[ amb1d3x ] wrote:
Get a more lewd background toThanks for the mod [ amb1d3x ]!!! ><
attract playersenhance the map quality ;P The players would be focused to the bg instead of the notes xd .. will looks for more monster waifu bgs ;p
00:00:586 (1) - end spinner 00:01:949 - here and have a slider here 00:02:404 - like this one 00:04:222 (1) - No. It's an Easy diff. New players needs some times to prepare to click the notes after spinning. That''s why put a short gap between spinners and notes wasn't a good idea in Easy diff.
00:06:040 (1,1) - perhaps adjust so that the overlap isnt there perhaps I think it's fine since they aren't touching each other at all in game play.
00:22:881 (1) - going from clockwise flow to anti-clockwise without much reason If we're talking for reason, yeah may it's to avoid the crowd on the left bottom screen. It's recommended to map the whole screen instead of the specific location. If I map it clockwise, the flow will keep circulate on the left bottom screen.
00:22:881 (1,1) - stack this if it doesn't ruin spacing or a pattern Even if I stack them, I think it wouldn't give any effect at all since they aren't connected each other. And I want to keep the flow too.
00:37:967 (3,1) - fix blanket Sure
00:42:081 (1,3) - ^ ok
01:16:367 (3,4) - ^ ok i'll stop with the blankets ok xd
00:44:824 (1) - I would use the bottom of the screen more here I think I'll keep it like it was. Both top are bottom are fine, but I'd prefer top.
01:01:281 - maybe end the previous spinner earlier and put another here the music here is too intense to be ignored I'll keep it like it was. The reason is like I said first about preparation time for new players.
00:02:404 - note is too significant to be just an end to a spinner Again like Easy diff. I don't want to put less than 2 beats gap between spinners and note for Normal diff (and 4 beats for Easy diff).
00:28:195 (5,1) - these doubles are a bit questionable considering this is just a normal and your rhythm besides these are just standard 1/4 drum beats, suddenly following vocals might be a bit hard to read I've started the transition from drum to vocal at 00:26:995 (3) - , I think following the vocal here isn't a problem.
01:01:281 - don't just leave this empty >.< Well, since the spinner I made follows the long "saaaaa" vocal, I think it's a bit weird to play the notes on the instrument without transition from vocal to instrument. I've mapped the instrument before, but after I got the first mod, I've changed it as the modder said. And I agree if it feels a bit weird.
For this diff, work on staying consistent with the rhythm choice, I see sometimes you go solely to vocals and other times go to drum beats. It's not an Easy diff, it's a Normal diff. If I follow a consistent rhythm (such as instrument), the combo would be solid and the diff would be ended becoming an Easy diff. Thats why I put some variations on it to make it more like Normal diff.
00:03:995 (3) - I would just get rid of this I put it for the violin (well I'm not really sure what instrument was it. I'm not really good on it xd) there.
00:12:252 (2) - ? circle seem out of place here there was a drum there
00:19:367 - missing beat here is too off-putting I want' to keep the spread between this diff and the Normal diff. I don't want to put a full 1/4 beat because it will make the spread between it and the Normal diff become big.
00:48:767 (1) - the drum beat is too significant imo to be a sliderend On this point, I do a combination between instrument and vocal with the circles, sliderhead, and the slidertail. As you can see, I didn't put any notes even the slidertails on somewhere empty in the song. I know the drum beat feels strong here, but I still don't want to break what I did on this point ;w; . If I make the slider shorter, its tail would go somewhere empty in the song. For now, I'll keep it as it be.
00:49:281 (2) - ^ yeah also
00:51:938 (2,3) - like here you use circles for the drums, do that in the previous sections too It has 1/4 drums on its point, so it seems a bit different than before
01:23:052 (5) - better flow and consistency in rotation flow would feel nicer to play It's just the same reason like I said on the easy diff about the clockwise and counter-clockwise
01:28:709 (5) - nc btw okay why not
00:03:995 (5) - I would delete this well, It was just like I said on Hard diff.
00:58:538 - I would move the pattern somewhere else after the first three notes remapped
01:13:624 (1) - amp up the sv a bit (just a tad, it's hard to not break on sightread) I think it doesn't really give much effect in game play. I'll keep my current.
00:00:586 (1) - I would not use a spinner here, instead think of some pattern with the repeating 1/4 beats I want to put at least one spinner in the song but I don't know the other place that fits it instead of this one ;w; but I'll consider about what you said
00:26:995 (1) - bit hard to read as the previous pattern right before made a triangle, so I was expecting this to make one as well with 00:26:652 (5,6) - Applied. Nice one! :3
00:33:681 (7,1) - Awkward going from up to down (00:33:509 (6,7) - ) and then down to up with the jumps (this one I tagged) rearrange the circles (hope it's fine now)
01:02:652 (1,2,1,2) - make the 2's ctrl+g sure. And I give more spacing to it
GL on rank
hi again xDThanks for the mod Koala! ><
00:20:824 (4) - ctrl+G makes this easier to read. because of the way these sliders are placed sightreading i thought it ended on the red tick instead of the blue one and ctrl+G would make it more clear where the slider ends ok
00:23:567 (1,2) - this one is fine since people are already used to the rhythmn there is no confusion
00:33:681 (7,1) - think this spacing should be bigger than 00:33:509 (6,7) - since 1 is stronger than 7 rearrange the circles with the mod above (hope it's fine now)
00:53:395 (2) - 00:54:767 (2) - it would fit very nicely if you increased the SV (maybe to 1.3-1.4x?)for these 2 sliders since the sounds are quite strong (but make sure u NC them and snap their ends if u do) Nope. I think the volume increase and the spacing looks fine.
00:57:167 (1,2,3,4) - maybe the spacing here should be bigger than 00:55:795 (1,2,3,4) - since they're stronger and it would help to build up for the next part I think it's fine since the one that increased here was only the vocal a bit. The effect was still same.
rest is perfect basically
00:07:404 (4) - ctrl+G? so pattern is like 00:06:040 (1,2) Nope. It would give a really big spacing between them.
00:53:395 (2) - 00:54:767 (2) - SV increase would be niec here too like extra Also like Extra
00:59:224 (1,2,3) - this feels kinda squashed in the top right corner. why don't you use more of the playfield and map this more on the left/bottom side to free up some space for a sharper angle [#008000]remapped[/color]
01:00:595 (1,2,3) - why does spacing here decrease when its a buildup? would be better if it was visibly bigger than 00:59:909 (1,2,3) - Also remapped
01:25:967 (1) - i like this slider lol its fancy fancy ? sounds like me xd
01:28:367 (5,6,1) - maybe the spacing here should be bigger since the sounds are getting a lot stronger? sure why not
00:55:795 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - stacking here makes reading difficult. i like the pattern and concept a lot, but considering the set I think it doesn't make sense having a pattern here which is harder than the ones in the insane & extra. 1/2 slider spam would be better I did something else instead. I don't want to make it same like 00:58:538 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - since they have a different effect
01:06:424 (3) - u did this with a circle and 01:09:167 (3) - this with a 1/2 slider but its the same sound. consistency would be better imo. 01:17:395 (3) - 01:20:138 (3) - here u also used 1/2 sliders so u should replace 01:06:424 (3) - with a 1/2 To make things clear, 01:06:424 (3) - didn't have vocal on the 1/2 ponts but the other have. That's why I gave 1/2 for the other points.
normal & easy
nothing to say, gj
good luck with the set, its very solid you should have no difficulty getting it ranked I hope so xd
edit: messed something up
updated many things and a bit remapped xd
also added "fantastica" on the tags (how could I forgot about myself xd)