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Asuka_-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018年1月9日 at 19:52:12

Artist: Haruka Sora, Kotorii Yuuka, Kamishiro Misaki, Kiritani Hana
Title: Noraneko Heart
Source: ノラと皇女と野良猫ハート
Tags: eroge opening HARUKAZE oujo Hato to 黒木 未知 パトリシア・オブ・エンド 夕莉 シャチ 明日原 ユウキ Kuroki Michi Patricia of end Yuuri shachi Asuhara Yuuki Firis Mistlud KuranteMelodii makisokk Left
BPM: 162
Filesize: 3198kb
Play Time: 01:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab Easy (1.48 stars, 139 notes)
  2. Firis' Normal (2.16 stars, 229 notes)
  3. Hard (3.13 stars, 300 notes)
  4. Insane (4.59 stars, 413 notes)
  5. Left's Insane (4.05 stars, 368 notes)
Download: Haruka Sora, Kotorii Yuuka, Kamishiro Misaki, Kiritani Hana - Noraneko Heart
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mp3 & Offset Kin's mapset Thanks~!!

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00:01:674 - ~ 00:16:488 - me
00:16:488 - ~ 01:33:525 - makisokk
01:33:525 - ~ 01:51:303 - me
Topic Starter
Asuka_-
Meta ってむずかしいね ほんと。。
Kwanさんに聞きます。
-Atri-
できた

http://puu.sh/wG4Fw/e52a5ce02c.osu

tagsに"KuranteMelodii"を追加してください~
Topic Starter
Asuka_-
ありがとおおお( *´艸`)
tagsの件了解です。 追加しました!
Topic Starter
Asuka_-
どうしよ。。
riffy
oh, hey, I was asked to take a look at the Easy

  1. 00:04:636 (2) - the slider should be finished on 00:05:192 - where the actual peak of the piano sound is. This will make the rhythm more reasonable and consistent. Same would apply to 00:10:562 (1) -
  2. 00:15:748 (3) - the head of the slider does not represent any strong slider and sort of blends with the rest of the beats around it. Replacing it with a single circle for 00:16:488 - would make a more reasonable and easier to understand rhythm.
  3. 00:19:451 (1) - these would do better as a 1/1 slider and a circle as to stress the instruments and the vocals better.
  4. 00:41:303 (2) - since this was meant to be a part of lower object density (calm part) having this circle here isn't necessary. After all, it is not even needed as it does not follow any important vocal/instrument samples. // 00:42:785 (4) - same would apply here.

    other than that it looks okay
makisokk
Thanks mr bakari, i give answer today ;)

Bakari wrote:

oh, hey, I was asked to take a look at the Easy

  1. 00:19:451 (1) - these would do better as a 1/1 slider and a circle as to stress the instruments and the vocals better. Fix
  2. 00:41:303 (2) - since this was meant to be a part of lower object density (calm part) having this circle here isn't necessary. After all, it is not even needed as it does not follow any important vocal/instrument samples. // 00:42:785 (4) - same would apply here. Fix

    other than that it looks okay
GD
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
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Title:Noraneko Heart
TitleUnicode:野良猫ハート
Artist:Haruka Sora, Kotorii Yuuka, Kamishiro Misaki, Kiritani Hana
ArtistUnicode:遥そら、小鳥居夕花、神代岬、桐谷華
Creator:Asuka_-
Version:Collab Easy
Source:ノラと皇女と野良猫ハート
Tags:eroge opening HARUKAZE oujo Hato to 黒木 未知 パトリシア・オブ・エンド 夕莉 シャチ 明日原 ユウキ Kuroki Michi Patricia of end Yuuri shachi Asuhara Yuuki Firis Mistlud KuranteMelodii makisokk
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Topic Starter
Asuka_-

Bakari wrote:

  1. (my part) 00:04:636 (2) - the slider should be finished on 00:05:192 - where the actual peak of the piano sound is. This will make the rhythm more reasonable and consistent. Same would apply to 00:10:562 (1) -
  2. (my part) 00:15:748 (3) - the head of the slider does not represent any strong slider and sort of blends with the rest of the beats around it. Replacing it with a single circle for 00:16:488 - would make a more reasonable and easier to understand rhythm.
fixed. Thanks~

edit: updated
Topic Starter
Asuka_-
insane remap done
makisokk
IRC mod by Maksimka
2017-07-17 17:18 makisokk: 00:06:118 (5) -  why curve?
2017-07-17 17:18 makisokk: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8612924 maybe try so?
2017-07-17 17:19 makisokk: 00:07:599 (1) - It is necessary to raise the rear higher
2017-07-17 17:20 makisokk: For a better flow
2017-07-17 17:20 makisokk: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8612939
2017-07-17 17:20 makisokk: 00:09:822 (3,5) - do blanket and 00:10:562 (1) - copy past?
2017-07-17 17:22 makisokk: 00:13:711 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This part looks random
2017-07-17 17:23 makisokk: But it is not exactly)
2017-07-17 17:23 makisokk: шыщ
2017-07-17 17:23 makisokk: iso
2017-07-17 17:24 makisokk: 00:22:044 (5,1) - fix blanket?
2017-07-17 17:24 makisokk: 00:23:340 (3) - use direct slider
2017-07-17 17:26 makisokk: 00:49:636 (2) - use here slider
2017-07-17 17:26 makisokk: or 00:50:007 (3) - nc here
2017-07-17 17:26 makisokk: 00:52:785 (3,5) - fix blanket
2017-07-17 17:27 makisokk: 00:59:266 (1,2,3) - broke flow
2017-07-17 17:28 makisokk: 01:17:970 (6,7) - not so hard play?
2017-07-17 17:29 makisokk: 01:29:451 (2,3) - do blanket with 01:28:896 (1) - ?
2017-07-17 17:29 makisokk: Okay it's all
2017-07-17 17:29 makisokk: I hope I helped youъ
2017-07-17 17:36 Asuka_-: ok
2017-07-17 17:36 Asuka_-: thanks
Left
sorry for huge delay and BG pls
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Title:Noraneko Heart
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Artist:Haruka Sora, Kotorii Yuuka, Kamishiro Misaki, Kiritani Hana
ArtistUnicode:遥そら、小鳥居夕花、神代岬、桐谷華
Creator:Asuka_-
Version:Left's Insane
Source:ノラと皇女と野良猫ハート
Tags:eroge opening HARUKAZE oujo Hato to 黒木 未知 パトリシア・オブ・エンド 夕莉 シャチ 明日原 ユウキ Kuroki Michi Patricia of end Yuuri shachi Asuhara Yuuki Firis Mistlud
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Topic Starter
Asuka_-
@Left
thanks~!

bg done
Underforest
interesting, download page redirects to https://osu.ppy.sh/p/error :thinking: fixed, probably modding later
Topic Starter
Asuka_-
oh thanks xD
Affirmation
Q

[Insane]
00:05:748 (4,5) - can be hard to read, players can read it as 1/2 jump.
00:14:266 (1,2,1,2) - DS should be bigger than 00:13:711 (1,2,1,2) - for better music following, how about set DS one more?
00:19:081 - 00:19:822 - clap
00:36:859 (6) - clap
00:40:099 - this part has no sound, so I suggest 5% in this part.
00:57:229 (5,1) - stack?
01:06:488 (6) - why this part has lower SV? I suggest making this slider faster.
01:13:155 (2,3) - suddenly reduced DS just for blanket. but for listening music, I suggest make this part jump/
01:32:414 (2) - stack or avoid overlap. looks 1/4 beat. imo.

GL
Topic Starter
Asuka_-

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[Insane]
00:05:748 (4,5) - can be hard to read, players can read it as 1/2 jump. keep for now
00:14:266 (1,2,1,2) - DS should be bigger than 00:13:711 (1,2,1,2) - for better music following, how about set DS one more? little changed
00:19:081 - 00:19:822 - clap nice
00:36:859 (6) - clap nice
00:40:099 - this part has no sound, so I suggest 5% in this part. oh
00:57:229 (5,1) - stack? ye
01:06:488 (6) - why this part has lower SV? I suggest making this slider faster. fix
01:13:155 (2,3) - suddenly reduced DS just for blanket. but for listening music, I suggest make this part jump/ keep for now~ but good mod
01:32:414 (2) - stack or avoid overlap. looks 1/4 beat. imo . little changed

GL
Thanks!
Blan_C
Hello~~ NM from my queue,

Insane

  1. Please incrase volume on hitobjects (on hard too) - Personally i think these are a bit too quiet. Compare do Left's diff
  2. 00:07:970 (2) - 00:08:711 - Add HS on these - its clearly hearable sounds to me
  3. 00:32:229 (4,1) - Blanket is a little bit off
  4. 00:33:711 (4,4) - Dunno if you want to stack that, but you can :p
  5. 00:36:488 (4,5,6,7) - Kinda random jumps in my opinion - try to make a star from these, or if you dont want it - 00:36:488 (4) - similar spacing betweed as its closer to 00:36:859 (6) than 00:37:044 (7) - (yeah i know - nipticking)
  6. 01:13:155 (2) - Hmm.. 01:13:340 (3) - This vocal have higher tone so maybe space it more? I mean: 01:12:785 (1,2) - space between these is bigger than 01:13:155 (2,3) - and imo shall be opposite

Hard

  1. 00:01:674 (1,2) - I think spacing between objects (in whole calm part) is a bit too small - objects almost touch each other. It would be better if you do DS like 00:16:859 (2,3) - for example
  2. 00:20:007 (2,3) - Smaller DS compared to other objects in this part
  3. 00:21:673 (3,4) - Try x124:y279 as 00:21:673 (3) - is too close to 00:21:303 (2) - Just like you did 00:23:340 (3,4) - here
  4. 00:38:896 (2,4) - as above
I liked your map :3, Good luck!
Topic Starter
Asuka_-

Blan_C wrote:

Hello~~ NM from my queue,

Insane

  1. Please incrase volume on hitobjects (on hard too) - Personally i think these are a bit too quiet. Compare do Left's diff keep for now its fine imo.
  2. 00:07:970 (2) - 00:08:711 - Add HS on these - its clearly hearable sounds to me
  3. 00:32:229 (4,1) - Blanket is a little bit off
  4. 00:33:711 (4,4) - Dunno if you want to stack that, but you can :p
  5. 00:36:488 (4,5,6,7) - Kinda random jumps in my opinion - try to make a star from these, or if you dont want it - 00:36:488 (4) - similar spacing betweed as its closer to 00:36:859 (6) than 00:37:044 (7) - (yeah i know - nipticking)
  6. 01:13:155 (2) - Hmm.. 01:13:340 (3) - This vocal have higher tone so maybe space it more? I mean: 01:12:785 (1,2) - space between these is bigger than 01:13:155 (2,3) - and imo shall be opposite

Hard

  1. 00:01:674 (1,2) - I think spacing between objects (in whole calm part) is a bit too small - objects almost touch each other. It would be better if you do DS like 00:16:859 (2,3) - for example keep
  2. 00:20:007 (2,3) - Smaller DS compared to other objects in this part
  3. 00:21:673 (3,4) - Try x124:y279 as 00:21:673 (3) - is too close to 00:21:303 (2) - Just like you did 00:23:340 (3,4) - here little changed
  4. 00:38:896 (2,4) - as above little changed
I liked your map :3, Good luck!
noreply= fixed Thanks!
ErunamoJAZZ
Hello Asuka_-san!

[General]
Brow color is not very friendly

[Insane]
  1. 00:22:414 (1) - Could improve blanket
  2. 00:57:229 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - That was amazing :D
  3. 01:06:303 (4,5,6) - Because combo color here, This patter was difficult to read the first time I played this diff.
  4. 01:17:970 (6) - This slider is following the voice, but 01:18:155 (7) - not. I is not really bad, but for me, a slider starting in 01:18:340 - will have more sense. Please, consider this.
  5. 01:29:451 (2,3) - Maybe you can move a bit to make a blanket with 01:28:896 (1) - tail:

[Left's Insane]
  1. 00:16:859 (2) - Could improve blanket with 00:17:599 (4) - :P
  2. 00:19:451 (1) - Could improve node angles to make an more smooth wave.
  3. 00:22:414 (1) - Same about blanket with 00:22:970 (2) -
  4. 00:38:155 (1,2) - LOL, that was very troll.
  5. 00:38:525 (3) - yeah.. you know... Im sorry, i feel it aesthetically ugly u.u
  6. 00:40:377 (2) - 00:46:303 (2) - blablablanket please! :3
  7. 01:05:192 (1,1,1,1,2) - cool
  8. 01:11:118 (1) - Not very problematic, but its doing a little overlap with 01:10:377 (2) -
  9. 01:19:266 (3) - I feel as a triple will be nice here instead.
  10. 01:30:377 (3) - That fast slider was annoying. Imho, keeping a simple stack will feel better.
  11. 01:48:340 (2) - !!, That was difficult to read, because I expected a 1/4 but not a 1/2 between :S . Please, consider just spacing and dont stack >.<
Edit: oh, look hitsounds, some beats are missing.

[Hard]
  1. From 00:01:674 - to 00:07:044 - , and 00:40:192 - to 00:52:044 - , could be better if use a DS to 1.35x or 1.4x, to avoid the little overlaping (remember, to move DS in 0.01, use Alt+Shift+mouse scroll)
  2. 00:20:007 (2,3) - Spacing between is very close :P
[Firis' Normal]
  1. 00:07:599 (1,2,3) - Even for a normal, this patters will be difficult to read, because flow is pointing to sliders tails and this will be confusing for some new and/or casual players.
    Also, I wanna suggest a better rhythm for this section:
  2. 00:09:822 (6,1) - Similar issue to before. I think that keep a clear way is a better approach.
  3. 00:37:229 (1,3) - Similar issue. Moving 00:37:970 (2,3) - a bit to right will help to fix.
  4. 00:52:044 (1,2) - xD, you know :3, Moving (1) tail will help to fix.
  5. 01:27:785 (1) - Bad stacking?? lol
[Easy Collab]
  1. humm.. i think that its better if make a little Storyboard with the nicks of who made the each section in the collab.
  2. 00:05:748 (3) - I feel thi as a bad idea u.u Doing a repeat slider in 00:04:636 (2) - will be better, imo.
    It is different to 00:07:229 (5) - , where drum do a good support, but in 00:05:748 (3) - it is very soft and i dont feel it nice.
  3. 00:10:562 (1,2) - Same here.
  4. 00:13:155 (4) - humm... I think... that You can delete this note.
  5. ---------
  6. 00:16:859 (2) - Usually, this flow will be bad idea in a easy diff, because (2) is over flow to (1):
    keep a clear way is very important in easy diffs. Try to keep the way very very obvious for noobs!
  7. 00:17:970 (4,5,1) - A similar issue. Slider flow is pointing to slider but not to circle. Changing slider a bit will help to make this more clear:
  8. 00:20:192 (2,3) - This will be bad idea in an easy diff. Because you are following the voice here, doing a repeat slider will be a better option, imo:
  9. 00:25:377 (5) - Shorting to 00:25:933 - will feel better, and will fix the polarity issue:
  10. 00:31:303 (1) - Here you skip the beat in 00:31:673 - , but I think this as an important beat (even more that voice, due to notes in 00:29:451 - 00:30:192 - ). So... i want to suggest this:
  11. 00:37:229 (1,2) - hummm... I feel that something like this will work better:
  12. 00:40:192 (1,2) - Maybe you will not want, but I wanna suggest to short a bit those sliders, to follow the voice (I feel this more natural ^^):
  13. 00:49:081 (5) - Please, consider to short in 00:49:636 -
  14. 00:55:007 (1,2) - It is not good idea. A slider instead will be better, imo.
  15. 00:57:970 (1,2) - Rhythmically, I feel a Ctrl+G better, because Finish in 00:57:970 -
  16. 01:02:414 (4,5) - Here you made a different rhythm but ints the same that in 00:59:266 (3) - . Just make the same rhythm :3
  17. 01:20:933 (4,5) - A slider will be better, imo.

Good luck!, This song is very cute :)
LMT
  • [General]
  1. Dark red combo colour is hard to read -> bright red ?
    [Insane]
  2. 00:12:229 (2,3) - very strong sound but small spacing, 00:12:970 (7,8,9,10) - weaker sounds but larger spacing => nerf 7 8 9 10
  3. 00:13:525 (10,1) - jump too big.
  4. 00:31:303 (1,2) - vocal starts 00:31:859 - here , sliderhead (2) is not important => https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8655649 rhythm like this?
  5. 01:15:007 (3,4,5,6) - if those are for vocals then make 01:15:748 (1) - a slider and ctrl+g 01:16:303 (4,5) - . https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8655857 << result.
    [Left]
  6. 01:23:525 (2,3) - any reason for having a different rhythm compared to 01:14:636 (2,3,4) - places like these?
  7. 00:32:970 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - not sure what those sounds represent together to have such a fancy overaching pattern. I'd just separate them since from 00:33:525 - the guitar has lost the prominence to vocals/drums here.
  8. 00:38:155 (1,2,3) - tbh I wouldn't mind this pattern but since the intensity in the song doesn't drop that much the 1/2s are kinda unexpected.
  9. 01:30:192 (1,2,3,1) - do something about the stack leniency messing up the blanket lol it looks ew.
  10. 01:18:711 (1) - offset this by a bit? full overlap with 01:17:970 (1) - does make it harder to read. The stream pattern is already quite hard for an Insane already.
    [Hard]
  11. Calm part 1/2 objects have tiny overlap -> doesn't look very nice. Tweak them so they look like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656492 or overlap them a bit more https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656538
  12. 00:20:007 (2,3) - spacing?
  13. 00:21:673 (3,4) - stack leniency makes overlap look bad -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656502
  14. 00:36:859 (4,5) - ^
  15. 01:02:785 (2,3,4,5,6) - doesn't represent the vocals very well, especially when it's not kiai. => 01:03:155 (3,4) - 1/2 slider?
  16. 00:58:711 (3,4) - ^

    [Normal]
  17. You could turn off ds and move the objects a bit to avoid overlaps like this 01:19:266 (3,4) - . Just for an example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656586 . A lot more places where you could do that.
  18. 00:07:599 (1) - any better place for this? maybe move it to the right a bit more, could be confusing to read (2) since it's pointing to the tail a bit too much. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656671 try this?
  19. 00:11:673 (4,5,6) - hard to read for beginners, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656690 how about this?
  20. 00:34:081 (7,1) - too close? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656702 this might be a bit better.

    very nice diff

    [Easy]
  21. 00:10:562 (1,2) - spacing is a bit confusing because 00:07:599 (1,2) - is not very different. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656743 use this rhythm instead?
  22. 01:06:859 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:09:822 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - song has the same rhythm but you map them way too different. Rhythm here is also not good. Try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656850 and apply it two times.
  23. 01:11:118 - very important to emphasise this beat, strong beat is here, not 01:11:303 - here. This applies to the whole kiai. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8656843

Kiai on Easy needs attention to rhythm, otherwise good set!!
you can always pm me if you're not sure about the things I mentioned in Easy.
gl!!
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