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Shinzo-

Verniy_Chan wrote:


Hi Shinzo~

Mod Via PM Request

7K = |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
| W (Whistle) | C (Clap) | F (Finish) |

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)
General
  1. Wadescreen plz~
  2. Hitsounds plz~
  3. Cek di diff MX : 01:42:779 - green line tidak snap, pindah ke 01:42:770 -
EZ

OD : 7 or 6,5
HP : 7 or 6,5
  1. 00:00:315 (315|0,315|6) - pindah ke |2| - |6| biar kesannya pitchnya gak sama dengan 00:01:770 -
  2. 00:31:588 (31588|1) - ganti jadi LN untuk suara vocal "eh~" seperti 00:33:042 (33042|0) -
  3. 00:33:406 - add note untuk konsistensi instrument utama
  4. 01:36:497 (96497|4,96860|4) - pertimbang agar patternya gak sama satu kolom berdasarkan pitch yang berbeda dimana 01:36:497 (96497|4) - kick dan 01:36:860 (96860|4) - snare
  5. 01:42:133 (102133|4,102860|2) - jadiin LN 1/1 biar pattern lebih berwarna dalam imajinasi lel, ini juga 01:44:315 (104315|3) -
    02:52:315 (172315|3,172860|3) - bagian ini tidak luput dari pandanganku 'w' ?
Notes : Hampir semua balance patternnya
NM

OD : 7
HP : 7
  1. 00:18:860 (18860|4) - rasanya gak pantas kalau ini masuk dalam lingkup stair patternya mengikuti dari 00:18:315 (18315|1,18497|2,18679|3) - karena pitchnya mulai berganti baik itu intrument maupun vocal atau alasan variasi, imo 00:18:860 (18860|4) - pindah ke |6|.
    02:37:406 (157406|0,157406|6,157770|0,157770|6) -
  2. 00:26:133 (26133|4) - pindah note untuk suara snare ini ke |4| untuk menghindari suara synth di 00:25:770 (25770|4) -
  3. 00:32:679 (32679|6,32860|2) - entah kenapa layeringnya agak sedikit canggung atau sulit, mungkin 00:32:679 (32679|6) - dipendekin sampai red line
  4. 00:51:224 (51224|5,51224|1,51588|1,51588|5) - sama seperti penjelasan sebelumnya untuk suara bass+kick konflik dengan snare, imo 00:51:588 (51588|5,51588|1) - pindah ke |1| - |7| atau 00:51:224 (51224|5,51224|1) - |1| - |7|, 00:50:860 (50860|0) - pindah ke |2| iya sengaja gini biar lebih ke rasa yg vocal ny. kick snare emg di layer tapi lebih fokus pattern ny buat vocal ny part ini
  5. 00:56:679 (56679|5,56679|2,56860|4,57042|3) - agak sulit layering LN begini untuk normal diff, mungkin 00:56:860 (56860|4) - abaikan suara vocal ini
    Sama halnya bagian ini:
    00:59:951 (59951|0,59951|2,60315|2,60315|0) - kalau 1 dari 2 gpp sih, tapi ini keduanya-duanya hmm..
    01:34:497 (94497|5,94497|1,94860|1,94860|5) -
    02:02:497 (122497|5,122497|1,122860|5,122860|1) -
    02:11:224 (131224|6,131224|4,131588|4,131588|6) -
    02:34:497 (154497|5,154497|1,154860|5,154860|1) -
    02:46:133 (166133|0,166133|2,166497|2,166497|0) -
  6. 01:45:770 (105770|3) - LN ? untuk suara long bell? sperti 01:42:860 (102860|2,104315|2) - ceritanya pas disini udh fokus ke rapny
Notes : Good pattern walaupun agak sedikit sulit saya mainin~
HD

OD : 7,5
HP : 7,5
  1. 00:20:497 (20497|2) - 00:32:133 (32133|4) - jadiin LN biar konsisten dengan pattern sebelumnya 00:17:588 (17588|0) - dan sesudahnya 00:27:770 (27770|3) - atau mungkin karena kesengajaan
  2. 01:31:042 (91042|4,91224|4,91406|2,91588|2) - sepertinya ini tidak relevan pitchnya, karena berbeda terkecuali bagian 01:31:224 (91224|4,91406|5) - imo hindari mini jack untuk pitch yang berbeda. Sama halnya bagian:
    01:32:497 (92497|1,92679|1) - dimana 01:32:679 (92679|1,92860|5) - cocok jadi shield ceritanya kan 01:31:224 - pitch ny 3 kali sama, jadi untuk menghindari same collumn 3 kali ya dibikin dua kali yakni 01:31:406 (91406|2,91588|2) - dan 01:32:497 (92497|1,92679|1) -
  3. 02:34:133 (154133|2,154133|6,154133|4,154133|0) - lebih seram dari MX untuk timing yang sama, wkwkwk, tapi gak masalah huehuehue
Notes : Lumayan solid diff ini, cakep
MX

OD : 8
HP : 8
  1. 00:50:315 - terlihat overmap, mungkin hilangin 1 note untuk konsistensi suara kick+instrument. Sama halnya dengan bagian yang lain seperti:
    01:01:951 - 02:01:588 - 02:13:224 - 02:36:497 - 02:48:133 - ga ah enak gini wkwkwkkw
  2. 01:23:770 (83770|1,83951|1,84133|1,84315|1) - mungkin anchor di kolom |2| ini bisa dipertimbangkan untuk di hindari
  3. 00:56:133 - add note untuk konsistensi layering 2 note untuk suara kick, sama halnya bagian:
    00:56:497 - 02:07:406 - 02:07:770 - 02:42:315 - 02:42:679 - ceritanya ini banyak LN jadi kick 1 note ae
  4. 02:34:133 - LN kurang greget kalau gak di tambah lagi seperti pattern sebelumnya break dikit lah :'v
Notes : Luar binasa keren patternya :3

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Score
85

(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously
Хорошо~ Good Luck..
ayy thanks verniy mod ny !! :D :D :D :D no reply = <3

Amiichii wrote:

Hai mz 'w')/
  • [MX]
  1. 00:43:497 - tambahkan hithat? ini aja dikasi 00:43:860 (43860|4) - :roll: ngeng yang 00:43:860 - kan jelas ini drum bujkan hithat
  2. 01:12:224 (72224|1) - ini tambahin LN? mayan keras soalnya kyak 01:12:042 (72042|1,72042|0,72133|5,72133|4,72315|3,72315|4,72497|4,72497|5) -
    added in 01:12:588 - instead
    [HD]
  3. 00:31:588 (31588|2,31770|5) - ga dibuat jack aja? same pitch

    [NM]
  4. 00:07:224 (7224|1) - ini taroh 6 aja si. buat balance mirrornya ini 00:04:315 (4315|1,4315|3) - ga ah xD

    dah dah. masi et mapnya

goodluck
thanks ami.. tunggu mod ane ya :) :) :) no reply = <3
Niks
Good mappppp

offset 1770 -> 1758
ExNeko
quick mod

MX
00:22:133 (22133|6,22133|5,22133|1,22133|0) - And 00:22:315 (22315|2,22315|4,22315|1) - is the same sound, Make the same number of note
00:23:770 (23770|3) - ^, add note
00:25:588 (25588|3,26133|5) - Add a note because CLAP, same like here 00:27:042 (27042|4,27042|5,27042|2) -
00:29:951 (29951|1) - add a note
00:36:679 (36679|2) - ^
01:04:315 (64315|4) - move to col4
Add a note on 01:09:406 (69406|4) -
01:38:133 (98133|5) - Make a ln
01:40:679 (100679|3) - Add note on here, same like 01:42:133 (102133|1,102133|3,102133|5) - triple
02:31:224 (151224|6) - col6
HD
01:09:588 (69588|0) - to col4
01:15:588 (75588|3) - make a note
This diff seems too simple, so I suggest you put all the clap sound made triple note
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Niks wrote:

Good mappppp

offset 1770 -> 1758
ok thanks for the star :)

ExNeko wrote:

quick mod

MX
00:22:133 (22133|6,22133|5,22133|1,22133|0) - And 00:22:315 (22315|2,22315|4,22315|1) - is the same sound, Make the same number of note it's different, 00:22:133 - has a cymbal and 00:22:315 - not
00:23:770 (23770|3) - ^, add note
00:25:588 (25588|3,26133|5) - Add a note because CLAP, same like here 00:27:042 (27042|4,27042|5,27042|2) - on 00:27:042 - it's 3 note because there's 00:27:042 (27042|4,27042|2,27224|0,27406|6,27406|4,27588|2,27770|4) - this sound
00:29:951 (29951|1) - add a note
00:36:679 (36679|2) - ^ i think 3 note is enough
01:04:315 (64315|4) - move to col4
Add a note on 01:09:406 (69406|4) - no bcs no kick/snare sound
01:38:133 (98133|5) - Make a ln no sorry
01:40:679 (100679|3) - Add note on here, same like 01:42:133 (102133|1,102133|3,102133|5) - triple on 01:42:133 - it has electrical sound while 01:40:679 - just a kick
02:31:224 (151224|6) - col6
HD
01:09:588 (69588|0) - to col4 no for pattern
01:15:588 (75588|3) - make a note
This diff seems too simple, so I suggest you put all the clap sound made triple note no, for the spread diff between this and MX
Thanks for mod Neko :) :) :) :)
No Reply = <3
_VianK_
yo...kak shin.... m4m req. via irc
1|2|3|4|5|6|7

EZ

00:13:576 (13576|2) - gw bingung ini ngikutin apaan? napa nggak djadiin Ln aja :v dengan akhir disini 00:13:758 -

01:32:485 - mending kayak

01:38:485 - tambah satu note lagi biar greget
diff yang ini udah bagus, makanya dikit :p

NM

01:25:939 - add satu note

01:30:848 - sini juga

01:38:485 - ^

01:39:939 - ^

02:58:848 (178848|3) - jadiin ln

00:16:670 - add satu note

00:01:758 - jadiin triple

HD


00:12:030 (12030|1,12121|6,12121|2,12212|5,12303|2,12303|4,12394|1,12485|4,12485|0,12576|5,12667|0,12667|6,12758|1,12848|6,12848|2,12939|5,13030|2,13030|4,13121|1,13212|4,13212|0,13303|5) - Chartnya unik :V

01:12:667 (72667|2) - jadiin LN aja

01:12:667 (72667|2) - agak garing end nya mending dibuat satu LN kayak 01:14:848 (74848|3) - tapi bukan ditengah saran ane loh.....itu mah cuman saran

01:27:576 - kenapa nggak kayak 01:26:121 -

01:42:485 - add note di tengah, efek nya gede nih

01:44:667 - ama 01:44:848 - add note di 7

01:53:758 (113758|0,113758|6,113939|1,114121|2,114121|6,114303|3,114303|6,114485|4,114485|6,114667|2,114848|6,114848|0,115030|5,115121|4,115212|3,115212|0,115394|6,115394|0,115576|5,115576|0,115758|4) - mending di remap aja kak, agak ngebingungin soalnya

MX


00:00:303 - add satu note enaknya sih di 1 aja

00:07:212 (7212|4,7394|6) - lurusin aja trus buat jadi 2 ln

00:33:939 (33939|5,33939|4) - pindahin ke tangan lain, ato ngga satu note aja

00:35:394 (35394|2) - pindahin ke 4
itu aja dari ane kak, dikit? ya iyalah, udah bagus :)

GOOD LUCK ;)
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Ridho 2307 wrote:

yo...kak shin.... m4m req. via irc
1|2|3|4|5|6|7

EZ

00:13:576 (13576|2) - gw bingung ini ngikutin apaan? napa nggak djadiin Ln aja :v dengan akhir disini 00:13:758 - ini jelas ngikut kicknya

01:32:485 - mending kayak duh maaf itu malah ga balance buat tangan

01:38:485 - tambah satu note lagi biar greget he, 1 aja ya soalny diff normal juga cuman 1
diff yang ini udah bagus, makanya dikit :p

NM

01:25:939 - add satu note maaf gangikut suara itu

01:30:848 - sini juga ^

01:38:485 - ^ suara ny kek gitu enakan kalo 1 note doang

01:39:939 - ^ ^

02:58:848 (178848|3) - jadiin ln ini kek pas suara sdiaoisdjfpiasdjgs 02:57:758 (177758|6,178121|4,178485|2) - nya abis jadi mending dibedain yakni dengan membuat ini note biasa bukan LN

00:16:670 - add satu note maaf ane ngikut vokal bukan suara itu

00:01:758 - jadiin triple no, ini nm

HD


00:12:030 (12030|1,12121|6,12121|2,12212|5,12303|2,12303|4,12394|1,12485|4,12485|0,12576|5,12667|0,12667|6,12758|1,12848|6,12848|2,12939|5,13030|2,13030|4,13121|1,13212|4,13212|0,13303|5) - Chartnya unik :V thanks

01:12:667 (72667|2) - jadiin LN aja

01:12:667 (72667|2) - agak garing end nya mending dibuat satu LN kayak 01:14:848 (74848|3) - tapi bukan ditengah saran ane loh.....itu mah cuman saran sudah dijelaskan di diff nm :v

01:27:576 - kenapa nggak kayak 01:26:121 - fixed

01:42:485 - add note di tengah, efek nya gede nih iya tapi ane ga ngikut suara hithatny

01:44:667 - ama 01:44:848 - add note di 7 ^

01:53:758 (113758|0,113758|6,113939|1,114121|2,114121|6,114303|3,114303|6,114485|4,114485|6,114667|2,114848|6,114848|0,115030|5,115121|4,115212|3,115212|0,115394|6,115394|0,115576|5,115576|0,115758|4) - mending di remap aja kak, agak ngebingungin soalnya jelas kok 01:53:758 (113758|6,114121|6,114303|6,114485|6) - ngikut vocal 01:53:758 (113758|0,113939|1,114121|2,114303|3,114485|4,114667|2) - ngikut drum

MX


00:00:303 - add satu note enaknya sih di 1 aja nanti dipikirin lagi

00:07:212 (7212|4,7394|6) - lurusin aja trus buat jadi 2 ln ok leh ugha

00:33:939 (33939|5,33939|4) - pindahin ke tangan lain, ato ngga satu note aja no sorry biar konsisten 00:33:758 (33758|5,33939|5) -

00:35:394 (35394|2) - pindahin ke 4 no u ruin the pattern
itu aja dari ane kak, dikit? ya iyalah, udah bagus :)

GOOD LUCK ;)
thanks mod nya :) :)
tunggu mod ane ya
Syadow-
mod mod
EZ
00:03:939 (3939|1,4303|1,4667|0,5030|0) - rada aneh sih imo wkwkw tp ga tau w harus digimanain

00:25:758 (25758|4) - move col 6, kosong bgt nih col =w= pas kok sama vocal nya

01:15:212 - sama

01:25:576 (85576|4,85758|5) - ctrl j , pitch nya naik turun

02:17:030 (137030|0) - 02:17:576 (137576|6) - sengaja buat beda yak sma 01:06:303 (66303|0) - ? mending samain buat cover suara woeee :v
NM
00:11:939 - gmana kalo buat burst aja mending kek http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8562535

01:04:121 (64121|2,64485|1) - ga imbang :v 01:04:303 (64303|0) - remove ini, single double single double kan 'w' ga terlalu keras jg ._.

01:23:212 - buat burst lebih ena owo)b

01:36:848 - gmana kalau gini http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8562565 , biar imbang soalnya disini 01:35:939 (95939|5,96121|5,96303|4,96485|4) - berat kanan

02:15:576 - single owo 02:15:576 (135576|6) - apus aja ini

02:18:485 (138485|5,138667|4,138848|6,139030|4,139212|5) - wadaw :v gmana kalo gini http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8562599

02:50:485 - sama
HD
00:11:939 - tak terduga astaga :v kool

00:46:848 - tbh lebih asik yg diff NM ini

01:24:758 (84758|2) - rada aneh wkwkw

01:29:758 (89758|2,89939|1) - ctrl j lebih ena
MX
01:42:121 (102121|3) - LN sampai 01:42:485 - buat vocal sama ada suara tik

01:47:212 - ada suara dek, jadi bisa add note

tbc :3 di suruh udahan wkwkw
gud lak >w<)b
tet tet tet happii :"v antek2 kipop, hhhh w kena sedikit virusnya mas shin ,-,
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Syadow- wrote:

mod mod
EZ
00:03:939 (3939|1,4303|1,4667|0,5030|0) - rada aneh sih imo wkwkw tp ga tau w harus digimanain fixed

00:25:758 (25758|4) - move col 6, kosong bgt nih col =w= pas kok sama vocal nya fixed in another way

01:15:212 - sama sama

01:25:576 (85576|4,85758|5) - ctrl j , pitch nya naik turun ok

02:17:030 (137030|0) - 02:17:576 (137576|6) - sengaja buat beda yak sma 01:06:303 (66303|0) - ? mending samain buat cover suara woeee :v okok
NM
00:11:939 - gmana kalo buat burst aja mending kek http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8562535 hmm keep dulu ya

01:04:121 (64121|2,64485|1) - ga imbang :v 01:04:303 (64303|0) - remove ini, single double single double kan 'w' ga terlalu keras jg ._. nice

01:23:212 - buat burst lebih ena owo)b huehue

01:36:848 - gmana kalau gini http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8562565 , biar imbang soalnya disini 01:35:939 (95939|5,96121|5,96303|4,96485|4) - berat kanan oh ya fixed on 01:36:485 - too

02:15:576 - single owo 02:15:576 (135576|6) - apus aja ini yo

02:18:485 (138485|5,138667|4,138848|6,139030|4,139212|5) - wadaw :v gmana kalo gini http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8562599 fixed tapi gangikut gambar h3h3

02:50:485 - sama yow
HD
00:11:939 - tak terduga astaga :v kool *

00:46:848 - tbh lebih asik yg diff NM ini fixed la byk yg komplen

01:24:758 (84758|2) - rada aneh wkwkw thanks

01:29:758 (89758|2,89939|1) - ctrl j lebih ena ok
MX
01:42:121 (102121|3) - LN sampai 01:42:485 - buat vocal sama ada suara tik ceritanya mulai dari 01:42:121 - itu suara mola a aa mola :'v nya itu jadi gamake LN

01:47:212 - ada suara dek, jadi bisa add note tapi drum nya abis disitu ._.

tbc :3
tengs yaaa :D :D :D
lenpai
accessibility post for m4m
Virtue-

Lenfried- wrote:

accessibility post for m4m
m4m with me pls

here i come =w=
how to mod 7k? :thonkeng:

General


- Metadata : OK!
- BPM/Offset : OK!
- BG/Video : OK!
- Hitsound : OK! pls apply in every diff
- Files : OK!

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  • [MEKS]
  1. 00:13:121 (13121|5) - move to 5?
  2. 00:13:212 (13212|4) - move to 1?
  3. 01:12:576 (72576|2,72576|1) - panjangin sampe ke red mungkin, abs itu di tambahin LN lagi sampe di white
  4. 01:11:576 (71576|0,71667|3,71758|1,71848|4) - jadiin LN juga
  5. dari 01:44:303 (104303|0) - sampe 01:45:030 (105030|0) - napa kosong? isi atuh, map yg hi hatny
  6. dari 01:47:212 - sampe 01:47:939 (107939|1) - napa kosong juga dah, isi di tiap 1/2 pake LN (ikutin vocal)
  7. 02:13:939 - sama 02:14:030 - knp g diisi? (ini tiap kiai hi hatny jarang di map y?)
  8. 02:58:212 (178212|6,178212|0,178303|2,178394|1,178394|4,178485|5,178485|0,178576|2,178667|6,178667|3,178758|1,178758|4,178848|0,178848|6) -
    agak susah gitu y :v mungkin kek gini http://puu.sh/wH2Eb/675305bfa1.jpg
    [HD]
  9. 00:07:576 (7576|3) - move to 3
  10. 00:07:939 (7939|3) - ^
  11. 02:57:758 (177758|6,177848|4,177939|6,178030|4) - LN juga pls

mungkin segini ae..... pls, how to mod 7k? =w=
Topic Starter
Shinzo-
thanks for mod virtueee :D
Umo-
mod request from chat
1|2|3|4|5|6|7
You should check AI mod because tags conflict in some difficulties
NM
00:13:030 (13030|3) - imo that note fits better in 6th column
00:29:939 (29939|0) - remove its not really necessary
00:33:939 (33939|5) - move to 7 since you made jacks with that sound at other parts of the song
00:48:303 - love this part
00:49:939 (49939|3) - move to 3, it feels better while playing to me
01:33:576 (93576|5) - forgot jackhammer here?
01:50:848 (110848|5,111212|5,111576|1,111939|1) - I think that those notes need to be stacked because you didn't stack this notes 01:49:394 (109394|6,109758|4,110121|2,110485|0) -
02:21:394 - meybe add a note here because vocals suddenly get louder
HD
00:07:576 (7576|0) - 00:09:030 (9030|6) - I think you dont need those LN's. I dont see what they follow. You followed vocals with normal notes so idk
00:21:030 - add a note, theres a snare sound
01:40:121 (100121|1) - what does this follow? I dont hear anything, if you want you can move it to 01:40:303 - so it follows the clap fade out
02:11:212 - meybe make this 4 note chord because the vocals are stronger at that part + finish hitsound?
02:58:848 (178848|1) - make this a LN, and extend it to 02:59:121 - ?
MX
00:00:485 - I dont really hear any sound here with 100% speed so meybe remove that note
didn't found anything else D:
Hope to see this map ranked, take my star '3')/
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

imtdb1 wrote:

mod request from chat
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You should check AI mod because tags conflict in some difficulties oh fixed
NM
00:13:030 (13030|3) - imo that note fits better in 6th column no sorry
00:29:939 (29939|0) - remove its not really necessary it's for the drumroll
00:33:939 (33939|5) - move to 7 since you made jacks with that sound at other parts of the song oh didn't notice this
00:48:303 - love this part ty
00:49:939 (49939|3) - move to 3, it feels better while playing to me emmm keep
01:33:576 (93576|5) - forgot jackhammer here? yea
01:50:848 (110848|5,111212|5,111576|1,111939|1) - I think that those notes need to be stacked because you didn't stack this notes 01:49:394 (109394|6,109758|4,110121|2,110485|0) - bcs the sound is fading
02:21:394 - meybe add a note here because vocals suddenly get louder i'll re-consider
HD
00:07:576 (7576|0) - 00:09:030 (9030|6) - I think you dont need those LN's. I dont see what they follow. You followed vocals with normal notes so idk emmm there's a sound tho
00:21:030 - add a note, theres a snare sound it's just a hithat
01:40:121 (100121|1) - what does this follow? I dont hear anything, if you want you can move it to 01:40:303 - so it follows the clap fade out i follow the electrical sound, i add the whole song
02:11:212 - meybe make this 4 note chord because the vocals are stronger at that part + finish hitsound? actually it is why it's 3 note
02:58:848 (178848|1) - make this a LN, and extend it to 02:59:121 - ? no i'll keep this
MX
00:00:485 - I dont really hear any sound here with 100% speed so meybe remove that note okay
didn't found anything else D:
Hope to see this map ranked, take my star '3')/
thank you for the mod imtdb :D also for the star >w< <3
Draftnell
m4m ngeng ~

[EZ]
00:07:212 (7212|5) - yakin gak di pindah ke note 7 biar nge avoid jack ini 00:06:848 - ? lagian itu beda pitch juga
sisa udah bagus :p

[NM]
fuk ini apa yg di mod lel...udh bagus bngt wkwk

[HD]
00:15:939 - LN ny berasa nymbung loh...gk di add ?
00:27:576 - ^
00:46:848 - gk double note ? like 00:47:212 - 00:47:576 - and etc
01:57:212 (117212|3,117485|3) - to hard lel...bisa di avoid in pattern kek gitu ? well ane yg liat ntah knp rada kesel gitu wkwk


dah mungkin itu aja :v
untuk MX skip dah cause w gak tau musti mod ngapaen disitu :p karena LN ny playable sih


#GL
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Draftnell wrote:

m4m ngeng ~

[EZ]
00:07:212 (7212|5) - yakin gak di pindah ke note 7 biar nge avoid jack ini 00:06:848 - ? lagian itu beda pitch juga tadinya pengen jackny nyambung tapi baru nyadar part laen kaga jack huehue
sisa udah bagus :p

[NM]
fuk ini apa yg di mod lel...udh bagus bngt wkwk ty hehe

[HD]
00:15:939 - LN ny berasa nymbung loh...gk di add ? ok deh
00:27:576 - ^ ^
00:46:848 - gk double note ? like 00:47:212 - 00:47:576 - and etc fixed
01:57:212 (117212|3,117485|3) - to hard lel...bisa di avoid in pattern kek gitu ? well ane yg liat ntah knp rada kesel gitu wkwk ane keep dulu ya tapi nanti ane pikirin lagi


dah mungkin itu aja :v
untuk MX skip dah cause w gak tau musti mod ngapaen disitu :p karena LN ny playable sih


#GL
thanksss :'v
SpectorDG

Normal Mod



Column : |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|


[EZ]
  1. Everything looks good!
[NM]
  1. I suggested that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8582041
[HD]
  1. 00:00:848 (848|5,1212|6) - Up they on blue lines? Look at MX's first
  2. 00:19:030 - Why you added to LN here? MX have only 1
  3. 00:46:848 (46848|3) - Let this note for solo because players can't feel this vocal so 00:46:667 (46667|1,46758|2) - Move to [1][2]
  4. 01:27:576 (87576|4) - Move to [7] or [5697569078] :^
[MX]
  1. 00:00:848 (848|6,1212|6) - Very lower sounds it be needed?
  2. 00:04:303 - How about add LN's for here? Nice vocaly LNs
  3. 00:25:030 (25030|0,25212|0) - Jackie chan for what? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8581798
  4. 00:32:121 - I think it's will be better for first vocal same as after 1/4 LN https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8581813
  5. 00:46:212 (46212|1,46212|2,46394|0,46394|1,46576|2,46576|1,46758|1,46758|0) - Ctrl+G ? more take easy for this
  6. 01:57:485 (117485|5,117667|5,117848|5,118030|5) - There are focused only right hand?
  7. 02:06:848 - Don't leave this kawaii piano sound please
  8. 02:23:758 (143758|0) - Move to [4] for the balance
  9. 02:26:303 (146303|2,146485|1) - Ctrl+G? same reason as before
:ok_hand: :lol:
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

supekuta wrote:

Normal Mod



Column : |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|


[EZ]
  1. Everything looks good!
[NM]
  1. I suggested that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8582041 okay
[HD]
  1. 00:00:848 (848|5,1212|6) - Up they on blue lines? Look at MX's first i'll reconsider
  2. 00:19:030 - Why you added to LN here? MX have only 1 becos MX don't layer vocal as LN
  3. 00:46:848 (46848|3) - Let this note for solo because players can't feel this vocal so 00:46:667 (46667|1,46758|2) - Move to [1][2] emmm no
  4. 01:27:576 (87576|4) - Move to [7] or [5697569078] :^ moved to 7
[MX]
  1. 00:00:848 (848|6,1212|6) - Very lower sounds it be needed? yes it's needed
  2. 00:04:303 - How about add LN's for here? Nice vocaly LNs no becos there's SV and i prefer use SV than LN on that part
  3. 00:25:030 (25030|0,25212|0) - Jackie chan for what? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8581798 for kick
  4. 00:32:121 - I think it's will be better for first vocal same as after 1/4 LN https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8581813 re-arranged
  5. 00:46:212 (46212|1,46212|2,46394|0,46394|1,46576|2,46576|1,46758|1,46758|0) - Ctrl+G ? more take easy for this i think it just the same, i'll keep it
  6. 01:57:485 (117485|5,117667|5,117848|5,118030|5) - There are focused only right hand? i think it's ok since 01:56:667 - focused on left hand
  7. 02:06:848 - Don't leave this kawaii piano sound please what piano sound ? u mean the uuuuuu~ then i already layer it.. that long LN
  8. 02:23:758 (143758|0) - Move to [4] for the balance this part isn't that hard so iwon't really care about hand balance and care more to pattern instead. tho i already balanced it on the next pattern
  9. 02:26:303 (146303|2,146485|1) - Ctrl+G? same reason as before same
:ok_hand: :lol:
ok thanks for for spee :) :) :)
DustMoon
Hi~Shinzo-
1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
[/box]
MX
00:08:303 (8303|3) - move to 6,00:07:939 (7939|3,8303|3,8667|3) - not put same col maybe better
00:20:848 (20848|1) - move to 1 and00:20:848 (20848|0) - move to 2
00:25:212 (25212|0) - move to 2 to aviod jack
00:32:667 (32667|2) - move to 4 this sound pitch is higher than 00:32:485 (32485|2) -
01:11:939 (71939|6,72030|1,72030|0,72121|5,72121|4,72212|1,72303|6,72303|3,72303|4,72394|0,72485|4,72485|5,72576|2,72576|1,72667|3) - wow
01:28:212 (88212|2,88303|2) - why jack?
01:47:030 (107030|0,107030|5,107076|1,107121|2,107167|3) - Ctrl+h
02:57:758 (177758|6,177848|3,177939|5,178030|2,178121|4,178212|0,178212|6,178303|2,178394|1,178394|4,178485|5,178485|0,178576|2,178667|6,178667|3,178758|1,178758|4,178848|6,178848|0) - DDDDJ
Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

DustMoon wrote:

Hi~Shinzo-
1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
MX
00:08:303 (8303|3) - move to 6,00:07:939 (7939|3,8303|3,8667|3) - not put same col maybe better emm sorry actually it will break the pattern
00:20:848 (20848|1) - move to 1 and00:20:848 (20848|0) - move to 2 oh good
00:25:212 (25212|0) - move to 2 to aviod jack actually that jack is intended
00:32:667 (32667|2) - move to 4 this sound pitch is higher than 00:32:485 (32485|2) - sorry but this part is fits with jack better
01:11:939 (71939|6,72030|1,72030|0,72121|5,72121|4,72212|1,72303|6,72303|3,72303|4,72394|0,72485|4,72485|5,72576|2,72576|1,72667|3) - wow owo
01:28:212 (88212|2,88303|2) - why jack? background vocal
01:47:030 (107030|0,107030|5,107076|1,107121|2,107167|3) - Ctrl+h why ? D: it will break the pattern
02:57:758 (177758|6,177848|3,177939|5,178030|2,178121|4,178212|0,178212|6,178303|2,178394|1,178394|4,178485|5,178485|0,178576|2,178667|6,178667|3,178758|1,178758|4,178848|6,178848|0) - DDDDJ :3
Good luck! :)
ok thanks for mod DustMoon :) :) :)
Shima Rin
Hi, Mod requested through PM. Glad u come back >w<

[HD]
  1. 00:00:212 (212|2) - better not to put this note cuz you ignore such sounds on the blue line like 00:00:212 (212|2) - 00:00:212 (212|2) -
  2. 00:10:121 (10121|1) - better make this a LN to 00:10:485 - for the crash sound
  3. 00:15:939 - u definitely miss a LN here
  4. 01:15:212 - u have to put a LN here too like these 01:14:848 (74848|3,75030|5) -
[MX]
  1. 00:15:758 (15758|0,15758|2,15939|4,16121|2) - 00:18:667 (18667|5,18848|4,18848|0,19030|1) - 00:21:576 (21576|6,21576|3,21758|1,21939|4) - these LNs should represent the same sounds but u use inconsistent note amount, which is really confusing. I suggest u make them into consistent double LNs maybe
  2. 00:32:758 - but add a 1/4 LN here too for the disk sound
  3. 00:46:848 (46848|3,47212|2,47212|4,47576|5,47576|1,47576|3,47939|2,47939|0,47939|6,47939|4) - Wow a really good sync with the lyric XD in fact i can only understand the lyric here tbh
  4. 01:01:939 - here should be a triple instead of a quadraple due to the fact that u put triple on snare and quadraple on kicks and this is a snare XD
  5. 01:15:212 - miss a 1/2 LN
  6. 02:01:576 - same as 01:01:939 -
  7. 02:36:485 - ^
Sorry that I suck at 7K so maybe I can only mod these above QAQ. Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Tofu1222 wrote:

Hi, Mod requested through PM. Glad u come back >w< ayyy xD

[HD]
  1. 00:00:212 (212|2) - better not to put this note cuz you ignore such sounds on the blue line like 00:00:212 (212|2) - 00:00:212 (212|2) - i put it bcs it's 1/8 while 00:00:939 - and 00:01:303 - is 1/4
  2. 00:10:121 (10121|1) - better make this a LN to 00:10:485 - for the crash sound i'll reconsider since 00:10:303 (10303|4) - this sound is continuing in this part, not like before.
  3. 00:15:939 - u definitely miss a LN here if you see it again the layering on this part already consistent but... yea i think people will be confused xD so yea i decided to add LN here but also changed the layering
  4. 01:15:212 - u have to put a LN here too like these 01:14:848 (74848|3,75030|5) - i think make it in a normal note would fit better to emphasize the sound that kinda stoppng for a while
[MX]
  1. 00:15:758 (15758|0,15758|2,15939|4,16121|2) - 00:18:667 (18667|5,18848|4,18848|0,19030|1) - 00:21:576 (21576|6,21576|3,21758|1,21939|4) - these LNs should represent the same sounds but u use inconsistent note amount, which is really confusing. I suggest u make them into consistent double LNs maybe for this part i use 2 1 2 1 LN bcs it's 1/2 i think it's already consistent
  2. 00:32:758 - but add a 1/4 LN here too for the disk sound okay~
  3. 00:46:848 (46848|3,47212|2,47212|4,47576|5,47576|1,47576|3,47939|2,47939|0,47939|6,47939|4) - Wow a really good sync with the lyric XD in fact i can only understand the lyric here tbh thanks~ yea me too xD (and "HAPPY!")
  4. 01:01:939 - here should be a triple instead of a quadraple due to the fact that u put triple on snare and quadraple on kicks and this is a snare XD aw i didn't notice that thanks ~
  5. 01:15:212 - miss a 1/2 LN *already explained in HD*
  6. 02:01:576 - same as 01:01:939 - yea
  7. 02:36:485 - ^ ^
Sorry that I suck at 7K so maybe I can only mod these above QAQ. Good Luck!
thanks for mod tofu :) :) :) :)
Wonki
Hello

MX
00:06:848 (6848|0) - why you put in here. Perfunctorily, it should be normal note at a clap sound.

00:07:758 (7758|2,7939|3,8121|2,8303|3,8485|4,8667|3,8848|4) - Looks like it's a difficult pattern to play, either left handed or right handed. If you think this map is a 4-step difficulty, maybe you'd better change it for people who aren't accustomed to space key yet.

00:09:758 (9758|3) - it's better to change normal note, Whatever this sounds mean.

00:24:485 (24485|6) - delete. Same sound 00:24:848 -

00:25:212 (25212|4) - move to 6 for consistency

00:36:121 (36121|3) - same as 00:24:485 (24485|6) -

00:45:848 (45848|5,45939|4,45939|3,46030|6,46121|4,46121|5,46303|5,46303|6) - if the player is right handedness, will be twisted. You'd better change layouts for the player instead of focusing on pitch.

00:46:848 (46848|3,47212|4,47212|2,47576|3,47576|1,47576|5,47939|2,47939|4,47939|6,47939|0) - 1 2 3 4 xd

00:58:667 (58667|0,58667|1) - move to 6,7. why don't you make jack? it will be fun

02:09:939 (129939|5,129939|6) - same here. why dont you try to make jack

good luck !
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Wonki wrote:

Hello

MX
00:06:848 (6848|0) - why you put in here. Perfunctorily, it should be normal note at a clap sound. aw, i make it LN for a confusing LN pattern but ok then, to prevent misunderstand

00:07:758 (7758|2,7939|3,8121|2,8303|3,8485|4,8667|3,8848|4) - Looks like it's a difficult pattern to play, either left handed or right handed. If you think this map is a 4-step difficulty, maybe you'd better change it for people who aren't accustomed to space key yet. i'll reconsider

00:09:758 (9758|3) - it's better to change normal note, Whatever this sounds mean. same as before but ok

00:24:485 (24485|6) - delete. Same sound 00:24:848 - oh yea nice catch

00:25:212 (25212|4) - move to 6 for consistency i think it's already consistent, you may look again

00:36:121 (36121|3) - same as 00:24:485 (24485|6) - ok

00:45:848 (45848|5,45939|4,45939|3,46030|6,46121|4,46121|5,46303|5,46303|6) - if the player is right handedness, will be twisted. You'd better change layouts for the player instead of focusing on pitch. it's ok i'm a right handed and i think it's fine.

00:46:848 (46848|3,47212|4,47212|2,47576|3,47576|1,47576|5,47939|2,47939|4,47939|6,47939|0) - 1 2 3 4 xd xd

00:58:667 (58667|0,58667|1) - move to 6,7. why don't you make jack? it will be fun i'll re-consider

02:09:939 (129939|5,129939|6) - same here. why dont you try to make jack ^

good luck !
thanks for mod wonki :) :) :)
Remuring
Hi shinzo nyan 'w'

MX
00:04:121 (4121|4) - i think it is more natural that there are no notes in there
00:18:303 - you need to add notes here 00:29:939 (29939|1,29939|0,29985|2,30030|3,30076|4) - because it is like this.
01:15:394 (75394|2) - here too, as here 00:04:121 (4121|4) -
01:22:485 - how about adding a note here?
01:41:212 - add note

this map is really fun xd
good luck nyan >w<

shoooot star
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

R e m u r i n g wrote:

Hi shinzo nyan 'w'

MX
00:04:121 (4121|4) - i think it is more natural that there are no notes in there ok then
00:18:303 - you need to add notes here 00:29:939 (29939|1,29939|0,29985|2,30030|3,30076|4) - because it is like this. ohyah
01:15:394 (75394|2) - here too, as here 00:04:121 (4121|4) - ok
01:22:485 - how about adding a note here? ih nice catch
01:41:212 - add note yep

this map is really fun xd
good luck nyan >w<

shoooot star
all accepted >w< thanks for mod remmm <3
also thanks for the star :D
Maxus
M4M
[MX]
00:10:121 (10121|4) - Felt that you need to change this into LN, as there's still vocal that should be made sync with 00:09:939 (9939|0,9939|6) -
00:13:121 (13121|5,13212|4) - Felt like this part is kinda unsymmetric, will be better if you switch column so that the entire pattern be more symmetric each other.
00:17:576 (17576|0,17758|2) - Switch column them? to make it at the same column as 00:16:667 (16667|2,16667|5) - , as you also do the same at 00:19:576 (19576|1,19576|4,20485|4,20485|1) - , if it's not your intention, then make them consistent structurically.
00:22:667 - Should reduce one note, as you usually only use crash for one note like 00:21:758 -
00:43:848 - You probably try to sacrifice consistency for symmetry pattern, but i do think you can still make symmetry here like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8627595
01:18:485 - Same thing as 00:10:121 (10121|4) -
01:25:758 - Reduce one note for consistency with 01:25:212 -
01:29:121 (89121|0,89212|4,89303|2) - If you follow vocal then i'm sure these all are 1/6, maybe you can pass with simplification reason, but mention this just in case you have to follow the more precise one.
01:30:576 - Add note for vocal like you did at 01:24:758 -
01:33:576 - Felt like should be double note if following something like 02:25:939 -
01:35:758 (95758|5,95758|6,95939|5,95939|6) - doesn't fit to be jack tbh, the drum at 01:35:758 (95758|5,95758|6) - Is actually the same as 01:35:576 (95576|0,95576|4) - , not the double note after, i will recommend to switch column between 01:35:939 (95939|5,95939|6,96121|2,96121|3) - for more musical intact.
01:46:576 - 01:46:758 - the vocal doesn't get layered and yet the adjacent timing at 01:45:121 - 01:45:303 - Aren't.. hmmm...
01:55:121 - same as 00:43:848 -
02:53:394 - Kinda bother me that finish only 3 notes (2LN +1 note) , because you usually put 4 notes for finish sound. recommend add note here.

[HD]
00:49:758 (49758|5) - Felt like you can move this to col 5 so that you can line up the structure better with the pattern at 00:49:758 (49758|0,49939|2,50121|4,50121|6,50303|2,50303|0) -
00:59:576 (59576|1) - Kinda ambiguous being the only note that in the even number column, I know it's for structure, but i do think you can make it more firm by http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8627681
01:26:758 - 01:28:212 - missing note for vocal
02:01:030 (121030|1) - Same as 00:49:758 (49758|5) -

gl.
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Maxus wrote:

M4M
[MX]
00:10:121 (10121|4) - Felt that you need to change this into LN, as there's still vocal that should be made sync with 00:09:939 (9939|0,9939|6) - okeh
00:13:121 (13121|5,13212|4) - Felt like this part is kinda unsymmetric, will be better if you switch column so that the entire pattern be more symmetric each other. no sorry i prefer the current pattern
00:17:576 (17576|0,17758|2) - Switch column them? to make it at the same column as 00:16:667 (16667|2,16667|5) - , as you also do the same at 00:19:576 (19576|1,19576|4,20485|4,20485|1) - , if it's not your intention, then make them consistent structurically. the LN structure actually consistent on 00:13:394 - and then became random on 00:16:303 - and then consistent again on 00:19:212 - and then random again on 00:25:030 - i just want to make a variation
00:22:667 - Should reduce one note, as you usually only use crash for one note like 00:21:758 - 1 vocal 1 for the electric sound and 2 for the crash
00:43:848 - You probably try to sacrifice consistency for symmetry pattern, but i do think you can still make symmetry here like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8627595 i know but i think making it 1 note only ont hat 1/4 is better so it's consistent with 00:45:485 (45485|5,45667|3,45848|5,46030|6) -
01:18:485 - Same thing as 00:10:121 (10121|4) - nice
01:25:758 - Reduce one note for consistency with 01:25:212 - oh yah
01:29:121 (89121|0,89212|4,89303|2) - If you follow vocal then i'm sure these all are 1/6, maybe you can pass with simplification reason, but mention this just in case you have to follow the more precise one.changed to 1/2 LN then
01:30:576 - Add note for vocal like you did at 01:24:758 - i don't think i should layer that
01:33:576 - Felt like should be double note if following something like 02:25:939 - added on 02:25:939 -
01:35:758 (95758|5,95758|6,95939|5,95939|6) - doesn't fit to be jack tbh, the drum at 01:35:758 (95758|5,95758|6) - Is actually the same as 01:35:576 (95576|0,95576|4) - , not the double note after, i will recommend to switch column between 01:35:939 (95939|5,95939|6,96121|2,96121|3) - for more musical intact. i still think this is good like this.. but i'll reconsider
01:46:576 - 01:46:758 - the vocal doesn't get layered and yet the adjacent timing at 01:45:121 - 01:45:303 - Aren't.. hmmm... i think it's ok to not layer the vocal there since i make a little break(which is means not layer the vocal) on 01:47:212 -
01:55:121 - same as 00:43:848 - same
02:53:394 - Kinda bother me that finish only 3 notes (2LN +1 note) , because you usually put 4 notes for finish sound. recommend add note here. oki added

[HD]
00:49:758 (49758|5) - Felt like you can move this to col 5 so that you can line up the structure better with the pattern at 00:49:758 (49758|0,49939|2,50121|4,50121|6,50303|2,50303|0) - i'm actually avoiding to much on the white colour
00:59:576 (59576|1) - Kinda ambiguous being the only note that in the even number column, I know it's for structure, but i do think you can make it more firm by http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8627681 oh nice suggestion
01:26:758 - 01:28:212 - missing note for vocal i'll add on 01:26:758 - but not on 01:28:212 - since i don't layer the background vocal
02:01:030 (121030|1) - Same as 00:49:758 (49758|5) - same

gl.
Thanks :D
lenpai
i havent forgetten about this! m4m for https://osu.ppy.sh/s/632221

mx
00:13:121 (13121|5,13212|4) - ctrl j to compliment the disconnected motion of 00:13:212 (13212|1,13303|2,13394|0) -
00:16:121 - pretty sure there's a cymbal here different from other previous sounds Pretty unique so i believe it deserves a double. With that said, you can go for https://puu.sh/wXOYs/2cbe367d75.png
00:18:303 (18303|6,18303|5,18348|4,18394|3,18439|2) - ungodly loud hitsounds here, use a volume line or decrease individual note volumes your call
00:19:030 (19030|1,19212|2) - swap col because 00:19:212 (19212|2,19212|3) - is weird to play
00:20:667 - current pattern is quite heavy on the left hand so https://puu.sh/wXPeM/3f0f838cf8.png
00:22:121 (22121|1,22121|0,22303|1,22303|2) - considering that all previous patterns by far are rather comfy this is very out of place. Consider https://puu.sh/wXPlm/82db107690.png but before you apply 00:22:303 - versus 00:23:394 - explain the chord size difference
00:23:212 - this vs the previous section i kinda understand. But you should at least try to maintain the LNs for the "ii-guu" vocal because it looks like the ln trills earlier are more focused on the vocals while 00:23:576 (23576|4,23576|0,23758|3,23758|1,23939|4,23939|0) - aren't LNs at all. Fix will assume that you would want the earlier ii-guu to be as similar to the current while maintaining the LN layer: https://puu.sh/wXPx4/5e3bfa9483.png
00:24:303 (24303|0,24485|3,24485|2,24667|4,24667|1,24667|5,24848|2,24848|3,25030|0) - pattern is abnormally heavy on the left hand
00:25:030 (25030|5,25030|0,25030|6,25212|0,25212|4) - must contain double jacks for consistency with the rest
00:25:758 (25758|5) - could be in 3 to compensate for the heaviness on the right hand
00:27:758 - like 00:16:121 -
00:29:939 - same argument with the hitsounds if you fixed the previous one
00:33:758 (33758|6,33758|5,33939|5,33939|4,34121|3,34121|6,34303|5,34303|4) - probably ass to play for right thumb idk
00:35:939 (35939|6,35939|5,36121|3,36121|4,36303|1,36303|2,36303|5,36485|4,36485|3) - kinda like previous but for right thumb this time
kinda weird how 00:38:121 (38121|0,38485|0,38848|0,39212|0,39576|0) - is stacked but 00:39:576 (39576|6,39939|6,40303|5,40667|0,41030|0,41394|6,41758|6,42121|0) - is everywhere
00:46:030 (46030|6) - to 1 so that the left side isnt super ass to read
00:46:848 - i love this section great idea!
01:12:303 (72303|3) - now i know youre intentionally going for adjacency with the doubles but if this goes to 3, this part would feel more even to play
01:45:030 (105030|6,105121|5,105212|2,105212|4,105303|1,105394|0) - you mostly used trills for the rap vocal so something as comfy as this would 10/10 throw people off i guess. If you think a full trill would be too repetitive, minitrilling somewhere should work
01:47:030 (107030|0,107076|1,107121|2,107167|3) - shift to the right once for balance
01:49:394 - same complaint as previous with the stacks
02:18:667 (138667|0,138848|1) - should play better if swapped
02:53:576 (173576|6,173758|5) - swap like ^

the intro i felt the need to nitpick but the later sections were cool. Am not expecting a full mod for my map so feel free to mod back accordingly <3

Also yeah, really nice map.

Good luck owo)b

o right if you somehow ended up making a some nice long ass mod that works i might just have the need to come back and mod the other diffs
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