Haruka Sora, Kotorii Yuuka, Kamishiro Misaki, Kiritani Hana

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-07-09T14:36:19+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018年1月9日 at 19:52:12

Artist: Haruka Sora, Kotorii Yuuka, Kamishiro Misaki, Kiritani Hana
Title: Noraneko Heart
Source: ノラと皇女と野良猫ハート
Tags: eroge opening HARUKAZE oujo Hato to 黒木未知パトリシア・オブ・エンド夕莉シャチ明日原ユウキ Kuroki Michi Patricia of end Yuuri shachi Asuhara Yuuki Firis Mistlud KuranteMelodii makisokk Left
BPM: 162
Filesize: 3198kb
Play Time: 01:51
Difficulties Available:

Collab Easy (1.48 stars, 139 notes)
Firis' Normal (2.16 stars, 229 notes)
Hard (3.13 stars, 300 notes)
Insane (4.59 stars, 413 notes)
Left's Insane (4.05 stars, 368 notes)

Download: Haruka Sora, Kotorii Yuuka, Kamishiro Misaki, Kiritani Hana - Noraneko Heart
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#9

E me & makisokk
N Firis Mistlud
H me
I Left
I me
HitSound me
Meta IamKwaN checked.
Mp3 & Offset Kin's mapset Thanks~!!

Easy
00:01:674 - ~ 00:16:488 - me
00:16:488 - ~ 01:33:525 - makisokk
01:33:525 - ~ 01:51:303 - me

Last edited by Asuka_- 2018-01-16T02:55:57+00:00, edited 72 times in total.

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-07-09T14:42:22+00:00

Meta ってむずかしいね　ほんと。。
Kwanさんに聞きます。

Last edited by Asuka_- 2017-07-21T03:49:34+00:00, edited 13 times in total.

-Atri-

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-Atri- 2017-07-09T15:41:22+00:00

できた

http://puu.sh/wG4Fw/e52a5ce02c.osu

tagsに"KuranteMelodii"を追加してください～

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-07-10T10:35:59+00:00

ありがとおおお( *´艸｀)
tagsの件了解です。　追加しました！

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-07-10T22:24:04+00:00

どうしよ。。

riffy

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riffy 2017-07-11T20:28:18+00:00

oh, hey, I was asked to take a look at the Easy

00:04:636 (2) - the slider should be finished on 00:05:192 - where the actual peak of the piano sound is. This will make the rhythm more reasonable and consistent. Same would apply to 00:10:562 (1) -
00:15:748 (3) - the head of the slider does not represent any strong slider and sort of blends with the rest of the beats around it. Replacing it with a single circle for 00:16:488 - would make a more reasonable and easier to understand rhythm.
00:19:451 (1) - these would do better as a 1/1 slider and a circle as to stress the instruments and the vocals better.
00:41:303 (2) - since this was meant to be a part of lower object density (calm part) having this circle here isn't necessary. After all, it is not even needed as it does not follow any important vocal/instrument samples. // 00:42:785 (4) - same would apply here.

other than that it looks okay

makisokk

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makisokk 2017-07-11T21:13:57+00:00

Thanks mr bakari, i give answer today

Bakari wrote:
oh, hey, I was asked to take a look at the Easy

00:19:451 (1) - these would do better as a 1/1 slider and a circle as to stress the instruments and the vocals better. Fix
00:41:303 (2) - since this was meant to be a part of lower object density (calm part) having this circle here isn't necessary. After all, it is not even needed as it does not follow any important vocal/instrument samples. // 00:42:785 (4) - same would apply here. Fix

other than that it looks okay

GD

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TitleUnicode:野良猫ハート
Artist:Haruka Sora, Kotorii Yuuka, Kamishiro Misaki, Kiritani Hana
ArtistUnicode:遥そら、小鳥居夕花、神代岬、桐谷華
Creator:Asuka_-
Version:Collab Easy
Source:ノラと皇女と野良猫ハート
Tags:eroge opening HARUKAZE oujo Hato to 黒木 未知 パトリシア・オブ・エンド 夕莉 シャチ 明日原 ユウキ Kuroki Michi Patricia of end Yuuri shachi Asuhara Yuuki Firis Mistlud KuranteMelodii makisokk
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Last edited by makisokk 2017-07-13T02:53:56+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-07-11T22:39:07+00:00

Bakari wrote:
(my part) 00:04:636 (2) - the slider should be finished on 00:05:192 - where the actual peak of the piano sound is. This will make the rhythm more reasonable and consistent. Same would apply to 00:10:562 (1) -
(my part) 00:15:748 (3) - the head of the slider does not represent any strong slider and sort of blends with the rest of the beats around it. Replacing it with a single circle for 00:16:488 - would make a more reasonable and easier to understand rhythm.

fixed. Thanks~

edit: updated

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-07-16T17:07:52+00:00

~~insane remap~~　done

makisokk

928 posts

Joined August 2013

makisokk 2017-07-17T13:50:19+00:00

IRC mod by Maksimka

2017-07-17 17:18 makisokk: 00:06:118 (5) -  why curve?
2017-07-17 17:18 makisokk: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8612924 maybe try so?
2017-07-17 17:19 makisokk: 00:07:599 (1) -  It is necessary to raise the rear higher
2017-07-17 17:20 makisokk: For a better flow
2017-07-17 17:20 makisokk: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8612939
2017-07-17 17:20 makisokk: 00:09:822 (3,5) -  do blanket and 00:10:562 (1) -  copy past?
2017-07-17 17:22 makisokk: 00:13:711 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -  This part looks random
2017-07-17 17:23 makisokk: But it is not exactly)
2017-07-17 17:23 makisokk: шыщ
2017-07-17 17:23 makisokk: iso
2017-07-17 17:24 makisokk: 00:22:044 (5,1) -  fix blanket?
2017-07-17 17:24 makisokk: 00:23:340 (3) -  use direct slider
2017-07-17 17:26 makisokk: 00:49:636 (2) -  use here slider
2017-07-17 17:26 makisokk: or 00:50:007 (3) -  nc here
2017-07-17 17:26 makisokk: 00:52:785 (3,5) -  fix blanket
2017-07-17 17:27 makisokk: 00:59:266 (1,2,3) -  broke flow
2017-07-17 17:28 makisokk: 01:17:970 (6,7) -  not so hard play?
2017-07-17 17:29 makisokk: 01:29:451 (2,3) -  do blanket with 01:28:896 (1) - ?
2017-07-17 17:29 makisokk: Okay it's all
2017-07-17 17:29 makisokk: I hope I helped youъ
2017-07-17 17:36 Asuka_-: ok
2017-07-17 17:36 Asuka_-: thanks

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sorry for huge delay and BG pls

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Title:Noraneko Heart
TitleUnicode:野良猫ハート
Artist:Haruka Sora, Kotorii Yuuka, Kamishiro Misaki, Kiritani Hana
ArtistUnicode:遥そら、小鳥居夕花、神代岬、桐谷華
Creator:Asuka_-
Version:Left's Insane
Source:ノラと皇女と野良猫ハート
Tags:eroge opening HARUKAZE oujo Hato to 黒木 未知 パトリシア・オブ・エンド 夕莉 シャチ 明日原 ユウキ Kuroki Michi Patricia of end Yuuri shachi Asuhara Yuuki Firis Mistlud
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258,272,64822,2,0,P|250:213|233:159,1,95.9999970703126,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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378,204,67229,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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114,164,68988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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295,322,94822,6,0,L|312:175,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Asuka_-

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Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-07-21T03:39:31+00:00

@Left
thanks~!

bg done

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2017-07-21T06:57:07+00:00

~~interesting, download page redirects to https://osu.ppy.sh/p/error :thinking:~~ fixed, probably modding later

Asuka_-

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Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-07-21T07:25:19+00:00

oh thanks xD

Affirmation

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Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2017-07-22T03:43:06+00:00

Q

[Insane]
00:05:748 (4,5) - can be hard to read, players can read it as 1/2 jump.
00:14:266 (1,2,1,2) - DS should be bigger than 00:13:711 (1,2,1,2) - for better music following, how about set DS one more?
00:19:081 - 00:19:822 - clap
00:36:859 (6) - clap
00:40:099 - this part has no sound, so I suggest 5% in this part.
00:57:229 (5,1) - stack?
01:06:488 (6) - why this part has lower SV? I suggest making this slider faster.
01:13:155 (2,3) - suddenly reduced DS just for blanket. but for listening music, I suggest make this part jump/
01:32:414 (2) - stack or avoid overlap. looks 1/4 beat. imo.

GL

Asuka_-

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Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-07-22T06:01:35+00:00

Neoskylove wrote:
Q

[Insane]
00:05:748 (4,5) - can be hard to read, players can read it as 1/2 jump. keep for now
00:14:266 (1,2,1,2) - DS should be bigger than 00:13:711 (1,2,1,2) - for better music following, how about set DS one more? little changed
00:19:081 - 00:19:822 - clap nice
00:36:859 (6) - clap nice
00:40:099 - this part has no sound, so I suggest 5% in this part. oh
00:57:229 (5,1) - stack? ye
01:06:488 (6) - why this part has lower SV? I suggest making this slider faster. fix
01:13:155 (2,3) - suddenly reduced DS just for blanket. but for listening music, I suggest make this part jump/ keep for now~ but good mod
01:32:414 (2) - stack or avoid overlap. looks 1/4 beat. imo . little changed

GL

Thanks!

Blan_C

306 posts

Joined March 2016

Blan_C 2017-07-22T13:24:55+00:00

Hello~~ NM from my queue,

Insane

Please incrase volume on hitobjects (on hard too) - Personally i think these are a bit too quiet. Compare do Left's diff
00:07:970 (2) - 00:08:711 - Add HS on these - its clearly hearable sounds to me
00:32:229 (4,1) - Blanket is a little bit off
00:33:711 (4,4) - Dunno if you want to stack that, but you can :p
00:36:488 (4,5,6,7) - Kinda random jumps in my opinion - try to make a star from these, or if you dont want it - 00:36:488 (4) - similar spacing betweed as its closer to 00:36:859 (6) than 00:37:044 (7) - (yeah i know - nipticking)
01:13:155 (2) - Hmm.. 01:13:340 (3) - This vocal have higher tone so maybe space it more? I mean: 01:12:785 (1,2) - space between these is bigger than 01:13:155 (2,3) - and imo shall be opposite

Hard

00:01:674 (1,2) - I think spacing between objects (in whole calm part) is a bit too small - objects almost touch each other. It would be better if you do DS like 00:16:859 (2,3) - for example
00:20:007 (2,3) - Smaller DS compared to other objects in this part
00:21:673 (3,4) - Try x124:y279 as 00:21:673 (3) - is too close to 00:21:303 (2) - Just like you did 00:23:340 (3,4) - here
00:38:896 (2,4) - as above

I liked your map :3, Good luck!

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-07-22T13:50:17+00:00

Blan_C wrote:
Hello~~ NM from my queue,

Insane
Please incrase volume on hitobjects (on hard too) - Personally i think these are a bit too quiet. Compare do Left's diff　keep for now its fine imo.
00:07:970 (2) - 00:08:711 - Add HS on these - its clearly hearable sounds to me
00:32:229 (4,1) - Blanket is a little bit off
00:33:711 (4,4) - Dunno if you want to stack that, but you can :p
00:36:488 (4,5,6,7) - Kinda random jumps in my opinion - try to make a star from these, or if you dont want it - 00:36:488 (4) - similar spacing betweed as its closer to 00:36:859 (6) than 00:37:044 (7) - (yeah i know - nipticking)
01:13:155 (2) - Hmm.. 01:13:340 (3) - This vocal have higher tone so maybe space it more? I mean: 01:12:785 (1,2) - space between these is bigger than 01:13:155 (2,3) - and imo shall be opposite

Hard
00:01:674 (1,2) - I think spacing between objects (in whole calm part) is a bit too small - objects almost touch each other. It would be better if you do DS like 00:16:859 (2,3) - for example keep
00:20:007 (2,3) - Smaller DS compared to other objects in this part
00:21:673 (3,4) - Try x124:y279 as 00:21:673 (3) - is too close to 00:21:303 (2) - Just like you did 00:23:340 (3,4) - here little changed
00:38:896 (2,4) - as above little changed
I liked your map :3, Good luck!

noreply= fixed Thanks!

ErunamoJAZZ

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ErunamoJAZZ 2017-07-22T17:13:26+00:00

Hello Asuka_-san!

[General]
Brow color is not very friendly

[Insane]

00:22:414 (1) - Could improve blanket
00:57:229 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - That was amazing
01:06:303 (4,5,6) - Because combo color here, This patter was difficult to read the first time I played this diff.
01:17:970 (6) - This slider is following the voice, but 01:18:155 (7) - not. I is not really bad, but for me, a slider starting in 01:18:340 - will have more sense. Please, consider this.
01:29:451 (2,3) - Maybe you can move a bit to make a blanket with 01:28:896 (1) - tail:
SPOILER

[Left's Insane]

00:16:859 (2) - Could improve blanket with 00:17:599 (4) -
00:19:451 (1) - Could improve node angles to make an more smooth wave.
00:22:414 (1) - Same about blanket with 00:22:970 (2) -
00:38:155 (1,2) - LOL, that was very troll.
00:38:525 (3) - yeah.. you know... Im sorry, i feel it aesthetically ugly u.u
00:40:377 (2) - 00:46:303 (2) - blablablanket please! :3
01:05:192 (1,1,1,1,2) - cool
01:11:118 (1) - Not very problematic, but its doing a little overlap with 01:10:377 (2) -
01:19:266 (3) - I feel as a triple will be nice here instead.
01:30:377 (3) - That fast slider was annoying. Imho, keeping a simple stack will feel better.
SPOILER
01:48:340 (2) - !!, That was difficult to read, because I expected a 1/4 but not a 1/2 between :S . Please, consider just spacing and dont stack >.<

Edit: oh, look hitsounds, some beats are missing.

[Hard]

From 00:01:674 - to 00:07:044 - , and 00:40:192 - to 00:52:044 - , could be better if use a DS to 1.35x or 1.4x, to avoid the little overlaping (remember, to move DS in 0.01, use Alt+Shift+mouse scroll)
00:20:007 (2,3) - Spacing between is very close

[Firis' Normal]

00:07:599 (1,2,3) - Even for a normal, this patters will be difficult to read, because flow is pointing to sliders tails and this will be confusing for some new and/or casual players.
Illustration
Also, I wanna suggest a better rhythm for this section:
00:09:822 (6,1) - Similar issue to before. I think that keep a clear way is a better approach.
00:37:229 (1,3) - Similar issue. Moving 00:37:970 (2,3) - a bit to right will help to fix.
00:52:044 (1,2) - xD, you know :3, Moving (1) tail will help to fix.
01:27:785 (1) - Bad stacking?? lol

[Easy Collab]

humm.. i think that its better if make a little Storyboard with the nicks of who made the each section in the collab.
00:05:748 (3) - I feel thi as a bad idea u.u Doing a repeat slider in 00:04:636 (2) - will be better, imo.
It is different to 00:07:229 (5) - , where drum do a good support, but in 00:05:748 (3) - it is very soft and i dont feel it nice.
00:10:562 (1,2) - Same here.
00:13:155 (4) - humm... I think... that You can delete this note.
---------
00:16:859 (2) - Usually, this flow will be bad idea in a easy diff, because (2) is over flow to (1):
Illustration
keep a clear way is very important in easy diffs. Try to keep the way very very obvious for noobs!
00:17:970 (4,5,1) - A similar issue. Slider flow is pointing to slider but not to circle. Changing slider a bit will help to make this more clear:
SPOILER
00:20:192 (2,3) - This will be bad idea in an easy diff. Because you are following the voice here, doing a repeat slider will be a better option, imo:
00:25:377 (5) - Shorting to 00:25:933 - will feel better, and will fix the polarity issue:
00:31:303 (1) - Here you skip the beat in 00:31:673 - , but I think this as an important beat (even more that voice, due to notes in 00:29:451 - 00:30:192 - ). So... i want to suggest this:
00:37:229 (1,2) - hummm... I feel that something like this will work better:
00:40:192 (1,2) - Maybe you will not want, but I wanna suggest to short a bit those sliders, to follow the voice (I feel this more natural ^^):
00:49:081 (5) - Please, consider to short in 00:49:636 -
00:55:007 (1,2) - It is not good idea. A slider instead will be better, imo.
00:57:970 (1,2) - Rhythmically, I feel a Ctrl+G better, because Finish in 00:57:970 -
01:02:414 (4,5) - Here you made a different rhythm but ints the same that in 00:59:266 (3) - . Just make the same rhythm :3
01:20:933 (4,5) - A slider will be better, imo.

Good luck!, This song is very cute

Last edited by ErunamoJAZZ 2017-07-22T17:37:43+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

LMT

535 posts

Joined October 2015

LMT 2017-07-22T17:18:26+00:00

[General]

Dark red combo colour is hard to read -> bright red ?
[Insane]
00:12:229 (2,3) - very strong sound but small spacing, 00:12:970 (7,8,9,10) - weaker sounds but larger spacing => nerf 7 8 9 10
00:13:525 (10,1) - jump too big.
00:31:303 (1,2) - vocal starts 00:31:859 - here , sliderhead (2) is not important => https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8655649 rhythm like this?
01:15:007 (3,4,5,6) - if those are for vocals then make 01:15:748 (1) - a slider and ctrl+g 01:16:303 (4,5) - . https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8655857 << result.
[Left]
01:23:525 (2,3) - any reason for having a different rhythm compared to 01:14:636 (2,3,4) - places like these?
00:32:970 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - not sure what those sounds represent together to have such a fancy overaching pattern. I'd just separate them since from 00:33:525 - the guitar has lost the prominence to vocals/drums here.
00:38:155 (1,2,3) - tbh I wouldn't mind this pattern but since the intensity in the song doesn't drop that much the 1/2s are kinda unexpected.
01:30:192 (1,2,3,1) - do something about the stack leniency messing up the blanket lol it looks ew.
01:18:711 (1) - offset this by a bit? full overlap with 01:17:970 (1) - does make it harder to read. The stream pattern is already quite hard for an Insane already.
[Hard]
Calm part 1/2 objects have tiny overlap -> doesn't look very nice. Tweak them so they look like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656492 or overlap them a bit more https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656538
00:20:007 (2,3) - spacing?
00:21:673 (3,4) - stack leniency makes overlap look bad -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656502
00:36:859 (4,5) - ^
01:02:785 (2,3,4,5,6) - doesn't represent the vocals very well, especially when it's not kiai. => 01:03:155 (3,4) - 1/2 slider?
00:58:711 (3,4) - ^

[Normal]
You could turn off ds and move the objects a bit to avoid overlaps like this 01:19:266 (3,4) - . Just for an example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656586 . A lot more places where you could do that.
00:07:599 (1) - any better place for this? maybe move it to the right a bit more, could be confusing to read (2) since it's pointing to the tail a bit too much. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656671 try this?
00:11:673 (4,5,6) - hard to read for beginners, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656690 how about this?
00:34:081 (7,1) - too close? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656702 this might be a bit better.

very nice diff

[Easy]
00:10:562 (1,2) - spacing is a bit confusing because 00:07:599 (1,2) - is not very different. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656743 use this rhythm instead?
01:06:859 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:09:822 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - song has the same rhythm but you map them way too different. Rhythm here is also not good. Try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656850 and apply it two times.
01:11:118 - very important to emphasise this beat, strong beat is here, not 01:11:303 - here. This applies to the whole kiai. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656843

Kiai on Easy needs attention to rhythm, otherwise good set!!
you can always pm me if you're not sure about the things I mentioned in Easy.
gl!!

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-07-22T23:24:51+00:00

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
Hello Asuka_-san!

[General]
Brow color is not very friendly

[Insane]
00:22:414 (1) - Could improve blanket
00:57:229 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - That was amazing
01:06:303 (4,5,6) - Because combo color here, This patter was difficult to read the first time I played this diff.
01:17:970 (6) - This slider is following the voice, but 01:18:155 (7) - not. I is not really bad, but for me, a slider starting in 01:18:340 - will have more sense. Please, consider this. i put slider in 01:18:155 (7) - to emphasize next 5 stream. keep for now.
01:29:451 (2,3) - Maybe you can move a bit to make a blanket with 01:28:896 (1) - tail:
SPOILER

[Hard]
From 00:01:674 - to 00:07:044 - , and 00:40:192 - to 00:52:044 - , could be better if use a DS to 1.35x or 1.4x, to avoid the little overlaping (remember, to move DS in 0.01, use Alt+Shift+mouse scroll) nice ~
00:20:007 (2,3) - Spacing between is very close

[Easy Collab]
humm.. i think that its better if make a little Storyboard with the nicks of who made the each section in the collab.
00:05:748 (3) - I feel thi as a bad idea u.u Doing a repeat slider in 00:04:636 (2) - will be better, imo.
It is different to 00:07:229 (5) - , where drum do a good support, but in 00:05:748 (3) - it is very soft and i dont feel it nice.
00:10:562 (1,2) - Same here.
00:13:155 (4) - humm... I think... that You can delete this note. 　

LMT wrote:
[General]
Dark red combo colour is hard to read -> bright red ?
[Insane]
00:12:229 (2,3) - very strong sound but small spacing, 00:12:970 (7,8,9,10) - weaker sounds but larger spacing => nerf 7 8 9 10 little changed
00:13:525 (10,1) - jump too big. Its fine~
00:31:303 (1,2) - vocal starts 00:31:859 - here , sliderhead (2) is not important => https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8655649 rhythm like this?
01:15:007 (3,4,5,6) - if those are for vocals then make 01:15:748 (1) - a slider and ctrl+g 01:16:303 (4,5) - . https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8655857 << result. something about the stack leniency messing up the blanket lol it looks ew. its fine

[Hard]
Calm part 1/2 objects have tiny overlap -> doesn't look very nice. Tweak them so they look like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656492 or overlap them a bit more https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656538
00:20:007 (2,3) - spacing?
00:21:673 (3,4) - stack leniency makes overlap look bad -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656502
00:36:859 (4,5) - ^
01:02:785 (2,3,4,5,6) - doesn't represent the vocals very well, especially when it's not kiai. => 01:03:155 (3,4) - 1/2 slider? keep for now
00:58:711 (3,4) - ^ keep for now

[Easy]
00:10:562 (1,2) - spacing is a bit confusing because 00:07:599 (1,2) - is not very different. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656743 use this rhythm instead?

noreply= fixed Thanks!

Botan

212 posts

Joined May 2017

Botan 2017-07-23T01:48:43+00:00

Hi hi, your Easy difficulty sucks! Just kidding, I think it's pretty good. Just a few minor spots that bothered me slightly. Nothing big that needs to be fixed but perhaps some consideration.

EASY
00:20:748 (3) - Start this slider at 00:20:562 and extend it so it becomes a 2/1 slider.
>> I found it more comfortable to play compared to the slight pause that was originally mapped. Since the drums are carrying the rhythm of the song at this point it feels more natural and intuitive to click on snare and kick hits. The section just before this does this really well. Unlike the intro where there is a lack of percussion to set the rhythm, it feels weird to pause there given what you just played prior to this section. "wo" doesn't feel strong enough to dedicate a hit circle for it compared to the snare hit + "hikari". In contrast, the pause before 00:26:673 (1) is well placed since the red combo is representing a distinct change in sound. I think it'd be best if we tried to keep the flow moving during this section much like how you mapped the rest of this section.
Alternatively, you could turn the green-2 into a reverse slider that ends where the green-3 ends since the singer is holding the "ri" into the "wo".
00:35:562 (3) - Same as above.
00:59:081 (3) - Same as above.
---
01:17:414 (3,4) - Move the red-3 to 01:17:599. Move the red-4 to 01:17:970 and shorten it to a 1/1 slider.
>> Now this is the exact opposite of what I had just written up above! I think a pause here would work much better than what was originally mapped. The red-1 and red-2 are mapped to be hit on the vocal and just by listening to the song you can already anticipate that there will be a pause in the vocals but the red-3 and red-4 are mapped to the drums. You can definitely sightread this but for an Easy I think sudden changes like this would be too difficult for beginner players. The tom roll sounds too weak to dedicate a change in rhythm choice here.
---
01:34:822 (3) - Remove the yellow-4, shorten this slider to the small white tick and then reverse it.
>> Evident that this part is being mapped to the strings. The strings are still being played in that pause between the slider and yellow-4. I think my suggestion represents the sound better, the pause feels weird. Yes, the snare won't be clickable but you didn't map the snare at 01:34:636 just before it so it feels weird to force a rhythm change here. 01:36:488 (1,2,3,4) is also mapped to the strings too and you also did not map the snare at 01:37:599.
---
Not a lot that needs editing to be honest, aside from what I pointed out that map was actually pretty fun to play. Unsure how I feel about slider shapes like this 00:25:377 (5) in an Easy but that's not important. Oh, and please make this 00:59:266 (3) a curvy slider. I'll be straight to the point, I think that looks very ugly. I can accept the other weird sliders but that one sticks out like a sore thumb.

-Atri-

3,049 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2017-07-23T08:37:55+00:00

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
Hello Asuka_-san!

[Firis' Normal]
00:07:599 (1,2,3) - Even for a normal, this patters will be difficult to read, because flow is pointing to sliders tails and this will be confusing for some new and/or casual players.
Illustration
Changed the slider+circle into a repeat slider
Also, I wanna suggest a better rhythm for this section:
00:09:822 (6,1) - Similar issue to before. I think that keep a clear way is a better approach. Not quite sure how to fix this but tried
00:37:229 (1,3) - Similar issue. Moving 00:37:970 (2,3) - a bit to right will help to fix. Fixed using same method as before
00:52:044 (1,2) - xD, you know :3, Moving (1) tail will help to fix. fixed
01:27:785 (1) - Bad stacking?? lol blame editor
Good luck!, This song is very cute

LMT wrote:

[Normal]
You could turn off ds and move the objects a bit to avoid overlaps like this 01:19:266 (3,4) - . Just for an example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656586 . A lot more places where you could do that. Hmmmm... some of those overlaps is intentional, not just i like the aesthetics, and some of the overlaps makes them flow better
00:07:599 (1) - any better place for this? maybe move it to the right a bit more, could be confusing to read (2) since it's pointing to the tail a bit too much. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656671 try this? I think i've fixed that in previous mod
00:11:673 (4,5,6) - hard to read for beginners, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656690 how about this? This one is far better imo, judging their appearance time
00:34:081 (7,1) - too close? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656702 this might be a bit better. unfortunately this is not quite avoidable
very nice diff

gl!!

Mod arigato gozaimasu~

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makisokk

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Joined August 2013

makisokk 2017-07-23T23:27:24+00:00

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
Hello Asuka_-san!

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00:16:859 (2) - Usually, this flow will be bad idea in a easy diff, because (2) is over flow to (1): Fix it
Illustration

keep a clear way is very important in easy diffs. Try to keep the way very very obvious for noobs!
00:17:970 (4,5,1) - A similar issue. Slider flow is pointing to slider but not to circle. Changing slider a bit will help to make this more clear: Do so
SPOILER
00:20:192 (2,3) - This will be bad idea in an easy diff. Because you are following the voice here, doing a repeat slider will be a better option, imo: Do so
00:25:377 (5) - Shorting to 00:25:933 - will feel better, and will fix the polarity issue: Fix
00:31:303 (1) - Here you skip the beat in 00:31:673 - , but I think this as an important beat (even more that voice, due to notes in 00:29:451 - 00:30:192 - ). So... i want to suggest this: Fix
00:37:229 (1,2) - hummm... I feel that something like this will work better: Do so
00:40:192 (1,2) - Maybe you will not want, but I wanna suggest to short a bit those sliders, to follow the voice (I feel this more natural ^^): In my opinion, these sliders can be left that way, because the ending "に(ni)"　"ぴ(pi)" and the same sound of the drum goes.Also, if you do this, you get a very large amount of spacing between them Pls give answer about this
00:49:081 (5) - Please, consider to short in 00:49:636 - Not really understood why, and also here is the same thing that I wrote above
00:55:007 (1,2) - It is not good idea. A slider instead will be better, imo. I wanted to express strong notes here
00:57:970 (1,2) - Rhythmically, I feel a Ctrl+G better, because Finish in 00:57:970 - Do so
01:02:414 (4,5) - Here you made a different rhythm but ints the same that in 00:59:266 (3) - . Just make the same rhythm :3 Do so
01:20:933 (4,5) - A slider will be better, imo. Do so
LMT wrote:

[Easy]
01:06:859 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:09:822 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - song has the same rhythm but you map them way too different. Rhythm here is also not good. Try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656850 and apply it two times. Do so
01:11:118 - very important to emphasise this beat, strong beat is here, not 01:11:303 - here. This applies to the whole kiai. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656843
I did not quite understand what you mean, since I remade that part. And as I know, I need to follow the vocal, BUT, I also need to use the tool in the mapping

Kiai on Easy needs attention to rhythm, otherwise good set!!
you can always pm me if you're not sure about the things I mentioned in Easy.
gl!!

Good luck!, This song is very cute

Botan wrote:
Hi hi, your Easy difficulty sucks! Just kidding, I think it's pretty good. Just a few minor spots that bothered me slightly. Nothing big that needs to be fixed but perhaps some consideration.

EASY
00:20:748 (3) - Start this slider at 00:20:562 and extend it so it becomes a 2/1 slider.
>> I found it more comfortable to play compared to the slight pause that was originally mapped. Since the drums are carrying the rhythm of the song at this point it feels more natural and intuitive to click on snare and kick hits. The section just before this does this really well. Unlike the intro where there is a lack of percussion to set the rhythm, it feels weird to pause there given what you just played prior to this section. "wo" doesn't feel strong enough to dedicate a hit circle for it compared to the snare hit + "hikari". In contrast, the pause before 00:26:673 (1) is well placed since the red combo is representing a distinct change in sound. I think it'd be best if we tried to keep the flow moving during this section much like how you mapped the rest of this section.
Alternatively, you could turn the green-2 into a reverse slider that ends where the green-3 ends since the singer is holding the "ri" into the "wo". This part i remap in 1 mod
00:35:562 (3) - Same as above. I do not agree here, I need a pause to express a strong sound on the red tick, otherwise I'll have to do 1/2 mapping
00:59:081 (3) - Same as above. Generally did not understand how this moment to relate to what you wrote
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01:17:414 (3,4) - Move the red-3 to 01:17:599. Move the red-4 to 01:17:970 and shorten it to a 1/1 slider.
>> Now this is the exact opposite of what I had just written up above! I think a pause here would work much better than what was originally mapped. The red-1 and red-2 are mapped to be hit on the vocal and just by listening to the song you can already anticipate that there will be a pause in the vocals but the red-3 and red-4 are mapped to the drums. You can definitely sightread this but for an Easy I think sudden changes like this would be too difficult for beginner players. The tom roll sounds too weak to dedicate a change in rhythm choice here. At the expense of this you need to think about how to allocate the stream, because it's kiai, then the card should be more dynamic than anything, I'll wait for the next mods
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Thanks for mod Guys, special ErunamoJAZZ

Pls kill me, my brain do booom

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Botan

212 posts

Joined May 2017

Botan 2017-07-23T23:37:35+00:00

Botan wrote:
00:59:081 (3) - Same as above. Generally did not understand how this moment to relate to what you wrote

My apologies, that timestamp was meant to say "please change into curvy slider instead of red node one." Not a problem, just a personal opinion.

Good luck!

makisokk

928 posts

Joined August 2013

makisokk 2017-07-23T23:41:58+00:00

Botan wrote:
Botan wrote:
00:59:081 (3) - Same as above. Generally did not understand how this moment to relate to what you wrote
My apologies, that timestamp was meant to say "please change into curvy slider instead of red node one." Not a problem, just a personal opinion.
Good luck!

LuL

Thanks

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-07-24T03:03:15+00:00

update

EncoreW

833 posts

Joined June 2013

EncoreW 2017-07-24T05:06:48+00:00

:3

[Insane]

00:04:266 (7) - nc? i think this note is closer to 00:04:636 (1) - , and this note is a part of 00:04:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

00:04:636 (1) - remove nc if you use nc at 00:04:266 (7) -

00:07:044 (7,8) - nc, because instrument changed, and volume is stronger

00:10:562 (1) - if i were you i will use this pattern https://puu.sh/wRxOs/7b06915158.png

00:16:488 (12) - nc because it is a finish, and you can use increase spacing with 00:16:396 (11) -

00:46:118 (1,2,3,4) - use the same spacing

00:49:636 - use a slider? 00:49:822 - this place is not blank

[Left's Insane]

in my opinion, if insane is ar9 then light insane can be slower, for example ar8.5

00:01:674 (1) - this piano part i think insane's 30% is nice, consider copy insane's green lines

00:55:562 (1,2) - in this two sliders, slider's end should be silence, use 10% volume at slider's end is good

01:41:118 (1,2) - ^

gl

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-07-24T06:45:34+00:00

Speechless wrote:
:3

[Insane]

00:04:266 (7) - nc? i think this note is closer to 00:04:636 (1) - , and this note is a part of 00:04:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

00:04:636 (1) - remove nc if you use nc at 00:04:266 (7) -

00:07:044 (7,8) - nc, because instrument changed, and volume is stronger

00:10:562 (1) - if i were you i will use this pattern https://puu.sh/wRxOs/7b06915158.png nice !

00:16:488 (12) - nc because it is a finish, and you can use increase spacing with 00:16:396 (11) -

00:46:118 (1,2,3,4) - use the same spacing

00:49:636 - use a slider? 00:49:822 - this place is not blank it's fun imo xd i want to keep lol

no reply (blue) = fixed

Thanks!!

Toyosaki Aki

337 posts

Joined February 2014

Toyosaki Aki 2017-07-25T19:10:01+00:00

遅くなってごめんなさい;; (フレンドMutualありです！)
as M4M

General

Remove a check of widescreen support from Firis' Normal and Left's Insane

Collab Easy

00:27:414 (2,3) - felt weird a bit cuz 00:28:340 - is not clickable, how about this?
the way that makes concistency between 00:57:970 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:00:933 (1,2,3,4) - is better i guess cuz they have almost the same melody
01:17:414 (3,4) - idk what you want to follow here ;; please try this pattern that simply follows vocal and is more suitable
01:30:562 (1) - by my understanding, it is recommended that spinner has the length of more than 4 white ticks maybe, so how about replacing this spinner with a slider?
曲の構成的にsectionが変わるのは01:42:414 - からだと思うのでここからNC始まるようにしてはいかがでしょ
実際01:42:414 -では01:42:785 (1,2) - と同じ大きい音鳴ってますしclickabkeにした方が合いそう

Firis’ Normal

00:34:081 (7,1) - how about swapping them so that they follow the vocal?
looks fineeee

Insane

playした感じ00:51:303 (4,5,6,7,8) - と00:57:229 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - を比べると曲調は後者の方が激しいと思うんですけど、distanceは前者の方が広くて譜面の構成(?)的にちょっと違和感ありました　00:51:303 (4,5,6,7,8) - のds1.40xくらいにするのどうでしょう

短いですけど気になったのはこれくらいです、
Good luck on your process!

EDIT: m4mはコレでお願いします！
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/621759

josh1024

232 posts

Joined October 2014

josh1024 2017-07-26T09:45:12+00:00

From the queue:

This is beyond what I can mod gg.
Just gonna point out a few places you may want fixing.

Easy
01:08:155 (3) - the hitsound seems backwards.
01:27:599 (1) - maybe end this 1/2 beat earlier.

Hard
00:15:748 (1,2) - seems a bit off beat.

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-07-26T15:55:29+00:00

Toyosaki Aki wrote:
フレンドMutualありです！　こちらこそです！

General
Remove a check of widescreen support from Firis' Normal and Left's Insane ok removed
Collab Easy
曲の構成的にsectionが変わるのは01:42:414 - からだと思うのでここからNC始まるようにしてはいかがでしょ
実際01:42:414 -では01:42:785 (1,2) - と同じ大きい音鳴ってますしclickabkeにした方が合いそうないすです！

Insane
playした感じ00:51:303 (4,5,6,7,8) - と00:57:229 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - を比べると曲調は後者の方が激しいと思うんですけど、distanceは前者の方が広くて譜面の構成(?)的にちょっと違和感ありました　00:51:303 (4,5,6,7,8) - のds1.40xくらいにするのどうでしょう　前者のDSはflow的に崩したくないです。なので後者の方を少しだけ広くとりました。　あんまり変わってないかもしれない...

josh1024 wrote:
Hard
00:15:748 (1,2) - seems a bit off beat.　oh lol

ありがとうございます！！！！！！！！！
Thanks!!

-Atri-

3,049 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2017-07-26T16:23:57+00:00

Toyosaki Aki wrote:
遅くなってごめんなさい;; (フレンドMutualありです！)
as M4M

Firis’ Normal
00:34:081 (7,1) - how about swapping them so that they follow the vocal? どっちもいいですが、　00:34:266 (1) - にcymbalがクリックしたいのでそのままで～
looks fineeee

modありがどう～

DeletedUser_423548

DeletedUser_423548 2017-07-27T12:22:27+00:00

m4m

Easy
Asuka_- part

00:07:044 - volume小さくない？ 40~50%まであげてもいいかも
この緑線からS:C1になってますがwhistleの音的にS:C2のままのほうがいいと思います
00:07:229 (4) - Add clapかな？
00:07:599 - 00:10:562 - 00:12:044 - Add finish
01:39:081 - finishよりclapのほうが合ってない？
01:44:636 (4,1) - 微妙にoverlap

makisokk part
00:26:673 - 00:34:266 - 00:35:562 - 00:37:229 - 00:38:525 - 00:50:377 - 01:12:785 - 01:15:748 - 01:28:896 - Add finish
00:31:303 (1,3) - This overlap can be avoided
00:40:192 - Why Additions Drum finish?
00:41:303 - Clap is better
00:47:229 (2) - ^
01:02:044 (3,4) - 00:59:266 (3) - Let's unify the rhythm
I think the rhythm of 00:59:266 (3) - is better
01:03:525 (1) - The beginning of the spinner is 01:03:711 - I think this is good
01:17:414 (3,4) - This rhythm is very strange
Try to rhythm the image
01:27:599 (1) - 01:28:340 - You should end here

easyだけで良いとのことなので
がんばってください！

makisokk

928 posts

Joined August 2013

makisokk 2017-07-27T14:24:56+00:00

Omg why so many mods, please help my brain is expload from last time
Answer in 2-3 days

Toyosaki Aki wrote:
遅くなってごめんなさい;; (フレンドMutualありです！)
as M4M

Collab Easy
00:27:414 (2,3) - felt weird a bit cuz 00:28:340 - is not clickable, how about this? Do so
the way that makes concistency between 00:57:970 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:00:933 (1,2,3,4) - is better i guess cuz they have almost the same melody try fix it
01:17:414 (3,4) - idk what you want to follow here ;; please try this pattern that simply follows vocal and is more suitable
01:30:562 (1) - by my understanding, it is recommended that spinner has the length of more than 4 white ticks maybe, so how about replacing this spinner with a slider? I do not think that this is so critical
looks fineeee

EDIT: m4mはコレでお願いします！
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/621759

ありがと

josh1024 wrote:
From the queue:

This is beyond what I can mod gg.
Just gonna point out a few places you may want fixing.

Easy
01:08:155 (3) - the hitsound seems backwards. Did not understand what you wanted to say
01:27:599 (1) - maybe end this 1/2 beat earlier. Do so

Thanks for the mod

Yasaija 714 wrote:
m4m

makisokk part
00:26:673 - 00:34:266 - 00:35:562 - 00:37:229 - 00:38:525 - 00:50:377 - 01:12:785 - 01:15:748 - 01:28:896 - Add finish　Fix
00:31:303 (1,3) - This overlap can be avoided The question is: why? If it does not affect how not the game process
00:40:192 - Why Additions Drum finish? I do not know, I did not do hitsounds
00:41:303 - Clap is better Do so
00:47:229 (2) - ^ ^
01:02:044 (3,4) - 00:59:266 (3) - Let's unify the rhythm
I think the rhythm of 00:59:266 (3) - is better remap here in first mod
01:03:525 (1) - The beginning of the spinner is 01:03:711 - I think this is good Okay i do so
01:17:414 (3,4) - This rhythm is very strange I do so, it's better than in the first mod
Try to rhythm the image
01:27:599 (1) - 01:28:340 - You should end here Fix it in 2 mod

easyだけで良いとのことなので
がんばってください！

ありがとてあい

GD

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 66766
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 16488,66859,93525
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Noraneko Heart
TitleUnicode:野良猫ハート
Artist:Haruka Sora, Kotorii Yuuka, Kamishiro Misaki, Kiritani Hana
ArtistUnicode:遥そら、小鳥居夕花、神代岬、桐谷華
Creator:Asuka_-
Version:Collab Easy
Source:ノラと皇女と野良猫ハート
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Last edited by makisokk 2017-07-29T12:52:12+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-07-28T01:18:48+00:00

gdさんのmod返信終わったらbn探します。

-Atri-

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-Atri- 2017-07-28T14:40:57+00:00

どうして私は日本語ができることがわからないかなｗｗｗｗｗ

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-07-29T00:28:53+00:00

Yasaija 714 wrote:
m4m

Easy
Asuka_- part
00:07:044 - volume小さくない？ 40~50%まであげてもいいかも
この緑線からS:C1になってますがwhistleの音的にS:C2のままのほうがいいと思います
00:07:229 (4) - Add clapかな？
00:07:599 - 00:10:562 - 00:12:044 - Add finish
01:39:081 - finishよりclapのほうが合ってない？
01:44:636 (4,1) - 微妙にoverlap

ALLfixedでうｓ！　ありがとうございます！！

Firis Mistlud wrote:
どうして私は日本語ができることがわからないかなｗｗｗｗｗ

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-07-29T12:54:22+00:00

update

Left

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Left 2017-07-29T16:59:20+00:00

! Lemme fix it tomorrow

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-07-30T00:54:11+00:00

k~

edit: left's insane updated.

Last edited by Asuka_- 2017-07-30T03:04:05+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Left

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Left 2017-07-30T02:03:47+00:00

feedback wait pls

fixed

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nextplay

976 posts

Joined December 2015

nextplay 2017-07-30T11:06:00+00:00

Hey~ quick check for easy ( #modreqs I'm not a bn but heyyyyyyy)

asuka's part

01:44:636 (4,1) - I would avoid this because this is the only time using this kind of overlap. If something like this would come multiple times in the diff than it would be okay but with only one time using it dosen't fit compared with the rest

maki's part

00:19:451 (1,3) - you can avoid this overlap imo it's kinda seeable while playing tho
00:25:377 (5) - why this Ends on a red tick? instrumentals are at the White tick and would still follow the Little break with the vocal here
00:59:266 (3) - this should start here 00:59:081 - because here starts the vocal and the instrumental too also the shape can be aestheticly can be better imo
the part before the kiai can be a bit less dense imo I kinda don't see emphasis in the kiai

idk like there is nothing really wrong with it. it's a easy.

okay GL

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-07-30T11:24:31+00:00

My Angel Kanan wrote:
asuka's part

01:44:636 (4,1) - I would avoid this because this is the only time using this kind of overlap. If something like this would come multiple times in the diff than it would be okay but with only one time using it dosen't fit compared with the rest

ok fixed!
Thanks!!

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2017-07-30T13:04:12+00:00

Hi I came here for BG
[Easy]
• 00:04:266 (1) - Imo NCing this might be a better idea, as it gives players a follow point, also the strong beat is on 00:04:636 (2) - so it should be NCed instead, you did it pretty well 00:07:229 (4,1) - here
• 00:13:711 (1,2) - By extending them a half beat more http://puu.sh/wWXga/04d921bb46.jpg, it sounds reaaaalllyyy better for me
• 00:29:451 (2,3,4,5) - This pattern chain is kinda weird aesthetically, because you're having linear pattern for 00:29:451 (2,3) - but then slightly up and down for 00:29:822 (3,4,5) - which makes them feel bad. I guess you can improve it a bit, just for aesthetics :3
• 00:37:970 (2,3,4) - Flow is realllyy awkward for me though. I guess something like this would help http://puu.sh/wWXno/366818268e.jpg
• 01:26:859 (4,1) - Both vocal started on 01:27:414 - which is why I think you should do something like this http://puu.sh/wWXs1/a7e790ab6c.jpg
• 01:43:896 (3) - this slider touched the HP bar. Consider downscale it a bit
[Firis]
• ~~Do you really wanna use CS4 for Normal though?~~ So far I can tell, the gap between Easy - Normal and Normal - H has no problem about SR, but the thing is you're making your normal too much Hard alike and is too far from Easy. I will judge this based on the CS you used and spacing you had. Apparently 1-2 more grids in your spacing and it would become a Hard diff with no 1/4. Then the other side, decreasing your spacing in half, would great an Easy. What I want to say is it's not about SR all the times. It's about playability that your map ought to have, so players at all levels can enjoy it. Imagine you can play Easy, then you wanna try yourself with Normal, but you cant, because the spacing and the circle size is too different, would you accept that?
Sorry for writing such an Essay, but I hope you can understand what I'm saying and have an explanation for it
[Hard]
• 00:04:266 - aren't you gonna add anything here?
• 01:00:192 (3,4,5) - why not ctrl+g this pattern to support the vocal better?
[Left]
• 00:31:859 (2,3,4) - minor but I think this fits the vocal better though http://puu.sh/wWYaD/a4229be699.jpg
• 00:37:785 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - Well eventho you used NC but still, having same visual spacing for 1/2 and 1/4 next to each other wouldn't be something that I recommended too. Can you think of anything else?
• Nice diff as always owo
[Insane]
• 00:01:674 (1,3) - These represent same instrument, so I think having them both pointing up would be better than 00:02:229 (3) - pointing down. Also being like that makes 00:02:229 (3,4) - look pretty like each other, although they have different pitch.
• 01:30:192 (4,5,6,7,1) - the curve feels pretty weird, as it getting less curve from 01:30:470 (7,1) - . Maybe adjust them a bit?

K that's about it. Good luck again~

-Atri-

3,049 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2017-07-30T16:22:23+00:00

Changed to CS3.5, Although i want a cleaner visual

＠あすか　お願いだからCS3.5にチェンジしてください～

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-07-31T11:27:31+00:00

Yamicchi wrote:
Hi I came here for BG
[Easy]
• 00:04:266 (1) - Imo NCing this might be a better idea, as it gives players a follow point, also the strong beat is on 00:04:636 (2) - so it should be NCed instead, you did it pretty well 00:07:229 (4,1) - here
• 01:43:896 (3) - this slider touched the HP bar. Consider downscale it a bit wowow
[Hard]
• 00:04:266 - aren't you gonna add anything here?
• 01:00:192 (3,4,5) - why not ctrl+g this pattern to support the vocal better? i picked playable lol
[Insane]
• 00:01:674 (1,3) - These represent same instrument, so I think having them both pointing up would be better than 00:02:229 (3) - pointing down. Also being like that makes 00:02:229 (3,4) - look pretty like each other, although they have different pitch. keep for now
• 01:30:192 (4,5,6,7,1) - the curve feels pretty weird, as it getting less curve from 01:30:470 (7,1) - . Maybe adjust them a bit? its fine imo

normal cs下げたでー

makisokk

928 posts

Joined August 2013

makisokk 2017-08-02T15:04:06+00:00

My Angel Kanan wrote:
Hey~ quick check for easy ( #modreqs I'm not a bn but heyyyyyyy)

maki's part

00:19:451 (1,3) - you can avoid this overlap imo it's kinda seeable while playing tho Why, if I specifically made a stack like this?
00:25:377 (5) - why this Ends on a red tick? instrumentals are at the White tick and would still follow the Little break with the vocal here Well, extended to white tick
00:59:266 (3) - this should start here 00:59:081 - because here starts the vocal and the instrumental too also the shape can be aestheticly can be better imoOn the red tick, from where I started, there is a strong sound which is supplemented by the vocal, so it's better to leave it there
the part before the kiai can be a bit less dense imo I kinda don't see emphasis in the kiai
idk like there is nothing really wrong with it. it's a easy.
okay GL

Thanks for the mod

Hi Yami

Yamicchi wrote:
Hi I came here for BG
[Easy]
• 00:29:451 (2,3,4,5) - This pattern chain is kinda weird aesthetically, because you're having linear pattern for 00:29:451 (2,3) - but then slightly up and down for 00:29:822 (3,4,5) - which makes them feel bad. I guess you can improve it a bit, just for aesthetics :3 00: 30: 562 (4) - I raised this note like 2, and made of these notes 00: 30: 562 (4,5,1) - a straight line, in my opinion it looks good
• 00:37:970 (2,3,4) - Flow is realllyy awkward for me though. I guess something like this would help http://puu.sh/wWXno/366818268e.jpg Did almost how you showed
• 01:26:859 (4,1) - Both vocal started on 01:27:414 - which is why I think you should do something like this http://puu.sh/wWXs1/a7e790ab6c.jpg Okay, do so
K that's about it. Good luck again~

Thanks for the mod

please, rehitsounds

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