Some of the following might be nitpicky, but here are some possible fixes concerning timing points :
00:31:234 - This inherited timing point is not synced with the slider head at 00:31:235 (1). I'd recommend syncing it for clarity.
00:58:940 - This inherited timing point is in the middle of a slider. I'd recommend placing it on the following circle at 00:59:117 (2).
01:04:764 - Delete this inherited timing point. It is redundant with the one at 01:01:587.
02:12:793 - This inherited timing point is placed on a circle and has a change in slider velocity and volume. It also marks the start of Kiai time. I think it would be clearer if you put it on the slider at 02:12:882 (1).
02:30:176 - Put this inherited timing point on the slider head at 02:30:485 (3) for clarity.
02:35:382 - This inherited timing point is in the middle of a slider. Place it on the slider head at 02:36:882 (1).
02:44:646 - Put this inherited timing point on the slider head at 02:44:999 (2) for clarity.
03:08:029 - Delete this inherited timing point. I am fairly sure that it is redundant with the one at 03:07:940.
03:36:176 - Delete this inherited timing point. It is redundant with the one at 03:31:235.
03:54:529 - This inherited timing point is useless, because none of the parameters change except slider velocity, but there are no sliders until the next inherited timing point. Delete it.
03:56:470 - I think it would be better to put this inherited timing point on the slider head at 03:56:646 (5) for clarity.
18:36:568 - OwO What's this???
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On another note, please check the "Compose" and "Timing" sections with AiMod, as there is a total of 23 things to fix that are detrimental to the good playability of the map.
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For the tags, you don't need to put "namirin", "sakurairio (wrong spelling)", "time" and "capsule" since they are already in the title. It is redundant.
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I don't have anything left to say. Keep mapping and have fun!
Sorry about the formatting...