so u finally decide to rank this ?
前奏詐欺の人 ? The Rhythm Lier ? lol
[Easy]
00:33:648 (2) - adjust it a bit ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10345743
02:43:248 (3,1) - desigh more new shape for quite different sounds here like you did for 02:40:848 (1) - would fit
03:58:848 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10345807
04:42:048 (1) - now that you NCed this slider with no SV change, why don't you give it a different style instead of a simple curved shape for the special long sound ?
[Normal]
00:07:998 (4,5) - the overlap looks not really good. Also happened at 00:09:648 (3) - 00:15:198 (5) -
04:27:648 - There is less clickable feeling so it plays kinda boring tbh. 04:27:648 (1) - and 04:30:048 (1) - etc should be all clickable to match the sound much better and plays enjoyable imo
nice rhythm choice
[Hard]
01:07:548 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10345424 You don't need to fix every blankets but at least fix here. It looks obvious
02:03:348 (4) - I'm curious what the single whistle is going for ? Is it really necessary ? so is 02:13:698 (2) - sounds ramdon imo
02:10:098 (3) - If you wanna make the jump for the sound I would move it more further since the spacing now looks like inconsistent thing happened so it looks not good at all
03:28:848 (7) - it's a good timing to make a jump to support the finish sounds and have a nice end
03:38:448 - This part. I think it would be much better to keep the same whistle usage as 03:43:248 -
[Insane]
00:12:798 (6) - looks not good when the circle somewhat touches the slider
00:15:798 (1) - nazi thing but I'm wondering why you didn't make it the same spacing between 00:15:348 (7) - and 00:15:948 (2) -
01:40:848 (1) - I would be rather stack it to the end of the slider than make meh stack on the start
01:54:498 (2) - well yea I know. I know you really don't fuckin care this shit but please blanket here looool looks ugly imo ;w;
02:31:398 (6) - the spacing shouldn't be this kind of small. Have it a jump like your EX gogo
03:13:248 (9) - NC here ? I know you are following the same things but I think it would look better if you make the distinction between the stream and the sliders. It also supports your jump pattern though
04:15:798 (1) - it doesn't really need the NC since the sounds are the same as 04:15:498 (2,3,4) -
[Ex]
00:53:148 (2,1) - Does the spacing need this kind of large ? Comparing with 00:45:648 (1,3) - , 00:48:048 (1,3) - , 00:50:448 (1,3) - or so. And it is even larger than the intense part like 01:01:398 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
01:00:348 (2) - re-consider to unstack it ? the stack breaks the flow imo
01:27:948 (2,3,4) - I know you wanna make rhythm change for this part but 1/2 sounds are still strong. The music doesn't really support the rhythm you made though
01:31:698 (5) - Could you consider the spacing of it again ? I think it's very sudden and it's a really huge spacing change compared with what you previous made
04:36:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the pattern should not be combined together since 04:36:498 (1,2,3) - and 04:36:798 (4,5,6) - are different. I would make 04:36:798 (4,5,6) - a triangle and add NC to 04:36:798 (4) - instead
04:39:348 (1,2) - How about making it a slider to follow the long sound ? might have it a bit SV change to match the sound better imo
04:41:748 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10344961
btw hit me once you need more stars from me
前奏詐欺の人 ? The Rhythm Lier ? lol
[Easy]
00:33:648 (2) - adjust it a bit ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10345743
02:43:248 (3,1) - desigh more new shape for quite different sounds here like you did for 02:40:848 (1) - would fit
03:58:848 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10345807
04:42:048 (1) - now that you NCed this slider with no SV change, why don't you give it a different style instead of a simple curved shape for the special long sound ?
[Normal]
00:07:998 (4,5) - the overlap looks not really good. Also happened at 00:09:648 (3) - 00:15:198 (5) -
04:27:648 - There is less clickable feeling so it plays kinda boring tbh. 04:27:648 (1) - and 04:30:048 (1) - etc should be all clickable to match the sound much better and plays enjoyable imo
nice rhythm choice
[Hard]
01:07:548 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10345424 You don't need to fix every blankets but at least fix here. It looks obvious
02:03:348 (4) - I'm curious what the single whistle is going for ? Is it really necessary ? so is 02:13:698 (2) - sounds ramdon imo
02:10:098 (3) - If you wanna make the jump for the sound I would move it more further since the spacing now looks like inconsistent thing happened so it looks not good at all
03:28:848 (7) - it's a good timing to make a jump to support the finish sounds and have a nice end
03:38:448 - This part. I think it would be much better to keep the same whistle usage as 03:43:248 -
[Insane]
00:12:798 (6) - looks not good when the circle somewhat touches the slider
00:15:798 (1) - nazi thing but I'm wondering why you didn't make it the same spacing between 00:15:348 (7) - and 00:15:948 (2) -
01:40:848 (1) - I would be rather stack it to the end of the slider than make meh stack on the start
01:54:498 (2) - well yea I know. I know you really don't fuckin care this shit but please blanket here looool looks ugly imo ;w;
02:31:398 (6) - the spacing shouldn't be this kind of small. Have it a jump like your EX gogo
03:13:248 (9) - NC here ? I know you are following the same things but I think it would look better if you make the distinction between the stream and the sliders. It also supports your jump pattern though
04:15:798 (1) - it doesn't really need the NC since the sounds are the same as 04:15:498 (2,3,4) -
[Ex]
00:53:148 (2,1) - Does the spacing need this kind of large ? Comparing with 00:45:648 (1,3) - , 00:48:048 (1,3) - , 00:50:448 (1,3) - or so. And it is even larger than the intense part like 01:01:398 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
01:00:348 (2) - re-consider to unstack it ? the stack breaks the flow imo
01:27:948 (2,3,4) - I know you wanna make rhythm change for this part but 1/2 sounds are still strong. The music doesn't really support the rhythm you made though
01:31:698 (5) - Could you consider the spacing of it again ? I think it's very sudden and it's a really huge spacing change compared with what you previous made
04:36:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the pattern should not be combined together since 04:36:498 (1,2,3) - and 04:36:798 (4,5,6) - are different. I would make 04:36:798 (4,5,6) - a triangle and add NC to 04:36:798 (4) - instead
04:39:348 (1,2) - How about making it a slider to follow the long sound ? might have it a bit SV change to match the sound better imo
04:41:748 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10344961
btw hit me once you need more stars from me