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Soma Saito - Hikari Tatsu Ame

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Shiratori
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年8月23日 at 12:26:16

Artist: Soma Saito
Title: Hikari Tatsu Ame
Source: 活撃 刀剣乱舞
Tags: tv size opening katsugeki touken ranbu hotaru yamazo abhor suzuki Suzuki_1112 1112deng [_Abhor_]
BPM: 165
Filesize: 20195kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Abhor's Insane (4.37 stars, 336 notes)
  2. Advanced (2.51 stars, 180 notes)
  3. Hard (3.33 stars, 243 notes)
  4. Suzuki's Normal (1.86 stars, 143 notes)
Download: Soma Saito - Hikari Tatsu Ame
Download: Soma Saito - Hikari Tatsu Ame (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Video by Shad0w1and
metadata by Doyak and IamKwaN
Suzuki's normal 100%
Advanced 100%
Hard 100%
[ Abhor ]'s Insane 100%
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Lobelia
怎么没有BG,我来给你找一个
Topic Starter
Shiratori

[ Abhor ] wrote:

怎么没有BG,我来给你找一个
因为忘插了
gary00737
水摸而已

[請你加NC !]
[音樂很小聲]
[! = blanket]


Hard
00:08:476 (33,34) - 00:09:203 (37,1) - 間距視覺上一樣 不覺得很混淆嗎? ((有一個建議 跳是可以 但要讓人分清那一個是1/2跳 那一個是1/1跳))


00:02:113 (9,10) - !
00:03:931 (16,17) - !
00:04:113 (17,18) - !
00:05:022 (20,21) - !
00:07:203 (28,29) - !
00:14:476 (6,7) - !
00:15:930 (2,4) - !
00:16:476 (4,5) - !
00:16:839 (5,7) - !
00:21:748 (3,4) - !
!!!!!!!基本上在blanket 上都做得不太好 要麼錯開點別blanket :? 我先不說這個問題



00:25:567 (3,4,5) - 有沒有興趣轉換2個大長滑條 類似http://i.imgur.com/43NEsno.png
00:28:294 (5) - 把這個刪了可以突出 00:28:112 (4) - 的音
00:29:930 (2,3) - 也是可以轉做長條
00:36:476 - miss note
00:38:294 - 00:38:476 - ^
00:45:203 (7) - 這個給我的感覺很奇怪
01:15:384 (7,8) - 可換成http://i.imgur.com/Mp3zCm9.png



呃 怎麼水摸摸了論文.....另一個難度 節奏上不錯 但FLOW給我感覺不太好而已
加油 :!:
Topic Starter
Shiratori

gary00737 wrote:

水摸而已
哇老哥速度好快 一会儿改捎带脚给你摸
[請你加NC !]
[音樂很小聲]
[! = blanket]



Hard
00:08:476 (33,34) - 00:09:203 (37,1) - 間距視覺上一樣 不覺得很混淆嗎? ((有一個建議 跳是可以 但要讓人分清那一個是1/2跳 那一個是1/1跳))这个忘开ds了 fixed


00:02:113 (9,10) - !
00:03:931 (16,17) - !
00:04:113 (17,18) - !
00:05:022 (20,21) - !
00:07:203 (28,29) - !
00:14:476 (6,7) - !
00:15:930 (2,4) - !
00:16:476 (4,5) - !
00:16:839 (5,7) - !
00:21:748 (3,4) - !
开头remap了
!!!!!!!基本上在blanket 上都做得不太好 要麼錯開點別blanket :? 我先不說這個問題



00:25:567 (3,4,5) - 有沒有興趣轉換2個大長滑條 類似http://i.imgur.com/43NEsno.png
00:28:294 (5) - 把這個刪了可以突出 00:28:112 (4) - 的音
00:29:930 (2,3) - 也是可以轉做長條
00:36:476 - miss note
00:38:294 - 00:38:476 - ^
00:45:203 (7) - 這個給我的感覺很奇怪
01:15:384 (7,8) - 可換成http://i.imgur.com/Mp3zCm9.png



呃 怎麼水摸摸了論文.....另一個難度 節奏上不錯 但FLOW給我感覺不太好而已
加油 :!:
Yugu
irc
21:55 Amamiya Kanade: 鱼骨要试图吗
21:55 Yugu: np我
21:56 *Amamiya Kanade is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1346425 Saitou Souma - Hikari Dantsu Ame]
21:59 Yugu: 蜜汁抓音
21:59 Amamiya Kanade: 你指hard还是adv
22:00 Amamiya Kanade: 我觉得我抓的很工整啊
22:01 Yugu: hard
22:02 Amamiya Kanade: emm
22:02 Yugu: 00:00:840 (3,4,5) - 这都没音
22:02 Yugu: 你还放个三连
22:03 Amamiya Kanade: 确实有的
22:03 Amamiya Kanade: 我以我的耳朵担保
22:03 Yugu: 这么小个音
22:03 Yugu: 跟都不用跟
22:03 Yugu: 玩家会一脸懵逼的
22:03 Yugu: 这算overmap,还是不能搬上台面的overmap
22:04 Yugu: 00:01:385 (1,2) -
22:04 Amamiya Kanade: emm
22:04 Yugu: 这里
22:04 Amamiya Kanade: 我再想想怎么改
22:04 Yugu: 前一个ds是0.8 隔了1/1
22:04 Yugu: 后一个你隔了1.1
22:04 Yugu: 不对 ds是1.1
22:04 Yugu: 隔了1/2
22:05 Yugu: 在hard你这么摆
22:05 Yugu: 作死
22:06 Yugu: 00:03:022 (1,2) - 1的白线重音 第二个滑条2的红线重音
22:06 Yugu: 不好
22:07 Yugu: 把2换成note加滑条
22:07 Yugu: 白线note红线滑条比较好
22:07 Amamiya Kanade: 跟的弦乐
22:08 Yugu: 你这里跟声音比较大的鼓声比较好
22:08 Amamiya Kanade: fixed
22:09 Yugu: 00:00:113 (1,2) - 前面这个也是
22:09 Yugu: 后面相同节奏你自己看下
22:10 Yugu: 00:10:657 (5) - NC
22:10 Yugu: hard不推荐这么长的相同颜色combo
22:10 Yugu: 正好是换句的地方
22:10 Yugu: 可以分清楚节奏
22:10 Yugu: 相同颜色combo最好别超过6个
22:11 Amamiya Kanade: EMM
22:12 Yugu: 00:31:930 (7,8) - 后移1/2红线加个note
22:12 Yugu: 排列的话自己想下,我觉得直接stack上滑条头就好了
22:14 Yugu: 00:45:748 (2) - ta e 在白线 你这还是要跟人声
22:14 Yugu: 一样改成前面note后面滑条就好了
22:15 Amamiya Kanade: 你savelog去论坛骗kds去
22:15 Amamiya Kanade: 我睡觉了
22:15 Yugu: 01:01:930 (1) - ^
22:16 Yugu: 01:03:748 (7) - 人声停在白线,直接改1/2滑条加note比较好
22:17 Yugu: 01:19:930 - 放个note 转盘直接放在note后面就好了
22:18 Yugu: 01:18:111 (4) - 没有对齐时间轴
22:18 Yugu: NC毛病我不帮你看了,主要还是想清楚NC该什么时候,分节奏还是什么
22:19 Yugu: 多看点rank图看看排列,想办法弄整洁一点,滑条最好不要相互贴边摆什么的

gary说得对!

感觉你这鸽可以塞爆
Topic Starter
Shiratori

Yugu wrote:

21:55 Amamiya Kanade: 鱼骨要试图吗
21:55 Yugu: np我
21:56 *Amamiya Kanade is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1346425 Saitou Souma - Hikari Dantsu Ame]
21:59 Yugu: 蜜汁抓音
21:59 Amamiya Kanade: 你指hard还是adv
22:00 Amamiya Kanade: 我觉得我抓的很工整啊
22:01 Yugu: hard
22:02 Amamiya Kanade: emm
22:02 Yugu: 00:00:840 (3,4,5) - 这都没音
22:02 Yugu: 你还放个三连
22:03 Amamiya Kanade: 确实有的
22:03 Amamiya Kanade: 我以我的耳朵担保
22:03 Yugu: 这么小个音
22:03 Yugu: 跟都不用跟
22:03 Yugu: 玩家会一脸懵逼的
22:03 Yugu: 这算overmap,还是不能搬上台面的overmap
22:04 Yugu: 00:01:385 (1,2) -
22:04 Amamiya Kanade: emm
22:04 Yugu: 这里
22:04 Amamiya Kanade: 我再想想怎么改
22:04 Yugu: 前一个ds是0.8 隔了1/1
22:04 Yugu: 后一个你隔了1.1
22:04 Yugu: 不对 ds是1.1
22:04 Yugu: 隔了1/2
22:05 Yugu: 在hard你这么摆
22:05 Yugu: 作死
22:06 Yugu: 00:03:022 (1,2) - 1的白线重音 第二个滑条2的红线重音
22:06 Yugu: 不好
22:07 Yugu: 把2换成note加滑条
22:07 Yugu: 白线note红线滑条比较好
22:07 Amamiya Kanade: 跟的弦乐
22:08 Yugu: 你这里跟声音比较大的鼓声比较好
22:08 Amamiya Kanade: fixed
22:09 Yugu: 00:00:113 (1,2) - 前面这个也是
22:09 Yugu: 后面相同节奏你自己看下
22:10 Yugu: 00:10:657 (5) - NC
22:10 Yugu: hard不推荐这么长的相同颜色combo
22:10 Yugu: 正好是换句的地方
22:10 Yugu: 可以分清楚节奏
22:10 Yugu: 相同颜色combo最好别超过6个
22:11 Amamiya Kanade: EMM
22:12 Yugu: 00:31:930 (7,8) - 后移1/2红线加个note
22:12 Yugu: 排列的话自己想下,我觉得直接stack上滑条头就好了
22:14 Yugu: 00:45:748 (2) - ta e 在白线 你这还是要跟人声
22:14 Yugu: 一样改成前面note后面滑条就好了
22:15 Amamiya Kanade: 你savelog去论坛骗kds去
22:15 Amamiya Kanade: 我睡觉了
22:15 Yugu: 01:01:930 (1) - ^
22:16 Yugu: 01:03:748 (7) - 人声停在白线,直接改1/2滑条加note比较好
22:17 Yugu: 01:19:930 - 放个note 转盘直接放在note后面就好了
22:18 Yugu: 01:18:111 (4) - 没有对齐时间轴
22:18 Yugu: NC毛病我不帮你看了,主要还是想清楚NC该什么时候,分节奏还是什么
22:19 Yugu: 多看点rank图看看排列,想办法弄整洁一点,滑条最好不要相互贴边摆什么的

gary说得对!

感觉你这鸽可以塞爆
塞爆还是交给那几位大佬
Ryuusei Aika
placehold
晚上看一下
-Eriri-
送水摸了

这些小问题解决一下吧w



[Hard]

00:01:385 (1,2) - 看着有些奇怪 粘太近了?可以试一下1的滑条尾接2的头而不是这种要包的,或者间距拉大吧

00:00:113 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这一串的节奏,后面的一串并没有跟这个节奏,
可以尝试一下00:04:112 (5) - 和00:07:021 (5) - 变成1/4折返或者一个三连,这样节奏感会强烈一些

00:03:022 (1) - 00:05:931 (1) - 这些重音特别明显的地方的间距可以适当加大,

00:47:385 (1,2,3,4) - 4的位置有点不和谐

00:48:476 (4,5) - 00:48:476 (4,5) - 其实有点没包好

01:16:657 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这一串有点做的怪怪的,有种像该跳但是又不是跳的感觉..flow有点不太好吧


[Advanded]
难度名是Advanced吧...?

00:44:657 (3) - 这note感觉可以删掉
01:16:293 (6) - 这个摆在01:16:475 - 感觉合适一些
Topic Starter
Shiratori

-Eriri- wrote:

送水摸了

这些小问题解决一下吧ww
正在改



[Hard]

00:01:385 (1,2) - 看着有些奇怪 粘太近了?可以试一下1的滑条尾接2的头而不是这种要包的,或者间距拉大吧试着改了

00:00:113 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这一串的节奏,后面的一串并没有跟这个节奏,
可以尝试一下00:04:112 (5) - 和00:07:021 (5) - 变成1/4折返或者一个三连,这样节奏感会强烈一些改了三连

00:03:022 (1) - 00:05:931 (1) - 这些重音特别明显的地方的间距可以适当加大,fixed

00:47:385 (1,2,3,4) - 4的位置有点不和谐改了

00:48:476 (4,5) - 00:48:476 (4,5) - 其实有点没包好fixed

01:16:657 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这一串有点做的怪怪的,有种像该跳但是又不是跳的感觉..flow有点不太好吧
重新改了遍flow

[Advanded]
难度名是Advanced吧...?...................... 我好丢人啊

00:44:657 (3) - 这note感觉可以删掉删了
01:16:293 (6) - 这个摆在01:16:475 - 感觉合适一些没改 我觉得还是这样比较好 如果其他人说改的话我就改一下
感谢摸 没法m4m真是抱歉 要kd私我
Lobelia
TAG里面可以加的:tv size,opening,katsugeki/touken ranbu,hotaru,yamazo
metadata: http://www.saitosoma.com/info/archive/?483334
Topic Starter
Shiratori

[ Abhor ] wrote:

TAG里面可以加的:tv size,opening,katsugeki/touken ranbu,hotaru,yamazo
明天加
Sandrew
来水摸了
tag里每个gd mapper的名字建议先加上
[suzuki]
00:22:294 (3,1) - 1的滑条边和有点近不太美观,这里直接包起来比较好吧
kanade
[advanced]
首先blanket是不是多得有点精污了
cs可以不和normal一样,cs3摆起来容易挤,ar od直接抄其他tvsieze的三围就行
排版不太整洁,滑条也单一了一点,适当加点直滑条进去比较好,最好不要包来包去
normal就没有那么多blanket那么多三点式滑条,排版也干净,可以适当借鉴
还有kika也没加至少预先加一下
00:27:567 (2,3,4) - 2是想和后面的5区别开所以4没有包2?整体不怎么好看也影响了整洁
00:30:476 (3,4,5) - 3和5可以明显地看到挨在了一起,最好避免
00:39:203 (2,3) - 3既然不包2可以考虑flow直接向下?
00:45:567 (5,6) - 要么包起来要么改改下音方式,前面摆几个note进去
00:53:748 (1,2) - 有点挤了,其实这里不用这么多滑条,直接跟vocal摆个长条折返或者两个转盘好了(技术跟鼓点你还有四分音没下
01:04:657 (10,1) - 这里也挨得有点明显
01:06:839 (5) - advanced就不要在下音上玩这种花样了吧,长滑条好了
01:09:020 (4,5,6) - 这里也是,挤
01:25:929 (5,6,7,8) - 这一串摆开一点,单点和这返有点近了
[hard]
hard的od7最好,毕竟你的ar都8了
人声出现前的下音迷,考虑适当参考一下abhor的diff吧
advanced多跟vocal,hard里多跟鼓点,明显的四分鼓最好多点出来几个,不要一会儿点一会儿不点
总体问题都是advanced里面出现过的,不再一一点出了
00:00:840 (3,4,5) - 听不出音,还有作为hard你的三连间距有点大了,后面的三连也有这样的问题
00:20:839 (7,8,9,1) - 漏了一个四分音
00:30:476 (4,5) - 5直接向下摆吧
01:07:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 直接复制粘贴的吧?偷懒不是这么偷的至少ctrl+h ctrl+j啊
01:18:839 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - 加nc,还有可能这么连跳稍微难了点,可以两个2分滑条加跳
01:23:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1开始加一根绿线,滑条尾都不压线了
01:27:384 (7) - 渐弱的长音用这种不合适
00:44:294 (2,3,4) - 23间距太大了,四分人声用滑条比较好
00:31:203 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这种类似的排列尽量避免,不好看而且容易挤
总之好好改改吧不要像我一样浪费了其他mapper的gd
[abhor]
00:30:476 (3,4) - 有点奇怪,34滑条头在y轴同高会不会好一点?
00:07:203 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 连续锐角跳还是在右下角会不会暴力了一点


good luck :)
齐藤壮马录歌前一定没吃饱饭全程有气无力感摸了这么久我快睡着了这还是燃曲吗

摸完你的图今天限锻巴形薙刀两发出货了嘻嘻再回来感谢一下
Topic Starter
Shiratori

Sandrew wrote:

来水摸了
tag里每个gd mapper的名字建议先加上
[suzuki]
00:22:294 (3,1) - 这里直接包起来比较好吧
kanade
[advanced]
首先blanket是不是多得有点精污了
cs可以不和normal一样,cs3摆起来容易挤,ar od直接抄其他tvsieze的三围就行
排版不太整洁,滑条也单一了一点,适当加点直滑条进去比较好,最好不要包来包去
normal就没有那么多blanket那么多三点式滑条,排版也干净,可以适当借鉴
还有kika也没加至少预先加一下
00:27:567 (2,3,4) - 2是想和后面的5区别开所以4没有包2?整体不怎么好看也影响了整洁
00:30:476 (3,4,5) - 3和5可以明显地看到挨在了一起,最好避免
00:39:203 (2,3) - 3既然不包2可以考虑flow直接向下?
00:45:567 (5,6) - 要么包起来要么改改下音方式,前面摆几个note进去
00:53:748 (1,2) - 有点挤了,其实这里不用这么多滑条,直接跟vocal摆个长条折返或者两个转盘好了(技术跟鼓点你还有四分音没下
01:04:657 (10,1) - 这里也挨得有点明显
01:06:839 (5) - advanced就不要在下音上玩这种花样了吧,长滑条好了
01:09:020 (4,5,6) - 这里也是,挤
01:25:929 (5,6,7,8) - 这一串摆开一点,单点和这返有点近了
[hard]
hard的od7最好,毕竟你的ar都8了
人声出现前的下音迷,考虑适当参考一下abhor的diff吧
advanced多跟vocal,hard里多跟鼓点,明显的四分鼓最好多点出来几个,不要一会儿点一会儿不点
总体问题都是advanced里面出现过的,不再一一点出了
00:00:840 (3,4,5) - 听不出音,还有作为hard你的三连间距有点大了,后面的三连也有这样的问题
00:20:839 (7,8,9,1) - 漏了一个四分音
00:30:476 (4,5) - 5直接向下摆吧
01:07:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 直接复制粘贴的吧?偷懒不是这么偷的至少ctrl+h ctrl+j啊
01:18:839 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - 加nc,还有可能这么连跳稍微难了点,可以两个2分滑条加跳
01:23:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1开始加一根绿线,滑条尾都不压线了
01:27:384 (7) - 渐弱的长音用这种不合适
00:44:294 (2,3,4) - 23间距太大了,四分人声用滑条比较好
00:31:203 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这种类似的排列尽量避免,不好看而且容易挤
[abhor]
00:30:476 (3,4) - 有点奇怪,34滑条头在y轴同高会不会好一点?
00:07:203 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 连续锐角跳还是在右下角会不会暴力了一点
哇好快 明天改
Topic Starter
Shiratori

Amamiya Kanade wrote:

Sandrew wrote:

来水摸了
tag里每个gd mapper的名字建议先加上
[suzuki]
00:22:294 (3,1) - 这里直接包起来比较好吧
kanade
[advanced]
首先blanket是不是多得有点精污了好象是哦
cs可以不和normal一样,cs3摆起来容易挤,ar od直接抄其他tvsieze的三围就行
排版不太整洁,滑条也单一了一点,适当加点直滑条进去比较好,最好不要包来包去
normal就没有那么多blanket那么多三点式滑条,排版也干净,可以适当借鉴
还有kika也没加至少预先加一下原本要和gder一起商量的 算了
00:27:567 (2,3,4) - 2是想和后面的5区别开所以4没有包2?整体不怎么好看也影响了整洁
00:30:476 (3,4,5) - 3和5可以明显地看到挨在了一起,最好避免
00:39:203 (2,3) - 3既然不包2可以考虑flow直接向下?
00:45:567 (5,6) - 要么包起来要么改改下音方式,前面摆几个note进去
00:53:748 (1,2) - 有点挤了,其实这里不用这么多滑条,直接跟vocal摆个长条折返或者两个转盘好了(技术跟鼓点你还有四分音没下
01:04:657 (10,1) - 这里也挨得有点明显
01:06:839 (5) - advanced就不要在下音上玩这种花样了吧,长滑条好了
01:09:020 (4,5,6) - 这里也是,挤
01:25:929 (5,6,7,8) - 这一串摆开一点,单点和这返有点近了
all fixed
[hard]
hard的od7最好,毕竟你的ar都8了
人声出现前的下音迷,考虑适当参考一下abhor的diff吧
advanced多跟vocal,hard里多跟鼓点,明显的四分鼓最好多点出来几个,不要一会儿点一会儿不点
总体问题都是advanced里面出现过的,不再一一点出了
00:00:840 (3,4,5) - 听不出音,还有作为hard你的三连间距有点大了,后面的三连也有这样的问题
00:20:839 (7,8,9,1) - 漏了一个四分音
00:30:476 (4,5) - 5直接向下摆吧
01:07:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 直接复制粘贴的吧?偷懒不是这么偷的至少ctrl+h ctrl+j啊
01:18:839 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - 加nc,还有可能这么连跳稍微难了点,可以两个2分滑条加跳
01:23:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1开始加一根绿线,滑条尾都不压线了
01:27:384 (7) - 渐弱的长音用这种不合适
00:44:294 (2,3,4) - 23间距太大了,四分人声用滑条比较好
00:31:203 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这种类似的排列尽量避免,不好看而且容易挤
hard remap了
[abhor]
00:30:476 (3,4) - 有点奇怪,34滑条头在y轴同高会不会好一点?
00:07:203 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 连续锐角跳还是在右下角会不会暴力了一点
哇好快
感谢摸图
- Pika
Umm... Idk if you speak english... but if you can, here is the mod!

Suzuki's Normal seems fine. :)
Kiai time 00:56:839 to the end seems good.
Advanced
00:39:930 - Blanket this note with the 2 slider's 5 and 1
And that's really it

Hard
00:01:203 - There is a beat here
00:30:294 - Put this note on top of this note 00:31:021
00:31:021 - Bring this note down to the same level as the slider
01:18:839 - New combo?

Abhor's Insane
00:19:471 - Maybe place this at x:444 and y:196
00:28:476 - Have this sliders end on this slider's top 00:29:203
01:14:293 - Put this slider head onto this slider's head 01:14:839
Remember, these are all your choices, so you don't really have to do these.
I hope my mod helped!
HYPERGOD APPROVES!
Topic Starter
Shiratori

-AsrieLx- wrote:

Umm... Idk if you speak english... but if you can, here is the mod!

Suzuki's Normal seems fine. :)
Kiai time 00:56:839 to the end seems good.
Advanced
00:39:930 - Blanket this note with the 2 slider's 5 and 1FIXED
And that's really it

Hard
00:01:203 - There is a beat herei think the beat shouldn't be mapped
00:30:294 - Put this note on top of this note 00:31:021fixed
00:31:021 - Bring this note down to the same level as the sliderfixed
01:18:839 - New combo?fixed
IN FACT IM REMAPPING HARD

Abhor's Insane
00:19:471 - Maybe place this at x:444 and y:196
00:28:476 - Have this sliders end on this slider's top 00:29:203
01:14:293 - Put this slider head onto this slider's head 01:14:839
Remember, these are all your choices, so you don't really have to do these.
I hope my mod helped!
HYPERGOD APPROVES!
THANKS FOR MODDING
Topic Starter
Shiratori

Sandrew wrote:

good luck :)
齐藤壮马录歌前一定没吃饱饭全程有气无力感摸了这么久我快睡着了这还是燃曲吗

摸完你的图今天限锻巴形薙刀两发出货了嘻嘻再回来感谢一下
这本来就不是燃曲
其实主要还是有点悲伤的感觉 种种迹象都表明活击要出事
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我先打死欧洲狗
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吸欧气吸欧气
Pok0555
Hi! I'm from my NM queue
I'm not really good at English, so sorry if you find it difficult to read
Anyway, let's start

General
btw, I won't mod lv9 since it isn't finish

I. -Hitsounds-
1. I think the hitsounds on your levels are a bit too loud for players to concentrate on the song, I recommend changing the hitsounds to 30-40% and 40%-50% during Kiai mode
2. You shouldn't use normal hitsounds on your map (Advance and Hard) change it to Soft instead, Normal hitsounds are very irritating and it doesn't really fit the song in my opinion
3. Aside from Abhor's insane (which is mapped pretty good in my opinion) your other maps barely or doesn't uses special hitsounds at all, try to use it to replicate the song's instruments, you can also use custom sounds if you want to the one I highlighted in red are special hitsounds

II. -Design-
1. Your map has enabled countdowns, but since it starts way too early, your map can't use countdowns, so go to song_setup/design and turn off countdowns
2. Some of your maps have widescreen support on, your beatmaps has no storyboards so go to song_setup/design to turn it off to prevent lagging
3. You Guest difficulties don't have any background images at all, even if you have a video or it's a guest map, you still need to add a background image
4. Your combo colors on your maps (aside Abhor's insane) uses the default combo colors, I highly recommend changing this to a new color by going to song_setup/colours, I recommend using dark colors since it fits the song's tone in my opinion but make sure it's not too dark, notably over 30 Luminosity, and make sure it doesn't blend in with the background, or players can't see their circles!

III. -Metadata-
1. Some of your difficulties have tags and some don't? Make sure all your difficulties have tags, and all of them must be consistent, meaning there can't be any conflicts between them!

IV. -Difficulty-
1. The approach rate in your Advance map is a bit fast, try to make it from 4.5 to 6.5 (tip, hold shift and move the difficulties for precise changes)

V. Timing
1. 00:56:112 - I personally think your preview point should be set here, it's not much of a difference, but I think it's better, though this is optional
2. Some of your difficulties need Kiai times or basically a climax of your song, Kiai time should also be consistent through the difficulties according to the guidelines, even though it doesn't have to be if it's a guest difficulty, I still highly recommend putting Kiai time on every difficulties and I think the Kiai's offset should be on 00:56:839

I'll now go over your difficulties one by one
Suzuki's Normal
00:17:567 (4) - I would make this become 2 circles, according to the guidelines, you shouldn't have an all sliders section pretty much cuz new players don't often know how slider works and having a lot of them will cause them to break their combo, so circles are like resting points for them, of course, this mostly applies to Easy, but this guideline still apply to normal although in a less strict way
00:20:476 (2) - Same ^
00:28:476 (3) - Same ^
00:46:657 (4) - Same ^
00:48:839 (3) - Same ^
01:02:657 (1) - Same ^
01:14:293 (1) - Same ^
01:19:020 (4) - Same ^ (and stack this after you convert them into circles since they're 1/2 beat)
01:06:839 (1) - This slider is quite long, try to make it special
01:21:566 (1) - Same ^
01:27:384 (1) - I would make this become a spinner personally but this is optional
That's all for Normal, moving on to Advance

Advance
00:37:203 (9) - Make a new combo here, you shouldn't make combo over 8 in advance, it'll make HP drain a lot stricter
01:04:293 (9) - Same ^
01:19:929 (1) - You should either remove this spinner or make it shorter, according to the guidelines you should have at least 2 beats for player to rest
01:26:111 (6,7,8,9) - Don't make repeats of 1/4 sliders in advance in such a short time
01:27:020 (9) - You shouldn't really use double reverse sliders, but this is optional
That's all mistake I could find for Advance, moving on!

Hard
01:18:839 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Try to make this into a better and more predictable formation where there's a pattern
Um... that's really all for Hard tbh I can barely find any mistakes, moving on!


Insane
Yeah... I don't really think there's any mistakes here either, this difficulty is quite well mapped
Welp, I guess that's all I could cover for you
Good luck ;)
Topic Starter
Shiratori

Pok0555 wrote:

Hi! I'm from my NM queue
I'm not really good at English, so sorry if you find it difficult to read
Anyway, let's start

General
btw, I won't mod lv9 since it isn't finish

I. -Hitsounds-
1. I think the hitsounds on your levels are a bit too loud for players to concentrate on the song, I recommend changing the hitsounds to 30-40% and 40%-50% during Kiai mode
2. You shouldn't use normal hitsounds on your map (Advance and Hard) change it to Soft instead, Normal hitsounds are very irritating and it doesn't really fit the song in my opinion
3. Aside from Abhor's insane (which is mapped pretty good in my opinion) your other maps barely or doesn't uses special hitsounds at all, try to use it to replicate the song's instruments, you can also use custom sounds if you want to the one I highlighted in red are special emm other map haven't finished hit sound.hitsounds

II. -Design-
1. Your map has enabled countdowns, but since it starts way too early, your map can't use countdowns, so go to song_setup/design and turn off countdowns
2. Some of your maps have widescreen support on, your beatmaps has no storyboards so go to song_setup/design to turn it off to prevent lagging
3. You Guest difficulties don't have any background images at all, even if you have a video or it's a guest map, you still need to add a background image
4. Your combo colors on your maps (aside Abhor's insane) uses the default combo colors, I highly recommend changing this to a new color by going to song_setup/colours, I recommend using dark colors since it fits the song's tone in my opinion but make sure it's not too dark, notably over 30 Luminosity, and make sure it doesn't blend in with the background, or players can't see their circles!

III. -Metadata-
1. Some of your difficulties have tags and some don't? Make sure all your difficulties have tags, and all of them must be consistent, meaning there can't be any conflicts between them!
fixed
IV. -Difficulty-
1. The approach rate in your Advance map is a bit fast, try to make it from 4.5 to 6.5 (tip, hold shift and move the difficulties for precise changes)true down a little

V. Timing
1. 00:56:112 - I personally think your preview point should be set here, it's not much of a difference, but I think it's better, though this is optional
2. Some of your difficulties need Kiai times or basically a climax of your song, Kiai time should also be consistent through the difficulties according to the guidelines, even though it doesn't have to be if it's a guest difficulty, I still highly recommend putting Kiai time on every difficulties and I think the Kiai's offset should be on 00:56:839

I'll now go over your difficulties one by one
Suzuki's Normal
00:17:567 (4) - I would make this become 2 circles, according to the guidelines, you shouldn't have an all sliders section pretty much cuz new players don't often know how slider works and having a lot of them will cause them to break their combo, so circles are like resting points for them, of course, this mostly applies to Easy, but this guideline still apply to normal although in a less strict way
00:20:476 (2) - Same ^
00:28:476 (3) - Same ^
00:46:657 (4) - Same ^
00:48:839 (3) - Same ^
01:02:657 (1) - Same ^
01:14:293 (1) - Same ^
01:19:020 (4) - Same ^ (and stack this after you convert them into circles since they're 1/2 beat)
01:06:839 (1) - This slider is quite long, try to make it special
01:21:566 (1) - Same ^
01:27:384 (1) - I would make this become a spinner personally but this is optional
That's all for Normal, moving on to Advance

Advance
00:37:203 (9) - Make a new combo here, you shouldn't make combo over 8 in advance, it'll make HP drain a lot stricterfixed
01:04:293 (9) - Same ^fixed
01:19:929 (1) - You should either remove this spinner or make it shorter, according to the guidelines you should have at least 2 beats for player to restemm that's guidelines, not rules
01:26:111 (6,7,8,9) - Don't make repeats of 1/4 sliders in advance in such a short timenot fixed, i think its better. if other man said i may fixed
01:27:020 (9) - You shouldn't really use double reverse sliders, but this is optiona
That's all mistake I could find for Advance, moving on!

Hard
01:18:839 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Try to make this into a better and more predictable formation where there's a patternfixed?
Um... that's really all for Hard tbh I can barely find any mistakes, moving on!


Insane
Yeah... I don't really think there's any mistakes here either, this difficulty is quite well mapped
Welp, I guess that's all I could cover for you
Good luck ;)
Thank you for modding
RevenKz
Posting for Lince:
DO NOT GIVE KDS TO THIS POST

Lince Cosmico wrote:

Hello lince here from my 3 NM's per week modding queue
I'll be moddingg Abhor's insane and Hard diff.

"Abhor's Insane
General:
- Add tags (to all diffs), the only diff that currently has tags is Hard diff
- Why doesn't this diff have BG?
- Remove widescreen support on song setup screen, There isnt actually any Storyboard
This timing line (the red one) 00:56:839 - doen't have kiai enabled, please enable it
Objects:
• 00:02:658 (4) - Putting NC here to avoid confusions with 00:02:840 - would be good
• 00:04:476 (1) - What about making this not-reverse? It would be consistent with 00:01:567 (1) - and you could actually do the same than here: 00:01:567 (1,2,3,4,5) -
• 00:33:112 - Why does it end here? Actually it could fit by finishing on 00:33:203 -
• 00:34:203 - Feels like there's a sound here, doing a triple wouldn't be bad tho
• 00:40:839 (3) - Adding NC for emphasis isnt a bad option
• 00:43:748 (1,2,3) - The patern is fine, its just that the spacing is bigger than what you used 00:41:567 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - here so it could end confusing the player (i actually didnt expect that when i testplayer and messed up the play a bit there)
• 00:44:476 (1) - Reduce the last curve a bit so it blankets correctly with 00:45:021 (2) -
• 00:50:294 (1,2) - I know that you want to stack it, but its just that you used a lot less spacing for these kind of rhythm changes in the whole map and then you added spacing only to this one so reducing it wouldn't be wrong
• 00:56:839 (1,2) - This is different, this is the kiai so its not "unconsistent", but im mentioning it just if you want to change themm
• 00:59:567 (5,6,1) - The curve of this triple is .... weird, it'd be better if it were actually an straigh triple shape
• 01:06:112 (3) - What about moving this something like this? (at least the pattern will be a bit more open and it would also pass exactly on 01:05:385 (4) - (fking puush i had to use gyazo xD)
• 01:06:657 (4) - I'm pretty sure that this would be better if this was two circles (It would emphasize the vocals a lot better)
• 01:08:475 (1) - Move this a bit down, it's actually not fiting the stream shape
• 01:11:384 (1) - Same with this, (you could rotate this one a bit instead)
• 01:23:020 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is not emphasizing the sounds correctly, you should use what you did before ( 01:20:111 (1,2,3,4) - )

Thats all, good diff, it just need to clear some things on the kiai but its pretty well done :)

"Hard"
General:
I hope this is in purpose, i mean, countdown is enabled
- Volume is all in 100%, please consider reducing it (to 60% for example)
Objects:
NC = New Combo
• 00:01:567 (5) - This is not how you do one of this sliders! (Maybe you can find how to do it correctly here!). Also add NC since there's a downbeat (downbeats are basically these big white lines).
NOTE: This doesn't mean that you have to NC every downbeat, only specific one where sounds actually "starts" or are more noticable
• 00:03:022 (5) - Add NC here too, if you hear there's where the sound starts (one of the reasons of why to use NC)
• 00:13:930 (5) - Add NC and move it a bit high (like this) so it could do a blanket with 00:13:567 (4) - 's sliderend
• 00:26:112 (3,4) - What about removing this and adding a long slider instead? It would fit the vocals a lot better
• 00:56:839 (2) - Add NC and add a kiai (Timing panel / Timing line / Style / Check Kiai Mode) , Kiai is an important thing for intense parts, it's relevance while playing is that it makes the circles bright and it actually gets more epic, even if you don't really notice it at all
• 00:58:293 (7) - Add NC

Actually since this diff needs a lot of work, ill let you this guide that monstrata did a while ago: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/252878 (look at the last post on the forum page link i sent)
And you should check Sonnyc's profile since he did some interesting guides where you can actually fill your lack of knowledge about mapping :)

This is all i have , i hope thata this helped you with your map and good luck :D
Topic Starter
Shiratori

RevengeZ wrote:

Posting for Lince:
DO NOT GIVE KDS TO THIS POST
sorry i need sp to find bn(

Lince Cosmico wrote:

Hello lince here from my 3 NM's per week modding queue
I'll be moddingg Abhor's insane and Hard diff.

"Abhor's Insane
General:
- Add tags (to all diffs), the only diff that currently has tags is Hard diffits my mistakes, sorry
- Why doesn't this diff have BG?beacause i dont find a bg【】
- Remove widescreen support on song setup screen, There isnt actually any Storyboard
This timing line (the red one) 00:56:839 - doen't have kiai enabled, please enable it
Objects:
• 00:02:658 (4) - Putting NC here to avoid confusions with 00:02:840 - would be good
• 00:04:476 (1) - What about making this not-reverse? It would be consistent with 00:01:567 (1) - and you could actually do the same than here: 00:01:567 (1,2,3,4,5) -
• 00:33:112 - Why does it end here? Actually it could fit by finishing on 00:33:203 -
• 00:34:203 - Feels like there's a sound here, doing a triple wouldn't be bad tho
• 00:40:839 (3) - Adding NC for emphasis isnt a bad option
• 00:43:748 (1,2,3) - The patern is fine, its just that the spacing is bigger than what you used 00:41:567 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - here so it could end confusing the player (i actually didnt expect that when i testplayer and messed up the play a bit there)
• 00:44:476 (1) - Reduce the last curve a bit so it blankets correctly with 00:45:021 (2) -
• 00:50:294 (1,2) - I know that you want to stack it, but its just that you used a lot less spacing for these kind of rhythm changes in the whole map and then you added spacing only to this one so reducing it wouldn't be wrong
• 00:56:839 (1,2) - This is different, this is the kiai so its not "unconsistent", but im mentioning it just if you want to change themm
• 00:59:567 (5,6,1) - The curve of this triple is .... weird, it'd be better if it were actually an straigh triple shape
• 01:06:112 (3) - What about moving this something like this? (at least the pattern will be a bit more open and it would also pass exactly on 01:05:385 (4) - (fking puush i had to use gyazo xD)
• 01:06:657 (4) - I'm pretty sure that this would be better if this was two circles (It would emphasize the vocals a lot better)
• 01:08:475 (1) - Move this a bit down, it's actually not fiting the stream shape
• 01:11:384 (1) - Same with this, (you could rotate this one a bit instead)
• 01:23:020 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is not emphasizing the sounds correctly, you should use what you did before ( 01:20:111 (1,2,3,4) - )

Thats all, good diff, it just need to clear some things on the kiai but its pretty well done :)

"Hard"
General:
I hope this is in purpose, i mean, countdown is enabled fixed
- Volume is all in 100%, please consider reducing it (to 60% for example)
Objects:
NC = New Combo
• 00:01:567 (5) - This is not how you do one of this sliders! (Maybe you can find how to do it correctly here!). Also add NC since there's a downbeat (downbeats are basically these big white lines).fixed
NOTE: This doesn't mean that you have to NC every downbeat, only specific one where sounds actually "starts" or are more noticable
• 00:03:022 (5) - Add NC here too, if you hear there's where the sound starts (one of the reasons of why to use NC)fixed
• 00:13:930 (5) - Add NC and move it a bit high (like this) so it could do a blanket with 00:13:567 (4) - 's sliderendfixed
• 00:26:112 (3,4) - What about removing this and adding a long slider instead? It would fit the vocals a lot betteri dont really know whats you mean
• 00:56:839 (2) - Add NC and add a kiai (Timing panel / Timing line / Style / Check Kiai Mode) , Kiai is an important thing for intense parts, it's relevance while playing is that it makes the circles bright and it actually gets more epic, even if you don't really notice it at allfixed
• 00:58:293 (7) - Add NCfixed

Actually since this diff needs a lot of work, ill let you this guide that monstrata did a while ago: t/252878 (look at the last post on the forum page link i sent)
And you should check Sonnyc's profile since he did some interesting guides where you can actually fill your lack of knowledge about mapping :)

This is all i have , i hope thata this helped you with your map and good luck :D
Net0
General Issues:

  1. There's tag conflits in Hard with other diffs.
  2. Remove countdown in all diffs
  3. Pls add a background image in all diffs
  4. Some hitsounds are not being used:
    Unused hitsounds:
    soft-hitclap.wav
    soft-hitclap2.wav
    soft-hitwhistle2.wav
  5. In Level 9 diff, slider is not snapped 00:08:840 (1) -
  6. In Hard diff you have inconsistent volume level in timing points with inherented points, same thing happen in other diffs.

LAZY MOD REQUESTS that shows you didn't read will make you receive a lazy mod.
Gl o/
Aika45
Hi! from my modding queue...


Here are some list of my observations with the map...

Hard
00:23:021 (3) - Have a better alignment with 4 to have a better look and flow
00:36:112 (2,3) - You can align the circles better for it to have a good linear shape
01:18:839 (6) - Start a new combo here
01:15:748 (5) - Add more curve like what you did to 6 or align it better with 6

I also observe one thing in advance, it's up to you to take it into consideration

Advanced
00:34:294 (4) - Weird pattern, you can use a straight or the same curved slider patterns to keep consistency

And also in Lv9 but its not finished yet so...

Anyways, here it is

Lv9
00:33:567 (1) - Keep a better view with the slider ends, its a bit odd and somehow confusing


Anyways, its a map that is furnished well, and the flow in the map is good... I hope my mod helps... :) :) :)
Lobelia

RevengeZ wrote:

"Abhor's Insane
General:
- Add tags (to all diffs), the only diff that currently has tags is Hard difffixed
- Why doesn't this diff have BG????i added and sent it to him,i will let him add it
- Remove widescreen support on song setup screen, There isnt actually any Storyboardfixed
This timing line (the red one) 00:56:839 - doen't have kiai enabled, please enable itfixed
Objects:
• 00:02:658 (4) - Putting NC here to avoid confusions with 00:02:840 - would be goodqwq,i feel it's fine
• 00:04:476 (1) - What about making this not-reverse? It would be consistent with 00:01:567 (1) - and you could actually do the same than here: 00:01:567 (1,2,3,4,5) - qwq,it's fine now
• 00:33:112 - Why does it end here? Actually it could fit by finishing on 00:33:203 - just want to emphasize the vocal~~
• 00:34:203 - Feels like there's a sound here, doing a triple wouldn't be bad thoqwq,i feel it's ok
• 00:40:839 (3) - Adding NC for emphasis isnt a bad optionit's ok,but i don't like do many NC
• 00:43:748 (1,2,3) - The patern is fine, its just that the spacing is bigger than what you used 00:41:567 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - here so it could end confusing the player (i actually didnt expect that when i testplayer and messed up the play a bit there)fixed!
• 00:44:476 (1) - Reduce the last curve a bit so it blankets correctly with 00:45:021 (2) - fixed
• 00:50:294 (1,2) - I know that you want to stack it, but its just that you used a lot less spacing for these kind of rhythm changes in the whole map and then you added spacing only to this one so reducing it wouldn't be wrongfixed
• 00:56:839 (1,2) - This is different, this is the kiai so its not "unconsistent", but im mentioning it just if you want to change themmqwq,not really want to change them
• 00:59:567 (5,6,1) - The curve of this triple is .... weird, it'd be better if it were actually an straigh triple shapefixed
• 01:06:112 (3) - What about moving this something like this? (at least the pattern will be a bit more open and it would also pass exactly on 01:05:385 (4) - (fking puush i had to use gyazo xD)fking puush!ok,nice idea,fixed
• 01:06:657 (4) - I'm pretty sure that this would be better if this was two circles (It would emphasize the vocals a lot better)nice!fixed
• 01:08:475 (1) - Move this a bit down, it's actually not fiting the stream shapeok
• 01:11:384 (1) - Same with this, (you could rotate this one a bit instead)ok
• 01:23:020 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is not emphasizing the sounds correctly, you should use what you did before ( 01:20:111 (1,2,3,4) - )in fact,there are piano voice in the later part on the white line,so i change the rhythm~~

Thats all, good diff, it just need to clear some things on the kiai but its pretty well done :)Thanks for your help~
fixed
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我不是给你BG了吗。。为什么别人说我没有BG?然后TAG里面各个之间用空格隔开就好了,不要逗号都删掉,还要加上各GDER的名字,我的用[_abhor_]或者abhor都可以,随便你。还有各种乱七八糟的选项,什么widescreen,countdown,这些都是开图的人要照顾到的事情,不要觉得事后弄就好,很多人摸图看到这些问题根本就不想理你了,一开始就弄好。还有你现在combo颜色都没加啊!!赶紧换上,所有难度要统一,你选好颜色后自己去记事本里面复制粘贴每个难度都要改,我的COMBO颜色是根据我BG来选的,所以和你可能不是很搭调,你可以选完你的把我的复制粘贴了
我一看。。最开始跟你说了视频延迟的问题,你还没改,延迟调到-354
再有这种问题,我就弃坑啦
Topic Starter
Shiratori

[ Abhor ] wrote:

我不是给你BG了吗。。为什么别人说我没有BG?然后TAG里面各个之间用空格隔开就好了,不要逗号都删掉,还要加上各GDER的名字,我的用[_abhor_]或者abhor都可以,随便你。还有各种乱七八糟的选项,什么widescreen,countdown,这些都是开图的人要照顾到的事情,不要觉得事后弄就好,很多人摸图看到这些问题根本就不想理你了,一开始就弄好。还有你现在combo颜色都没加啊!!赶紧换上,所有难度要统一,你选好颜色后自己去记事本里面复制粘贴每个难度都要改,我的COMBO颜色是根据我BG来选的,所以和你可能不是很搭调,你可以选完你的把我的复制粘贴了
emmm
我一看。。最开始跟你说了视频延迟的问题,你还没改,延迟调到-354因为我不会啊!!! 我也很绝望啊
再有这种问题,我就弃坑啦
Topic Starter
Shiratori

Aika45 wrote:

Hi! from my modding queue...

Hard
00:23:021 (3) - Have a better alignment with 4 to have a better look and flowfixed
00:36:112 (2,3) - You can align the circles better for it to have a good linear shapefixed
01:18:839 (6) - Start a new combo herefixed
01:15:748 (5) - Add more curve like what you did to 6 or align it better with 6?? i try to fixed it

I also observe one thing in advance, it's up to you to take it into consideration

Advanced
00:34:294 (4) - Weird pattern, you can use a straight or the same curved slider patterns to keep consistencyfixed
Lobelia
歌手罗马音:Saito Soma 或者Soma Saito 赶紧改,官网都有明确说了,地址也给你了第一页
Topic Starter
Shiratori

[ Abhor ] wrote:

歌手罗马音:Saito Soma 或者Soma Saito 赶紧改,官网都有明确说了,地址也给你了第一页
我忘了,话说咱们是不是刷页了[]
Otosaka-Yu
Tags: tv size opening katsugeki/touken ranbu hotaru yamazo [ abhor ] suzuki_1112 1112deng
level9

先这样写着
edit:我擦,都给我摸这么多了,等我先咕咕冷静下来一条条看摸
Otosaka-Yu

Sandrew wrote:

来水摸了
tag里每个gd mapper的名字建议先加上
[suzuki]
00:22:294 (3,1) - 1的滑条边和有点近不太美观,这里直接包起来比较好吧 就这样吧,感觉还好,包起来感觉后面的flow不太友好而且我也懒
good luck :)

Pok0555 wrote:

Suzuki's Normal
00:17:567 (4) - I would make this become 2 circles, according to the guidelines, you shouldn't have an all sliders section pretty much cuz new players don't often know how slider works and having a lot of them will cause them to break their combo, so circles are like resting points for them, of course, this mostly applies to Easy, but this guideline still apply to normal although in a less strict way
00:20:476 (2) - Same ^
00:28:476 (3) - Same ^
00:46:657 (4) - Same ^
00:48:839 (3) - Same ^
01:02:657 (1) - Same ^
01:14:293 (1) - Same ^
01:19:020 (4) - Same ^ (and stack this after you convert them into circles since they're 1/2 beat)
01:06:839 (1) - This slider is quite long, try to make it special
01:21:566 (1) - Same ^
01:27:384 (1) - I would make this become a spinner personally but this is optional
That's all for Normal, moving on to Advance
I am sorry that I can not accept your suggestion, because these parts will be replaced by all the circle rhythm will be monotonous, I think normal in the low difficulty should be rhythm rich and not like the same, but still very grateful to you to mod my map.
Good luck ;)
Thank you guys :)
@Amamiya Kanade
我是不是也没有bg啊
Topic Starter
Shiratori

Suzuki_1112 wrote:

Sandrew wrote:

来水摸了
tag里每个gd mapper的名字建议先加上
[suzuki]
00:22:294 (3,1) - 1的滑条边和有点近不太美观,这里直接包起来比较好吧 就这样吧,感觉还好,包起来感觉后面的flow不太友好而且我也懒
good luck :)

Pok0555 wrote:

Suzuki's Normal
00:17:567 (4) - I would make this become 2 circles, according to the guidelines, you shouldn't have an all sliders section pretty much cuz new players don't often know how slider works and having a lot of them will cause them to break their combo, so circles are like resting points for them, of course, this mostly applies to Easy, but this guideline still apply to normal although in a less strict way
00:20:476 (2) - Same ^
00:28:476 (3) - Same ^
00:46:657 (4) - Same ^
00:48:839 (3) - Same ^
01:02:657 (1) - Same ^
01:14:293 (1) - Same ^
01:19:020 (4) - Same ^ (and stack this after you convert them into circles since they're 1/2 beat)
01:06:839 (1) - This slider is quite long, try to make it special
01:21:566 (1) - Same ^
01:27:384 (1) - I would make this become a spinner personally but this is optional
That's all for Normal, moving on to Advance
I am sorry that I can not accept your suggestion, because these parts will be replaced by all the circle rhythm will be monotonous, I think normal in the low difficulty should be rhythm rich and not like the same, but still very grateful to you to mod my map.
Good luck ;)
Thank you guys :)
@Amamiya Kanade
我是不是也没有bg啊
等第二话也给你加wait for next week
Otosaka-Yu
kanor
[normal]
00:25:567 (1,2,3) - 我个人比较推荐节奏统一成00:13:930 (1,2,3) - 那样
00:24:112 (1,2,3) -我觉得跟 00:12:476 (1,2,3) - 统一比较好
01:03:748 (3,1,2) - 这里还是跟vocal比较好吧,突然停顿一下有些不是很合理,你01:15:566 (1,2,3) - 这里就还挺好啊
00:19:567 (1) - 前面都是梁小姐一NC,怎么这里突然改成易小姐了,00:27:021 (1) - 这里又改回梁小姐,NC在check一遍吧
有进步
[Advanced]
DS请用1.4,我觉得1.4已经足够了,你这个明显是hard甚至li的DS
编辑器上方的查看菜单里可以取消堆叠效果
00:09:567 (1,2,3) - 这种摆放就不是很好看你看明明包住同一个Note,却一个近一个远
摆放感觉找不出什么规律,这个有点麻烦,我试着帮你摆了一点,要不你自己试试继续往下摆?
https://puu.sh/wCalM/fad2f58e3c.osu

[Hard]
01:01:020 (7,8,9,1,2) - 这一串我觉得跟提琴比较合适,以为一个三连1/2滑跳就能带过去,节奏也比较清楚,后面相同的地方也是如此
01:06:111 (3,4) - 这里明明隔了一拍DS和NC却都没有提示,太坑了
01:18:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这一串不需要这样,你这个只是hard,这里明显是连续的Jump了,最好不要再hard里出现,还是改掉吧
01:19:929 (1) - 转盘这里改成circle,最好保证clickable,然后转盘往后1/2或者1/4都可以
hard比前一个diff好很多

[奶奶]
00:24:839 (1,2,1,2) - 这里同样的节奏,ds却不一样,有点坑了
00:43:748 (1,1,1) - 这里我推荐把滑条尾的声音减弱点,结尾本来就是没音的
奶奶要不要试试kiai的finish改成这个啊https://puu.sh/wCaMa/0f45e5bf80.wav 咚 咔咚 咔咚


[Darling]
00:50:294 (1) - 这里漏了个clap
Lobelia
@kanor,改啦~~达令你个头,超凶
@Sandrew,改到同高了
@Amamiya Kanade,suzuki,奶奶的难度歌手罗马名还没改过来,然后你的Hard两个没对音,最后奶奶的难度widescreen,countdown没关掉
fixed
osu file format v14

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[Editor]
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Title:Hikari Dantsu Ame
TitleUnicode:ヒカリ断ツ雨
Artist:Saito Soma
ArtistUnicode:斉藤壮馬
Creator:Amamiya Kanade
Version:Abhor's Insane
Source:活撃/刀剣乱舞
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lialoveskench
Hi, here are some things i would change:

General:

YOU NEED TO HAVE HITSOUNDS IN YOUR MAP TO GET RANKED!!!
- In the ranking criteria it is displayed, that you need to add your own hitsounds to the map too, instead of just one in the whole map.

Normal:
01:00:839 (3) - I would first of all remove this circle.
01:00:293 (2) - Then put double this slider with 1 reverse arrow and then
01:01:202 (1) - Make this slider a little bit closer.

01:19:929 (2) - I would remove this slider, because it doesnt fit that much to the rythm in a normal difficulty, and this part could be a little bit hard for beginners.
01:27:384 (1) - Instead of putting a long slider at the end, i would recommend adding a spinner here, like you did in the other difficulties, because there aren't any others in this difficulty.

Advanced:
Nothing i would change here, everything seems good to me :)

Hard:
00:09:385 (5) - Add here a circle, just, so the player is kept to the rythm.
01:00:839 (6) - You could possibly like it more when the slider completes the voice in the music, but try to put a 1/2 beat slider here and
01:01:202 (7) - a 1/2 beat slider here too and see if you like it this way more :)
01:03:202 (4) - Here i would add a long slider that goes from here to 01:03:566 (5) -
01:03:384 (5) - But also delete this slider then.
01:04:111 (3) - Instead of this circle put a 1/2 slider here with 1 reverse arrow, so you also have to delete this slider 01:04:293 (4) -
01:04:657 (4) - Here put a long 1 beat slider and remove this slider 01:05:020 (1) -
01:05:202 (5) - But also here a short 1/2 slider with new combo.
01:06:475 (4) - I would put new combo here.

I hope i could hopefully make your map in any way possible better, that you also like the way i did mod it! :)
I'm sorry for only modding Normal and Hard, because i am horrible in making and modding harder maps than 2-3*

Best Regards,
FreakzBoy
Topic Starter
Shiratori

[ Abhor ] wrote:

@kanor,改啦~~达令你个头,超凶
@Sandrew,改到同高了
@Amamiya Kanade,suzuki,奶奶的难度歌手罗马名还没改过来,然后你的Hard两个没对音,最后奶奶的难度widescreen,countdown没关掉他自己没改传到我手就又变成打开了【狡辩.gif】亚美路!

fixed
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明天传
Topic Starter
Shiratori

FreakzBoy wrote:

Hi, here are some things i would change:

General:

YOU NEED TO HAVE HITSOUNDS IN YOUR MAP TO GET RANKED!!!
- In the ranking criteria it is displayed, that you need to add your own hitsounds to the map too, instead of just one in the whole map.

Normal:
01:00:839 (3) - I would first of all remove this circle.
01:00:293 (2) - Then put double this slider with 1 reverse arrow and then
01:01:202 (1) - Make this slider a little bit closer.

01:19:929 (2) - I would remove this slider, because it doesnt fit that much to the rythm in a normal difficulty, and this part could be a little bit hard for beginners.
01:27:384 (1) - Instead of putting a long slider at the end, i would recommend adding a spinner here, like you did in the other difficulties, because there aren't any others in this difficulty.

Advanced:
Nothing i would change here, everything seems good to me :)

Hard:
00:09:385 (5) - Add here a circle, just, so the player is kept to the rythm.
01:00:839 (6) - You could possibly like it more when the slider completes the voice in the music, but try to put a 1/2 beat slider here and
01:01:202 (7) - a 1/2 beat slider here too and see if you like it this way more :)
01:03:202 (4) - Here i would add a long slider that goes from here to 01:03:566 (5) -
01:03:384 (5) - But also delete this slider then.
01:04:111 (3) - Instead of this circle put a 1/2 slider here with 1 reverse arrow, so you also have to delete this slider 01:04:293 (4) -
01:04:657 (4) - Here put a long 1 beat slider and remove this slider 01:05:020 (1) -
01:05:202 (5) - But also here a short 1/2 slider with new combo.
01:06:475 (4) - I would put new combo here.
all fixed

I hope i could hopefully make your map in any way possible better, that you also like the way i did mod it! :)
I'm sorry for only modding Normal and Hard, because i am horrible in making and modding harder maps than 2-3*

Best Regards,
FreakzBoy
thanks for modding
Greentea3
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Shiratori

Greentea3 wrote:

謝謝大大製譜///
哇吓死我还以为是摸
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