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Hotaru Murasaki - Re:TrymenT

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MaridiuS
[General]

  1. @timecapsule and everyone else. Last time i modded think it was done with me having hitsounds off lol, so sinnoh adressed it and time capsule said something like "miss listen to the section" meaning that he will remove the 2/1 hitnormals on the peaceful section, checking back I don't see them removed. And I also agree with Sinnoh that they sound misplaced tbh, in like all maps.
  2. I think having drum sampleset claps should fit this section more 00:32:565 - in all maps 00:16:302 (4,6) - if they sound like this. Hm I'll just put on how my hitsound sounds on drum-hitclaps, think that you'll understand. The section is way too peaceful and the snares are toned down strongly, the current snare is just too loud compared to anything else. https://www.dropbox.com/s/nh8a9o5kistff ... p.wav?dl=0
  3. I redownloaded the diff and foxy fox diff is kill, no mp3 lol, also no preview time.
  4. Liliyanna didn't answer sinnoh mod


[Resonance]
  1. 00:52:460 (1) - compared to 00:49:934 (1) - should be a slider in order to emphasize the increasment of intensity and the violin that appears on the red tick.
[lince]
  1. 00:44:091 (4,5,6) - Hm this spacing is big for no apparent reason, https://i.imgur.com/QcqTNil.png making a square should fit much better relating aesthetics and intensity.
  2. Lince wrote:

    00:58:302 (4) - I'm sorry but it's sliderend sounds way too important and impactful for it to be mapped like that. It is a strong vocal together with a drum hit and should without doubt in my eyes be mapped actively (aka being clickable). 01:00:039 (1) - same for this. 01:00:828 (3) - and also kinda for this. i don't really agree with this one, While the vocals are important, im following a different rhythm that i made up, and i thinks that the emphasis is good enough already, if people keeps complaining about this i'll just change
    ~You will have to present some stronger arguments to why the rhythm is viable and not just say "I made it up" so we can more easily come to a compromise further more, modders in the future could better understand and maybe learn something.

  3. Lince wrote:

    01:15:670 (1) - I strongly advise emphasizing this with spacing, way too loud and noticeable to be given generic spacing like random vocals. When there's a note this big it should be noticeable different in the map compared to other filler stuff. I don't think so at all, i want to keep the blankets clear for now
    ~https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/9I71dIa.jpg This also seems like clear blankets except now the strong sound was emphasized ¯\_(ツ)_/¯.

[Nevo]
  1. 01:00:039 (1,2,3) - You said that you fixed all, but I said that if you were to make 00:57:512 (1) - a slider, so should it be done in the former link for consistency and for the purpose of emphasizing the downbeat.
Topic Starter
Shira

Sinnoh wrote:

lilyanna
00:45:986 (2,3,4,5,1) - This is way too dense for a normal, too many 1/2 sliders. I think replacing 00:45:986 (2) - with a circle solves this well
00:54:355 (4,5) - Rhythm a bit inconsistent, not sure why it's using 1/2 sliders when 00:52:776 (2) - is very similar and also has strong sound on its tail.
both fixed

MaridiuS wrote:

[General]

  1. @timecapsule and everyone else. Last time i modded think it was done with me having hitsounds off lol, so sinnoh adressed it and time capsule said something like "miss listen to the section" meaning that he will remove the 2/1 hitnormals on the peaceful section, checking back I don't see them removed. And I also agree with Sinnoh that they sound misplaced tbh, in like all maps. whoops ill ask him about it
  2. I think having drum sampleset claps should fit this section more 00:32:565 - in all maps 00:16:302 (4,6) - if they sound like this. Hm I'll just put on how my hitsound sounds on drum-hitclaps, think that you'll understand. The section is way too peaceful and the snares are toned down strongly, the current snare is just too loud compared to anything else. https://www.dropbox.com/s/nh8a9o5kistff ... p.wav?dl=0
  3. I redownloaded the diff and foxy fox diff is kill, no mp3 lol, also no preview time. mp3 seems fine to me but fixed preview point
  4. Liliyanna didn't answer sinnoh mod yup
[Resonance]
  1. 00:52:460 (1) - compared to 00:49:934 (1) - should be a slider in order to emphasize the increasment of intensity and the violin that appears on the red tick. idk i really think the pause gives players more emphasis on the next note, it also divides the section up nicely
[Nevo]
  1. 01:00:039 (1,2,3) - You said that you fixed all, but I said that if you were to make 00:57:512 (1) - a slider, so should it be done in the former link for consistency and for the purpose of emphasizing the downbeat.
everything else applied ty!!

Lince Cosmico wrote:

MaridiuS wrote:

[lince]
  1. 00:44:091 (4,5,6) - Hm this spacing is big for no apparent reason, https://i.imgur.com/QcqTNil.png making a square should fit much better relating aesthetics and intensity. ok changed
  2. 00:58:302 (4) - ~You will have to present some stronger arguments to why the rhythm is viable and not just say "I made it up" so we can more easily come to a compromise further more, modders in the future could better understand and maybe learn something. It's just that i don't know how to explain myself,
    but I'm pretty sure that my rhythm choise isn't bad, while it doesn't fits the vocals at all, it emphasize with the kick sound at the background, that is pretty much notorious while playing. Not more than the voice, but since it plays good, and it emphasizes something notorious in-gameplay. I'm keeping this pattern


  3. 01:15:670 (1) - ~https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/9I71dIa.jpg This also seems like clear blankets except now the strong sound was emphasized ¯\_(ツ)_/¯. Sorry on this one, but I feel that 01:15:197 (1,2) - is already emphasizing the spacing i want. while 01:15:670 (1,2) - are not doing it, they are still emphasizing enough the feeling I want to give while playing, also, take in mind that the spacing on 01:15:986 (2,3) - is higher because i wanted to give more emphasis to the main sounds as The First (01:15:197 - ) and The Last (01:16:302 - )
Thanks
Foxy Grandpa
Alright yea since time capsule is ded I cleaned up the hitsounds in the start and in the end

they should be less annoying and more fitting
MaridiuS
00:54:986 - add finish on all diffs here.
00:20:249 - finish on all diffs here

lilyanna, maybe 00:55:065 (1) - snap start on red tick, giving space to new player is always good.

normal-hitclap seems to be unusued so delete that.

zzz
Chihara Minori
@shira feel free to modified the hs as your prefence, get some net issues recently so ye sry late rply
Topic Starter
Shira

MaridiuS wrote:

00:54:986 - add finish on all diffs here.
00:20:249 - finish on all diffs here

lilyanna, maybe 00:55:065 (1) - snap start on red tick, giving space to new player is always good.

normal-hitclap seems to be unusued so delete that.

zzz
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MaridiuS
Eroge was a mistake.
Topic Starter
Shira

MaridiuS wrote:

Eroge was a mistake.
everything was a mistake.
Nevo
:^)
_Meep_
rank ples
Yamicchi
please push
_handholding

Easy
  1. 00:42:355 (1,2) - Don't structure objects like this in Easies. Where the head 2 starts behind 1. It's extremely hard for a beginner to pick and read especially since the rhythm is somewhat ambiguous too.
  2. 00:42:355 (1) - concerning the rhythm above, how about this? https://i.imgur.com/dQcwiQk.png
  3. 00:44:881 (1) - ^
  4. 00:56:091 (2) - same as 00:42:355 (1,2) concerning structure
  5. 00:57:197 (3) - Deleting this would create a nice pause/break before the kiai and would in turn add more emphasis to the start of the chorus
  6. 01:15:197 (1) - Rhythm suggestion ~ More emphatic and flows better imho https://i.imgur.com/DbkPi9F.png
  7. 01:25:302 (1) - If you make this into a 2/1 reverse slider it would reflect the vocals a lot more. I had a feeling you want to portray the vocals with the way you mapped 01:22:776 (1,2,3) -
  8. 01:30:355 (1) - Suggestion to make 4/1 reverse ~

Lilyanna
  1. Try AR 4.5. It would give players a better bridge for the hard diff
  2. 00:43:460 (2) - rhythm suggestion ~ https://i.imgur.com/GneTy1v.png
  3. 01:05:091 (1,2) - It would be nice if you could use different structure here compared to 01:03:828 (3,4) . Because the music between these 2 pairs of sliders is very different
  4. 01:15:197 (1,2) - What do you think of something like this? https://i.imgur.com/YSUbT5T.png It would be a nice increase in object density especially since it's higher here in the easy
  5. 01:26:407 (1) - If you end this on circle 2 it would better reflect the vocals. It would also lower the object density which would be nice for the calm part
  6. 01:27:828 (1) - end on white tick

Hard
  1. AR 7. So the current gap between normal and hard is AR 4 and AR 8. Normally I'm not one to fuss about this but the gap between the ability to sight read is huge and 8 isn't really that necessary for this diff
  2. 00:37:302 (1) - Spacing feels a tad too high to say this is still the calm part. 1.8 DS is good enough for you?
  3. 00:40:776 (4) - Ok definitenly this one. Unlike above there is not really much to emphasis in the song
  4. 01:27:512 - Circle here would play nicely
  5. 01:31:618 (1) - NC not neccessary
  6. 01:29:091 (1,2,3,4) - Just my opinion as a mapper but I'm not really feeling this back and forth structure. I feel like a more linear pattern with lower spacing would be more appropriate (wew subjective modding with no explanation, great BN mod)

Yammichi
  1. 00:14:249 (6) - You know what would be really cool, if you stacked this on top of 00:14:565 (1) -
  2. 00:19:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I find this pattern a bit weird because it almost starts playing like a stack by the time you get to 6. Idk if that was your intended effect
  3. 00:52:144 (9) - same as 00:14:249 (6) if you turned 9 into a circle
  4. 01:11:407 (1,1,1) - why didn't you adopt the same SV and spacing as before? I don't really feel the song is becoming less intense here
  5. 01:29:407 - I'm a bit sceptical why you didn't map this piano note when you mapped 01:29:723 (3,4) -

2 Furries Foxes
  1. 00:43:618 (3) - If you're going to map this beat then hitsound it
  2. 00:57:986 (3) - Because this SV change is so drastic I would prefer an NC here as it came way out the blue for me. Add NC where else this applies

Whose ever Extra is above the first Insane, it's 5 am
  1. 00:21:512 (1) - mute the slider end?
  2. 00:56:881 (2) - NC
  3. 00:57:355 (3) - You sure you don't want a mini stream or something? feels anti climatic to have a slider + circle to map this kind of noise in an extra

Nev0
  1. 00:43:302 (3) - NC pattern could be optimised for better readability. Try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9783974
  2. 01:07:302 (1) - Not many ppl are going to read this as a 3/4 slider because of the spacing and that the shape makes it look smaller than it actually is
  3. 01:12:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - woah look who's too cool for 1,2,1,2 NCs
  4. 01:29:407 - I'm a bit sceptical why you didn't map this piano note when you mapped 01:29:723 (2,3)
  5. 01:31:618 (1) - end on white tick . It's really ambiguous how this ends on the red tick as you have such big spacing between 01:32:881 (1) in combination with the fact you ended the previous slider on the white tick too

Wew I'm finally near the end, guess I'll use an edgier colour
  1. xd nothing to say
[]Popping for the AR spread I mentioned in Hard and the slider structure thingy I stated in Easy

Call me back when everyone has replied. I've modded like 20 maps of this song this year jesus
Foxy Grandpa

Kisses wrote:

2 Furries Foxes i will end u
  1. 00:43:618 (3) - If you're going to map this beat then hitsound it
  2. 00:57:986 (3) - Because this SV change is so drastic I would prefer an NC here as it came way out the blue for me. Add NC where else this applies
Fixed both thank uuu

hi shira mom
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Artist:Hotaru Murasaki
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Source:Re:LieF〜親愛なるあなたへ〜
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Nevo

Kisses wrote:

Nev0
  1. 00:43:302 (3) - NC pattern could be optimised for better readability. Try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9783974
  2. 01:07:302 (1) - Not many ppl are going to read this as a 3/4 slider because of the spacing and that the shape makes it look smaller than it actually is
  3. 01:12:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - woah look who's too cool for 1,2,1,2 NCs pssh I used all my 1 2 ideas on yubi :^)
  4. 01:29:407 - I'm a bit sceptical why you didn't map this piano note when you mapped 01:29:723 (2,3)
  5. 01:31:618 (1) - end on white tick . It's really ambiguous how this ends on the red tick as you have such big spacing between 01:32:881 (1) in combination with the fact you ended the previous slider on the white tick too


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Lince Cosmico

Kisses wrote:

Whose ever Extra is above the first Insane, it's 5 am
  1. 00:21:512 (1) - mute the slider end? ok
  2. 00:56:881 (2) - NC ok
  3. 00:57:355 (3) - You sure you don't want a mini stream or something? feels anti climatic to have a slider + circle to map this kind of noise in an extra nah i just want to follow vocals at this point

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Shira

Kisses wrote:

Easy
  1. 00:42:355 (1,2) - Don't structure objects like this in Easies. Where the head 2 starts behind 1. It's extremely hard for a beginner to pick and read especially since the rhythm is somewhat ambiguous too.
  2. 00:42:355 (1) - concerning the rhythm above, how about this? https://i.imgur.com/dQcwiQk.png
  3. 00:44:881 (1) - ^
  4. 00:56:091 (2) - same as 00:42:355 (1,2) concerning structure
  5. 00:57:197 (3) - Deleting this would create a nice pause/break before the kiai and would in turn add more emphasis to the start of the chorus
  6. 01:15:197 (1) - Rhythm suggestion ~ More emphatic and flows better imho https://i.imgur.com/DbkPi9F.png
  7. 01:25:302 (1) - If you make this into a 2/1 reverse slider it would reflect the vocals a lot more. I had a feeling you want to portray the vocals with the way you mapped 01:22:776 (1,2,3) - but i was following piano for the examples
  8. 01:30:355 (1) - Suggestion to make 4/1 reverse ~

Hard
  1. AR 7. So the current gap between normal and hard is AR 4 and AR 8. Normally I'm not one to fuss about this but the gap between the ability to sight read is huge and 8 isn't really that necessary for this diff
  2. 00:37:302 (1) - Spacing feels a tad too high to say this is still the calm part. 1.8 DS is good enough for you?
  3. 00:40:776 (4) - Ok definitenly this one. Unlike above there is not really much to emphasis in the song
  4. 01:27:512 - Circle here would play nicely piano and such
  5. 01:31:618 (1) - NC not neccessary
  6. 01:29:091 (1,2,3,4) - Just my opinion as a mapper but I'm not really feeling this back and forth structure. I feel like a more linear pattern with lower spacing would be more appropriate (wew subjective modding with no explanation, great BN mod) i liek itttt
thx !
Lilyanna

Kisses wrote:

Lilyanna
  1. Try AR 4.5. It would give players a better bridge for the hard diff
  2. 00:43:460 (2) - rhythm suggestion ~ https://i.imgur.com/GneTy1v.png
  3. 01:05:091 (1,2) - It would be nice if you could use different structure here compared to 01:03:828 (3,4) . Because the music between these 2 pairs of sliders is very different there is a different flow direction also it goes from down to up shape is not everything to express the music
  4. 01:15:197 (1,2) - What do you think of something like this? https://i.imgur.com/YSUbT5T.png It would be a nice increase in object density especially since it's higher here in the easy
  5. 01:26:407 (1) - If you end this on circle 2 it would better reflect the vocals. It would also lower the object density which would be nice for the calm part i dont think it will better reflect the vocals since the vocals end where the slider end rn and that hitcircle is to emphasize the piano also its just one hitcircle its not so dense for a calm part
  6. 01:27:828 (1) - end on white tick


[]Popping for the AR spread I mentioned in Hard and the slider structure thingy I stated in Easy

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44,23,75197,5,12,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,92881,12,4,95407,0:0:0:0:
Yamicchi

Kisses wrote:

Yammichi
  1. 00:14:249 (6) - You know what would be really cool, if you stacked this on top of 00:14:565 (1) - idk I don't really like the flow of it
  2. 00:19:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I find this pattern a bit weird because it almost starts playing like a stack by the time you get to 6. Idk if that was your intended effect ya it's my intention. The spacing decrease gradually. I wasn't structuring the pattern for aesthetics though
  3. 00:52:144 (9) - same as 00:14:249 (6) if you turned 9 into a circle this slider has different intensity compare to that 6, so I don't think I would stack it xd
  4. 01:11:407 (1,1,1) - why didn't you adopt the same SV and spacing as before? I don't really feel the song is becoming less intense here having the section pretty much 1/2 slider heavy, the intensity of the section would be very flat with no emphasis. That's why I think I should lower the SV a bit to support the vocal better, also to emphasize the 01:12:670 - section better
  5. 01:29:407 - I'm a bit sceptical why you didn't map this piano note when you mapped 01:29:723 (3,4) - I don't think that is the piano. It's the bass guitar I believe. The piano shows up clearly on 01:28:934 (2,3,4) - as you can hear. So um, yeah I'm not gonna add it
Sorry for not applying anything and for the really late reply ><
Foxy Grandpa
tfw you wait a week to deny everything
Nevo
lmao
Topic Starter
Shira
lomao
Lilyanna
lmaoa
_handholding
lmaooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

call maridius for qual
Nevo
Topic Starter
Shira

Kisses wrote:

lmaooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

call maridius for qual
:nyab:
Foxy Grandpa
MaridiuS
Yamicchi went godmod
Topic Starter
Shira

MaridiuS wrote:

Yamicchi went godmod
thanks for teh kurisumasu puresento

and all the people in the set~
Lilyanna
first grats <3
Lince Cosmico
yup
Nevo
AAA IM AT AN AIRPORT AND CANT PLAY THE MAP ;-;
MaridiuS
cutest anime set 2k18 smh
Yamicchi
yayyyyy gratz Shiratoi owo
now do the MiRAi
Keru Kawashiro
omedetto
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