Haruka Sora, Kotorii Yuuka, Kamishiro Misaki, Kiritani Hana

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2018-01-06T10:08:38+00:00

where is natsu

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2018-01-06T10:58:13+00:00

really sorry for late xd thanks!!
(i sent pm to natsu lol)

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2018-01-08T11:16:55+00:00

top

00:12:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - can you make this part cleaner, I mean making it looks like a pattern, because it looks randomly placed atm
00:22:044 (5,1) - blanket is off
00:38:155 (6,7) - this would express the music better as a slider
00:54:636 (5,1) - the jump is too big compared to the rest, I strongly recomend you to make it smaller
01:01:859 (4,1) - blanket is super off
01:17:785 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - the 1/4 jumps also feels bigger than they should, again reduce the spacing

hard

00:36:488 (3,4,5) - the stack ruins your spacing, there are more check them before we rank this.
AR 7,5 is enough, 8 is way too much

normal

00:12:044 (5,6,7,8) - hey guys u really need to be careful when stacking stuff it ruins your spacing, turn on stacking in the editor and fix this parts,
there are more i think
OD 4 is more balance with the set

easy

your current ar feels really slow, AR 3 fits better the density of this map

increase the volume of HS by atleast 10% on each section, it's too hard to heard atm

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2018-01-08T13:08:01+00:00

thanks for the mod owo
i'll check after go back to my home!!

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2018-01-08T17:29:24+00:00

Natsu wrote:
top

00:12:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - can you make this part cleaner, I mean making it looks like a pattern, because it looks randomly placed atm
00:22:044 (5,1) - blanket is off
00:38:155 (6,7) - this would express the music better as a slider
00:54:636 (5,1) - the jump is too big compared to the rest, I strongly recomend you to make it smaller
01:01:859 (4,1) - blanket is super off
01:17:785 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - the 1/4 jumps also feels bigger than they should, again reduce the spacing
hard

00:36:488 (3,4,5) - the stack ruins your spacing, there are more check them before we rank this.
AR 7,5 is enough, 8 is way too much

easy

your current ar feels really slow, AR 3 fits better the density of this map
increase the volume of HS by atleast 10% on each section, it's too hard to heard atm

all fixed~
i'll update after firis reply to.

thanks~ owo

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2018-01-09T10:17:13+00:00

Fixed all

The current editor sucked

Thanks for the mod

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 66766
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 0.9999999

[Metadata]
Title:Noraneko Heart
TitleUnicode:野良猫ハート
Artist:Haruka Sora, Kotorii Yuuka, Kamishiro Misaki, Kiritani Hana
ArtistUnicode:遥そら、小鳥居夕花、神代岬、桐谷華
Creator:Asuka_-
Version:Firis' Normal
Source:ノラと皇女と野良猫ハート
Tags:eroge opening HARUKAZE oujo Hato to 黒木 未知 パトリシア・オブ・エンド 夕莉 シャチ 明日原 ユウキ Kuroki Michi Patricia of end Yuuri shachi Asuhara Yuuki Firis Mistlud KuranteMelodii makisokk Left
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CircleSize:3.6
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
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SliderTickRate:1

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