1. Light Hard (2,68 stars, 151 notes)
2. Normal (2,02 stars, 95 notes)
3. Ultimate (3,24 stars, 198 notes)
4. Nyantiaz's Easy (1,47 stars, 75 notes)

iatealemon wrote:

too slow song for this lenght. and streams make ppl ragequit this, it needs more work, and higher diff play for beats,

grindiee wrote:

hello thereHi.

general

ar9 is extremely high for this difficulty agreed, changed to AR 8.2

the sv is also rather high in the 150bpm section, and the freeform sliders are too much for a hard map Will consider it. I'll have a lot of #6digit testplay it.

if you're aiming for ranked you'll need more difficulties This is a map for a friend. Dunno if I should go for ranked.

timing is off a bit. offset for your timing sections/changes should be:
(128bpm) 5959
(150bpm) 28901
(110bpm) 50285
(128bpm) 65565 All accepted. I'm bad with timing and took help from someone else.
also, don't add in unnecessary red lines. they can easily throw off the offset of the song if you make further timing changes without adjusting them Got rid of them. I thought I should keep them because of the white lines, but whatever.

the kiai sections seem to be a bit random. i would probably leave kiai out of the map altogether or leave it for the last section I'll perhaps put in short bursts of kiai, like some maps do.

also the metadata should probably be something other than various artists, but i couldn't tell you what to change it to. ask around in #modhelp There are various artists. They all are... by Riot Games, Nosaj Thing, Pretty Lights, The Crystal Method, Dada Life, Bassnectar and Renholdër.

many of the combos should be changed. combos should represent new phrases and/or patterns in the map, not placed in the middle of themWill go over it.

[box=[SGYuno:1337]]
00:07:844 (2) - this whole section isn't mapped to anything in the music. i would recommend cutting this and starting at the (7) in the combo Actually there is this thing in the background, which gets louder and louder. I know it's a lousy beginning, but anything else would be too much IMO
00:16:750 (3) - not snapped to 1/4 tick due to new offset. Changed.
00:18:625 (7) - ^ ^
(you may have had these snapped to 1/3 on purpose to match the music, but change the offset to the proper time first and it will sound correct in 1/4)
there may also be a few more notes that need proper snapping in this section
00:20:500 (3) - needs to be snapped (check AiMod before asking for mods)^
00:30:897 (5) - distance snapping for the slider jumps in this section is very strange. it should be evened out and made closer together after lowering the sv (assuming this is a hard difficulty)I kinda wanted it to be an insane, idk why it's only 3,21*
01:08:633 (1) - spacing between notes really needs to be evened out here Still won't apply DS, but I'll do the handcraft differently
01:28:555 (2) - what does this slider represent in the music? kinda a finish.

Milar001 wrote:

Hello Hi

Mod

00:14:289 (1) - I would start the map from this point That'd be cutting off the beginning. IMO they are part of the song, thus I'll also represent them - even if they all seem to be different songs altogether
00:20:500 (3) - ? ?
00:28:897 (1) - From this point map begins to be one big circle, think about changing the object placement intended. I might change it, but as it is right now, I do like it.
00:40:297 (2,1) - Not proper spacing, also there: 00:40:897 (2,1) - (remember it's hard diff) It's a kind of system. If the notes are close to the previous, then wait. If they are further away, then jump. I think it fits the music.
00:50:315 (1) - bad offset changed timing

The timing in this song is awful but fight if you want, also AR 8,5 would be betterDid Ar 8,2

kricher wrote:

helloHi

00:08:781 (4,5,6) - i dont see what part of the song you map with these 3 It's a sound in the background, which gets louder and louder. I find them quite vital to map, although I might change them if I can come up with anything.
00:19:914 (2) - object end seems not to be snapped properly mb i missclicked something but check just in case checked.
00:25:421 (2) - there is no sound for the middle note of those triples for this note to exist The whole section is changing. There is a sound, but it sounds differently. I kinda want it this way, because anything else would be really hard and complicated to pull off - too complicated for insane.
00:33:097 - map this beat What beat?
00:30:897 (5) - personally i dont like these shapes for sliders but thats your choise My choice stays.
00:44:497 - something should be here Can't hear anything
01:12:618 - i would place a slider here No, because that would impact the next note.
01:29:024 - a spinner could fit the ending I have allergy against ending spinners with high drain.

some of the suggestions above apply to many parts of the map so try to find similar mistakes throughout the song
you need 2 more difficulties for this map to be rankable but i suppose you already know that [/color]



since you have a m4m request here is my map t/609674 Think I wrote PM me for M4M, but I#ll do it anyways.

N0thing wrote:

There are various artists. They all are... by Riot Games, Nosaj Thing, Pretty Lights, The Crystal Method, Dada Life, Bassnectar and Renholdër.

grindiee wrote:

no problem, friend
one quick thing

N0thing wrote:

There are various artists. They all are... by Riot Games, Nosaj Thing, Pretty Lights, The Crystal Method, Dada Life, Bassnectar and Renholdër.

you should change the metadata to these guys then. i know it seems a bit ridiculous listing every last person, but as far as i know that's how it goes

also if you wouldn't mind pls give kudosu if you feel the mod was good :>

XFroceS wrote:

Hello!

Timing:

Code

[TimingPoints]
5979,468.75,4,2,0,43,1,0
21454,468.75,4,2,0,43,1,0
28924,400,4,2,0,43,1,0
49497,545.454545454546,4,2,0,43,1,0
50324,545.454545454546,4,2,0,43,1,0
65596,468.75,4,2,0,43,1,0

Corrected timing.

Mod:

1. 00:38:495 (1) - Put it on x:395 y:286 Changed slider
2. 00:47:895 (1) - Remove the spinner. Set Brake Time.I like the spinner
3. 01:28:065 (1,2) - Remove.I like them.
4. 01:28:065 (1) - Put here the circle and NC.

Supporting information:
I noticed you need help with the sliders. I collect a folder with nice sliders and flow. I'll give it to you. Thanks, it sure is appreciated. I'll go over it later, but for now, I already implemented new sliders fitting to the map.
DOWNLOAD

Einja wrote:

returning m4m

assuming that you will add more diffs cuz it can't be ranked rn

[diff]
how does the diff name relate to anything

ok uh first off, the rhythm in the beginning is really awkward to play. for example, these 2 notes 00:07:875 (2,3) - don't land on major beats really, while the slider 00:06:000 (1) - has 2 reverse arrows hitting on 2 major beats. loud and important beats need to be CLICKABLE otherwise the rhythm will feel super awkward. you can try something like this http://prntscr.com/hm9ihx (also this applies to any other pattern similar to this)

00:19:945 (2) - this spacing is confusing, i really didn't expect a 3/4 to play here honestly. you could space it more away from (1) or close the gap with (3)

00:26:390 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - y the rhythm change

00:32:128 (1) - im upset that the fact there is a important sound on this slider tail, yet it doesn't get emphasized with clickable objects why?

00:28:928 (1,2) - i'm also dumbfounded that this spacing is inconsistent with 00:30:128 (2,3,4) - shouldn't the spacing between 1-2 be larger than 2-3-4?

that's all i'm gonna give you really, i'm too tired to mod this and i feel like you really need to work on spacing consistency, and emphasis via clickable objects. good luck

Einja wrote:

returning m4m

assuming that you will add more diffs cuz it can't be ranked rn

[diff]
how does the diff name relate to anything Made this for a friend. This is his name

ok uh first off, the rhythm in the beginning is really awkward to play. for example, these 2 notes 00:07:875 (2,3) - don't land on major beats really, while the slider 00:06:000 (1) - has 2 reverse arrows hitting on 2 major beats. loud and important beats need to be CLICKABLE otherwise the rhythm will feel super awkward. you can try something like this http://prntscr.com/hm9ihx (also this applies to any other pattern similar to this) Without those circles in between, the parts will feel empty. If I were to add the sliders you suggested, this part would become more difficult - too difficult, when this part here is so relaxing compared to the rest of the map.

00:19:945 (2) - this spacing is confusing, i really didn't expect a 3/4 to play here honestly. you could space it more away from (1) or close the gap with (3) Tried to make the gap a bit larger. As this is a recurring thing in my map, I want to already suggest that long breaks are indicated by very short distances.

00:26:390 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - y the rhythm change So it doesn't feel boring. There is a lot of stuff going on in the background anyway

00:32:128 (1) - im upset that the fact there is a important sound on this slider tail, yet it doesn't get emphasized with clickable objects why? Because the sound on the sliderend comes together with the sound on the sliderhead. If you try to let the slider end before, the following sound will feel hollow.

00:28:928 (1,2) - i'm also dumbfounded that this spacing is inconsistent with 00:30:128 (2,3,4) - shouldn't the spacing between 1-2 be larger than 2-3-4? This is a style, and totally playable, as well as putting emphazis on the things I want to emphazise

that's all i'm gonna give you really, i'm too tired to mod this and i feel like you really need to work on spacing consistency, and emphasis via clickable objects. good luck ty

1. Please check AiMod and look tick "Check distance snap." None should appear. This means that distance snap was not on when mapping this difficulty, which it should be since it's a normal.
2. 00:14:281 (7) - Unsnapped note - this is not 1/3.
3. 00:16:195 (2) - Avoid notes on blue ticks in easier difficulties, since newer players expect easier rhythms. Stick to using a 1/2 beat snap divisor. These too: 00:18:070 (6) - 00:19:945 (2) -
4. 00:35:328 (1) - Slider seems unbalanced - skewed to the left.
5. 00:47:828 (1) - I'd honestly start this spinner on the timing point, and have it end on 00:51:417 -
6. 01:11:235 (1) - Avoid these kinda kicksliders in easier difficulties. Newer players can't tell when to release, no matter how much time given afterwards or beforehands. This one too: 01:08:656 (1) -
7. 01:28:110 (1) - add a spinner around here to map applause

1. 00:10:687 (5) - nc
2. 00:28:928 (1) - these uneven sliders ;w;
3. 00:42:528 (2) - move middle anchor so it flows onto (3)
4. 00:46:528 (4) - avoid this. it touches the health bar which is ugly
5. 01:08:891 (1) - not sure why this is NC
6. 01:12:641 (1) - add a Finish hitsound
7. 01:18:735 (1) - ctrl+g
8. 01:20:141 (5) - move slider so sliderend stacks on 01:19:203 (2) -
9. 01:23:891 (5) - move slider so sliderhead stacks on 01:22:485 (1) - sliderend
10. 01:29:047 - map the applause with spinner reeeeeee

Apo11o wrote:

hello - m4m

General
lots of unsnapped green lines. pls fix Not impacting play as long as they are right. I'm too lazy for that XD

Normal

1. Please check AiMod and look tick "Check distance snap." None should appear. This means that distance snap was not on when mapping this difficulty, which it should be since it's a normal. Some parts were deliberately mapped without DS because DS would have made it harder to map.
2. 00:14:281 (7) - Unsnapped note - this is not 1/3. ty
3. 00:16:195 (2) - Avoid notes on blue ticks in easier difficulties, since newer players expect easier rhythms. Stick to using a 1/2 beat snap divisor. These too: 00:18:070 (6) - 00:19:945 (2) - Those notes are essential. Besides, Slider leniency should handle this problem.
4. 00:35:328 (1) - Slider seems unbalanced - skewed to the left.Fixed
5. 00:47:828 (1) - I'd honestly start this spinner on the timing point, and have it end on 00:51:417 - Nah
6. 01:11:235 (1) - Avoid these kinda kicksliders in easier difficulties. Newer players can't tell when to release, no matter how much time given afterwards or beforehands. This one too: 01:08:656 (1) - In fact they can do this. I asked ppl to testplay it. This is a normal, not an easy.
7. 01:28:110 (1) - add a spinner around here to map applause

Too long, and unneccessary IMO

SGYuno

1. 00:10:687 (5) - nc I think I agreed, I'm not sure
2. 00:28:928 (1) - these uneven sliders ;w; Fixed
3. 00:42:528 (2) - move middle anchor so it flows onto (3) No, this is to increase the snap, and thus the emphasis.
4. 00:46:528 (4) - avoid this. it touches the health bar which is ugly Fixed
5. 01:08:891 (1) - not sure why this is NC Added more NC (in the BG drums or something start to play, and I wanted to reflect that
6. 01:12:641 (1) - add a Finish hitsound Aye
7. 01:18:735 (1) - ctrl+g No (snap)
8. 01:20:141 (5) - move slider so sliderend stacks on 01:19:203 (2) - No (snap)
9. 01:23:891 (5) - move slider so sliderhead stacks on 01:22:485 (1) - sliderend No, Snap
10. 01:29:047 - map the applause with spinner reeeeeee

Forget your dream XDD

DJPop wrote:

~General~
• Remove all , from tags Done
• You should set combo colors to match the theme, either bg or song Done
• SGYuno feels like a hard diff, I think you should make a more difficult one IT WAS SUPPOSED TO BE!!! Darn osu

~Normal~
• I don't know why the game decided to give it ★1.97, it feels harder than that agreed
00:14:320 (7,8,1) - remove, then make (6) a repeat slider The following combo is quite vital to this part, even at the cost of seemingly similar to the upper diff.
00:15:375 - 00:21:234 - this part is almost the same as SGYuno, try to reduce notes/sliders ^
00:25:218 (1,1,1,1) - should be different from the first set Yup. I just had no plan how, and now I somehow did it
00:47:828 (1) - should start at 00:48:145 and end at 00:51:417 or 00:51:963 Did something similar
00:50:326 - you can map something easy here instead of break time Ok. The moment ppl complain about this I'll delete this part
01:05:610 (1) - set addition to normal and add finish sound Ok
01:06:313 (1,1,1,1) - remove nc and try to avoid tapping on blue ticks, use slider and end on them if you have to I have
01:08:656 (5) - a bit hard to read for normal, should be 1/2 slider with 1 repeat Agreed
01:21:547 (1,1) - remove nc Ok
01:23:891 (1) - ^ ^
01:28:110 (1) - add finish and add a spinner after, end at 01:31:860 Grumble what do you guys have with finishing spinnersOK

~SGYuno~
00:14:320 (7) - unexpected blue tick, nc here as a warning Added a lot more NC during thsi segment, as well as in Normal
00:17:718 (5) - nc I think I agreed? I forgot
00:25:218 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - the song is building the pace so this part should be harder Ok
00:47:828 (1) - should start at 00:48:145 and end at 00:51:417 or 00:51:963 Did somethign similar
01:05:599 (1) - set addition to normal and use only finish sound Ok
01:08:891 (1) - remove nc I thikn I agreed
01:09:125 (1) - ^ [/color]
01:15:922 (4) - move its tail down, parallel to slider (1) Woah
01:16:391 (5) - add whistle Oops
01:28:110 (1,2) - change (1) into circle, add finish, delete (2), start spinner after the circle and end at 01:31:860 >_> Finishing spinners