SpectorDG wrote:

I promised to check this so lets do this

[Witch]

1. 00:14:951 - I suggest add LN for more important ok
2. 00:56:534 - I hear nothing which one do you following? hi-hat, it's rly low and covered with the wind sound
3. 01:11:784 - You missed finish it's should be tripe got it
4. 01:17:534 (77534|1,77534|0,77618|3,77618|1,77618|0,77618|2) - Ctrl+H for mirror as 01:16:534 - this? keep
5. 01:19:279 - 01:21:368 - Same as here*
6. 01:33:951 - Very poor than others LNs, it's must be Multi-LN so 01:34:118 (94118|0) - this LN can be end 01:34:534 - here? keep, because it's start of a new bar
7. 01:37:507 (97507|2,97562|3) - Are you sure about is that really 6/1? :re-checks it's just 4/1, maybe you can rearrange like this one?
   https://i.imgur.com/zWmzox8.png pretty sure this is 1/6 , i will ask someone else
8. 01:44:284 - Finish&Whistle just simple and simple LN? it's should more be improve added a note and shorten the ln before
   
   
9. 01:47:284 (107284|3) - LN? very lower synth, actually simple note is much better ok
10. 01:51:284 - ^ok
11. 01:55:284 (115284|0) - I can say it's very differenced, cause it's very high than before so can you make multi ? 01:55:451 - to end here 01:59:284 (119284|1) - ^ ok
12. 02:01:118 (121118|1,121368|1,121534|1) - Feels kinda awkard changed
13. 02:04:368 - Missed something? can be balance with 02:02:284 - 02:06:284 - this? 02:04:451 - strings start from here
14. 02:08:618 - ahh all 4/1 LN stairs? make difference :suggested https://i.imgur.com/OV9bmLH.png 02:08:284 (128284|3,128368|2,128451|1,128534|0) - first 4 of these notes and the second has the same melody
15. 02:09:118 (129118|1) - Do jack on [2] for the playable ... keep
16. 02:21:118 (141118|1,141284|1) - ? 02:29:118 (149118|1,149284|1) - ?? same melody / pitch
17. 02:26:118 (146118|1) - Why you didn't add this LN for [4] Other LN's have pretty jack LN 02:25:784 (145784|3,146118|1) - these has different pitch
18. 02:33:951 - Feels kinda empty can i do rearrange? https://i.imgur.com/UmUGRTY.png 02:35:118 - 02:39:118 - ^ kick 1 snare 2 here for rest
19. 02:45:118 (165118|2,165284|2) - Players will fu** so can you keep this jackie? 02:45:284 (165284|2,165618|2,165784|1) - Just Ctrl+H umm ok i guess
20. 03:01:951 - Don't make quad notes on here cause there have just Finish, no strong beats and whistle here aye boss
21. 03:12:784 (192784|2,192784|3,192868|1,192868|0) - I don't hear special sounds here, maybe do you follow something? 03:12:784 - emphasizing piano here
22. 03:18:451 (198451|0,198534|2) - Ctr+G much better than read ok
23. 03:42:492 - Gonna continue 8/1 here? this is 6/1, and no, it stops there
24. 03:46:451 (226451|3) - Should be end here 03:46:617 same as Insanity keep, i will patronize him later

goodluck!!
rip my cook time hh and star here

Envory wrote:

k Re-mod as DnM-sama request~


|1|2|3|4|

Arzenpald Insanityxxxx

00:32:284 (32284|2,32284|0) - wait.. yg ini 2 kok yg 00:16:284 (16284|2) - > lebih keras kok ga 2??
00:38:618 (38618|1,38784|1) - move ke kolom 3
01:00:784 (60784|1,60951|1,61118|1) - stack 3? re-arrange pls
01:17:368 (77368|0) - sampe sini soundsnya flow gt so re-arrange like > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9840811
03:24:451 (204451|1) - ini buat anchor aja
03:01:951 (181951|1,181951|2,181951|3) - 4?? excess deh .. 3 aja

Witch

00:33:284 (33284|2) - jadiin 2 pls .. rasanya aneh aja kl ga 2.. btw biar konsisten sma 00:32:284 (32284|2,32284|3) - juga ok
00:43:673 (43673|2,43729|1) - ini ngukut apa??? ._. delet dis ikutin string
00:48:451 (48451|0) - 2 la... kasi 2 ke section kyk gini bms mapping
00:56:451 (56451|0,56534|1,56618|2,56618|0,56618|3) - mending buat kyk gini > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9840857 gw ubah
03:06:618 (186618|0,186618|1) - kasi 3 plis kyk 03:02:618 (182618|0,182618|3,182618|1) - biar kerasa .. btw terlalu plain klo cm 2 lel
^ kalo apply yg diatas semua section yg kyk gt yg prtama ada crash, yg itu gda ;-;

Ok done DnM-sama~

Jesuren wrote:

Lolis are gud

[Easy]
01:06:118 (66118|1,66451|1) - i think those notes are not necessary. i would try this

02:46:284 (166284|0,166618|1,166951|2,167284|3,167618|2,167951|1,168284|0,168618|2,168951|1,169284|3,169618|2,169951|1) - Mmmm try this?

[Tofu's Normal]
00:57:784 (57784|2,57951|1,58284|0,58618|2,58951|1) - Mmmm this way looks moar cool

[V's Hard]
nu problems

[Arzenvald's Insanity]
Mmmm i can't mod this

[Witch]
Mmmm lul i can't find problems with this, it's gud imo XD

whoaa sorry for short mod ;w;
GL m8

FAMoss wrote:

Yah iseng mod doang ..

|1|2|3|4|

[ Witch ]

00:04:868 - 00:05:618 - 00:06:507 - 00:11:840 - 00:13:673 - coba pake 50% music, pasti kedengeran seperti ini http://cdn.shigetora.pw/i/pjdaadl.png sngaja gk bkin ln ;-;

00:10:951 - http://cdn.shigetora.pw/i/paqwykd.png masih sama, make 50% music dan ngikutin seperti ini 00:08:284 (8284|0) -

01:11:618 (71618|2,71618|1,71618|0) - cukup 3 aja, soalnya udah ter cover sama slider 01:11:451 (71451|3) - last diff, dense dkt gpp, lgian emng mau emphasize crash nya

wiwew

Arzenvald wrote:

why did i do this

[EZ]
00:11:284 (11284|0,12284|1,13284|2) - 3 2 1, the 1-hand 1/1 at 00:10:951 (10951|1,11284|0) - can be avoided
00:14:284 (14284|3,15284|1) - 2 3

00:19:284 (19284|0,19618|2) - jack in 1, jack this if you dare
00:23:284 (23284|0) - ^ jack in 3
00:27:618 (27618|2) - ^ jack in 1
00:31:618 (31618|2) - ^ jack in 1, then 00:31:951 (31951|1) - move to 3

00:32:284 (32284|3) - turn into LN, stop at 00:32:951 -
00:33:284 (33284|2,34284|1,35284|0) - do the same with the other

01:13:534 (73534|3) - would be more sensible at 01:13:451 - (1/2),

01:18:618 (78618|2,78951|2,79284|2,79618|0) - switch, move 3 to 1, 1 to 3
01:20:284 (80284|1,80618|1,80951|1,81284|1) - move to 4

01:30:284 (90284|2) - why double while you can use 1/1 LN, or why not both, add some variation from this long boring 1/1 part ln inflation

02:14:284 (134284|1) - move to 4, the anchor can be avoided


02:34:284 (154284|2) - in term of reading, 3/4 (in easy) are harder than 1/2 (in normal), so i suggest to use 1/1 to layer the piano, the rhythm is too complex for basic diff

03:04:784 (184784|3) - you can remove this, then
03:04:284 (184284|0,184451|2,184618|1) - 313
03:04:951 (184951|0,185118|2,185284|3) - 124

03:25:451 (205451|1,205617|1) - hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ._.


03:41:867 (221867|2,222284|1) - 4 3, then
03:42:617 (222617|2,222617|3,223117|0,223117|1,223617|0,223617|3) - 14 14 14, double jack in 3/2 is kinda more readable and has some catchy contrast
03:44:617 (224617|1,224617|0,225117|2,225117|3) - ^


[Tofu NM]
01:13:618 (73618|1) - don't you think this would be more sensible at 01:13:534 -?


in last kiai, i suggest you can mix some notes into LN, it will bring more variety from 00:57:618 (57618|3) - , mostly the gap between Normal & Hard is very big in kiai

03:17:701 (197701|0) - doesn't looks snapped properly, snap at 1/1 03:17:617 - or change the LN into some harder pattern

[V's HD]
pretty much clean, thank you to make a quiet reasonable gap with my diff :3/

01:46:284 (106284|0) - i don't think the LN here appropriate for Hard diff, it looks altering the reading way more harsher than insane (even insane is denser)

02:02:284 (122284|3) - i think you can map the synth to differ between Normal & Hard, adding 1/2 or 1/4 in the rest of this part


[overall]
there's some other gap problem between nm & hd, but to see the spread as in a whole spread, by object amount are :
E -- N ----- H ----- I ----- X
which is quiet linear through higher diff, and quiet friendly for easier player to step up to Normal diff, but some adjustment can be made as i pointed earlierhelp me with turning witch diff to X icon pls ._.

Arzenvald wrote:

why did i do this

[V's HD]
pretty much clean, thank you to make a quiet reasonable gap with my diff :3/ >W<

01:46:284 (106284|0) - i don't think the LN here appropriate for Hard diff, it looks altering the reading way more harsher than insane (even insane is denser) [color=##FF0000]not really i guess, because its a lot harder than without the LN on it[/color]

02:02:284 (122284|3) - i think you can map the synth to differ between Normal & Hard, adding 1/2 or 1/4 in the rest of this part hmmm, yes i agree about adding more notes on this part. but i dont want to, because this part is like where you can rest your fingers owo

[overall]
there's some other gap problem between nm & hd, but to see the spread as in a whole spread, by object amount are :
E -- N ----- H ----- I ----- X
which is quiet linear through higher diff, and quiet friendly for easier player to step up to Normal diff, but some adjustment can be made as i pointed earlier

Jesuren wrote:

Lolis are gud

[Tofu's Normal]
00:57:784 (57784|2,57951|1,58284|0,58618|2,58951|1) - Mmmm this way looks moar cool Changed in a different way

whoaa sorry for short mod ;w;
GL m8

Arzenvald wrote:

why did i do this

[Tofu NM]
01:13:618 (73618|1) - don't you think this would be more sensible at 01:13:534 -?


in last kiai, i suggest you can mix some notes into LN, it will bring more variety from 00:57:618 (57618|3) - , mostly the gap between Normal & Hard is very big in kiai I like rice tbh. LNs for some melody but not on others seem a bit inconsistent to me, but I indeed raise the difficulty by adding some 1/4 into kiai.

03:17:701 (197701|0) - doesn't looks snapped properly, snap at 1/1 03:17:617 - or change the LN into some harder pattern

Maxus wrote:

Sedikit bonus

[Witch]
00:34:951 - There's already a pitch distortion happening here, so the pattern direction should be changed too, like https://puu.sh/zeTdP/2d334e0be8.png re-arranged

00:56:284 - Should be trill here cause of repeated sound here, and there should be additional note at 00:56:534 - , more or less like https://puu.sh/zeTiS/da23ec3d28.png this is referred to the mods before, but will revert back to this

01:08:284 - Kinda awkward this one only have one small LN. try https://puu.sh/zeTHn/7f0bc09ef4.png 01:08:284 (68284|2,68451|3,68617|1) - emphasized like this so piano is still as 1 ln note here

01:11:451 - Felt the emphasis here is really lacking, you need additional LN here. 01:11:284 (71284|3) - the high pitched piano only occured once here

01:47:200 (107200|0,107283|1,107367|2,107450|3) - try make these 2-1-2-3 , the col 4 stack makes it really pressuring to do the pattern properly ok

01:50:950 (110950|1,111200|1,111367|1,111533|1,111783|1,111950|1) - not quite sure bout this, i think you can balance it more by doing https://puu.sh/zeTUl/6dbc48917d.png fixed

01:53:033 (113033|1,113200|3,113283|1) - Actually i find that 4-2-4 makes the pattern less confusing to breeze at. re-arranged

01:55:200 (115200|1,115283|0) - try 1-2 instead here for similar reason as above aa feels more awkward..

01:57:033 (117033|1,117200|3,117283|1) - same with 01:53:033 (113033|1,113200|3,113283|1) - re-arranged

01:57:950 (117950|1,118200|1,118283|2,118450|1,118617|1,118700|2,118783|1,118867|2,119033|1,119117|2,119200|1,119367|1) - This one is kinda unnecessary tricky tbh because the structure trying too focus on col 2 and 3 stack between LN, but causing each section movement to becoming too convoluted, try https://puu.sh/zeUp3/300ab5e142.png instead. re-arranged

02:55:950 - Actually i'm really unsure about how this pattern goes with players, considering your skill, you probably already considered that, but i prefer if you have some top players confirm how this plays. for myself i kinda recommend http://puu.sh/zeULz/4b919823b5.png kept and balanced,
wanna preserve the diff for the X diff to be rly hard so it's emphasized with the jacks

03:14:701 (194701|2,195701|1) - really recommend so that the jack is at either col 1 or col 4 here, the SV before the Quad, and when landed quad towards the minijack causing the players to offguard when try to do the tricky patterns. ok

03:16:534 (196534|1,196576|0,196617|1) - try 1-2-1 instead here so it doesn't becoming too tricky to 300 properly hm ok it feels better

03:23:701 - please low down the SV here, hitting 03:23:867 (203867|3,203951|2,203951|3) - after 1,4x SV making drop acc especially when we are close to the song ending. ok lul

03:42:284 (222284|1,222284|0,222284|3,222340|2,222395|1,222451|0,222451|3,222534|2) - recommend to Ctrl+H here, i keep constantly choke coz somehow my hand reflect to col 2 jack instead of col 3.. most people jacks better with right hands (including me ofc), will keep here :'(

Good luck

FAMoss wrote:

sebagai request, jangan di kudosu ya, udah w mod yang dulu :v w mod top diff aja, bisa di terapkan ke diff lain

[Witch]

1. 00:42:034 - this is C, check this 00:41:618 (41618|0) - ok
2. 00:47:618 (47618|3) - not C, but F | hear cymbals? thats hi hat
3. 00:48:284 (48284|0,48451|0,48618|0,48784|0,48951|0,49118|0) - what is this? this is drum? i think that was snare sounds ?
4. 00:50:284 - add a F here it's already there
5. 01:05:617 - 01:05:951 - 01:06:284 - 01:06:617 - 01:06:951 - 01:07:284 - 01:07:617 - 01:07:951 - 01:08:284 - 01:08:617 - 01:08:951 - 01:09:284 - 01:09:617 - 01:09:951 - 01:09:951 - 01:09:951 - 01:10:951 - 01:11:284 - actually here two sounds between cymbal and kick, suggest to add W and F i only here w
6. 01:12:784 (72784|0,72784|1,72867|3,72867|2,72951|1,72951|0) - add F no cymbal
7. 01:17:617 - no cymbals here, delete F emphasize the drop with f
8. 02:14:117 - add F | cymbal f is from last echo, not in that timeline
9. 02:34:283 - sure you wont add F ? no
10. 02:46:117 - C here ok
11. 02:49:950 - uhhh
    
    
12. 03:41:617 - F ok
13. 03:42:951 - 03:43:451 - 03:43:951 - C i guess not W w here
14. 03:44:451 - add a W c here
15. 03:45:617 - add loud snare here

Critical_Star wrote:

ok lai
Witch
00:39:284 (39284|3,39368|2,39451|1,39534|0,39618|1,39701|2) - suggestion > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10899501 i guess stairs also work for the pitch but this reverse stair somehow works better, changed
00:52:618 (52618|2,52618|3,52618|1,52618|0,52951|3,52951|0,52951|2,52951|1) - triple should be enough here like 00:53:284 u are right..
(53284|1,53284|3,53284|2) - . when there is a break time , quad note is good to differentiate these crash sound like 00:54:284 (54284|1,54284|0,54284|2,54284|3) - ok
00:54:618 (54618|3,54618|2,54618|1,54618|0,54951|1,54951|0,54951|3,54951|2) - u may want to consider this again ^ ok
01:11:284 (71284|3,71451|3) - these both sound are 1/2 long 01:10:284 (70284|0,70451|0) - i follow the layering here where that high pitch piano is mapped as short ln while melody piano mapped as 1/2 ln, in this part, that was also the same principle used. the short ln is for high pitch and the 1/2 note 01:11:284 (71284|0,71451|3) - these are for the main melody
01:49:867 (109867|3) - 01:53:367 (113367|0) - 01:57:867 (117867|0) - delete to make a break flow here? i think is good before 1/6 pattern oki
02:33:283 (153283|1,153283|0,153283|3,153533|0,153533|3,153533|2,153783|1,153783|0,153783|3) - double should be enough, so you make space for another new pattern section like 02:34:617 (154617|3,154617|1,154617|0) - i think current density as it is now should be fine and im following all snares to 3 notes at that section
02:57:283 - it won't be hard to do quad here, also it does have the cymbal u are following like 02:56:950 (176950|1,176950|2,176950|0,176950|3) - I actually left 1 quad behind intentionally to prevent strain but u are also cruel :'(((( added then
03:46:451 (226451|3) - end at 03:50:617 - better u are right

Arzenvald's Insanity
00:38:284 (38284|1,38451|1) - move to 3 for a descending jack pattern?
00:51:451 (51451|3,51618|3,51784|3,51951|3,52118|3) - try double here, the sound intensity are stronger here
01:24:534 (84534|3,84617|1,84617|2,84701|3,84784|0,84867|1,84867|2,84951|0) - suggestion > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10899562
03:08:868 (188868|3) - should be double for what u are catching here a little jack from your triple here won't hurt
03:10:868 (190868|1) - and so on with my previous mod if u agree, i highly suggest to double it
03:26:784 (206784|2,206867|2,207117|1,207201|1) - make them into 1 and 4 column jack after a 2-3 jack from your previous pattern or variate them other than 2-3

Critical_Star wrote:

have a little discussion with donald about meta and it is good now , sleep

Maxus wrote:

the rest of the difficulty.

[Tofu's Normal]
01:47:283 - 01:48:283 - ,etc. until 02:01:283 - For every 4/1 (i mean thick white line) try make double note there. I think it will provide more nice spread.
Sorry but i think these double notes don't actually make much sense from musical perspective since the drums on them are still like others, very normal snares without cymbals to emphasize.

Maxus wrote:

the rest of the difficulty.

[V's Hard]
01:05:951 (65951|3,66117|3) - move these to col 1, don't really like the idea of same pitch at different column. they're different btw (i heard them like 10x) but well, their major sound are the same. accepted

01:10:284 (70284|2,70451|2,70617|3) - move to 4-4-3 for PR purposes. sure, for comfortable purposes also (maybe :/)

02:02:450 - until 02:13:783 - map the 1/2 too pls, in hard difficulty it's horribly underwhelming try to map all those 1/4 with only 1/1 pattern, the empty part felt like easy difficulty. done

03:04:201 (184201|3) - move col 3 here, i don't think having 03:03:368 (183368|3,183868|3,184201|3) - in a row is a good thing. remap this part a bit owo

03:05:451 (185451|0,185534|2) - move to col 3 and col 1, it flows better. sure

Maxus wrote:

Having a bit IRC and now its fine.
Qualified!

Draftnell wrote:

wokwok dq pls xD

Envory wrote:

Woi kapan Inpers world????