Avril Lavigne - What The Hell

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5Atarox
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 13 septembre 2017 at 14:43:06

Artist: Avril Lavigne
Title: What The Hell
Tags: English,Pop,goodbye lullaby
BPM: 150
Filesize: 10418kb
Play Time: 03:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,35 stars, 204 notes)
  2. Hard (3,15 stars, 453 notes)
  3. Insane (4,08 stars, 540 notes)
  4. Normal (1,96 stars, 332 notes)


Download: Avril Lavigne - What The Hell
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 9 juillet 2017 at 16:30:24

Some words from the beatmapper:The beatmap was complete on 30th July.Be sure to enable the storyboard entirely made by me. Waiting for modders :)
Zunv
Hey,

NM from my Modding Queue

Insane


  • Flow: Quiet a lot of mistakes here. Mainly since the AR is way to low on the map.
    Aesthetics: There are some Aesthetics going on. Sometimes you did good and other times you were just to lazy and rushed them.
    Emphasizes: You need to improove on when to Emphasize what, because you sometimes did things wrong.

    00:07:250 (3,4,2) - These end offbeat?

    Emphasizes


  1. 00:07:250 (3,1,2) - Sliderhead should be on strong beat, while the sliderend should be on a equally or weaker sound.
  2. 00:11:050 (2,3,4,5) - All these feel the same, but the vocals of the song are different. 00:11:050 (2,4) - These should be the same but different from 00:11:450 (3,5) - An example of how I would have done it: https://puu.sh/wZvib/403fb762b2.png 00:09:650 (1) - ending on red tick to get the strong 00:10:850 (2) - still clickable. 00:11:450 (5,8) - On the same vocals and 00:11:050 (3,4,6,7) - on the same vocals. 00:12:250 (8) - Is repeated to not have that awkward gap where nothing happens.
  3. 00:12:850 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Again its very messy on what and how you Emphasize things. 00:12:850 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - vocals here 00:17:050 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - percussion there. Especially the last part feels weird since b4 00:11:050 (2,3,4,5) - this is how you mapped the exact same thing.
  4. 00:24:050 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - The vocals start here: 00:23:850 - Since you mapped the vocals all the time something should be clickable here. If you didn't intended to map to vocals here, then why is this 00:22:250 (1) - spinner here? You ignored very very strong percussion there. 00:25:450 (1,2) - here you are going on vocals again but 00:26:050 (3) - here you give percussion more attention in makeing them clickable and vocals just a sliderend 00:26:450 (4) - here are vocals again because you clearly ignoring the strong percussion since you put the sliderend there.
  5. 00:32:050 (1,2,3,4) - You placed the jumps wrong. The strong sound 00:32:450 (2) - has so much less spaceing than this 00:32:850 (3) - weak sound. should be the opposite.

    Aesthetics

  6. 00:04:850 (1,2,3,4) - Why aren't there the same distance? You wanted to make 00:05:450 (2,3) - look the same as 00:04:850 (1,4) - . Why didn't you just copy paste 00:05:450 (2,3) - then?
  7. 00:06:450 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - These overlaps and stacks just look bad. This is how it looks when everything is on the same tick 00:07:050 (2) - Not well blanket and the distances to the other objects around it are different. 00:07:250 (3,3) - weird overlap. You could for example have stacked them. 00:08:050 (1,2,3,4) - I don't know what these should form, but this looks just random. 00:08:650 (4) - is closer to 00:08:250 (2) - than to 00:08:050 (1) - . Should be equal (It's cuz of stack leniency?) 00:08:450 (3) - is closer to 00:08:050 (1) - than to 00:08:250 (2) - . Should be equal too. 00:09:250 (2) - sliderend should have equal distances to 00:08:250 (2) - and to the start of 00:09:650 (1) - . Look at this picture and now look how I did it I don't even need to draw with paint in it to show you equal distances :P (Use the approach circles for measurement next time).
  8. 00:09:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again you tried to get it look nice but sadly you failed. 00:09:650 (1,5) - Why are these not stacked and blanketed well? Why are 00:11:050 (2,3) - these not the same as 00:11:850 (4,5) - these just rotaded? 00:09:650 (1,3) - Why do they overlap?00:09:650 (1,2,3) - Why don't the sliderends form an even triangle? It's just random to me. You got to be carefull of these things. Normal player who do not mod or map won't pay attention to this but these are thing that differentiates a good between a not-so-good map.
  9. 00:15:850 (1) - This slider is really poor shaped. Im sure you can do better sliderart.
  10. 00:17:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as befor. No real shape, just randomly placed.
  11. 03:04:850 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is a handplaced stream? You should really create streams from sliders (Compose-> create slider to stream...)

    Flow

  12. 00:08:650 (4,1) - This stack flows poor. You should emphasize 00:08:850 (1) - differently.
  13. 00:17:250 (3,1,2) - angles like these also flow extremely poor. Try to move in acute angles.
  14. 00:29:450 (2,3,4) - the distances here are the same but you used 00:29:450 (2,3) - 1/1 gap here and 00:29:850 (3,4) - 1/2 gap here. Things like these should be avoided.
  15. 00:31:450 (4,5,1) - same thing basically


I am gonna stop here since pointing out every single mistake (I didn't even mention little ones) would make this mod take me like 10 hours.
What you should do now is:

  • Look over your map again with the things i mentioned.:
  1. Take a look at Emphasize. Where did you switch between vocals and percussion, when did you ignore strong beats, when did you place jumps on weak sounds, etc.
  2. Then check for asymmetries or weirdly different distances between objects. Where are bad blankets or where do you have weird overlaps.
  3. Then check if Flow is bad. Where did you use blunt angles or stacks? If you did, do they make sense (You can use them for emphasize stuff)
  4. Take this map to a Rest and start a new one.


Especially the last part helps you most. Map a lot like a LOT. Then ask others for short feedback / testplays. It should be enough so you know where you have to pay attention on your next map.
Also you should ask mapper or modder for feedback. The normal player would maybe not even see these things besides flow maybe.

As always, I suggest you to watch Pishifats Mapping Tutorials on Youtube
Also read through Kroytz guide for stream Mapping

I still wish you good luck with this and your next maps :)

Feel free to ask me questions anytime!
Topic Starter
5Atarox

Zunv wrote:

Hey,

NM from my Modding Queue

Insane


  • Flow: Quiet a lot of mistakes here. Mainly since the AR is way to low on the map. I just put 8
    Aesthetics: There are some Aesthetics going on. Sometimes you did good and other times you were just to lazy and rushed them.
    Emphasizes: You need to improove on when to Emphasize what, because you sometimes did things wrong.

    00:07:250 (3,4,2) - These end offbeat?

    Emphasizes


  1. 00:07:250 (3,1,2) - Sliderhead should be on strong beat, while the sliderend should be on a equally or weaker sound.
  2. 00:11:050 (2,3,4,5) - All these feel the same, but the vocals of the song are different. 00:11:050 (2,4) - These should be the same but different from 00:11:450 (3,5) - An example of how I would have done it: https://puu.sh/wZvib/403fb762b2.png 00:09:650 (1) - ending on red tick to get the strong 00:10:850 (2) - still clickable. 00:11:450 (5,8) - On the same vocals and 00:11:050 (3,4,6,7) - on the same vocals. 00:12:250 (8) - Is repeated to not have that awkward gap where nothing happens.
  3. 00:12:850 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Again its very messy on what and how you Emphasize things. 00:12:850 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - vocals here 00:17:050 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - percussion there. Especially the last part feels weird since b4 00:11:050 (2,3,4,5) - this is how you mapped the exact same thing.
  4. 00:24:050 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - The vocals start here: 00:23:850 - Since you mapped the vocals all the time something should be clickable here. If you didn't intended to map to vocals here, then why is this 00:22:250 (1) I intended to map the vocals - spinner here? You ignored very very strong percussion there. 00:25:450 (1,2) - here you are going on vocals again but 00:26:050 (3) - here you give percussion more attention in makeing them clickable and vocals just a sliderend 00:26:450 (4) - here are vocals again because you clearly ignoring the strong percussion since you put the sliderend there. Ok but I don't know how to fix it without ruining it I just put circles instead...
  5. 00:32:050 (1,2,3,4) - You placed the jumps wrong. The strong sound 00:32:450 (2) - has so much less spaceing than this 00:32:850 (3) - weak sound. should be the opposite.Totally agree

    Aesthetics

  6. 00:04:850 (1,2,3,4) - Why aren't there the same distance? You wanted to make 00:05:450 (2,3) - look the same as 00:04:850 (1,4) - . Why didn't you just copy paste 00:05:450 (2,3) - then?
  7. 00:06:450 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - These overlaps and stacks just look bad. This is how it looks when everything is on the same tick 00:07:050 (2) - Not well blanket and the distances to the other objects around it are different. 00:07:250 (3,3) - weird overlap. You could for example have stacked them. 00:08:050 (1,2,3,4) - I don't know what these should form, but this looks just random. 00:08:650 (4) - is closer to 00:08:250 (2) - than to 00:08:050 (1) - . Should be equal (It's cuz of stack leniency?) 00:08:450 (3) - is closer to 00:08:050 (1) - than to 00:08:250 (2) - . Should be equal too. 00:09:250 (2) - sliderend should have equal distances to 00:08:250 (2) - and to the start of 00:09:650 (1) - . Look at this picture and now look how I did it I don't even need to draw with paint in it to show you equal distances :POmg that sond tough to do(Use the approach circles for measurement next time).
  8. 00:09:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again you tried to get it look nice but sadly you failed. 00:09:650 (1,5) - Why are these not stacked and blanketed well? Why are 00:11:050 (2,3) - these not the same as 00:11:850 (4,5) - these just rotaded? 00:09:650 (1,3) - Why do they overlap?00:09:650 (1,2,3) - Why don't the sliderends form an even triangle? It's just random to me. You got to be carefull of these things. Normal player who do not mod or map won't pay attention to this but these are thing that differentiates a good between a not-so-good map.
  9. 00:15:850 (1) - This slider is really poor shaped. Im sure you can do better sliderart.
  10. 00:17:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as befor. No real shape, just randomly placed. What kind of shape I could do instead ?
  11. 03:04:850 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is a handplaced stream? You should really create streams from sliders (Compose-> create slider to stream...)

    Flow

  12. 00:08:650 (4,1) - This stack flows poor. You should emphasize 00:08:850 (1) - differently.
  13. 00:17:250 (3,1,2) - angles like these also flow extremely poor. Try to move in acute angles.
  14. 00:29:450 (2,3,4) - the distances here are the same but you used 00:29:450 (2,3) - 1/1 gap here and 00:29:850 (3,4) - 1/2 gap here. Things like these should be avoided. I have some difficulty to understand what you said what is this thing called gap ? Sorry it's not clear for me :'(
  15. 00:31:450 (4,5,1) - same thing basically


I am gonna stop here since pointing out every single mistake (I didn't even mention little ones) would make this mod take me like 10 hours.
What you should do now is:

  • Look over your map again with the things i mentioned.:
  1. Take a look at Emphasize. Where did you switch between vocals and percussion, when did you ignore strong beats, when did you place jumps on weak sounds, etc.
  2. Then check for asymmetries or weirdly different distances between objects. Where are bad blankets or where do you have weird overlaps.
  3. Then check if Flow is bad. Where did you use blunt angles or stacks? If you did, do they make sense (You can use them for emphasize stuff)
  4. Take this map to a Rest and start a new one.


Especially the last part helps you most. Map a lot like a LOT. Then ask others for short feedback / testplays. It should be enough so you know where you have to pay attention on your next map.
Also you should ask mapper or modder for feedback. The normal player would maybe not even see these things besides flow maybe.

As always, I suggest you to watch Pishifats Mapping Tutorials on Youtube
Also read through Kroytz guide for stream Mapping

I still wish you good luck with this and your next maps :)

Feel free to ask me questions anytime!
Thank you I learned a lot with you but I don't want to leave this map... I love it so much I worked so hard on the storyboard...Anyway I wish you good luck with your modding request.And why do you want me to improve this beatmap and then you say to leave it there ? Mhh I don't understand,I do some more beatmaps later but I don't really have the motivation for now...+My hard difficulty sounds way more better (emphasize thing).Have a great day ! :lol:
Zunv
For all your questions, I think it would be better if I answer them through IRC. Feel free to message me anytime :)
Sorry if you didn't get what i meant at some points. I explained it very bad i have to admit.
If we can't catch each other i'll just post again, explaining to how how i meant stuff.

For this point: "Thank you I learned a lot with you but I don't want to leave this map... I love it so much I worked so hard on the storyboard...Anyway I wish you good luck with your modding request.And why do you want me to improve this beatmap and then you say to leave it there ?"

I felt the exact same. I had this Camellia map.I really thought i can get it ranked. I worked extremely hard on it. I even did Keysounds for a part that took me like 10hours alone. If you read through the mods it even didn't look so bad but then Akalidid a mod for it. He litteraly said the same things. All my hopes were crushed with this mod.
I am pretty sure every single mapper goes through the same stuff where they put tons of effort into something that will very very likely fail.
The reason i told you to go over this map again is, so you see mistakes you did yourself. I didn't even point out 30% of all the mistakes. I tried to give you some basic advice. So you can improve in your next map

For example if you take a look at mods on maps that got ranked, they point out every single blanket, every little flow mistake, every mistake you did with new combos. There are mods with the such weird things where you think: wtf. The quality standards are extremely high due to a lot of new mappers.

So i really recommend: fix the stuff i told you, look over your map again so you see the stuff i didn't exactly mention and try to fix it. Sadly even after that your map won't be perfect. And perfection is what you need to get stuff ranked.

Come back to this map after you did maybe 5-10 more maps.
When I look at my Camellia map from earlier i also think: the hell did i even do there!? And I tried to fix it to a point, where i thought its good enough for ranking.

You honestly improve the most, if you map a lot while keeping in mind your mistakes you did earlier and try to avoid them in a new map.

Hope that answers some of your concerns.

Good Luck for the future of mapping :) If you try hard enough, I am sure you can get a ranked map one day!
Zxozmo
From my modding Queue~

Sorry if this is a bit late school is throwing projects after projects :c

so anyways

General
The music itself is 140 kpbs, if you can try to find a better quality?
Save the special story board effects for the kiai
Unless your doing a lyric story board


Easy

-no problems rhythm wise and aesthetic wise

Normal

00:37:650 (5,1) - don do this this is confusing for normal players (most of the time)
00:49:650 (2,4) - 4 is obstructed and cannot move (cannot be see by normal skin, if you get that reference tho)
00:51:650 (1,3) - ^
01:07:250 (1,3) - ^
01:58:450 (1) - (suggestion) can you ake this slider a bit more simple looking rather that crumpled like that?
02:23:850 (1) - dont put a random slider in just to accomodate the story board, cause threre's a bit of rhythm happening there, you cant just focus on 1
part


Hard

I cant see any problems here



Insane

I have no problems with this map's rhythm
the jump are too simple for insane that i can still used DT on this



I played all of the diffs, and the rhythm and hitsounds are good

I can DT everything, try to make the jumps of insane a little harder and not be made by "make polygons" (what is this 2010?)

GL mate~
Topic Starter
5Atarox

Zxozmo wrote:

From my modding Queue~

Sorry if this is a bit late school is throwing projects after projects :c Don't worry be happy,seriously it doesn't bother me

so anyways

General
The music itself is 140 kpbs, if you can try to find a better quality? yup but the this is the original quality so I don't know why there's a problem but anyway now it's 256K now
Save the special story board effects for the kiai Just for the kiai it's more fun when there's more storyboard even if it's not a lyric story board... Is it in the criter of ranking ?Anyways I'll keep it for fun :D
Unless your doing a lyric story board


Easy

-no problems rhythm wise and aesthetic wise

Normal

00:37:650 (5,1) - don do this this is confusing for normal players (most of the time)
00:49:650 (2,4) - 4 is obstructed and cannot move (cannot be see by normal skin, if you get that reference tho)
00:51:650 (1,3) - ^
01:07:250 (1,3) - ^Done
01:58:450 (1) - (suggestion) can you ake this slider a bit more simple looking rather that crumpled like that?Um yup looks like a suggestion,well you know it matches with the vocals so I don't think I want to make it look simpler
02:23:850 (1) - dont put a random slider in just to accomodate the story board, cause threre's a bit of rhythm happening there, you cant just focus on 1
part I want this slider to match with the sound and the storyboard you know,and I wanted to give a break for the players after this finish hit sound it kinnda looks weird to continue with the music


Hard

I cant see any problems here



Insane

I have no problems with this map's rhythm
the jump are too simple for insane that i can still used DT on this



I played all of the diffs, and the rhythm and hitsounds are good

I can DT everything, try to make the jumps of insane a little harder and not be made by "mahttps://osu.ppy.sh/forum/posting.php?mode=quote&f=6&p=6174908#ke polygons" (what is this 2010?)I understand I'll try to do some more difficult jumps

GL mate~
Thank you for your mod I'm happy that you like my hitsounds,good luck with your modding queue ! <3 :P
Amryu
This is my first mod so I hope this is helpful^^

General

Check AIMod since it shows some issue:

- Mp3 is too big (you can reduce this with reencoding it)
- Some errors with the storyboard show up
- Preview points don't seem to match through all difficulties

Easy

You should use distance snap to space the notes equally, you can notice that they have uneven spacing.

00:07:920 (3,4) - Fix blanket
00:11:920 (2,1) - ^
00:21:120 (3,4) - ^
00:33:920 (5,6) - ^
00:35:520 (1,2) - ^
00:36:620 (2,3) - ^
00:47:120 (4,5) - ^
00:51:520 (1,3) - ^
00:52:720 (2,3) - ^
00:53:120 (3,4) - ^
01:00:720 (4,5) - ^
01:19:120 (3,1) - ^
01:32:720 (2,3) - ^
01:41:520 (4,1) - ^
01:43:920 (2,3,5) - ^
01:45:920 (5,1) - ^
01:48:320 (2,3) - ^
01:50:720 (2,3) - ^
01:55:520 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:07:320 (1,2,3) - ^
02:19:120 (2,3) - ^
02:27:520 (1,2,3) - ^
02:37:120 (3,4) - ^
02:41:920 (4,1) - ^
02:47:120 (3,4) - ^
02:48:320 (5,1) - ^
02:53:120 (1,3) - ^
02:56:320 (2,3) - ^
02:58:720 (5,6) - ^
03:02:720 (4,5) - ^ (blanket intended?)
03:11:920 (2,3) - ^
03:26:320 (2,3) - ^
03:28:320 (2,3) - ^
00:11:120 (1,2) - you made 2 different slidershapes. copy-paste and turn them to make it look better
00:25:520 (3,4) - ^
00:30:320 (1,2) - ^
00:48:720 (1,2) - ^
01:37:520 (2,3) - ^
02:05:120 (4,5) - ^
02:14:720 (1,3) - ^
02:19:520 (3,4) - ^
02:27:520 (1,2) - ^
02:33:920 (3,4) - ^
02:42:320 (1,2) - ^
03:17:120 (2,3) - ^
00:38:320 (3) - storyboard effect on a sliderend might stress this sliderend too much
00:15:920 (4) - Slidershape seems like you didn't know how to get it to be straight?
00:35:920 (2,3) - Players might not expect where the next object is placed and it doesn't flow very well. Consider changing that reverse slider.

Remember:

- ALWAYS use distance snap
- Use copy and paste for sliders and patterns. It looks nicer if you use the same or similar things each time and not reinvent slider shapes.
- For blankets make really sure if they are perfect (using things like the follow circle of sliders or approach circles from other circles)
Ideally you create one round slider shape that perfect fits an object that is 1x distanced from that slider and copy that slider to reuse it.

Normal

- Generally you made the same mistakes like in the easy:
Messed up blankets and not using distance snap and no or lacking use of copy and pasted sliders
I'm not gonna list every single instance of this like I did in Easy because it is simply too much. If you
look at the objects I marked in Easy you should be able to see which objects I meant.

00:49:920 (2,5) - Slider overlap, avoid this on lower difficulties and without reason
01:18:320 (4,1,2) - ^ (circle overlaps too, really confusing for new players)
02:48:320 (4,1) - ^ (light overlap, not critical but you should avoid this)
02:57:920 (4,6) - ^

01:58:720 (1) - Be careful with slidershapes like these. The slider is overlapping with itself and newer players can get confused by this
03:15:520 (1) - ^
03:28:320 (4) - ^

Hard

- Again: Copy paste and blankets. Try to keep using distance snap in sections where it's needed like: 00:08:320 (1,2,3)
- Set the same preview point as in the other diffs

00:05:520 (2,3) - bad or uncomfortable flow. (Try flowing into reverse sliders, not clicking on them from behind.)
00:13:720 (2,3) - ^
00:18:720 (2,3,4) - ^
01:55:520 (1,2) - ^
01:20:920 (3,1) - Try to prevent this overlap`?

Insane

- Copy paste, blankets, blah
- You can place green lines directly on the note. They will always also affect the note they are on.
- Why do you have 2 unnecessary green lines right at the start?

00:08:320 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try not to use polygon shapes
00:09:120 (5,6) - bad or uncomfortable flow
00:51:120 (7,1) - ^
01:05:920 (6,1) - ^
01:27:920 (4,1) - ^
01:32:320 (1,2,3) - ^
01:50:120 (3,4) - ^
02:10:520 (4,5) - ^
02:43:720 (2,3,4,1) - ^
02:46:120 (4,1,3) - ^
02:57:120 (3,1,2) - ^
03:01:720 (3,4,1) - ^
03:11:320 (2,3) - weird flow
01:51:920 (4,5) - Ctrl+G for better flow
02:48:120 (1) - Only vocal here, consider removing this note
02:41:320 (4) - I almost can't hear this sound. Don't map more because you feel like it. If you wanted to map the piano this doesn't make sense here imo.
02:49:520 (1) - sound on sliderend stronger
02:43:120 (1) - ^
02:43:920 (3) - ^
00:46:320 (4) - ^
03:15:720 (1) - ^


If you have a reason why any of my mods are unnecessary or wrong then ignore them, especially the flow questions.
You often very abruptly change the direction of the flow which you should have a reason for.

Pls check for each point if you have a reason to keep it, but the stylistic ones.

If you need more help with arranging your map better you can PM me
Topic Starter
5Atarox

Amryu wrote:

This is my first mod so I hope this is helpful^^

General

Check AIMod since it shows some issue:

- Mp3 is too big (you can reduce this with reencoding it) (I know but the other one wanted a better quality we can say she had it ...) (Let's reduce it !) (FML)
- Some errors with the storyboard show up Well can you say which one is poping up
- Preview points don't seem to match through all difficulties What the heck I though if I was just putting the preview point on one difficulty it would changes on every difficulty I know let's fix it
Btw is mapping on osu! is a profession,cause I think it is...
Easy

You should use distance snap to space the notes equally, you can notice that they have uneven spacing.

00:07:920 (3,4) - Fix blanket
00:11:920 (2,1) - ^
00:21:120 (3,4) - ^ no.
00:33:920 (5,6) - ^
00:35:520 (1,2) - ^ What do you want me to fix ?
00:36:620 (2,3) - ^ No.
00:47:120 (4,5) - ^ Trying his life
00:51:520 (1,3) - ^
00:52:720 (2,3) - ^
00:53:120 (3,4) - ^
01:00:720 (4,5) - ^
01:19:120 (3,1) - ^
01:32:720 (2,3) - ^
01:41:520 (4,1) - ^
01:43:920 (2,3,5) - ^
01:45:920 (5,1) - ^
01:48:320 (2,3) - ^
01:50:720 (2,3) - ^
01:55:520 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:07:320 (1,2,3) - ^
02:19:120 (2,3) - ^
02:27:520 (1,2,3) - ^
02:37:120 (3,4) - ^
02:41:920 (4,1) - ^
02:47:120 (3,4) - ^
02:48:320 (5,1) - ^
02:53:120 (1,3) - ^
02:56:320 (2,3) - ^
02:58:720 (5,6) - ^
03:02:720 (4,5) - ^ (blanket intended?)
03:11:920 (2,3) - ^
03:26:320 (2,3) - ^
03:28:320 (2,3) - ^
00:11:120 (1,2) - you made 2 different slidershapes. copy-paste and turn them to make it look better
00:25:520 (3,4) - ^
00:30:320 (1,2) - ^
00:48:720 (1,2) - ^
01:37:520 (2,3) - ^
02:05:120 (4,5) - ^
02:14:720 (1,3) - ^
02:19:520 (3,4) - ^
02:27:520 (1,2) - ^
02:33:920 (3,4) - ^
02:42:320 (1,2) - ^
03:17:120 (2,3) - ^
00:38:320 (3) - storyboard effect on a sliderend might stress this sliderend too much
00:15:920 (4) - Slidershape seems like you didn't know how to get it to be straight? Salty,looks good to me I've already saw one in ranked beatmap maybe it doesn't fit in easy diff anyway...
00:35:920 (2,3) - Players might not expect where the next object is placed and it doesn't flow very well. Consider changing that reverse slider.

Remember:

- ALWAYS use distance snap
- Use copy and paste for sliders and patterns. It looks nicer if you use the same or similar things each time and not reinvent slider shapes.
- For blankets make really sure if they are perfect (using things like the follow circle of sliders or approach circles from other circles)
Ideally you create one round slider shape that perfect fits an object that is 1x distanced from that slider and copy that slider to reuse it. How to take 2 hours I'll try next time cause I don't want to spend the rest of my life on this beatmap finnally someone that says that thank you

Normal

- Generally you made the same mistakes like in the easy:
Messed up blankets and not using distance snap and no or lacking use of copy and pasted sliders
I'm not gonna list every single instance of this like I did in Easy because it is simply too much. If you
look at the objects I marked in Easy you should be able to see which objects I meant.

00:49:920 (2,5) - Slider overlap, avoid this on lower difficulties and without reason
01:18:320 (4,1,2) - ^ (circle overlaps too, really confusing for new players)
02:48:320 (4,1) - ^ (light overlap, not critical but you should avoid this)
02:57:920 (4,6) - ^

01:58:720 (1) - Be careful with slidershapes like these. The slider is overlapping with itself and newer players can get confused by this
03:15:520 (1) - ^
03:28:320 (4) - ^

Hard

- Again: Copy paste and blankets. Try to keep using distance snap in sections where it's needed like: 00:08:320 (1,2,3)
- Set the same preview point as in the other diffs

00:05:520 (2,3) - bad or uncomfortable flow. (Try flowing into reverse sliders, not clicking on them from behind.)
00:13:720 (2,3) - ^
00:18:720 (2,3,4) - ^
01:55:520 (1,2) - ^
01:20:920 (3,1) - Try to prevent this overlap`?

Insane

- Copy paste, blankets, blah
- You can place green lines directly on the note. They will always also affect the note they are on.
- Why do you have 2 unnecessary green lines right at the start?

00:08:320 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try not to use polygon shapes
00:09:120 (5,6) - bad or uncomfortable flow
00:51:120 (7,1) - ^
01:05:920 (6,1) - ^
01:27:920 (4,1) - ^
01:32:320 (1,2,3) - ^
01:50:120 (3,4) - ^
02:10:520 (4,5) - ^
02:43:720 (2,3,4,1) - ^
02:46:120 (4,1,3) - ^
02:57:120 (3,1,2) - ^
03:01:720 (3,4,1) - ^
03:11:320 (2,3) - weird flow
01:51:920 (4,5) - Ctrl+G for better flow
02:48:120 (1) - Only vocal here, consider removing this note
02:41:320 (4) - I almost can't hear this sound. Don't map more because you feel like it. If you wanted to map the piano this doesn't make sense here imo.
02:49:520 (1) - sound on sliderend stronger
02:43:120 (1) - ^
02:43:920 (3) - ^
00:46:320 (4) - ^
03:15:720 (1) - ^


If you have a reason why any of my mods are unnecessary or wrong then ignore them, especially the flow questions.
You often very abruptly change the direction of the flow which you should have a reason for.

Pls check for each point if you have a reason to keep it, but the stylistic ones.

If you need more help with arranging your map better you can PM me
I have to sleep I'm going to do the rest later on! Thank you you've been a big help :) + I didn't ask for this mod but thanks a lot ! Seems like you modded all your life !
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