (1) - 最好离上一个note再远一点._.这样很容易误导人
01:24:613 (5) - 去掉一个折返然后01:25:947加个circle
02:00:836 (2) - 和hard一样的建议，后面一组slider也是
02:33:058 (5,6) - ctrl+H？fixed
02:34:613 (2) - 有一点点远了~fixed
02:39:058 (1) - 有一点点近了~fixed
02:39:724 (4) - 和前一个slider对称？fixed
02:44:391 (2) - ^fixed


哟西~
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu

Megurine Luka wrote:

Request from Lan Wings from In-game

不好意思晚了w

之前mod过一个TV size所以以为已经mod过了lol

[General]

标题名后面加一个full ver字样吧。 fixed
更改标题见 viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443


fixed
[Normal]
CS-1，他毕竟也是你的最低难度
00:21:058 (2) - Nazi~这个好像有点歪了._
00:43:724 (4) - NC
01:19:724 (3) - 弄一个和2一样的吧
01:25:502 (3) - http://puu.sh/7tyL 这样比较好看
01:44:169 (4) - NC，后面的1取消NC
02:27:724 (4) - 移到完全离开3的位置上去o.o
03:10:391 (1) - 去掉一个折返，尾部加clap

[Hard]
00:24:169 (8) - NC
00:28:613 (7) - NC，后面不讲了，总体来说C数太长了，很多地方可以拆分的就拆分一下吧
00:32:613 (1) - 这个fin有点突然了，可以考虑降音
00:41:058 (1) - 这个slider可以考虑0.5倍速取消所有折返
01:37:502 (6) - 彻底远离4,5
01:38:836 (1,2) - 往上移一点，让2彻底远离9
01:57:280 (3) - 往左下移动一点，移动到3的尾部和2的尾部看上去和常规spacing一样的程度，后面两个slider可以这样处理（头部之间spacing看上去和常规一样也可以，意思就是加大slider的跳跃）
02:11:947 (4) - 突然折回去绝对属于坑人，还是放在1的地方吧
03:17:725 (x) - add circle

[Insane]
建议开头时间和其他diff一致
00:33:502 (4) - 放完全水平？
00:51:502 (1) - 最好离上一个note再远一点._.这样很容易误导人
01:24:613 (5) - 去掉一个折返然后01:25:947加个circle
02:00:836 (2) - 和hard一样的建议，后面一组slider也是
02:33:058 (5,6) - ctrl+H？
02:34:613 (2) - 有一点点远了~
02:39:058 (1) - 有一点点近了~
02:39:724 (4) - 和前一个slider对称？
02:44:391 (2) - ^
哟西~

Thanks Luka ><
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze

General

  1. 删掉Name文件夹里的thumbs.db文件

Timing

  1. 我测得timing如下
    BPM/Offset
    135/1044
    如果你觉得这个更好就换这个. 如果你觉得你本身的已经足够好的话至少把offset换到1058, 这样重音才对准长白线

(下面mod是以我给的timing来的)

Normal

  1. 00:48:837 (1) - Unsnapped spinner end
  2. 01:16:396 (4) - Unsnapped slider start
  3. 01:16:396 (4) - Unsnapped slider end
  4. 01:17:063 (5) - Unsnapped circle
  5. 00:34:821 (1) - 考虑用finish取代clap
  6. 01:21:043 (4) - Finish取代另外2个音效
  7. 01:35:266 (1) - 考虑加个finish音

Hard

  1. 00:48:837 (1) - Unsnapped spinner end
  2. 02:26:608 (3) - Unsnapped slider start
  3. 02:26:608 (3) - Unsnapped slider end
  4. 00:34:821 (1) - 考虑加个finish
  5. 01:35:266 (1) - ^
  6. 02:07:266 (1) - ^
  7. 02:49:932 (6) - ^

Lan ＆ Gu

  1. 00:32:599 (5) - 这里不加clap?
  2. 00:33:043 (3) - 去掉clap
  3. 02:06:821 (2) - 这个clap听着很奇怪
  4. 03:22:155 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这一串有点难读懂

整体不错, star
再找几个非华人mod下, 有8颗星后再找我吧
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu
0 0全部解决。感谢微风><
Lan wings
790 posts
Joined August 2010
Lan wings

Breeze wrote:

SPOILER

General

  1. 删掉Name文件夹里的thumbs.db文件

Timing

  1. 我测得timing如下
    BPM/Offset
    135/1044
    如果你觉得这个更好就换这个. 如果你觉得你本身的已经足够好的话至少把offset换到1058, 这样重音才对准长白线

(下面mod是以我给的timing来的)

Normal

  1. 00:48:837 (1) - Unsnapped spinner end
  2. 01:16:396 (4) - Unsnapped slider start
  3. 01:16:396 (4) - Unsnapped slider end
  4. 01:17:063 (5) - Unsnapped circle
  5. 00:34:821 (1) - 考虑用finish取代clap
  6. 01:21:043 (4) - Finish取代另外2个音效
  7. 01:35:266 (1) - 考虑加个finish音

Hard

  1. 00:48:837 (1) - Unsnapped spinner end
  2. 02:26:608 (3) - Unsnapped slider start
  3. 02:26:608 (3) - Unsnapped slider end
  4. 00:34:821 (1) - 考虑加个finish
  5. 01:35:266 (1) - ^
  6. 02:07:266 (1) - ^
  7. 02:49:932 (6) - ^

Lan ＆ Gu

  1. 00:32:599 (5) - 这里不加clap?fixed
  2. 00:33:043 (3) - 去掉clapfixed
  3. 02:06:821 (2) - 这个clap听着很奇怪fixed
  4. 03:22:155 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这一串有点难读懂

整体不错, star
再找几个非华人mod下, 有8颗星后再找我吧
AoiX
674 posts
Joined April 2010
AoiX
Request from Queue

ฅ'ﻌ'ฅAoi's Mod

General
  1. Thumbs.db再次出现～
  2. No_Gu.png在显示的时候文字不太好辨认，换成深色的描边吧！
Lan & Gu
  1. 在变动offset后未进行note的时间轴移动，resnap
  2. 00:59:280 (10) - 去除finish
  3. 00:59:724 (1) - 在第一个圈上加finish
  4. 01:05:947 (4) - 将第一个圈上的finish改到最后一个圈上
  5. 01:09:502 (8) - 去除finish
  6. 01:10:391 (1) - 第一个圈上finish
  7. 01:16:613 (1,3) - 这两个没有完全对称。主要调节右边那个
  8. 01:21:058 (1) - 第一个圈finish
  9. 01:33:947 (5,1) - 5去finish，1开头加finish
  10. 02:51:502 (5,6) - 没堆叠好
  11. 03:04:391 (1) - 这个1/4回转条有点不知其所以然
  12. 03:18:377 (6) - 第一个圈finish
Hard
  1. 01:10:154 (1) - 去掉new combo
  2. 01:10:376 (2) - new combo
  3. 01:19:709 (1) - 超出边界了
  4. 01:21:932 (5) - ^
  5. 02:49:932 (6) - 把这个滑条放在五边形的中心吧～
  6. 02:53:487 (1) - whistle
  7. 03:08:599 (5) - 右移+下移一格
  8. 03:19:265 (7) - reverse标记被遮挡，这应该是不允许的
Normal
  1. 00:29:932 (4) - 基本会被HPbar挡到，新手很可能会无解
  2. 00:45:487 (5) - 左移一格
  3. 00:58:821 (3,1) - 不要叠加
  4. 01:05:932 (5) - 前面后面几个都是一次回转这边一下子回转两次新手会不适应。
  5. 01:08:598 (3) - 没有叠好，滑条再拉一下撒～
  6. 01:36:598 (4) - 要么和1叠在一起要么就完全分离，不要这样叠加一部分
  7. 01:45:932 (3) - 和2没有叠加好
  8. 01:49:043 (6) - 第二个圈finish
  9. 02:20:598 (4) - 上移一格
  10. 02:34:821 (6) - 左移一格
  11. 02:49:487 (2) - 最后个圈finish
  12. 03:14:376 (6) - 不要叠加
  13. 03:18:376 (5) - finish
  14. 03:19:709 (1,3) - 会被HPbar挡到
很好的刷分图啊～希望能rank
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu
改了大部分0 0

烂翅膀
02:51:502 (5,6) - 没堆叠好
Lan wings
790 posts
Joined August 2010
Lan wings

No_Gu wrote:

改了大部分0 0

烂你妹
02:51:502 (5,6) - 没堆叠好OK
Download: Iguchi Yuka, Kitamura Eri & Ise Mariya - Kimi ni Gohoushi (Full Ver.) (No_Gu) [Lan & Gu].osu
vivicat
618 posts
Joined February 2010
vivicat
hi ;) come from lan wings.
all suggestion

SPOILER
[General]
There is a Thumbs.db...
[Lan & Gu]
sb:
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Name\lan wings.png",320,240
S,0,20608,21053,1,0.8480002
change to 0.848?

00:55:710(8) - whistle at end
00:59:043(9,10) - whistle
01:09:488(8) - remove whistle at beginning，add whistle at the end
01:19:265(7) - nc
01:23:932(2,3) - whistle
02:42:598(1) - whistle,remove nc
02:42:821(2) - nc
[Hard]
00:20:599(2) - finish at the end
01:15:710(5) - nc
01:21:043(3) - finish at beginning
02:49:932(6) - nc
[Normal]
00:20:599(1) - finish
00:38:376(5) - nc
nice map
good luck :)
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu
fixed some...Many mappers told me there is the Thumbs.db。But I can‘t find it <._.>

Thanks for modding
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
phonic
Hello~ :)

from phonic & Laurier's Modding Queue


[Lan & Gu]

  1. HP-1?
  2. 00:20:598 (2) - add new combo
  3. 00:34:154 (5) - add new combo?
  4. 00:38:376 (5) - ^
  5. 01:55:043 (6) - ^
  6. 02:19:043 (3) - finish deletion
  7. 02:19:710 (x) - add note? & finish
  8. 02:51:487 (5) - add new combo
  9. 02:58:598 (3) - ^
  10. 03:03:709 (6) - ^
[Hard]

  1. OD-1
  2. 00:19:821 (2) - I think that BPM change is not necessary
  3. 00:23:265 (4) - add new combo?
  4. 00:27:043 (x) - add note?
  5. 00:41:932 (2) - add new combo
  6. 00:44:154 (6) - ^
  7. 00:46:598 (6) - add new combo?
  8. 00:51:044 (2) - remove finish
  9. 01:01:044 (4) - add new combo?
  10. 01:38:154 (7) - ^
  11. 01:38:821 (1) - remove new combo?
  12. 01:41:487 (4) - add new coombo
  13. 01:49:598 (6) - ^
  14. 02:03:043 (6) - ^
  15. 02:05:710 (2) - remove finish
  16. 02:15:709 (4) - add new combo
  17. 02:20:598 (4) - ^
  18. 02:24:598 (9) - add new combo?
  19. 02:27:709 (6) - ^
[Normal]

  1. 00:50:821 (1) - The last finish deletion
  2. 01:47:266 (x) - add note? & add new combo
  3. 02:05:487 (1) - The last finish deletion
  4. 02:17:488 (6) - add new combo
  5. 02:17:932 (1) - remove new combo
  6. 02:34:821 (6) - I employ me in this way(It is finish only in the last)
    It is suggestion
  7. 02:50:821 (3) - add new combo?
  8. 03:04:154 (1) - It is finish first
  9. 03:17:487 (3) - add new combo?
That's all~

Please try rank hard!!
Lan wings
790 posts
Joined August 2010
Lan wings

phonic wrote:

Hello~ :)

from phonic & Laurier's Modding Queue


[Lan & Gu]

  1. HP-1?
  2. 00:20:598 (2) - add new combofixed
  3. 00:34:154 (5) - add new combo?fixed
  4. 00:38:376 (5) - ^fixed
  5. 01:55:043 (6) - ^fixed
  6. 02:19:043 (3) - finish deletion
  7. 02:19:710 (x) - add note? & finishit is not the good
  8. 02:51:487 (5) - add new combofixed
  9. 02:58:598 (3) - ^fixed
  10. 03:03:709 (6) - ^fixed
SPOILER
[Hard]

  1. OD-1
  2. 00:19:821 (2) - I think that BPM change is not necessary
  3. 00:23:265 (4) - add new combo?
  4. 00:27:043 (x) - add note?
  5. 00:41:932 (2) - add new combo
  6. 00:44:154 (6) - ^
  7. 00:46:598 (6) - add new combo?
  8. 00:51:044 (2) - remove finish
  9. 01:01:044 (4) - add new combo?
  10. 01:38:154 (7) - ^
  11. 01:38:821 (1) - remove new combo?
  12. 01:41:487 (4) - add new coombo
  13. 01:49:598 (6) - ^
  14. 02:03:043 (6) - ^
  15. 02:05:710 (2) - remove finish
  16. 02:15:709 (4) - add new combo
  17. 02:20:598 (4) - ^
  18. 02:24:598 (9) - add new combo?
  19. 02:27:709 (6) - ^
[Normal]

  1. 00:50:821 (1) - The last finish deletion
  2. 01:47:266 (x) - add note? & add new combo
  3. 02:05:487 (1) - The last finish deletion
  4. 02:17:488 (6) - add new combo
  5. 02:17:932 (1) - remove new combo
  6. 02:34:821 (6) - I employ me in this way(It is finish only in the last)
    It is suggestion
  7. 02:50:821 (3) - add new combo?
  8. 03:04:154 (1) - It is finish first
  9. 03:17:487 (3) - add new combo?

That's all~

Please try rank hard!!
Download: Iguchi Yuka, Kitamura Eri & Ise Mariya - Kimi ni Gohoushi (Full Ver.) (No_Gu) [Lan & Gu].osu
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu
thx for modding . fixed most
Niva
Global Moderator
3,187 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
Mod request via Mini Maya Queue ~

[General]
-> "Lan & Gu" difficulty's preview time is different than two other diffs. Fix manually in notepad ~

[Normal]
  • 00:21:043 (2) - I think changing the middle waypoint into linear will play better:
    SPOILER
    00:42:821 (3) - 1 grid down so it doesn't touch (2) ?
    00:43:709 (1,2,3,4,5) - You could try selecting them all using Select tool, and then rotate by few degrees selection centre :3
    01:02:821 (1) - Weirdly touches (5) imo
    01:09:932 (4) - Why spacing change here o.o
    01:41:487 (1) - You know, if you wanna encircle (4), let its approach-circle guide you:
    SPOILER
    02:07:265 (1) - The last waypoint is somewhat tilted to the left. Is it intentional?
    02:11:709 (2,3) - idk why... This plays better imo:
    SPOILER
    02:23:709 (4) - Find another direction for the slider? The repeat weirdly touches 02:24:598 (5) imo
    02:29:487 (2) - Why spacing change here >_<
    03:01:043 (4) - Remove clap on repeat?
[Hard]
  • 00:41:043 (1) - This slowdown is quite surprising (because there's no warning at all), but easy to catch actually
    00:55:265 (5,1) - One grid down for both?
    01:02:377 (5) - CTRL + R? Will play better imo
    01:36:821 (5) - Add a slight curve? Will flow better imo:
    SPOILER
    01:43:265 (3) - Try to curve like below perhaps, so the slider's repeat is perfectly below (1) :
    SPOILER
    01:49:487 (5) - Should be 1 grid up so it's spaced equally to the previous note
    01:53:043 (3,4,5) - I don't like how these stacks getting messed up in play mode. CTRL+R these three perhaps?
    02:10:377 (6) - It's placed 1 grid below (5)... Well, not a major problem though
    02:18:377 (6) - Curve like this perhaps?
    SPOILER
    02:27:265 (4,5,6) - I think it's not a good idea to place jump here, because intuitively I think (7) is spaced 1/2 apart from (6)
    03:21:932 (3) - Slider wave here perhaps?
[Lan & Gu]
  • 00:24:154 (4) - Switch the hitsound's position (whistle at start, clap at end)
    00:45:043 (1) - Maybe hitsound finish also here?
    01:13:932 (1,3) - Arrange like this?
    SPOILER
    02:14:376 (1) - Curve this?
    03:00:154 (8,1) - This jump is quite shocking orz, I suggest to add the new combo on 02:59:932 (7) instead so this jump is guided by followpoint
That's it ~
Good luck with this map :3
Miya
2,690 posts
Joined June 2011
Miya
Hi No_GU, lovely song :)

General
  1. Fine, i don't found any problem
Normal
  1. 00:53:932 (2) - make more blanket? So it'll be like this > http://puu.sh/89df
  2. 01:08:599 (3) - the blanket doesn't look good. Make it like this? > http://puu.sh/89dL Also, move down a bit. I notice it touch the HP bar.
  3. 01:09:932 (4) - inconsistence spacing. Make it more close and blanket to 3. If you fix this fis the spacing with the note after this note.
  4. 01:17:488 (1) - i think the clap sound in the startpoint doesn't sound good. Remove it?
  5. 01:18:377 (2) - same as above, remove it from the startpoint and endpoint?
  6. 01:21:932 (1) - ^
  7. 01:23:709 (1) - the whistle sound in the endpoint should be change to clap. Whistle sound doesn't fit here.
  8. 01:41:487 (1) - the blanket doesn't look good. make it like this? > http://puu.sh/89fy
  9. 01:45:932 (3) - ^ but just move the endpoint to x:268 y :176
  10. 01:47:266 - It would be nice if you add circle with clap sound here. Also, the flow will be more consistent.
  11. 01:58:821 (4,5) - inconsistences spacing too here. Fix it and the note after it.
  12. 02:15:709 (4) - The blanket doesnt look good here. Move the endpoint to x:336 y:236
  13. 02:23:709 (4) - Move the endpoint to x:404 y:140 so it doesn't touch 5
  14. 02:34:821 (6) - Extend the repeat to 02:35:710 and add finish to the endpoint is more nice imo.
Hard
  1. 01:25:710 (8) - It'll be look more nice if you move this 1 grid up
  2. 01:37:487 (6) - Weird looking slider i think. It'll be more nice you make it like this >http://puu.sh/8bgU
  3. 01:47:265 (6) - same as above. I think it'll be more nice if you make it like this > http://puu.sh/8bha
  4. 01:49:487 (5) - Change clap to finish here is great imo. Just try it.
  5. 01:52:821 (2) - I don't like the hitsound pattern here. So it'll be nice if you remove clap here.
  6. 01:53:043 (3) - ^ but just remove the clap at the startpoint only
  7. 01:53:932 (5) - ^
  8. 01:55:709 (1) - I think it'll be more nice if you change clap sound in the endpoint into finish sound.
  9. 01:56:821 (2) - If you follow suggestion above, add clap here at the endpoint.
  10. 02:01:932 (2) - The hitsound is not consistant here, so move the clap sound from the endpoint to startpoint.
  11. 02:02:376 (3) - Also remove clap sound from here if you follow suggestion above.
  12. 02:02:821 (5) - Add clap here if you follow suggestion above.
  13. 02:10:377 (6) - Finish here doesn't fit with the song imo. Clap sound will be fit more better.
  14. 02:13:488 (1) - Adding clap in the endpoint will make hitsound more consistent.
  15. 02:25:043 (1) - Finish sound at the startpoint doesn't sound nice. I suggest you remove it.
  16. 02:35:487 (1) - Hmm, about this spinner. I think you should move it to 02:36:155 and extend the length until it reach 02:37:488. After that, put circle with finish sound at 02:35:710. It sounds better to me.
  17. 03:18:376 (2) - You should change whistle here into finish sound imo. Sounds much better.
Lan&Gu
  1. Orz, No Break Time here? Put a break time please. Even it just a short break time, it let player to re-adjust their position and rest.
  2. 00:26:376 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think you overuse finish time here. First remove finish time from startpoint slider 8, then remove it from 1, then remove it from 7.
  3. 00:29:043 (1) - Clap at the startpoint will be nice.
  4. 00:49:487 (3) - Overuse finish here. I suggest you remove it.
  5. 00:50:376 (6) - ^
  6. 00:55:487 (8) - ^ in the endpoint. Instead change it into clap sound will be better.
  7. 01:28:154 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe you can remove this note to make a break time here.
  8. 01:53:043 (1) - Finish sound at the startpoint doesn't sound good imo. Remove it?
  9. 02:09:932 (7) - Clap here doesn't sound good too. I suggest you remove it.
  10. 02:16:154 (5) - Remove finish here. Same reason as above.
  11. 02:17:487 (4) - ^
  12. 02:19:932 (3) - ^ at the endpoint.
  13. 02:24:598 (4) - ^
  14. 02:27:709 (7) - ^ at the startpoint.
  15. 02:28:154 (8) - ^
  16. 02:33:932 (1) - ^ at the startpoint.
  17. 02:38:376 (7) - ^ at the startpoint.
  18. 03:01:932 (6) - ^
  19. 03:07:709 (1) - ^
  20. Ouch, there's so much overuse finish sound in this diff >.<
That's all, sorry if my normal mod is not updated, because you were updated it when i done at normal diff. And i too lazy to recheck it.
Allright. Good Luck No_Gu! :)
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu
How enthusiastic !.. a post can get two mods..
fixed most
thanks for modding



To lan wings :你的部分给你改掉了- -finish确实有点多了
Breeze
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2009
Breeze
Snapped some unsnap notes and green timing section
Since mapper couldn't find the thumbs.db file, I'm fine with keeping this
Bubbled
Lan wings
790 posts
Joined August 2010
Lan wings
00:25:043 (2) - clap去掉
00:25:487 (4) - 加clap
00:33:043 加whistle
00:27:710 (5) - 删掉finish加上whistle
00:28:598 (7) - 删掉finish
00:49:932 加whistle
00:51:487 (1,2,3,4,5) - 太小声打起来没有打击感经常会漏掉
01:11:932 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里摆的不是很好看
01:25:932 (6) - x:124 y:160
01:37:710 (5,6,7,8) - 试下摆成类似这样的五角形00:26:821 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:47:488 (6,7) - 这里也不是很好``
02:09:932 (7) - clap去掉改为whistle
02:19:932 加clap
02:13:709 (3,4) - 02:24:598 (3,4) - 02:52:821 (3,4) - 这里3个是一起的``4不加finish更难听

哪天被戳了再把这个传上去吧``记得难度名去掉1
Download: Iguchi Yuka, Kitamura Eri & Ise Mariya - Kimi ni Gohoushi (Full Ver.) (No_Gu) [Lan & Gu1].osu
Suzully
osu! Alumni
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Joined July 2010
Suzully
Oops...I'm late for mod, it's already bubbled :?
Well let me shoot a star instead of my mod.
Good luck!
_Kiva
981 posts
Joined January 2010
_Kiva
oh 我喜欢这个BG
abalee
osu! Alumni
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Joined June 2008
abalee
Combo set in hard looks strange indeed...
abalee
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Joined June 2008
abalee
Hard:
01:55:709 (6) - clap in the middle? and finish in the end?(like insane)

edit: done
No_Gu
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Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu

abalee wrote:

Hard:
01:55:709 (6) - clap in the middle? and finish in the end?
fixed and thx
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

General

  1. There are 2 osb files in your folder, at least delete Iguchi Yuka, Kitamura Eri & Ise Mariya - Kimi ni Gohoushi (Full Ver.) (No_Gu).osb one, actually you can delete both 2
  2. (Optional) If you can find Thumbs.db file in your "Name" folder, delete it as well

Hard

  1. 00:19:932 (2) - I guess you're missing a finish sound here (slider head)

Lan ＆ Gu

  1. 00:20:598 (1) - Use finish instead of whistle since you use finish in other 2 diffs here
  2. 00:42:376 (4) - Personally I don't like how it sounds that a note used both soft finish and custom clap (normal hitsound) unless it's a downbeat with heavy sound, so remove one would better imo, clap or finish, just keep one
  3. 00:43:265 (2) - ^
  4. 02:13:932 (4) - ^
  5. 02:24:598 (4) - ^
  6. 02:53:043 (4) - ^
  7. 02:56:598 (6) - ^
  8. 03:00:154 (8) - ^
  9. 00:51:487 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think anti-jump fit here well, music here no such feeling, 5 notes, hmm, you can try star partten
  10. 01:13:488 (9) - (Reverse point) Use clap instead of whistle seems better
  11. 01:28:155 (x) - Drag break to here as you did in other 2 diffs

Fix what you want and call me back for a recheck
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu

Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

General

  1. There are 2 osb files in your folder, at least delete Iguchi Yuka, Kitamura Eri & Ise Mariya - Kimi ni Gohoushi (Full Ver.) (No_Gu).osb one, actually you can delete both 2
  2. (Optional) If you can find Thumbs.db file in your "Name" folder, delete it as well

Hard

  1. 00:19:932 (2) - I guess you're missing a finish sound here (slider head)

Lan ＆ Gu

  1. 00:20:598 (1) - Use finish instead of whistle since you use finish in other 2 diffs here
  2. 00:42:376 (4) - Personally I don't like how it sounds that a note used both soft finish and custom clap (normal hitsound) unless it's a downbeat with heavy sound, so remove one would better imo, clap or finish, just keep one
  3. 00:43:265 (2) - ^
  4. 02:13:932 (4) - ^
  5. 02:24:598 (4) - ^
  6. 02:53:043 (4) - ^
  7. 02:56:598 (6) - ^
  8. 03:00:154 (8) - ^
  9. 00:51:487 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think anti-jump fit here well, music here no such feeling, 5 notes, hmm, you can try star partten
  10. 01:13:488 (9) - (Reverse point) Use clap instead of whistle seems better
  11. 01:28:155 (x) - Drag break to here as you did in other 2 diffs

Fix what you want and call me back for a recheck
All fixed though I still can't find Thumbs.db file.Full subimit and thank you,Breeze
Breeze
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Breeze
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Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
Happy first Ranked ~

Omedeto ~ ;)
kosiga
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kosiga
No_Gu 1st ranked Congratulations ♪♪

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