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amazarashi - Sora ni Utaeba -TV edit.-

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Osatia
turn off widescreen support in apple diff
UniqueBlock11
Hello, from my queue.

general

For Regraz's Hard, change AR to 7.5 for conventional purposes.
For Apple's Expert, change AR to 9 or 9.5 for conventional purposes too.
Every difficulty has Kiai time except for Apple's Expert, consider changing that.
Perhaps add 'apple' to the tags?

p.s. Even though I don't really like Japanese/anime songs this one is actually catchy lol

regraz's hard

00:00:327 - Feels like a note is missing here. Add a circle to emphasize the vocals as they start.
00:11:651 (2,3,4) - This is a hard difficulty, don't be afraid to use some abnormal distance snapping. You can blanket these for more appeal.
00:20:769 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - To avoid using the same rhythm over and over, try to mix up some repeats and notes:

00:29:445 (2,1) - Overlap looks a bit awkward, maybe move (1) a bit away from (2)
00:32:092 (1,2) - Blanket for appeal.
00:33:269 (4,5) - ^
01:16:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again, try to mix up some repeats and notes here for variety purposes.
01:27:166 - Two inherited points here that don't do anything. Remove them to increase download speed.

insane

00:26:357 (1,2) - Improve this blanket for appeal
00:50:180 (2,3,4) - (2) and (4) overlap in a slightly strange way. Maybe change the combo like this:
00:57:827 (2,1) - Blanket is a bit off, move (2) a bit up and to the right
01:12:239 (1) - Remove NC here and add it on 01:12:533 (2) since (1) is a hitsound and should be grouped with the hitsound stream right behind it and (2)
are vocals.
01:25:769 (3) - This slider probably has an accidental red anchor, it looks awkward with that anchor on. Remove it or use it to create a unique shape.

apple's expert

00:07:533 (1,2) - Improve this blanket for appeal
00:24:592 (4,5,1) - Improve the blanket between (4) and (1)
00:57:533 - You're missing a slider here; you are emphasizing the piano on 00:57:092 (1,2,3), but there's also piano here that isn't emphasized. You can add a slider that starts here and ends on 00:57:827 to emphasize both the piano and the vocals.
01:16:798 (1,2) - Blanket is a bit off, move (2) a bit up and to the right

Hopefully I did a good job
Topic Starter
DivineEnigma

UniqueBlock11 wrote:

Hello, from my queue.

general

For Regraz's Hard, change AR to 7.5 for conventional purposes.
For Apple's Expert, change AR to 9 or 9.5 for conventional purposes too. tbh i think 9.2 works perfectly but i'll see what apple has to say
Every difficulty has Kiai time except for Apple's Expert, consider changing that.
Perhaps add 'apple' to the tags? added

p.s. Even though I don't really like Japanese/anime songs this one is actually catchy lol agreed haha

insane

00:26:357 (1,2) - Improve this blanket for appeal not intended to be a blanket
00:50:180 (2,3,4) - (2) and (4) overlap in a slightly strange way. Maybe change the combo like this: imo i like it the way it is
00:57:827 (2,1) - Blanket is a bit off, move (2) a bit up and to the right
01:12:239 (1) - Remove NC here and add it on 01:12:533 (2) since (1) is a hitsound and should be grouped with the hitsound stream right behind it and (2)
are vocals.
01:25:769 (3) - This slider probably has an accidental red anchor, it looks awkward with that anchor on. Remove it or use it to create a unique shape.

Hopefully I did a good job
no reply = fixed;
thank you for a great mod~ !
Kyle Y

Normal modding request from my modding queue.

Where is the format for requesting modding? Please remember to follow rules set by queue owner.
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Normal
  1. 00:00:475 - um.... it is still rankable to map from different starting point, but I still think it feels better to start at here.
  2. 00:02:533 (2) - I remember that this kind of mapping style is mapping the strong beat in the very beginning, and normal mapping when background music start (00:06:210 - for this song). I am not sure if you what to use this kind of mapping, or you want to create a new one. Of course, I still suggest you can delete 00:02:533 (2) - 00:03:710 - 00:04:886 (2) - in order to map ONLY strong beats.
  3. 00:16:651 - isn't the vocal start at here? Why slider isn't end at here? If you said 00:16:798 - has stronger beat, then why not use clickable object to show the strong beat.
  4. 00:27:092 - why skip this strong beat? In fact, beats here is same as 00:22:386 - , I think it is good to keep them consistent.
  5. 00:43:416 (5) - could you mind to place this slider a little bit far from 00:42:680 (3) - , I worried some new-players read circle (4) and slider (5) at the same time and cannot reflect on it, and finally just skipped the circle 3 (or tread circle 3 as slider head, which is me when I am newbie.) maybe you can place like this : https://puu.sh/x5LYh/1cc67027ce.png
  6. 00:56:945 - del un-used green
  7. Rhythm placed in this map is not a problem, but will you consider to use more blanket to make the map clearer and more beautiful? Of course it is optional.
Hard
  1. 00:08:195 (6) - 感謝神圖送給我一個摸出東西來的機會
  2. 01:24:004 - 不送給玩家一個轉輪嗎? 不然玩家沒法展示自己轉圈的速度
  3. 神圖不需要摸
Insane
  1. 00:11:357 - how come you can use reverse to skip the vocal ?
  2. 00:17:239 (2) - 00:17:386 - why don't you give this strong beat sound a jumping?
  3. 00:17:975 - jumping here? like what you did on 00:20:327 (1) -
  4. 00:21:063 (3,4) - will you consider to ctrl+g them for better flowing?
  5. 00:48:857 - this strong beat need clickable object here.
  6. 01:05:769 (3,4) - how come you can place 1/4 snapped pattern like 1/2 snapped like 00:57:827 (2,1) - . You used once extented slider in the whole map, which is 01:05:769 (3) - , then could you place this 3/4 slider looks like 3/4. Even I am thinking if this extented slider is necessary or not.
  7. btw, sorry I am lazy to mod Insane. Or I should say I am still new for Insane diff. But I think this Insane just a normal standard, cannot say it is good or nice.
Mint
things i didnt fix
ar9 = too slow for 207 bpm (if you consider current standards)
ar9.5 = too fast for such simple map

00:07:533 (1,2) - visually looks ok to me already
00:57:533 - i think we can both agree that this note is not as strong as the previous three piano notes. if you didnt tell me, i prob wouldnt even have noticed that there was a sound here (which to me tells that this is not that important to deserve slider/note imo) xd

no mention = fix

thanks all! https://pastebin.com/xfi25J1e
Topic Starter
DivineEnigma

Kyle Y wrote:


Normal modding request from my modding queue.

Where is the format for requesting modding? Please remember to follow rules set by queue owner. sorry about that!
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Insane
  1. 00:11:357 - how come you can use reverse to skip the vocal ? i didn't prioritize the vocals here, i mean the vocals are still snapped on reverse end but i didn't find it as important as the piano there
  2. 00:17:239 (2) - 00:17:386 - why don't you give this strong beat sound a jumping? increased ds a bit but since it's just the beginning of the song, i didn't want to make the jump too big
  3. 00:17:975 - jumping here? like what you did on 00:20:327 (1) - done
  4. 00:21:063 (3,4) - will you consider to ctrl+g them for better flowing? i rly prefer it the way it is, if i ctrl+g'ed these two, i would have to fix the next sliders as they were setup the way they are due to this flow
  5. 00:48:857 - this strong beat need clickable object here. imo i don't think it's a strong beat
  6. 01:05:769 (3,4) - how come you can place 1/4 snapped pattern like 1/2 snapped like 00:57:827 (2,1) - . You used once extented slider in the whole map, which is 01:05:769 (3) - , then could you place this 3/4 slider looks like 3/4. Even I am thinking if this extented slider is necessary or not. you're right, i haven't used any 3/4 sliders so this would really throw them off, so I'll change it to 1/2.
  7. btw, sorry I am lazy to mod Insane. Or I should say I am still new for Insane diff. But I think this Insane just a normal standard, cannot say it is good or nice.
thank you for the mod~
Twiggles
im nice or something lol

apple expeert
  • 00:08:269 (2) - blancet
  • 00:10:475 (1) - blanket better boi
  • 00:11:798 (2) - flows better if it's stacked on 3 imo
  • 00:17:386 (1) - i would prefer this to be 4 circles instead of a slider, the slider doesn't fit at all personally
  • 00:53:857 (3) - make this 1 long slider instead tho, theres no sound on the repeat
  • 00:56:798 (5) - notes after this sound off and are definitely off, consider remapping (sounds are on the white marks)
  • 01:11:651 (4,5,6,7,8) - tbh i have no clue how to fix it, it sounds off, and i tried fidget (spinner)ing with it but nothing helped, maybe the bpm is off but i doubt that...
  • 01:16:798 (1) - stack on 01:16:063 (2) -
its a map i guess
TropicalHibi
quick mod+ first i guess. tbh just stuff i noticed while playing.

Regraz's Hard
  1. bring AR up to 8, right now the screen looks very cluttered


    next one is an opinion but uhhh
  2. 00:47:692 (5,6) | I understand you like to overlap until at the kiai, but you shouldn't force someone to go left then right at hard difficulty like that. it seems unnecessary. Its not like cars (haha reference im cool)
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Q

[Insane]
00:23:416 (3,5) - avoid this linear overlap.
00:24:519 (3) - unnecessary beat.
00:27:386 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - set consistent rhythm...
01:04:592 (3,4) - stack

GL
Topic Starter
DivineEnigma

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[Insane]
00:23:416 (3,5) - avoid this linear overlap.
00:24:519 (3) - unnecessary beat.
00:27:386 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - set consistent rhythm... i think the current rhythm is fine? o-o
01:04:592 (3,4) - stack

GL
ty for mod! (no reply = fixed)
Kyouren
I lost all replying and I don't have a time to reply it back, so i'm can say it's almost fixed!
Thank you for mod!

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EDIT:
The single album is released, change to 空に歌えば –TV edit.- with romaji is Sora ni Utaeba -TV edit.- and can you add my old nickname to tags? "gokugohan12468"


http://www.amazarashi.com/soraniutaeba/
Tashi-
ok
Mashed
[KittyAdventure's Normal]
01:23:416 (4) - Curve slider towards the right? The circles look strange after this slider

[Regraz's Hard]
01:23:856 (1) - The song length is fine, but I feel like this should be a spinner.

Can't find much because it is already mapped very well
I liked playing insane :)
Good luck on your mapping!
Jemzuu
Halo NM here cus <3

[apple's Expert]

00:02:680 (4,1) - swap NC like what u did on 00:01:357 (3,1) - and imo i think u should overlap the circle to the next slider instead
00:04:886 (4,1) - swap NC here as well cus 00:04:886 (4) - gives a new sound of the vocal and also to follow the 3 combo on the previous notes
00:06:063 (3) - i think you should emphasize this sound more cus it has a strong beat so, perhaps try to blanket it with 00:06:651 (2) - and above 00:06:945 (3) - instead. also to follow like u did on 00:41:063 (3,4) -
00:07:533 (1,2) - fix ds
00:09:739 (5) - more of an opinion but i think this note might not be noticed by some. maybe try moving it below the sliderend of 00:09:886 (1) - just a suggestio, however.
00:11:798 (2) - ok another suggestion, i feel like u should blanket this note to 00:11:063 (1) -
00:14:445 (5) - like i said before, i suggest u moving this note to 00:14:592 (1) - 's sliderend
00:15:033 (3) - imo this circle could give more emphasis, perhaps try placing it at x380 y220 to make 00:14:445 (5,2,3) - a triangle uwu what do u think it also follows the triangle on 00:13:710 (2,3,4) - just another suggestion, however.
00:16:210 (3) - put NC here? so that 00:15:769 (1,2) - can have the same as 00:16:945 (1,2) - also it follows the same beat so yea
00:19:151 (5,2) - stack? or maybe u could adjust the ds of 00:19:592 (2) -
00:21:063 (3,4) - fix ds/blanket too adjust (4) a bit place it beside 00:21:651 (1) - properly
00:26:798 (4) - adjust this a lil bit more to the right to create perfect triangle same as 00:26:651 (3) - adjust the space a bit more above
00:26:798 (4,2) - welp another suggestion, maybe NC these two (1-2,1-2) cus i think the beat is the same as both for them prior to like what u did on 00:28:710 (1,2,1,2) -
00:38:710 (4) - NC
00:56:577 (2,3,4,5) - idk if this is intended but pls fix this. (2) should be below (1), so that (5) could stack up 00:56:063 (3) -
00:57:533 - i dont get why u left this section empty I HAVE A SUGGESTION (again) pls add THIS pattern. i would appreciate it so much. it goes so well i'll love u if u will >w<
01:06:945 (5) - NC
01:10:475 (1) - add NC for this remove nc for 01:10:916 (1) -
01:11:725 (6) - blanket this with 01:11:357 (5) - instead? and adjust middlie point of (5) as well. NC (6) after
01:11:798 (2,3,4) - i dont see the reason to not seperate these objects and make it a stream like what u did on 01:07:239 (2,3,4,5) - it has same rhythm of it. would be better if change this to stream instead. maybe change to something like this
01:19:739 (3,5) - NC both
01:20:327 (7) - NC this too
01:20:769 (4) - ^
01:21:504 - pls follow the NC's on the timeline i changed. (i tried to undo but it's not letting me to) click
01:23:416 (1) - overlap this slider to 01:22:533 (2) - and then adjust the 3 next notes after
01:24:298 (2,3) - blanket these two pls w
01:26:651 (2) - same here blanket it to (3,4)

[Insane]
00:03:857 (1,2) - swap NC
00:06:210 (1,2) - ^
00:10:622 (4) - NC
00:22:533 (5,3) - overlap this and then maybe adjust 00:22:239 (3) - a bit to the right to create perfect triangle
00:42:239 (3,4) - overlap?
00:50:327 (3,5) - NC cus i think it gives better emphasis before the kiai comes as the music goes more intense on this part 00:54:592 (1,2,3,4,5) - u stop the nc
00:51:504 (3) - same here
00:52:827 (4) - ^
00:54:004 (3) - ^
01:06:798 (3) - ^
01:07:092 (1) - ^
01:07:386 (4) - ^
01:11:504 (3) - ^
01:11:504 (3,5,8) - ^^
01:26:651 (2) - ctrl g?
01:26:945 (3) - ^

das all i guess. hope it helps!
GL~
Topic Starter
DivineEnigma

AJamez wrote:

Halo NM here cus <3
[Insane]
00:03:857 (1,2) - swap NC nothing to emphasize on (2), on (1) there is a drum + vocal
00:06:210 (1,2) - ^ ^, same thing but except this time i believe on (1) it's like a clash / cymbal sound
00:10:622 (4) - NC nty, it'd ruin my nc structure. I usually NC either on a downbeat or when there is a sound that is needed to emphasize on a red tick prior to the downbeat. but there r other cases where some things just need to be emphasized
00:22:533 (5,3) - overlap this and then maybe adjust 00:22:239 (3) - a bit to the right to create perfect triangle imo it's fine, i usually place things like this next to each other but sometime i do overlap over a part on the slider's body rather than head/tail, just not in this case due to the setup here 00:23:122 (2,3,4,5) -
00:42:239 (3,4) - overlap? same thing mentioned above, overlapped on the head rather than body if that's what you mean
00:50:327 (3,5) - NC cus i think it gives better emphasis before the kiai comes as the music goes more intense on this part 00:54:592 (1,2,3,4,5) - u stop the nc disagree, i'd rather follow my own nc structure with the downbeat
00:51:504 (3) - same here ^
00:52:827 (4) - ^ ^
00:54:004 (3) - ^ ^
01:06:798 (3) - ^ ^
01:07:092 (1) - ^ ^
01:07:386 (4) - ^ ^
01:11:504 (3) - ^ ^
01:11:504 (3,5,8) - ^^ ^
01:26:651 (2) - ctrl g? it's fine, leads better to the jump 01:27:239 (1,2) -
01:26:945 (3) - ^ ^

das all i guess. hope it helps!
GL~
thank you for the mod!!!! :)
Mint
00:11:798 (2) - antiflow can set emphasis too
00:17:386 (1) - four circles is way too dense for this, also i think it does fit well (fade out + in)
00:53:857 (3) - really obvious kick tho
00:56:798 (5) - the downbeat is only vocal, no instrument at all = slider end and i mapped piano with circles. i think this is honestly (compared to other sets) the most close i can get to this music.
01:11:651 (4,5,6,7,8) - i dont have the best equipment with me right now but the triplet might sound a bit off yeah.. but the song fixes itself pretty quickly. i dont think its a big problem/

00:02:680 (4,1) - 00:04:886 (4,1) - but that totally neglects the song here tho, i follow downbeat or cymbal with nc's
00:06:063 (2) - understandable and i can agree to some point, but i think when transitioning to another section in a song with different intensity,i think keep DS is fine
00:09:739 (5) - i use stack so often, i dont think reading should be a problem

i didnt fix most of the blankets bc i dont rly care much for pixel perfect blankets, they look fine to me in-game so its okay ^^
also for some of the nc suggestions; i will strictly follow cymbal, and then downbeat. some suggestions would go against that ansd would ruin patterning :>

thank you guys for modding! https://pastebin.com/XysbWwJ7
Irohas
kyojitsu wo kirisaite

apple
  1. 00:56:577 (2,3,4,5) - feels a bit weird, it's looks like it mixed with following drums and vocals, so what about trying to map the blue tick at 00:56:872 - ?
  2. c00l as usual
insane
  1. 00:56:651 (5,6) - what about reducing a bit that spacing? cause, theres actually nothing to put a jump here tbh
  2. 01:17:533 (3,4,5) - maybe try to ctrl+g histouds o: or maybe add clap on 01:17:680 (4) -
regraz
  1. 00:49:445 - maybe add something here? feels a bit weird imo it sounds as an important sound lol
  2. 01:27:239 - 01:27:386 - rip those loud sound
kittyadventure
  1. 00:54:886 (1) - dont be lazy ): map until 00:55:769 - and then put the spinner until 00:56:945 - imo
[]
thats all for me, glglgll
Topic Starter
DivineEnigma

Irohas wrote:

kyojitsu wo kirisaite

insane
  1. 00:56:651 (5,6) - what about reducing a bit that spacing? cause, theres actually nothing to put a jump here tbh
  2. 01:17:533 (3,4,5) - maybe try to ctrl+g histouds o: or maybe add clap on 01:17:680 (4) - i prefer how it's planned at the moment tbh :< not sure if i want to hitsound the guitar sounds here
[]
thats all for me, glglgll
ty a lot for the mod!!

no reply = fixed!
Kyouren
After check all mods, I answer all and sorry, no change all :<

Tashi-: I don't think it's bad and I don't think to make revense in that part too, sorry no change all! </3
Mashed: Other map used that too, so it's fine for me
Irohas: I'm not lazy but the new lyrics started in that but i'm make the spinner end at 00:56:945 (1) - since that is new lyrics started, thank you!

@DivineEnigma: Can you make the spinner 00:54:886 (1) is ended at 00:56:945 (1)? Thank you! :3
Topic Starter
DivineEnigma
updated^
PyroBear
[Normal]
  1. 00:47:533 (3,4,5,1) - Feels too complex on a normal diff


[Hard]
  1. 00:08:195 (6) - Starts on blue tick, I think it's meant to be on the white tick?
  2. 00:13:857 (2,3,4,5) - Feels hard to hit


[Insane]
  1. 00:09:739 (4) - I feel like this part shouldn't be stacked directly on 00:09:298 (3) because it's too hard to hit
  2. 01:04:592 (3,4) - Why are these stacked


[Expert]
  1. 00:41:945 (2,3) - Put these a bit closer to each other?
  2. 00:56:357 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Sudden transition from following percussions to piano feels a bit weird even if you NC it
  3. 01:01:651 (1,2) - If you're going to put the sliders I pointed out on my first point closer together I guess you need to do it here as well

I don't really have too much to say tbh it's a good map. Have a star since I like BNHA and Amazarashi
Sorry for the late mod as well, here's my map t/528834
Topic Starter
DivineEnigma

PyroBear wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:09:739 (4) - I feel like this part shouldn't be stacked directly on 00:09:298 (3) because it's too hard to hit imo I haven't gotten any complaints about this as far as testplays but I think it's a good transition into the sudden jumps that are upcoming
  2. 01:04:592 (3,4) - Why are these stacked multiple reasons actually, for one I didn't want to make this jump any harder than it already it is since it's at 204bpm. also, the vocals r split up here "utaeba", here it's "uta" so i stacked the first two, but the 3rd circle though it's apart of the "uta" part of the vocal, i left it unstacked but spaced because the upcoming vocal "eba" is on a stronger note so it helps transition to that especially since 01:05:033 (1) - has a higher spacing

I don't really have too much to say tbh it's a good map. Have a star since I like BNHA and Amazarashi
Sorry for the late mod as well, here's my map t/528834
ty for mod!
i'll mod your map as soon as possible!
sakebi
[KittyAdventure's Normal]

01:17:533 (2,3,4) - this pattern looks wonky, fix the triangle shape

[Regraz's Hard]

00:08:195 (6) - fix

01:23:856 (1) - add a spinner or something after this, don't leave the end blank

[Insane]

i don't see the point of introducing this concept then never using it again after the beginning:
00:02:828 (1,2) , 00:05:180 (1,2) , 01:12:533 (2,3) - no movement between the sliders, would be okay if it was used more than three times in the map but it just seems pointless otherwise

00:31:651 (3) - fix overlap with 00:31:063 (1) -

01:01:357 (5) - would be better as a two note stack instead of a slider
Topic Starter
DivineEnigma

lilligantEX wrote:

[Insane]

i don't see the point of introducing this concept then never using it again after the beginning:
00:02:828 (1,2) , 00:05:180 (1,2) , 01:12:533 (2,3) - no movement between the sliders, would be okay if it was used more than three times in the map but it just seems pointless otherwise The beginning is the most imo dullest part if compared to other sections, so I think it's fine.

00:31:651 (3) - fix overlap with 00:31:063 (1) -

01:01:357 (5) - would be better as a two note stack instead of a slider
no comment = fixed!
thank you for the mod!
Mafumafu
Have to keep AR like this to match up with the spread.

@Cris_1
00:19:886 (7,1) - I think it plays okay.
00:27:386 - I don't think there's some kind of rule saying I must keep it consistent with other diffs.
00:25:475 (2,3,4,5) - I don't think so. I think they are well organized with symmetry.
00:32:092 (1) - so?
00:38:710 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - you should know 1/1 slider is already a kind of rest.
00:48:710 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I think it is okay.

@Senery
00:14:298 (4,5) - Nope, I want to map the vocal out.

@UniqueBlock11:
00:00:327 - I don't think it is necessary to do so.
00:11:651 (2,3,4) - I don't think it is necessary to apply abnormal spacing here. Neither the beats nor the vocal tells me to do so.
00:20:769 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Nope, it will break my scheme of following the guitar.
00:29:445 (2,1) - it is deliberately done like that, to create a challenging stack.
00:32:092 (1,2) -Don't think it is really that needed.

@benji4141
00:47:533 (5,6) - Actually I need that pattern to mark out what music provides.

@Irohas
00:49:445 - Actually I am sticking to one track only.

@Pyrobear:
00:13:857 (2,3,4,5) it follows the vocal.


Other fixed!
Thank you!

Code:
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PreviewTime: 56725
Countdown: 0
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.75

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Title:Sora ni Utaeba -TV edit.-
TitleUnicode:空に歌えば –TV edit.-
Artist:amazarashi
ArtistUnicode:amazarashi
Creator:DivineEnigma
Version:Regraz's Hard
Source:僕のヒーローアカデミア
Tags:boku no hero academia one for all izuku midoriya deku katsuki bakugou kacchan if i sing to the sky hiromu akita opening op 3 tv size appleeaterx kittyadventure gokugohan12468 regraz
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Joe Castle
AFTER 2 WEEKS IM FINALLY HERE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA (?)
Hi! i hope im not late to mod your map uwu sorry for taking so long, i was busy IRL

GD Normal
1. 00:54:592 (1) - to be honest kitty, this circle doesnt really feel nice, kinda out of place tho, maybe is because little time gap between the circle and the spinner? I will recommend 2 things you can do (if you want to lol):

1.1 Placing the spinner at 00:54:739, so it flows better (IMO) and it emphazises the drums in the background of the song. (for example, something like 01:12:239 (1,1) would look good :P)
1.2 Delete the circle and place the spinner where the circle was.

It your choice tho.


Regraz Normal looks amazing, couldnt find anything wrong with it


Insane
1. 00:03:857 (1,2) - this part doesnt look/flow that good, comparing it with 00:01:504 (1,2), since both are placed on the same ticks and stuff like that, so why not trying something different? it will make it look better
2. 00:08:269 (2,1) - move this a bit more to the left, so it can have the same spacing between the slider 00:07:533 (1) and 00:08:563 (2)
3. 00:10:475 (3) - move to x160-y268, so 00:10:475 (3,4,5,6) can have the same spacing between each other
4. 00:17:386 (3,4) - delete circle "4" and end the slider where the circle was (00:17:827)
5. 00:22:239 (3,4,5) - move 00:22:386 (4) where the slider at 00:22:386 (4) ends, so the jumps look better
6. 00:50:180 (2) - move this where the slider at 00:50:475 (4) starts, so it can flow better uwu
7. 01:04:445 (2,3,4,5) - why doing 01:04:592 (3,4) like that ;w; why not doing a back and forward jump (moving circle "5" where circle "4" was and vice versa

Apple Extra looks good, no problems there
lilscribby
Hi from #modreqs

KittyAdventure's Normal:
00:01:504 (1) - Coming in on the red tick is a little weird here, I recommend adding a circle at 00:01:357 (1) - to make it a bit more intuitive.
00:01:357 (1,1) - move these closert together so it isn't the same as 00:02:533 (2,3) -, which has a different timing. These being the first notes of the song, it's good to keep them snapped so the player can orient themselves to the snapping, esp. at lower levels :)
01:14:298 (1) - Same as 00:01:357 (1) -


Insane:
00:21:357 (4) - This just sounds a little sloppy hitsoundwise. Taking it off of 4 would make it sound better.
00:56:651 (4) - DS this to make it less confusing, I thought it was a 16th note bc it was too close to the end of 3.
Overall a bit of a heavy use on the clap hitsound - some more variety could go a long way in parts like 00:26:063 (4) -



This map overall is very polished, I can tell you've worked on it for quite some time. Not much left to correct, and it's mostly just minor things. Good luck and happy mapping! :D
July - San
Hii! From Mod req!
(Sorry for my bad english)

Okay Let's See here..

NORMAL

00:02:827 (3) - (Add "Finish" hitsound)

00:03:857 (1) - (here too)

00:05:180 (3) - (here too)

00:10:475 (4,5) - (exchange it for a single slider, that kind of slider can be tricky for normal players)

00:51:651 (2,3,4) - (What pace was followed there?)

That's all in the diff normal, great diff!

INSANE

00:02:828 (1) - (Add "Finish")

00:03:857 (1) - (What pace was followed there?)

00:05:180 (1) - (Add "Finish")

00:17:386 (3,4) - (What pace was followed there?)

01:12:533 (2) - (Delete this, it looks weird on the map)

01:13:416 (3) - (This too)

EXPERT

00:57:092 (1,2,3) - (It looks bad)

01:13:563 (1,2,3,4,5) - (???)

Since , 01:13:563 - to 01:14:298 -

it is better to leave a short break

...That's All

Good song and Good map Dude!
Topic Starter
DivineEnigma
remapped insane
Kyouren
Will check soon!
Shortthu
check unicode title xd
Mint

Irohas wrote:

kyojitsu wo kirisaite

apple
  1. 00:56:577 (2,3,4,5) - feels a bit weird, it's looks like it mixed with following drums and vocals, so what about trying to map the blue tick at 00:56:872 - ? // before white tick = drum, after is piano since thats the only sound (with vocal, but i dont follow that i here)
  2. c00l as usual // :)

PyroBear wrote:

[Expert]
  1. 00:41:945 (2,3) - Put these a bit closer to each other? // the sliderend overlaps should be easily recognizable since it appears at pretty much every 3/4
  2. 00:56:357 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Sudden transition from following percussions to piano feels a bit weird even if you NC it // dont agree, im essentially following all the sounds excluding vocals here
  3. 01:01:651 (1,2) - If you're going to put the sliders I pointed out on my first point closer together I guess you need to do it here as well

July - San wrote:

EXPERT

00:57:092 (1,2,3) - (It looks bad) // ??

01:13:563 (1,2,3,4,5) - (???)

Since , 01:13:563 - to 01:14:298 -

it is better to leave a short break

...That's All // after some thought i will rework this

Good song and Good map Dude!
thanks all! https://pastebin.com/MVKc8tur
Butrophi
Hihi, Butro here from my LN STD Q

I'll only mod the Insane difficulty, as I only mod the work of whoever posted in my queue.

(mostly things that I think could improve the beatmap, since this already meet expectations of a ranked beatmap (IMO).

Anyway, small mod but here we go:


vv

- Let's start with not too important things first. There's about 40 distance snap issues in the AiMod log. If this is intentional, then just ignore this point. If not, press Alt + Shift + A to view your AiMod and fix some of those.
- Starting at 52:092 to 53:563, your 2 note to slider transitions have wonky finishes that don't mix well with the build of the song. Gameplay-wise is O.K, but the sound is kind of eh.
- At 1:14:445 to 123:857, a Kiai time would be acceptable to use, although it isn't at all necessary.
- The notes at 10:475 to 10:916 have a pretty ugly placement. Maybe position them a little so it looks better?

Short mod, sorry, but that means that this beatmap difficulty is up to expectations!!!



Good luck on improving this and making it amazing!! :D
Topic Starter
DivineEnigma

Butrophi wrote:

Hihi, Butro here from my LN STD Q

I'll only mod the Insane difficulty, as I only mod the work of whoever posted in my queue.

(mostly things that I think could improve the beatmap, since this already meet expectations of a ranked beatmap (IMO).

Anyway, small mod but here we go:


vv

- Let's start with not too important things first. There's about 40 distance snap issues in the AiMod log. If this is intentional, then just ignore this point. If not, press Alt + Shift + A to view your AiMod and fix some of those. it's an insane difficulty, i don't need to be fully consistent since i emphasize the music more than one would emphasize in a lower difficulty like hard or normal xd
- Starting at 52:092 to 53:563, your 2 note to slider transitions have wonky finishes that don't mix well with the build of the song. Gameplay-wise is O.K, but the sound is kind of eh. i want to make 00:53:857 (3) - clickable because of that drum sound, it isn't the same drum sound that i would often hear in the song. plus after that are mainly sliders so i think it's acceptable
- At 1:14:445 to 123:857, a Kiai time would be acceptable to use, although it isn't at all necessary. it's fine, i don't do this for the beginning either. plus yeah it isn't necessary imo
- The notes at 10:475 to 10:916 have a pretty ugly placement. Maybe position them a little so it looks better? i personally like how they're placed

Short mod, sorry, but that means that this beatmap difficulty is up to expectations!!!



Good luck on improving this and making it amazing!! :D
thank you so much! ( :
Tatan
from #modreqs
FINALLY, a good mapset for this song.


[Regraz's Hard]
00:49:445 - 00:50:327 - There's an ignored sound on these timestamps, I think there has to be a circle before the slider like in 00:48:563 (8,1)

I can't find any more technical issues in this diff, but this could be considerably improved aesthetically.

[Insane]

from 00:27:827 to 00:29:298 the sounds are the same, therefore 00:28:416 (4) this hircircle should be a slider.

WOW, This mapset is really, really good, I couldn't find any more issues. I hope this gets qualified soon.
PD: This is a little bit nitpicky, but there's a lot of wasted opportunities in blankets in last diff. I decided to not point them out, since it's just aesthetic and not that important.
Topic Starter
DivineEnigma

- Tatan - wrote:

from #modreqs
FINALLY, a good mapset for this song.

[Insane]

from 00:27:827 to 00:29:298 the sounds are the same, therefore 00:28:416 (4) this hircircle should be a slider. you're right but my intention here was to leave a 1/1 gap because from the previous section to this, i want to reset the momentum built to lead into the slower section

WOW, This mapset is really, really good, I couldn't find any more issues. I hope this gets qualified soon.
PD: This is a little bit nitpicky, but there's a lot of wasted opportunities in blankets in last diff. I decided to not point them out, since it's just aesthetic and not that important.
ty so much ~
Izzywing
hi!

[kitty]

00:33:269 (3,4,1) - i dont like this placement, since the player could misread this and attempt to tap 00:34:445 (1) - instead of moving to 00:34:004 (4) -

good diff!

[regraz]

i think you could have utilized SV changing a bit, to make some low intensity parts slower to match the music. Stuff like 00:00:475 (1) could have a lower SV. And honestly, 00:00:475 (1) - this entire section. But since it's a hard and not needed, it's not something I would make a big deal out of. Overall a nice hard diff with good progression, I like it.

[Insane]

00:06:651 (2,3,4) - you could keep the visual spacing consistent? - https://puu.sh/yDXBY/307edfcff7.jpg
00:08:269 (2,1,2,3) - visually speaking it doesnt make a lot of sense to go to having all the objects be cramped after right before there is plenty of space between them (see 00:06:210 (1,2,3) - )
00:14:298 (5,1) - a rhythm like this makes more sense with the vocals - http://puu.sh/yDXEI/e03bfbec66.jpg
00:20:769 (2,4) - this looks kinda gross, suggest moving them closer so it looks more like 00:18:710 (3,5)

as a general comment your wave sliders are kinda ugly, 00:40:327 (1) - for example just looks bad. mess with the nodes a bit and you can get something a lot nicer looking, like - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9740134 as a quick example

i think the visuals on this map can be a bit cleaner in general. usually im not a stickler for aesthetics since its a pretty subjective concept, but in the kiai it would go a long way if you utilized the idea of consistent visual spacing, especially for patterns like 01:03:122 (2,3,4,5,1) - or 01:10:769 (4,1,2,3).

It's also less about any particular pattern and more the idea that the spacing itself is quite different from measure to measure. its not a huge issue and like i said before, can be considered subjective, but it's something to think about I guess.

overall a decent map tho.

[apple]

00:56:798 (5) - i think this is just better as a circle. i dont really have a great reason for this so try it out i guess. i think it's better mostly since based on the that instrument that 00:56:798 (5,1,2,3) - lands on having a pause between 5 and 1 fits pretty well there.

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I think if you got a few more mods on the insane you could call me back, @ divineenigma. Overall the set is pretty solid.
Mint

Hobbes2 wrote:

[apple]

00:56:798 (5) - i think this is just better as a circle. i dont really have a great reason for this so try it out i guess. i think it's better mostly since based on the that instrument that 00:56:798 (5,1,2,3) - lands on having a pause between 5 and 1 fits pretty well there. // i tried it out but i didnt really like it that much compared to what i have currently :cry: idk having 1/1 gap solely on red ticks suddenly to me doesnt really play intuitive at all, having the slider here saves players acc lol

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I think if you got a few more mods on the insane you could call me back, @ divineenigma. Overall the set is pretty solid.
thank you :)
Topic Starter
DivineEnigma

Hobbes2 wrote:

hi!

[Insane]

00:06:651 (2,3,4) - you could keep the visual spacing consistent? - https://puu.sh/yDXBY/307edfcff7.jpg
00:08:269 (2,1,2,3) - visually speaking it doesnt make a lot of sense to go to having all the objects be cramped after right before there is plenty of space between them (see 00:06:210 (1,2,3) - ) i wouldn't say it's cramped imo
00:14:298 (5,1) - a rhythm like this makes more sense with the vocals - http://puu.sh/yDXEI/e03bfbec66.jpg
00:20:769 (2,4) - this looks kinda gross, suggest moving them closer so it looks more like 00:18:710 (3,5)

as a general comment your wave sliders are kinda ugly, 00:40:327 (1) - for example just looks bad. mess with the nodes a bit and you can get something a lot nicer looking, like - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9740134 as a quick example

i think the visuals on this map can be a bit cleaner in general. usually im not a stickler for aesthetics since its a pretty subjective concept, but in the kiai it would go a long way if you utilized the idea of consistent visual spacing, especially for patterns like 01:03:122 (2,3,4,5,1) - or 01:10:769 (4,1,2,3).

It's also less about any particular pattern and more the idea that the spacing itself is quite different from measure to measure. its not a huge issue and like i said before, can be considered subjective, but it's something to think about I guess.

overall a decent map tho.

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I think if you got a few more mods on the insane you could call me back, @ divineenigma. Overall the set is pretty solid.
tried making some patterns visually consistent, and fixed the things that were mentioned (with no reply)
thank you so much!!
Mint
as your request!

insane
- 00:06:651 (2,3,4,1,2,1) - same with the visual spacing. the spacing between the objects at (2,3,4) and (1,2,1) differ so much while the intensity stays pretty much the same // 00:10:180 (2,2) - 00:11:063 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
- 00:16:357 (3,5) - 00:20:033 (4,1) - 00:50:180 (2,4) - 01:04:886 (5,1) - same applies to overlaps; generally you want to do that pretty consistent (if the song (or variable snapping usages, not the case here) doesnt really require a notable difference).
- those visual things might seem more like nazi stuff but when adding it all up together it really is a big factor contributing to general structure
- 00:39:739 (3) - 00:46:798 (4) - not quite sure what youre following here. the vocal on the white tick seems much longer than vocal note thats currently clickable. seems more fitting to me to have a slider that starts there instead.
- 00:52:680 (3,4) - perhaps you can make the cymbal here clickable? one of the strongest sounds here (in a calmer part too !!) but it only has a slider end to support it ):
- 00:55:769 (1,2) - actually, i found this a bit strange due to the reverse. currently ur ending the slider on a snare, which leads to the next offbeat being clickable. starting new patterns at such places seems a bit contradictory throughout the map the emphasis on the white ticks (as the song supports). would recommend removing the repeat or adding another slider so the new pattern starts on any snare instead of offbeats

also i feel like 00:03:857 (1) - 00:55:769 (1) - 01:00:327 (1) - 01:02:680 (1) - can use finishes due to the really obvious cymbals, but its up to you
rest looks good!

almost there!! 8-)
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