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Ataraxia

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Topic Starter

Ataraxia 2018-01-28T11:03:32+00:00

Trynna wrote:
bora mlk

Aurele

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Aurele 2018-02-01T04:52:26+00:00

hi!

General

You will need to check out the inherited timing points as they are not consistent on every difficulty.

Normal

00:05:852 (4,1) - The objects in this area are misleading as the sound from 00:06:364 - is pretty loud and makes the slider (1) hard to catch due to this. Replace the circle (4) for a 3/4 slider, it's going to make it more obvious that there's a sound and it shouldn't be altered. (take for an example this slider : 00:16:761 (4) - )
00:11:989 (1) - I would personally prefer seeing this slider in an angle, instead of being perfectly aligned with the end of the previous slider. You could move it to around x:404 y:120 to create this subtle angle.
00:20:170 (3) - Make the spacing consistent here. If you were trying to follow the intonation of the song here, this slider would be placed further away,
with a spacing that is wider than 00:17:784 (1,2) - because the intonation is higher.

Trynna's Hard

The issue I have here, is mostly the way you placed your 1/4 rhythm compared to your 1/2 rhythm, they are misleading and creates a weird unnecessary tension which catching 1/4 objects. Take for an example these two: 00:01:080 (1,2) - VS 00:02:784 (4,5,6) - . While 00:02:784 (4,5,6) - have a consistent, smooth spacing, you are using the same visual spacing for 00:01:080 (1,2) - which is misleading, In this case, I highly suggest you to move the objects around (00:01:080 (1,2) - In which you can move the circle (2) to x:64 y:192) Don't be scared of overlaps, it helps the readability of the difficulty.
Apply this to all the similar parts,
00:07:216 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I like this, with the spacing intonations and all that, well done!

Bright future

I'd up for "Bright Future" instead.
00:11:989 (1,2,3) - I personally think the shape of these sliders are not polished enough, considering the whole mapping. Try to make them more soft and relaxed..
Example
00:29:716 (4) - *Comment. You could either go for a new combo to follow the previous objects, else it's not so bad as the sound from this slider is the same as the previous one. Same applies to 00:40:625 (4) -

You can call me back afterward :-)

Trynna

714 posts

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Trynna 2018-02-01T05:59:20+00:00

@pimpg eu to usando o hs do ataraxia agora e patterns como 00:07:216 (2,3,4,5,6) - foram feitas pq 00:07:898 (4) - tem um pitch mais alto e 00:08:580 (6,7,1) - dá mais ênfase pra 00:09:261 (1) - etc

fixed spacing issues, sankyu gabu
btw everyone love my overlaps

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Ataraxia

673 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Ataraxia 2018-02-01T10:12:49+00:00

Gabe wrote:
hi!

General
You will need to check out the inherited timing points as they are not consistent on every difficulty.
Now are all 1080offset

Normal
00:05:852 (4,1) - The objects in this area are misleading as the sound from 00:06:364 - is pretty loud and makes the slider (1) hard to catch due to this. Replace the circle (4) for a 3/4 slider, it's going to make it more obvious that there's a sound and it shouldn't be altered. (take for an example this slider : 00:16:761 (4) - ) lol i miss that, cool , now is a 3/4 slider like the other.
00:11:989 (1) - I would personally prefer seeing this slider in an angle, instead of being perfectly aligned with the end of the previous slider. You could move it to around x:404 y:120 to create this subtle angle.Here i switch the slider 00:10:966 (4) - and 00:11:989 (1) - to be more clean and conected with each other.
00:20:170 (3) - Make the spacing consistent here. If you were trying to follow the intonation of the song here, this slider would be placed further away,
with a spacing that is wider than 00:17:784 (1,2) - because the intonation is higher. Oh i miss that, okay xD
Bright future
I'd up for "Bright Future" instead. Oh, okay
00:11:989 (1,2,3) - I personally think the shape of these sliders are not polished enough, considering the whole mapping. Try to make them more soft and relaxed..
Example
okay tho, polish curved.
00:29:716 (4) - *Comment. You could either go for a new combo to follow the previous objects, else it's not so bad as the sound from this slider is the same as the previous one. Same applies to 00:40:625 (4) - Hmmm yeah, i like
You can call me back afterward :-) vem de zap

Aurele

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Aurele 2018-02-01T16:58:27+00:00

:3c

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http://www.yasudarei.net/info/

Trynna

714 posts

Joined May 2013

Trynna 2018-02-01T16:59:01+00:00

gratz on bub atroxa
thank you for support gabe

Nevo

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Nevo 2018-02-01T17:22:51+00:00

Congrats for bubble :3c

igorsprite

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igorsprite 2018-02-01T17:26:26+00:00

Nevo wrote:
Congrats for bubble :3c

sei nn em, ta querendo algo contigo atalaxia ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Ataraxia

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Topic Starter

Ataraxia 2018-02-01T18:07:03+00:00

Nevo wrote:
Congrats for bubble :3c

obrigado filho do net0

igorsprite wrote:
sei nn em, ta querendo algo contigo atalaxia ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

sai fora mapper taiko bosta

Nevo

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Nevo 2018-02-01T18:36:15+00:00

I'm not net0s son ;-;

Ideal

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Ideal 2018-02-01T20:23:04+00:00

Nevo wrote:
I'm not net0s son ;-;

we know, kneebow

Net0

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Net0 2018-02-01T20:27:09+00:00

Nevo wrote:
I'm not net0s son ;-;

:3

pimp

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Joined April 2010

pimp 2018-02-01T20:34:57+00:00

the map is not for approval but it got bubbled as Works In Progress/Help

is this a problem?

Trynna

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Joined May 2013

Trynna 2018-02-01T20:37:03+00:00

gabe can prob move it since he is a gmt

Joe Castle

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Joe Castle 2018-02-02T00:24:51+00:00

holy shit is R3 Music Box

Aurele

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Aurele 2018-02-02T03:23:44+00:00

pimpG wrote:
the map is not for approval but it got bubbled as Works In Progress/Help

is this a problem?

not really an issue.. I don't mind moving it anyways :3c

Kuron-kun

Kuron-kun 2018-03-08T18:32:30+00:00

boa tarde

[General]

Just some small thing I noticed while was checking the hitsounding is that it sounds a bit early in some parts, it's not something that noticeable but adding +10 to the offset would fix it.

[Normal]

HP and OD 1 is really low there, there's no need to set them that low. Make them 2.
00:32:443 (3) - Considering that in this measure you're always following the blue tick, you could also do the same here if you want to. Basically I'm suggesting you to change the rhythm to something like this.

[Trynna's Advanced]

00:43:375 (1) - Would be really cool if you could make this a repeat. Imo would follow the song much better as it keeps going after you end the slider and you could add some hitsounding in slidertail.

[Trynna's Hard]

The only thing I didn't really agree with this diff is where you didn't map the big white tick beats, they're strong enough to be mapped but, yet, you skipped them. I'm talking about 00:06:364 (1) - 00:17:273 (1) -

[Bright Future]

00:36:534 (1,2) - Not much relevant but this is a bit more spaced compared to the rest, decrease it a bit.
00:44:591 (1) - This is 1/12, not 1/8.

Trynna

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Trynna 2018-03-08T19:38:14+00:00

I hate object + spinner in low difficulties. Also, you need to click to spin anyway, this is not a problem at all.
Fixed the thing on hard ty

hard update

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190,347,30739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,216,31080,5,2,0:0:0:0:
264,300,31420,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,216,31761,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,300,32103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,120,32443,2,0,B|216:116|192:128|192:128|168:116|136:120,1,112.5,2|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
308,180,33466,1,2,0:1:0:0:
292,32,33807,5,4,0:0:0:0:
416,80,34148,2,0,P|410:118|416:157,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,176,34659,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,280,35170,2,0,P|421:294|476:281,2,112.5
251,343,36534,5,4,0:0:0:0:
194,245,36875,2,0,L|194:163,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,148,37386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,44,37898,2,0,P|194:30|139:43,2,112.5
309,155,39261,5,4,0:0:0:0:
427,118,39602,2,0,P|419:155|415:196,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,216,40114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,296,40625,2,0,B|353:296|375:283|375:283|397:296|430:296,1,112.5
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131,76,42670,6,0,P|165:89|200:117,1,68.9999976837159,2|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,44793,12,0,46618,0:0:0:0:

Ataraxia

673 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Ataraxia 2018-03-08T19:44:43+00:00

applied +10 offset
all things u say

also, i have disable the coundowm cuz its weird.

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dont worry he pop u bubble so i pop GABE BUBLE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ok this is so gay

Kuron-kun

Kuron-kun 2018-03-08T20:06:04+00:00

Rebubbled!

Ataraxia

673 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Ataraxia 2018-03-08T20:37:38+00:00

best anime

Aurele

osu! Alumni

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