hohol454 wrote:M4M from your queue
General: wrong timing, move all lines +15 ms would get confirmation about this
00:15:011 (1,2,3) - easy to missread the rhythm. Would be much more intuitive if the kicksliders moved in the direction of the long slider. I would also reduce the spacing slightly nah both worked fine
00:29:403 (3,4,5) - could blanket with 00:28:998 (1) - i dont intend blanket here
00:37:106 (5,6) - and 00:38:728 (5,6) - should have at least similar spacing
00:40:957 (1) - You could make the slider 1/2 and add a circle on the red tick. Emphasises the drum beat more than a sliderend and you map the piano on the white tick with it nope
01:13:390 (1,3) - i think this overlap doesn't look too good
01:19:268 (4,5,6,7,1) - a bit strange stream shape, not very fitting with anime song imo
00:33:037 (1,2,3,4) - you could continue the vocals focus and do the rhythm like this
That's all. gl
Einja wrote:mod (what is the anime)
check widescreen, video is enabled fixed
00:17:429 (2,3) - i would rotate each one by 180 degrees for it to look nicer nah i like it this way
00:32:226 (3,4,5) - this should be the same as 00:30:604 (3,4) - (or the other way around) since they are both the same sound nope
00:47:429 (1,2) - if you flipped each one by 15 degrees, it would play much better yea tbh
00:53:307 (3) - 180 degree flip?
00:59:692 (3,4) - this is the only double that isn't between sliders. i would make 4 a 1/2 slider, or make 00:59:388 (2) - a 1/2. idk its fine imo,
i did doubled too 01:09:422 (4,5) - , fine with sliders
that's all i have for this map, it's pretty neat
Underforest wrote:m4m from your queue,
my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/639700mod instead https://osu.ppy.sh/s/605323
if my map already gets bn,
00:21:483 (1) - what about stack the tail with 00:21:077 (4) - ? nope, for the sliderbody enough
01:08:307 (1) - remove nc, no need for kiai reset
sorry for short mod, your map is already too good
thanks for modding ~
871 wrote:Hi ~
Well... it's a bit tough to mod map like yours. It's nearly perfect. I'll still point out some things that bother me.
00:16:415 (2) - Mb place this note here to make it look like some sort of blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8661869 i dont intend blanket here tbh
00:20:064 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this part looks a bit dirty.
This part 00:29:794 (1,2,3,4,5) and this part 00:29:794 (1,2,3,4,5) looks different visually, but rhythmically they are the same. Maybe make them both like 00:29:794 (1,2,3,4,5) ?
00:37:091 (5,6) and 00:38:713 (5,6) - ^ same. Tbh it's not even a serious problem, I'm just trying to find at least something
01:06:280 (5) - this slider bothers me a bit. Wave, curve or line would fit better
01:09:422 (4,5) - Mb just stack them ? nah
01:16:618 (1) - Also weird slider. There a lot various sliders in your Insane diff, I wonder if that variety is really needed since they don't represent anything special like wub's in technical maps.
Most of this are mine concerns about map's visuals, because everything else's fine.
I wanted to mod Gaia's Hard and Normal as well, but I can't find anything in them to mod, sry.