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Easy
  1. 00:42:355 (1,2) - Don't structure objects like this in Easies. Where the head 2 starts behind 1. It's extremely hard for a beginner to pick and read especially since the rhythm is somewhat ambiguous too.
  2. 00:42:355 (1) - concerning the rhythm above, how about this? https://i.imgur.com/dQcwiQk.png
  3. 00:44:881 (1) - ^
  4. 00:56:091 (2) - same as 00:42:355 (1,2) concerning structure
  5. 00:57:197 (3) - Deleting this would create a nice pause/break before the kiai and would in turn add more emphasis to the start of the chorus
  6. 01:15:197 (1) - Rhythm suggestion ~ More emphatic and flows better imho https://i.imgur.com/DbkPi9F.png
  7. 01:25:302 (1) - If you make this into a 2/1 reverse slider it would reflect the vocals a lot more. I had a feeling you want to portray the vocals with the way you mapped 01:22:776 (1,2,3) -
  8. 01:30:355 (1) - Suggestion to make 4/1 reverse ~

Lilyanna
  1. Try AR 4.5. It would give players a better bridge for the hard diff
  2. 00:43:460 (2) - rhythm suggestion ~ https://i.imgur.com/GneTy1v.png
  3. 01:05:091 (1,2) - It would be nice if you could use different structure here compared to 01:03:828 (3,4) . Because the music between these 2 pairs of sliders is very different
  4. 01:15:197 (1,2) - What do you think of something like this? https://i.imgur.com/YSUbT5T.png It would be a nice increase in object density especially since it's higher here in the easy
  5. 01:26:407 (1) - If you end this on circle 2 it would better reflect the vocals. It would also lower the object density which would be nice for the calm part
  6. 01:27:828 (1) - end on white tick

Hard
  1. AR 7. So the current gap between normal and hard is AR 4 and AR 8. Normally I'm not one to fuss about this but the gap between the ability to sight read is huge and 8 isn't really that necessary for this diff
  2. 00:37:302 (1) - Spacing feels a tad too high to say this is still the calm part. 1.8 DS is good enough for you?
  3. 00:40:776 (4) - Ok definitenly this one. Unlike above there is not really much to emphasis in the song
  4. 01:27:512 - Circle here would play nicely
  5. 01:31:618 (1) - NC not neccessary
  6. 01:29:091 (1,2,3,4) - Just my opinion as a mapper but I'm not really feeling this back and forth structure. I feel like a more linear pattern with lower spacing would be more appropriate (wew subjective modding with no explanation, great BN mod)

Yammichi
  1. 00:14:249 (6) - You know what would be really cool, if you stacked this on top of 00:14:565 (1) -
  2. 00:19:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I find this pattern a bit weird because it almost starts playing like a stack by the time you get to 6. Idk if that was your intended effect
  3. 00:52:144 (9) - same as 00:14:249 (6) if you turned 9 into a circle
  4. 01:11:407 (1,1,1) - why didn't you adopt the same SV and spacing as before? I don't really feel the song is becoming less intense here
  5. 01:29:407 - I'm a bit sceptical why you didn't map this piano note when you mapped 01:29:723 (3,4) -

2 Furries Foxes
  1. 00:43:618 (3) - If you're going to map this beat then hitsound it
  2. 00:57:986 (3) - Because this SV change is so drastic I would prefer an NC here as it came way out the blue for me. Add NC where else this applies

Whose ever Extra is above the first Insane, it's 5 am
  1. 00:21:512 (1) - mute the slider end?
  2. 00:56:881 (2) - NC
  3. 00:57:355 (3) - You sure you don't want a mini stream or something? feels anti climatic to have a slider + circle to map this kind of noise in an extra

Nev0
  1. 00:43:302 (3) - NC pattern could be optimised for better readability. Try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9783974
  2. 01:07:302 (1) - Not many ppl are going to read this as a 3/4 slider because of the spacing and that the shape makes it look smaller than it actually is
  3. 01:12:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - woah look who's too cool for 1,2,1,2 NCs
  4. 01:29:407 - I'm a bit sceptical why you didn't map this piano note when you mapped 01:29:723 (2,3)
  5. 01:31:618 (1) - end on white tick . It's really ambiguous how this ends on the red tick as you have such big spacing between 01:32:881 (1) in combination with the fact you ended the previous slider on the white tick too

Wew I'm finally near the end, guess I'll use an edgier colour
  1. xd nothing to say
[]Popping for the AR spread I mentioned in Hard and the slider structure thingy I stated in Easy

Call me back when everyone has replied. I've modded like 20 maps of this song this year jesus
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Kisses wrote:

2 Furries Foxes i will end u
  1. 00:43:618 (3) - If you're going to map this beat then hitsound it
  2. 00:57:986 (3) - Because this SV change is so drastic I would prefer an NC here as it came way out the blue for me. Add NC where else this applies
Fixed both thank uuu

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Source:Re:LieF〜親愛なるあなたへ〜
Tags:eroge visual novel relief 甘利紗陽 saya amari Shin'ainaru Anata e レリーフ DeaR YoU retryment miu yuu game op rask opening nevo yamicchi lince cosmico foxygrandpa ultima fox lilyanna time capsule
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Kisses wrote:

Nev0
  1. 00:43:302 (3) - NC pattern could be optimised for better readability. Try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9783974
  2. 01:07:302 (1) - Not many ppl are going to read this as a 3/4 slider because of the spacing and that the shape makes it look smaller than it actually is
  3. 01:12:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - woah look who's too cool for 1,2,1,2 NCs pssh I used all my 1 2 ideas on yubi :^)
  4. 01:29:407 - I'm a bit sceptical why you didn't map this piano note when you mapped 01:29:723 (2,3)
  5. 01:31:618 (1) - end on white tick . It's really ambiguous how this ends on the red tick as you have such big spacing between 01:32:881 (1) in combination with the fact you ended the previous slider on the white tick too


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Kisses wrote:

Whose ever Extra is above the first Insane, it's 5 am
  1. 00:21:512 (1) - mute the slider end? ok
  2. 00:56:881 (2) - NC ok
  3. 00:57:355 (3) - You sure you don't want a mini stream or something? feels anti climatic to have a slider + circle to map this kind of noise in an extra nah i just want to follow vocals at this point

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Kisses wrote:

Easy
  1. 00:42:355 (1,2) - Don't structure objects like this in Easies. Where the head 2 starts behind 1. It's extremely hard for a beginner to pick and read especially since the rhythm is somewhat ambiguous too.
  2. 00:42:355 (1) - concerning the rhythm above, how about this? https://i.imgur.com/dQcwiQk.png
  3. 00:44:881 (1) - ^
  4. 00:56:091 (2) - same as 00:42:355 (1,2) concerning structure
  5. 00:57:197 (3) - Deleting this would create a nice pause/break before the kiai and would in turn add more emphasis to the start of the chorus
  6. 01:15:197 (1) - Rhythm suggestion ~ More emphatic and flows better imho https://i.imgur.com/DbkPi9F.png
  7. 01:25:302 (1) - If you make this into a 2/1 reverse slider it would reflect the vocals a lot more. I had a feeling you want to portray the vocals with the way you mapped 01:22:776 (1,2,3) - but i was following piano for the examples
  8. 01:30:355 (1) - Suggestion to make 4/1 reverse ~

Hard
  1. AR 7. So the current gap between normal and hard is AR 4 and AR 8. Normally I'm not one to fuss about this but the gap between the ability to sight read is huge and 8 isn't really that necessary for this diff
  2. 00:37:302 (1) - Spacing feels a tad too high to say this is still the calm part. 1.8 DS is good enough for you?
  3. 00:40:776 (4) - Ok definitenly this one. Unlike above there is not really much to emphasis in the song
  4. 01:27:512 - Circle here would play nicely piano and such
  5. 01:31:618 (1) - NC not neccessary
  6. 01:29:091 (1,2,3,4) - Just my opinion as a mapper but I'm not really feeling this back and forth structure. I feel like a more linear pattern with lower spacing would be more appropriate (wew subjective modding with no explanation, great BN mod) i liek itttt
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Kisses wrote:

Lilyanna
  1. Try AR 4.5. It would give players a better bridge for the hard diff
  2. 00:43:460 (2) - rhythm suggestion ~ https://i.imgur.com/GneTy1v.png
  3. 01:05:091 (1,2) - It would be nice if you could use different structure here compared to 01:03:828 (3,4) . Because the music between these 2 pairs of sliders is very different there is a different flow direction also it goes from down to up shape is not everything to express the music
  4. 01:15:197 (1,2) - What do you think of something like this? https://i.imgur.com/YSUbT5T.png It would be a nice increase in object density especially since it's higher here in the easy
  5. 01:26:407 (1) - If you end this on circle 2 it would better reflect the vocals. It would also lower the object density which would be nice for the calm part i dont think it will better reflect the vocals since the vocals end where the slider end rn and that hitcircle is to emphasize the piano also its just one hitcircle its not so dense for a calm part
  6. 01:27:828 (1) - end on white tick


[]Popping for the AR spread I mentioned in Hard and the slider structure thingy I stated in Easy

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posted

Kisses wrote:

Yammichi
  1. 00:14:249 (6) - You know what would be really cool, if you stacked this on top of 00:14:565 (1) - idk I don't really like the flow of it
  2. 00:19:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I find this pattern a bit weird because it almost starts playing like a stack by the time you get to 6. Idk if that was your intended effect ya it's my intention. The spacing decrease gradually. I wasn't structuring the pattern for aesthetics though
  3. 00:52:144 (9) - same as 00:14:249 (6) if you turned 9 into a circle this slider has different intensity compare to that 6, so I don't think I would stack it xd
  4. 01:11:407 (1,1,1) - why didn't you adopt the same SV and spacing as before? I don't really feel the song is becoming less intense here having the section pretty much 1/2 slider heavy, the intensity of the section would be very flat with no emphasis. That's why I think I should lower the SV a bit to support the vocal better, also to emphasize the 01:12:670 - section better
  5. 01:29:407 - I'm a bit sceptical why you didn't map this piano note when you mapped 01:29:723 (3,4) - I don't think that is the piano. It's the bass guitar I believe. The piano shows up clearly on 01:28:934 (2,3,4) - as you can hear. So um, yeah I'm not gonna add it
Sorry for not applying anything and for the really late reply ><
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tfw you wait a week to deny everything
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lmao
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lomao
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lmaoa
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lmaooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

call maridius for qual
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Kisses wrote:

lmaooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

call maridius for qual
:nyab:
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Yamicchi went godmod
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MaridiuS wrote:

Yamicchi went godmod
thanks for teh kurisumasu puresento

and all the people in the set~
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first grats <3
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yup
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AAA IM AT AN AIRPORT AND CANT PLAY THE MAP ;-;
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