sing216 wrote:

M4M here, lets go

MP3

我覺得你個音源太大聲.. 即使我係SE100%既情況下都完全覆蓋左我既擊打音
唔知係咪我問題, 不過我將個osu調整到music 60%,effect 100% 我覺得比較適合
將個mp3檔改成得番60%音量?
i didnt hear that the volume has changed,but still fixed

About SV or Vol

1. 01:28:123 - to 01:30:278 (459) - 呢part我建議調整SE音量, 由少至大。由5%開始, 每一個音符+5%音量?
2. 02:31:399 - to 02:34:158 - 呢到音樂已經開始漸漸變大聲, 建議可以改成x1.00 or 由1/4方式一格一格漸漸加快sv成原速或高於1.00。

all fixed

Inner Oni

1. 01:36:485 (520,521,522,523,524,525,526,527,528,529,530,531,532) - 呢到兩個1/4串都各有兩下sound effect,但兩個串好似都follow緊唔同channel。而且第一個串完之後有一下don聲音空左,整體感覺上有少少怪。如果由我修改既話我會嘗試改做dkdkkk ddkdkkk。01:42:003 (570) - 加上你後面呢part都係採用左6同7pattern w
2. 01:43:296 (583,584,585,586) - change to 1/4? 後面kkkkkkd 1/6我覺得音樂上咁放冇問題,但呢下1/6 over map左
3. 01:49:675 (646,647,648,649,650,651,652,653,654) - change to "kkkkkkkd" ddd? (括住為1/6, 冇括為1/4)
4. 01:51:830 (670) - change to d
5. 01:55:365 (701,702) - change to kk
6. 01:55:968 (705,706) - change to kk and 01:56:658 (711) - change to k
7. 02:03:295 (781) - change to d
8. 02:06:399 (809,810) - change to kk
   －－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－
9. 02:25:882 (919,920,921,922,923,924,925,926,927,928,929,930,931,932,933,934) - copy, 02:28:640 (935,936,937,938,939,940,941,942,943,944,945,946,947,948,949,950) - delete, paste to 02:28:640 - here
   因為呢part我覺得放得太直覺同埋主要一致性唔夠,以上會改成兩part音符一致 (前半幾好但後半好似太直覺)
   －－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－
10. 02:44:675 - and 02:44:761 - add d
11. 03:00:537 - add d
12. 03:02:347 - add d
13. 03:02:951 - and 03:03:037 - add d
14. 03:03:296 - add d
15. 03:03:727 - add d
16. 03:05:106 - add d
17. 03:05:709 - and 03:05:796 - add d
18. 03:05:882 (1225) - delete
19. 03:06:399 - add d
20. 03:07:865 - add d
21. 03:08:468 - and 03:08:554 - add d
22. 03:08:899 - 03:08:899 - add d
23. 03:10:278 - add d
24. 03:10:882 (1264) - change to d
25. 03:11:399 (1268) - move to 03:11:399 (1268) - whatt??
26. 03:13:037 - add d
27. 03:13:296 (1283) - change to k
28. 03:13:813 - add k and 03:14:072 - add d
29. 03:14:416 - add d
30. 03:15:796 - add d
31. 03:16:054 (1311,1312) - change to kd
32. 03:16:830 - add d
33. 03:17:520 - add d
34. 03:17:864 (1325) - delete and 03:17:951 (1325) - change to k
35. 03:18:123 (1326,1327) - change to d
36. 03:19:416 - and 03:19:503 - add d?
    你follow緊咩音呢partw
    －－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－
37. 03:37:606 - add d
38. 03:40:365 - add d
39. 03:43:123 - add k
40. 03:46:054 (2) - delete
    咁樣整1/2 break會比較好。
    －－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－
41. 
    －－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－
42. 04:17:434 (213) - change to d
43. 04:28:210 (308) - change to d and 04:28:555 (313) - change to d?
44. 04:35:968 (383) - move to 04:36:140 - 呢個sound effect比較重要
45. 04:44:416 (460) - move to 04:44:416 (460) -
46. 04:54:675 (549,550) - change to kk
47. 05:04:675 (646,647,648) - change to ddk
48. 05:17:951 (775) - why big?
49. 05:21:227 (800,801) - change to dd
50. 05:23:296 (818) - change to d
    
    mod住咁多先
    
    expect the only one problem,all fixed

我認為你有啲音放得太直覺, 你可以試下聽下首歌有咩sound effect先, 然後再決定係咪真係咁樣放d音會比較好。

Hope it will be helpful to you, Good luck!

GNKait wrote:

hi.

mod

[*]from 00:00:000 - to 00:46:400 - Delete?
I felt that it needn't put notes in this part. This part looks like introduction. Therefore, drain of this map is less than 5 minutes. but it's ok. there are ranked mapsets that drain of this map is less than 5 minutes and it has 1 difficulty(for example: true blue). umm i think it skips too much,i will keep it
[*]from 00:46:572 - to 00:57:563 - Put notes to the melody of music.
This part is still low tension. If you put such notes, An impression of this map is flat and boring because this map is put 1/2 in large part.
ok i try to follow the sound effect.
[*]from 00:57:606 - to 01:07:175 - Put notes more simple.
The same reason. ok
[*]from 01:07:089 - to 01:08:640 - I suggest such a this arrangement.ok
I felt that your arrangement of this part is not suitable to the music.
[*]from 01:08:640 - to 01:10:968 - Increase more patterns.
There is only 1 pattern(d d k k ). So I think it looks boring.
I suggest incrasing more patterns(I thought d d d k d d k k …… is good.)ok
[*]from 01:11:399 - to 01:13:727 - Increase more patterns, too.
The same reason. I thought d d k k d d d k d d k k d d d k …… is good(This arrangement is different from suggestion of one before).ok
[*]from 01:14:158 - to 01:16:744 - ^
I thought d d k k d k k k d d k k d k k k …… is good(This arrangement is different from suggestion of one before).ok
[*]01:17:778 - Change to d.
I wanted to make d k k k d d k k .ok
[*]01:18:181(353,354) - Change to k.
It's not not not not not suitable to the music. I see that you want to put this arrangement for pp, but I think that you had better give up it.;_; ok
[*]01:19:244 - Delete.
The same reason.
[*]01:19:330(370,371,372) - Change to d.
The musical interval of this part is lower than from 01:19:330 - to 01:19:445 - .
[*]01:26:054 - Change to k.
I like this.ok
[*]01:27:175 - Change to k.
The same reason as one before suggestion.ok
[*]01:27:261 - Change to dkkdkkkkd(1/4).ok
Your arrangement of this part is not suitable. There isn't any 1/6 sound on the music.
[*]01:28:123(440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447) - Delete.
There are some sounds, but I think that this part needn't add notes for putting a sharp.sorry but i want to keep it,i think the notes and volume is suit the sound
[*]01:29:330(448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459) - Delete. And add spinner.
The same reason. There is a soft synthesizer sound so you should add spinner from 01:29:330 - to 01:30:020 - .disagree,before kiai its has more atmosphere in it.so i keep it
[*]01:30:365(460,461,462,463,464,465) - Change to kkdd(1/4).no,the drum is 1/6,i want to follow this,
[*]01:35:968 - Change to k?
I like this.ok~i think it is higher pitch.
[*]from 01:43:296 - to 01:44:503 - Remap without 1/6.
I think this arrangement is not suitable.no,i will keep this,cause of sound effect
[*]01:49:158(642,644) - Delete.
It sounds 1/2 and 1/6 is put later immediately.i changed it in 1/4
[*]01:52:434(676,679) - Change to d.
It sounds a lot of low sounds. I want you to express that.but i think d or k is ok,but i still changed d :p
[*]02:00:106(475,477) - Ctrl+G.
The same patterns (ddkdkkk) are put.
If you follow its suggestion, this part will be more interseting.but i pressed ctrl+g its will not suit the sound,i directly changed to kkkdkkk
[*]01:56:658 - Change to k.
The same reason as one before suggestion.already k??
[*]02:01:399(760~787) - Remap.
Too simple. It may be good if you put 1/6 from 02:03:468 - to 02:03:813 -.ok
[*]02:41:658 - Delete finisher.
I felt that it needn't finisher.ok
[*]02:45:796 - ^ok
[*]02:49:072(1108,1109,1110) - Change to k.
It sounds synthesizer. I guess you wanted that d is more than k. But I thought you should change.i think its higher pitch so ok~
[*]02:58:899 - change to k.
It is better than d.ok
[*]02:59:416 - Add k.
There is little notes. I think it's bad.ok
[*]02:59:934 - Add d.
The same reason as one before.
[*]03:00:623 - ^ok
[*]03:00:968 - Change to k.
The same patterns are put. That is boring.ok
[*]03:06:485 - ^ok
[*]03:03:123(1207,1208) - Change to k.
In the first beat, How do you like to k put once in a while?no,i following the base drum
[*]03:04:072 - Add d.
I thought it will be interesting by decreasing notes.ok
[*]03:04:244 - Add k.
The same reason as one before suggestion.ok
[*]03:06:830 - ^ok
[*]03:07:003 - ^ok
[*]03:08:640(1243,1245) - Change to k.
I wanted to express having this part become lively.no,same reason of base drum
[*]03:11:313 - Add d.ok
[*]03:07:778(1237,1238) - , 03:00:192(1187,1188) - and 03:00:882(1191,1192) - are dd(1/4).
Why not here?
[*]03:15:537(1306,1310,1311) - Delete.
There is no drum sound. I thought it can make a change by deleting.i only deleted 1310 and 1311,1306 have drum sound
[*]03:19:072 - Change to k.
This part is continuing kddd(1/4). That is boring.ok
[*]From 03:19:503 - to 03:23:123 - Delete and add spinner.
I can't really understand this arrangement.no spinner but i changed myself
[*]03:23:123(2,5,8,11,13,17,20,23,26,28,35,38,41,43,50,53,1,3) - Delete.
This part should be simple. It's boring because continuing 1/2 is put forever.i cant know wut do you mean,so keep
[*]03:48:813(17,33,49,) - Delete.
The same reason as one before. ^same reason so keep
[*]From 03:56:916 - to 04:06:399 - Be more simple.ok
[*]04:06:457 - and 04:06:514 - Add d.
It sounds 1/6 of drum.ok
[*]04:07:261 - Change to d k dddk k dddd(1/4+1/6).ok
Let's put notes to the music.
[*]From 04:07:951 - to 04:17:606 - Look at the suggestion from 01:08:640 - .ok
[*]04:37:865(398,400) - Ctrl+G. I like this!ok
[*]05:11:485 - Change to k .
Let's put notes to the music.ok
[*]05:11:830(718,719) - Ctrl+G.
The same reason as one before suggestion.ok
[*]05:12:434(725,726) - Ctrl+G.ok
^
[*]05:12:865 - Change to k .
^ok
[*]05:13:209(734,735) - Ctrl+G.
^ok

I'm very tired lol お疲れさまでした～

DDM wrote:

Key of timepieces

http://cametek.jp/cyphisonia/

Consified wrote:

DDM wrote:

Key of timepieces

http://cametek.jp/cyphisonia/

lmao i didnt mention that
thanks

ts8zs wrote:

From queue.ts8zs.com
[Inner]
我不推荐soft音效因为MAT曾经告诉我这在默认skin里会听起来很奇怪 這個我同意，但是大部分玩家都會用自製skin，如果其他人也這麽認爲那我就改掉吧
00:30:193 (78,79,80,81) - both kd? both low pitch so keep
01:30:106 (216) - k ok
02:06:744 (574,575,576,577,578,579,580,581,582,583,584,585,586,587) - ddkkddd ddkkddd ok
02:38:468 (782) - del,no sounds here ok
02:58:295 (933) - ^ ok
02:58:468 (934) - k ok
03:39:503 (27) - d? 重復pattern,so keep
03:40:365 (32) - k? ok
04:07:778 (19,20,21) - kkk? ok
05:20:709 (662,663) - swap ok
每次上传前都检查一次AiMod是一个好习惯。因为这个被戳或者被nuke就很尴尬了。謝謝指點，剛才開Aimod有三個地方沒對齊，現在改了

DDM wrote:

owo;; don't give kudos for little metadata modification

Tyistiana wrote:

Hi, Consified. From your queue~
Feel free to rejected my suggestion, because it's only my opinion~

[Terms of my writing]
xx:xx:xxx until yy:yy:yyy means the range of the screenshot
d stands for don / D stands for big don
k stands for kat / K stands for big kat

[General]
Tag requires, have a look on here
Camellia Cyphisonia E.P. is the name of the album, so we should add tag for this too.
all fixed
[Timing]
Kiai should be on 04:30:020 ~ 05:14:158
It's a Camellia kiai time style (?) on the osu! community.
Let's have a look on Camellia - Key of timepieces or Camellia - Exit This Earth's Atomosphere and compare it. =w= fixed

[Gimmicky of slider velocity]
After I have test play this map, got heart attacked and I press to check that I didn't open HR.
Overall slider velocity is too fast to read. If your purpose is want people to enjoy the fast of the SV, then let them open HR mod might be better.
So, let this rankable by using slider velocity 1.40x , a standard SV for ranked.
And a gimmicky of slider velocity for me to describe the feeling of this music well.
Something that I don't suggest, it's good enough. :3
00:00:000 ~ 00:48:123 - SR x0.75 , this part give us a chill feeling, so let this slower than normal for the chill while playing too.
00:48:123 ~ 02:15:365 - SR x1 , seems have more power than the first part.
02:15:365 ~ 02:25:882 - SR x0.75 , same at 00:00:00
Please note that this is only my opinion, so don't need to follow my instruction if you're not agree with this.
I followed your SR,and the timing is in my own way.

[Inner Oni]
00:08:814 until 00:09:446 - How about this? , Be careful, here are 1/6 rhythm on 00:09:216 / 00:09:446
i heard 1/4,keep
00:13:124 - Add k , still have some pitch which it's similar to 00:12:952 / 00:13:297 but 00:13:124 is still higher a bit, so I suggest you to add k here. ok
00:12:952 - Change to d , in order to emphasize 00:13:124 these two k both pitch is higher,no change
00:18:469 change to d and add k on 00:18:641 - Same reason above ^
00:23:986 change to d and add k on 00:24:159 - For the consistency of the pattern.no change but i added d in 00:24:159 -
00:35:021 - Change to d , to emphasize 00:35:193 more. ok
00:37:090 / 00:42:090 - Change to d , similar pitch to 00:33:297 ok
00:42:607 - Change to k , similar pitch to 00:34:331 fixed
00:46:228 - Add k , for the consistency if we have compare to 00:35:193 ok
00:47:089 / 00:52:606 / 00:58:123 - Change to d , have a lower pitch than 00:46:916 and it's the same reason why have you place d on 00:49:847. And it's the way to help we can emphasize 00:47:951 (150,151) more. ok
00:55:882 / 01:01:399 / 01:06:916 - Change to d , for the consistency of the pattern. And it's the way to help we can emphasize 00:56:227 (183,184) more. ok
01:06:227 until 01:08:123 - Should be like this , in case that you have follow 00:38:461 (114,115,116,117,118,119) pitch thus so far, so use the same pattern for the consistency of the map might me better.
nice,fixed
01:20:365 / 01:23:123 / 01:23:813 / 01:24:503 - Change to d , to follow the pitch , and for more consistency.If i do that,the patterns will be ddkkddkk and it will be boring.keep
01:25:451 - Change to k , high pitch. no,keep,patterns
01:25:709 (170,171) - Ctrl+G , to emphasize 01:25:709 pitch which it have a high pitch. no,^
01:30:278 - Change to d , have too much k here , maybe we can't concentrate to tap the next 1/6 if this point is k. ok
01:30:365 (117,118,119,120,121,122,123) - Change to kkkdddk , seems fitter :3 i changed it to kkkdddd,because the pitch is from high to low
01:31:916 / 01:32:606 / 01:38:123 - Add d , to match 01:30:882 (224,225,226,227,228,229,230) pattern.ok
01:36:140 - Change to k , which it can help us to emphasize 01:36:227 more ok
01:45:623 - Change to k , seems like a pitch from 01:45:537 is still here. i changed it to ddkkddd
01:48:037 - Ctrl+G , seems fitter imo. ok
01:48:640 - Change to d , to make a difference to this note and 01:48:468 (393,394) which the pitch level is different. ok

Oh , so long somehow.
I'll wait for your respond before I mod the next part, I want to see your mapping style by your respond first, then the next part I'll not focus on the thing that you've rejected me too much, to prevent this long mod become longer. XD

Anyway, it's a good map! <3
Good luck for ranking!!!

IControl wrote:

Hi m4mreq
Inner Oni
Genral stuff: Map is not consistent and has weird usage of 1/6. overmapped. Agree with that.

00:09:159 (2,3) - move these to here 00:09:331 - matches the keyboard which you map through out this part
i moved it to 00:09:245 because the sound start from here

00:12:090 (13,14) - swap? For two reasons 1. more variety to this slow part. 2. 00:12:262 - is the same pitch as 00:12:607 -
apply through out the rest of this section and map if you agree
changed

00:17:607 (33) - these could be d for variety.
ok

00:19:331 (39) - k to be consistent
sure

00:24:417 (59) - move this note to 00:24:590 - the piano "roll" starts here 00:24:503 -
i change it into k d d dk

00:24:848 (62) - delete I don't think mapping this follows the flow of mapping to the piano like you did at the beginning
ok

01:07:865 (47,48) - remove these. sounds out of place and over mapped
really?ok deleted

01:08:640 - to 01:17:951 - Not sure what you are mapping too. I would just stick to mapping to the violins with d d k k
i changed it to d d d k d d k k this pattern

01:10:537 - Also you could make these sounds stand out by removing some notes between them like 01:10:710 (65) - 01:11:054 (67,68) -
not remove,but maybe i can use patterns to be outstanding?

01:18:123 - i hear 1/6 here
nice,i deleted before.now added again.


01:20:451 - add a note? you could make triples in this section to go with finisher sound at 01:20:537 - and it add variety
ok,i will use this pattern

01:29:158 (199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212) - i hear 1/2 notes here? why is there a stream? remove all blue tic notes and change all to k
ok

01:30:537 (216,217,218) - This part is 1/4 try changing it.
ignored because your suggestion below changed it

01:30:623 - remove this and change 01:30:709 - to a finisher so it could have more impact.
nice idea,changed

01:30:882 (215,216) - remove these two. the sound starts here 01:31:054 -
ok,it sounds better

01:31:658 (223) - for this section you could delete these to make 01:31:572 (222) - stand out more
fixed in my own way

01:33:037 - these ones are okay because its a good place for a steam here.


01:33:123 - if you want to add 1/6 in this section here would be a good place for (kkkk) 1/6 in the stream
ok

01:34:330 (245) - for this section move these red tic notes to here 01:34:244 - to be consistent with here 01:33:727 -
ok

01:35:365 - you could add a note here and delete this note 01:35:709 - to be consistent.
ok

01:40:968 (310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319) - this is over mapped try taking out these notes 01:41:140 - and 01:41:313 - the stream starts here 01:41:399 -
fixed in my own way,tried to follow the sound effect

01:44:158 - This long 1/6 and doesn't match up with this 01:33:123 - they sound the same
matched both 1/6

this section 02:01:399 - doesn't match with this 01:39:244 - they sound the same
matched

02:13:640 - these sound like 1/4 02:13:985 -
ok

02:25:882 - Kinda weird that you started following another instrument compared to this section 02:15:365 - where you are following the vocal
ok,just followed 02:15:365

02:31:399 - to 02:35:537 - in stead of long stream spinner? doesn't sound that intense to make a stream here
ok

02:36:916 - why is this section in kai time compared to this section 02:58:985 -
@_@?

02:58:985 - try to make this section more consistent to the last for example: 02:59:244 (930,931,932) - doesn't really follow anything from the last section i would add a note here 02:59:503 -
i am following the drum here,keep

03:04:675 (971,972,973) - this is really not consistent with this part 02:59:158 - because one starts on a red tic and the other on blue.
^

03:22:434 - this stream is kinda over mapped. I only hear 1/6 at 03:23:468 -
behind the 1/6,i added a spinner

03:34:847 - this part should be more constant with the beginning 00:08:814 - they sound similar
ok

04:17:606 - remove I don't hear a stream here
ok

04:30:537 (202,203) - ah doesn't match with this 04:33:123 - or this 04:36:054 -
i makes it match 04:34:054

04:38:513 - ok so i looked at the ranked osu version of this map and 04:38:513 - to 04:38:858 - is 1/4 04:38:858 - to 04:39:203 - is 1/3 04:39:203 - to 04:39:548 - is 1/2 notes.
keep,i heard like streams and it matchs same patterns
I would recommend checking over alot of the streams and 1/6 sections yourself to improve this map.

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hello Consified, from my queue:
[Inner Oni]
00:12:952: To d, low pitch here, Use 50% speed to hear them better
00:26:745: To d, too many k k k, would be boring if we do that 00:27:090 (70) - i changed it to d
01:33:037: Remove note, no sound ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ i heard have sound lol
01:43:468: High pitch, change to k dddd lower,kkk higher.no change
01:46:054: Low pitch, to d
01:46:744: ^ 01:46:572 (365) - from here i am following the piano sound.no chagne
01:46:830: Delete, no sound ^
04:55:365: To k, high pitch here 04:55:020 (411) - and 04:55:709 (418) - is same.no change
05:19:416: Remove this note to make consistency on the previous triplet
05:19:675: To d, low pitch

That's all, GL on ranking